Unit 1 写作指导:初中生活的第一周
写作任务
假如你是王森浩,升入七年级一周后加入了你校的英语俱乐部。俱乐部下周的活动是介
绍自己初中生活的第一周,请你用英语写一篇短文为下周的活动做准备。
审题
本次写作任务要求用英语介绍自己初中生活的第一周,其写作要点如下:
内容:介绍自己初中生活的第一周。
文体:记叙文。
人称:第一人称和第三人称。
时态:以一般过去时为主。
头脑风暴
课程学习 初中生活的第一周 课外活动
同学和老师 遇到的问题…
素材
常用单词和短语
在横线上填写单词或短语。
课程学习
maths, (1)_________________( 生物), history, English, geography, Chinese, moral education and law, information technology ...
interesting, boring, difficult / hard, easy ...
同学和老师
kind, friendly, (2)_________( 愿意帮忙的), hard-working, humorous (幽默的), patient
(耐心的), easy-going (随和的), knowledgeable (知识渊博的) ...
课外活动
join the (3)_________________( 音乐) / sports / cooking / debate (辩论) / ... club ...
do team activities, (4)_________________( 玩游戏), sing songs, read poems ...
遇到的问题
have no friends, feel lonely (孤独的), miss (想念) friends from primary school, have too
much homework ...
Key:
(1) biology
(2) helpful
(3) music
(4) play games
常用句型
1. The life was ... because ...
2. My favourite subject / teacher is ...
3. It's hard / difficult / interesting / ... to ...
4. It made me ...
5. I will try my best to ...
6. I hope that ...
布局
根据括号内的提示,补全短文。
My first week of junior high school life
整体描述初中生活的第一周
Hello everyone! I'm Wang Senhao. My first week of junior high school life was
bittersweet (甜中有苦的).
具体描述
The life was sweet because I like many things here. I learned many new subjects like
History and information technology. _______________(介绍最喜欢的科目). It's
interesting. Also, I met many friendly classmates and teachers. _________(介绍最喜欢的
老师). She is knowledgeable and I can learn a lot from her. And I had a good time after
school. ___________________(介绍自己的课后活动). I made a few friends in it. The life
was bitter, too. More subjects brought more homework. ___________(描述自己的感受).
对初中生活的展望
My junior high school life will be sweeter after I get used to (适应) it. I will try my best to
make it happen.
介绍自己最喜欢的科目和老师然后说明其原因时,用连词 because 将两个单句连接
来,增强文章的逻辑性。
从文章第一段可知“我”对初中生活第一周的描述将从“甜”和“苦”两个方面展开。描
述完“甜”的部分后,用表示转折关系的词 however 引出“苦”的部分,使文章脉络清晰、
行文井然有序。
参考范文
My first week of junior high school life
Hello everyone! I'm Wang Senhao. My first week of junior high school life was
Bittersweet.
The life was sweet because I like many things here. I learned many new subjects like
History and information technology. My favourite subject is information technology
because it's interesting. Also, I met many friendly classmates and teachers. My favourite teacher is Mrs. King because she is knowledgeable and I can learn a lot from her. And I had
a good time after school. I join a debate club and made a few friends in it. The life was
bitter, too. More subjects brought more homework. It made me a bit sad.
My junior high school life will be sweeter after I get used to it. I will try my best to
make it happen.