【单元考点培优】Unit 3 专题14 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）

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（五四学制）Unit 3 What were you doing when the rainstorm came？
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是Joan，就读于阳光中学，Sandy是你的笔友，下面是她给你的来信，请你根据她的来信，用英语给她写一封回信。
Dear Joan, The other day, I saw some pictures of your school in different seasons online. How beautiful! I believe your school life must be colourful. So I’m writing to ask for more information about you and your school life. Would you please tell me: What is your favourite season and why How is the weather in your favourite season What’s your school like in your favourite season What do you and your classmates often do in your favourite season Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sandy
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．条理清楚，要点全面，书写规范；
3．词数100左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sandy,
I’m very glad to get your letter.
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Hope to get your letter soon.
Yours,
Joan
2．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观，向你询问有关中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封邮件，介绍一下中国的气候特点，并为他的参观提供一些建议。
要点提示：
1. How many seasons are there in your country
2. What’s the weather like in each season
3. What’s your advice
写作要求：
1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．春夏秋冬，每一个季节不仅有美丽的景色，还留下了我们的欢声笑语。 假如你是Bill，请用英语向你的笔友Sam介绍一下你家乡四季的气候特点及人们常进行的活动。80词左右短文，需适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数，要点如下：
1. 家乡四季的气候特点和人们的活动；
2. 你最喜欢的季节及理由。
参考词汇：spring (春天) summer (夏天) autumn (秋天) winter (冬天) Weather (天气) temperature (温度)
Dear Sam,
There are four seasons of the year in my hometown
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Yours sincerely,
Bill
4．假如你是某英文电视台的气象播报员，请根据表格中的信息播报一则天气预报。
提示:
Date January 23rd
Temperature -1℃～3℃
Weather In the morning:sunny; warm In the afternoon:windy; getting colder
Advice wear warm clothes; do more exercise
要求:
（1）语句通顺、符合逻辑；
（2）不少于70词。
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5．请根据汉语提示写一篇英语短文：
寒假来临，你的英国朋友Mike计划来中国做客。请你写信给他介绍一下中国的情况，例如：天气、人口、传统习俗等等。
注意：1. 词数：80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。
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6．假设你即将参加学校举行的My favourite season英文主题演讲比赛，请自拟演讲稿，演讲内容须包括以下几个问题：
Which is your favourite season
How is the weather in this season
Why do you like it best
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数90左右，演讲的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
My favourite season
Hello, everyone!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
7．假如你是李华，最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给Andrew回复。
Hi, Li Hua,
I’m going on holiday to your country in July with my family.
What’s the weather like at that time I’m just planning what I need to take. What clothes do you think I need to pack Could you tell me something about one kind of traditional Chinese art, such as paper cutting, Chinese clay art…
Thanks for your help.
Andrew
注意：
（1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥。
（2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
（3）词数80~100。
Hi, Andrew __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友David要来中国参观，他向你询问中国的天气情况以及来中国的最好时间等。请你根据提示给你的笔友写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国的气候特点，并为他的参观提供一些建议。
要点提示：(1)What’s the weather like in each season in China
(2)What’s your advice
写作要求：(1)不少于80词；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)所写内容必须包括提示的信息，可作适当发挥。
Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．李梅在加拿大上学，今天收到妈妈发来的电子邮件，询问她当地的天气和她的生活情况。假如你是李梅，请根据下列提示回复妈妈的邮件。要点 ：
1. 加拿大现在是冬季，多风而且寒冷，人们都穿着暖和的衣服；
2. 新朋友的外貌及爱好；
3. 朋友们正在公园里面做游戏，一些老人在锻炼，一些男孩子在踢足球。
要求 ：
1. 必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mom,
How’s it going
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Love,
Li Mei
10．假如你是李敏，你的美国笔友Danny告诉你，他很喜欢中国，想了解中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。请根据以下提示，给Danny写一封信，介绍你所在的城市的相关情况。
提示：
1. 不同季节所处的月份；
2. 不同季节的天气状况；
3. 人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 词数不少于60 (信的格式已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Danny,
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Yours,
Li Min
11．随着中国过境免签政策的实施，越来越多的外国游客想要来体验真正的中国。假设你是李华，你的笔友Mike想在暑假期间通过过境免签政策来广安游玩，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你的家乡广安吧!
要求：1. 60词左右；
2. 短文中须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 短文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
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12．假如你是腾飞，你是一名旅游博主（travel blogger）, 正在筹备一期关于“世界各地朋友的日常”的视频内容。请根据以下表格内容，撰写一段视频文案，介绍他们所在城市的天气情况以及正在进行的活动。
who place weather What she/he is doing？
Frank Beijing 下棋
Mary Toronto 听音乐
Bill Sydney 踢足球
Wendy New York 看书
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数：60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, guys! I’m Teng Fei. I’m glad to show you what my friends are doing today.
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We are all having a good time. Hope you enjoy it!
13．假设你是林涛，上周日你和朋友们一起出去玩了，你们玩得非常开心。请根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，向你的老师介绍一下吧！
写作要求：
1．文中需包含上表提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3．行文连贯，书写工整。
4．词数：60词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My last Sunday
I got up early last Sunday morning
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14．假如你是李欣，英国交换生Sam即将到你校学习，他在邮件里告诉你，他想了解当地的天气和你的学校生活。请根据以下内容提示给Sam回一封邮件。
提示问题：
How’s the weather
What do you usually have for lunch at school
Were there any school activities this term How do you like them
（1）参考词汇：right for 适合 have a good time 玩得开心
（2）词数 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。开头结尾需抄写在答题卡作文处。
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
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The school life here is so interesting. I’m sure you’ll love it after you come here.
Li Xin
15．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解你家乡的天气情况。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。
提示：
1. 介绍你家乡的四季天气特点；
2. 你最喜欢的季节及原因；
3. 询问对方家乡的天气情况。
要求：
1. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
3. 词数：70-90 词。
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16．请根据下面表格中的提示内容，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍下列城市当天的天气状况及适宜的穿着。
城市 天气
北京 上午有点儿暖和，下午冷
上海 白天有风，晚上有雨
哈尔滨 一整天都有雪，寒冷
提示词语：take some clothes, take an umbrella, gloves
提示问题：What’s the weather like in Beijing/Shanghai/Harbin
Here is the weather report in some cities in China today.
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17．假如你是李华，你校正在开展以“My Favourite Weather”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿、内容包括：你最喜爱的天气类型、喜爱此天气的原因以及你在这种天气状况下经常做的活动。
提示词语：snowy, cold, beautiful, skate, snowman
内容提示：
·What kind of weather do you like
·Why do you like the weather
·What do you usually do in this kind of weather
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18．假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lily计划来你的家乡旅游，她想了解一下当地的天气情况。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给Lily写一封邮件，介绍一下你家乡一年四季的天气情况，向她推荐来你家乡旅游的最佳时间，并陈述理由。
Season Weather
Spring warm but windy
Summer hot and rainy sometimes
Autumn cool and the air is fresh
Winter cold and snowy
要求：
1. 短文必须包括所给提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于80词。
Dear Lily,
I’m very happy that you are going to visit my hometown.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．假如你是李华，你正在为太原文旅创作短视频脚本，你想为这座历史悠久的城市拍摄哪些画面呢？漫步迎泽公园，捕捉晨练者踏歌而行；移步汾河之畔，可见垂钓者静守一杆悠然；骑行者追封掠影而过，野餐家庭铺展美食共享温馨……请选择一个时间点，描述一下当时的天气，人们的活动与感受。
太原的鲜活与诗意，正在你的笔下慢慢展开。
1. What time is it now and how’s the weather in Taiyuan
2. What are people doing and how do they feel
3. What do you think of Taiyuan
要求：
1. 内容包括以上所有要点，可适当补充，语句通顺，行文连贯。
2. 词数不少于60词。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。
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20．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Tom发来邮件，说非常想了解下你家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动，请根据表格中的相关信息回复Tom.
The weather temperature, warm and rainy...
Spring activities (任选两个即可) play Tai Chi special clothes, health, get on well with nature...
fly kites colourful, different shapes, good luck...
drink spring tea green tea, good for eyes and teeth, move out heat (热量) from the body...
注意：
（1）回复邮件中须包括表格中的信息，活动任选两个即可，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数70个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Sandy,
I’m very glad to get your letter.
My favourite season is autumn. I like it because Mid-Autumn Festival is in this season. My family and I eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon at the festival. It is cool and sunny in autumn and the sky is blue. If you walk around my school, you can see leaves on the trees turn brown or yellow and fall into piles upon the ground. At this time of year, our school looks so beautiful. During this season, I can go for different activities with my classmates. Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn. My classmates and I always take an active part in it. We have fun chatting with each other and cheering for our friends. Sometimes, we go cycling in the park. How happy we are!
Hope to get your letter soon.
Yours,
Joan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据信件内容作出相应回答，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己收到来信的心情（已给出）；
第二步，根据信件内容做出回应，具体介绍自己喜欢的季节，喜欢这个季节的理由，天气情况，在这个季节学校的样子以及这个季节经常和同学们做的事情；
第三步，表达期待收到回信（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①turn brown or yellow变成棕色或者黄色
②look so beautiful看起来如此美丽
③take an active part in积极参与
[高分句型]
①If you walk around my school, you can see leaves on the trees turn brown or yellow and fall into piles upon the ground.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②How happy we are!（感叹句）
2．例文：
Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China.
You asked me about the weather in China. There are four seasons — spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. But I think the best time to visit China is in spring or autumn because the weather is not cold or hot. It’s very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中的关键信息，写邮件介绍中国的气候特点，给笔友提供一些建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对笔友的到来表示欢迎；
第二步，介绍中国的气候特点并给笔友一些建议；
第三步，期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜古迹
②such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons — spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year.（there be句型）
②If you like snow, you can come at this time of year.（if引导条件状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Sam,
There are four seasons of the year in my hometown. In spring, it’s warm and windy. It’s the best time to fly kites for people. It’s really hot in summer. People like going swimming and eating ice cream. The weather is cool in autumn, the tree leaves turn brown. Farmers are busy harvesting crops. Winter is the coldest season in a year. It’s snowy and windy. People often make snowman and have a snowball fight.
Of all the seasons, I like spring best. Because it is the beginning of new life. Welcome to my hometown.
Yours sincerely,
Bill
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己家乡四季的气候特点和人们常进行的活动以及最喜欢的季节及理由的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己家乡四季的气候特点和人们常进行的活动；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的季节及理由。
[亮点词汇]
① warm and windy温暖而且多风
② like going swimming喜欢去游泳
③ are busy harvesting crops正忙于收割庄稼
④ have a snowball fight打雪仗
[高分句型]
① It’s the best time to fly kites for people. (句型It’s the best time to do sth.)
② Because it is the beginning of new life. (Because引导原因状语从句)
4．例文
Good morning, everyone. Thanks for watching today’s weather report. Today is January 23rd. It is sunny and warm in the morning. But there is a light wind in the afternoon. It’s getting colder and colder. The highest temperature is 3 degrees and the lowest is minus 1 degree. You’d better stay at home or wear warm clothes when you go out. You should also do more exercise to keep healthy. This is the end of today’s weather report. See you tomorrow and have a good day. Thank you, bye.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍当日的天气”；并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候观众。
第二步，介绍一天的天气概况。
第三步，给出该天气的出行建议等信息。
[亮点词汇]
①in the afternoon在下午
②stay at home待在家里
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①You’d better stay at home or wear warm clothes when you go out.（when引导时间状语从句）
5．例文
Dear Mike,
I am glad to know that you will come to China as a guest. Let me introduce China to you.
It’s winter now. It’s very cold, so you should bring warm clothes. China has 1.4 billion people. And Chinese people are very welcoming. There are also many traditional customs in China. For example, you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. When eating in a Chinese family, you should let the elderly eat first. Second, you can’t beat the bowl with chopsticks. When you have food in the mouth, you’d better not speak.
Chinese people are very friendly. If you have a problem, you can ask them for help. Finally, I hope you have a pleasant trip in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己很高兴听说对方要来中国做客；
第二步，介绍一下中国的情况；
第三步，最后希望对方过得愉快。
[亮点词汇]
① For example比如
② shake hands握手
③ ask sb for help向某人求助
[高分句型]
① When eating in a Chinese family, you should let the elderly eat first.y.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② If you have a problem, you can ask them for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文
My favourite season
Hello, everyone!
Spring is my favourite season. It’s not too cold or too hot. It’s usually warm and sunny. Everything grows in nature. Trees turn green and flowers come out. Bees and butterflies play among flowers. Different colours of the flowers make our city more beautiful. At the weekend, I always invite my friends to do some outdoor activities. Sometimes we fly kites when it is windy. We run happily on the grass and feel very excited. Moreover, we can go on a trip to a hill or have picnics on sunny days. That’s the best part of spring.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己喜欢的季节，题目中的问题回答完整，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，打招呼；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己最喜欢的季节，这个季节的天气和喜欢做的事；
第三步，书写结语。感谢对方的倾听。
[亮点词汇]
①come out开花
②do some outdoor activities做一些户外活动
③fly kites放风筝
④go on a trip去旅行
⑤Moreover此外
[高分句型]
①Different colours of the flowers make our city more beautiful.（使役动词make的用法）
②Moreover, we can go on a trip to a hill or have picnics on sunny days.（or连接并列结构）
③Sometimes we fly kites when it is windy.（时间状语从句）
7．例文
Hi, Andrew,
Welcome to China. So glad you’ll come to my country.
In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good.
Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese art with a long history. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. It sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cutting are usually put on windows and walls as symbols of good luck.
I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，根据邮件中提出的问题进行回复，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇问候，引出话题；
第二步，根据邮件中提出的问题逐一进行回复，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发期待见到对方的心情并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①had better do sth最好做某事
②one of………之一
③turn…into…把……转变成……
④look forward to doing期待做某事
[高分句型]
①In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too.（but连接两个并列分句）
8．范文：
Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will come to visit China. You asked me about the weather in China.
There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. Summer is the hottest season of the year. It often rains heavily. And winter is the coldest. Sometimes it snows, especially in the north of China. If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. It’s very pleasant to visit many places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall, the West Lake and Mount Tai.
I hope you can come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，围绕向笔友David介绍中国气候特点及参观建议展开。
②时态：时态为一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中中国四季气候、参观建议的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出气候特点与参观时机的关联。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头回应笔友询问，引出邮件内容。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从中国四季气候说明气候情况；再从参观建议给出意见。
第三步，书写结语。表达期待，结束邮件。
[亮点词汇]
①season季节
②heavily大量地
③pleasant宜人的
④places of interest名胜
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons—spring, summer, autumn and winter. (破折号解释说明四季，清晰开启气候介绍)
②If you like snow, you can come at this time of year. (if引导条件状语从句，给出针对性建议)
③But I think the best time to visit China is spring or autumn because the weather is not too cold or too hot. (because引导原因状语从句，说明春秋季适合参观的原因)
9．例文
Dear Mom,
How’s it going I’m having a good time here. Now it’s winter in Canada. The weather is windy and cold. People are all wearing warm clothes.
I’ve made a new friend here. She is Alice, a 15-year-old girl. She is tall and of medium build. Her curly blonde hair is really beautiful. She likes singing and playing the guitar. Right now, Alice and I are in the park. Some of my friends are playing games. Some old people are exercising. Some boys are playing soccer.
I feel relaxed here. But I miss you and Dad.
Love,
Li Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时和现在进行时”为主；
③提示：根据要点提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍加拿大的天气情况；
第二步，介绍新朋友的外貌及爱好；
第三步，介绍公园里人们正在做的事情。
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①of medium build中等身材的
②right now此刻
③play the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
She likes singing and playing the guitar. (and连接的并列结构)
10．例文
Dear Danny,
There are four seasons in a year in China. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. In my city, March, April and May are spring months. It’s warm and windy. We can fly kites in spring. June, July and August are summer months. The weather is very hot. We like to swim in the pool. September, October and November are autumn months. The weather is cool and cloudy. We like to pick apples on the farm. December, January and February are winter months. It’s cold and snowy. We like to play in the snow.
How is the weather in America What do you like to do Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Min
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意按材料要求写，需涵盖不同季节所处月份、天气状况、人们喜欢从事的活动等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明中国一年有四季，引出所在城市四季介绍；
第二步，分别阐述春、夏、秋、冬四季对应的月份、天气，以及人们在该季节喜欢进行的活动；
第三步，结尾询问对方美国的天气和喜欢的活动，书写结语，期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①four seasons 四季
②fly kites 放风筝
③pick apples 摘苹果
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons in a year in China. (There be句型)
11．例文：
My Hometown Guang’an Guang’an is in the south of China. There are many delicious foods here, such as Zhazha fish and Yuechi rice noodles. You can visit Cuihu Lake and Huaying Mountain. They are very beautiful. Many tourists come here every year. The weather in Guang’an is very hot in summer, so you should wear cool clothes. Welcome to Guang’an! I believe you will have a good time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据题干要求，介绍广安的位置、气候、美食和景点，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点明广安的地理位置；
第二步，介绍当地美食、推荐景点和气候，并简单描述其特点；
第三步，用欢迎语收尾，表达热情邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of China 在中国南部
②such as 例如
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are many delicious foods here, such as Zhazha fish and Yuechi rice noodles. (There be句型)
②I believe you will have a good time here. (省略that的宾语从句)
12．One possible version:
Hello, guys! I’m Teng Fei. I’m glad to show you what my friends are doing today.
Frank is in Beijing. The weather in Beijing is cloudy. He is playing chess in the park. Mary lives in Toronto. It’s snowy there. She is listening to music at home. Bill is playing soccer outside with his friends. He is in Sydney and it’s sunny there. What about Wendy She lives in New York. She is reading a book in the library. It’s rainy in New York.
We are all having a good time. Hope you enjoy it!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍不同朋友在各地的天气及活动情况，属于日常生活话题。
② 时态：以现在进行时为主，描述正在发生的动作；辅以一般现在时描述天气或居住地点。
③ 提示：内容需涵盖四个方面——人物、地点、天气和正在做的事，语言需简洁连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头用第一人称引出主题，说明写作目的；
第二步：逐一介绍不同朋友所在的城市、天气和活动；
第三步：统一总结，表达情感并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
① play chess 下棋
② listen to 听
③ play soccer 踢足球
④ have a good time 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
I’m glad to show you what my friends are doing today.（宾语从句）
13．参考范文
My last Sunday
I got up early last Sunday morning.
The weather was sunny, so my friends and I went to the park. First, we flew kites there. Then we climbed a mountain and enjoyed the fresh air. After that, we visited a museum to learn more about history. Finally, we had lunch together and took many photos.
We had a wonderful time and felt very excited and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍周末的天气情况；
第二步，根据提示介绍当天所做的事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fly kites放风筝
②enjoy the fresh air享受新鲜空气
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
①The weather was sunny, so my friends and I went to the park. (so连接的并列句)
14．参考范文：
Dear Sam,
You asked me about the weather here and my school life this term. Now let me tell you something about them.
It’s warm and windy in spring, just right for flying a kite. And in summer, it’s really hot and rainy.
When it comes to lunch, I have a favorite choice. I always enjoy a medium bowl of cold noodles at school. It’s delicious!
Our school organizes a variety of colorful and meaningful activities. Last month, my class went on an unforgettable school trip to the East Lake. We spent hours fishing patiently by the lake. Then, we worked together in small groups to cook a simple but satisfying meal. After that, we played exciting games on the grassy shore. The laughter and joy echoed all around. How relaxing it was!
The school life here is so interesting. I’m sure you’ll love it after you come here.
Li Xin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列问题提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出下文，回应来信；
第二步，介绍当地天气情况，分享校园午餐和讲述校园活动经历；
第三步，书写总结，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①just right for doing sth正好做某事
②go on a school trip 参加学校旅行
③a variety of多种多样的
④spend hours doing sth花费好几个小时做某事
[高分句型]
①When it comes to lunch, I have a favorite choice. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②How relaxing it was! (how引导的感叹句)
15．例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going I’m glad to tell you something about the weather in my hometown.
There are four seasons in my hometown. Spring is warm and the flowers come out. Summer is hot, and people like to swim in the river. Autumn is cool and the leaves turn yellow. Winter is cold and it often snows. My favorite season is spring, because everything comes to life and I can fly kites in the park.
What’s the weather like in your hometown I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候对方，引出谈论天气的主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍家乡的四季天气特点，最喜欢的季节及原因；
第三步，询问对方家乡的天气情况，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①fly kites放风筝
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons in my hometown.（there be句型）
②My favorite season is spring, because everything comes to life and I can fly kites in the park.（原因状语从句）
16．例文
Here is the weather report in some cities in China today.
In Beijing, it’s a bit warm in the morning, but it will get cold in the afternoon. You’d better take some warm clothes. Shanghai is windy during the day and it will rain at night. Remember to take an umbrella when you go out. In Harbin, it will snow all day long and it’s very cold. Wearing gloves is a good choice. People there should put on thick clothes to keep warm.
No matter where you are, be sure to pay attention to the weather and dress properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作目的，引入主题；
第二步：具体介绍北京、上海、哈尔滨三地当天的天气情况；
第三步：提醒大家穿合适的衣服。
[亮点词汇]
①had better do sth最好做某事
②remember to do sth记得做某事
③put on穿上
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Remember to take an umbrella when you go out.（when 引导的时间状语从句）
②No matter where you are, be sure to pay attention to the weather and dress properly.（“no matter +疑问词”引导的让步状语从句）
17．例文
My Favourite Weather
Good morning, everyone! My favourite weather is the snowy day. Although it is cold, the world looks beautiful covered in white snow. I love this weather because it brings joy and fun. I can skate on icy ponds and build a snowman with friends. The snowy scenery also makes me feel peaceful. In this weather, I enjoy outdoor activities like having snowball fights or simply walking in the snow. It’s magical!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己喜欢的天气；
第二步，介绍喜欢该天气的原因；
第三步，介绍自己的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①build a snowman堆雪人
②snowy scenery雪景
③outdoor activities室外活动
[高分句型]
①Although it is cold, the world looks beautiful covered in white snow. (although引导的让步状语从句)
②I love this weather because it brings joy and fun. (because引导的原因状语从句)
18．例文
Dear Lily,
I’m very happy that you are going to visit my hometown. Let me tell you something about the weather here. It’s warm in spring, but it is always windy. It’s very hot in summer and it rains sometimes. In autumn, it’s quite cool and the air is so fresh. Winter comes after autumn. In winter, it’s very cold. Sometimes it may snow.
I think that the best time to visit my hometown is autumn. The weather is comfortable and you can enjoy the fresh air and wonderful fruit. I’m looking forward to your visit.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，介绍家乡四季天气，推荐最佳旅游时间并阐述理由，需包含表格信息，语句通顺连贯，不出现真实信息，词数不少于80词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明得知对方要来家乡旅游的喜悦，引出要介绍天气的内容；
第二步，依次描述家乡春、夏、秋、冬四季的天气特点；
第三步，说明推荐的最佳旅游季节是秋天，阐述天气舒适、能享受新鲜空气和美味水果等理由，最后表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① tell you something about 告诉你关于……的情况
② quite cool 相当凉爽
③ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① I think that the best time to visit my hometown is autumn.（that引导宾语从句）
② The weather is comfortable and you can enjoy the fresh air and wonderful fruit.（and连接并列分句）
19．例文
It’s eight o’clock on Sunday morning. The weather is sunny.
I am walking in Yingze Park. There are many people in the park. They all feel relaxed and comfortable. Some people are doing morning exercise. Some people are playing the erhu. Some people are dancing. Some people are playing basketball. Some people are running. Some people are playing ping-pong.
I like Taiyuan very much. I think it is both beautiful and suitable for living.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍太原的时间和天气；
第二步，描述人们的活动与感受；
第三步，介绍自己对太原的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①both...and...既……又……
②be suitable for适合
[高分句型]
I think Taiyuan is both beautiful and suitable for living.(宾语从句)
20．例文
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
In spring, the temperature is around 15-20°C. It’s warm but often rainy. People here enjoy two special activities. First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks. It helps keep healthy and connects us with nature. Second, flying kites is popular. We make colorful ones in shapes like dragons or butterflies, believing they bring good luck. Sometimes families drink green tea together too. It’s said to protect eyes and remove body heat.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动；
第三步，期待对方回复并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②good luck好运气
[高分句型]
First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks.（定语从句）
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