【单元考点培优】Unit 5 Art world 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版Unit 5 Art world
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假定你是九年级学生李华，准备向校英语报“Traditional Arts of China”专栏投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统艺术形式，写作内容包括以下要点：
①简单介绍这种传统艺术；
②喜欢的原因 (2点)；
③如何传承 (2点)；
④呼吁传承。
要求：
1. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is
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2．艺术陶冶情操，艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以My favourite art form为题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，内容包括：
1.你最喜欢的艺术形式；
2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数：90左右；
2.短文需包括所给要点，可适当发挥；
3.短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示词汇：绘画 painting 书法 calligraphy 戏剧 drama 剪纸 paper-cutting
舞蹈 dancing 唱歌singing 摄影 photography 乐器 musical instrument
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3．假如你叫李明，你所在学校准备宣传书写的重要性，你作为一名书写爱好者，你将给同学们进行经验介绍。介绍的内容包括：
1) 简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练；
2) 书写的重要性(至少两点) ；
3) 鼓励同学们练好书写。
注意：写作词数80词左右；请在答题卡相应位置作答。参考单词：handwriting书写。
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4．研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态 音乐类型 听音乐后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静
困倦，疲劳 摇滚音乐 振奋
以自己为例：孤独，悲伤 …… ……
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.
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5．中国文化博大精深，各种艺术形式精彩纷呈。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、茶艺、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、京剧等，数不胜数。艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命，丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，并结合你的经历，谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及它对你的影响。
参考要点：
1.介绍你喜欢的艺术形式（art form）；
2.喜欢的缘由；
3.这种艺术形式对你的影响；
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
2. 80-120词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Art plays an important role in my life.
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6．请写篇短文介绍我们的家乡菏泽，要求语句通顺，包括以下内容，100词左右。
1、菏泽，位于鲁西南，包括七县两区。
2、以牡丹而著名，每年四月，来自全国各地的游客来赏花。
3、它也是中国戏曲、书法和绘画之乡。
4、武术在菏泽历史悠久，有很多名人，如孙膑、宋江。
5、菏泽美食很多，如单县羊肉汤，曹县烧牛肉，郓城烧鸡。
参考词汇：
县 county, 区 district, 牡丹 peony, 书法 calligraphy, 烧烤的 roasted
My Hometown-Heze
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7．舞狮（Lion Dance）是在广东地区非常流行的一种表演，请根据以下提示，介绍广东舞狮。开头已给出，不算入总词数。
1. 舞狮是传统表演；
2. 结合功夫、舞蹈和音乐；
3. 在节日、重要活动中有舞狮；也有举行舞狮竞赛；
4. 现状：练习很辛苦，越来越少人喜欢舞狮；
5. 发展：自由发挥两点。
Lion Dance
Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province
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8．舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍一位舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人——叶天。短文内容包含以下要点：
1.叶天的基本信息（男，45岁，佛山人）和学习舞狮的经历（4岁学习舞狮，22岁获得全国舞狮比赛一等奖）；
2.他是如何传承舞狮的（到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮，……）；
3.你对叶天和舞狮的看法。
要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
提示词：传承keep...alive
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance.
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9．音乐在人们的生活中起着很重要的作用，不同的人喜欢不同的音乐，请根据下表提示，用英语介绍他们对音乐的爱好及理由。
要求：
1. 认真审题，把握要点；
2. 行文连贯，条理清晰；不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。
名字 音乐类型 原因
Sally 跟着唱的音乐 放松身心；缓解压力
Emma 跟着跳舞的音乐 令人兴奋；做锻炼
I … …
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10．假设你是李辉，你的作品在“The Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上荣获了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“课堂一分钟演讲”活动中给同学们做分享， 要点如下：
1. 作品拍摄时间， 地点和内容；
2. 你选择该作品参赛的原因；
3. 你的参赛感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全， 可适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! I’m honored to share my prize-winning picture with you.
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11．照片记录了生活中很多精彩美好的场景。你校英语俱乐部将以“The photo I like best”为主题组织一次英语演讲比赛。假设你是该俱乐部的成员，打算参加这次比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，介绍一张你最喜欢的照片。
提示信息：
1. 这张照片的拍摄时间、地点和内容；
2. 你最喜欢这张照片的原因；
3. 谈谈你的感受。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to take the chance to share the photo that I like best with you.
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12．音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前 适用音乐 听音乐后
压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静
困倦、疲劳 摇滚音乐 振奋
注意：
1. 内容必须包括上表中的要点；
2. 条理清楚，语句连贯；
3. 词数80~120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 摇滚音乐rock music
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s mood.
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13．随着中国电影市场的发展，越来越多的人愿意走进电影院观看自己喜欢的电影。请你根据以下写作要点向大家介绍你最喜欢的电影类型。
写作要点：
1. How often do you go to the movies
2. What kind of movies do you like best
3. Why do you like that kind of movies
4. Which movie is the best one you have ever watched
要求：
1. 文中不要出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
2. 词数80~120，开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite movies with you.
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14．假如你是李华，你的国际笔友Alex正在写一份题为“How Cartoons Influence Teenagers’ Lives”的报告，他请你分享你的想法。请给Alex写一封信，内容包括：
（1）简述你小时候喜欢的一部动画片（名字、主要人物）；
（2）分享观看它的一个具体经历；
（3）说出你从中学到的一个积极价值观（例如：友谊、勇气）。
要求：（1）短文必须包含以上信息；
（2）内容可适当发挥，以保证内容丰富与完整；
（3）文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名；
（4）词数：80—100。作文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I hope this email finds you well.
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I hope my story can be helpful to you. Can’t wait to read your report!
Yours,
Li Hua
15．保护和传承中华民族的传统工艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近我校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统工艺”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的一种或两种我国传统的工艺以及它们的使用场景，并分享你的感受。
My favourite traditional Chinese craft What 介绍一种或两种传统工艺（剪纸，惠山泥人，徽州墨条等）
Why 1.……是中国文化的重要部分
2.……（请你补充1-2点）
Where 1.…… 2.……
Feeling ……
注意：1.词数：90-100左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）：
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My favourite traditional Chinese craft
As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese crafts is very important
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Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese craft and keep it alive.
16．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化，请你用英语写一封回信，向外国友人介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点，不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
中国结 (Chinese knot) 剪纸
材料：丝线 (silk thread) 材料：纸和剪刀 (scissors)
颜色：红色 特点：剪出各种图案
形状：像花、动物等 用途：张贴在门、窗等地
寓意：带来好运 寓意：表达喜悦
Dear friends,
China is a country with over five thousand years.
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Yours,
Lily
17．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike最近在中国游玩，他在逛街时给你发来一张折扇的照片并向你请教有关折扇的信息。请你根据下面提示和要求，给Mike写一封英文邮件向他介绍折扇。提示：
◆可以折叠的扇子，方便携带 ◆通常由纸、丝绸和竹子等材料制成；扇子上一般装饰有绘画和书法 ◆不仅是降暑的工具，也被视为一种艺术品 ◆……
参考词汇：be decorated with装饰着……；calligraphy书法；piece of art艺术品；cool down降温
要求：
1. 提示要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 表述准确，语言通顺，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现答题者真实的校名和人名；
4、不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
I hope you have a great time in China! Thank you for sharing the photo of the folding fan. I’d love to tell you more about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．假如你是李明，你校将举办校园音乐节。你的英国留学生朋友 Tom非常热爱音乐，请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他和你一起参加。
Date July 1st, 2025
Time 5 p.m.—8 p.m.
Place school playground
Activities 1. sing songs and dance to music; 2. a competition for the best singer; 3. play instruments, like the guitar and piano; 4….
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)。
4. 词数：不少于60。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Dear Tom,
I hope you are doing well!
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Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
19．假设你们学校上周五下午举办了环保时装展，所展服装材质各异，但都体现了低碳环保的设计理念。其中下面三位同学的服装别具特色，请根据以下表格内容，给校报写一篇英文报道，不少于80词。
Students Clothes Materials Looks
Zhang Peng police uniform plastic bags (塑料袋) cool and attractive
Lu Jing a T-shirt and a skirt paper taller and slimmer
Liu Juan a green dress leaves special and beautiful
提示词：环保时装展 green fashion show
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20．剪纸是中国传统的技艺之一。我们在本学期Unit 8中已经有所了解。恰巧，有位英国网友在小红书上发帖，想要了解一下剪纸艺术。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文作为回帖，来帮助他认识剪纸这项中国文化的瑰宝。
提示：1. 取材简单，受人喜爱；2. 各种形状，如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字 (Chinese character) 等；
3. 通常被贴在窗户、门或者墙上；4. 经常出现在节日或婚礼 (wedding) 上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As we all know, paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy. It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years.
I love calligraphy for two reasons. First, it helps me relax and focus. When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful. Second, it shows the beauty of Chinese culture. Every stroke has its own meaning and style. To pass down this art, we can take calligraphy classes and practice regularly. Also, schools can organize calligraphy competitions to encourage more students to learn it.
Let’s work together to keep this wonderful tradition alive!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，直接点明最喜欢的艺术形式，并简要介绍其特点；
第二步，讲述喜欢的原因以及传承方式；
第三步，书写结尾，总结呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①pass down传承
②stroke笔画
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2．例文
My favourite art form
Art is an important part of my life. My favourite art is making kites.
As a kid, I had a big dream of flying. One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite. That made me really excited. When I held a line to let the bird kite fly into the sky, I had a feeling that my dream of flying came true. Since then, I have made it a rule to make a kite every spring. Now my study is full of colourful kites.
As I’m growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is always in my parents’ hands. They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式；
第二步，分享一个与之相关的自己的故事；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a dream of doing sth梦想做某事
②come true实现
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.（as引导时间状语从句）
3．例文
Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture. I really enjoy calligraphy, so I insist on writing a calligraphy post every day to practice calligraphy. At the same time, I also copy some calligraphy books. I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture. At the same time, it can also better promote China to the world. So we need to practice calligraphy well and contribute our own strength to the suggestions of our motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练；
第二步，说明书写的重要性；
第三步，最后鼓励同学们练好书写。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on坚持
②at the same time同时
③need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture.（现在分词作状语）
②I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture.（that引导的宾语从句）
4．One possible version:
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods.
If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited, so they can listen to country music and they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, so they can listen to rock music. After listening, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad. I often listen to light music. It makes me feel happy again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料分别写出听了不同音乐的情绪前后的对比。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出音乐的重要性。
第二步，具体阐述每一种音乐带来的不同感受。
[亮点词汇]
① has an important effect on sth对某事有重要的影响
② different kinds of各种各样的
③ be crazy about对……痴迷
[高分句型]
① If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed（if引导了条件状语从句）
② It makes me feel happy again（make sb do sth结构中省略to的动词不定式作宾补）
5．例文：
Art plays an important role in my life. Both my parents and I have a gift for singing. However, once I didn’t like singing because I was afraid of singing in front of many people.
When I was five, I sang Happy Birthday To You in a low voice at my birthday party. After singing, all the people clapped hands. I won high praise from them. I felt happy. My mother encouraged me to keep trying and sing more beautiful songs. At that time I found that singing was interesting.
I get a lot of fun from singing and I also become more confident.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据参考要点结合自己的经历介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式，谈谈喜欢它的缘由及这种形式对你的影响。要做到要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时。可分为三段式写作：第一段介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式是什么；第二段介绍喜欢这种艺术形式的缘由；第三段介绍其对自己的影响。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．例文：
My Hometown-Heze
My hometown Heze, is located in the southwest of Shandong Province, governing seven counties and two districts. It is famous for its peony and people from all over the world come to admire it every April. Beside, it is also known as the hometown of Chinese opera, calligraphy and painting. What’s more, Heze is well-known as the hometown of martial arts. Wushu has a long history in Heze. Since ancient times, there are a lot of celebrities, such as Sun Bin, Song Jiang, and so on. Last but not least, there is a lot of delicious food in Heze, such as Shanxian mutton soup, Roasted beef, Yuncheng roasted chicken, and so on.
All in all, it is a city full of traditional Chinese culture and I am so proud of it.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文，写作时按说明文格式来写。按照题干要点，依次从地理位置、历史及文化等方面介绍菏泽这个城市。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第三人称，主要采用一般现在时来描述。按照题干提供要点，分点介绍这座城市，要注意保持条理清晰，内容完整，语言准确。
7．例文：
Lion Dance
Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province. Lion dance is a traditional performance. It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music. Lion Dance is to celebrate a festive day or moment. In some festivals or important activities, there will be a Lion Dance. There are many people who enjoy watching performances. Lion dance competitions are now held in some places.
But this traditional performance is less and less now. Because practice is very hard. Fewer and fewer people like Lion Dance, and more and more young people like modern dance. I hope people can like Lion Dance and spread this traditional art. I hope we can learn more about Lion Dance in our spare time. Let’s join the Lion Dance and protect the traditional culture.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍舞狮的情况以及舞狮的现状以及发展等，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要承接已给出的开头，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．例文：
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance. He is 45 years old and he is from Foshan, Guangdong. When he was 4, he started to learn Lion Dance. He is very interested in it and practices hard. At the age of 22, he won the first prize in the National Lion Dance Competition.
To help keep the Lion Dance alive, he and the dancers go abroad and perform Lion Dance every year. Besides, he teaches the young in Foshan how to perform it. He also shoots the videos of Lion Dance and uploads them to the website so that more people can know about it.
Lion Dance is one of the traditional Chinese folk arts that brings people happiness during festivals. I really admire Ye Tian. In my view, we should learn more about Lion Dance from Ye Tian and pass it down.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人——叶天。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可以分成三个段落，第一段介绍叶天的基本信息和学习舞狮的经历；第二段描述他如何传承舞狮的；最后一段谈谈叶天和舞狮的看法。
9．例文
Music plays an important role in people’s lives. Different people have different tastes in music.
Sally loves music that she can sing along with. She says it helps her relax and reduces stress after a long day. Emma prefers music that she can dance to. She finds it exciting, and it also gives her a good workout. As for me, I enjoy music that is peaceful and gentle. I often listen to it before going to sleep because it makes me feel calm and helps me fall asleep faster.
I think music is not only a form of entertainment but also a good friend in life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：介绍不同的人对音乐的爱好及理由，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出音乐在人们的生活中起着很重要的作用，不同的人喜欢不同的音乐，引出下文；
第二步，介绍Sally，Emma以及自己对音乐的爱好及理由，注意用词准确，行文流畅；
第三步，总结自己对于音乐的看法，注意细节充分，三观正确。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in… 在……中起重要作用
②sing along with… 跟着……一起唱
③not only…but also… 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①Emma prefers music that she can dance to.（定语从句）
②I think music is not only a form of entertainment but also a good friend in life.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Good morning, everyone! I’m honored to share my prize-winning picture with you.
I took this photo last autumn when I visited a small mountain village with my family. It shows the morning sun shining through golden maple leaves, and a little bird standing on a branch, singing quietly. The colors and the peaceful feeling were just perfect.
I chose this work because it truly shows “The Beauty of Nature”—not grand views, but small, warm moments around us. It reminds people to slow down and notice the beauty in daily life.
Winning the prize makes me very happy. It also tells me that being patient and careful when taking photos helps a lot. I’ll keep looking for and recording more natural beauty in the future.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，礼貌问候听众，点明分享主题——自己的获奖摄影作品，引出下文；
第二步，介绍获奖照片的拍摄时间、地点及内容，突出画面美感；
第三步，说明选该作品参赛的原因——贴合“自然之美”主题，展现身边微小温暖的自然瞬间，引发他人关注日常之美；
第四步，分享参赛感受——获奖的喜悦，以及从中领悟到摄影需耐心细致，表达未来继续记录自然美的决心；
第五步，礼貌致谢，结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①slow down 放慢速度
②look for 寻找
③take photos 拍照
[高分句型]
①I took this photo last autumn when I visited a small mountain village with my family. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Winning the prize makes me very happy. (动名词短语作主语)
11．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to take the chance to share the photo that I like best with you.
It was taken last summer at the beach. In the photo, my family and I are playing volleyball and laughing under the sunny sky. I love this photo best because it reminds me of our fun vacation together. It makes me feel happy and grateful for my family.
Whenever I see it, I remember the joy of that day. I will always cherish this special memory.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的照片的拍摄时间、地点和内容；
第二步，说明你最喜欢这张照片的原因；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb. of sth.使某人想起某事
②grateful感激的
③cherish珍惜
[高分句型]
①I love this photo best because it reminds me of our fun vacation together.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Whenever I see it, I remember the joy of that day.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
12．例文
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s mood.
So people use different kinds of music to change their moods. If they feel stressed and worry a lot, they can listen to pop music. After they listen to it, they will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited. Then they can listen to country music. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. If some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, they will feel excited.
In short, people always choose different kinds of music depending on their moods.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明音乐对情绪有重要影响，人们依情绪选音乐；
第二步，具体说明不同的音乐对心情的调节作用，压力大听流行乐→放松；对游戏过度兴奋听乡村乐→平静；疲惫听摇滚→兴奋；
第三步，总结人们常依情绪选不同音乐。
[亮点词汇]
①have an important effect on 对……有重要影响
②be crazy about 热衷于
③depend on 取决于
[高分句型]
①Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s mood. (that引导宾语从句)
②If they feel stressed and worry a lot, they can listen to pop music. (if引导条件状语从句)
13．例文
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite movies with you. I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best. Here are three reasons why I like them so much.
Firstly, cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings.
Secondly, songs of cartoons are usually beautiful and easy to sing along with. My favorite song is Try Everything from my favorite cartoon Zootopia. And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever watched. It’s so funny and interesting.
Lastly, I can always learn something useful from cartoons. For example, I have learned from Zootopia that we should never give up when we meet difficulties.
What do you think of cartoons I think they are really worth watching. Have a try!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是说明文。
②时态：以一般现在时为主。
③提示：文章涵盖写作要点里的观影频率、喜欢的电影类型、喜欢理由、最佳影片，内容完整，符合词数要求，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接给定开头，说明观影频率和最喜欢的电影类型，引出下文。
第二步，从三个方面阐述喜欢动画电影的原因。
第三步，以问句互动，表达对动画电影的认可并建议尝试，收尾自然。
[亮点词汇]
①twice a month一月两次
②funny dialogues有趣的对话
③worth watching值得观看
[高分句型]
①Here are three reasons why I like them so much. (“why”引导定语从句。)
②cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings. (“which”引导非限定性定语从句)
③And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever watched. (“that”引导定语从句)
14．范文
Dear Alex,
I hope this email finds you well. I would like to share my experience about cartoons.
I watched a cartoon called Gundam at the age of eight. The main character of it is a boy who is strong and brave. He keeps fighting for his freedom and for the people who are weak. When I first watched the cartoon, I told myself that I would be such a brave and strong man in the future.
I learned that we should fight for our freedom and happiness in our daily life. I will watch more cartoons during my holidays and I think I can learn more from them.
I hope my story can be helpful to you. Can’t wait to read your report!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当添加细节，注意包含所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己小时候喜欢看的一部动画片，包括其名字及主要人物；
第二步：分享观看它的一个具体经历；
第三步：介绍自己观看后学到的积极价值观。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁的时候
②fight for为……而战
[高分句型]
①The main character of it is a boy who is strong and brave. (who引导的定语从句)
②When I first watched the cartoon, I told myself that I would be such a brave and strong man in the future. (when引导的时间状语从句)
15．例文
My favourite traditional Chinese craft
As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese crafts is very important. My favourite craft is paper-cutting. With just scissors and red paper, artists create animals, flowers or Chinese characters. It is often used during the Spring Festival. People stick paper-cuts on windows for good luck.
Another craft I like is clay sculpture. Artists shape clay into lively figures like children or animals. These small statues are usually put on desks as decorations or given as gifts to children. I love these crafts because they are important parts of Chinese culture. They show our creativity and bring beauty to daily life. Every time I see them, I feel proud of our rich cultural heritage.
Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese craft and keep it alive.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍两种传统的工艺；
第二步，介绍它们的使用场景，并分享你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①shape…into塑造成
②daily life日常生活
③feel proud of感到自豪
[高分句型]
I love these crafts because they are important parts of Chinese culture.（原因状语从句）
16．参考范文：
Dear friends,
China is a country with over five thousand years.
Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese arts. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art is paper-cuts. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put them on doors, windows, etc. Paper-cuts often mean happiness.
I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Lily
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为介绍中国传统文化的书信写作；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写信时需包含中国结和剪纸的艺术特点、材料、寓意等要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点明中国历史悠久的背景，引出传统艺术主题；
第二步：分别介绍中国结和剪纸；
第三步：总结传统艺术的文化价值，呼应开头。
[亮点词汇]
① be made of由……制成
② good luck好运
③ cut out剪出
[高分句型]
① I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure.（宾语从句）
② I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.（宾语从句）
17．例文
Dear Mike,
I hope you have a great time in China! Thank you for sharing the photo of the folding fan. I’d love to tell you more about it.
As the name shows, a folding fan can be folded, making it very convenient to carry. Making a folding fan requires materials like paper, silk and bamboo. Folding fans are usually decorated with paintings and calligraphy; we can see the fan’s beauty and cultural meaning. Folding fans are not only used for cooling down during hot weather but also regarded as pieces of art. You can buy one for yourself or as a gift for your family if you like it.
I hope the information is helpful. Enjoy the rest of your trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：需包含折扇的便携性、制作材料、装饰特点、功能及艺术价值，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：问候并引入主题（已给出）；
第二步：介绍折扇的基本特点、 描述装饰与文化意义；
第三步：书写结语，给出祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient方便的
②be used for被用来
③be regarded as被当作……
[高分句型]
①As the name shows, a folding fan can be folded, making it very convenient to carry. (现在分词作状语)
②Making a folding fan requires materials like paper, silk and bamboo. (动名词作主语)
③You can buy one for yourself or as a gift for your family if you like it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
18．参考范文：
Dear Tom,
I hope you are doing well! I’m excited to tell you about the music festival of our school! It will be held on the school playground from 5 p.m. to 8 p.m., on July 1st this year.
There will be some interesting activities. We can sing songs and dance to music together. And there will be a competition for the best singer and the winner could get some prizes. Students who are good at playing instruments like the guitar and piano will give a performance, too.
I’m sure it will be a fantastic experience for music lovers like you. Would you like to join me Let me know if you’re interested.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中校园音乐节的相关介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“告知Tom学校将举办校园音乐节”来引出重点邀请的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“音乐节的时间、地点、活动安排”等几个方面重点介绍校园音乐节的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Tom能一起参加”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be excited to do sth. 很兴奋做某事
②be good at 擅长
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
I’m sure it will be a fantastic experience for music lovers like you. (省略that的宾语从句)
19．例文
Last Friday afternoon, we held a green fashion show in our school. Three models of our Grade 8 took part in it. Zhang Peng wore a police uniform and he looked very cool and attractive. It’s amazing that it was made of black plastic bags. Lu Jing looked taller and slimmer in a T-shirt and a skirt. Her clothes were common, but the material is very special. All her clothes were made of paper. Liu Juan was the last model to appear. Everyone thought she looked special and beautiful. Because her long green dress was made of leaves.
We all like the green fashion show, and it helps us take more care of the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“环保时装展”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学生穿着、服装材质、服装特色”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②be made of由……制成
③take care of关心
[高分句型]
Everyone thought she looked special and beautiful.（省略that的宾语从句）
20．例文
As we all know, paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts. It’s loved by people because it only requires simple materials like red paper and scissors. The artworks can be shaped into animals, flowers, people, or even auspicious Chinese characters like “福”.
These beautiful cuttings are often pasted on windows, doors, or walls as decorations. You’ll see them especially during festivals or weddings, as the Chinese believe they bring happiness and good luck. Some complex designs even tell ancient stories!
Through paper cutting, we express wishes for a better life. Why not try making one yourself It’s a wonderful way to experience Chinese culture!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，介绍剪纸受人喜爱的原因以及剪纸的形状；
第二步：介绍见到剪纸的一些场合以及其所代表的意义；
第三步：建议大家尝试剪纸。
[亮点词汇]
①be shaped into被塑造成
②during festivals or weddings在节日或婚礼期间
③good luck好运
④express wishes for表达……的愿望
⑤experience Chinese culture体验中国文化
[高分句型]
①It’s loved by people because it only requires simple materials like red paper and scissors. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②You’ll see them especially during festivals or weddings, as Chinese believe they bring happiness and good luck. (as引导的原因状语从句)
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版Unit 5 Art world
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假定你是九年级学生李华，准备向校英语报“Traditional Arts of China”专栏投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一种中国传统艺术形式，写作内容包括以下要点：
①简单介绍这种传统艺术；
②喜欢的原因 (2点)；
③如何传承 (2点)；
④呼吁传承。
要求：
1. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is
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2．艺术陶冶情操，艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以My favourite art form为题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，内容包括：
1.你最喜欢的艺术形式；
2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数：90左右；
2.短文需包括所给要点，可适当发挥；
3.短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示词汇：绘画 painting 书法 calligraphy 戏剧 drama 剪纸 paper-cutting
舞蹈 dancing 唱歌singing 摄影 photography 乐器 musical instrument
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3．假如你叫李明，你所在学校准备宣传书写的重要性，你作为一名书写爱好者，你将给同学们进行经验介绍。介绍的内容包括：
1) 简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练；
2) 书写的重要性(至少两点) ；
3) 鼓励同学们练好书写。
注意：写作词数80词左右；请在答题卡相应位置作答。参考单词：handwriting书写。
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4．研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前的情绪状态 音乐类型 听音乐后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静
困倦，疲劳 摇滚音乐 振奋
以自己为例：孤独，悲伤 …… ……
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.
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5．中国文化博大精深，各种艺术形式精彩纷呈。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、茶艺、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、京剧等，数不胜数。艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命，丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式，并结合你的经历，谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及它对你的影响。
参考要点：
1.介绍你喜欢的艺术形式（art form）；
2.喜欢的缘由；
3.这种艺术形式对你的影响；
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
2. 80-120词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Art plays an important role in my life.
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6．请写篇短文介绍我们的家乡菏泽，要求语句通顺，包括以下内容，100词左右。
1、菏泽，位于鲁西南，包括七县两区。
2、以牡丹而著名，每年四月，来自全国各地的游客来赏花。
3、它也是中国戏曲、书法和绘画之乡。
4、武术在菏泽历史悠久，有很多名人，如孙膑、宋江。
5、菏泽美食很多，如单县羊肉汤，曹县烧牛肉，郓城烧鸡。
参考词汇：
县 county, 区 district, 牡丹 peony, 书法 calligraphy, 烧烤的 roasted
My Hometown-Heze
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7．舞狮（Lion Dance）是在广东地区非常流行的一种表演，请根据以下提示，介绍广东舞狮。开头已给出，不算入总词数。
1. 舞狮是传统表演；
2. 结合功夫、舞蹈和音乐；
3. 在节日、重要活动中有舞狮；也有举行舞狮竞赛；
4. 现状：练习很辛苦，越来越少人喜欢舞狮；
5. 发展：自由发挥两点。
Lion Dance
Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province
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8．舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍一位舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人——叶天。短文内容包含以下要点：
1.叶天的基本信息（男，45岁，佛山人）和学习舞狮的经历（4岁学习舞狮，22岁获得全国舞狮比赛一等奖）；
2.他是如何传承舞狮的（到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮，……）；
3.你对叶天和舞狮的看法。
要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
提示词：传承keep...alive
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance.
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9．音乐在人们的生活中起着很重要的作用，不同的人喜欢不同的音乐，请根据下表提示，用英语介绍他们对音乐的爱好及理由。
要求：
1. 认真审题，把握要点；
2. 行文连贯，条理清晰；不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。
名字 音乐类型 原因
Sally 跟着唱的音乐 放松身心；缓解压力
Emma 跟着跳舞的音乐 令人兴奋；做锻炼
I … …
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10．假设你是李辉，你的作品在“The Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上荣获了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“课堂一分钟演讲”活动中给同学们做分享， 要点如下：
1. 作品拍摄时间， 地点和内容；
2. 你选择该作品参赛的原因；
3. 你的参赛感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全， 可适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! I’m honored to share my prize-winning picture with you.
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11．照片记录了生活中很多精彩美好的场景。你校英语俱乐部将以“The photo I like best”为主题组织一次英语演讲比赛。假设你是该俱乐部的成员，打算参加这次比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，介绍一张你最喜欢的照片。
提示信息：
1. 这张照片的拍摄时间、地点和内容；
2. 你最喜欢这张照片的原因；
3. 谈谈你的感受。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to take the chance to share the photo that I like best with you.
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12．音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表内容，写一篇英语短文。
听音乐前 适用音乐 听音乐后
压力大，过分焦虑 流行音乐 放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度 乡村音乐 平静
困倦、疲劳 摇滚音乐 振奋
注意：
1. 内容必须包括上表中的要点；
2. 条理清楚，语句连贯；
3. 词数80~120，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 摇滚音乐rock music
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s mood.
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13．随着中国电影市场的发展，越来越多的人愿意走进电影院观看自己喜欢的电影。请你根据以下写作要点向大家介绍你最喜欢的电影类型。
写作要点：
1. How often do you go to the movies
2. What kind of movies do you like best
3. Why do you like that kind of movies
4. Which movie is the best one you have ever watched
要求：
1. 文中不要出现你所在学校的名称和师生姓名；
2. 词数80~120，开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite movies with you.
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14．假如你是李华，你的国际笔友Alex正在写一份题为“How Cartoons Influence Teenagers’ Lives”的报告，他请你分享你的想法。请给Alex写一封信，内容包括：
（1）简述你小时候喜欢的一部动画片（名字、主要人物）；
（2）分享观看它的一个具体经历；
（3）说出你从中学到的一个积极价值观（例如：友谊、勇气）。
要求：（1）短文必须包含以上信息；
（2）内容可适当发挥，以保证内容丰富与完整；
（3）文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名；
（4）词数：80—100。作文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I hope this email finds you well.
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I hope my story can be helpful to you. Can’t wait to read your report!
Yours,
Li Hua
15．保护和传承中华民族的传统工艺是每个中华儿女的责任，现在得到了越来越多人的重视和关注。最近我校准备举行“你最喜爱的传统工艺”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的一种或两种我国传统的工艺以及它们的使用场景，并分享你的感受。
My favourite traditional Chinese craft What 介绍一种或两种传统工艺（剪纸，惠山泥人，徽州墨条等）
Why 1.……是中国文化的重要部分
2.……（请你补充1-2点）
Where 1.…… 2.……
Feeling ……
注意：1.词数：90-100左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）：
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My favourite traditional Chinese craft
As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese crafts is very important
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Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese craft and keep it alive.
16．中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化，请你用英语写一封回信，向外国友人介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点，不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
中国结 (Chinese knot) 剪纸
材料：丝线 (silk thread) 材料：纸和剪刀 (scissors)
颜色：红色 特点：剪出各种图案
形状：像花、动物等 用途：张贴在门、窗等地
寓意：带来好运 寓意：表达喜悦
Dear friends,
China is a country with over five thousand years.
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Yours,
Lily
17．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike最近在中国游玩，他在逛街时给你发来一张折扇的照片并向你请教有关折扇的信息。请你根据下面提示和要求，给Mike写一封英文邮件向他介绍折扇。提示：
◆可以折叠的扇子，方便携带 ◆通常由纸、丝绸和竹子等材料制成；扇子上一般装饰有绘画和书法 ◆不仅是降暑的工具，也被视为一种艺术品 ◆……
参考词汇：be decorated with装饰着……；calligraphy书法；piece of art艺术品；cool down降温
要求：
1. 提示要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 表述准确，语言通顺，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现答题者真实的校名和人名；
4、不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
I hope you have a great time in China! Thank you for sharing the photo of the folding fan. I’d love to tell you more about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．假如你是李明，你校将举办校园音乐节。你的英国留学生朋友 Tom非常热爱音乐，请你根据以下表格中的提示内容，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他和你一起参加。
Date July 1st, 2025
Time 5 p.m.—8 p.m.
Place school playground
Activities 1. sing songs and dance to music; 2. a competition for the best singer; 3. play instruments, like the guitar and piano; 4….
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)。
4. 词数：不少于60。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Dear Tom,
I hope you are doing well!
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Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
19．假设你们学校上周五下午举办了环保时装展，所展服装材质各异，但都体现了低碳环保的设计理念。其中下面三位同学的服装别具特色，请根据以下表格内容，给校报写一篇英文报道，不少于80词。
Students Clothes Materials Looks
Zhang Peng police uniform plastic bags (塑料袋) cool and attractive
Lu Jing a T-shirt and a skirt paper taller and slimmer
Liu Juan a green dress leaves special and beautiful
提示词：环保时装展 green fashion show
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20．剪纸是中国传统的技艺之一。我们在本学期Unit 8中已经有所了解。恰巧，有位英国网友在小红书上发帖，想要了解一下剪纸艺术。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文作为回帖，来帮助他认识剪纸这项中国文化的瑰宝。
提示：1. 取材简单，受人喜爱；2. 各种形状，如人物、动物、花和吉祥的汉字 (Chinese character) 等；
3. 通常被贴在窗户、门或者墙上；4. 经常出现在节日或婚礼 (wedding) 上，因为人们认为它能带来幸福和好运。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As we all know, paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favourite is Chinese calligraphy. It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years.
I love calligraphy for two reasons. First, it helps me relax and focus. When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful. Second, it shows the beauty of Chinese culture. Every stroke has its own meaning and style. To pass down this art, we can take calligraphy classes and practice regularly. Also, schools can organize calligraphy competitions to encourage more students to learn it.
Let’s work together to keep this wonderful tradition alive!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，直接点明最喜欢的艺术形式，并简要介绍其特点；
第二步，讲述喜欢的原因以及传承方式；
第三步，书写结尾，总结呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①pass down传承
②stroke笔画
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It is a beautiful art of writing Chinese characters with brushes and ink, which has a history of thousands of years.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②When I write with a brush, I feel peaceful.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2．例文
My favourite art form
Art is an important part of my life. My favourite art is making kites.
As a kid, I had a big dream of flying. One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite. That made me really excited. When I held a line to let the bird kite fly into the sky, I had a feeling that my dream of flying came true. Since then, I have made it a rule to make a kite every spring. Now my study is full of colourful kites.
As I’m growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is always in my parents’ hands. They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式；
第二步，分享一个与之相关的自己的故事；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a dream of doing sth梦想做某事
②come true实现
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.（as引导时间状语从句）
3．例文
Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture. I really enjoy calligraphy, so I insist on writing a calligraphy post every day to practice calligraphy. At the same time, I also copy some calligraphy books. I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture. At the same time, it can also better promote China to the world. So we need to practice calligraphy well and contribute our own strength to the suggestions of our motherland.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍你怎样进行书写训练；
第二步，说明书写的重要性；
第三步，最后鼓励同学们练好书写。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on坚持
②at the same time同时
③need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①Chinese calligraphy is extensive and profound, representing traditional Chinese culture.（现在分词作状语）
②I believe that using beautiful fonts can better promote Chinese culture.（that引导的宾语从句）
4．One possible version:
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods.
If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited, so they can listen to country music and they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, so they can listen to rock music. After listening, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad. I often listen to light music. It makes me feel happy again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示材料分别写出听了不同音乐的情绪前后的对比。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出音乐的重要性。
第二步，具体阐述每一种音乐带来的不同感受。
[亮点词汇]
① has an important effect on sth对某事有重要的影响
② different kinds of各种各样的
③ be crazy about对……痴迷
[高分句型]
① If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music and you will feel relaxed（if引导了条件状语从句）
② It makes me feel happy again（make sb do sth结构中省略to的动词不定式作宾补）
5．例文：
Art plays an important role in my life. Both my parents and I have a gift for singing. However, once I didn’t like singing because I was afraid of singing in front of many people.
When I was five, I sang Happy Birthday To You in a low voice at my birthday party. After singing, all the people clapped hands. I won high praise from them. I felt happy. My mother encouraged me to keep trying and sing more beautiful songs. At that time I found that singing was interesting.
I get a lot of fun from singing and I also become more confident.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据参考要点结合自己的经历介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式，谈谈喜欢它的缘由及这种形式对你的影响。要做到要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态结合一般现在时和一般过去时。可分为三段式写作：第一段介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式是什么；第二段介绍喜欢这种艺术形式的缘由；第三段介绍其对自己的影响。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．例文：
My Hometown-Heze
My hometown Heze, is located in the southwest of Shandong Province, governing seven counties and two districts. It is famous for its peony and people from all over the world come to admire it every April. Beside, it is also known as the hometown of Chinese opera, calligraphy and painting. What’s more, Heze is well-known as the hometown of martial arts. Wushu has a long history in Heze. Since ancient times, there are a lot of celebrities, such as Sun Bin, Song Jiang, and so on. Last but not least, there is a lot of delicious food in Heze, such as Shanxian mutton soup, Roasted beef, Yuncheng roasted chicken, and so on.
All in all, it is a city full of traditional Chinese culture and I am so proud of it.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文，写作时按说明文格式来写。按照题干要点，依次从地理位置、历史及文化等方面介绍菏泽这个城市。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第三人称，主要采用一般现在时来描述。按照题干提供要点，分点介绍这座城市，要注意保持条理清晰，内容完整，语言准确。
7．例文：
Lion Dance
Lion Dance is very popular across Guangdong Province. Lion dance is a traditional performance. It is a form of performance that combines Kung Fu, dance and music. Lion Dance is to celebrate a festive day or moment. In some festivals or important activities, there will be a Lion Dance. There are many people who enjoy watching performances. Lion dance competitions are now held in some places.
But this traditional performance is less and less now. Because practice is very hard. Fewer and fewer people like Lion Dance, and more and more young people like modern dance. I hope people can like Lion Dance and spread this traditional art. I hope we can learn more about Lion Dance in our spare time. Let’s join the Lion Dance and protect the traditional culture.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍舞狮的情况以及舞狮的现状以及发展等，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要承接已给出的开头，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．例文：
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance. He is 45 years old and he is from Foshan, Guangdong. When he was 4, he started to learn Lion Dance. He is very interested in it and practices hard. At the age of 22, he won the first prize in the National Lion Dance Competition.
To help keep the Lion Dance alive, he and the dancers go abroad and perform Lion Dance every year. Besides, he teaches the young in Foshan how to perform it. He also shoots the videos of Lion Dance and uploads them to the website so that more people can know about it.
Lion Dance is one of the traditional Chinese folk arts that brings people happiness during festivals. I really admire Ye Tian. In my view, we should learn more about Lion Dance from Ye Tian and pass it down.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人——叶天。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可以分成三个段落，第一段介绍叶天的基本信息和学习舞狮的经历；第二段描述他如何传承舞狮的；最后一段谈谈叶天和舞狮的看法。
9．例文
Music plays an important role in people’s lives. Different people have different tastes in music.
Sally loves music that she can sing along with. She says it helps her relax and reduces stress after a long day. Emma prefers music that she can dance to. She finds it exciting, and it also gives her a good workout. As for me, I enjoy music that is peaceful and gentle. I often listen to it before going to sleep because it makes me feel calm and helps me fall asleep faster.
I think music is not only a form of entertainment but also a good friend in life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：介绍不同的人对音乐的爱好及理由，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指出音乐在人们的生活中起着很重要的作用，不同的人喜欢不同的音乐，引出下文；
第二步，介绍Sally，Emma以及自己对音乐的爱好及理由，注意用词准确，行文流畅；
第三步，总结自己对于音乐的看法，注意细节充分，三观正确。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in… 在……中起重要作用
②sing along with… 跟着……一起唱
③not only…but also… 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①Emma prefers music that she can dance to.（定语从句）
②I think music is not only a form of entertainment but also a good friend in life.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Good morning, everyone! I’m honored to share my prize-winning picture with you.
I took this photo last autumn when I visited a small mountain village with my family. It shows the morning sun shining through golden maple leaves, and a little bird standing on a branch, singing quietly. The colors and the peaceful feeling were just perfect.
I chose this work because it truly shows “The Beauty of Nature”—not grand views, but small, warm moments around us. It reminds people to slow down and notice the beauty in daily life.
Winning the prize makes me very happy. It also tells me that being patient and careful when taking photos helps a lot. I’ll keep looking for and recording more natural beauty in the future.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，礼貌问候听众，点明分享主题——自己的获奖摄影作品，引出下文；
第二步，介绍获奖照片的拍摄时间、地点及内容，突出画面美感；
第三步，说明选该作品参赛的原因——贴合“自然之美”主题，展现身边微小温暖的自然瞬间，引发他人关注日常之美；
第四步，分享参赛感受——获奖的喜悦，以及从中领悟到摄影需耐心细致，表达未来继续记录自然美的决心；
第五步，礼貌致谢，结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①slow down 放慢速度
②look for 寻找
③take photos 拍照
[高分句型]
①I took this photo last autumn when I visited a small mountain village with my family. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Winning the prize makes me very happy. (动名词短语作主语)
11．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to take the chance to share the photo that I like best with you.
It was taken last summer at the beach. In the photo, my family and I are playing volleyball and laughing under the sunny sky. I love this photo best because it reminds me of our fun vacation together. It makes me feel happy and grateful for my family.
Whenever I see it, I remember the joy of that day. I will always cherish this special memory.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的照片的拍摄时间、地点和内容；
第二步，说明你最喜欢这张照片的原因；
第三步，谈谈你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb. of sth.使某人想起某事
②grateful感激的
③cherish珍惜
[高分句型]
①I love this photo best because it reminds me of our fun vacation together.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Whenever I see it, I remember the joy of that day.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
12．例文
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s mood.
So people use different kinds of music to change their moods. If they feel stressed and worry a lot, they can listen to pop music. After they listen to it, they will feel relaxed. Some students are crazy about computer games and feel overexcited. Then they can listen to country music. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. If some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, they will feel excited.
In short, people always choose different kinds of music depending on their moods.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明音乐对情绪有重要影响，人们依情绪选音乐；
第二步，具体说明不同的音乐对心情的调节作用，压力大听流行乐→放松；对游戏过度兴奋听乡村乐→平静；疲惫听摇滚→兴奋；
第三步，总结人们常依情绪选不同音乐。
[亮点词汇]
①have an important effect on 对……有重要影响
②be crazy about 热衷于
③depend on 取决于
[高分句型]
①Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s mood. (that引导宾语从句)
②If they feel stressed and worry a lot, they can listen to pop music. (if引导条件状语从句)
13．例文
Hi, everyone! I’d like to share something about my favorite movies with you. I go to the movies twice a month and I like cartoons best. Here are three reasons why I like them so much.
Firstly, cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings.
Secondly, songs of cartoons are usually beautiful and easy to sing along with. My favorite song is Try Everything from my favorite cartoon Zootopia. And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever watched. It’s so funny and interesting.
Lastly, I can always learn something useful from cartoons. For example, I have learned from Zootopia that we should never give up when we meet difficulties.
What do you think of cartoons I think they are really worth watching. Have a try!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是说明文。
②时态：以一般现在时为主。
③提示：文章涵盖写作要点里的观影频率、喜欢的电影类型、喜欢理由、最佳影片，内容完整，符合词数要求，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接给定开头，说明观影频率和最喜欢的电影类型，引出下文。
第二步，从三个方面阐述喜欢动画电影的原因。
第三步，以问句互动，表达对动画电影的认可并建议尝试，收尾自然。
[亮点词汇]
①twice a month一月两次
②funny dialogues有趣的对话
③worth watching值得观看
[高分句型]
①Here are three reasons why I like them so much. (“why”引导定语从句。)
②cartoons, which usually have funny dialogues and a happy ending, can bring me happy feelings. (“which”引导非限定性定语从句)
③And I think Zootopia is the best cartoon that I’ve ever watched. (“that”引导定语从句)
14．范文
Dear Alex,
I hope this email finds you well. I would like to share my experience about cartoons.
I watched a cartoon called Gundam at the age of eight. The main character of it is a boy who is strong and brave. He keeps fighting for his freedom and for the people who are weak. When I first watched the cartoon, I told myself that I would be such a brave and strong man in the future.
I learned that we should fight for our freedom and happiness in our daily life. I will watch more cartoons during my holidays and I think I can learn more from them.
I hope my story can be helpful to you. Can’t wait to read your report!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示内容进行写作，可适当添加细节，注意包含所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己小时候喜欢看的一部动画片，包括其名字及主要人物；
第二步：分享观看它的一个具体经历；
第三步：介绍自己观看后学到的积极价值观。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of在……岁的时候
②fight for为……而战
[高分句型]
①The main character of it is a boy who is strong and brave. (who引导的定语从句)
②When I first watched the cartoon, I told myself that I would be such a brave and strong man in the future. (when引导的时间状语从句)
15．例文
My favourite traditional Chinese craft
As we all know, protecting the traditional Chinese crafts is very important. My favourite craft is paper-cutting. With just scissors and red paper, artists create animals, flowers or Chinese characters. It is often used during the Spring Festival. People stick paper-cuts on windows for good luck.
Another craft I like is clay sculpture. Artists shape clay into lively figures like children or animals. These small statues are usually put on desks as decorations or given as gifts to children. I love these crafts because they are important parts of Chinese culture. They show our creativity and bring beauty to daily life. Every time I see them, I feel proud of our rich cultural heritage.
Let’s work together to protect this traditional Chinese craft and keep it alive.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍两种传统的工艺；
第二步，介绍它们的使用场景，并分享你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①shape…into塑造成
②daily life日常生活
③feel proud of感到自豪
[高分句型]
I love these crafts because they are important parts of Chinese culture.（原因状语从句）
16．参考范文：
Dear friends,
China is a country with over five thousand years.
Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese arts. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shapes of flowers, animals and so on. Chinese knot means good luck. Another traditional Chinese art is paper-cuts. We can use paper and scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put them on doors, windows, etc. Paper-cuts often mean happiness.
I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Lily
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为介绍中国传统文化的书信写作；
② 时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写信时需包含中国结和剪纸的艺术特点、材料、寓意等要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点明中国历史悠久的背景，引出传统艺术主题；
第二步：分别介绍中国结和剪纸；
第三步：总结传统艺术的文化价值，呼应开头。
[亮点词汇]
① be made of由……制成
② good luck好运
③ cut out剪出
[高分句型]
① I think traditional Chinese arts are Chinese treasure.（宾语从句）
② I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.（宾语从句）
17．例文
Dear Mike,
I hope you have a great time in China! Thank you for sharing the photo of the folding fan. I’d love to tell you more about it.
As the name shows, a folding fan can be folded, making it very convenient to carry. Making a folding fan requires materials like paper, silk and bamboo. Folding fans are usually decorated with paintings and calligraphy; we can see the fan’s beauty and cultural meaning. Folding fans are not only used for cooling down during hot weather but also regarded as pieces of art. You can buy one for yourself or as a gift for your family if you like it.
I hope the information is helpful. Enjoy the rest of your trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：需包含折扇的便携性、制作材料、装饰特点、功能及艺术价值，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：问候并引入主题（已给出）；
第二步：介绍折扇的基本特点、 描述装饰与文化意义；
第三步：书写结语，给出祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient方便的
②be used for被用来
③be regarded as被当作……
[高分句型]
①As the name shows, a folding fan can be folded, making it very convenient to carry. (现在分词作状语)
②Making a folding fan requires materials like paper, silk and bamboo. (动名词作主语)
③You can buy one for yourself or as a gift for your family if you like it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
18．参考范文：
Dear Tom,
I hope you are doing well! I’m excited to tell you about the music festival of our school! It will be held on the school playground from 5 p.m. to 8 p.m., on July 1st this year.
There will be some interesting activities. We can sing songs and dance to music together. And there will be a competition for the best singer and the winner could get some prizes. Students who are good at playing instruments like the guitar and piano will give a performance, too.
I’m sure it will be a fantastic experience for music lovers like you. Would you like to join me Let me know if you’re interested.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中校园音乐节的相关介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“告知Tom学校将举办校园音乐节”来引出重点邀请的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“音乐节的时间、地点、活动安排”等几个方面重点介绍校园音乐节的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Tom能一起参加”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be excited to do sth. 很兴奋做某事
②be good at 擅长
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
I’m sure it will be a fantastic experience for music lovers like you. (省略that的宾语从句)
19．例文
Last Friday afternoon, we held a green fashion show in our school. Three models of our Grade 8 took part in it. Zhang Peng wore a police uniform and he looked very cool and attractive. It’s amazing that it was made of black plastic bags. Lu Jing looked taller and slimmer in a T-shirt and a skirt. Her clothes were common, but the material is very special. All her clothes were made of paper. Liu Juan was the last model to appear. Everyone thought she looked special and beautiful. Because her long green dress was made of leaves.
We all like the green fashion show, and it helps us take more care of the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“环保时装展”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学生穿着、服装材质、服装特色”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②be made of由……制成
③take care of关心
[高分句型]
Everyone thought she looked special and beautiful.（省略that的宾语从句）
20．例文
As we all know, paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts. It’s loved by people because it only requires simple materials like red paper and scissors. The artworks can be shaped into animals, flowers, people, or even auspicious Chinese characters like “福”.
These beautiful cuttings are often pasted on windows, doors, or walls as decorations. You’ll see them especially during festivals or weddings, as the Chinese believe they bring happiness and good luck. Some complex designs even tell ancient stories!
Through paper cutting, we express wishes for a better life. Why not try making one yourself It’s a wonderful way to experience Chinese culture!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接给出的开头，介绍剪纸受人喜爱的原因以及剪纸的形状；
第二步：介绍见到剪纸的一些场合以及其所代表的意义；
第三步：建议大家尝试剪纸。
[亮点词汇]
①be shaped into被塑造成
②during festivals or weddings在节日或婚礼期间
③good luck好运
④express wishes for表达……的愿望
⑤experience Chinese culture体验中国文化
[高分句型]
①It’s loved by people because it only requires simple materials like red paper and scissors. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②You’ll see them especially during festivals or weddings, as Chinese believe they bring happiness and good luck. (as引导的原因状语从句)
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