【单元考点培优】Unit 2 专题14 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优鲁教版
（五四学制）Unit 2 Teenagers should be all owed to choose their own clothes.
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的朋友田甜将去英国。请你将她的基本情况介绍给你的英国朋友Millie，希望她们成为朋友，并希望Millie能够去机场接她。请根据以下要点给Millie写一封信。
提示：（1）介绍田甜的年龄、外貌、性格及爱好；
（2）田甜将去英国的Woodland School学习一年，并将乘飞机于8月1日下午4时到达伦敦希思罗机场(Heathrow Airport)。
注意：词数80左右。
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2．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Linda想了解你过去与现在性格方面的改变。请根据要点内容的提示，给她写封邮件。
要点如下：
1. 过去害羞、喜欢乡村音乐，很少交友；
2. 现在开朗，喜欢古典音乐，有很多朋友：
3. 过去喜欢集邮，现在喜欢看书。
写作要求：1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：
3. 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda.
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
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That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．“双减”政策实行两年多，它改变了许多学生的学习生活。请你以“My Free Time Activities”为题，结合以下表格，介绍“双减”政策下，你的业余活动及其好处，并适当发挥，简单谈谈你对“双减”政策的看法。
Activities How often Benefit (好处)
exercise after school every day keep healthy, …
watch movies once a month relax myself
reading once or twice a week open up my eyes
… … …
要求：
1. 应包含表格中的所有信息，可适当补充，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数，文中不出现真实校名、姓名等。
My Free Time Activities
Today, the biggest change in my life is from the “double reduction” policy. Now, there are many kinds of wonderful activities in my free time.
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4．做家务可以锻炼孩子们的独立生活能力，可以养成勤劳的好习惯，而且也能增强体质。请你以“The importance of doing housework”为题，并根据下面的写作要点及要求写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1. 做家务使人放松；
2. 做家务可以锻炼身体；
3. 与父母亲分担 (share) 家务能让他们少劳累。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须所有的要点，可以适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，词句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及个人信息的地名，否则不予评分；
4. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总分)。
The importance of doing housework
Some people think doing housework is a waste of time.
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5．每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好，你的爱好是什么？你认为你的爱好妨碍学业了吗？你是如何处理的？请结合自身经历写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.What’s your hobby
2. Do you think your hobby got in the way of your schoolwork Why
3. How did you deal with it
要求：
1. 词数不少于 80 词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
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6．假设你是吴华，刚刚在网上结识了一位美国朋友Bob，他写邮件询问你的爱好和梦想。请你根据下表提示内容，给他回一封邮件。
爱好 听音乐、看电影…
梦想 当一名侦探(原因自拟)
写作要求：
1.包含表格中所有提示要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Bob,
I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your hobbies and dream Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wu Hua
7．在学习和生活中，优秀人物是我们学习的榜样，激励我们确立学习目标，有意义地度过课余时间，为未来奠定基础。假如你是本年度市优秀学生李华，请向Teenage Magazine的读者介绍你的经验。
Improve study ● listen to the teacher carefully in class ● ...
Spend spare time ● art (music/film/TV programmes/...) ● sports (ball games/running/swimming/...) ● good relationship with others
Good example ...
要求：
(1)包含表格中所有信息，并适当发挥；
(2)表达清楚，连贯流畅，语法正确，字迹工整；
(3)词数：不少于90词，信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(4)不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名等。
Dear readers,
As this year’s Excellent Student, it is my honour to share my experiences with you.
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I hope my experiences are of help to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．许多人喜欢在闲暇时观看有趣的电视节目来放松自己。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，介绍自己喜欢的一个电视节目。
节目名称 《动物世界》
喜欢该节目的原因 1. 释放压力； 2. 开阔视野（broaden one’s horizons），可以了解更多关于动物的知识； 3.……（请补充至少1个原因）
注意：1. 词数：80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
A lot of people like watching interesting TV programmes to relax when they have spare time.
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9．初中生活中，你发生了什么样的改变？你是怎样改变的？请以“How I Have Changed”为题写一篇英语短文，描述你发生的变化。写作要点包括兴趣爱好、行为习惯、学习习惯等。
要求: 1. 任选写作要点中的两方面内容，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名，学校名称等信息。
How I Have Changed
How time flies!
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10．在本次世界杯决赛中，法国队和阿根廷队上演了激动人心的冠军争夺战。半场过后阿根廷2:0领先，在我们都认为结果已毫无悬念的时候，法国队奋然反击，两分钟内连续得分。虽没能扭转乾坤，但是他们不屈不挠的精神令我们钦佩。正如贺炜解说的那样“我们为什么深爱着足球这项运动？因为它不仅展现了球员们励志的奋斗故事，还寄托了我们普通人平凡生活中的英雄梦想。”不单是足球，运动已然成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。请根据以下要点完成作文。要求：
1. 80 — 120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
参考信息：
1. 描述一项你深爱的运动及原因；
2. 分享一则与其相关的故事（自身的或者某个运动员的）；
3. ……
Sports have become an indispensable part of our daily lives.
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11．阅读可以获取知识，启智增慧；可以使人更充实、丰富。你喜欢读书吗？你读了一些什么书呢？学校将要举办一个读书分享会，邀请你和大家分享一下你读过的一本书或者一个故事。你可以说说这本书或者这个故事的大概内容，有什么值得你学习的？你觉得这本书或者这个故事怎样？为什么？请你写一篇100词左右的短文，以便在读书分享会的时候和大家分享你的观点。
注意：
1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥。
2. 思想健康，观点正确积极。
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12．实施“双减”政策(Double reduction policy)，推行“阳光作业”，同学们可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，有更多的时间与家人和朋友交流。“双减”后，你是如何合理安排课余生活的，请根据下列提示完成一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 简单介绍自己的基本情况；
2. 有更多时间参加课外活动了，如课外阅读、演讲、打球、跳舞、绘画……
3. 有更多时间思考学英语的方法，如听录音、读英语书、用词卡记单词……
4. 有更多时间做自己喜欢做的事，如听音乐，谈谈你喜欢哪些音乐及原因……
5. 有更多时间锻炼、做家务、与父母交流，睡眠更充足了，身心更愉悦了；
6. 补充更多关于双减后你的变化，并谈谈看法。
要求：
1. 包含以上要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
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13．2022年11月中旬，你所在的城市爆发严重疫情，社区正大量征集志愿者。假设你是一名中学生，想申请成为社区疫情防控的志愿者，请根据以下表格里的提示，用英语给社区工作人员写一封自荐信。
姓名 年龄 所在学校 性格特征 个人优势 其他
李华 16 知德中学 阳光外向 擅长交际 乐于助人 1.坚持锻炼，身体健康； 2.有从事志愿者服务的经历； 3.掌握一些基本的医疗知识。 ......
要求：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：申请 apply for 社区 community 优势 advantage 疫情防控 epidemic prevention and control
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14．假设你是学生李华，你的学校将组织一个新的社团，现有以下几种计划:
● Reading club
●Arts and sport club
●Hand-made workshop
请给校报的Mr. King写一封邮件，选择一个你最喜欢的社团，说明你选择的理由，并对社团后续开展活动提出至少两点建议。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
2. 词数：110词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. King,
I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up.
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Hope my advice can be taken by you.
Yours,
Li Hua
15．请根据以下的介绍及提示写一篇英语短文。
Liu Yu is a middle school student and he wants to be a professional runner when he grows up.
Do you think he should be allowed to practice his hobby as much as he wants Why or why not
If you were Liu Yu, what would you do
要求：
1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，恰当使用连词，内容可适当发挥。
2. 不少于80词。
3. 不得透露考生姓名、学校、教师等信息。
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16．假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校英文报开展了一项关于青少年喜欢的艺术形式的调查请你根据以下内容，用英文写封回信。
We are carrying out a survey on what type of art form is the most popular among teenagers in our school. Please write to tell us: Your favorite art form Your opinions about this art form Your story about this art form Your favorite artist and the reason why you like her/him
注意:
1. 80词左右，语句流畅通顺；
2. 结合表格内容，并作适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to introduce my favorite kind of art form.
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I hope everyone can enjoy the art world.
Yours,
Li Hua
17．你校对全体学生就“Where’s your free time gone ”进行了调查。假设你是校园记者，请根据本调查的结果（见下表），用英语写一篇80—90词的报道，并结合自己的情况谈谈你的感受和想法。
注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Where’s your free time gone
Doing homework Going to after-school classes Doing sports Surfing the Internet
55% 20% 8% 17%
Recently, we’ve made a survey in our school about “Where’s your free time gone ” Here are the results
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18．榜样的力量是无穷的，假设你校陈鹏同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量”评选活动中，荣获了“新时代好少年”的称号。作为校报记者，请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍他的事迹，并谈谈你的看法，呼吁大家向他学习。
Key points（内容要点） Words and expressions for reference（参考词汇）
Looks big eyes…
Hobbies reading books, doing sports, …
Deeds（事迹） 1. be hard-working, study, … 2. be active, take part in… 3. be helpful, volunteer, … …
Your opinions …
注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；
4. 正文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Chen Peng won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.
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19．转眼间，你已是一名九年级的学生了。你还记得进入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？三年的初中生活在你身上又发生了哪些变化？请你以“How I’ve changed!”为题，完成一篇发言稿，讲述一下你所发生的变化。
参考信息：
1. 学习上的改变
2. 性格特征的变化
3. 兴趣爱好的变化
4. ……
写作要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当做补充；
2. 词数：80—120左右；
3. 行文中须使用used to结构表达；
4. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
5. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名等提示信息；
6. 首句已给出，但不计入总词数。
How I’ve changed!
Dear friends,
How time flies! I have been a student in Grade 9. And I have changed a lot in the last three years. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20．中学生在学校读书学习是一种“发展”，闲暇时间的安排则是另外一种“发展”。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom写信询问你闲暇时间的安排，请你用英文根据以下提示给他写封80-90词的回信，介绍一下你的业余活动。
参加志愿者活动，如：为老人们表演短剧，宣传环保信息 陪伴家人，如：一起做家务，……
My Leisure Activities
参加各种团体活动，如：篮球，…… 发展自己的兴趣爱好，如：……
注意：
内容必须包含提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，注意语言的多样性。
要求语句通顺、意思连贯、卷面整洁、书写规范。
文章不能出现真实姓名。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. Now, let me tell you something about my leisure activities.
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Best wishes to you and your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文
Dear Millie,
How is everything going I’d like to introduce my best friend Tian Tian to you.
She is 16 years old. She is a lovely girl with a round face and big eyes. She is very kind and easy to get along with. She likes reading and listening to music, and she is especially good at playing the piano. Her favorite subjects are physics and chemistry.
Now she is going to Woodland School in England to study for one year. I hope you two can be good friends. She is arriving at Heathrow Airport at 4 pm on August 1st. Could you please meet her at the airport when she arrives Many thanks.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍田甜的年龄、外貌、性格及爱好；
第三步，希望她们成为朋友，并希望Millie能够去机场接她。
[亮点词汇]
①get along with相处
②listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①I hope you two can be good friends. (宾语从句)
②Could you please meet her at the airport when she arrives (when引导的时间状语从句)
2．范文：
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
I used to be too shy to speak to others in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I fear to face others by myself. At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I also used to like collecting stamps. And this always helped me get rich knowledge. However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends. What’s more, I like classic music that causes me to fall in love with books. So I love reading very much now. In the books, I can learn a lot and know better about our world.
That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去和现在性格的变化；
第二步，介绍自己爱好上的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②as a result因此
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful.（定语从句）
②However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends.（目的状语从句）
3．例文：
My Free Time Activities
Today, the biggest change in my life is from the “double reduction” policy. Now, there are many kinds of wonderful activities in my free time.
I exercise every day after school. I think it’s good for my health and I can study better in this way. I go to the movies with my parents once a month, which is a good time to stay with my family and to relax myself. I also go to the library to read once or twice a week. Reading can make me open up my eyes and increase knowledge. Sometimes I go to the park to take photos with my friends. It’s both enjoyable and healthy for my body and mind. The school has many different clubs. I can play the violin, so I joined a music club. We practise twice a week.
We plan to take part in a competition next year. How wonderful! I’m sure the “double reduction” policy will be more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍“双减”政策下，你的业余活动及其好处，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍“双减”政策下，你的业余活动及其好处；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②open up my eyes开拓眼界
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I go to the movies with my parents once a month, which is a good time to stay with my family and to relax myself. (which引导的定语从句)
②I’m sure the “double reduction” policy will be more and more popular. (宾语从句)
4．例文
The importance of doing housework
Some people think doing housework is a waste of time. They also think doing housework is very boring. As for me, I love doing housework. Doing housework makes me relax. I often sweep the floor, do the laundry, take out the rubbish and do the dishes. Besides, doing housework is a good way to exercise. It can help us keep healthy and strong. It is good for my study. Finally, sharing with our parents can make them less tired and relaxed. I feel so happy when I see their smiling faces.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍做家务的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，先描述人们对做家务的看法，再介绍自己对做家务的看法以及做家务的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①love doing sth.喜欢做某事
②do the laundry洗衣服
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①They also think doing housework is very boring.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I feel so happy when I see their smiling faces.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文：
My hobby is playing basketball. I think it can keep me healthy.
I used to play basketball with my classmates every day after school and on weekends. But I realized that my hobby got in the way of my schoolwork because of more homework and less free time in ninth grade than before.
At the beginning of ninth grade, I couldn’t finish my homework because of playing basketball, which made the teacher very angry. So I decided not to play basketball after school until I finished my homework. In this way, my homework was completed faster and better.
In my opinion, although my hobby is a good way to balance study and rest, more attention should be paid to my studies. As long as we manage time reasonably, hobbies will not be bad for study.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，为说明文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③ 提示：结合自己的爱好，爱好是否影响自己的学业，以及如何处理等，并结合自身经历写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的爱好；
第二步，介绍自己的观点：爱好是否妨碍学业，以及原因；
第三步，结合自身经历，介绍自己的处理方式；
第四步，自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① because of 因为
② a good way to好方法
③ balance study and rest劳逸结合
④ as long as只要
[高分句型]
① At the beginning of ninth grade, I couldn’t finish my homework because of playing basketball, which made the teacher very angry.（定语从句）
② So I decided not to play basketball after school until I finished my homework.（until引导时间状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Dear Bob.
I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream.
I have a lot of hobbies. For example, I enjoy listening to music, especially classical music and country music. They both help my mind and body relax. I also like watching movies in my free time, and documentaries and detective films are my favourite. From documentaries, I can always learn something. And detective films which are full of mysteries always catch my attention. That’s also the reason why I want to be a detective when I grow up. I hope to help the police solve cases and make our world a safe place to live in.
What about your hobbies and dream Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wu Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述电子邮件的内容是介绍爱好和梦想；
第二步，详细介绍爱好和梦想；
第三步，结束语，你的爱好和梦想是什么。
[亮点词汇]
especially尤其是
a safe place to live in居住的安全地
[高分句型]
And detective films which are full of mysteries always catch my attention.（定语从句）
7．例文：
Dear readers,
As this year’s Excellent Student, it is my honour to share my experiences with you. Firstly, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. I review carefully after class. If I encounter problems that I don’t understand, I will seek help from teachers or classmates in a timely manner. Secondly, in my free time, I enjoy listening to music and watching movies to relax myself. Of course, I also enjoy playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. So I have a good relationship with others. I am also willing to help others, and I often help my classmates with their studies. No matter what difficulties they encounter, I will do my best to help them.
I hope my experiences are of help to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍如何提高学习成绩；
第二步，介绍空余时间进行的活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①it is one’s honour to do sth 做某事是某人的荣幸
②take notes 记笔记
③seek help from sb 向某人需求帮助
④in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
⑤be willing to do 乐意做某事
⑥do one’s best to do sth 尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①If I encounter problems that I don’t understand, I will seek help from teachers or classmates in a timely manner. (If引导条件状语从句)
②No matter what difficulties they encounter, I will do my best to help them. (no matter what引导让步状语从句)
8． A lot of people like watching interesting TV programmes to relax when they have spare time. There are many different kinds of TV programmes every day. Some of them are cooking shows, and some of them are soap operas. My favourite programme is called Animal World.
Firstly, it is a good way for me to relax myself, especially after long hours of studying. Secondly, with this amazing TV programme, I can see various living things from different places. Finally, it not only broadens our horizons, but also gives us a lot of useful knowledge about animals and plants.
For these reasons, Animal World is an interesting and valuable TV programme. This show opens the door to a brand-new world that I don’t know. I really enjoy watching it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意不要遗漏要点，写作过程中要适当地进行补充，注意上下文的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的电视节目是什么；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢该节目的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite最喜欢的
②especially尤其，特别
③knowledge知识
④brand-new崭新的
[高分句型]
①Finally, it not only broadens our horizons, but also gives us a lot of useful knowledge about animals and plants.(not only…but also…)
②This show opens the door to a brand-new world that I don’t know.(that引导的定语从句)
9．例文
How I Have Changed
How time flies! My life has changed a lot in the past few years. I used to play with my friends all day and all night. But now, nearly all my time is spent on study and homework. I used to watch cartoons, but now I’m more interested in sports games and English programs. I didn’t use to read books. However, now I enjoy reading magazines, because I think that the more books I read, the more knowledge I get. Besides that, I eat healthier food and exercise every day to keep fit.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述自己的生活变化很大；
第二步，介绍自己在兴趣爱好和学习习惯方面发生的变化。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do过去常常做某事
② keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
However, now I enjoy reading magazines, because I think that the more books I read, the more knowledge I get.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句；“the+比较级, the+比较级”句型）
10．例文：
Sports have become an indispensable part of our daily lives. Taking exercise is good for our health. I love doing sports very much. My favorite sport is ping-pong.
When I was a child, I saw a movie about ping-pong. I fell in love with this exciting and interesting sport. After that, I want to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, just sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping-pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. How lucky I am to be his son!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和一般过去时；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动项目；
第二步，具体介绍如何爱上这项运动的以及有关这项运动的一些经历；
第三步，最后介绍现在有关这项运动的情况，并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① be good for对……有好处
② fall in love with爱上
③ give up放弃
[高分句型]
① When I was a child, I saw a movie about ping-pong.（when引导的宾语从句）
② My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work.（though引导的让步状语从句）
11．例文
Reading can make our life colorful. My favorite book is The Old and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the fish, and the sea as well.
The reason why I recommend this book is that the story tells us that we never give up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中阅读的好处、喜欢读的书的名称、故事的大概内容、对喜欢的书的评价以及喜欢这本书的原因等方面的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍阅读的好处、喜欢读的书的名称、故事的大概内容；
第二步，介绍对喜欢的书的评价以及喜欢这本书的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① On the way back在回家的路上
② fight against反对
③ as well也，还
④ as long as只要
[高分句型]
① This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home.（who引导定语从句）
② Reading can make our life colorful.（动名词作主语）
③ This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.（宾语从句）
12．
My name is Li Hua. I’m a middle school student. I like the “Double reduction policy”.
Firstly, we have more time to participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football, etc. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. Secondly, we have more time to think about ways to learn English, such as listening to recordings, reading English books, and using word cards to remember words. Thirdly, we also have more time to do things we enjoy doing, such as listening to music, talking about which music you like and why you like it. Finally, we have more time to exercise, do housework, communicate with parents and so on.
In a word, I have a good time in my free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“喜欢双减政策”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述“双减”后如何安排课余生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
Thirdly, we also have more time to do things we enjoy doing, such as listening to music, talking about which music you like and why you like it.(定语从句）
13．例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-old boy from Zhide Middle School. I’m writing to you to apply for volunteer work in our community. I’m bright and outgoing, good at communicating with people and ready to help others. I take exercise every day and keep healthy all the time. I have a good advantage over others—that is, I have volunteer experiences. What’s more, I have mastered some basic medical knowledge, which is helpful in epidemic prevention and control.
I promise to do my best to provide the most pleasant service if I am considered as a qualified volunteer.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、年龄、所在学校、性格特征、个人优势”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②be good at擅长
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I have mastered some basic medical knowledge, which is helpful in epidemic prevention and control. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②I promise to do my best to provide the most pleasant service if I am considered as a qualified volunteer.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．例文
Dear Mr. King,
I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up. I choose to join the reading club. I like reading. I read all kinds of books. I especially like story books. Their stories have enriched my spare time life, and also made me feel the hardships of society. If I have time, I will pick up a book to read. Through reading, I learned a lot of knowledge, which not only opened my eyes, but also made me relax. After joining the book club, I hope we can hold regular book briefing meetings. At the same time, we can also hold a reading speech to say what books we like and why.
Hope my advice can be taken by you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍自己选择这个社团的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①choose to do sth选择做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I will pick up a book to read.（if引导条件状语从句）
15．例文：
In my opinion, Liu Yu, as a middle school student who has a dream of being a professional runner in the future, should be allowed to practice running as much as he wants. The reasons are as follows.
On one hand, everyone has the right to work hard for what he or she dreams to be. Even though he may fail to become a professional runner, he can still learn a lot meanful things from it. The strong will he learns from running my be helpful for his study. On the other hand, for teenagers, starting practising as early as possible is very important in order to be an expert in running earlier.
If I put myself in Liu Yu’s shoes, I would try to practice running hard as well as doing well in my study. I would let my parents and teachers believe that I can balance these two things well.
These are my ideas. And I believe hobbies can bring one pleasure and success. Through practising running, Liu Yu can grow up as an adult.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇议论文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写，部分需用第三人称；表明观点时，要有说服力；在完成“如果你是刘宇，你会怎么做？”部分时，要条理清晰，有理有据。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作意图和立场。支持或反对都可以接受，只要能自圆其说即可；
第二步，表明原因。从好处或坏处的角度讲明道理；
第三步，阐述“如果你是刘宇，你会怎么做？”，并简单结尾。提及“爱好”对一个人成长的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① In my opinion在我看来
② as follows如下
③ as well as和
[高分句型]
① In my opinion, Liu Yu, as a middle school student who has a dream of being a professional runner in the future, should be allowed to practice running as much as he wants.（who引导的定语从句）
② Even though he may fail to become a professional runner, he can still learn a lot meanful things from it.（even though引导的让步状语从句）
16．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to introduce my favorite kind of art form. I like English films best because I can learn a lot from them.
First of all, I can learn lots of English words and idioms. Watching English films can also help me improve my listening ability. Also, I can know some famous actors and actresses from the films, and my favorite artist is Danny Boyle, who has already directed many excellent movies. I started to watch English films with my parents at the cinema when I was nine. I fell in love with it. Besides, I can enjoy the places of interest in different parts of the world and see different kinds of delicious food.
I hope everyone can enjoy the art world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，确定“最喜欢的艺术形式”的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人观点、故事、最喜欢的艺术家”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①learn from从……中学到
②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
③fall in love with爱上
[高分句型]
①Also, I can know some famous actors and actresses from the films, and my favorite artist is Danny Boyle, who has already directed many excellent movies.（who引导的非限制性定语从句）
②I started to watch English films with my parents at the cinema when I was nine.（when引导的时间状语从句）
17．例文
Recently, we’ve made a survey in our school about “Where’s your free time gone ” Here are the results.
Students spend most of their free time on study, including doing homework and going to different kinds of after-school classes. Only 8% of them spend their free time doing sports. Surfing the Internet is the most popular activity for children.
Just like the other students, I have much homework. It usually takes me about three hours to finish my homework every night. I’m tired and stressed. I really hope I’ll have more time to do what I like to do, such as doing sports, listening to music and so on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格介绍学生们的业余时间活动，并谈谈自己的感受和想法；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，结合表格，介绍调查结果；
第三步，谈谈自己的感受和想法。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time on sth. 花时间在……上
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①It usually takes me about three hours to finish my homework every night.（it固定句型）
②I really hope I’ll have more time to do what I like to do, such as doing sports, listening to music and so on.（宾语从句）
18．例文：
Chen Peng won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.
Chen Peng is 15 years old. He is tall and strong, with big eyes and short hair. He has many hobbies. He likes reading books and doing sports. He thinks they can help him relax.
His grades are very good because he studies hard. He is usually very active at school and takes part in many meaningful activities. Also, he is helpful. When he is free, he often works as a volunteer for his community. He is so kind that all his classmates like him.
Chen Peng is an excellent boy. Let’s learn from him together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给要点不得遗漏，“观点”部分需自行补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述陈鹏的外貌和兴趣爱好；
第二步，介绍他的事迹；
第三步，表达自己的观点，发出呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加；参与
②so...that...如此……以至于
③learn from从中学习
[高分句型]
①He thinks they can help him relax.（宾语从句）
②His grades are very good because he studies hard.（原因状语从句）
③When he is free, he often works as a volunteer for his community.（时间状语从句）
19．例文
How I’ve changed!
Dear friends,
How time flies! I have been a student in Grade 9. And I have changed a lot in the last three years.
I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public. But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me. Besides, I often learn from my classmates so I have made great progress in my study. I used to play computer games on weekends, but now I am used to doing sports. I think it is good for my health.
I will continue to study hard to get into a good high school. I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述过去的三年有很大的变化；
第二步，回顾过去，包括学习、性格特征以及兴趣爱好的变化；
第三步，展望未来，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in public在公共场合
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③make great progress取得很大进步
[高分句型]
①But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.（not only...but also...结构）
②I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.（that引导的宾语从句）
20．例文：
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter. Now, let me tell you something about my leisure activities.
As you know, basketball is my favorite sport, so I take a basketball course after school. It’s exciting and relaxing for me to play basketball. Besides, my friends and I often go to help the old people with housework in my neighborhood. It makes me proud when I hear “thank you”. What’s more, I will also spend some time staying with I my parents. Sometimes we climb the hill or go to the park. I feel very happy to be with my family and I will never forget the happy days with them.
Best wishes to you and your family.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“想和你分享我的业余活动”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点提示，从参加的团体活动，参加志愿者活动，陪伴家人和发展自己的兴趣爱好等方面阐述自己的闲暇活动，并注意补充内容，文章连贯；
第三步，结尾表示自己对朋友的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①As you know正如你所知道的
②after school放学后
③help sb. with sth帮助某人某事
④What’s more更多的是
[高分句型]
① It’s exciting and relaxing for me to play basketball.（It is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型）
②What’s more, I will also spend some time staying with my parents.(spend+时间/金钱+doing sth花费时间或者金钱做某事)
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