【单元考点培优】Module 6 Problems 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 6 Problems
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．独学而无友，则孤陋而寡闻。加入学习小组是解决“无友”和“寡闻”的重要手段。假如你和几位同学组成了英语学习小组，昨天你们讨论了如何提高英语阅读和写作能力。请你根据下面的笔记写一篇英文短文，总结你们的讨论结果，并在英语课上和大家分享。
How to improve English reading and writing abilities ★read often ★ join a reading club ★keep a diary ★write passages and ask the teacher to mark them
要求：
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.不少于100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to improve English reading and writing abilities
Yesterday, our English study group talked about how to improve English reading and writing abilities. Here are the results of our discussion.
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2．Unlock Your Potential
AI tools like ChatGPT and DeepSeek are now essential study partners! Wondering how to use them wisely As students, how can we make the most of AI in our studies Let’s explore!
Please write a passage titled: Making AI work for your studies
The following aspects should be included:
1. What do you use AI tools for
2. What are the advantages of using AI tools
3. What is your advice on using AI tools
要求: 1. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字数不少于90词；
3. 文章中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
Making AI work for your studies
AI tools have become an important part of our studies lately. For example,
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3．近年来，合肥的发展令人瞩目。合肥的快速发展来自于每个人的努力奋斗。作为合肥的中学生，我们也应该尽一己之力。假如你是班长，请写一篇演讲稿，号召大家用实际行动表达对家乡的爱。包括以下要点：
爱合肥的原因 美丽宜居 (自然环境、公共设施)
表达爱合肥的方式 (1) 参与志愿活动 (2) 践行垃圾分类 (3) 做好本职工作 (4) .......
发出倡议
参考词汇：公共设施：public facility 志愿活动：volunteer activity
要求：(1) 80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Good morning, boys and girls! Hefei is home to us all.
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4．时光飞逝，初三的学习生活已经过半，面对高强度的学习压力和即将来临的中考升学，有些同学感到焦虑，根据下面的提示和你周围同学的情况，请你用英语写一篇短文提供一些合理化的建议。
初三学习生活的变化 你对初三学习生活的看法和建议
1. 学科作业增多； 2. 没有时间休息； 3. 不能很好地发展自己的兴趣爱好； 4. 升学的压力让一些同学睡不好觉； …… 初三是我们成长的关键时期，经历了初三的学习生活能让我们更好面对未来的挑战，建议同学们要： 1. 合理地安排学习生活； 2. 适当的体育运动和充足的睡眠； 3. 面对困难学会寻求帮助 ……
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Looking back on the past two years, many students find their school life has changed a lot.
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5．假如你是Henry，你的朋友Tom在学习英语方面遇到了困难，向你倾诉并寻求帮助。请你给他写一封信，根据他的困难，并结合你的个人经历给出建议，来告诉他你是如何学习英语的。100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Tom的困难 你的建议
听不懂他人讲话，内心非常焦急 尽可能多听多练，熟能生巧；不要怕犯错误，积极主动参与：做笔记并及时复习；加入英语俱乐部……
常犯语法错误，不敢开口讲英语
阅读速度很慢，且伴有发音错误
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty with English learning.
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6．下面是Kate在英语网站上发给网友们的求助帖。假如你是她的好朋友Peter，请你结合她的帖子内容，用英语给她回张帖子并提出你的建议。
要求：
1. 回帖内容要紧紧围绕求助帖，可适当发挥，但必须健康向上；
2. 意思通顺，语气连贯，过渡自然；
3. 80词以上。
Dear friends,
I don’t feel well these days. I get lots of headaches because I have no time to exercise. My parents want me to get better grades, so they send me to many after-school classes, including the piano class. English class and Math class etc. Also, I had a fight with my best friend yesterday. He wanted to copy my homework, but I refused.
Is that normal What can I do Could you please give me some advice
Kate
Dear Kate,
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Peter
7．假定你是李华，你的学校英文报举行了一次以“Learn Well and Wisely”为题的征文比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
提示：
（1）Share some good learning methods（方法）。
（2）Express your ideas about learning methods.
注意：
（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Learn Well and Wisely
It’s important for us to have good ways to learn.
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8． 最近你校的“开心社团”开展了一个Tell Us活动，倾听同学们学习与生活中的烦恼并给予帮助。假定你是社团成员Jerry，你收到了Emily的一封倾诉信，请根据来信要点写一封回信，并给出建议。
问题 建议
家庭方面 父母经常出差，感到孤独。 和父母分享你的感受
学习方面 英语学习困难，不敢在同学面前发言 1. 多向老师求助，2. ……
人际方面 和好朋友吵架了 ……
参考词汇：出差on business
要求：
1. 文章80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
4. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear Emily,
I feel sorry to hear of your problems.
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Yours,
Jerry
9．假如你是李华，请阅读这封来自学校英语报的征稿通知，并根据通知内容给予回复。
Dear students, Studies say that many people in China are getting too heavy. By 2030, about 70.5 percent of grown-ups might become overweight, and nearly one in three kids might join them, too. Being overweight isn’t good for our health. So, we should do something to keep fit. What should we do to keep fit Why do you think that will work Please write a passage to share with us. We are looking forward to your reply.
注意：
1. 所写文章必须包含所涉及的问题，至少给出三种解决方式，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的个人信息；
3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read your notice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．你已经是一名九年级的学生，进入初三以来，你是否在学习和生活中遇到了新的困难与挑战，你是如何调整和解决的呢？请以“How I solve my problems”为题写一篇作文，内容包括：
1.谈谈自己进入初三以来遇到的困难与挑战。
2.如何解决这些困难？
3.对自己未来的展望。注意：
1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
How I Solve My Problems
How time flies! I have been a 9th grade student for a month.
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11．假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“How to live a healthy and happy life （如何过健康快乐的生活）”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点：①保持身体健康。
②少吃垃圾食品。
③加强与他人的沟通，注意心理健康。
④不要熬夜。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；（2）照抄试卷内容不得分。
Word bank：physical health身体健康 mental health心理健康
How to live a healthy and happy life
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12．青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
1.邮件内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合原意；
2.词数在100个左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．丰富多彩的课外活动可以减轻学习的压力，充实校园生活。同学们还可以在活动中强身健体，在合作中增进友谊。但是，一些学生认为参加课外活动会浪费时间，分散精力，特别是活动后容易感到疲劳，从而影响学习。
请你围绕九年级学生在复习备考期间该不该参加课外活动 (after-class activities) 这一话题谈谈你的看法。
要求：
一、请根据所提供的信息 (不要逐句的翻译) 写出英语短文。
二、词数80字以上。
三、不得使用真实姓名、地名和校名。
We Should Have After-class Activities
Students in our school live a happy school life because they can join different kinds of clubs to relax themselves after class.
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14．上周你班来了一位新同学David，他向大家解释了自己的情况，并且表达了他的梦想和烦恼。请你根据David的介绍写一篇100词左右的文章，并向David提出建议。
Information about David 性格特点 富有条理…… 勤奋刻苦……
喜好 篮球，梦想…… 最喜欢橙色，因为橙色……
David’s worries 作业多，和爱好有冲突……
考试成绩，压力大……
Your advice 合理安排时间…… ……
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.必须包括表格中所有信息，并适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
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15．校英语广播站开展了“Sharing Never ends”的活动，请九年级同学给学弟学妹（juniors）在校园生活方面提出暖心建议。以下是其中三位同学的建议及理由，请你根据以下信息写一篇短文，并给出自己的1~2条建议，说明理由。
understand and support each other to have true friends —Larry create an interest in what you learn to improve your study —Wei Fen exercise regularly to keep your body and mind healthy —Mary
注意：
（1）80—120词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）短文必须包括图片中所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等信息。
These days, students in Grade 9 are talking about suggestions for juniors. Here are some ideas from them. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业
伤害眼睛，不利健康
网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生
建议 适度使用智能手机
多花时间与家人、朋友交流
……
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones.
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17．良好的生活和学习习惯对我们每一个中学生来说都是十分重要的。假设你是李华，你的好友刘海对自己要求不严，在生活和学习上存在不少的不良习惯。请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语给他写一封信，向他提几条忠告。
提示：1. 不吃早餐上学，下午放学回家很晚；
2. 睡眠时间少，上课打瞌睡；
3. 贪恋看电视，作业拖拉，很迟才能做完。
要求：1. 信中须包括以上所有提示内容，语法正确，语言流畅，可适当增加细节；
2. 文中不要出现真实的姓名和学校名；
3. 词数90~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Liu Hai,
I saw you feeling sleepy again in class this morning.
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I hope what I said can help you!
Yours,
Li Hua
18．一名真正优秀的中学生不仅仅能在考试中取得高分，更应该身心健康，德智体美劳全面发展，能通过所学知识去发现问题并解决问题。请根据下面的内容提示以“How to be a Better Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作提示：
1. keep healthy; eat healthily…
2. learn to relax; often talk to your parents…
3. read more books; help do chores at home…
写作要求：
1. 所写内容必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a Better Student
Good habits lead to a better future. As teenagers, what should we do to develop good habits and be a better student Here is some advice.
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19．本周你班将举行一次班会，主题为“如何培养我们的独立性”。请根据提示写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的看法。
Ways Things we can do
begin with our own things clean our own rooms, ...
help with housework cook, ...
learn actively learn by ourselves, ...
think about things by ourselves ...
要求：
1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone!
Now our parents help us do too many things. That makes us depend on them too much. So it’s necessary for us
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I think if we keep on doing these, we’ll become more and more independent.
20．请你以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何面对学习或生活中出现的问题，减少压力并保持积极乐观的生活态度。
写作要点：1.存在哪些问题或压力？
2.减少压力，解决问题的方法，如：参加课外活动、多交朋友、听音乐、读书等。
要求：1.内容可适当发挥，以保证内容丰富与完整；
2.文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名；
3.词数80左右。
Less Pressure, Better Life
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Yesterday, our English study group talked about how to improve English reading and writing abilities. Here are the results of our discussion.
First of all, we think reading often is the key. Reading different kinds of English materials like stories, newspapers and magazines can help us get more vocabulary and understand sentence structures better. Also, joining a reading club is a great idea. We can share our reading experiences with others there and get different ideas, which will make reading more interesting.
When it comes to writing, keeping a diary every day is very useful. It allows us to practice using the words and sentence patterns we’ve learned. Moreover, we should write passages regularly and ask the teacher to mark them. The teacher’s advice can help us find our mistakes and improve our writing skills quickly.
In a word, we believe that by following these methods, we can improve our English reading and writing abilities step by step.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍提高英语阅读和写作能力的方法；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②join a reading club加入一个阅读俱乐部
③get different ideas收获不同的想法
④when it comes to涉及到
⑤keep a diary记日记
⑥step by step逐步地
[高分句型]
①We can share our reading experiences with others there and get different ideas, which will make reading more interesting.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②When it comes to writing, keeping a diary every day is very useful.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③It allows us to practice using the words and sentence patterns we’ve learned.（定语从句）
④In a word, we believe that by following these methods, we can improve our English reading and writing abilities step by step.（that引导的宾语从句）
2．例文
Making AI work for your studies
AI tools have become an important part of our studies lately. For example, I often use ChatGPT to help me with my English writing. When I finish a composition, I ask it to check grammar mistakes and give suggestions on how to improve the wording and structure. I also use DeepSeek to look up difficult knowledge points in math and physics. It can explain complex concepts in a simple and easy-to-understand way.
The advantages of using AI tools are obvious. First, they save a lot of time. Instead of spending hours searching for information in books, I can get answers quickly from AI. Second, they provide personalized help. AI can adjust the way of explanation according to my learning level, making it easier for me to understand. Finally, they can stimulate my thinking. When AI gives different solutions to a problem, it encourages me to think from multiple angles.
However, we should use AI tools wisely. My advice is that we shouldn’t rely on AI completely. For example, when doing homework, we should try to solve problems by ourselves first. Only when we really can’t figure it out should we turn to AI for help. Also, we need to check the information provided by AI carefully, because sometimes it may give wrong answers. What’s more, we should use AI to improve our abilities rather than just copy answers. In this way, AI can truly become a good helper in our studies.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示写作，可适当补充；写作中适当使用短语、句型和连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍用人工智能工具做什么；
第二步，说明使用AI工具有哪些优势；
第三步，提出对使用人工智能工具的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①look up查找
②according to根据
③instead of代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①When I finish a composition, I ask it to check grammar mistakes and give suggestions on how to improve the wording and structure. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②My advice is that we shouldn’t rely on AI completely. (that引导的表语从句)
3．One possible version
Good morning, boys and girls! Hefei is home to us all. With beautiful natural environments and convenient public facilities, it has become a good place to live in. So how can we make it better First of all, we can take part in different volunteer activities. For example, we may help students in poor areas by sending them books, pens, and so on. Second, we need to divide the rubbish in the proper way and share the knowledge with our family members. Third, as students, it’s our duty to work hard and always be ready to help others. Finally, we should travel in a green way so as to make the air in our city cleaner.
I hope all of us can take action together to make Hefei better and better!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍合肥并号召大家用实际行动表达对合肥的爱，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍爱合肥的原因；
第二步，表达爱合肥的方式；
第三步，发出倡议，号召大家用实际行动表达对合肥的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①be home to是……的所在地
②convenient public facilities便捷的公共设施
③be ready to do准备好做某事
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
I hope all of us can take action together to make Hefeibetter and better! (省略that的宾语从句)
4．例文
Looking back on the past two years, many students find their school life has changed a lot.
We have more homework and less time to rest. We can’t develop our hobbies and some students can’t sleep well because of the exam pressure.
Here is some advice for Grade 9 students. I think we should plan our time carefully. It is also a good idea to do sports every day and sleep for at least eight hours. When we meet problems, ask teachers, parents or friends for help.
Grade 9 is hard, but it makes us stronger. Let’s face it with a smile!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题；
第二步：介绍初三学习生活的变化；
第三步：介绍你对初三学习生活的看法和建议；
第四步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②do sports做运动
③at least至少
[高分句型]
①I think we should plan our time carefully. (宾语从句)
②When we meet problems, ask teachers, parents or friends for help. (when引导的时间状语从句)
5．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty with English learning. Don’t worry, many students face similar challenges. I used to struggle too, especially with listening. When I couldn’t understand others, I felt very anxious. My advice is to listen as much as possible-English songs, movies, or short stories. Practice makes perfect! Don’t be afraid of making grammar mistakes. I used to avoid speaking for the same reason, but trying to speak more, even with errors, really helped me improve. Remember, everyone makes mistakes when learning! For reading and pronunciation, I found reading aloud every day very useful. It builds speed and helps correct pronunciation. Taking notes on new words and reviewing them often is key too. Maybe joining an English club would give you more practice. Keep trying, Tom! You can do it!
Best wishes,
Henry
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对Tom在学习英语方面遇到的困难表示遗憾；
第二步，对Tom提出的困难根据自己的亲身经历给出详细的建议；
第三步，书写结语，提出鼓励。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②as much as possible尽可能多
③try to do sth尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①When I couldn’t understand others, I felt very anxious. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty with English learning. (that引导的宾语从句)
6．
例文
Dear Kate,
It’s not easy being your age, and it’s normal to have these feelings. Firstly, why don’t you talk about your feelings with your parents You’ve had so much pressure because of schoolwork. Working hard at school is very important, but you also need some free time to relax yourself. Try to communicate with your parents, and make them allow you to do things you like.
Secondly, why not sit down and communicate with your best friend You should explain that you don’t mind helping with his study. However, he shouldn’t copy your homework. I hope things will be better for you soon.
Peter
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主”；
③提示：回帖围绕解决Kate的两大困扰展开——因学业产生的压力及与朋友的抄作业矛盾，写作要点为针对这两个问题分别给出沟通建议，内容聚焦问题解决，逻辑清晰且重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先共情Kate的处境，点明她这个年纪有此类感受是正常的；
第二步，针对Kate的具体困扰给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②because of因为
③communicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
You’ve had so much pressure because of schoolwork.（because of）
7．例文
Learn Well and Wisely
It’s important for us to have good ways to learn.
First, making a study plan helps us use time well. Second, reviewing lessons after class can make knowledge stronger. Third, don’t be afraid to ask teachers or classmates questions when you don’t understand.
In my view, a good learning method isn’t the same for everyone. Everyone learns differently. The best way is the one that works for you. What’s more, we should do more reading in our spare time to broaden our horizons. And don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，分享一些好的方法；
第三步，表达你的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid to do sth害怕去做某事
②in my view在我看来
③what’s more更重要的是
④spare time业余时间
⑤broaden one’s horizons开阔眼界
⑥keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①Third, don’t be afraid to ask teachers or classmates questions when you don’t understand. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②The best way is the one that works for you. (that引导的定语从句)
8．例文：
Dear Emily,
I feel sorry to hear of your problems. In your letter, you said you were lonely and your parents were always on business. I suggest that you can find some time to sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, which will help you study with peace of mind.
To solve the problems of your English learning, you should ask your teachers for help. If you can’t understand what your teachers say in class, you should practice your oral English with your classmates. If you can’t speak in front of your classmates, you can also take part in some English corner activities after class.
I’m sorry to hear that you quarreled with your friend. But don’t worry, please remember communication is the most important. Find out the key to the problem and apologize to him. I’m sure he’ll forgive you soon.
Hope these suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Jerry
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，人称以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先叙述家庭方面的问题和建议；
第二步，再叙述学习方面的问题和建议；
第三步，最后叙述人际关系方面的问题和建议；
第四步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①on business出差
②take part in参加
③quarrel with与……争吵
[高分句型]
I suggest that you can find some time to sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, which will help you study with peace of mind.（suggest后为that引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语从句）
9．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read your notice. I’m writing to share my ideas about how to keep fit.
First, having a balanced diet helps us live a healthy life. So take in different kinds of food and fruits in your meal to keep a strong body.
Second, doing regular exercise like running is a good way to keep you energetic for the day. It is also a great idea to join others, which makes it easier for you to exercise regularly.
Third, it is helpful to have enough rest. It provides you with enough sleep, helps you reduce anxiety and prepares you for the next day.
Hope my ways are helpful to keep you healthy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题——分享关于保持健康的建议；
第二步，具体阐述三种保持健康的方法；
第三步，书写结语，希望自己的方法可以帮助保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
① keep fit保持健康
② take in摄入
③ provide sb with sth为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
① First, having a balanced diet helps us live a healthy life.（动名词作主语）
② It is also a great idea to join others, which makes it easier for you to exercise regularly.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．例文：
How I Solve My Problems
How time flies! I have been a 9th-grade student for a month. The life of Grade 9 brings me both challenges and opportunities.
The main difficulty I face is the increasing amount of homework and the pressure of exams. Sometimes I feel stressed and find it hard to focus. To solve these problems, I’ve started to make a study plan. I set small goals every day and try my best to achieve them. I also talk to my teachers and friends when I feel upset. Their advice and encouragement help me a lot.
In the future, I hope to stay positive and keep improving. I believe that with hard work and a good attitude, I can overcome any difficulty.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“自己进入初三以来遇到的困难与挑战”以及“自己解决这些困难的方法”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①start to do sth开始做某事
②make a study plan制定一个学习计划
③set small goals设立小目标
④every day每天
⑤try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事
⑥talk to sb和某人交谈
⑦In the future在未来
⑧hope to do sth希望做某事
[高分句型]
①The main difficulty I face is the increasing amount of homework and the pressure of exams. (省略that的定语从句)
②Sometimes I feel stressed and find it hard to focus. (it作形式宾语的固定句型)
③I also talk to my teachers and friends when I feel upset. (when引导的时间状语从句)
④I believe that with hard work and a good attitude, I can overcome any difficulty. (that引导的宾语从句)
11．例文：
How to live a healthy and happy life To live a healthy and happy life, we should first keep our physical health. We can do regular exercise like running or playing basketball. Then, we should eat less junk food and have more fruits and vegetables.
Also, mental health is important. We need to communicate more with others. When we have problems, talking to friends or family can help us feel better.
Moreover, we mustn’t stay up late. Enough sleep makes us energetic and ready for the next day. By following these tips, we can live a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，围绕保持身体健康展开，先指出要保持身体健康，接着说明可以通过规律运动、少吃垃圾食品、多吃果蔬来实现；
第二步，聚焦心理健康，强调其重要性，提出要多与他人沟通，遇到问题和亲友交流能让自己感觉更好；
第三步，强调不能熬夜，说明充足睡眠的好处，最后总结遵循这些建议就能过上健康快乐的生活。
[亮点词汇]
① do regular exercise 规律运动
② communicate more with others 与他人进行更多交流
③ makes us energetic 让我们充满活力
[高分句型]
① To live a healthy and happy life, we should first keep our physical health.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② When we have problems, talking to friends or family can help us feel better.（时间状语从句）
12．参考范文
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents Can you give me some advice
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题；
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议；
第三步，书写结尾，期待得到回信。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with sb.和某人争吵
②care about关心
③take painting lessons上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
②I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
13．例文
We Should Have After-class Activities Students in our school live a happy school life because they can join different kinds of clubs to relax themselves after class.
After-class activities are beneficial for Grade 9 students even during exam preparation. They can reduce study pressure and make campus life more colorful. Students can also build up their bodies and enhance friendships through cooperation in activities.
Some students worry that after-class activities waste time and distract their energy. They feel tired after activities, which may affect study. However, proper participation can actually improve learning efficiency. When we take part in activities, we can relax our minds and bodies, making us more focused when we study again. So Grade 9 students should participate in after-class activities appropriately.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕九年级学生在复习备考期间是否该参加课外活动展开论述，涵盖课外活动的益处、部分学生的担忧及合理参与的观点，需清晰呈现不同角度并给出结论。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以学校学生因能参加课外俱乐部而有快乐校园生活引出话题；
第二步，先阐述课外活动对备考的九年级学生的益处，包括减轻压力、丰富校园生活、强身健体和增进友谊，接着说明部分学生对课外活动影响学习的担忧，再指出适当参与能提高学习效率；
第三步，得出九年级学生应适当参加课外活动的结论。
[亮点词汇]
①beneficial有益的
②reduce减少
③distract分散
[高分句型]
①They feel tired after activities, which may affect study. (which引导非限定性定语从句)
②When we take part in activities, we can relax our minds and bodies, making us more focused when we study again. (when引导时间状语从句)
14．例文
Last week, a new classmate named David joined our class. He is an organized boy who always keeps his things in order. Also, he is hard-working and studies diligently every day. David loves playing basketball. His dream is to become a professional basketball player in the future. Orange is his favorite color because he thinks orange can bring him energy.
However, David has some worries. There is too much homework, which conflicts with his hobby. What’s more, he feels stressed about his exam results. I advise David to manage his time properly. He can finish his homework first and then spend some time on basketball. Also, he should relax before exams, like listening to music, so that he can feel less nervous.
I hope these suggestions can help David and he can enjoy both his study and hobby.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：介绍新同学David的情况，并就其烦恼提出建议，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍新同学David的情况，包括他的性格，喜好等，注意用词准确，行文流畅；
第二步，介绍David的烦恼，提出自己的建议，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，表达期待，希望能够帮助David。
[亮点词汇]
①in the future 在未来
②what’s more 此外
③conflicts with… 和……冲突
[高分句型]
①He is an organized boy who always keeps his things in order.（定语从句）
②Also, he should relax before exams, like listening to music, so that he can feel less nervous.（目的状语从句）
15．参考范文
These days, students in Grade 9 are talking about suggestions for juniors. Here are some ideas from them.
Larry believes that understanding and supporting each other is the key to having true friends. Wei Fen suggests creating an interest in what you learn to improve your studies. Mary emphasizes that you can exercise regularly to keep your body and mind healthy.
For my part, I would recommend making time for self-reflection and goal-setting. By understanding our strengths and weaknesses, we can plan our academic and personal growth more effectively. Additionally, I suggest engaging in extracurricular activities to broaden our horizons and develop new skills. These experiences can enhance our school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Larry、Wei Fen和Mary的建议；
第二步，给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①each other彼此
②make time for为……腾出时间
③broaden our horizons开阔视野
[高分句型]
Mary emphasizes that you can exercise regularly to keep your body and mind healthy.（宾语从句）
16．例文
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people.
Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life!
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害；
第二步，提出远离手机的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②as a result结果
③switch off关闭
[高分句型]
①As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②Switch them off when we study. (祈使句，when引导的时间状语从句)
17．例文
Dear Liu Hai,
I saw you feeling sleepy again in class this morning. I’ve told you many times that you should have a good habit in your life, but you haven’t managed yourself well. Every day you come to school without breakfast. That’s bad for your health. And every day you go home late and play a lot after school. Relaxing yourself is necessary, but don’t play too much. I also know that you spend a long time watching TV and then do your homework late. That’s not good because you don’t have enough time to sleep. If this goes on, things will become even worse for you.
I hope what I said can help you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中刘海的不良习惯以及相应的忠告，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“早上看到刘海上课打瞌睡”引出要给刘海提关于养成良好习惯的忠告；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“不吃早餐上学、放学回家晚、睡眠少、贪恋看电视、作业拖拉”等方面指出刘海的不良习惯并给出相应忠告；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望所说的话能帮助刘海”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① be bad for对……不好
② a lot大量，许多
③ spend time (in) doing sth.花费时间做某事
④ go on继续
[高分句型]
① I also know that you spend a long time watching TV and then do your homework late. (that引导宾语从句)
② If this goes on, things will become even worse to you. (if引导条件状语从句)
18．例文
How to be a Better Student
Good habits lead to a better future. As teenagers, what should we do to develop good habits and be a better student Here is some advice.
First, we must keep healthy. Eating more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food is necessary, and we should keep doing exercises like running or playing ball games every day. Second, it’s important to learn to relax. We can often talk to our parents or friends about our feelings and shouldn’t push ourselves too hard, especially when we feel stressed. Third, reading more books can open our minds and help us gain more knowledge. Besides, we should help do chores at home, which teaches us responsibility.
If we try our best, we will become better day by day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明良好习惯对未来的重要性，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示给出具体建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是，代替
②every day每天
③learn to do学习做某事
[高分句型]
Besides, we should help do chores at home, which teaches us responsibility. (which引导的定语从句)
19．例文
Hello, everyone!
Now our parents help us do too many things. That makes us depend on them too much. So it’s necessary for us to develop our independence. Here are some ways.
First, let’s begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make the bed. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.
I think if we keep on doing these, we’ll become more and more independent.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿。
②时态：时态为一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中从自身事做起、帮忙做家务、主动学习、独立思考的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出方法的可行性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出培养独立性的必要性。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从自身事、家务、主动学习、独立思考几方面，说明培养独立性的方法。
第三步，书写结语。表达期望，结束发言。
[亮点词汇]
①develop independence培养独立性
②look after照顾
③on time按时
④depend on依靠
[高分句型]
①It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make the bed. (it固定句型)
②Don’t always depend on others. (否定祈使句)
20．One possible version:
Less Pressure, Better Life
Many students feel stressed because of heavy schoolwork and problems with friends or parents.
How can we solve these problems and reduce the stress in life We should join interesting after-school activities like sports or art clubs. At the same time, we can listen to music or draw pictures in our free time. Talking with family or teachers can solve many problems.
In our lives, some stress is normal, but too much is bad for us. Learning to balance study and life is the key to staying happy and healthy. Life will be better if we try our best.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍减少压力的方法；
第三步，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②at the same time同时
③in our free time在我们的空闲时间
[高分句型]
①Talking with family or teachers can solve many problems.（动名词作主语）
②Life will be better if we try our best.（if引导条件状语从句）
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