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热点话题预测八 人与自然之历险脱困
【写作指导】
在读后续写中涉及的常见话题里,大多数情况下是遭遇像狗熊、狼等猛兽。(如2017年浙江6月卷“野外遇到狼的袭击”)
【词汇积累】
growl n.&v.咆哮 pant n.&v.喘息,喘气
whine n.&v.哀鸣 lope v.(尤指动物)轻跳着奔跑
squeak n.短促的尖叫声;v.尖叫 lunge at猛扑
howl n.&v.嚎叫 tear open撕开
whimper n.&v.呜咽 tear at撕裂
wag n.&v.摇摆 bear down逼近
claw n.爪子;v.撕扯,抓 immense strides大踏步
sniff v.嗅;n.吸气,一股气味 catch up with追赶上
polar bear北极熊 brown bear棕熊
grizzly bear灰熊 black bear黑熊
【佳句积累】
1.With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf.
他们手里什么也没有,不敢与狼搏斗。
2.Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf.
然后,麦克跳下了自行车,准备与狼搏斗。
3.In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly.
与此同时,狼可能感觉到了周围人们的威胁,所以它开始慢慢地后退。
4.Then it charged at the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag.
然后它冲向麦克的自行车后面,撕开了他的帐篷袋。
5.A bit later they spotted a wolf loping with immense strides alongside a man on a bike.
不久之后,他们发现一匹狼在骑车人的旁边大步疾跑。
6.He just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.
它只是咆哮着,又试图用它那巨大的爪子撕掉栅栏。
7.He clawed, bit, and shoved the wire mesh.He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
他抓、咬、推铁丝网。他用后腿站起来,推着木栅栏的柱子。
8.At the sight of a huge timber wolf, I froze in my tracks.
一看到一只巨大的灰狼,我就僵住了脚步。
9.Jim's muscles twitched.All he wanted was to get away from here.
吉姆的肌肉抽搐。他只想离开这里。
10.There was a dead silence except for the sound of her heavy breathing and sniffing.
除了她沉重的呼吸声和嗅探声之外,一片寂静。
11.My heart in my mouth, I sat down eight feet from her.
我的心提到了嗓子眼,我坐在离她八英尺远的地方。
12.He could hear nothing but the sound of his hearts beating violently in his chest.
他什么也听不见,只有他的心在他的胸口剧烈地跳动着的声音。
13.His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated.
他的心跳如此剧烈,以至于他感到几乎要窒息了。
14.So frightened was he that he was frozen on the spot.
他吓得当场僵住了。
15.A shiver of fright ran through him when the wolf stared at him in silence.
当狼默默地盯着他时,他吓得浑身发抖。
【真题引领】
(浙江卷改编)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man, that's a big dog!” he thought.But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped.He found out his can of hear spray.With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head.But a minute later, it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意:续写词数应为 150 左右。
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.
【语篇解读】 本文以狼为线索展开,讲述了Mac在骑行过程中遇到了一只狼,他与狼单独搏斗了一会儿,但狼穷追不舍。此时,Paul和Becky正开车前往阿拉斯加,起初他们认为这只狼是一只狗靠近后才发现它是狼。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“汽车突然在他面前停住了。”可知,第一段可描写车上下来两个人帮助Mac,但他们势单力薄,并没能赶走狼,双方陷入僵局。
②由第二段首句内容“几分钟后,另外两名骑自行车的人也到了。”可知,第二段可描写越来越多的人加入到救援之中,众人合力将狼赶走。
2.续写线索:Paul和Becky试图赶走狼→但没有成功→越来越多的人加入到救援之中→最后成功地赶跑了狼→Mac获救
【参考范文】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help.With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf.However, they still approached to the wolf bravely.At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf.Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined in the fight with the wolf.More and more cars stopped.Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf.In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly.Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
【高分佳句】
①At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.(现在分词短语作状语)
②Then came the deadlock.(倒装句)
③They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
【模拟提升】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Evan was 13, he wanted to have a dog.His mom Octavia refused since raising a dog would need lots of attention and care.
The boy once joined the Forest Exploration club of his school where Octavia taught.And the mother was in charge of the club.One morning, guided by Octavia, Evan and his schoolmates went hiking in a forest.During the hike, some purple flowers caught Evan's eye.Evan thought those beautiful flowers could surely impress his mother.So he walked to the riverside secretly to pick those flowers.Unfortunately, Evan got separated from the group and got lost.
He anxiously kept walking, hoping he could catch up with the group.Suddenly, a dog appeared.At first, Evan thought it might be a wolf, so he tensed and stood there still.When the dog got closer, he saw its tail wagging (摇摆) gently.
“Oh, buddy.You scared me,” he said, petting the dog.“You must be a stray (走失的) dog, huh ” The dog looked at him with the most sincere expression.Evan wanted to find his way home, not only for himself but also for the animal.Therefore, he walked again.The moment Octavia realized Evan was gone, she and others began looking for Evan desperately, but in vain.
It was getting darker and colder.Evan discovered a cave.He went inside and made a fire to keep warm.He knew his mom and other schoolmates must have been searching the forest for him.“Buddy, let's wait here and see if we can hear my group calling,” Evan told the dog.And they sat near each other.Before long, Evan fell asleep.
At some point, he heard the sound of animal growling (低声吼叫) and noticed the dog at the entrance of their shelter.The dog was growling at something that Evan couldn't see well.But there was another animal growling back.Evan wiped his eyes and tried to see what made the dog so alert and angry.He then saw a big fox, and said to himself, “Thank goodness! I'm not alone!” But he was still frightened.The fox moved forward, wanting to attack Evan.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Without stepping back, the brave dog continued barking, ready to attack the fox.
“It's my mom! Let's go!” Evan excitedly told the dog and ran to Octavia.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Evan一直想要一只狗,一次去森林探险时,不小心和大家走散了,在寻找出路的过程中,遇见了一只流浪狗,于是和这只狗一起寻找出路,但是不幸的是,天黑了也没找到,Evan和这只狗就躲进了一个洞里。夜晚来了只狐狸要攻击Evan。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“勇敢的狗没有后退,继续狂吠,准备攻击狐狸。”可知,第一段可描写狗保护Evan的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘是我妈妈!我们走吧!’Evan兴奋地告诉了狗,然后跑向Octavia。”可知,第二段可描写Evan的妈妈找到了他,他告诉妈妈昨天的经过,决定收养狗。
2.续写线索:天黑遇到狐狸攻击——狗保护Evan——妈妈找到Evan——告诉经过——收养狗
【参考范文】
Without stepping back, the brave dog continued barking, ready to attack the fox. Daring not to step forward anymore, the fox stood still for minutes while the dog remained before Evan, keeping barking and exposing his sharp teeth.Eventually, the fox left; the dog stopped growling but stayed aware.Minutes later, the dog eased and returned to Evan's side, providing much-needed warmth.Evan felt safe and so thankful.When day broke, Evan continued walking to look for his group, and the dog accompanied him.At last, he heard his mom yelling out his name.
“It's my mom! Let's go!” Evan excitedly told the dog and ran to Octavia. “Evan! Evan!” Octavia cried and Evan rushed into her arms.Evan's eyes clouded with tears.He hugged his mother and apologized for secretly walking away from the group.Then, Evan explained what the dog had done for him and begged not to leave the dog.Octavia happily nodded.After returning home, Octavia prepared a bowl for the dog and said, “Thank you for keeping my boy safe.” During the following days, they didn't find the dog's owner.Thus, Evan asked, “Mom, can we keep him ” “Sure, he's a family member now,” Octavia agreed.
【高分佳句】
①When day broke, Evan continued walking to look for his group, and the dog accompanied him.(When引导时间状语从句)
②Then, Evan explained what the dog had done for him and begged not to leave the dog.(what引导宾语从句)
【写作指导】
在读后续写中涉及的常见话题里,大多数情况下是遭遇像狗熊、狼等猛兽。(如2017年浙江6月卷“野外遇到狼的袭击”)
【词汇积累】
growl n.&v.咆哮 pant n.&v.喘息,喘气
whine n.&v.哀鸣 lope v.(尤指动物)轻跳着奔跑
squeak n.短促的尖叫声;v.尖叫 lunge at猛扑
howl n.&v.嚎叫 tear open撕开
whimper n.&v.呜咽 tear at撕裂
wag n.&v.摇摆 bear down逼近
claw n.爪子;v.撕扯,抓 immense strides大踏步
sniff v.嗅;n.吸气,一股气味 catch up with追赶上
polar bear北极熊 brown bear棕熊
grizzly bear灰熊 black bear黑熊
【佳句积累】
1.With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf.
他们手里什么也没有,不敢与狼搏斗。
2.Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf.
然后,麦克跳下了自行车,准备与狼搏斗。
3.In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly.
与此同时,狼可能感觉到了周围人们的威胁,所以它开始慢慢地后退。
4.Then it charged at the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag.
然后它冲向麦克的自行车后面,撕开了他的帐篷袋。
5.A bit later they spotted a wolf loping with immense strides alongside a man on a bike.
不久之后,他们发现一匹狼在骑车人的旁边大步疾跑。
6.He just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.
它只是咆哮着,又试图用它那巨大的爪子撕掉栅栏。
7.He clawed, bit, and shoved the wire mesh.He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
他抓、咬、推铁丝网。他用后腿站起来,推着木栅栏的柱子。
8.At the sight of a huge timber wolf, I froze in my tracks.
一看到一只巨大的灰狼,我就僵住了脚步。
9.Jim's muscles twitched.All he wanted was to get away from here.
吉姆的肌肉抽搐。他只想离开这里。
10.There was a dead silence except for the sound of her heavy breathing and sniffing.
除了她沉重的呼吸声和嗅探声之外,一片寂静。
11.My heart in my mouth, I sat down eight feet from her.
我的心提到了嗓子眼,我坐在离她八英尺远的地方。
12.He could hear nothing but the sound of his hearts beating violently in his chest.
他什么也听不见,只有他的心在他的胸口剧烈地跳动着的声音。
13.His heart beat so violently that he felt nearly suffocated.
他的心跳如此剧烈,以至于他感到几乎要窒息了。
14.So frightened was he that he was frozen on the spot.
他吓得当场僵住了。
15.A shiver of fright ran through him when the wolf stared at him in silence.
当狼默默地盯着他时,他吓得浑身发抖。
【真题引领】
(浙江卷改编)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home.He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man, that's a big dog!” he thought.But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped.He found out his can of hear spray.With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf.A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head.But a minute later, it was by his side again.Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down.He saw a steep uphill climb before him.He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意:续写词数应为 150 左右。
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.
【语篇解读】 本文以狼为线索展开,讲述了Mac在骑行过程中遇到了一只狼,他与狼单独搏斗了一会儿,但狼穷追不舍。此时,Paul和Becky正开车前往阿拉斯加,起初他们认为这只狼是一只狗靠近后才发现它是狼。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“汽车突然在他面前停住了。”可知,第一段可描写车上下来两个人帮助Mac,但他们势单力薄,并没能赶走狼,双方陷入僵局。
②由第二段首句内容“几分钟后,另外两名骑自行车的人也到了。”可知,第二段可描写越来越多的人加入到救援之中,众人合力将狼赶走。
2.续写线索:Paul和Becky试图赶走狼→但没有成功→越来越多的人加入到救援之中→最后成功地赶跑了狼→Mac获救
【参考范文】
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help.With nothing in the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf.However, they still approached to the wolf bravely.At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf.Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined in the fight with the wolf.More and more cars stopped.Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf.In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly.Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
【高分佳句】
①At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky.(现在分词短语作状语)
②Then came the deadlock.(倒装句)
③They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
【模拟提升】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Evan was 13, he wanted to have a dog.His mom Octavia refused since raising a dog would need lots of attention and care.
The boy once joined the Forest Exploration club of his school where Octavia taught.And the mother was in charge of the club.One morning, guided by Octavia, Evan and his schoolmates went hiking in a forest.During the hike, some purple flowers caught Evan's eye.Evan thought those beautiful flowers could surely impress his mother.So he walked to the riverside secretly to pick those flowers.Unfortunately, Evan got separated from the group and got lost.
He anxiously kept walking, hoping he could catch up with the group.Suddenly, a dog appeared.At first, Evan thought it might be a wolf, so he tensed and stood there still.When the dog got closer, he saw its tail wagging (摇摆) gently.
“Oh, buddy.You scared me,” he said, petting the dog.“You must be a stray (走失的) dog, huh ” The dog looked at him with the most sincere expression.Evan wanted to find his way home, not only for himself but also for the animal.Therefore, he walked again.The moment Octavia realized Evan was gone, she and others began looking for Evan desperately, but in vain.
It was getting darker and colder.Evan discovered a cave.He went inside and made a fire to keep warm.He knew his mom and other schoolmates must have been searching the forest for him.“Buddy, let's wait here and see if we can hear my group calling,” Evan told the dog.And they sat near each other.Before long, Evan fell asleep.
At some point, he heard the sound of animal growling (低声吼叫) and noticed the dog at the entrance of their shelter.The dog was growling at something that Evan couldn't see well.But there was another animal growling back.Evan wiped his eyes and tried to see what made the dog so alert and angry.He then saw a big fox, and said to himself, “Thank goodness! I'm not alone!” But he was still frightened.The fox moved forward, wanting to attack Evan.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Without stepping back, the brave dog continued barking, ready to attack the fox.
“It's my mom! Let's go!” Evan excitedly told the dog and ran to Octavia.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Evan一直想要一只狗,一次去森林探险时,不小心和大家走散了,在寻找出路的过程中,遇见了一只流浪狗,于是和这只狗一起寻找出路,但是不幸的是,天黑了也没找到,Evan和这只狗就躲进了一个洞里。夜晚来了只狐狸要攻击Evan。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“勇敢的狗没有后退,继续狂吠,准备攻击狐狸。”可知,第一段可描写狗保护Evan的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘是我妈妈!我们走吧!’Evan兴奋地告诉了狗,然后跑向Octavia。”可知,第二段可描写Evan的妈妈找到了他,他告诉妈妈昨天的经过,决定收养狗。
2.续写线索:天黑遇到狐狸攻击——狗保护Evan——妈妈找到Evan——告诉经过——收养狗
【参考范文】
Without stepping back, the brave dog continued barking, ready to attack the fox. Daring not to step forward anymore, the fox stood still for minutes while the dog remained before Evan, keeping barking and exposing his sharp teeth.Eventually, the fox left; the dog stopped growling but stayed aware.Minutes later, the dog eased and returned to Evan's side, providing much-needed warmth.Evan felt safe and so thankful.When day broke, Evan continued walking to look for his group, and the dog accompanied him.At last, he heard his mom yelling out his name.
“It's my mom! Let's go!” Evan excitedly told the dog and ran to Octavia. “Evan! Evan!” Octavia cried and Evan rushed into her arms.Evan's eyes clouded with tears.He hugged his mother and apologized for secretly walking away from the group.Then, Evan explained what the dog had done for him and begged not to leave the dog.Octavia happily nodded.After returning home, Octavia prepared a bowl for the dog and said, “Thank you for keeping my boy safe.” During the following days, they didn't find the dog's owner.Thus, Evan asked, “Mom, can we keep him ” “Sure, he's a family member now,” Octavia agreed.
【高分佳句】
①When day broke, Evan continued walking to look for his group, and the dog accompanied him.(When引导时间状语从句)
②Then, Evan explained what the dog had done for him and begged not to leave the dog.(what引导宾语从句)