写作专练
[单元写作训练〗
假定你是李华，最近你班开展了主题为“Chemical Farming or Organic Farming”的征文活动。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文：
1.你的观点；
2.作出该选择的理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇〗
定体裁 议论文——化学农业还是有机农业
定人称 第一和第三人称为主
定时态 一般现在时为主
定要点 定结构 第一段：表明观点，认为有机农业好 （或化学农业好）； 第二段：说明自己作出该选择的理由； 第三段：再次肯定自己的观点。
[遣词造句〗
A.翻译单词或短语
1. 对……友好
2. 注意；关注
3. 富含
4. n. 矿物；矿物质
5. n. 营养
6. n. 味道
B.完成句子
1.在我看来，有机农业比化学农业更可取。
， organic farming is preferable to chemical farming.
2.不含化肥的有机农业旨在使土壤肥沃，对自然环境无疑是友好的。
， organic farming， which is free of chemical fertilizers， .
3.患癌症的人数在上升，我们更要注意我们的食物。（动词-ing形式作定语，宾语从句）
The number of people and we are supposed to .
4.有机食物富含矿物质和维生素，能确保我们摄入必要的营养，并且减少了患潜在的严重疾病的可能性。
Organic food and vitamins.It as well as reducing the likelihood of potential serious disease.
5.有机农业可以保持食物的天然风味，从而刺激我们的食欲。
Organic farming can preserve ， thus stimulating our appetite.
6.考虑到所有这些因素，我更倾向于有机农业。
With all these factors ， I give preference to organic farming.
C.句式升级
7.用with复合结构改写句3
8.用形容词短语作状语合并句4中的两个简单句
[连句成篇〗
[读后续写训练〗
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Toby， a cat， was in a small cardboard box marked with “Free Kittens” when Daisy met him and took him home.And from that moment on， he loved boxes.He slept in hatboxes， gift boxes and take-out food boxes.He slept in Daisy’s sock drawer， if she left it open.When he was a kitten， he had slept in shoeboxes.But he grew and grew， and now he was a lot bigger than a loaf of bread.When he tried to sleep in a shoebox， his furry stomach hung over the sides.
Toby didn’t just sit in boxes， though.Sometimes he sat in flowerpots， or laundry baskets.Daisy had a beautiful dollhouse for her birthday， a dark green three-story house with lots of furniture.Daisy loved it.So did Toby.He liked to push the furniture out of all the rooms and sit in the bedroom on the second floor.
One day， Daisy came home from school， and she couldn’t find Toby.He wasn’t in the dollhouse， or her sock drawer， even though she’d forgotten to close it.
“Mom， Dad！” Daisy cried.“Toby is gone！”
Daisy’s mom looked in the attic （阁楼）.There were boxes and dust bunnies， and even a mouse that had escaped Toby’s notice， but no Toby.
Daisy’s dad looked in the kitchen cabinets.There were pots and pans， and cans of soup， but no Toby.
Suddenly， “I found him！” Daisy shouted.
The big cat was inside her mom’s new glass vase， and he didn’t look happy at all.Daisy tipped the vase over gently and tried to pull him out， but Toby just howled.
“We’ll have to break the vase to get him out！” Daisy cried.
Now her mom didn’t look happy.It was a beautiful vase.
“No，” said her dad.“If we break it， the glass pieces might hurt Toby.Maybe we can put butter on the inside of the vase and slide him out， like the time you got that ring stuck on your finger.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Immediately， Daisy fetched some butter.
Soon they were at the vet’s office.
[要素解读〗
When 1.
Where 2.
Who 3.
Event 4.
[谋篇布局〗
Para.1：
请回答下列问题（根据括号内的要求和汉语句子提示补全英文句子）：
1.What did they do with the butter？（由文中爸爸说的Maybe we can put butter on the inside of the vase and slide him out可知，他们会拿黄油来救猫，接下来则可以分别描写妈妈和爸爸所采取的救援措施；使用名词动词化，as ...as句型描写妈妈的动作）
Her mom as much of the inside of the vase ， and her dad tried to .
她的妈妈在花瓶里尽可能多地涂上黄油，她的爸爸试图把这只不高兴的猫拉出来。
2.What did the cat do？（此处可设置情节，让其进入焦灼状态：对于Daisy一家的救援行为，Toby并不理解，他表达了自己的抗议。一家人陷入了尴尬的境地。通过对猫的动作和外貌的描写来表现猫的滑稽状态，照应所给材料中猫的调皮贪玩）
To their disappointment， Toby the sides of the vase .Now they had an the vase.
令他们失望的是，Toby用爪子搭在花瓶上以示抗议。现在他们有一只生气的、油油的猫卡在了花瓶里。
3.How might the story develop to connect “Soon they were at the vet’s office.” in Para.2？ Who made a suggestion to see the vet？（一家人的努力并没有达到目的，心态上也由失望变成了绝望。此时可设置爸爸建议请兽医帮忙这一情节，有效衔接续写第二段的起始句）
They were almost when suddenly Dad.“We could turn to the vet for help，” he suggested.
他们几乎绝望了，这时爸爸突然想到一个好主意。“我们可以向兽医求助，” 他建议道。
Para.2：
请回答下列问题（根据括号内的要求和汉语句子提示补全英文句子）：
4.How did the vet react when he/she saw the cat？（可通过对兽医动作、表情、语言的描写再一次描写猫的窘态，进一步增强故事的喜剧效果）
in a vase， the vet almost but she managed instead.“It’s possibly one of the strangest things I’ve seen，” she admitted.
兽医看到花瓶里一只生气、害怕、油光发亮的猫，几乎要笑出声来，但她还是清了清嗓子。“这可能是我见过的最奇怪的事情之一，”她承认说。
5.What did the vet do？（由前面的分析可知，猫会反抗，人无法把它救出来，所以医生应是采取某种措施让猫安静下来）
She Daisy and her parents while she gave Toby a shot to .
她让Daisy和她的父母待在候诊室里，自己给Toby打了一针让他昏昏欲睡。
6.How might the story end？（结合故事的基本走向，可以采用自然式结尾：兽医成功地把Toby从花瓶中救了出来，并且花瓶完好无损。呼应了材料中的伏笔——在既不损坏花瓶又不伤害Toby的前提下救出Toby。用not only倒装句强调最终的结果）
An hour later， a very happy Toby the anxious family. ， but also the cat wasn’t hurt at all！
一个小时后，一个非常快乐的Toby被带到焦急的家人面前。不仅花瓶完好无损，猫也一点没有受伤！
[续写成文〗
Tips：1.根据第一段的首句我们可以推测，这一段主要描述Daisy一家试图给花瓶内侧涂上黄油，帮助Toby脱险。再根据第二段的首句可知，这个办法并没有成功。
2.第二段的首句表明，Daisy一家把Toby送到了兽医那里，兽医救出了Toby。
写作专练
[单元写作训练]
[遣词造句]
A.1.be friendly to
2.pay attention to
3.be rich in
4.mineral
5.nutrition
6.flavour
B.1.In my opinion
2.Intended to keep the soil rich； is undoubtedly friendly to the environment
3.suffering from cancer is on the rise； pay more attention to what we eat
4.is rich in minerals； guarantees us the necessary nutrition
5.the natural flavour of the food
6.taken into account/consideration
C.7.With the number of people suffering from cancer on the rise， we are supposed to pay more attention to what we eat.
8.Rich in minerals and vitamins， organic food guarantees us the necessary nutrition as well as reducing the likelihood of potential serious disease.
[连句成篇]
In my opinion， organic farming is preferable to chemical farming.Details are as follows.
First of all， intended to keep the soil rich， organic farming， which is free of chemical fertilizers， is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.Besides， with the number of people suffering from cancer on the rise， we are supposed to pay more attention to what we eat.Rich in minerals and vitamins， organic food guarantees us the necessary nutrition as well as reducing the likelihood of potential serious disease.What’s more， organic farming can preserve the natural flavour of the food， thus stimulating our appetite.
In conclusion， with all these factors taken into account/consideration， I give preference to organic farming.
[读后续写训练]
[要素解读]
1.one day
2.at home
3.Daisy， Toby， Daisy’s dad and mom
4.Daisy had a very cute pet cat named Toby.He liked to sleep in boxes and also in Daisy’s dollhouse.One day， Daisy came home from school but couldn’t find Toby.She cried and told her mom and dad about that.The family had looked everywhere for him but could not find him.At this moment， Daisy found Toby stuck in a glass vase.
[谋篇布局]
1.buttered； as she could； pull the unhappy cat out
2.put his paws against； in protest； annoyed， buttery cat stuck in
3.in despair； a good idea came to
4.Seeing an annoyed， frightened， buttery cat； laughed out loud； to clear her throat
5.had； stay in the waiting room； make him sleepy
6.was brought out to； Not only was the vase still in one piece
[续写成文]
参考范文：
Immediately， Daisy fetched some butter.Her mom buttered as much of the inside of the vase as she could， and her dad tried to pull the unhappy cat out.To their disappointment， Toby put his paws against the sides of the vase in protest.Now they had an annoyed， buttery cat stuck in the vase.They were almost in despair when suddenly a good idea came to Dad.“We could turn to the vet for help，” he suggested.
Soon they were at the vet’s office.Seeing an annoyed， frightened， buttery cat in a vase， the vet almost laughed out loud but she managed to clear her throat instead.“It’s possibly one of the strangest things I’ve seen，” she admitted.She had Daisy and her parents stay in the waiting room while she gave Toby a shot to make him sleepy.An hour later， a very happy Toby was brought out to the anxious family.Not only was the vase still in one piece， but also the cat wasn’t hurt at all！
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写作专练
[单元写作训练]
假定你是李华，最近你班开展了主题为“Chemical Farming
or Organic Farming”的征文活动。请根据以下内容用英语写一
篇短文：
1. 你的观点；
2. 作出该选择的理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[审题谋篇]
定体裁 议论文——化学农业还是有机农业
定人称 第一和第三人称为主
定时态 一般现在时为主
定要点 定结构 第一段：表明观点，认为有机农业好（或化学农业好）；
第二段：说明自己作出该选择的理由；
第三段：再次肯定自己的观点。
[遣词造句]
A. 翻译单词或短语
1. 对……友好
2. 注意；关注
3. 富含
4. n. 矿物；矿物质
5. n. 营养
6. ___________n. 味道
be friendly to
pay attention to
be rich in
mineral
nutrition
flavour
B. 完成句子
1. 在我看来，有机农业比化学农业更可取。
，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming.
In my opinion
2. 不含化肥的有机农业旨在使土壤肥沃，对自然环境无疑是友好的。
， organic farming， which is
free of chemical fertilizers，
.
Intended to keep the soil rich
is undoubtedly friendly to the
environment
3. 患癌症的人数在上升，我们更要注意我们的食物。（动词-ing形式
作定语，宾语从句）
The number of people and
we are supposed to .
suffering from cancer is on the rise
pay more attention to what we eat
4. 有机食物富含矿物质和维生素，能确保我们摄入必要的营养，并
且减少了患潜在的严重疾病的可能性。
Organic food and vitamins.It
as well as reducing the likelihood of
potential serious disease.
is rich in minerals
guarantees
us the necessary nutrition
5. 有机农业可以保持食物的天然风味，从而刺激我们的食欲。
Organic farming can preserve ，
thus stimulating our appetite.
the natural flavour of the food
6. 考虑到所有这些因素，我更倾向于有机农业。
With all these factors ， I give
preference to organic farming.
taken into account/consideration
C. 句式升级
7. 用with复合结构改写句3
With the number of people suffering from cancer on the rise， we
are supposed to pay more attention to what we eat.
8. 用形容词短语作状语合并句4中的两个简单句
Rich in minerals and vitamins， organic food guarantees us the
necessary nutrition as well as reducing the likelihood of potential
serious disease.
First of all，intended to keep the soil rich，organic farming，which is free of chemical fertilizers，is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.Besides，with the number of people suffering from cancer on the rise，we are supposed to pay more attention to what we eat.Rich in minerals and vitamins，organic food guarantees us the necessary nutrition as well as reducing the likelihood of potential serious disease.What’s more，organic farming can preserve the natural flavour of the food，thus stimulating our appetite.
[连句成篇]
In my opinion，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming. Details are as follows.
[读后续写训练]
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
In conclusion， with all these factors taken into
account/consideration， I give preference to organic farming.
Toby， a cat， was in a small cardboard box marked with
“Free Kittens” when Daisy met him and took him home.And
from that moment on， he loved boxes.He slept in hatboxes， gift
boxes and take-out food boxes.He slept in Daisy’s sock drawer，
if she left it open.When he was a kitten，he had slept in shoeboxes. But he grew and grew， and now he was a lot bigger than a loaf of bread.When he tried to sleep in a shoebox，his furry stomach hung over the sides.
Toby didn’t just sit in boxes， though.Sometimes he sat in
flowerpots， or laundry baskets.Daisy had a beautiful dollhouse
for her birthday， a dark green three-story house with lots of
furniture.Daisy loved it.So did Toby.He liked to push the furniture
out of all the rooms and sit in the bedroom on the second floor.
One day， Daisy came home from school， and she couldn’t
find Toby.He wasn’t in the dollhouse， or her sock drawer， even
though she’d forgotten to close it.
“Mom， Dad！” Daisy cried.“Toby is gone！”
Daisy’s mom looked in the attic （阁楼）.There were boxes and
dust bunnies， and even a mouse that had escaped Toby’s notice，
but no Toby.
Daisy’s dad looked in the kitchen cabinets.There were pots and
pans， and cans of soup， but no Toby.
Suddenly， “I found him！” Daisy shouted.
The big cat was inside her mom’s new glass vase， and he
didn’t look happy at all.Daisy tipped the vase over gently and tried
to pull him out， but Toby just howled.
“We’ll have to break the vase to get him out！” Daisy cried.
Now her mom didn’t look happy.It was a beautiful vase.
“No，” said her dad.“If we break it， the glass pieces might
hurt Toby.Maybe we can put butter on the inside of the vase and slide
him out， like the time you got that ring stuck on your finger.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式作答。
Immediately， Daisy fetched some butter.
Soon they were at the vet’s office.
When 1.
Where 2.
Who 3.
Event 4.
one day
at home
Daisy， Toby， Daisy’s dad and mom
Daisy had a very cute pet cat named Toby. He liked to sleep in boxes
and also in Daisy’s dollhouse. One day， Daisy came home from
school but couldn’t find Toby. She cried and told her mom and dad
about that. The family had looked everywhere for him but could not find
him.At this moment， Daisy found Toby stuck in a glass vase.
[要素解读]
[谋篇布局]
Para.1：
请回答下列问题（根据括号内的要求和汉语句子提示补全英文句
子）：
1. What did they do with the butter？（由文中爸爸说的Maybe we
can put butter on the inside of the vase and slide him out可知，他
们会拿黄油来救猫，接下来则可以分别描写妈妈和爸爸所采取的
救援措施；使用名词动词化，as ...as句型描写妈妈的动作）
Her mom as much of the inside of the vase
， and her dad tried to .
她的妈妈在花瓶里尽可能多地涂上黄油，她的爸爸试图把这只不
高兴的猫拉出来。
buttered
as she
could
pull the unhappy cat out
2. What did the cat do？（此处可设置情节，让其进入焦灼状态：对
于Daisy一家的救援行为，Toby并不理解，他表达了自己的抗议。
一家人陷入了尴尬的境地。通过对猫的动作和外貌的描写来表现
猫的滑稽状态，照应所给材料中猫的调皮贪玩）
To their disappointment， Toby the sides
of the vase .Now they had an
the vase.
令他们失望的是，Toby用爪子搭在花瓶上以示抗议。现在他们有
一只生气的、油油的猫卡在了花瓶里。
put his paws against
in protest
annoyed， buttery
cat stuck in
3. How might the story develop to connect “Soon they were at the
vet’s office.” in Para.2？ Who made a suggestion to see the
vet？（一家人的努力并没有达到目的，心态上也由失望变成了绝
望。此时可设置爸爸建议请兽医帮忙这一情节，有效衔接续写第
二段的起始句）
They were almost when suddenly
Dad.“We could turn to the vet for help，” he suggested.
他们几乎绝望了，这时爸爸突然想到一个好主意。“我们可以向
兽医求助，” 他建议道。
in despair
a good idea
came to
Para.2：
请回答下列问题（根据括号内的要求和汉语句子提示补全英文句子）：
4. How did the vet react when he/she saw the cat？（可通过对兽医动作、表情、语言的描写再一次描写猫的窘态，进一步增强故事的喜剧效果）
in a vase， the
vet almost but she managed
instead.“It’s possibly one of the strangest things I’ve
seen，” she admitted.
兽医看到花瓶里一只生气、害怕、油光发亮的猫，几乎要笑出声来，但她还是清了清嗓子。“这可能是我见过的最奇怪的事情之一，”她承认说。
Seeing an annoyed， frightened， buttery cat
laughed out loud
to clear her
throat
5. What did the vet do？（由前面的分析可知，猫会反抗，人无法把
它救出来，所以医生应是采取某种措施让猫安静下来）
She Daisy and her parents
while she gave Toby a shot to .
她让Daisy和她的父母待在候诊室里，自己给Toby打了一针让他昏
昏欲睡。
had
stay in the waiting room
make him sleepy
6. How might the story end？（结合故事的基本走向，可以采用自然
式结尾：兽医成功地把Toby从花瓶中救了出来，并且花瓶完好无
损。呼应了材料中的伏笔——在既不损坏花瓶又不伤害Toby的前
提下救出Toby。用not only倒装句强调最终的结果）
An hour later， a very happy Toby the
anxious family. ， but
also the cat wasn’t hurt at all！
一个小时后，一个非常快乐的Toby被带到焦急的家人面前。不仅
花瓶完好无损，猫也一点没有受伤！
was brought out to
Not only was the vase still in one piece
[续写成文]
Tips：1.根据第一段的首句我们可以推测，这一段主要描述Daisy
一家试图给花瓶内侧涂上黄油，帮助Toby脱险。再根据第二段的
首句可知，这个办法并没有成功。
2. 第二段的首句表明，Daisy一家把Toby送到了兽医那里，兽医救出了Toby。
参考范文：
Immediately， Daisy fetched some butter.Her mom buttered
as much of the inside of the vase as she could， and her dad tried to
pull the unhappy cat out.To their disappointment， Toby put his
paws against the sides of the vase in protest.Now they had an
annoyed， buttery cat stuck in the vase.They were almost in
despair when suddenly a good idea came to Dad.“We could turn
to the vet for help，” he suggested.
Soon they were at the vet’s office.Seeing an annoyed，
frightened， buttery cat in a vase， the vet almost laughed out loud
but she managed to clear her throat instead.“It’s possibly one of
the strangest things I’ve seen，” she admitted.She had Daisy
and her parents stay in the waiting room while she gave Toby a shot
to make him sleepy.An hour later， a very happy Toby was
brought out to the anxious family.Not only was the vase still in one
piece， but also the cat wasn’t hurt at all！
谢 谢 观 看 ！
