【单元考点培优】Unit 3 It must belong to Carla. 专题13 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）

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（五四学制）Unit 3 It must belong to Carla.
专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题：Which places of interest should I visit How can I get there What’s it famous for
提示词语：mountain, pay a visit, by plane, enjoy
要求：1.内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯；
3.100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
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I’m sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．作为社会主义先行示范区，深圳以其各色之美闻名全国。假如你是某校初三学生李华，准备参加学校举办的一场主题为“发现深圳之美”的演讲活动。请结合自己的实际经历，给全校同学分享你所发现的深圳之美，并表达自己作为一名深圳中学生的自豪之情。
要点：1. 自然之美：深圳自然景点，例如莲花山……
2. 人文之美：义工活动，读书月活动……
3. 自己发现的深圳之美。
要求：1. 词数80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯，书写规范整洁；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：自然风光natural scenery；人文之美beauty of humanity；深圳读书月Shenzhen Reading Month
Good morning, everyone. Have you ever noticed the beauty of Shenzhen around you
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Thank you for your listening!
3．我们每个中国人都以自己的祖国为傲。请以“My motherland—China”为题，用英语介绍一下我们的祖国。
提示：
1. 历史；
2. 位置：亚洲东部；
3. 河流和高山；
4. 名胜古迹（places of interest）；
5. 人民正努力使自己的国家更加富强。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
My motherland—China
China is my motherland.
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4．假如你是李华，请写一封邮件给你的网友Jack，介绍一处你认为最美丽的自然奇观。
要求：
(1) 围绕主题展开写作，可适当发挥。
(2) 词数：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Dear Jack,
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I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
5．为吸引外国游客，长春市文旅局正在制作英文旅游手册。请你为家乡长春写一段宣传文案。
要点：
1.气候特点（简单介绍即可）
2.两大亮点（自然景观/文化特色/风土人情或美食等）
3.一句邀请语（鼓励游客来访）
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺。
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6．五一期间，李津去蓟州梨木台风景区 (Limutai Scenic Area) 游玩，请根据下面的要点，给爸爸妈妈写一封电子邮件，介绍游览的经历。
1. 景区以山，森林和河流闻名。语言无法表达我对这里清新空气的爱。
2. 今天早上 (This morning)，我爬到了山顶，山顶视野很好，满眼皆绿。天上的白云像一群绵羊。
3. 在山中，我还看到了瀑布和花朵。流水的声音给我平静的感觉。
4. 我很骄傲，在自己家乡有这样美丽的地方。我们应该保护自然奇观。
5. 也许有一天你们可以来这里，享受大自然的美。
要求：
(1) 80~120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可以增、删细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Mum and Dad,
I am staying in Limutai Scenic Area and I’m having a wonderful time. It’s...
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7．一转眼，丰富多彩的学校生活又将告一段落。回顾这一学期，Li Hua对我县的安阳山(西大山)之旅记忆尤为深刻，下面是他列举的旅行信息。假如你是Li Hua，请你结合以下信息写一篇英语回忆录。
要求：1.信息表达完整；时态运用正确；2.字数60—80左右，不得出现真实姓名等；3.可适当发挥。
Date May 5th Activities See some animals ( birds, rabbits .... ) and some plants (trees, flowers...)
Weather Sunny and warm Eat noodles
Place Mount Anyang Climb the mountain
People Parents and I Learn about Nezha
My Trip to Mount Anyang
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8．英语课上，老师让学生们把收集到的关于亚马孙热带雨林和撒哈拉沙漠的资料进行整理讨论。请你根据他们搜集的资料，用英语写一篇介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的短文，分享给同学们。
Name Amazon Rainforest Sahara Desert
Location (位置) in South America in the north of Africa
Climate hot and wet hot and dry
Plants over 80,000 kinds, such as bananas and hot lips About 500 kinds, such as desert roses and olive trees (橄榄树)
Animals monkeys, snakes, birds... camels, desert foxes...
写作要求：
词数不少于 60个。
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9．Write a passage of at least 60 words about your favourite mountain or river attraction. (围绕你最喜欢的山川或者河流景点，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Use the following points as a reference.
(以下内容仅供参考)
1. 最喜欢的山川或者河流的名称；
2. 景色介绍。
(以下词汇可供参考)
● Li River 漓江
● bamboo 竹子
● natural 自然的
● beyond description 超越描述
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10．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情 境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
在我们国家众多的河流中，长江具有举足轻重的地位。为了赞美长江，学校举 行了“长汇”的主题活动，现向全体同学征文。请同学们根据提示写一篇短文来介 绍长江。
提示：
(1)长江是亚洲最长的河流，也是世界上第三长河，全长约6300千米；
(2)长江发源于青海省，最后汇入太平洋；
(3)长江里有各种各样的鱼。对中国来说长江非常重要；
(4)我们应该保护长江，停止倾倒垃圾和排废水。
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11．济南因泉水而闻名，“家家泉水，户户垂杨”、“清泉石上流”是济南最美的绮丽风光。为了让济南的泉水更美，泉城公益组织创办的中英文双语网站Green Star Club，现征稿宣传名泉、保护名泉。作为一名热爱泉城的中学生，请以“Protect the Springs!”为题，为此网站写一篇英文稿件。
内容提示：1. 简单介绍你印象中的济南泉水；
2. 描述发生在你身边污染泉水或保护泉水的一件事；
3. 谈谈你对这件事的看法并号召大家文明观泉、饮泉、护泉。
写作要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 100词左右，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：civilizedly adv. 文明地
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12．森林对人类非常重要，它是地球的肺。森林能净化空气，调节气候，而且能给我们提供木材、橡胶（rubber）、水果和药材等，同时也为人们享受大自然提供了更多的机会。森林是很多动物的家园，成千上万的动物居住在那里。但现在森林面积正变得越来越小，很多动物的数量在急剧减少，部分已濒临灭绝。我们应当……
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13．九江号称“三江之口、七省通衢”与“天下眉目之地”，有“江西北大门”之称。古称浔阳、紫桑、江州，是一座有着2200多年历史的江南文化名城。九江是“三大茶市”和“四大米市”之一，是江南地区的“鱼米之乡”。请根据下列提示写一篇作文My hometown(我的家乡)简单介绍下九江。
1.九江地处江西的北部，景色优美；
2.有悠久历史，庐山之美，吸引游客前来旅游；
3.人们都很有友好；
4.城市越来越富裕，建筑越来越高。
提示词汇：在……北部in the north of 富裕rich
要求：
1.短文需包括所有提示，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于80，短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数；
3.文中不能出现与你自己相关的真实信息。
My hometown
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14．请根据表格内容，写一则小故事。
提示：
主人公 汤姆和他的狗
故事梗概 一天，汤姆去公园发现了一只小狗，它受伤（get hurt）了，汤姆把它带回家悉心照料，小狗变强壮了。它帮助汤姆看家，拿报纸，并且可以照顾他的小孩。
要求：1. 必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）
One day, Tom went to the park,
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15．在物质极大丰富的今天，旧物处理成为现代人绕不开的生活课题。它不仅是对空间的整理，更是对生活方式的反思，假如你是李华，你的美国网友Mike想要了解你是如何处理旧物的。请你根据以下问题，用英语写一封回信。
写作要点：
1. What kinds of old things do you have
2. How do you deal with them
3. Why do you do this
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 词数为100左右。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．英语课上，讲桌上放着四样东西——自行车钥匙、太阳镜、发带和报纸。这些东西的主人都是谁呢 请你根据下面表格中的提示猜测一下这些物品的归属者，可以用情态动词来表示推测。
要求：
1.行文流畅、脉络清晰、字迹工整；
2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Alice 喜欢读报
Jack 骑自行车上学
Kathy 害怕太阳晒， 喜欢扮酷
Lillian 长头发
Maria 讨厌阅读
Whose things are these
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17．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
阳光博物馆打算举办“2040时间胶囊（2040 Time Capsule）”主题活动，现正在青少年中征集放进胶囊的物品。“时间胶囊”将于2040年打开，让届时的青少年更直观地了解当代青少年的日常生活。请你（李华）写一封信给阳光博物馆的李馆长（Mr. Li），信的内容应包括：你打算把什么物品放入“时间胶囊”？它有什么功能和特点？你为何选择这件物品？
以下物品供参考：
（1）一把扫帚（a broom）（2）一张纸币（a banknote）（3）一支中性笔（a gel pen）
（4）一辆共享单车（a shared bicycle）（5）一段沪剧 （a clip of Shanghai Opera）
（6）一副近视眼镜（a pair of glasses for short-sightedness）
（7）一个U盘（a flash disc）（8）一份印刷的报纸（a printed newspaper）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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18．近日，某杂志向初中生举办征文大赛，要求参赛学生介绍一件自己最喜欢的物品（如电脑、钢笔、 玩具等）。请你根据下面的内容提示写一篇参赛稿。内容提示：
1.介绍一下这件物品是什么材料做的； 2.你得到这件物品的过程；3.这件物品对于你的意义。
要求：
1. 短文应该包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚， 行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
Everyone has his /her own favorite thing, and so do I.
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19．童年是每个人的生命里最具有怀念意义的片段。六一将至，你校英语俱乐部即将举行主题为“回首童年定格美好”的展览，邀请俱乐部成员提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍，分享你与它的故事。假设你是俱乐部的一名成员，请根据你的展品写一篇英文介绍。
注意事项：
1.介绍须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在100个左右，介绍首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
3.介绍中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.介绍必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。
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20．假设你是学生李华，目前正在九年级就读，三年的时间大部分都在家里上网课了，同学之间的沟通变得稀少，正值明年要参加中考，之后大家会各奔东西。开始繁忙的高中生活后，彼此间的联系会更少，所以同学们更加怀念彼此在一起度过的时光。现在我们校报正在征集有关“最值得我们珍视的礼物”的文稿，请大家踊跃投稿吧！
内容提示：
1.你收到的最值得你珍视的礼物是什么；
2.你在什么情况下收到的礼物；
3.你为什么那样认为；
4.你是怎样对待你的礼物的。
注意：
1.词数80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2.适当增加细节，以使行文更加连贯。
The most valuable gift I have ever received was
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air.
It’s really a nice place to visit. I am sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色。
[写作步骤]
第一步，书信问候语；
第二步，介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色；
第三步，书信结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the most famous mountains最著名的山脉之一
②lie in位于
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
① … in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. （when引导时间状语从句）
② It’s really a nice place to visit. （使用不定式作定语）
2．范文
Good morning, everyone. Have you ever noticed the beauty of Shenzhen around you If you are careful enough, you will discover a lot of beauty in Shenzhen.
First, Shenzhen is famous for its natural scenery. There are lots of beautiful nature parks in Shenzhen. For example, Lianhua Mountain is a perfect place for you to enjoy fascinating clouds. Second, Shenzhen has its beauty of humanity. A group of volunteers wearing red vests can be seen everywhere. There is an activity called Shenzhen Reading Month, which gives us a good chance to read books easily. At last, I’m also impressed by its people. You don’t have to worry at all if you need help, because people around you are all kind and helpful. It is a city full of harmony.
I am proud of living in Shenzhen, and I firmly believe Shenzhen will be more beautiful and prosperous in the future.
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，使内容更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明主题，说明主题是“发现深圳之美”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细介绍深圳的美，包括自然方面、人文方面以及自身体会；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的自豪以及对深圳的美好期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a good chance to do一个做……的好机会
②be impressed by被……所感动
[高分句型]
①If you are careful enough, you will discover a lot of beauty in Shenzhen.（If引导条件状语从句）
②There is an activity called Shenzhen Reading Month, which gives us a good chance to read books easily.（which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰Shenzhen Reading Month）
3．例文
My motherland—China
China is my motherland. It’s an old country with a very long history of more than 5,000 years. China lies in East Asia. There are many places of interest in my country, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on. They are well-known around the world.
China has many famous rivers and mountains. The Yangtze River is the longest river in my country. Mount Huang is famous in the world. Chinese people are trying to make the country richer and stronger.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给“提示”完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国的历史、位置以及一些名胜古迹；
第二步，介绍中国的河流和高山以及中国人民所作出的努力。
[亮点词汇]
①more than超过
②lie in位于
③around the world全世界
④the longest最长的
⑤try to do sth.努力做某事
[高分句型]
There are many places of interest in my country, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on. (there be句型)
4．例文
Dear Jack,
I think Mount Emei is the most beautiful natural wonder. It is in Sichuan Province, China. It has tall, green mountains and peaceful temples. The air is fresh, and people can see amazing views from the top. It is beautiful because of its green forests, clear streams, and lovely flowers. I like it because it is very quiet and relaxing. People can also see many cute monkeys and enjoy the lovely nature. What do you think is the most beautiful natural wonder
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍峨眉山；
第二步，从“地理位置、风景、动物”等方面进行介绍峨眉山；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①peaceful宁静的
②because of因为
③lovely美丽的
[高分句型]
I like it because it is very quiet and relaxing. (because引导的原因状语从句)
5．例文
Changchun, a Dream City of Beauty Changchun, the capital of Jilin Province, is a beautiful city with a long history. Changchun has four clear seasons. Winters are snowy and cold, summers are cool and comfortable.
There are many places of interest in Changchun, such as Jingyuetan National Forest Park, Changchun World Sculpture Park, the Changchun International Ice and Snow Festival and so on. Try local Northeastern dishes too, like tasty dumplings and hot pot.
Come to Changchun! Enjoy its natural beauty and delicious food. You’ll love this charming city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示，聚焦长春的自然景观、特色美食等旅游相关内容，可适当补充细节，让要点齐全；表述通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述长春四季分明的气候特点，引出适合旅游的优势；
第二步，介绍自然景点，推荐长春的本地特色美食，增强旅游吸引力。
第三步。书写结语，鼓励游客来访。
[亮点词汇]
①clear seasons 四季分明
②such as例如
③local dishes 本地菜肴
[高分句型]
①Winters are snowy and cold, summers are cool and comfortable.（and连接并列成分）
②There are many places of interest in Changchun.（there be句型）
6．例文
Dear Mum and Dad,
I am staying in Limutai Scenic Area and I’m having a wonderful time. It’s famous for its mountains, forests and rivers. I can’t express how much I love the fresh air here. This morning, I climbed to the top of the mountain. The view was great, with green everywhere. The white clouds in the sky looked like a group of sheep. In the mountains, I saw waterfalls and flowers. The sound of running water made me feel calm. I’m proud to have such a beautiful place in my hometown. We should protect natural wonders. Maybe one day you can come here to enjoy the beauty of nature.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点围绕在Limutai Scenic Area的经历展开，涵盖了该景区的特色、自己的所见所感以及对家人的邀请等，需突出对自然美景的赞美和保护之意。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表明自己身处Limutai Scenic Area且玩得很开心，并介绍该景区以山川、森林和河流闻名以及这里清新的空气。
第二步，接着描述早上爬山的经历，包括山顶的景色、山中的瀑布和花朵，以及流水声带来的感受。
第三步，最后表达对家乡有如此美景的自豪，强调要保护自然奇观，并邀请父母前来欣赏。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以……闻名
②climb to the top of爬到……顶部
③natural wonders自然奇观
[高分句型]
①The white clouds in the sky looked like a group of sheep.（介词短语 in the sky 作定语修饰主语 The white clouds）
②I can’t express how much I love the fresh air here.（how much引导宾语从句，作express的宾语）
7． My Trip to Mount Anyang
I’ll never forget my trip to Mount Anyang on May 5th. It was sunny and warm. My parents and I climbed the mountain. Along the way, we saw many animals like birds and rabbits, and also beautiful plants such as trees and flowers. At the top, we enjoyed delicious noodles while we were learning about the story of Nezha. It was a wonderful day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，直接点明难忘的安阳山之行。
第二步：具体阐述安阳山之行的过程和细节，包括爬山，沿途所见 ，山顶活动；
第三步：书写结语，总结整次旅行的感受，表达激动的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①along the way沿途
②such as像、例如
③at the top在顶端
[高分句型]
①At the top, we enjoyed delicious noodles while we were learning about the story of Nezha.（时间状语从句）
8．例文
Amazon Rainforest
The Amazon Rainforest is in South America. It’s hot and wet. It is home to many plants and animals. The plants grow fast and well. The kinds of plants are over 80,000, such as bananas and hot lips. They can give much food to the animals, so you can see different kinds of animals like monkeys, snakes, birds and so on.
Sahara Desert
The Sahara Desert is in the north of Africa. It’s big. The climate of the Sahara Desert is very hot. It’s also very dry and rains little. There are only about 500 kinds of plants, such as desert roses and olive trees. There you can see animals like camels, desert foxes and so on. Do you want to go and see them
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接介绍亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠；
第二步，具体阐述亚马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的位置、气候、植被、动物等；
第三步，书写结语，表达对马孙热带雨林或撒哈拉沙漠的美丽自然风光的向往。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②different kinds of不同种类的
③want to do sth.想要去做某事
[高分句型]
①They can give much food to the animals, so you can see different kinds of animals like monkeys, snakes, birds and so on. (结果状语从句)
②There are only about 500 kinds of plants, such as desert roses and olive trees. (There be句型)
9．例文:
The Li River
The Li River, or Li Jiang, is one of the most famous tourist attractions in Guilin. Along the riverside, you can see green hills and green bamboos. The ducks swim in the clear water and the fisherman fishes with his water bird. The most interesting way to tour the Li River is to take a boat cruise. The natural beauty of the Li River is beyond description, so you should be there to see with your own eyes and to feel with your own heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意介绍对象为山川或河流，自拟题目完成文章。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明需要介绍的景点名称；
第二步，详细介绍漓江的自然风光、游览方式等。
[亮点词汇]
①take a boat cruise乘船游览
②natural beauty天然美；自然美
③beyond description难以描述；无法形容
[高分句型]
①The ducks swim in the clear water and the fisherman fishes with his water bird. （并列复合句）
②The most interesting way to tour the Li River is to take a boat cruise.（不定式作定语、作表语）
10．One possible version:
The Yangtze River
The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world. It is about 6,300 kilometres long. It starts from Qinghai Province and goes into the Pacific Ocean. There are many kinds of fishes in the river and some of them are endangered species. People love the Yangtze River, but it has been polluted. We should try to protect it as it is very important for China. We should stop putting rubbish and pouring waste water into it. I hope it will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明长江在中国以及世界举足轻重的地位；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“长度、起源地、鱼类生物以及保护长江”等具体介绍长江；
第三步，书写书面结语。表达希望长江越来越好的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① starts from起源于
②endangered species濒危物种
[高分句型]
①The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world.（形容词最高级的应用）
②We should try to protect it as it is very important for China.（as引导的原因状语从句）
11．例文：
Protect the Springs
Jinan is known for famous springs. It has seventy-two springs. Baotu Spring ranks the first among 72 springs in Jinan and is known as “the first spring in the world”. The water is sweet, fresh, cool and clear.
The “Spring City” attracts visitors from all over the world. But with it comes different levels of pollution. In the scenic area, you can see the rubbish thrown everywhere, and the water is also polluted to some extent. Sometimes the waste water is found to be discharged into the spring, and the clean spring water is instantly polluted and smells stink.
Thus, some measures have been taken to strengthen spring water protection. Spring water provides an ideal source of water for us. In order to create a beautiful environment, everyone should take action to protect it. And as a visitor, we should view, drink and protect springs civilizedly.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求以“Protect the Springs!”为题，根据所给的要点提示写一篇短文介绍名泉，并号召大家保护名泉。注意要点齐全。
2. 写作指导：本文应该用第三人称和一般现在时来行文；可分为三段：第一段介绍印象中的济南泉水；第二段讲述生活中的污染现象或保护泉水的一件事；第三段总结，发表个人看法。在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
12．例文：
Forests are very important to humans and animals. They’re the lungs of the earth. They can make the air fresher. They also help to control the climate. They can provide us with wood, rubber, fruit, medicine and so on. At the same time, they can give people more chances to enjoy nature. Thousands of animals live in the forests. But the forests are becoming smaller and smaller. The number of animals is getting smaller and smaller. Some of them are in danger now. So we mustn’t cut down trees, and we should plant more trees.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目描述内容，写一篇关于森林保护的故事，字数在80词左右。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第三人称，时态应用现在时态。题目中已给出本文要点，学生可用英语叙述出来即可，并需要进行适当拓展，行文时应做到思路清晰，语言流畅，不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误。
13．例文：
My hometown
My hometown is Jiujiang, in the north of Jiangxi. It’s very beautiful.
Lots of visitors travel to Jiujiang because of its long history. You can learn a lot from the trip. What’s more, you can not only enjoy the beautiful nature but also exercise in the Mountain Lu. The people in my hometown are also friendly. They are always there to help you.
Now, my hometown is richer and richer. The buildings are higher and higher. So come and see how beautiful it is!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，要求根据提示的内容从历史、人文、城市和建筑等方面介绍一下自己的家乡九江。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，讲述家乡九江的详细信息要叙述完整，条理要清晰；注意使用题目中所给的词汇，保证文中无标点、单词和语法上的错误。
14．例文
One day, Tom went to the park, and he found a dog that hurt badly. So he brought it home and took good care of it. The dog got stronger and stronger with the help of Tom. After it got well, it could help Tom do a lot of things. It helped Tom look after the house, take out newspapers and look after his baby. How happily they lived!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述发现小狗的地点；
第二步，讲述悉心照料小狗，小狗健康了可以帮助Tom做许多事情。
[亮点词汇]
①get hurt受伤
②take good care of好好照顾
③with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
①The dog got stronger and stronger with the help of Tom.（“比较级+and+比较级”的结构）
②How happily they lived（感叹句）
15．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to share how I deal with old things. I usually have old clothes, books, and broken toys. For clothes in good condition, I donate them to charity. Worn-out ones are recycled. I give books to younger students or sell them online. As for damaged toys, I try to repair them creatively. For example, I once turned a broken robot into a desk lamp. There are two reasons for doing this. First, it reduces waste and protects the environment. Second, it allows me to help others while clearing space at home. What’s more, repairing things helps develop my problem—solving skills. What about you
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，介绍自己的旧物类型；
第二步、介绍自己如何处理旧物；
第三步、解释这样做的原因并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with 处理
②in good condition 状况良好
③as for 至于
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to share how I deal with old things. (how引导宾语从句)
16．例文
Whose are these things The key to the bike must be Jack’s. He is the only one who rides a bike to school in my class. How beautiful the sunglasses are! They could be Kathy’s because she is afraid of the sunlight and she likes to be cool. And the hair band might belong to Lillian. She has long hair. What about the newspapers It can’t be Maria’s. She hates reading. It might belong to Alice because she likes reading newspapers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示材料来猜测物品属于哪一个人的。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of害怕
②belong to属于
[高分句型]
①He is the only one who rides a bike to school in my class.（定语从句）
②It might belong to Alice because she likes reading newspapers.（because引导原因状语从句）
17．例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I am excited about the “2040 Time Capsule” event at the Sunshine Museum. I would like to contribute a flash disc to the capsule. This small device can store vast amounts of digital data, including photos, videos, and documents. It represents the digital age we live in and shows how technology has become an integral part of our daily lives. By 2040, it will offer a glimpse into the technological advancements and digital culture of our time.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己打算放进“时间胶囊”的物品；
第二步，描述这件物品的功能和特点；
第三步，解释自己放这件物品的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① be excited about对……感到兴奋
② would like to do想要做某事
[高分句型]
It represents the digital age we live in and shows how technology has become an integral part of our daily lives.（定语从句；how引导的宾语从句）
18．例文
Everyone has his/her own favorite thing, so do I. I have got many things in my life. But I like my MP5 player best. It is black and it is made of steel. I use it to learn English and take it with me everywhere.
Last year I got a C in the English test and I felt very sad. To encourage me to continue studying hard, my father gave it to me. From then on, I spent more time learning English with the player. Now I have made great progress on English and I enjoy learning English a lot. Thanks, my father.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍一件自己最喜欢的物品，包括由什么材料制成，得到此物品的过程以及这件物品的意义。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍制成物品的材料、得到物品的过过程以及这件物品对自己的意义；
第三步，最后表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①like...best最喜欢……
②be made of由……制成
③from then on从那时起
[高分句型]
①I use it to learn English and take it with me everywhere.（不定式作宾语补足语）
②To encourage me to continue studying hard, my father gave it to me.（不定式作目的状语）
19．例文
I’m happy to take part in the “Happy Childhood” show. For this show, I have chosen to provide a bamboo flute.
The flute was a gift from my mother on my seventh birthday. It is an instrument made out of a single piece of bamboo. It is dark brown and has eight holes, which help make beautiful music.
I chose this flute because it carries many memories from my childhood. I remember playing it for hours and hours. The music is so peaceful and calming that it holds a special place in my heart. The flute helps me learn a lot about music, culture and history. It is my friend.
I hope everyone to the show will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：介绍自己与参展作品之间的故事，注意要突出重点，保证逻辑清晰，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出参展话题，以及参展的作品；
第二步，详细介绍参展的作品；
第三步，讲述自己参展作品之间的故事；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be made out of由……制成
②carries many memories from my childhood承载了许多童年的回忆
③learn a lot about...学习很多关于……的知识
[高分句型]
①It is dark brown and has eight holes, which help make beautiful music.(定语从句)
②I chose this flute because it carries many memories from my childhood.(原因状语从句)
③The music is so peaceful and calming that it holds a special place in my heart.(结果状语从句)
20．例文：
The most valuable gift I have ever received was a pen. It was awarded to me by Miss Li when I got an A in English in the final exam last term. It’s a red pen, as smart as a new pin. I like it very much. I usually don’t use it. If there is something important, I will use this pen to write. I think I should treasure this pen, because it encourages me to study hard and learn English well. I will certainly study harder and do more with this pen.
It’s my most valuable gift. I will treasure it forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，属于记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括礼物是什么，如何得到的以及对自己的影响等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这个礼物是什么；
第二步，具体介绍礼物得到的经过以及对自己的影响；
第三步，最后介绍自己会永远珍藏这份礼物。
[亮点词汇]
① final exam期末考试
② as smart as a new pin非常漂亮
③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
① If there is something important, I will use this pen to write.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② I think I should treasure this pen（省略that的宾语从句）
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