【单元考点培优】Unit 5 What are the shirts made of？专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 5 What are the shirts made of？
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华, 你的外国朋友Grace对中国的陶瓷文化很感兴趣。上周你们班刚好去参观了陶瓷古镇并感受了陶瓷文化。请你根据以下提示内容, 用英文写一封电子邮件, 向Grace描述你的参观经历和感受。
要求:
1. 参考以上提示内容, 可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息（校名、姓名、地名等）;
4. 词数80~120（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。
Dear Grace,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese ceramic culture.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My Favorite ________”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。
提示语： 思路导引
要求：
1. 请将短文题目补充完整；
2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
5. 词数：不少于70。
My Favorite ________
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3．假如你是Helen，上周日你和妹妹一起逛商场买衣服，你对自己和妹妹买的衣服很满意，并想把这份快乐与好朋友Lily分享，所以你就给她发了一封邮件，讲述你所买的衣物的情况。
提示：
1. 你买了一件杭州产的白色的丝绸连衣裙，你喜欢它的面料、颜色和款式。
2. 你妹妹买了一件广州产的蓝色的棉质牛仔裤。
注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。要求：
1. 文中要包含上面所给要点，须用上被动语态；
2. 词数：80左右。
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4．英语课上，你班上各个学习小组对中国的一种传统艺术形式中国结进行了交流，老师要求每个小组选出一名代表来发言，介绍中国结，你是你们小组的发言人，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇发言稿。
要点提示：1. 每一个中国结都是由一根绳或线（a single rope or thread）编成的；2. 每一个中国结都是根据特定的（specific）外形和意义来命名的；3. 过去人们用中国结来记录事件，现在人们主要把它当作装饰物（decoration）；4. 中国结是幸福和好运的象征。
要求：1. 可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 使用本单元所学的一般现在时的被动语态；3. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
The Chinese knot is a special form of traditional Chinese art.
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5．2022年2月4日冬奥会将在北京和张家口举行，假如你是李明，你的加拿大朋友Jackson将来张家口参加比赛，请你给他写一封信。内容包括：
1.介绍中国人的见面礼仪。
2.列举中国的餐桌礼仪至少三项.。
3.欢迎他来张家口，并祝他在比赛一切顺利。
注意：1.短文必须包括以上提示内容要点，可适当发挥：
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名：
3.词数80个左右开头已给出，不计入总数。
参 考 词 ：be supposed to；shake hands；toothpick；serve food；hit an empty bowl
Dear Jackson,
How are you Congratulation that you can be an athlete in The XXIV Olympic Winter Games!
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Yours,
Li Ming
6．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化常识。请你给他回复一封邮件。
内容包括：
1.茶树的种植；
2.茶的制作；
3.茶的用途；
4.茶的历史等。
要求：字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全，不少于5句，40词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总分。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e-mail.
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Welcome to China to experience it yourself, maybe, you will all in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．寒假来临，我们准备迎接春节，春节是中国的传统节日。2022年1月31日为今年的春节。在这一天，穿新衣，吃饺子！在餐桌上，不可以将筷子插进食物里，或用筷子敲空碗。
假如你是Wang Yuan，你的朋友Sandy作为交换生来中国过春节，请回信向她介绍中国的春节与餐桌礼仪。
要求：
1.文章开头必须包括所提供的信息，可适当增加内容和理由，但不要逐句翻译；
2.开头已给出不计入总词数；
3.词数：80左右。
Dear Sandy,
I’m so glad that you will come to celebrate the Spring Festival with us in China
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8．刚到中国来学习不久的John应中国同学的邀请去他家里做客，为此John向已熟悉中国习俗的Bob请教守时、送小礼物及餐桌礼仪等方面的习俗。假设你是Bob，请你给John回一封电子邮件，告诉他应懂得的事情。
要求：
1. 根据提示要点，选用恰当的词句进行行文构思，注意语言通顺，表达清析，过渡自然，可适当发挥；
2. 词数在80—100，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词汇。
Dear John,
I know that you will be invited to your Chinese classmate’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.
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Good luck and have a great time!
9．2022年“设计激活世遗”国际文创大赛作品征集活动即将开始。该活动面向全球征集以世界文化遗产为主题，兼具艺术性与实用性的文创产品。假设你是以下某一件文创产品的设计者，请你用英语为你的作品写一篇推介短文，简要介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现校名、人名等真实信息；
（2）词数：110词左右；
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10．中国传统文化深受世界各国人们的喜爱，而广东则以岭南文化而出名，假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办岭南文化节（Lingnan Cultural Festival）活动，你美国的笔友Mike想了解本次活动的细节。请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）时间：下周六上午；地点：学校操场；参加人员：全体师生；
（2）介绍岭南文化节的活动（至少两项），注意事项（至少一点）；
（3）邀请他通过网络观看和体验本次活动。
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，字数80词以上，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Mike,
How are you
I’m glad to hear from you. It’s known that Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China.
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Hope you’ll enjoy the festival online.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）又称老人节，是我国一个传统节日。在那天人们会出游、登高。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，以“重阳敬老”为主题为学校英语报投稿，介绍人们怎样庆祝这个节日，你通常做些什么来敬老助老，以及你的想法。
要求∶
1.意思连贯、符合逻辑。
2.提示词语仅供选用。
3.不要写出你的校名和姓名。
4.不少于70词，文章的开头不计入总词数。
提示词语∶go outing，climb，help，look after
1. How do Chinese people celebrate the Double Ninth Festival 2. What do you usually do to show respect(尊重)to the old 3. Do you think it is important to respect the old Why
The Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival.
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12．茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分，是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中国人，我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，把茶文化分享给你的外国笔友。内容提示：
1. 中国的茶文化约有5,000年的历史，神农首次发现茶可以饮用；
2. 中国茶种植广泛，杭州尤以茶闻名；
3. 已传播到世界各地，广受人们的喜爱，甚至成为了英国的国饮；
4. 喝茶的好处：……（至少补充两点）
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意连贯、合理通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 词数要求80词左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
China is famous for tea.
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13．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请选择你喜欢的一种传统工艺品或者传统美食，用英语写一篇短文，与他分享中国传统文化。词数80词以上。
1.这种传统工艺品 (artwork) 或者传统美食是什么？
2.制作的材质，制作步骤或相关故事，象征意义等；
3.你使用/制作这种工艺品或这种传统美食的一次经历，感想。
要求：
1.参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的人名、校名和班级。
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．传统节日是传承优秀文化历史的重要载体，人们在节日中增长知识，受到教益，又有助于彰显文化，陶冶情操，弘扬传统。某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜欢的传统节日”( My Favorite Traditional Festival) 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你喜欢的传统节日，以及你喜欢的原因。
要点提示：
1. 介绍最喜欢的节日(Spring Festival)
2. 春节的时间，活动以及意义等等( time, activities, symbol, spirit, meaning etc)
3. 个人感受，喜欢春节的原因(feelings)。
参考词汇：family reunion, decorate house, have big meals, Spring Festival Gala, visit relatives and friends, wish each other, ring out the old and ring in the new(辞旧迎新).
要求：
1. 根据要点提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Traditional Festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival.
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15．中国是生产大国，中国的产品遍布全世界的各个角落。请根据以下要点和要求，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你对中国产品的认识和感受。
1. 要点：
1)你最喜欢的中国制造的产品是哪件；
2)你为什么喜欢它；
3)关于“中国制造”你有什么感想。
2. 要求：
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
China’ s products are everywhere around the world.
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16．假如你是李华，你参加了由三星堆博物馆组织的“志愿小导游“活动。请根据以下内容写一篇短文，向外国游客介绍中国的三星堆遗址(the Sanxingdui Ruins)。
提示：1. 1929年首次意外被一个农民发现；
2. 1986年因发现上千件文物而引起广泛关注；
3. 最近科学家发现约500件距今3200多年的文物；
4. 遗址总面积约12平方千米；
5. 它的发现证明长江也是中华文明的起源之一。
参考词汇：cultural relic 文物 artifact 手艺品 discover 发现 civilization 文明
It’s my great honour to be your tour guide today.
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17．中国传统节日是中华民族悠久历史文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友爱丽丝(Alice)想通过你了解中国传统节日，感受中国文化。请你用英语给她写一封信，向她介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
内容包括：
1.介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日(包括时间、应节食物、庆祝活动等)；
2.谈谈你过节的感受。
Dear Alice,
How are you Let me introduce a Chinese traditional festival to you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
18．云“百善孝为先”，自古以来“孝文化”承载着中华传统美德。“孝”字老在上，子在下，请结合自身经历，以 “Respecting the elders”为题写一篇短文。
注意：
90词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
内容中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
开头已写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：filial piety 孝顺 virtue 美德 responsibility 责任
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19．端午 (the Dragon Boat Festival) 将至，我市将举行龙舟大赛。假设你是李明，你想邀请外教David参加。请根据以下要点拟定一则邀请函。
内容要点如下：
1. 端午是中国的传统节日；
2. 人们那天通常吃粽子划龙舟；
3. 6月3日早上7: 00准时到达东湖梨园；
4. 天气炎热，请记得带太阳镜和水；
5. 补充一两点端午的文化。
要求：
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数：60—80；
3. 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：traditional (adj. ) 传统的；sunglasses (n. ) 太阳镜；Liyuan Park梨园
Dear David,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming. Would you like to join us _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
20．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友John来信表示他对中国的剪纸 ( paper cutting) 很感兴趣。请你用英文回复一封邮件向他介绍剪纸。
要点:
1. 剪纸是中国传统技艺之一，受到人们的喜爱；
2. 剪纸有各种形状，如动物花和汉字 (character) 等；
3. 剪纸通常被贴在窗户门或者墙上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。
要求：
1. 必须包括所有内容要点，可适当增加细节；
2. 词数：80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting.
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I truly hope this e-mail will help you understand more about Chinese paper cutting.
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Grace,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese ceramic culture. I am writing to tell you that my class went to Ceramic Old Town to experience the ceramic culture last Saturday.
We enjoyed some valuable and beautiful ceramics. Ceramic masters showed us how to make ceramics with excellent skills. The most exciting part was making ceramics in person. We all made our own ceramics carefully. And the works made by ourselves could be taken away if we liked. So I took my work home and placed it on my table. Through this experience, I totally fell in love with making ceramics.
I'm looking forward to enjoying the ceramics with you next time. We can learn how to make them together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为电子邮件，围绕“参观陶瓷古镇的经历与感受”展开，向对中国陶瓷文化感兴趣的Grace分享参观情况，属于文化体验类交流文本 。
②时态：以一般过去时为主，用于描述上周六参观陶瓷古镇的具体活动；结合一般现在时表达感受、想法，使行文符合邮件交流的时态需求 。
③提示：涵盖参观的核心要素（地点、时间、活动），通过描述欣赏陶瓷、大师演示、亲手制作等环节，融入个人体验与感悟，内容完整、逻辑清晰，满足向Grace介绍并交流陶瓷文化体验的目的 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接Grace对中国陶瓷文化的兴趣，直接点明“上周六班级参观陶瓷古镇体验陶瓷文化”这一事件，快速切入主题，让邮件目的清晰明了 。
第二步，详细展开参观活动：先写欣赏精美珍贵陶瓷，感受视觉冲击；接着描述陶瓷大师展示制作流程，突出技艺精湛；再聚焦最令人兴奋的“亲手制作陶瓷”环节，说明制作时的专注及作品可留存的规则，体现体验的独特性 。
第三步，阐述参观收获，以“爱上制作陶瓷”总结体验感受，既呼应Grace的兴趣点，又为结尾邀请做铺垫，让邮件有始有终、情感连贯 。
[亮点词汇]
①valuable：珍贵的（精准形容陶瓷的价值属性，丰富对陶瓷的描述 ）
②excellent skills：精湛技艺（突出陶瓷大师的专业能力，体现陶瓷制作的技术含量 ）
③in person：亲自（强调“亲手制作”这一体验的独特性，增强内容感染力 ）
[高分句型]
①I am writing to tell you that my class went to Ceramic Old Town to experience the ceramic culture last Saturday.（that引导宾语从句，简洁清晰地传达核心事件，开启邮件主体内容 ）
②The most exciting part was making ceramics in person.（“the most + 形容词” 结构突出活动亮点，让内容有重点、有层次 ）
③Through this experience, I totally fell in love with making ceramics.（“through + 名词” 结构引出体验收获，简洁有力地总结感受 ）
2．例文
My Favorite T-shirt
Among all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best.
The T-shirt is white. It is made of cotton and fiber, so it’s very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It’s a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with friends. It makes me remember the time that we two have spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括“思路导引”提到的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山：介绍自己最喜欢的衣服名称；
第二步，详细介绍最喜欢的衣服，包括颜色、材质、喜欢的原因以及穿它的场合等；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
［亮点词汇］
① be made of 由……制成
② a lot of happy memories 有很多快乐的回忆
［高分句型］
① I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. (because引导原因状语从句)
② It makes me remember the time that we two have spent together. (that引导限制性定语从句)
3．
Dear Lily,
I had a good time with my sister last Sunday. We went shopping happily and bought beautiful clothes.
I bought a white silk dress. It was made in Hangzhou. It feels very soft and comfortable, and it fits me well. I like its material, color and style very much. My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. They were made in Guangzhou. They were cheap and just cost fifty yuan. She looks very cool in the blue jeans, so she loves them a lot.
After that, we went back home. We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much.
Yours,
Helen
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏任何信息提示，可根据需要适当添加内容，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题；
第二步，介绍自己以及妹妹买的衣服；
第三步，表达对这次购物的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① be made in 制造于
② enjoy oneself 过得快活，感到愉快
[高分句型]
① My sister bought a pair of cotton jeans, which was blue. (which引导非限定性定语从句)
② We were tired but we felt happy because we all enjoyed ourselves very much. (because引导原因状语从句)
4．One possible version：
The Chinese knot is a special form of traditional Chinese art. It is famous in China and has a long history. Every knot is made with a single rope or thread. And it is normally named after its specific form and meaning.
The Chinese knot was used for recording events in ancient times, but now it’s mainly used as a decoration. Since the Chinese knot is usually red, people buy it for the hope that it can bring happiness and good luck to them. It’s a good choice to give it to a friend as a gift.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，记住要使用一般现在时的被动语态。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国结是用什么编的；
第二步，介绍中国结是如何命名的；
第三步，最后介绍过去和现在人们用中国结做的事情以及中国结的含义。
[亮点词汇]
①be made with用……制作
②name after以……命名
③be used for doing被用于做……
[高分句型]
Since the Chinese knot is usually red, people buy it for the hope that it can bring happiness and good luck to them.（原因状语从句，宾语从句）
5．Dear Jackson.
How are you Congratulation that you can be an athlete in The XXIV Olympic Winter Games! You must be happy to come to China soon. Now let me introduce some Chinese customs to you.
In China, we should shake hands when we meet. At dinner, the plates are on the table and everyone has them. We eat with chopsticks. We should let the old man start eating first. We can talk at the table. But we can’t speak too loudly. In fact, the Chinese are very friendly. Welcome to Zhangjiakou. I wish you all the best in the comepetiton.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文。
②时态:时态用“一般现在时”。
③提示:要求包括所有内容提示，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出主题；
第二步，介绍中国的餐桌礼仪；欢迎对方来张家口，并表示美好祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①shake hands握手
②eat with chopsticks用筷子吃
③in fact事实上
[高分句型]
①We should let the old man start eating first.（情态动词+动词原形）
6．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e-mail. Tea was first drunk about 5,000 years ago. It was discovered by Shen Nong by accident. Tea plants are grown on the sides of mountains. When the leaves are ready, they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing. Tea is good for both health and business!
Welcome to China to experience it yourself, maybe, you will fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中茶的历史，注意要点要齐全。注意动词的时态和语态。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来介绍茶的历史，并且由神农偶然发现的；
第二步，介绍茶树的种植和制作；
第三步，介绍茶的用途：有益于健康和做生意。
[亮点词汇]
①by accident偶然
②be sent for被送往
③be good for对……有益
[高分句型]
①Tea was first drunk about 5,000 years ago.（被动语态）
②When the leaves are ready, they are picked by hand and then are sent for processing.（When引导的时间状语从句）
7．Dear Sandy,
I’m so glad that you will come to celebrate the Spring Festival with us in China. Now I’d like to tell you something about Chinese Spring Festival and table manners.
Winter vacation is coming. We are ready for the Spring Festival. Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. January 31, 2022 is this year’s Spring Festival. On this day, people wear new clothes!
At the table, the elderly should be allowed to eat first. You can’t insert chopsticks into the food. You can’t knock the empty bowl with chopsticks
Hope to meet you in Beijing soon!
Yours,
Wang Yuan
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”
提示：给Sandy介绍中国的春节与餐桌礼仪，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的。
第二步，阐述春节的时间，人们会穿新衣服；餐桌礼仪：长辈先吃饭，不可以把筷子插入碗中，不可以敲碗。
第三步，书信结语，期待在北京见到Sandy。
[亮点词汇]
①the Spring Festival 春节
②table manners餐桌礼仪
[高分句型]
①I’m so glad that you will come to celebrate the Spring Festival with us in China. （宾语从句）
②Hope to meet you in Beijing soon!（祈使句）
8．例文
Dear John,
I know that you will be invited to your Chinese classmate’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.
First, you should arrive a little earlier or on time. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You aren’t supposed to point at anyone with your chopsticks. Another thing is that you aren’t expected to use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.
Good luck and have a great time!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：应用文
②时态：一般现在时
③提示：题目要求根据提示给John回封电子邮件，向他介绍去中国家庭里做客需要注意的事项，写作时注意过渡自然，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先总体介绍写作目的。
第二步，依次介绍到中国家庭里做客需要注意的事项。
第三步，最后表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②such as比如
③be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①First, you should arrive a little earlier or on time.（副词的比较级）
②Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food.（祈使句）
9．例文
Fans are widely known, among which folding fans are the most famous and most Chinese. In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children. Today, I recommend folding fans.
Folding fans are easy to carry because they are foldable. They are the most popular and almost everyone has one in ancient times. The folding fan can be opened and closed freely. When it is opened, it can be used. When it is closed, it can be hidden. It has the meaning of advancing and retreating freely and being carefree.
Because the folding fan is both artistic and practical, it can not only cool the fan, but also watch and play. Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.
Folding fans is refined and elegant, with integrity.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为产品推介；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意选择其中的一个作品作为自己的产品进行推介，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。从所给的产品中选择一件作为自己的产品，然后介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先提出自己要推介的产品——折扇；其次具体介绍折扇的文化内涵；接着介绍折扇的作用。
第三步：书写结语。表示“折扇是儒雅风流，气节风骨”。
[亮点词汇]
①the most famous最著名的
②the meaning of……的含义
③not only…, but also…不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Folding fans is easy to carry because they are foldable.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.（which引导的定语从句）
10．例文
It’s known that Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China. Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the school. All teachers and students will take part in the activity, and some social groups will be invited to perform folk customs.
There are two major programs to hold this cultural festival: “music appreciation” and “Cantonese opera appreciation”. It is worth noting that after the wonderful Cantonese opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costumes. We should pay attention to safety when participating in activities.
You can watch and experience this activity through 5G network.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，需写为书信格式；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时主要包含提示要点写清楚举办信息，在介绍活动时注意围绕文化主题自己展开描写，写作时注意不需抄写开头和结尾内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍文化节举办的时间、地点和参加人员；
第二步，具体描写文化节上的活动和注意事项；
第三步，邀请Mike通过网络观看。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in参加
② participate in参加
③ pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
① Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the school. （定语从句）
② It is worth noting that after the wonderful Cantonese opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costumes. （主语从句）
11．范文：
The Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. On that day, people usually climb mountains and go outing with their family. It’s also a day to show respect to the old.
As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old. I often visit my grandparents on weekends and talk to them and cheer them up. I also help them with the housework. Meanwhile, I am polite to the old. When I see them on the bus, I always offer them my seat. Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood. I help them carry heavy things when they need help.
I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot for their family and for the country. One day, we will all be old.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容向人们介绍重阳节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述中国人如何庆祝重阳节；
第二步，阐述自己是如何尊重老人的；
第三步，阐述认为重阳节重要的原因和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do尝试做某事；
②volunteer to do志愿做某事；
③look after照顾。
[高分句型]
①As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old.（宾语从句）
②Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood.（定语从句）
③I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot for their family and for the country.（宾语从句和原因状语从句）
12．例文：
China is famous for tea. Chinese tea culture has a long history of about 5,000 years. Shen Nong, a Chinese ruler, was the first to discover tea as a drink. In China, tea has been planted widely so far, and Hangzhou is well-known for tea especially. Tea has spread to many other countries all over the world and it is enjoyed by many people. It has even become the national drink in England. Drinking tea does good to people in many ways. When people are tired, they feel better after drinking a cup of tea. Drinking tea can also help fat people lose weight. It can keep us healthy, refresh our minds, increase memory, clear our brain and so on.
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“内容提示”依次介绍中国茶的历史、种植、传播及喝茶的好处。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入介绍中国茶；
第二步，介绍中国茶的历史、种植、传播及喝茶的好处。
[亮点词汇]
① have a long history of有着……悠久的历史
② in many ways在很多方面
③ do good to对……有好处
[高分句型]
① Drinking tea does good to people in many ways. 喝茶在很多方面对人有好处。（使用动名词作主语）
② When people are tired, they feel better after drinking a cup of tea. 当人们疲倦时，喝一杯茶后会感觉好些。（使用when引导的时间状语从句）
13．例文：
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture. China has a long history and colorful traditional culture. I introduce our typical food—dumplings to you today.
We call dumplings jiaozi. We eat jiaozi on many holidays, such as the Spring Festival, the Winter Solstice and so on. Because jiaozi is a symbol of luck and happiness. How do we make it Put the water and flour into a bowl and make a smooth dough. Then cut up the meat and vegetables we like and add all kinds of relish to it, mix them. Next put filling on the wrapper and fold it. Finally, boil jiaozi. Making it is not easy. I wasted all the flour and vegetables when I made it for the first time. I was so sad that I hadn’t try it for a long time. Now I can make it well. Jiaozi is very delicious. Welcome to my home to eat it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意弄清“信息提示”中“选择一种传统工艺 品或者传统美食”的要求，二选一即可，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出为对方介绍传统文化代表食物——饺子；
第二步，具体阐述为什么介绍饺子及它的意义和制作步骤；
第三步，介绍自己制作饺子的经历和感想，并邀请对方来中国吃饺子。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in...对……感兴趣
②colorful traditional culture丰富的传统文化
③ such as例如
④ add...to...把……加到……里
[高分句型]
①Then cut up the meat and vegetables we like and add all kinds of relish to it. (含有定语从句)
②I was so sad that I hadn’t try it for a long time. (含有结果状语从句)
14．One possible version
My Favorite Traditional Festival
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is one of the most important festival in China which always begins on the first day of the first lunar month in the Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th day. This is a time for family reunions, visiting relatives and friends and exchanging greeting for the coming New Year. It is also a time to ring out the old and ring in the new.
There are various activities in each household to celebrate the spring festival. Days before it, we clean our house with belief that cleaning sweeps bad luck. We also decorate our house with paper cuts and spring couplets. On the eve of the festival, we get together with our family members and have big meals while watching Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, we celebrate the New Year with spectacular fireworks.
I like the Spring Festival because it is the only time in a year that I can sit together with every family member. As we are so busy studying or working. It is such a blissful moment that we look back and look forward to the future. We visit our relatives and friends, wishing each other a happy year and good luck. How happy we are!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示介绍自己最喜欢的传统节日的情况。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的节日是什么。
第二步，介绍春节的时间，活动以及意义等等。
第三步，介绍个人感受，喜欢春节的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① at midnight 在午夜
② be busy doing sth 忙于做某事
③ such…that 如此……以至于
[高分句型]
① It is one of the most important festival in China which always begins on the first day of the first lunar month in the Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th day（which引导定语从句）
② It is also a time to ring out the old and ring in the new（动词不定式作定语）
15．One Possible Version:
China’ s products are everywhere around the world. I like China’ s products. They are not only cheap but also have good quality. I like my mobile phone best. It is made in Shenzhen. Although it isn’ t very expensive, it is very useful. It can help me a lot. For example, I can use it to have online classes. I can contact with my families and friends. I’ m proud of “Made in China” . China has developed many famous brands in the world. They are symbols that China has become stronger and stronger. I hope I can create a famous brand one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于“中国制造”的感想，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“中国的产品遍布全世界的各个角落”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“中国产品的优势、我最喜欢的中国产品、我喜欢的原因、我对中国产品的认识和感受等”几个方面重点介绍中国产品及我对它的认识和感受；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我对中国产品的认识和感受”及我的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① not only … but also 不仅……而且
② be made in由……制造
③ Although尽管
④ For example 例如
⑤ be proud of为……感到骄傲
⑥ stronger and stronger越来越强大
[高分句型]
① They are not only cheap but also have good quality.（not only … but also 句型）
② I like my mobile phone best.（I like … best.“我最喜欢…… ”句型）
③ I’ m proud of “Made in China” .（“Made in China”强化主题）
④ China has developed many famous brands in the world. （has developed现在完成时，体现中国的发展）
⑤They are symbols that China has become stronger and stronger.（China has become stronger and stronger. 现在完成时，再次点明中国的强大）
16．例文
It’s my great honour to be your tour guide today. In 1929, a farmer found the Sangxingdui Ruins by accident. People found some artifacts, but didn’t know how important they were. After “sleeping” for more than 3,000 years, the Sanxingdui Ruins surprised the world in 1986. Scientists found more than 1,000 cultural relics then.
The surprises didn’t stop there. Scientists recently found about 500 cultural relics that date back more than 3,200 years. The total area of the Sanxingdui Ruins is about 12 square kilometres.
The Sanxingdui Ruins are thought to be one of the world’s greatest discoveries of the 20th century. The discovery shows that the Chinese civilization started not only along the Yellow River, but also along the Yangze River.
【解析】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中的提示内容向外国游客介绍中国的三星堆遗址，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要讲述三星堆的发现过程以及发现的上千件文物；第二段描述最近的三星堆发现；第三段介绍发现三星堆的意义。写作时保证语言的准确性，保证无单词拼写和语法错误。
17．例文
Dear Alice，
How are you Let me introduce a Chinese traditional festival to you. My favourite festival is Mid Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It is on August 15th in lunar calendar every year. It is a time for family and friends to get together and have a big dinner. On that day, we usually eat different kinds of moon cakes. And there are plenty of other things to do. After dinner, we get together to enjoy the bright moon in the sky, tell stories and watch TV. I always have great fun. And I wish you have a wonderful Mid -Autumn Festival one day.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。给你的美国朋友Alice写一封信，介绍你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时需介绍节日的时间，食物，庆祝活动，可适当发挥。同时还要介绍你过节的感受。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
18．例文：
Respecting the elders
Through the history, being filial and respectful to the elders has been a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
Respecting the old and cherishing the young is a traditional Chinese virtue. I am proud of what I have done for my grandparents.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；要求我们关于“孝”这个这个主题，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称为主来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主；紧贴题目要求和文章主旨；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
19．例文：
Dear David,
The Dragon Boat Festival is coming. Would you like to join us As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most popular traditional festivals celebrated in China. People often get together with their family to eat zongzi and have the Dragon Boat races on that day. We also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. Now I’m writing to invite you to take part in dragon boat racing, which will be held at 7: 00 am on June 3rd to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in the Liyuan Park, and because of the hot weather, you should wear your sunglasses and bring some water. I know you are interested in Chinese festivals, so it is really a nice opportunity for you learn about it．
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】1.题干解读：本文是写一封邀请函，文章开头已给出，写作时要承接开头，按照所给的内容要点写一篇短文，做到内容连贯。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一、三人称来叙述；时态主要用一般现在时；写作时要注意内容连贯，准确使用一定的语法、词汇和句型，保证无单词语法错误。
20．参考范文
Dear John,
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese paper cutting.
I love paper cutting, too. Paper cutting is a kind of traditional Chinese art. It has a very long history. And it’s popular among Chinese people. Paper cutting can be made in different shapes, such as figures, animals, flowers and Chinese characters with good meanings. Many people put paper cutting on their front doors, the windows and walls of their houses. People often decorate their homes with paper cutting because they think paper cutting can bring them happiness and good luck.
I truly hope this e-mail will help you understand more about Chinese paper cutting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目是电子邮件写作，根据给出材料介绍中国的剪纸技艺，开头结尾已给出，正文可以用一段介绍。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称和第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。介绍时可多应用复合句，注意人称和数的变化，保证内容完整，上下文连贯，单词拼写正确。
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