【单元考点培优】Unit 4 Growing up 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版Unit 4 Growing up
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你们学校校报组织题为My role model的英语征文活动，请根据征文要求，写一篇短文投稿。
My role modelIn your life, there must be a role model who influences you deeply. They may be great persons like a scientist, an actor or an athlete. They may also be common people around you such as your parent, your teacher or your classmate. Please write a passage to introduce him or her and your passage should include these following points: 1. Who is your role model Please introduce his/her general information. 2. Why is he/she your role model Please give at least two reasons. 3. What can you learn from him/her We are looking forward to your passages. We hope more readers can share your role models with us.
role model: 榜样
要求：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My role model
Role models have a great influence on our life.
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2．自古以来，人们对英雄的定义没有统一的标准。英雄可以是科学家、体育健将，也可以是医生或者见义勇为者。假如你班将要开展一次以“The hero in my heart”为主题的英语班会。请你根据下面的要点与要求写一篇英语发言稿。
要点：
(1) 你心中的英雄是谁
(2) 你为什么认为他/她是你心中的英雄
(3) 你从他/她那里学到了什么
要求：
(1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名：
(2) 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。
The hero in my heart
Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
3．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如： Spud Webb、Tan Dun、Audrey Hepburn、 Jackie Chan等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动， 请结合你的经历，用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点：
1. Who is your role model
2. What meaningful things he/ she did influence you most
3. What can you learn from him/ her
注意：
1. 词数不少于100字， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点， 全文连贯通顺， 可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is
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4．请根据下列提示以“Ma Long”为题写一篇介绍著名乒乓球运动员马龙的短文，80词左右。
出生地 辽宁省鞍山市
身高 1.75米
受训经历 1. 1993年，年仅5岁的马龙开始学习打乒乓球； 2. 1999年，师从第34届世界乒乓球锦标赛 (The 34th Table Tennis Championships) 冠军王俊； 3. 2003年，进入国家队。
成绩 1. 2019年4月，在世界乒乓球赛男单比赛 (World Table tennis Men’s Single Competition) 中夺冠，实现三连冠； 2. 2020年10月，在全国乒乓球锦标赛 (China Table Tennis Championships) 获得双打金牌 (doubles gold medal)； 3. 2021年7月，在东京奥运会乒乓球男子单打决赛 (finals) 夺得金牌。
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5．榜样(role model) 不仅是一面镜子，还是一面旗帜。好的榜样激发我们对人生道路 和人生理想的思考，给予我们自我完善的力量。假设你是李华，你校英文俱乐部举办题 为“A Role Model in My Life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示写一篇演讲稿，向大家 介绍你心中的榜样。
内容提示：
1. Who is your role model
2. Why is he/she your role model
3. How does your role model influence you in your daily life
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
2. 词数80个左右, 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua.
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6．假定你是李华，你将在最新的一期学校英语报“Role Models”栏目上介绍为我国赢得首枚奥运网球单打金牌的运动员郑钦文。
简介 郑钦文出生于2002年10月8日，湖北人。
主要经历 1. 幼年时，郑钦文对网球兴趣浓厚。 2. 2010年，她开始接受专业训练，提升技术。 3. 2021年，在国际赛事中取得了巨大成就。 4. 2024年，为中国赢得了第一块奥运会网球单打金牌。
启发与感悟 从她的故事中你得到的启发和感悟，至少两点。
注意：
1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3.词数80-100之间(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词：国际赛事：international tournament; 奥运网球单打：Olympic tennis singles
Have you heard about Zheng Qinwen Below is some detailed information about her.
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7．巴黎奥运会完美落下帷幕，我国运动员的超强运动技能以及遥遥领先的科技元素都再次让全世界瞩目。全红婵在巴黎奥运会上再次夺冠，对她来说运动成就了人生。那对你而言，运动有什么影响呢？请你以“The sport I love”为主题，根据下面内容提示写一篇短文。
写作要点：
1. What’s your favorite sport
2. Why do you love the sport (keep healthy, make new friends, ...)
3. What can we learn from Quan Hongchan
The Sport I Love
There’s no doubt that sports are important in our life. After watching the 33rd Summer Olympic Games, I’m crazier about sports.
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8．为了树立榜样，创建优良的校风，你校英语俱乐部近日开展主题为 “A role model around me”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的 “模范少年” (Role Model) 全红婵。 要求：
1）须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰；
2）词数：不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
introduction 中国最优秀的跳水运动员之一；获得过许多奖
Experiences 2007年3月28日出生于广东湛江一个贫苦家庭； 家里一共五个孩子，排行老三；
2014年在湛江体校开始训练；训练刻苦努力
2020年加入国家队
2021年获得东京奥运会女子单人10米跳台金牌；并打破世界纪录
Your opinions 成功和勇气的象征；以她为骄傲；……
跳水运动员diver 女子单人10米跳台 10m Platform Women
东京奥运会Tokyo Olympic Games 湛江体校 Zhanjiang Sports School
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9．假如你是李华，这个暑假你全程关注了中国健儿在巴黎奥运会的表现，请给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信，描述你的观赛经历和感想、并和他相约2028年一起去现场看洛杉矶（Los Angeles）奥运会。内容需包括：
1. 观赛经历（如最令你印象深刻的一位运动员或一场比赛）；
2. 观赛感悟；
3. 相约未来。
要求：1. 需包含全部要点，可适当发挥；2. 语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实；3. 词数80词左右（作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：athlete 健儿；运动员
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to share with you my experience about the Paris Olympic Games this summer holiday.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
10．几乎每个人的心目中都有自己喜欢和崇拜的榜样。假如你心目中的榜样是中国乒乓球运动员孙颖莎，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇短文来介绍一下孙颖莎。
1. 2000年出生于河北省石家庄；
2. 5岁时为了锻炼身体开始练习乒乓球；
3. 对自己严格要求，刻苦训练，15岁时进入国家队；
4. 2021年参加东京奥运会，获得一枚金牌，一枚银牌，为人所熟知；
5. 现在她成为了一名成功的乒乓球运动员；
6. 我认为……
注意：1. 短文应包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the national team国家队；
the Tokyo Olympic Games东京奥运会；
be well-known to为……所熟知
My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player.
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11．10月8日，第19届杭州亚运会闭幕。16岁的全红婵在女子十米跳台决赛中夺得金牌。为了树立榜样，你校英语俱乐部近日开展主题为“A Role Model Around Me”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范少年” (Role Model) 16岁的全红婵。
要点提示：
1) 个人信息：
● 2007年3月28日出生在湛江一个贫苦家庭；
● 从2014年开始跳水训练，杭州亚运会上斩获10米跳台比赛金牌。
2) 成功奥秘：
● 训练刻苦；
● 拥有坚定的意志；
3) 她的成功给你的启示 (至少两点)。
要求：
1) 须包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥，条理清晰；
2) 词数：80左右 (开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。
3) 参考词汇：跳水 diving；十米台 10-meter platform；亚运会：the Asian Games
A Role Model Around Me
My dear fellow students,
Today I’m glad to introduce my role model to you.
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12．本模块以“Sports life”为话题，谈论了运动员刘翔，让我们领略了他的风采，请你以“My hero—Liu Xiang”为题，根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，简要介绍一下这位体育明星。
开篇点题：刘翔是一个非常成功的运动员 (sportsman)。
成长过程：1983年出生在上海；1993年他开始在一所体育学校训练；他的跨栏天赋在1998年受到关注。
主要成就：2001年赢得了他的第一个110米跨栏国际赛冠军；他在2004年赢得了奥运会金牌；2012年他又回到了世界第一的位置。
人物评价：……
My hero—Liu Xiang
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13．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点：
1. Who is your role model
2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most
3. What can you learn from him/her
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is
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14．假如你是李华，本期你校英文报中的Famous People栏目将要介绍我国著名的短跑运动员苏炳添，现面向广大学生征稿。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
1. 1989年8月29日出生于广东省中山市。
2. 小时候喜欢跑步，于2009年加入国家队。
3. 在2018年雅加达亚运会男子100米比赛中夺得金牌。
4. 在2020年东京奥运会上，成为首位进入奥运百米决赛的中国人。
5. 你认为……
参考词汇：2018年雅加达亚运会 the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games
2020年东京奥运会 the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games
奥运100米决赛 Olympic 100-metre final
要求：
1. 词数：80—100。
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country. He
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15．假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在收集“时代呼唤英雄”的主题材料，计划做一期“英雄人物”的系列推送。请你用英语写一封信，告诉你的笔友 Peter 你推荐的心目中的英雄，他/她是谁，做了什么以及你的推荐理由。
要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语： love, train, study, never give up, take pride in
提示问题：Who is your hero
What did he/she do
Why do you want to recommend him/her
Dear Peter,
How is it going I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart.
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Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
16．世界上有许多伟大的人，他们在某个领域有着突出的成就，他们的精神值得我们学习。在众多拥有杰出贡献的人中，谁是对你影响最大的人？为什么？请你根据以下提示，以The person who has influenced me most为题写一篇短文。
写作提示：
1. Who is the person
2. What’s his/her achievement
3. What have you learnt from him/her
要求：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 100词左右。
The person who has influenced me most
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17．请根据以下提示以“My Hero”为题写一篇文章介绍刘翔的经历。
Time Event
2012 return to first place
2008 suffer from foot problem
2004 win Olympic gold medal
2001 win his first international 110 m hurdles race
1998 hurdling ability noticed
1994（Grade 4） start training at a sports school
1983 born in Shanghai
注意：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥。
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18．第19届杭州亚运会中，20位深圳健儿参赛，拿到了10金5银4铜的好成绩。假如你是小记者李华，采访了乒乓球团体赛冠军林高远，请根据你的采访写一篇报道。内容包括：
1．1995年，林高远出生于广东省深圳市一个普通家庭。
2．4岁时，爱上乒乓球运动。5岁时，正式乒乓球训练。
3．从2009年至今，在国际赛事中拿下超过20个冠军。
4．给大家的建议：保持好心态，永不言弃。
5．补充2点自己对林高远的评价。
参考词汇：普通的ordinary 银牌silver medal 铜牌bronze medal
要求：1．要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，衔接连贯。
2．文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。
3．短文不少于80词。
The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19．“铁榔头”郎平曾经是中国女排的主教练，她的优秀事迹和为中国女排所做的贡献值得我们传颂和学习。假设你的偶像是郎平，请你根据下面表格的提示，写一篇关于她的文章，发表在学校英文报刊上。
个人信息 1960年12月10日出生于中国天津 受父亲的影响，从小就对排球感兴趣
职业生涯 作为运动员，刻苦训练，参加国家队的选拔，成功地赢得了许多奖牌，证明了…… 作为教练，高标准严要求，队员处于困境时……带领中国女排多次夺冠，我们以她为骄傲……
你的感受 作为青少年，我从她身上学到了……
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
中国女排：Chinese women’s volleyball team
夺冠：win the championship
The Hero in My Heart
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20．岁月不负追梦人，中国日报 《卓越的时代》 (Era of the excellent)系列纪录片，带我们了解了二十大代表汪顺的圆梦故事；他的故事影响着当代青少年。现请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇题为“The person who has influenced me most”的文章。
内容要点：
(1)二十几岁，国家游泳队队员；
(2)六岁开始游泳，想成为全世界最好的游泳健将。曾在比赛中失败但没有灰心，已取得了许多成就：参加过三届奥运会，在2021东京奥运会上刷新了亚洲记录；现在仍在刻苦训练；每天训练至少六小时；
(3)起初不理解他为何如此刻苦地训练，似乎……，现在意识到……。
Asia n.亚洲 Asian adj.亚洲的 the Tokyo 2021 Olympics 2021东京奥运会
注意事项：
(1)表达清楚语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括提示的所有信息，可适当发挥
(3)词数：100词左右
(4)不得出现真实姓名和校名等
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
My Role Model
Role models have a great influence on our life. Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practicing playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍Spud Webb成为自己榜样的原因；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①keep on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up.（but连接的并列句）
2．例文
The hero in my heart
Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—Lang Ping.
Lang Ping is an excellent coach as well as a great volleyball player. In 1984, she, as a player, helped the Chinese women’s volleyball team win their first Olympic gold medal. And under her leadership, the Chinese women’s volleyball team has won many medals since 2013. Whatever she does, she always tries her best. However, Lang is in poor health because of hard exercise and work. But she is always strong and has never thought of giving up. Her spirit encourages me a lot. That’s why I see her as a hero. From her, I’ve learned how to stick to my dream and make it come true.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己心目中的英雄是郎平；
第二步，介绍为什么她是我心目中的英雄；
第三步，书写结语。表达“感谢您的聆听”。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②be in poor health健康状态不好
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①Whatever she does, she always tries her best. (whatever引导的让步状语从句)
②That’s why I see her as a hero. (why引导的表语从句)
3．例文：
My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is my hero!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①kept on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句)
4．例文
Ma Long
There are many excellent national ping-pong players in China, but I like Ma Long best. Now, I’d like to introduce him to you.
Ma Long is a famous table tennis player, who is from Anshan, Liaoning. He is 1.75 meters tall. Ma started playing table tennis at the age of 5 in 1993. In 1999, he was taught by Wang Jun, the champion of the 34th World Table Tennis Championships. Later, in 2003, he joined the national team.
Ma has won many awards. In April 2019, he won the World Table tennis Men’s Single Competition, achieving three consecutive championships. In 2020, he got the doubles gold medal at the China Table Tennis Championships. And in 2021, he won the gold medal in the men’s singles finals at the Tokyo Olympics.
What a great table tennis player Ma Long is! I am proud of him.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：最喜欢马龙，引出话题：介绍马龙；
第二步，依据表格提示，逐一介绍马龙的情况，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of 为……感到自豪
②at the age of 在……岁时
[高分句型]
①Ma Long is a famous table tennis player, who is from Anshan, Liaoning. (who引导的非限制性定语从句)
②What a great table tennis player Ma Long is! (what引导的感叹句)
5．例文：
Role models in life set good examples for us. Yao Ming is my role model in my life. He is my favorite basketball player in the world. And he is known for his charity work. He founded his Foundation in 2008. He has built five schools in Sichuan and other areas. He has offered lots of money to help the people in trouble. He always asks us to protect the animals on the earth. I think he is very kind and helpful.
I must learn from him and help people in need around us. We’ll try my best to support him and make a contribution to our society.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是话题作文；
②时态：本文一般采用一般现在时；
③提示：注意语意连贯，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的榜样，说出具体原因。
第二步，介绍榜样如何影响自己。
[亮点词汇]
①set examples for 树立榜样
②be known for以……被知晓
③in trouble在困境中
④try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①He has built five schools in Sichuan and other areas.(现在完成时)
②I think he is very kind and helpful.(宾语从句)
6．例文：
Have you heard about Zheng Qinwen Below is some detailed information about her.
Zheng Qinwen, a young and talented Chinese tennis player, was born on October 8th, 2002, in Hubei. From a young age, Zheng showed great interest and passion about tennis. In 2010, she began professional training to improve her skills. During her training, she never gave up when she met some trouble. After that, she achieved great success in international tournament in 2021 when she demonstrated her great potential in tennis. Most surprisingly, by her endless effort and steely determination, she won the first Olympic gold medal in tennis singles for China, which makes us Chinese so proud of her.
From her stories, I learned a lot. As Zheng Qinwen continues to make her mark in the tennis world, she is not only a symbol of China’s growing presence in the sport but also an inspiration to aspiring me to pursue my dream and stick to it!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中郑钦文的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍郑钦文的出生日期和籍贯；
第二步，具体阐述郑钦文主要经历；
第三步，书写启发和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②achieve great success取得巨大的成功
③continue to do sth.继续做某事
[高分句型]
①Most surprisingly, by her endless effort and steely determination, she won the first Olympic gold medal in tennis singles for China, which makes us Chinese so proud of her. (which引导非限制定语从句)
②As Zheng Qinwen continues to make her mark in the tennis world, she is not only a symbol of China’s growing presence in the sport but also an inspiration to aspiring me to pursue my dream and stick to it! (固定结构not only...but also...)
7．例文
The Sport I Love
There’s no doubt that sports are important in our life. After watching the 33rd Summer Olympic Games, I’m crazier about sports.
My name is Jack. I am a 12-year-old boy in Class One, Grade Seven. As for me, I am talented in playing ping-pong. It’s a national and popular sport for most of the Chinese people. It’s of great fun for me to play ping-pong. I always play it with my classmates after school in the park.
Sports are good for me in three ways. First, I can keep healthy because I often exercise. Second, I can make many new friends and have a good time together. Third, the relaxing sports can make me happy so I can grow up and study better.
Quan Hongchan is from a poor family of Zhanjiang, Guangdong. Every day, she usually jumps 200 or 300 times on the ground. Though it’s hard for her, she never gives up. She is my hero. I should learn from her. If I stick to my dream and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed one day.
Let’s take an active part in doing sports from now on. I believe doing sports will make our life more meaningful and colorful.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍奥运会对自己的影响，从而引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动及相关情况；
第三步，阐述喜欢运动的理由；
第四步，介绍全红婵以及向她学习什么；
第五步，书写总结，呼吁大家积极运动。
［亮点词汇］
① take an active part in 积极参加
② be talented in 在某方面有天赋
［高分句型］
① Though it’s hard for her, she never gives up. (though引导让步状语从句)
② If I stick to my dream and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed one day. (if引导条件状语从句)
8．例文
A role model around me
Today, I’m glad to introduce my role model to you. Her name is Quan Hongchan. She is one of the best divers in China. And she won many medals.
She was born in a poor family on 28th March, 2007 in Zhanjiang. She is a 16-year-old girl. There are five children in her family and she is the third one. When she was 7 years old, she started training in Zhanjiang Sports School. She trained so hard that she was chosen for the national team in 2020. What’s more, Quan Hongchan, the 14-year-old girl, won the gold medal at the Tokyo Olympic Games in 2021. And she broke the world record.
Quan is a symbol of courage and success. We are really proud of her.
【解析】［总体分析］
① 题材：本题是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：介绍自己心目中的模范少年全红婵，需要遵照所给要求写作，适当补充细节，理由充分合理，三观正确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，整体介绍自己的心目中的模范少年，引出下文；
第二步，介绍全红婵的生活，学习以及训练获奖情况，要注意要点覆盖全面，价值观正确；
第三步，总结全文，表达对于模范的感情。
［亮点词汇］
① introduce…to… 向……介绍……
② the world record 世界纪录
③ a symbol of ……的象征
［高分句型］
① When she was 7 years old, she started training in Zhanjiang Sports School. （时间状语从句）
② She trained so hard that she was chosen for the national team in 2020. （被动语态）
9．例文：
Dear Tom,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to share with you my experience about the Paris Olympic Games this summer holiday. This summer I watched the performance of Chinese athletes in the Paris Olympic Games. One athlete who impressed me deeply was Zheng Qinwen. She beat all the players and finally won the tennis women’s singles championship. This is a historic breakthrough for China.
Zheng Qinwen’s performance not only won honor for China, but also inspired many young athletes. I’m proud of her. I will follow her example and never give up in the face of difficulties.
Let’s make a date to go to the LOS Angeles Olympic Games in 2028.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[整体介绍]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于书信作文；
②时态：采用“一般过去时” ；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍观赛经历；
第二步，讲述观赛感悟；
第三步，相约2028一起去洛杉矶看奥运。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also....不但……而且……
②be proud of以……为傲
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①One athlete who impressed me deeply was Zheng Qinwen. （定语从句）
10． My hero is Sun Yingsha. She is a talented Chinese table tennis player.
She was born in 2000 in Shijiazhuang, Hebei province. She started playing table tennis for good health when she was 5. And she was strict with herself and trained hard. Ten years later, she went into the National Team. After so many years’ hard-working effort, she finally got her first gold medal and silver medal in the Tokyo Olympic Games in 2021, then she quickly became well-known to us all. Now, she became a successful table tennis player.
It’s amazing that she can do the best at such a young age and we are all proud of her. I think she was a good model for us. We should learn a lot from her and study hard enough to make our own dreams come true.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，需要注意写作时包含提示的所有内容，可适当增加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先简单介绍孙颖莎的出生时间和出生地以引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身份、参赛经历、所获奖项”等方面重点介绍孙颖莎；
第三步，书写结语。总结孙颖莎的成就，简述对她的看法，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with对……严格
②become well-known to被熟知
③at a young age在年轻时
[高分句型]
①She started playing table tennis for good health when she was 5.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It’s amazing that she can do the best at such a young age and we are all proud of her.（it作形式主语）
11．例文
A Role Model Around Me
My dear fellow students,
Today I’m glad to introduce my role model to you. Her name is Quan Hongchan. She is a 14-year-old girl. She was born in a poor family in Zhanjiang on March 28, 2007. She began to receive diving training in 2014. This year, she won the gold medal in the 10-meter platform competition in the 19th Asian Games, Hangzhou.
It is her hard training that makes her so successful. She jumped from the platform into the water more than 400 times every day. She also has a strong will. She hopes to win the prize to have the money for her mother’s treatment.
I think I should learn from her. I should never give up however hard the life is. And at the same time, I should be filial. Through my hard work and effort, I can look after my family well.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，介绍全红婵的个人信息；
第二步，介绍她成功的秘诀；
第三步，谈谈自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②learn from sb.向某人学习
③give up放弃
④at the same time同时
⑤look after照顾
[高分句型]
It is her hard training that makes her so successful. (that引导的定语从句)
12．例文
My hero—Liu Xiang
Liu Xiang is a very successful sportsman.
He was born in Shanghai in 1983. He started training at a sports school in 1993. And his hurdling ability was noticed in 1998.
Liu Xiang won his first international 110m hurdles race in 2001. He won the Olympic gold medal in 2004. He returned to the first place in the world in 2012.
Liu Xiang is not only a great athlete but also an inspiration to many for his perseverance and dedication. Therefore, we’ll continue to take great pride in him.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单描述刘翔是个怎样的人；
第二步，具体阐述刘翔的成长过程及主要成就；
第三步，书写结语。表达对刘翔的敬佩。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②be noticed in被注意到
③not only…but also…不但……而且……
④take pride in引以为傲
[高分句型]
Liu Xiang is not only a great athlete but also an inspiration to many for his perseverance and dedication.(not only…but also…连接的并列句)
13．例文
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①kept on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句)
14．例文
Su Bingtian is a famous sportsman in our country.
He was born on 29th August, 1989, in Zhongshan, Guangdong. When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day. In 2009, he joined the national team. And after that, he won lots of competitions. He won a gold medal in the men’s 100-metre race at the 2018 Jakarta Asian Games. At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final.
I think he is a sports hero. Although he is over 30, he still continues running. I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点提示，适当增加细节，行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍苏炳添的基本信息；
第二步，具体阐述苏炳添的参赛经历及所获奖项；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①practice doing sth.练习做某事
②so... that如此……以致于
③learn from向……学习
④so that以便于
[高分句型]
①When he was a boy, he liked running very much and practiced running every day.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②At the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, he ran so fast that he became the first Chinese to reach the Olympic 100-metre final.（so... that引导的结果状语从句）
③Although he is over 30, he still continues running.（although引导的让步状语从句）
④I should learn from him and work hard so that I can do something for our country in the future.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
15．例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart.
Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. She started playing table tennis when she was five. She trained hard, so she became a great player later. She has won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. She began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and then attended university abroad. Seven years later, she completed her doctor’s degree at Cambridge University.
I recommend her because I think she is a good player as well as a good student. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the best and she is a true hero. I take great pride in her.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己心目中的英雄，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己心目中的英雄；
第三步，介绍推荐她的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①stop doing sth.停止做某事
②as well as和
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. (when引导的时间状语从句)
16．例文
The person who has influenced me most
Yao Ming is the person who has influenced me most.
Yao Ming was a Chinese basketball player. He played it so well that he was accepted by the NBA. Later, he became one of the best players in the NBA. After he retired from the NBA, he made great contributions to charity work.
I admire Yao Ming because he is not only a great sportsman, but also a man full of love. He cares about children’s education and makes efforts to protect wild animals. From him, I have learnt that people should try their best to make their dreams come true. And, after achieving their dreams, people should do something meaningful to make the world a better place.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作提示”中任何一个要点，可适当添加细节，但要突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍对你影响最大的这个人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人有哪些成就；
第三步，进一步介绍你从这个人身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① make great contributions to 为……作出巨大贡献
② not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③ try one’s best 尽某人最大的努力
[高分句型]
① He played it so well that he was accepted by the NBA.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
② From him, I have learnt that people should try their best to make their dreams come true.（that引导的宾语从句）
17．例文
My Hero
Liu Xiang is a hero in my heart. He was born in Shanghai. He started training at a sports school in the fourth grade of 1994. He noticed his ability to hurdle in 1998. He won his first international 110 m hurdles race in 2001. He won Olympic gold medal in 2004. He suffered from foot problem in 2008. He returned to first place in 2012. He is a very hardworking athlete. He is very strict with himself. I want to learn from him and contribute my own strength to the construction of our country.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文。
②时态：时态为一般过去时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，将经历逐一写完整，适当添加细节。
【写作步骤】第一步，用“My Hero”来引出重点介绍的刘翔。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据给出的提示，按时间先后顺序逐一写出。
第三步，写出刘翔能成为自己心目中英雄的原因，并简单阐述对你的积极影响。
【亮点词汇】①be strict with对……严格
②learn from向……学习
【高分句型】I want to learn from him and contribute my own strength to the construction of our country.（and并列句）
18．范文：
The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. We have the pleasure of interviewing Lin Gaoyuan, the champion of the table tennis team competition. He was born in an ordinary family in Shenzhen, Guangdong Province in 1995. At the age of 4, he fell in love with table tennis. Then when he was 5 years old, he began his formal table tennis training. Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him.
He thinks whatever difficulties we meet, we should keep a good attitude and never give up.
I think he is very modest and honest. He never shows off what he has achieved. Instead, he sticks to practicing every day.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇新闻报道，属于材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍林高远的个人信息；
第二步，阐述林高远的建议；
第三步，阐述自己对其的评价；
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上
②be proud of骄傲
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him（定语从句）
②He never shows off what he has achieved. （宾语从句）
19．例文
The Hero in My Heart
Do you know the “Iron Hammer” She is a hero to Chinese sports fans. Her real name is Lang Ping. Lang Ping was born in Tianjin on 10th Dec. 1960. Influenced by her father, she has been interested in volleyball since she was young. As a volleyball player, she practised hard and tried out for the national team. She succeeded in winning many prizes. She proved that Chinese women could play volleyball well. As a coach, she was very strict and worked to high standards. She always cheered her team members up when they were in trouble. She thinks the whole team should fight for the last minute. Through hard work, the Chinese women’s volleyball team has won many games. We are proud of her.
The spirit of never giving up has impressed me a lot. From her story, I realize that I should never give up when I am in trouble.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍郎平的个人信息，职业生涯；
第二步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③succeed in doing sth成功做某事
[高分句型]
①Influenced by her father, she has been interested in volleyball since she was young.（since引导时间状语从句）
②She always cheered her team members up when they were in trouble. （when引导时间状语从句）
20．例文
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Wang Shun. He is twenty years old. And he is a swimmer in the national swimming team.
He started to swim at 6 and wanted to be the best swimmer in the world. He used to fail in the games but he doesn’t lose heart. Wang Shun has made many achievements. He took part in the Olympics three times and he broke the Asian record in the Tokyo 2021 Olympics. Now he is still working hard. He practices for at least 6 hours every day.
I didn’t understand why he practised so hard at first. It seemed that he needn’t spend so much time practicing swimming. Now I realize that the talent is part of success, hard work is more important. He is a real man who always works hard.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时、一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的重要信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，介绍“对我影响最大的人”；
第二步：具体阐述对方的经历及成就；
第三步：书写结语，描述对方队自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②lose heart失去信心
③take part in参加
④spend+时间+doing sth花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①The person who has influenced me most is Wang Shun.（定语从句）
②Now I realize that the talent is part of success, hard work is more important.（宾语从句）
③I didn’t understand why he practised so hard at first.（宾语从句）
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