(共18张PPT)
Using language
Write A Letter To The Editor About Your Lifestyle
UNIT 2 HEALTHY LIFESTYLE
To read two letters and complete a table
To analyse the organization of the letters
To learn to write a letter about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change
Lead-in
Think about the following questions
If there is a summer camp organised by the magazine Healthy Life, would you like to join Why or why not What do you expect to learn there
Reading
Two students attended the summer camp organised by the magazine Healthy Life and wrote to the editor. Read the letters and then complete the table on page 21.
Information Wang Lu
Problem did not feel _______________
felt ________________, lacked __________
got _____________, experienced __________________
Decision to ______________________
to ______________________
well
sleepy and dizzy
passion
flu easily
many toothaches
eat no sugar
exercise regularly
Reading
Two students attended the summer camp organised by the magazine Healthy Life and wrote to the editor. Read the letters and then complete the table on page 21.
Information Wang Lu
Action stopped _____________________________
___________________________
exercises every day for _________________
Result more ______________________ in ________________________
sleeps _____________, no longer __________________________________
feels like ____________________________
buying sweets, biscuits, and sugary
at least 30 minutes
soundly
both body and mind
dynamic and stronger
suffers from a flu virus or toothaches
in control of her own life
drinks
Reading
Two students attended the summer camp organised by the magazine Healthy Life and wrote to the editor. Read the letters and then complete the table on page 21.
Information George Fielding
Problem felt ______________
felt even more ____________ after _________________________________
Decision to ______________________________ ________________________________
Action goes _______________________________
Result feels much more _____________________
feels he can _________________________
stressed out
worn out
playing computer games
other ways to relax
take control of his life and find
rock climbing monthly with his dad
change himself for the better
energetic
Writing
Analyze the organization of the letters. Label the paragraphs using the letters below. Some paragraphs may cover more than one topic.
A. identifying problem(s)
B. considering what to do
C. what he/she has done to change
D. the results
Writing
Analyze the organization of the letters. Label the paragraphs using the letters below. Some paragraphs may cover more than one topic.
A. identifying problem(s)
B. considering what to do
C. what he/she has done to change
D. the results
Letter 1
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3 and 4
Paragraph 5
Writing
Analyze the organization of the letters. Label the paragraphs using the letters below. Some paragraphs may cover more than one topic.
A. identifying problem(s)
B. considering what to do
C. what he/she has done to change
D. the results
Letter 2
Paragraph 1 and 2
Paragraph 3 and 4
Paragraph 5
Paragraph 6
Writing
The magazine Healthy Life is organising this year’s summer camp. They invite interested teenagers to write to the editor about how they plan to change their bad habits. The campers will be chosen accordingly. Write a letter to the editor about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change.
What lifestyle habit you would like to change
Why you want to change
How you plan to change
What result you hope to see
Writing
To write a letter to the editor. Use the organization of the letters above to help you.
写作指导:我们前面阅读的两封信中作者都在陈述过去的成功经验,因此主要使用过去时,而接下来我们要写的信是介绍改变坏习惯的行动计划,应该用一般将来时。
Writing
Think, Discuss and Share
What lifestyle habit you would like to change
Computer Game Addiction
Overeating Unhealthy Food
Staying up Late
Overspending
have difficulty in waking up early
be also constantly late
overeat and snack frequently
lose track of time and fall asleep in the early hours of the morning with my phone
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Writing
Think, Discuss and Share
Why you want to change
be always tired during the day and often feel worn out
be stressed under time pressure all day long
be struggling to keep up with my peers
want to get my life back on track
want to find the discipline to change my sleeping habits and overcome my phone addiction
also want to find a healthier eating and exercise regime and stick to it
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Writing
Think, Discuss and Share
How you plan to change
would like to attend your boot camp
take the steps necessary to firstly reduce my dependency on my phone
adopt a more healthy diet and eliminate comfort eating
become a better time manager balancing exercise with study commitments
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Writing
Think, Discuss and Share
What result you hope to see
a better and more refreshing sleeping pattern
Gain time to focus on my studies
have a healthy work-life balance
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Writing
How to write a good feedback letter
A good feedback
letter
words and phrases
structure
Who
To whom
Beginning:
(Background, purpose)
Body:
(problems+decisions+
actions+results )
Ending:
(Inspire others to take action)
Advanced expressions of identifying problems, decribing decisions, actions and results.
Language features
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Tense (Past tense+Present tense)
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