【单元考点培优】Unit 3 My School 专题13 书面表达-（含答案解析）2025-2026学年六年级英语上册单元复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）（2024）

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2025-2026学年六年级英语上册单元复习考点培优鲁教版
（五四学制）（2024）Unit 3 My School
专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是张明，你的笔友John想了解你的新学校生活。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信。
要点：
1. 学校的基本情况（如大小、设施等）；
2. 你的班级和老师；
3. 课后活动。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m glad to tell you about my new school life.
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What about your school life Please write to me.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
2．假设你是Jim，请根据以下要点向你的德国朋友Bruce介绍一下你们的学校及你的个人情况。要求70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. What’s in your school
2. What’s your school life like
3. Where do you live and how long does it take you to get to school
4. …
Good morning, Bruce! My name is Jim. Welcome to our school. Let me
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3．你是否幻想过周围的一切事物都如你所愿，都是你理想中的样子？请以“My ideal school”为题写一篇短文。
【要点】
1. What time does your ideal school start and finish
2. What’s in the school
3. What subjects do students study at school
4. What can students do at school
5. …
【要求】
1. 短文必须包括上述要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯。
2. 要点中省略部分需适当发挥（2-3句话即可）。
3. 词数80左右。
My ideal school
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4．当同学们踏入新的校园时，你们的初中生活就开始了。你喜欢这所新学校吗？你周围的同学和老师怎么样？请你以“My New School”为题，写一篇短文描述一下你在新学校的感受。
1. 介绍一下你的学校：这是我们的新学校，有三栋建筑，一个操场。学校不大，但漂亮。这是教学楼，它有三层，所有的教室在这栋楼里。在第一层楼，我们有科学实验室和电脑实验室。音乐室、美术室和一个舞蹈厅在第二层楼。也有一个图书馆，它在第三层楼。我们做早操、举办学校体育活动都在操场上，这是我最喜欢的地方。
2. 介绍在初中学习的科目，并说明自己喜欢的科目及其原因。
写作要求：语言流畅，逻辑清晰，书写规范，可适当增加细节内容。
My New School
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5．假如你是Ann，请根据邮件内容和所给提示，给Linda回一封邮件。
提示：
Dear Ann, Happy to receive your letter. What’s your new school like Do you make new friends in your school Could you tell me how you make your new friends
写作要求：(1) 短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
(2) 词数：60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Ann
6．下周有一批学生要来参观你的学校，请你写一篇英语短文，来介绍一下你的学校。
要点：1. 你的学校都有什么地方；2. 这些地方的具体位置在哪里；3. 你通常在这些地方做什么。
要求：1. 词数不少于60。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Welcome to my school. My school is not big, but it’s very beautiful.
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I like my school very much. Hope you will like it too.
7．假如你是来自阳光中学的李华，受邀在交流会上向新来的同学介绍你的校园生活，请以“My School Life”为题写一篇不少于70词的发言稿。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容包括：
1. 学校的课程安排和个人喜欢的科目；
2. 学校设施；
3. 学校的社团。
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含所有的要点提示，可以适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右。
My School Life
Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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8．假设你叫李华，你的英国网友Tom想了解你进入初中这几周的学习和生活情况。请根据以下要点，给他写一封电子邮件。
内容要点：
1. 学校的建筑和设施（如教学楼、操场、食堂、图书馆等，至少写两个）；
2. 这几周的初中生活经历（如认识的新朋友、新老师、最喜欢的科目、参加的活动等）；
3. 你对初中生活的感受。
注意：
1. 字数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：share（v. 分享），together（adv. 一起），colourful（adj. 丰富多彩的）
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．嗨，新同学！欢迎开启你的初中生活，这对你来说是一个全新的开始，请根据以下提示，以“My New Beginning in Junior High School”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你自己和你的新学校。不少于50词。内容包括：
1. 自我介绍（姓名，年龄，班级，来自哪，爱好等）
2. 描述你的新学校（建筑，规格等）
3. 你的感受及未来憧憬（新同学，新老师如何，你想要学习什么）
要求：1. 介绍必须包括提示的所有要点，可适当增加细节；
2. 语法用词准确，语句通顺，行文连贯；文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。
My New Beginning in Junior High School
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10．校园农场一直是育英学校的一道美丽风景。近日，来自加拿大的学校师生将来我校参观，假如你是李明，你作为校园讲解员将给来自加拿大的师生介绍我校农场的植物和动物，请你写一篇英文演讲稿。
参考词语：tomato plants，peacock (孔雀)，alpaca (羊驼)，pigeon (鸽子)，white, beautiful
提示问题：
1. What do you have on your school farm
2. How many of them do you have
3. What color is it/are they
4. Why do you like our school farm
My School Farm
Good morning, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I am glad to show you around our school farm.
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11．根据书面表达的情境设计短文写作。
放学后，Peter打开手机，发现自己收到了来自伦敦好友Emily的电子邮件。请以Peter的身份，阅读邮件后给Emily回信。
Dear Peter, Long time no see. I hope everything is going well for you. And I really want to know about your study life in China. What is your school like What’s your favourite place and why What do you usually do every day And when do you usually do these things Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Emily
要求：
(1)回复邮件必须包含来信中的要点问题，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯；
(2)回复邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名；
(3)词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。
Dear Emily,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Peter
12．假如你是李辉，请根据下面提示写一封信，向你的美国朋友Wendy介绍你自己和你的学校。
提示:
1.介绍你自己，你的姓名、性格、爱好以及你的好朋友。
2.介绍学校: 学校很大，有很多教室，教室干净明亮。学校有一个图书馆和两个阅览室（reading room）, 图书馆在教学楼旁边。操场在教学楼前面，操场很大。我们经常在那里做运动。
要求:不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wendy,
Thanks for your letter. Now let me tell you something about myself and my school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
13．假设你是李华，你校正在开展“书香校园”活动，英语社团公众号打算做一期以“Dream Library”为主题的推送，为此在校内征集想法。请用英语给公众号留言，提出你的设想，并简要说明它会带来哪些好处。
提示词语：recommend, new, experience, explore, interest
内容提示：
●What is your dream library like
●How can students benefit from your idea
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 6.
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I hope my dream will come true. Thanks.
14．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要出现班级和姓名。
北京市育英学校校园景致迷人，设施丰富。外国笔友Peter想知道你在学校里最喜欢的地方是哪儿。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一封电子邮件向Peter介绍你最喜欢你们学校的哪个地方，以及你为什么喜欢这个地方。
提示词语: different, teaching buildings, Century Forest, study, read books, friends
提示问题:
·What is your favorite place at school
·Why do you like it
Dear Peter,
How is everything going My school is large and beautiful.
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．为增进校园文化交流，育英中学将与结对的英国学校开展一次“云访学校”的线上活动。假如你是该校学生代表Teng Fei，请根据下面导图和问题，向他们介绍你们的学校生活。
Our School Life What is our school like (beautiful ...) What do we do at school (do exercises ...)
What subjects do we learn (Chinese …) What’s our favorite subject Why (useful ...)
What clubs do we have (the nature club …) What can we do in the clubs (watch birds …)
要求：（1）可适当增加内容，以使行文流畅；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数60词左右，开始语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Our School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
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16．你校英语报正在举办主题为“我爱校园”的征文活动。请你以“My School Library”为题用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍学校的图书馆或图书室（library）。内容包括：
1.基本情况介绍（位置、环境、图书种类等）；
2.对你的帮助；
3.你想为它做的事。
注意：1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇 floor（n.楼层），bright（adj.明亮的），kind（n.种类）
My School Library
My favourite place in my school is the library.
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17．假设你是李华，一个英文网站正在举办“My Teamwork Experience”征文活动。请你根据下图所给信息，写一篇字数约70～80词的英语短文，分享你和同学们一起打扫教室的经历和感受。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My Teamwork Experience
Last week, our class worked together to clean the classroom.
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18．假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生，你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选。以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息。请你根据表格内容，写一篇短文，向社会宣传自己的学校，并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事，为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。
要求：
（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
（3）80～100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
1．Teacher’s team (师资) ①experienced teachers help us make progress
②friendly headteachers grow as a person
2．School facilities (设施) ①a big library read books to learn more
②a playground do sports
③some science labs find something new
3．School environment (环境) ①different kinds of trees and flowers be clean and beautiful
②safety education classes protect ourselves
4．… … …
I’m from No. 3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it.
There are many experienced teachers in my school. They help us make progress in many ways.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school.
19．假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Fred给你发来一封电子邮件，请你阅读后回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I am happy to be your new penfriend. I want to know more about you. How many people are there in your family What’s your room like I like rabbits best. What are your favourite animals I study at a nice school. Do you like your school What’s your favourite place at school Why Can you tell me
Yours,
Fred
1.邮件应回答所有问题，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.邮件中不能出现真实的人名和地名
3.词数80左右。邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred，
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．假如你是李华，你的一位英国笔友汤姆来信询问你的学校生活。请你根据他的来信，向他介绍你的近况。
Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going I hear that you are now studying in a middle school. What’s your school like Do you enjoy your school life Tell me something about your school life. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Tom
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数80左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you something about my school and my school life.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear John,
I’m glad to tell you about my new school life.
My new school is big and beautiful. There is a library, a playground and many trees in it. I’m in Class 5, Grade 7. There are 36 classmates in my class. Our teachers are nice to us, and my English teacher often helps me with my English. After class, I usually play football with my friends or read storybooks in the library.
What about your school life Please write to me.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：需涵盖所有要点（学校基本情况、班级和老师、课后活动），适当发挥，注意语法和逻辑连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校的基本情况（大小、设施）；
第二步，描述班级和老师（班级人数、老师特点）；
第三步，说明课后活动。
[亮点词汇]
① big and beautiful又大又漂亮
② play football踢足球
③ in the library在图书馆
[高分句型]
Our teachers are nice to us, and my English teacher often helps me with my English.（并列句）
2．例文：
Good morning, Bruce! My name is Jim. Welcome to our school. Let me tell you something about my school—Sunshine Middle School. My school is very big. There are many classroom buildings. Our school library looks modern. There are 7 floors in it. There are many kinds of books in it. We often borrow books from it. Our playground is in front of the library. We have many subjects. Our teachers all teach very well, and we all like them. My school life is really colourful.
I live near the school. I come to school and go home by bus. It takes me half an hour.
I think our school is very beautiful. I like it very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于学校和个人情况的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学校设施、学校生活、居住地点及到校时间”几个方面重点介绍学校及个人情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of 许多种类的
②in front of 在……前面
③come to 来到
[高分句型]
①It takes me half an hour.（“It takes sb. some time”句型，表示“花费某人多长时间”）
3．One possible version:
My ideal school
My ideal school starts at 9 a.m. and finishes at 3 p.m. There is a big library full of different kinds of books, a large playground and a swimming pool in the school.
Students study many interesting subjects like art, science and P.E. At school, we can join all kinds of clubs. We can also have more time to do experiments and take part in outdoor activities. Our teachers are like both parents and friends. They are always willing to listen to our problems and offer help.
This is my ideal school where I believe we can have a great time learning and playing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍自己理想中的学校生活，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引入，介绍理想校园的上课时间和设施；
第二步，从上课科目、校园活动、老师三个方面展开叙述；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②take part in参加
③be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
[高分句型]
①There is a big library full of different kinds of books, a large playground and a swimming pool in the school.（There be句型）
②This is my ideal school where I believe we can have a great time learning and playing.（where引导的定语从句）
4．例文
My New School
I’m very happy to be in my new junior high school. It’s not very big, but it’s beautiful.
There are three buildings and a playground. The main building is the teaching building. It has three floors. All our classrooms are here. On the first floor, we have a science lab and a computer lab. On the second floor, there are a music room, an art room and a dance hall. The library is on the third floor. We do morning exercises and have sports activities on the playground. It’s my favorite place because it’s big and has many green trees around.
Now I study many subjects like Chinese, math, English, history, geography, biology and PE. My favorite subject is English. I like it because it’s interesting and useful. I want to talk to people from other countries.
My teachers are kind and helpful. My classmates are friendly too. I like my new school very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍学校的建筑布局；
第三步、介绍自己喜欢的科目及原因并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①teaching building教学楼
②on the playground在操场上
③talk to sb.与某人交谈
[高分句型]
It’s my favorite place because it’s big and has many green trees around.(because引导原因状语从句)
5．例文
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to receive your letter. My new school is big and beautiful, with a large playground and many nice classrooms. The teachers are kind and helpful, and the students are friendly. I’ve made some new friends here. When I first came, I smiled at my classmates and talked to them about our hobbies. We often study and play together. I think being open and polite is a good way to make friends.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Ann
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点和开头结尾部分已给出，考生应注意要求中的内容，不遗漏要点，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表达收到对方来信的喜悦；
第二步，介绍新学校的情况，包括学校的环境、设施以及自己在新学校的生活和交友经历；
第三步，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①beautiful美丽的
②friendly友好的
③hobbies爱好
④open and polite开朗且有礼貌的
[高分句型]
①When I first came, I smiled at my classmates and talked to them about our hobbies. (when引导时间状语从句)
② I think being open and polite is a good way to make friends. (省略that的宾语从句)
6．例文
Welcome to my school. My school is not big, but it’s very beautiful.
Our school has many places for study and activities. The teaching building is in the center, where we have classes every day. Behind it is the library, full of interesting books. I often read there after school. To the left of the teaching building is the playground. We play basketball and run there during breaks. Next to the playground is the dining hall, where we enjoy delicious meals.
I like my school very much. Hope you will like it too.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段；
第二步，介绍自己学校的建筑、建筑的位置以及自己在这些建筑里做什么；
第三步，承接给出的结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in the center在中心
②full of充满
③Next to紧挨着
[高分句型]
The teaching building is in the center, where we have classes every day. (where引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．例文
My School Life Hello, everyone! I’d like to tell you about my school life.
We have classes from 8:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m., including Chinese, math, English, and science. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and useful.
Our school has modern facilities. There is a big library where we can read books, and a playground where we play sports after class.
I join the art club because I love drawing. We meet every Friday and share our works. Some classmates join the basketball club too.
I really enjoy my school life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍学校的课程安排和个人喜欢的科目；
第二步、介绍学校设施以及学校的社团；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have classes上课
②from…to…从……到……
③play sports做运动
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and useful.(because引导原因状语从句)
8．参考范文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. Let me share my junior high life these weeks with you.
Our school is beautiful. There’s a tall teaching building and a big library with many books. I often read there after class. I’ve got a new friend. His name is Li Ming. He’s friendly and we often study together. Both of us like doing sports and we often play football and run in the playground after school. My favourite subject is math. It’s a bit difficult but interesting. Our math teacher, Mr Wang, is strict but nice. Last Friday, I joined the Music Club. We sang songs there.
I like my junior high life. It’s busy but colourful. How is your school life
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：语句通顺、无语法错误，注意字母的大小写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍自己的学校；
第二步，具体介绍这几周的初中生活经历；
第三步，表达自己对初中生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某事
②after school放学后
[高分句型]
①There’s a tall teaching building and a big library with many books.（There be句型）
②It’s a bit difficult but interesting.（but表示转折）
9．例文
My New Beginning in Junior High School
Hello, everyone! My name is Lily. I’m twelve years old and I’m in Class 3, Grade 7. I come from a small town near the sea, and I love reading and playing badminton.
My new school is big and modern. There are six tall white buildings, a bright library, and a large playground with green grass. Every morning, the gate opens with smiling teachers standing there.
I feel excited but a little nervous. My classmates are friendly and my teachers are kind and patient. I hope to learn English well and make many new friends. I believe my junior high life will be colorful and full of surprises!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍你自己和你的新学校，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的基本信息，包括姓名，年龄，班级，来自哪，爱好等；
第二步：描述你的新学校，包括学校的建筑和规格等；
第三步：介绍你的感受及未来憧憬，包括新同学和新老师如何以及你想要学习什么。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②hope to do sth.希望做某事
③full of充满
[高分句型]
①There are six tall white buildings, a bright library, and a large playground with green grass. (there be结构)
②I believe my junior high life will be colorful and full of surprises! (宾语从句)
10．例文
My School Farm
Good morning, everyone. My name is Li Ming. I am glad to show you around our school farm. There are two peacocks, three alpacas, and hundreds of pigeons on our farm. The alpacas are white, beautiful, and gentle. In the garden, there are many red tomatoes and yellow carrots. We also have a small pond with some goldfish. We like our school farm because not only can we learn how to grow here, but we can also eat fresh fruits and vegetables.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍学校农场；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍学校农场里有什么，动物的数量，颜色；
第三步，书写结语，介绍喜欢学校农场的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①show around带……参观
②hundreds of 数百
③a small pond一个小池塘
[高分句型]
①In the garden, there are many red tomatoes and yellow carrots.（there be句型）
②We like our school farm because not only can we learn how to grow here, but we can also eat fresh fruits and vegetables.（原因状语从句）
11．例文
Dear Emily,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you about my school life.
My new school is much bigger than my old one, and it has a lot of facilities like a library, a science lab, and a big playground. I like the library best because I enjoy reading there after class.
I usually go to school at 7:30 in the morning. We have seven classes a day, from Monday to Friday. I joined the basketball club this year and I often play basketball with my friends after school.
Please tell me about your life in London.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意围绕邮件中的问题进行写作，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学校；
第二步，描述自己的校园生活；
第三步，请Emily告知她在伦敦的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of设施许多
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③after school放学后
[高分句型]
I like the library best because I enjoy reading there after class. (because引导的原因状语从句)
12．One possible version
Dear Wendy,
Thanks for your letter. Now let me tell you something about myself and my school.
My name is Li Hui. I’m an outgoing boy and I love making friends. My hobby is playing basketball. It makes me strong and healthy. My best friend is Tom who is brave. We always have a great time together.
My school is big. There are many classrooms. They are clean and bright. There is a library beside the teaching building and two reading rooms in the school. The playground is in front of the teaching building. It’s really large. We often do sports there. I really enjoy my school life.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的信息，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：感谢对方来信，引入主题；
第二步：介绍自己的姓名、性格特点、爱好以及好朋友；
第三步：详细介绍自己的学校并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①outgoing外向的
②make friends交朋友
③have a great time玩得开心
④in front of在……前面
[高分句型]
①My best friend is Tom who is brave. (who引导的定语从句)
②There is a library beside the teaching building and two reading rooms in the school. (There be句型)
13．One possible version:
I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. My dream library would be a modern, interactive space with cozy reading corners, e-books, and even VR stations to explore books in new ways. It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests.
This kind of library would make reading more fun and engaging. Students could experience stories in different styles, discover new types, and develop a lifelong love for books. Let’s make reading an exciting adventure.
I hope my dream will come true. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：表示设想，主要用虚拟语气，形式为“would/could do”；
③提示：内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，直入主题，描述自己设想中的图书馆，包括其风格与设备；
第二步，介绍该图书馆的益处；
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
② this kind of 这种类型的
③ let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
[高分句型]
① It could also have a recommendation system to help students find books matching their interests. (动词不定式作后置定语)
② Let’s make reading an exciting adventure. (祈使句)
14．例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going My school is large and beautiful. It has many different places, like teaching buildings and playgrounds, but my favorite is Century Forest, which is surrounded by green trees and colorful flowers. I like it because it’s a great spot to study and read books. If I want to focus on a difficult problem or enjoy a quiet reading time, the peaceful environment helps me do that well. Also, I often chat and have fun with friends there. It makes my school days more enjoyable. What’s your favorite place in your school
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候开启，接着简要介绍学校整体情况，然后引出最喜欢的地点；
第二步，针对所选地点，先描述其特点；再说明喜欢的原因和带来的感受；
第三步，最后询问对方最喜欢学校的哪个地方。
[亮点词汇]
①be surrounded by被……围绕
②focus on专注于……
③have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I like it because it’s a great spot to study and read books. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②If I want to focus on a difficult problem or enjoy a quiet reading time, the peaceful environment helps me do that well. (if引导的条件状语从句)
15．参考范文：
Our School Life
Hello, everyone, I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
My school is beautiful and great. We do exercises and raise the flag on the sports field. For subjects, we have Chinese, math, English, history, biology, geography, IT, PE and so on. My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful. For clubs, we have many different fun clubs. I join the nature club. In the club, we can watch the birds and collect plants and insects.
We love our school, and we enjoy our colorful school life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点围绕学校环境、在校活动、学习科目、最喜欢的科目及原因、学校社团及社团活动展开，考生需涵盖这些要点，可适当增添内容让文章更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步，使用给定的开头引出主题；
第二步，先描述学校的样子，接着列举在校做的事，然后介绍学习的科目，再说明最喜欢的科目及原因，最后介绍社团及社团活动；
第三步，表达对学校生活的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②do exercises做锻炼
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful. （because引导原因状语从句）
16．例文
My School Library
My favourite place in my school is the library. Our school library is on the second floor of the teaching building. It is bright and quiet, with shelves full of books of different kinds, such as storybooks, science books, and magazines.
The library has helped me a lot. I often read there after class, which improves my reading skills and broadens my knowledge. It is also a perfect place to study and do homework. To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organize books and keep it clean. I also plan to donate some interesting books to share with others.
I love our school library and hope it becomes even better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍图书馆的基本情况，包括位置、环境、图书种类等；
第三步，介绍图书馆对自己的帮助以及想为它做的事。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②give back回报
③plan to do sth计划做某事
[高分句型]
①I often read there after class, which improves my reading skills and broadens my knowledge.（which引导的定语从句）
②To give back, I want to volunteer in the library, helping to organize books and keep it clean.（动词不定式作目的状语）
17．例文
My Teamwork Experience Last week, our class worked together to clean the classroom. To make it efficient, we divided into small groups. Some students swept the floor thoroughly, others cleaned the windows with cloths, and a few took out the trash bags. I helped tidy the desks and chairs, arranging them neatly. During the cleaning, we encouraged each other and shared tools. Although it was tiring, we laughed and chatted, which made it fun. In less than an hour, the classroom was spotless. I learned that teamwork makes tasks easier and faster. It was a great experience, and I felt proud of our cooperation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，简洁明了地交代了核心任务——团队合作清洁教室；
第二步：具体阐述任务过程和细节，包括任务组织、分工协作、个人行动、合作互动、感受与氛围；
第三步：书写结语，点明收获和意义。
[亮点词汇]
①divide into分成……
②each other互相
③less than不到、少于
[高分句型]
①Although it was tiring, we laughed and chatted, which made it fun.（让步状语从句）
②I learned that teamwork makes tasks easier and faster.（宾语从句）
18．One possible version
I’m from No. 3 Middle School. My school is making its effort to be a civilized school. Let me introduce it.
There are many experienced teachers in my school. They help us make progress in many ways. Our friendly headteachers often teach us to grow as a person.
A big library stands in my school. It holds a number of books. We can enjoy them and learn more about the world. A playground and some science labs are in my school too. We can do sports and find something new there. It helps us keep fit and have a colorful life.
Our school is covered with different kinds of trees and flowers. It is clean and beautiful. We often have safety education classes. We can learn how to protect ourselves.
As students, we must respect our teachers and be polite to others.
Let’s try our best to make our school more beautiful and make it a civilized school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出介绍主题；
第二步，具体阐述学校的师资、学校设施和环境等信息；
第三步，介绍自己能为创建文明校园所做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①a number of许多
②do sports做运动
③keep fit保持健康
④different kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
We can learn how to protect ourselves. (疑问词+不定式)
19．例文：
Dear Fred,
Thank you for your email! There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. My room is not too big but cozy. It has a blue desk on the left and a bookshelf next to it. I also love rabbits! They are cute and gentle.
Yes, I like my school very much. My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. I often read there after class.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题干提示，回答Fred的问题，介绍自己的家庭情况、房间布置、喜欢的动物和学校情况，注意内容齐全，保证语句通顺，无单词和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭信息以及房间的摆设以及喜欢的动物；
第二步，介绍自己的学校情况和最喜欢的学校设施；
第三步，表达对成为笔友的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① next to 紧挨着
② look forward to sth./doing sth. 期待某事/做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger sister, and me. (there be句型)
②My favorite place is the library because it’s quiet and full of interesting books. (because引导原因状语从句)
20．例文
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you something about my school and my school life. My school is big and beautiful. There are two classroom buildings, two dining halls, a playground and a library in it. You can also see many flowers in the school. I like my school very much.
I go to school from Monday to Friday every week. I have seven classes every weekday. I like English class best because it’s very interesting. I like music and I am in the school music club. There are many activities in our school, such as singing competitions, sports matches and school trips. I think my school life is colourful.
What about your school and school life Can you tell me something about them
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于学校及学校生活的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。李华回应Tom的询问，表达很高兴介绍自己的学校和学校生活。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学校的外观、设施、课程、活动以及个人感受等方面详细介绍学校及学校生活。
第三步，书写结语。表达期待与Tom进一步交流的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① big and beautiful又大又漂亮
② such as例如
③ colourful丰富多彩的
[高分句型]
①I like English class best because it’s very interesting.（原因状语从句）
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