2025届高考英语二轮复习读后续写时间转换课件（共29张PPT)
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读后续写转场技巧 1
时间转场
About coherence and logic:
记叙体的顺序性：结构紧凑；一气呵成
意识流动顺序
时间顺序
空间顺序
场景的氛围
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. As Katherine took over the wet items from Hilda, Katherine sincerely apologized to Hilda for her misunderstanding and carelessness. Hilda’s eyes sparkling with thrill mingled（=mixed）with delight, she proposed to Katherine that they could design a unique dolphin show to attract visitors--- Seeking Hidden Treasures Underwater. Hardly had Katherine taken her advice when she stored/ placed/ put/ hid all the original items behind the filter box. The next moment, showing a comb to Maya , Katherine issued a request,” Maya, please fetch a comb!”. Miraculously, the strategy worked ! Katherine and Hilda were both over the moon(=very happy) when Maya surfaced with a comb in her mouth. It didn’t take a long time before Maya turned into a star in the sea life park with her marvelous performance!
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢 ②时间先后
时间快 短语：
1.go fast/quickly 2. Time was ticking away (时间)一分一秒地过去
3. for/in an instant; in a spilt second; in a flash; in the blink of an eye; in a twinkling 刹那间 all of a sudden 突然; 4.Without (the slightest) hesitation; 5.in a flurry匆忙地；慌乱地
副词：
1.immediately/instantly /promptly立刻；马上 2.shortly /soon 不久，马上;
3. shortly after/before…在…之后/之前不久； 4.abruptly/suddenly突然
句型
1.on/upon (doing) sth 一做某事
2. before 还没来得及…就…，常见句式： Before sb knew what was happening, sth happened; Before sb realized/knew it, sth happened;
it didn’t take long before sth happened不久就…; sth happened before sb could do sth
3. 刚一…就… 句式 ：The moment/instant +句子； no sooner had sth happened…than sth happened ..; hardly/scarcely had …when…
Sentence-appreciation
◆Before I realized/knew it , my surfing days were over.
◆In a split second , thunder roared and lightning flashed and it began pouring. 霎时, 雷电交加,大雨倾盆。
◆ Before I could finish my sentence, she burst into tears and began rocking back and forth.
◆ It didn’t take long before he recovered .
◆ The moment/instant he finished his speech in a magnetic voice, a storm of applause erupted from the audience.
◆No sooner had I been helped into my bathing-suit than I sprang out upon the warm sand and without thought of fear plunged into the cool water.刚换好游泳衣，我就冲向了温暖的沙滩，根本顾不得考虑海浪是大是小了。
学校举办运动会。同学们都很期待。运动会开始，第一项是跑步比赛。运动员们在起跑线准备，裁判（referee）鸣枪。运动员们冲出去，观众们欢呼。小明跑得很快，跑在前面。突然，他摔倒。大家很担心，有人跑过去帮忙。老师也赶紧过来，查看小明的情况。
The school held a sports meeting. The students were all looking forward to it. The sports meeting started, and the first event was the running race. The athletes were getting ready at the starting line, and then the referee fired the starting gun. The athletes rushed out, and the audience cheered. Xiaoming ran very fast and was in the front. Suddenly, he fell down. Everyone was very worried, and some people ran over to help. The teacher also came over quickly to check on Xiaoming's condition.
原始段落（添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇）
Upon hearing the news that the school would held a sports meeting, the students were all eagerly looking forward to it. Once it kicked off, the first event was the thrilling running race. No sooner had the athletes taken their positions at the starting line than the referee fired the starting gun. In a split second/ in a twinkling, the athletes dashed out like arrows .The audience burst into enthusiastic cheers right away. Initially, Xiaoming ran extremely fast and took the lead. But before anyone could react, he suddenly fell down. At the sight of this/Seeing this , everyone was extremely worried. Wasting no time/ Without hesitation, several classmates immediately rushed over to help. At the same time/in the meanwhile, the teacher also came over to check on Xiaoming's condition the moment/instant she heard the commotion.
修改后段落（运用快速时间衔接词描写激动场景）
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢 ②时间先后
时间慢 go slowly; drag on; Time dragged ; 很慢；日长似岁
Time was ticking away.时间一分一秒的过去
after what seems an age/ a century 似乎过了一年、一个世纪
It seemed like hours/days/weeks before...：“似乎过了好几个小时 / 好几天 / 好几个星期才……”
◆ The rest of the day went very slowly for Anne.
◆ Why do physics lessons always seem to drag
◆ The weary time dragged on; they slept again, and awoke hungry and desperate.
◆He had to watch the minutes tick away while the emergency services tried to locate him.
Sentence-appreciation
考试结束了，学生们都很紧张，想知道成绩。大家在教室里等着，心里很不安。老师终于来了，拿着成绩单。同学们都围上去看自己的成绩。
The exam was over. The students were very nervous and eager to know their scores. They waited in the classroom, feeling restless. Finally, the teacher came in, holding the report cards. The students gathered around to check their scores.
原始段落（添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇） ）
考试结束了，学生们都紧张得不行，满心急切地想知道成绩。在教室里等待的每一分每一秒，都仿佛被无限拉长（After what seemed like a century）。随着时间一分一秒地过去（With time ticking by），大家的心里愈发不安。似乎过了好几个小时（It seemed like hours before），老师才终于慢悠悠地走进来，手里拿着成绩单。既不安由满心期待，同学们立即围上去（promptly），查看自己的成绩。
Shortly after the exam was over, the students were extremely nervous, burning with eagerness to know their scores. After what seemed like a century, they waited in the classroom, and with time ticking by, their restlessness grew. It seemed like hours/weeks/days before the teacher finally came in slowly, holding the report cards. Overwhelmed with a mixed feeling of unease and anticipation/expectation, the students promptly /immediately gathered around to check their scores.
修改后段落（运用时间慢的衔接词）
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢 ②时间先后
紧接着/后来 句型：
1. the following weeks/days…witnessed/saw sth happening 接下来的时间，见证了某事得发生。
2. that’s when sth happened.
3. Everything settling down/everything ready, 主句。一切完成/就绪后，….
4. It 句型：it was /took +时间 before sb did sth 过了一段时间，某人开始做某事
短语：
the next minute; followed by; with that; before doing ; subsequent to that; after that; then following …；After a while；In the meanwhile, 在此期间；与此同时=in the meantime； After a moment of hesitation迟疑片刻; From then on从那时起
副词：
Initially首先；起初；subsequently随后; then; afterwards; later; shortly afterwards；ultimately/eventually最后；Slowly but surely“缓慢但稳步地”
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢②时间先后
恰好；不料；
just in time to find/see/meet… 恰好发现、看到…
…only to find/see …结果却
Just as /when sb did…., 主句
◆ The last five minutes saw his dashing to the finish line like wind.
◆ The following weeks saw me dashing home from school each day determined to earn a nickel or dime.
◆Everything ready, the news page was eventually in business.
◆I opened the door just in time to find him watching TV.
◆ In the meanwhile, Brad and his wife jumped into their car and followed close behind.
◆ Shortly afterwards, the medical team came to the site.
◆Slowly but surely, he found himself progressing steadily.
Sentence-appreciation
Think and polish with beautiful expressions and coherent sentence structures.添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇）
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile .Katherine was still confused , scratching her head. Hilda looked at Maya and introduced Maya’s secret . “That’s amazing !” she shouted , obviously believing my words. Hilda reset her scuba gear, jumped into the tank and waved her hand to call Katherine down. Katherine smiled, putting on the scuba gear and leaping into the water. They swam to where the filter box lay. Katherine saw it . She gasped and stared at the adorable dolphin Maya.
Think and polish with beautiful expressions and coherent sentence structures.添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇）
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile .With a mixed feeling of suspicion and confusion, Katherine shifted her gaze to Maya who was feasting on her treat with relish津津有味地；享受地. In the meanwhile Hilda explained what she had observed these days . Upon hearing the story of mischievous淘气的 Maya , Katherine exclaimed, “That’s incredible !”, obviously amazed by Maya’s clever trick. The next minute saw Hilda picking up her scuba gear, diving into the tank and gesturing to Katherine to follow her. Without the slightest hesitation , Katherine promptly leapt into the tank . Shortly afterwards,They swam to where the filter box lay. The instant Katherine witnessed all the items hidden behind the box , she gasped with her eyes wide open.
读后续写转场技巧2
空间转场
空间转场：
What sb. saw/heard/knew next was...
What greeted sb. was... what 引导主语从句，强调进入新场景的第一印象。
A closer look explained everything. 强调细节揭示。
With a closer look, sb. did sth.with 短语作状语，后接人物动作。
Once home/inside/outside, sb. did sth.once 引导省略式时间状语从句，空间转换。
On one's way (back) to/back sp., sb. did sth.
As sb. moved from...to..., ...as 引导时间状语从句，描述空间移动过程。
Sb make one’s way/tiptoe/creep/slip/slide…+ out of/through/down/up/ onto …方向移动转换空间
gesture/signal sb to to 打手势让某人做
At the sight of…一看到… shift one’s gaze from…to… 视觉转换
Following the sound/light/smell of..., ...通过感官进行转换。
Entering..., sb. found oneself in...现在分词短语作时间状语，主句描述新空间状态。
放学铃一响，我踏出教室（ outside the classroom）。沿着熟悉的街道走，街角新开的面包店飘来的香味吸引了我（Following the smell of freshly baked bread from the new bakery on the corner）。走近一看（With a closer look），橱窗里的牛角包金黄酥脆。继续往家走（On my way back home），社区花园里的樱花树正在盛开，花瓣飘落在小径上。
推开家门（Once home），迎接我的是（What greeted me was）妈妈在厨房忙碌的身影和饭菜的香气。走进房间（Entering my room），我发现书桌上放着一张社区活动传单。仔细一看（A closer look explained everything），周末将举办烘焙工作坊，就在街角的新面包店。我立刻跑回厨房，跟妈妈分享这个发现。
No sooner had the school bell rung than I stepped outside the classroom. Following the smell of freshly baked bread, I walked along the familiar street and arrived at a newly opened bakery on the corner. With a closer look, the croissants in the window were golden and crispy. On my way back home, cherry blossoms from the community garden were in full bloom, their petals falling on the path.
Once home, what greeted me was the sight of Mom busy in the kitchen and the aroma of food. Entering my room, I found a flyer for a community event on my desk. A closer look explained everything: there would be a baking workshop on the weekend at the new bakery around the corner. I immediately ran back to the kitchen to share the news with Mom.
空间转场（融入句型，增强画面感）
三、意识流动顺序：思维活动推动故事发展
（突然）想到了什么 1.“….”he thought (to oneself).
2. Thoughts/mind raced 大脑极速转动
3. The thought of ….+ make sb…/bring…
4. occur to; cross one’s mind; strike/hit sb; sth come/flash/pop into one‘s mind;突然想到…
5. at the thought/image of… 一想到
6. Not until时间状语+did sb. realize/notice that从句
强调句：It was not until时间状语+that sb. realized that从句
“直到…才明白/意识到…”
大脑里的声音 the inner voice told sb to do
2.Just at my wit’s end ,sb’s words rang /echoed in my ears…
三、意识流动顺序：思维活动推动故事发展
想象什么 picture/imagine vt.想象（常做非谓语）
2. Never in sb’s wildest dream did sb expect …
情节的转折 I was on the verge of despair/collapse(崩溃）when sth happened .
I was about to give up when sth happened
正要绝望/崩溃/放弃的时候，这时突然…
2. To one’s surprise (delight)/Strangely enough/ it turned out that从句奇怪的是…
3. …, but in vain 4. …, but without success投劳
6. But on second thoughts, … 但是转而一想，……
7. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
Consolidation: fill in the blanks
1.奇怪的念头在他脑子里转动。
Strange thoughts________ around in his mind.
2. 那寒冷黑暗的大海，他想想都吓得发抖。
He trembled ____ the thought of the cold, dark sea.
3. 她脑子里有个小小的警钟响了。
A tiny alarm bell began to _______ in her brain.
4. 我试着想象我们像第一次诊断时那样努力与病魔作战。
I try to_____________ us fighting just as hard as we had during the diagnosis.
raced
at
ring
picture/imagine
四、场景的氛围：其他人群的反应
人群的反应 A murmur of （approval…） came from the crowd.
…be greeted with cries of…
3. …produced /caused an awkward silence.
4. …found an echo in her own feelings. 引起了她的共鸣。
5. …struck a chord with his audience. 引起了听众的共鸣
6. A thunderous applause burst out from the audience.
一片 寂静 1.There was a moment of complete silence.
2. Silence falls/descends (on/upon sth)
3. …be met with silence/ …be followed by a very long silence, broken by…
Plotting and predicting
Para.1 As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. “This is where I belong. I am the winner.” His eyes were fixed on the finish line. Suddenly, two figures whizzed past, which startled him . Fearing to fall behind, he struggled to catch up but in vain. “Do my luck desert me ” he thought in doubt . That was when his hard training in his father’s company occurred to him. He collected himself quickly. The last five minutes saw his dashing to the finish line like wind, followed by the announcement of the result.
时间顺序
意识流动顺序：思维活动推动故事情节发展
时间顺序：紧接着、后来
Plotting and predicting
Para2. His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too. However, deep down, he knew he deserved the honor of championship. His parents came up and gave him a high five, grinning from ear to ear. “Hey, why not try your favorite ice cream and celebrate!” said his father, patting him on the shoulder. “Thanks, dad, but I have given up the ice cream. It’s not such a lucky charm at all.” His eyes shone with wisdom. It was on that day that Mike realized one’s lucky charm was nothing but his diligence.
场景的氛围：喝彩鼓掌欢呼等
意识流动顺序：内心想法
Each October, I strongly requested my parents to take us to a pumpkin (南瓜) field to choose pumpkins, but it never happened. I was extremely astonished when my father came home with the most incredible news about a pumpkin lantern carving party at the Pumpkin Field, which was just a short distance away.
I shouted out in disbelief, and my younger brother, Tex, shouted the pumpkin lantern carving party repeatedly with excitement. However, my father mentioned a rumor about something awful and unexpected happening there, sounding concerned. Regardless of it, Tex and I quickly leaped into the car and fastened our seat belts, eager to leave for the Pumpkin Field. On the way, Tex announced with delight that he would choose the biggest pumpkin, while I remarked with confidence that “greatest” wasn’t a real word and that I would choose the coolest one. Tex yelled that he would choose the one to make the most frightening pumpkin lantern. My dad cut in, cautioning us about too much enthusiasm and suggested having a Plan B if Plan A didn’t work out.
No reply! Tex and I kept up our excitement, laughing and talking. The journey was especially awesome as we witnessed all sorts of Halloween decorations along the route. Tex informed me that we were driving near our destination, pointing to sparkling orange lights and a blinking Pumpkin Field sign. “Yeah! Yes! It wasn’t a long drive,” I said. “Be careful, pumpkins! Here we come!”
Appearing before us were pumpkins of all sizes scattered throughout the field. We arrived there thrilled and desperate to find pumpkins of all sizes. Tex declared he would choose an enormous one, but upon approaching, to his disappointment, he noticed a hole in it when he found one. He then hurried to another perfect pumpkin, only sad to find someone had taken a bite out of it.
That’s when I noticed the Pumpkin Field Closed sign.
Finally, we agreed to hold our own pumpkin lantern carving party the next day.
实战
That’s when I noticed the Pumpkin Field Closed sign. Heavy disappointment coiled around me, rooting my feet to the ground. Before Tex could whimper, his face crumpled, tears welling. “But we drove so far!” he stammered, voice trembling. I looked at Dad, whose gaze softened—then he smiled. “Plan B, remember ” No sooner had the words left his mouth than Tex’s tears vanished, replaced by excitement. “Plan B!” he shrieked, yanking Dad’s hand. “We’ll make jack-o’-lanterns at home!”
Finally, we agreed to hold our own pumpkin lantern carving party the next day. That evening, once inside, Mom had set out carving tools and stickers. “Coolest face first!” I said, handing Tex a marker. He frowned. “Scariest—three eyes and fangs!” He scribbled a jagged mouth, making us laugh. Without hesitation, Dad sliced open pumpkins, and we scooped out pulp, seeds popping into a bowl. When the first lantern glowed, its light lit up Tex’s pumpkin-speckled nose and our messy but happy living room “wonderland.” What greeted us most warmly wasn’t the candlelight, but Mom’s cinnamon-roasted seeds—their aroma mixing with laughter, turning a disappointing night into a warmer memory.
下水作文
That’s when I noticed the Pumpkin Field Closed sign. A wave of disappointment washed over me, as I was glued to the land, a bit lost and heartbroken, Tex, froze for a moment before his face twisted in confusion. “But...but we came all this way!” he stammered, his voice breaking. I glanced at my dad, whose eyes softened with sympathy. “It’s okay, Tex,” I said, ruffling his hair and trying to sound uplifting. “Let’s not give up so soon. Maybe we can come up with something even better!” Dad’s eyes lit up, and he whispered, “Plan B ” Tex’s excitement returned instantly as he shouted, “Plan B!”
Finally, we agreed to hold our own pumpkin lantern carving party the next day. That evening, we brainstormed ideas at the dinner table, sketching designs on paper and laughing at Tex’s designed ridiculous pumpkin faces with three eyes! I giggled. “And this one’s wearing a hat!” Tex cut in, his earlier disappointment now completely forgotten. Later, Dad helped us carve the pumpkins we had bought on our way home. Finally, we turned our living room into a pumpkin wonderland. As we presented the glowing pumpkin lanterns with satisfaction, a warm sense of pride filled me. Looking at our creations, I realized that setbacks can lead to even greater fun when you have family by your side.
参考范文
读后续写转场技巧 1
时间转场
About coherence and logic:
记叙体的顺序性：结构紧凑；一气呵成
意识流动顺序
时间顺序
空间顺序
场景的氛围
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. As Katherine took over the wet items from Hilda, Katherine sincerely apologized to Hilda for her misunderstanding and carelessness. Hilda’s eyes sparkling with thrill mingled（=mixed）with delight, she proposed to Katherine that they could design a unique dolphin show to attract visitors--- Seeking Hidden Treasures Underwater. Hardly had Katherine taken her advice when she stored/ placed/ put/ hid all the original items behind the filter box. The next moment, showing a comb to Maya , Katherine issued a request,” Maya, please fetch a comb!”. Miraculously, the strategy worked ! Katherine and Hilda were both over the moon(=very happy) when Maya surfaced with a comb in her mouth. It didn’t take a long time before Maya turned into a star in the sea life park with her marvelous performance!
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢 ②时间先后
时间快 短语：
1.go fast/quickly 2. Time was ticking away (时间)一分一秒地过去
3. for/in an instant; in a spilt second; in a flash; in the blink of an eye; in a twinkling 刹那间 all of a sudden 突然; 4.Without (the slightest) hesitation; 5.in a flurry匆忙地；慌乱地
副词：
1.immediately/instantly /promptly立刻；马上 2.shortly /soon 不久，马上;
3. shortly after/before…在…之后/之前不久； 4.abruptly/suddenly突然
句型
1.on/upon (doing) sth 一做某事
2. before 还没来得及…就…，常见句式： Before sb knew what was happening, sth happened; Before sb realized/knew it, sth happened;
it didn’t take long before sth happened不久就…; sth happened before sb could do sth
3. 刚一…就… 句式 ：The moment/instant +句子； no sooner had sth happened…than sth happened ..; hardly/scarcely had …when…
Sentence-appreciation
◆Before I realized/knew it , my surfing days were over.
◆In a split second , thunder roared and lightning flashed and it began pouring. 霎时, 雷电交加,大雨倾盆。
◆ Before I could finish my sentence, she burst into tears and began rocking back and forth.
◆ It didn’t take long before he recovered .
◆ The moment/instant he finished his speech in a magnetic voice, a storm of applause erupted from the audience.
◆No sooner had I been helped into my bathing-suit than I sprang out upon the warm sand and without thought of fear plunged into the cool water.刚换好游泳衣，我就冲向了温暖的沙滩，根本顾不得考虑海浪是大是小了。
学校举办运动会。同学们都很期待。运动会开始，第一项是跑步比赛。运动员们在起跑线准备，裁判（referee）鸣枪。运动员们冲出去，观众们欢呼。小明跑得很快，跑在前面。突然，他摔倒。大家很担心，有人跑过去帮忙。老师也赶紧过来，查看小明的情况。
The school held a sports meeting. The students were all looking forward to it. The sports meeting started, and the first event was the running race. The athletes were getting ready at the starting line, and then the referee fired the starting gun. The athletes rushed out, and the audience cheered. Xiaoming ran very fast and was in the front. Suddenly, he fell down. Everyone was very worried, and some people ran over to help. The teacher also came over quickly to check on Xiaoming's condition.
原始段落（添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇）
Upon hearing the news that the school would held a sports meeting, the students were all eagerly looking forward to it. Once it kicked off, the first event was the thrilling running race. No sooner had the athletes taken their positions at the starting line than the referee fired the starting gun. In a split second/ in a twinkling, the athletes dashed out like arrows .The audience burst into enthusiastic cheers right away. Initially, Xiaoming ran extremely fast and took the lead. But before anyone could react, he suddenly fell down. At the sight of this/Seeing this , everyone was extremely worried. Wasting no time/ Without hesitation, several classmates immediately rushed over to help. At the same time/in the meanwhile, the teacher also came over to check on Xiaoming's condition the moment/instant she heard the commotion.
修改后段落（运用快速时间衔接词描写激动场景）
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢 ②时间先后
时间慢 go slowly; drag on; Time dragged ; 很慢；日长似岁
Time was ticking away.时间一分一秒的过去
after what seems an age/ a century 似乎过了一年、一个世纪
It seemed like hours/days/weeks before...：“似乎过了好几个小时 / 好几天 / 好几个星期才……”
◆ The rest of the day went very slowly for Anne.
◆ Why do physics lessons always seem to drag
◆ The weary time dragged on; they slept again, and awoke hungry and desperate.
◆He had to watch the minutes tick away while the emergency services tried to locate him.
Sentence-appreciation
考试结束了，学生们都很紧张，想知道成绩。大家在教室里等着，心里很不安。老师终于来了，拿着成绩单。同学们都围上去看自己的成绩。
The exam was over. The students were very nervous and eager to know their scores. They waited in the classroom, feeling restless. Finally, the teacher came in, holding the report cards. The students gathered around to check their scores.
原始段落（添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇） ）
考试结束了，学生们都紧张得不行，满心急切地想知道成绩。在教室里等待的每一分每一秒，都仿佛被无限拉长（After what seemed like a century）。随着时间一分一秒地过去（With time ticking by），大家的心里愈发不安。似乎过了好几个小时（It seemed like hours before），老师才终于慢悠悠地走进来，手里拿着成绩单。既不安由满心期待，同学们立即围上去（promptly），查看自己的成绩。
Shortly after the exam was over, the students were extremely nervous, burning with eagerness to know their scores. After what seemed like a century, they waited in the classroom, and with time ticking by, their restlessness grew. It seemed like hours/weeks/days before the teacher finally came in slowly, holding the report cards. Overwhelmed with a mixed feeling of unease and anticipation/expectation, the students promptly /immediately gathered around to check their scores.
修改后段落（运用时间慢的衔接词）
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢 ②时间先后
紧接着/后来 句型：
1. the following weeks/days…witnessed/saw sth happening 接下来的时间，见证了某事得发生。
2. that’s when sth happened.
3. Everything settling down/everything ready, 主句。一切完成/就绪后，….
4. It 句型：it was /took +时间 before sb did sth 过了一段时间，某人开始做某事
短语：
the next minute; followed by; with that; before doing ; subsequent to that; after that; then following …；After a while；In the meanwhile, 在此期间；与此同时=in the meantime； After a moment of hesitation迟疑片刻; From then on从那时起
副词：
Initially首先；起初；subsequently随后; then; afterwards; later; shortly afterwards；ultimately/eventually最后；Slowly but surely“缓慢但稳步地”
一、时间顺序：① 时间快慢②时间先后
恰好；不料；
just in time to find/see/meet… 恰好发现、看到…
…only to find/see …结果却
Just as /when sb did…., 主句
◆ The last five minutes saw his dashing to the finish line like wind.
◆ The following weeks saw me dashing home from school each day determined to earn a nickel or dime.
◆Everything ready, the news page was eventually in business.
◆I opened the door just in time to find him watching TV.
◆ In the meanwhile, Brad and his wife jumped into their car and followed close behind.
◆ Shortly afterwards, the medical team came to the site.
◆Slowly but surely, he found himself progressing steadily.
Sentence-appreciation
Think and polish with beautiful expressions and coherent sentence structures.添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇）
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile .Katherine was still confused , scratching her head. Hilda looked at Maya and introduced Maya’s secret . “That’s amazing !” she shouted , obviously believing my words. Hilda reset her scuba gear, jumped into the tank and waved her hand to call Katherine down. Katherine smiled, putting on the scuba gear and leaping into the water. They swam to where the filter box lay. Katherine saw it . She gasped and stared at the adorable dolphin Maya.
Think and polish with beautiful expressions and coherent sentence structures.添加衔接词和副词等，高级词汇替换低级词汇）
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile .With a mixed feeling of suspicion and confusion, Katherine shifted her gaze to Maya who was feasting on her treat with relish津津有味地；享受地. In the meanwhile Hilda explained what she had observed these days . Upon hearing the story of mischievous淘气的 Maya , Katherine exclaimed, “That’s incredible !”, obviously amazed by Maya’s clever trick. The next minute saw Hilda picking up her scuba gear, diving into the tank and gesturing to Katherine to follow her. Without the slightest hesitation , Katherine promptly leapt into the tank . Shortly afterwards,They swam to where the filter box lay. The instant Katherine witnessed all the items hidden behind the box , she gasped with her eyes wide open.
读后续写转场技巧2
空间转场
空间转场：
What sb. saw/heard/knew next was...
What greeted sb. was... what 引导主语从句，强调进入新场景的第一印象。
A closer look explained everything. 强调细节揭示。
With a closer look, sb. did sth.with 短语作状语，后接人物动作。
Once home/inside/outside, sb. did sth.once 引导省略式时间状语从句，空间转换。
On one's way (back) to/back sp., sb. did sth.
As sb. moved from...to..., ...as 引导时间状语从句，描述空间移动过程。
Sb make one’s way/tiptoe/creep/slip/slide…+ out of/through/down/up/ onto …方向移动转换空间
gesture/signal sb to to 打手势让某人做
At the sight of…一看到… shift one’s gaze from…to… 视觉转换
Following the sound/light/smell of..., ...通过感官进行转换。
Entering..., sb. found oneself in...现在分词短语作时间状语，主句描述新空间状态。
放学铃一响，我踏出教室（ outside the classroom）。沿着熟悉的街道走，街角新开的面包店飘来的香味吸引了我（Following the smell of freshly baked bread from the new bakery on the corner）。走近一看（With a closer look），橱窗里的牛角包金黄酥脆。继续往家走（On my way back home），社区花园里的樱花树正在盛开，花瓣飘落在小径上。
推开家门（Once home），迎接我的是（What greeted me was）妈妈在厨房忙碌的身影和饭菜的香气。走进房间（Entering my room），我发现书桌上放着一张社区活动传单。仔细一看（A closer look explained everything），周末将举办烘焙工作坊，就在街角的新面包店。我立刻跑回厨房，跟妈妈分享这个发现。
No sooner had the school bell rung than I stepped outside the classroom. Following the smell of freshly baked bread, I walked along the familiar street and arrived at a newly opened bakery on the corner. With a closer look, the croissants in the window were golden and crispy. On my way back home, cherry blossoms from the community garden were in full bloom, their petals falling on the path.
Once home, what greeted me was the sight of Mom busy in the kitchen and the aroma of food. Entering my room, I found a flyer for a community event on my desk. A closer look explained everything: there would be a baking workshop on the weekend at the new bakery around the corner. I immediately ran back to the kitchen to share the news with Mom.
空间转场（融入句型，增强画面感）
三、意识流动顺序：思维活动推动故事发展
（突然）想到了什么 1.“….”he thought (to oneself).
2. Thoughts/mind raced 大脑极速转动
3. The thought of ….+ make sb…/bring…
4. occur to; cross one’s mind; strike/hit sb; sth come/flash/pop into one‘s mind;突然想到…
5. at the thought/image of… 一想到
6. Not until时间状语+did sb. realize/notice that从句
强调句：It was not until时间状语+that sb. realized that从句
“直到…才明白/意识到…”
大脑里的声音 the inner voice told sb to do
2.Just at my wit’s end ,sb’s words rang /echoed in my ears…
三、意识流动顺序：思维活动推动故事发展
想象什么 picture/imagine vt.想象（常做非谓语）
2. Never in sb’s wildest dream did sb expect …
情节的转折 I was on the verge of despair/collapse(崩溃）when sth happened .
I was about to give up when sth happened
正要绝望/崩溃/放弃的时候，这时突然…
2. To one’s surprise (delight)/Strangely enough/ it turned out that从句奇怪的是…
3. …, but in vain 4. …, but without success投劳
6. But on second thoughts, … 但是转而一想，……
7. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
Consolidation: fill in the blanks
1.奇怪的念头在他脑子里转动。
Strange thoughts________ around in his mind.
2. 那寒冷黑暗的大海，他想想都吓得发抖。
He trembled ____ the thought of the cold, dark sea.
3. 她脑子里有个小小的警钟响了。
A tiny alarm bell began to _______ in her brain.
4. 我试着想象我们像第一次诊断时那样努力与病魔作战。
I try to_____________ us fighting just as hard as we had during the diagnosis.
raced
at
ring
picture/imagine
四、场景的氛围：其他人群的反应
人群的反应 A murmur of （approval…） came from the crowd.
…be greeted with cries of…
3. …produced /caused an awkward silence.
4. …found an echo in her own feelings. 引起了她的共鸣。
5. …struck a chord with his audience. 引起了听众的共鸣
6. A thunderous applause burst out from the audience.
一片 寂静 1.There was a moment of complete silence.
2. Silence falls/descends (on/upon sth)
3. …be met with silence/ …be followed by a very long silence, broken by…
Plotting and predicting
Para.1 As he dove into the water, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as far as he could. “This is where I belong. I am the winner.” His eyes were fixed on the finish line. Suddenly, two figures whizzed past, which startled him . Fearing to fall behind, he struggled to catch up but in vain. “Do my luck desert me ” he thought in doubt . That was when his hard training in his father’s company occurred to him. He collected himself quickly. The last five minutes saw his dashing to the finish line like wind, followed by the announcement of the result.
时间顺序
意识流动顺序：思维活动推动故事情节发展
时间顺序：紧接着、后来
Plotting and predicting
Para2. His jaw dropped as he realized he had beaten his own best time, and everyone else too. However, deep down, he knew he deserved the honor of championship. His parents came up and gave him a high five, grinning from ear to ear. “Hey, why not try your favorite ice cream and celebrate!” said his father, patting him on the shoulder. “Thanks, dad, but I have given up the ice cream. It’s not such a lucky charm at all.” His eyes shone with wisdom. It was on that day that Mike realized one’s lucky charm was nothing but his diligence.
场景的氛围：喝彩鼓掌欢呼等
意识流动顺序：内心想法
Each October, I strongly requested my parents to take us to a pumpkin (南瓜) field to choose pumpkins, but it never happened. I was extremely astonished when my father came home with the most incredible news about a pumpkin lantern carving party at the Pumpkin Field, which was just a short distance away.
I shouted out in disbelief, and my younger brother, Tex, shouted the pumpkin lantern carving party repeatedly with excitement. However, my father mentioned a rumor about something awful and unexpected happening there, sounding concerned. Regardless of it, Tex and I quickly leaped into the car and fastened our seat belts, eager to leave for the Pumpkin Field. On the way, Tex announced with delight that he would choose the biggest pumpkin, while I remarked with confidence that “greatest” wasn’t a real word and that I would choose the coolest one. Tex yelled that he would choose the one to make the most frightening pumpkin lantern. My dad cut in, cautioning us about too much enthusiasm and suggested having a Plan B if Plan A didn’t work out.
No reply! Tex and I kept up our excitement, laughing and talking. The journey was especially awesome as we witnessed all sorts of Halloween decorations along the route. Tex informed me that we were driving near our destination, pointing to sparkling orange lights and a blinking Pumpkin Field sign. “Yeah! Yes! It wasn’t a long drive,” I said. “Be careful, pumpkins! Here we come!”
Appearing before us were pumpkins of all sizes scattered throughout the field. We arrived there thrilled and desperate to find pumpkins of all sizes. Tex declared he would choose an enormous one, but upon approaching, to his disappointment, he noticed a hole in it when he found one. He then hurried to another perfect pumpkin, only sad to find someone had taken a bite out of it.
That’s when I noticed the Pumpkin Field Closed sign.
Finally, we agreed to hold our own pumpkin lantern carving party the next day.
实战
That’s when I noticed the Pumpkin Field Closed sign. Heavy disappointment coiled around me, rooting my feet to the ground. Before Tex could whimper, his face crumpled, tears welling. “But we drove so far!” he stammered, voice trembling. I looked at Dad, whose gaze softened—then he smiled. “Plan B, remember ” No sooner had the words left his mouth than Tex’s tears vanished, replaced by excitement. “Plan B!” he shrieked, yanking Dad’s hand. “We’ll make jack-o’-lanterns at home!”
Finally, we agreed to hold our own pumpkin lantern carving party the next day. That evening, once inside, Mom had set out carving tools and stickers. “Coolest face first!” I said, handing Tex a marker. He frowned. “Scariest—three eyes and fangs!” He scribbled a jagged mouth, making us laugh. Without hesitation, Dad sliced open pumpkins, and we scooped out pulp, seeds popping into a bowl. When the first lantern glowed, its light lit up Tex’s pumpkin-speckled nose and our messy but happy living room “wonderland.” What greeted us most warmly wasn’t the candlelight, but Mom’s cinnamon-roasted seeds—their aroma mixing with laughter, turning a disappointing night into a warmer memory.
下水作文
That’s when I noticed the Pumpkin Field Closed sign. A wave of disappointment washed over me, as I was glued to the land, a bit lost and heartbroken, Tex, froze for a moment before his face twisted in confusion. “But...but we came all this way!” he stammered, his voice breaking. I glanced at my dad, whose eyes softened with sympathy. “It’s okay, Tex,” I said, ruffling his hair and trying to sound uplifting. “Let’s not give up so soon. Maybe we can come up with something even better!” Dad’s eyes lit up, and he whispered, “Plan B ” Tex’s excitement returned instantly as he shouted, “Plan B!”
Finally, we agreed to hold our own pumpkin lantern carving party the next day. That evening, we brainstormed ideas at the dinner table, sketching designs on paper and laughing at Tex’s designed ridiculous pumpkin faces with three eyes! I giggled. “And this one’s wearing a hat!” Tex cut in, his earlier disappointment now completely forgotten. Later, Dad helped us carve the pumpkins we had bought on our way home. Finally, we turned our living room into a pumpkin wonderland. As we presented the glowing pumpkin lanterns with satisfaction, a warm sense of pride filled me. Looking at our creations, I realized that setbacks can lead to even greater fun when you have family by your side.
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