【单元考点培优】Unit 2 Why don't you talk to your parents？专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优鲁教版
（五四学制）Unit 2 Why don't you talk to your parents？
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你上周末的活动。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍你上周末的情况。
提示：1. 周六上午：做作业，帮妈妈做家务；
2. 周六下午：和朋友去公园玩，放风筝；
3. 周日：和家人去看望爷爷奶奶，一起吃晚饭；
4. 你的感受。
要求：1. 词数60~80左右；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about my last weekend. Well, I had a busy but happy time.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your last weekend Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．汪曾祺说：“家人闲坐，灯火可亲。”和家人在一起是一件幸福的事。假如你是李辉，你们班正在举行一个名为“家的记忆”的主题班会，请你回忆发生在你家里的一件有意义的事情，按照下图提示写一篇英语短文向同学们分享。
要求：
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
2. 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Family Memories
Hi, everyone. I am very happy to
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3．英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍自己上周末活动。假设下面表格内容是你的提纲，请根据表格提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的上周末活动，并在班上与同学交流。
Saturday go to the library
help with the housework
Sunday visit grandparents
…
要求：
(1) 发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；
(2) 发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；
(3) 发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；
(4) 词数：80个左右（已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）。
Hi, everyone! I am very happy to show you what I did last weekend.
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That was my colorful weekend. What about yours
4．岁月不居，时节如流。去见你想见的人，看你喜欢的风景，做你喜欢的事，去过幸福快乐的生活。学校英语俱乐部下周将要举行以“How to Be Happy”为主题的演讲比赛，假如你是Li Hua，请你从中学生角度出发，结合以下思维导图，写一篇英语演讲稿。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to Be Happy
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. It is an honor to talk with all of you here. The topic of my speech is “How to Be Happy”. In our everyday life, what should we do to be happy
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
5．“Have a nice weekend!”是常用的周末祝福语，它鼓励人们充分利用周末两天的时间放松身心、休闲娱乐和陪伴家人朋友。请你根据以下内容提示，用英文从周末安排的活动、场所、同伴等方面谈谈你所期待的既充实又有意义的周末。
内容提示：
What will you do if you’re free on the weekend
Will you stay at home or go somewhere interesting
Who are you going to share fun time with
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；篇幅80词左右；标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream Weekends
Everyone wants a colorful and meaningful weekend, and so do I.
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6．2025年又将是充满希望的一年，又到了下定决心的时刻。你最想告诉大家的一个新年决心是什么？原因是什么？你打算做些什么？请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. What’s your New Year’s resolution
2. Why do you make such a resolution
3. What are you going to do to make it come true
要求：
1. 短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My New Year’s Resolution
The start of the year is often a time for making New Year’s resolutions.
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7．假如你是Wang Cheng，寒假将至，你的好朋友Frank给你发来一封邮件，请根据邮件内容回复他。
Dear Wang Cheng,
I am writing to thank you for teaching me how to make mapo toufu and gongbao chicken. I like them a lot.
I know that China is now becoming richer and stronger. Chinese people are living a happy and enjoyable life. Now I want to catch your ideas. What will the future be like in China What is your dream job And if we have worries or problems, what should we do
1. 邮件内容必须包含以上所提及的问题，可适当发挥。
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3. 用英文作答，词数不少于80，所给开头不计入总词数；不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Dear Frank,
I am so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Wang Cheng
8．现在很多青少年沉溺 (indulge in) 网络，不爱学习，不爱运动，不与人交际 (communicate)，爱吃垃圾食品等等，这些严重影响了他们的身心健康。为此，学校决定本周五下午举办一场主题为“我阳光，我健康”的演讲比赛。你也想参加这场演讲比赛，请根据下图提示以“How to Be a Sunny Person”为题写一篇演讲稿。
How to Be a Sunny Person Good hobbies: listening to music, drawing Less internet: fewer computer games, study
More sports: run, swim
Healthy habits: fruit, vegetables, wash hands…
Dream: …
要求:
1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点。
2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名。
4.词数80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
How to Be a Sunny Person
Hello, everyone. I am glad to be here to give you a report about how to be a sunny person.
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In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. I hope each of you can be a sunny person.
9．假如你是李华，你打算邀请外教Mary参加本周六学校组织的社会实践活动——“这里是黄鹤楼 (This is the Yellow Crane Tower)”。请根据以下提示问题，用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉她相关信息。
What time are you going to meet
Where are you going to meet
What are you going to do
Something more about this activity.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出；不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
How is it going Welcome to join us on our school trip “This is the Yellow Crane Tower” this Saturday.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．作为新时代青少年，我们应当以“爱国爱家，向上向善”为目标不断提升自己。近期，学校英语报以“How to Be a Better Teenager”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据下图提示，写一篇英文短文投稿。词数80词左右。
要求：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥一至两点，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
How to Be a Better Teenager
As a middle school student,
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11．青少年是国家和民族的希望，是建设社会主义现代化的未来栋梁。拥有一个快乐、有价值的人生，对青少年和整个民族都具有重要意义。请根据以下要点和要求，从中学生的角度，以“How to live a happy life”为题写一篇短文。
1. 要点：
(1) Have healthy living habits;
(2) Have a good hobby;
(3) Have a wonderful dream.
2. 要求：
（1）文章须包含以上所有要点，可作适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数100左右。
How to live a happy life
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12．亲爱的同学们，进入新的一年，我们都期许成为更好的自己。学校英语专栏以“Making myself better”为题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1）介绍你将怎样变得更好（可以从生活习惯、性格爱好、知识学习、保护自然、恰当使用网络几方面说明）；
注意：至少2至3方面
2）阐述你的理由；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4）词数100左右。
Making myself better
Every day is valuable and should be made good use of to make myself better.
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13．假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友David用英文写一封邮件，介绍一下你的学习和生活情况。
（1）周一到周五去学校上学。
（2）上午要在八点前到校，不能迟到。
（3）中午在学校吃午饭。
（4）下午有一小时的运动时间。
（5）晚上要做家庭作业。
（6）周六和周日不上学，你会……
要求：
（1）词数：70—80个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How is everything going
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Do you have something to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
14．新年即将到来，给你的朋友Tom写封信，告诉他你的一些变化， 以及上周末你的学校旅行，开头已给出。
要求：
1.内容必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.八十字左右。
Changes 1. 更加开朗，更加友好 2. 和我的哥哥一样努力学习 3. 但我比他跑得快…… (自己补充至少2点以上)
Last weekend 1. 天气晴朗 2.和同学们骑车去公园，拍照，喂动物…… (自己补充至少2点以上)
Dear Tom,
New year is coming.
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Yours,
Li Lin
15．为了使大家有个健康的身体，学校正在开展“关爱健康”的主题班会活动。请根据以下要点和要求，写一篇60词左右的短文。
要点：1. 保持健康的重要性；
2. 保持健康的方法。
要求：1. 短文须包括提示中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
参考词汇：keep healthy, important, vegetables, fruit, stay up, in one’s opinion (在某人看来).
Care for Health
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16．假如你是李华，Sarah是你的新笔友。请根据表格内容提示，写一篇短文给Sarah介绍一下你自己。写作要点如下：
项目 内容
个性特征 性格外向，学习努力；喜欢交朋友，有很多朋友
周末活动 打篮球，一周至少两次；去图书馆看书，主要的原因是图书馆有很多好书
文娱爱好 无法忍受肥皂剧；喜欢动画片，因为它比肥皂剧更有意义，每周看一次
最大梦想 上周参加歌唱比赛获得一等奖，想成为一名音乐老师
要求：
1. 短文应包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear Sarah,
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生，我们可能遇到哪些安全问题？该怎样处理呢？校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会，请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Keep Safe”为题写一篇80词左右的英文发言稿。
中学生安全问题对策 一、交通安全；遵守交通规则。
二、食品安全；注意饮食安全。
三、活动安全；上下楼梯靠右行；体育锻炼要小心；不允许私自下河游泳。
四、交友安全；注意网络交友安全。
遇险建议 遇到危险要保持冷静，保证自身安全，然后及时报警或向家长、老师求助。
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18．假如你是Li Ming， 你朋友Jack想知道你对未来的构想，就以下的问题来写一封信告诉他。
What do you want to be when you grow up
How are you going to do that
What are your resolutions for the coming year And why do you make these resolutions
Something more about yourself.
注意：文中不得透漏个人真实信息；词数 100 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you I want to tell you something about myself.
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Love from,
Li Ming
19．快乐的寒假将如约而至，一班同学们热火朝天地讨论着自己的计划。Mike同学结合以下问题展开了对自己寒假计划的描述。
请根据以下提示，写一篇文章，关于Mike同学的寒假计划。
1. What’s his study and reading plan for vacation 2. How will he keep healthy 3. Where do you think he is going to take a trip 4. How about his feelings
要求：1.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写美观；
2.70词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.要点齐全，可适当发挥。
Winter vacation is coming.
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20．在 “双减政策the double reduction policy” 背景下，同学们的周末有了更多的空闲时间去参加课外活动。拉近亲子关系，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇文章介绍你的周末活动及你对周末活动的看法。
活动 频率 地点及选择理由 最爱类型
看电影 一个月两到三次 Movie City有最大的屏幕，坐得最舒服 最喜欢... 因为...
做运动 每周一次去一次公园 对身体和心灵都有好处 沿着河边跑步/打篮球
注意：
1.词数不少于80字;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more time to do something I like on weekends.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your email. You asked about my last weekend. Well, I had a busy but happy time.
On Saturday morning, I did my homework first. After finishing it, I helped my mom with housework. I cleaned the room and washed the dishes. In the afternoon, I went to the park with my friends. We flew kites there and we had a lot of fun.
On Sunday, I visited my grandparents with my parents. My grandma cooked delicious food for us. We had dinner together and talked happily.
I really enjoyed my last weekend. It made me feel relaxed.
What about your last weekend Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图（原文已给出）。以回信开篇，回应Peter对自己上周末的询问，点明周末“忙碌但快乐”的整体感受；
第二步，具体叙述经历。按时间顺序，分别描述周六以及周日的具体活动；
第三步，书写结语。总结上周末的愉悦体验与放松感受，同时反问Peter的周末情况。
［亮点词汇］
①feel relaxed 感到放松
②help with housework 帮忙做家务
③wash the dishes 洗碗
④fly kites 放风筝
⑤have a lot of fun 玩得很开心
［高分句型］
①After finishing it, I helped my mom with housework.（after+动名词短语作时间状语）
②We flew kites there and we had a lot of fun.（and连接并列句）
2．参考范文
Family Memories
Hi, everyone. I am very happy to share a heartwarming memory. Last Mid-Autumn Festival, my whole family gathered on our balcony to admire the full moon. My grandmother told the legend of Chang’e, while my father played the guitar softly. My younger brother and I helped mother arrange mooncakes and fruits on the table. The silver moonlight mixed with the golden lantern light created a magical atmosphere.
This memory includes my parents, grandmother, brother and me. Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift. The shared laughter and stories under the moonlight will forever warm my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点名主题；
第二步，分享一件家里发生的有意义的事情；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①admire the full moon 赏月
②silver moonlight 银色月光
③be happy to do sth开心做某事
[高分句型]
①Though simple, it taught me that family bonding is life’s sweetest gift.（though引导让步状语从句）
3．
Hi, everyone! I am very happy to show you what I did last weekend.
On Saturday morning, I went to the library. There were lots of interesting books, and I read a storybook about adventures. In the afternoon, I helped with the housework. I swept the floor and tidied up my room, making it nice and clean. On Sunday, I visited my grandparents. We chatted, and they told me funny stories from when they were young. After that, I played chess with my grandpa. It was really enjoyable.
That was my colorful weekend. What about yours
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：依据表格提示及要求完成写作，注重要点拓展、语法正确，保证语义连贯、逻辑清晰 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，按时间顺序依次阐述周六、周日的活动，对每个活动适当拓展细节；
第二步，总结，并询问他人周末情况 。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多；大量
②chat with和……聊天
③play chess下国际象棋
[高分句型]
① There were lots of interesting books, and I read a storybook about adventures.（there be句型）
4．例文
How to Be Happy
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. It is an honor to talk with all of you here. The topic of my speech is “How to Be Happy”. In our everyday life, what should we do to be happy
First of all, we should be positive. When we are in trouble, we should make ourselves calm down and smile to life. Try our best to be out of trouble. Second, we need to do sports often. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning. It helps us relax, and it’s a good way to keep healthy. Third, we can make some friends. We share happiness and sadness together. We can also help each other. Helping others makes us happy. Fourth, we’d better have a few hobbies, such as drawing and singing. They will make our life more colorful. Last but not least, we should have a nice dream. Work hard for it and we will make our dream come true.
In a word, different people have different opinions about happiness. I hope we can enjoy a happy life every day.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“如何保持快乐”的话题；
第二步，根据题干思维导图中的要点，描述从哪几个方面来保持快乐；
第三步，书写结语，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in trouble处于困境
②calm down冷静
③share happiness and sadness分享快乐和悲伤
[高分句型]
①When we are in trouble, we should make ourselves calm down and smile to life.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Helping others makes us happy.(动名词作主语)
5．例文
Everyone wants a colorful and meaningful weekend, and so do I. We need to play and relax after busy weekdays. For my dream weekends, I plan to do outdoor activities with my friends and rest with my family at home.
On Saturday, I’ll walk my dog in the park and enjoy the beautiful nature. If I’m free, I’ll watch cartoons with my friends. On Sunday, I’m going to have a good rest at home. I’ll read interesting books or help my parents with some housework. Also, I’ll even play chess with my robot when possible if my parents aren’t available.
A relaxing and meaningful weekend helps us not only enjoy life but also get prepared for a better future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：根据内容提示进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题“自己梦想的周末”；
第二步，具体介绍自己的周末计划；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth计划做某事
②have a good rest好好休息
③get prepared for为……做好准备
[高分句型]
If I’m free, I’ll watch cartoons with my friends. (if引导的条件状语从句)
6．例文
My New Year’s Resolution
The start of the year is often a time for making New Year’s resolutions. In 2025, I have decided on a resolution that is full of hope. My New Year’s resolution is to improve my English. I make such a resolution because I want to communicate better with people from different countries. With better English skills, I can understand more and make more friends around the world. To make this resolution come true, I am going to read English books every day and watch English movies. I will also practice speaking English with my friends and family. I believe that with hard work and practice, I can achieve my goal.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出作者的新年决心；
第二步，讲述做这个新年决心的原因；
第三步，具体阐述应该如何做才能实现这个新年决心。
[亮点词汇]
①decide on sth. 决定做某事
②make a resolution 下决心，制定计划
③practice doing sth. 练习做某事
[高分句型]
①I make such a resolution because I want to communicate better with people from different countries. (because引导原因状语从句)
②To make this resolution come true, I am going to read English books every day and watch English movies. (不定式作目的状语)
③I believe that with hard work and practice, I can achieve my goal. (含有that的宾语从句）
7．例文
Dear Frank,
I am so glad to hear from you. Life in the future will be different from now. There will be more and more people in China. They will have more free time for sports. Many people will go to other countries for holidays. As for me, I want to be a singer. I am going to learn to sing. I thing it is a great activity.
It is normal for us to have worries and problems. Please take it easy. We can ask our parents and teachers for help. Talking to someone really helps a lot. We can also do something relaxing, such as shopping or watching movies. Listening to music and playing sports are also great ways.
Best wishes to you.
Wang Cheng
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴收到你的来信。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——中国的未来情况、你梦想的动作、建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②ask...for help向……寻求帮助
③such as比如
[高分句型]
①I thing it is a great activity. (宾语从句）
②Listening to music and playing sports are also great ways. (动名词作主语)
8．例文：
How to Be a Sunny Person
Hello, everyone. l am glad to be here to give you a speech about how to be a sunny person.
First of all, using the lnternet properly is important for us to be a sunny person. If we use less internet, we will play fewer computer games.We can use the lnternet to study instead of playing games. What’s more, it is helpful to do more sports, such as running and swimming. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. In addition, it is good to develop good hobbies like drawing and listening to music. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. Finally, we should also develop healthy eating habits. We can have more vegetables and fruits and wash our hands frequently.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. I hope each of you can be a sunny person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，打招呼，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何成为一个阳光的人；
第三步，收尾并表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②instead of代替
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
①What’s more, it is helpful to do more sports, such as running and swimming. (it固定句式)
②If we use less internet, we will play fewer computer games. (if引导的条件状语从句)
9．例文
Dear Mary,
How is it going Welcome to join us on our school trip “This is the Yellow Crane Tower” this Saturday.
We are going to meet you at the school gate at 8 o’clock. Then we’re going to the Yellow Crane Tower by bus.
Firstly, we’ll climb the tower, learning about the historical stories behind it. Besides, we can enjoy the show in the tower, experiencing the beauty of traditional Chinese culture. What’s more, we will spend about half an hour in the souvenir shop and buy some small gifts. I’m sure our school trip will be very exciting! I hope you can come with us!
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中给出的关键信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并简要说明本周六学校组织的社会实践活动；
第二步，说明约见时间、地点及出行方式；
第三步，具体介绍活动内容，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②spend花费
③be sure确信
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we’ll climb the tower, learning about the historical stories behind it. (现在分词短语表伴随状况)
②I hope you can come with us! (宾语从句)
10．例文
How to Be a Better Teenager
As a middle school student, being a better teenager means a lot to us. First of all, it’s important for us to love our country. We should be quiet when we watch the national flag go up and be proud of Chinese culture. Then, we should love our family. Helping with housework is a good way to show our love for our parents. Also, we need to study hard and read more books to improve ourselves so that we can help to make our country better in the future. We should always be kind to others. For example, we can help old people cross the road. Last but not least, we must do more exercise to keep healthy. It’s the most important thing if we want to make the world better.
In a word, we should try our best to be a better teenager.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步， 表明做更好的青少年的意义；
第二步， 详细列举如何成为更好的青少年；
第三步， 适当增加细节，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of...对……感到骄傲
②so that以便，为了
③Last but not least最后但同样重要的一点
[高分句型]
①First of all, it’s important for us to love our country.(it作形式主语)
②We should be quiet when we watch the national flag go up and be proud of Chinese culture.(when引导时间状语)
③Also, we need to study hard and read more books to improve ourselves so that we can help to make our country better in the future.(so that引导目的状语)
11．例文
How to live a happy life
To live a happy life, having healthy living habits is important.
We should get enough sleep, eat balanced meals, and exercise regularly. These habits keep our bodies strong and minds sharp. What’s more, having a good hobby can bring joy and relaxation into our lives. Whether it’s playing a musical instrument, painting, or playing sports, hobbies offer an escape from daily stress and improve our mood. Finally, having a wonderful dream gives us purpose. Dreams inspire us to work hard and achieve great things.
In a word, combine healthy habits, enjoyable hobbies, and meaningful dreams to live a truly happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to live a happy life”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍过上快乐生活的重要性，明确三个要点：健康的生活习惯、良好的爱好和美好的梦想；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more 此外
②inspire sb to do sth 鼓舞某人做某事
③work hard 努力工作
④In a word 总而言之
[高分句型]
①To live a happy life, having healthy living habits is important.（不定式表目的）
②In a word, combine healthy habits, enjoyable hobbies, and meaningful dreams to live a truly happy life.（并列结构）
12．例文
Making myself better
Every day is valuable and should be made good use of to make myself better.
Firstly, good living habits are important to me. Therefore, I’ll sleep and get up early. Secondly, I’m going to eat more vegetables and less meat, because eating healthily matters a lot. What’s more, I also plan to develop a habit of reading different kinds of books because reading can make me know what’s going on around the world. It helps open my mind, too. The more books I read, the more knowledge I will get. Last but not least, I will avoid playing games online because it is a waste of time and does harm to my eyes.
I’m sure that I’ll meet a better me in the new year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己新的一年会变更好；
第二步，从不同的方面具体阐述怎样成为更好的自己，并说明理由；
第三步，展望未来，给自己树立信心。
[亮点词汇]
①are important to 对……很重要
②develop a habit of... 养成……的习惯
③avoid playing games 避免玩游戏
④a waste of time 浪费时间
[高分句型]
①I’m going to eat more vegetables and less meat. (一般将来时)
②The more books I read, the more knowledge I will get. (the 比较级...，the 比较级...)
②I’m sure that I’ll meet a better me in the new year. (that引导宾语从句)
13．例文：
Dear David,
How is everything going I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to tell you a bit about my school and daily life.
From Monday to Friday, I go to school. I need to be there before 8 a.m. in the morning; being late is not allowed. We have classes and in the middle of the day, I have lunch at school. It’s quite tasty! In the afternoon, we get an hour for sports, which I really enjoy. After school, I have homework to do in the evening.
On Saturdays and Sundays, I don’t go to school. Instead, I usually spend time with my family, sometimes going for a picnic or visiting relatives. I also like to read books and watch movies to relax.
Do you have something to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括周一到周五的学习安排和周六周日的活动，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并可以适当添加细节，使描述更加生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头已经给出“How is everything going ”，这里可以紧接着表达写邮件的目的，即分享自己的学习和生活情况；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述周一到周五的学习情况，包括到校时间、午餐安排、下午的运动时间以及晚上的家庭作业；描述周六和周日的活动安排，这部分可以发挥，比如提到参加兴趣班、与家人共度时光、进行户外活动等；
第三步，书写结语。表达对David的期待，希望他能回信分享他的生活，与“Looking forward to your reply!”相呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①from Monday to Friday从周一到周五
②be allowed被允许
③in the middle of在……中间
④spend time with与……共度时光
[高分句型]
①In the afternoon, we get an hour for sports, which I really enjoy.（定语从句）
14．例文
Dear Tom,
New year is coming. I want to share some changes with you. I am more outgoing and friendlier now. I study as hard as my brother, but I run faster than him. I also developed an interest in painting and reading. Last weekend, the weather was sunny. I went cycling to the park with my classmates. We took photos and fed animals. We also enjoyed a picnic and played games together. It was a wonderful experience.
Yours,
Li Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，和对方分享自己的变化；
第二步，描述上周末的活动。
[亮点词汇]
① share sth with sb和某人分享某物
② go cycling去骑自行车
③ take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I study as hard as my brother, but I run faster than him（but连接的转折并列句）
15．例文
Care for Health
It’s important for us students to keep healthy. There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest, so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Also, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn’t drink too much drinks and wine, and we mustn’t smoke, either. They are bad for our health.
I believe everyone can keep healthy if he or she has a healthy lifestyle.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，主要阐述保持健康的重要性和保持健康的方法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，描述保持健康很重要；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点说明保持健康的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②had better最好
③as often as possible尽可能经常
④be bad for对……有害
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us students to keep healthy.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
16．例文
Dear Sarah,
Let me tell you something about myself. I am outgoing and hard-working. I like to make friends and I have many friends. I don’t care friends are the same or different.
On the weekend I often play basketball with my friends. I play it at least twice a week. Sometimes I go to the library on Saturday. The main reason is that there are lots of good books there. I can learn a lot there. For TV shows, I can’t stand soap operas. I like cartoon because it is more meaningful. I usually watch it once a week. Last week I won the first prize in the singing competition. My dream is to be a music teacher. I am trying to make my dream come true.
How about your life I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍自己的相关信息，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个性特征；
第二步，介绍自己的周末活动和文娱爱好；
第三步，介绍自己的梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends交朋友
②at least至少
③come true实现
[高分句型]
I like cartoon because it is more meaningful. (原因状语从句)
17．例文
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone,
Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river by ourselves. What’s more, we’d better make friends online carefully. If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help. In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意逻辑连贯、表达通顺、无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明安全很重要，我们应该保护好自己；
第二步，从交通、食品、活动以及交友等方面，阐述如何注意安全，以及遇到麻烦时该如何处理；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① pay attention to 注意
② too much 太多
③ by oneself 独自
④ keep…in mind 记住
[高分句型]
① Remember not to swim in the river by ourselves.（祈使句的肯定形式）
② If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文
Dear Jack ,
How is everything going with you I want to tell you something about myself. I want to be a doctor when I grow up. I’m going to study hard and enter a good medical college. For the coming year, I am determined to study and exercise harder. Because I think health is as important as study. I also plan to join some volunteer activities to help those in need. I hope to make a positive difference in the world.
Love from
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的理想及如何实现理想，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，点明自己长大后想当一名医生；
第二步，介绍如何才能成为一名医生；
第三步，介绍新年的计划；
第四步，介绍自己对未来的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②be going to打算
③plan to do计划做
[高分句型]
①I want to be a doctor when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I also plan to join some volunteer activities to help those in need.（动词不定式作宾语、作目的状语）
19．例文
Winter vacation is coming. It’s a great chance for Mike to improve himself because his dream is to become the brightest star in the sky. Here is his plan for this winter vacation.
In this winter vacation, he will review all the subjects first and then read some favorite books. As for sports, he will play basketball twice a week with his best friends. And he will also go for a walk three times a week. Because it can make him keep healthy and energetic. What’s more, he will go to Beijing to visit the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. He will go there with his parents and they will spend a week there.
According to his plan, he will spend a meaningful vacation. And he will enjoy himself during the vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据提示信息描述Mike同学的寒假计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示信息具体描述Mike同学的寒假计划；
第三步，总结Mike同学将会有什么样的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②twice a week一周两次
③go for a walk散步
④three times a week一周三次
⑤according to根据
⑥enjoy himself玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①It’s a great chance for Mike to improve himself because his dream is to become the brightest star in the sky. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Because it can make him keep healthy and energetic. (because引导的原因状语从句)
20．例文
Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more free time to do something I like on weekends.
First of all, doing exercise is my favorite because as it is not only healthy for the body but also for the mind. Both my friend Bob Anna and I love running. Therefore we get together at the park three times a week to run along the river. Besides watching films is a great way to relax and learn something new. My family and I go to the cinema about twice or three a month. Usually our first choice is Wanda Cinema because it has the biggest screen. We watch documentaries most of the time because I think they are more educational than other kinds.
In my opinion, it’s important and necessary for us students to take part in more after-class activities which can enrich our life and bring the family closer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：根据题目要求，需要包含活动、频率、地点及选择理由、最爱类型及其原因等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出主题；
第二步，介绍周末活动；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①free timey 空闲时间
②after-class activities 课外活动
③in my opinion 在我看来
[高分句型]
①Thanks to the double reduction policy, I have more free time to do something I like on weekends.（定语从句）
②In my opinion, it’s important and necessary for us students to take part in more after-class activities which can enrich our life and bring the family closer.（定语从句）
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