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热点话题预测三 人与自我之做人与做事(一)
【写作指导】
做人与做事为主题的文章涉及现实生活中的各个方面,如社区邻里、学校生活、亲人、朋友、职业等。此类读后续写是通过阅读文本信息,结合现实生活加以提炼总结,最后得出具有普遍意义的人生哲理来进行升华。续写时一定要传递正能量,如踏踏实实做人、实实在在办事;再如勇于拼搏努力、挑战自我等。
【词汇积累】
moral道德的 participate参加;参与
justice公平 accuse控告;谴责
injustice不公平 employ雇用
acquire获得;购得 apology道歉
eventually最终 pursue追求
judge判断 hesitate犹豫
diligent勤勉的, 刻苦的 humorous有幽默感的
smart/bright/clever聪明的 independent独立的
persevering坚持不懈的 honest诚实的
launch one's career 开启某人的职业生涯 the value of money 金钱的价值
make an apology to sb向某人道歉 boost one's confidence 增强某人的信心
be born in... 出生在…… be/come from a wealthy family 来自于一个富裕家庭
be hard on sb 对某人苛刻的 be born into a peasant family 出生于一个农民家庭
【佳句积累】
1.Hesitantly at first, then abruptly, a ripple of applause rose from the onlookers.
观众们先是迟疑,然后突然爆发出一阵掌声。
2.People's generous and selfless actions will create a ripple of goodness, which will be passed in turn from person to person.
人们的慷慨和无私行为将引发一连串的善行,这些善行反过来又会在人与人之间传递。
3.She gave him a dazzling smile.
她向他示以灿烂的微笑。
4.Hearing what he said, Alice grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her.
听了他说的话,爱丽丝咧开嘴笑了,一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。
5.Hearing his words on the phone, I hung my head shamefully, a wave of guilt sweeping over me with my face burning.
听到他在电话里说的话,我羞愧地低下了头, 一阵愧疚向我袭来, 脸上发烫。
6.I nodded back,feeling tears well up in my eyes.
我点了点头回应,感觉到泪水夺眶而出。
7.He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks/tears welling up in his eyes.
他静静地站着,泪水顺着他的脸颊流了下来/泪水涌上了他的眼眶。
8.Ruth hesitated, uncertain of how to combine honesty and diplomacy in her answer.
露丝犹豫了,不确定如何在她的回答中兼顾诚实和婉转。
9.She was torn between her love of dancing and her fear of performing in public.
她在自己的舞蹈热爱和在公众场合表演的恐惧之间感到矛盾。
10.He was torn by anger and worry.
他的内心被愤怒和忧虑撕扯着。
11.Torn by anger and worry, he couldn't/could hardly sleep all night.
他被愤怒和焦虑折磨着,整晚都睡不着。
12.Filled with happiness and excitement, Jim hugged Tim with gratitude and the whole class broke into thunderous applause.
充满了幸福和兴奋,吉姆感激地拥抱了蒂姆,全班同学都爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。
13.Seized by a sense of happiness and relief, Jim nodded at his students with a smile.
感到一阵幸福和宽慰,吉姆微笑着向他的学生们点了点头。
14.So moved were they that they stood up, expressed their sincere sorry to Jim.
他们非常感动,站了起来,向吉姆表达了真诚的歉意。
【真题引领】
(2021·浙江6月卷改编)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities.From age 14, he worked.And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team.In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals.After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, “A job's a big step to growing up.I'm glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
The pay day arrived at last.
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的父亲是一名运输牲畜的卡车司机,辛勤工作并把挣来的钱贴补家用,作者认为将来毕业后,会比父亲更有成就。作者在八年级前的那个夏天和一群孩子在邻居的农场上打工,除草挣钱,但听到父亲说,作者挣的钱可能要贴补家用的时候,作者不情愿,认为这不公平。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“发工资的日子终于到了。”可知,第一段可描写作者的工资到手后,高兴地计划自己如何使用这笔钱,不愿意交给父亲,然后看到了父亲的辛劳。
②由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知,第二段可描写作者明白了父母担心自己不懂得奉献,想通了之后,自豪地把钱交给了父亲。
2.续写线索:发工资高兴——计划用钱——不情愿把钱给父亲——发现父亲的辛劳——奉献出自己的钱——自豪
【参考范文】
The pay day arrived at last. Although the job was very tiring, I was very happy in my heart for I got something from my work.The hard work of labor was forgotten for now.I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it.“How much money have you earned ” dad asked.I was surprised, reluctant to disclose my income.The next morning, my dad's livestock truck started running.I saw my dad's hard-working figure and thought of his words “A job's a big step to growing up.”
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. They were worried that I was too selfish to give.I realized that my labor was hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! Dad never complained about unfairness! He even seemed to think that was fair.I thought, “I've only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, dad came back.I proudly took out my own money and handed it to dad.
【高分佳句】
①I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it.(“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语)
②I realized that my labor was hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents!(that引导宾语从句)
【模拟提升】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·杭州一模)
My dad and I had been looking forward to the State cross-country race of my senior year of high school, which would be the climax (顶点) of my existence.
I was the fastest runner on my team, and I was supposed to make it into the top fifteen.We had been working towards this race for three years.It was everything to me, and it was everything to my dad.He was a runner and was wild with joy by my success in running.He made it to every race, even flying home early from business trips to see me run.I always listened for his voice, which rang above the crowd—telling me to relax my arms and calling out my time.He pushed me.He cheered for me.He believed in me.We spent countless hours on the sandy canals of Arizona.Breathing in the dust of the desert, the blossoms of the orange trees, and the terrible smell of the dairy farm, we made our way across the city.We pounded miles and miles into our running shoes, marking every step towards the path to greatness.It was a journey that was just ours.A dream passed on from one generation to the next.
Then the big day came.It was hotter than normal—too hot.My throat felt like a field of cotton, cracked with the summer heat, as I waited for the gun to fire.I gazed out at the crowd; dozens of familiar faces from church and school flickered across my view.They had come for me.They were counting on me.I saw my dad set his watch, worry and excitement etched across his face.With the sound of a gunshot, the race began.
For the first two and half miles, I felt great.I had never before been so ready for something.The weeks leading up to the race were filled with hard practices and a strict diet.The scorching sun beat upon my back, blinding me with its brilliance.Nothing was going to stop me, though.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
However, without warning, my strength was running out.
I whispered, “I'm so sorry I disappointed you, Dad.”
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和父亲都期待作者能在高中最后一年的越野赛跑上获得好成绩。作者是队伍中跑得最快的,希望自己能取得前十五名的成绩,他和父亲为这次比赛努力了三年。比赛的一天终于来临,在比赛最初的2.5英里,作者感觉良好,他觉得没有什么能阻挡他获得好成绩。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然而,毫无征兆地,我的体力耗尽了。”可知,第一段可描写作者在体力耗尽的情况下,如何尽力跑过终点。
②由第二段首句内容“我低声说:‘很抱歉让你失望了,爸爸。’”可知,第二段可描写父亲安慰作者,作者并没有让父亲失望。
2.续写线索:突然体力耗尽——努力跑过终点——觉得让父亲失望——父亲安慰
【参考范文】
However, without warning, my strength was running out. My lungs fought to take in enough air, and my feet transformed into cement bricks.Neck and neck with one of my greatest rivals, I could see the finish line.I had begun the final sprint into glory when my knees buckled and my legs gave way.Nothing I could do would make them hold my weight.They were as weak as jelly.Even though I knew my dreams of victory had been destroyed, I had to finish the race.With all of the strength left in me, I got on my hands and knees and crawled, inch by inch, across the finish line.Shame pulsed through my veins as Dad squatted down and pulled me into his arms.
I whispered, “I'm so sorry I disappointed you, Dad.” He gave me a gentle smile and said, “You could never disappoint me.Sometimes these things just happen.All that matters is that you did your best.” Lifting my face, I saw my dad's eyes, in which I saw the sweat, the time, and the work we had put into our dream.The miles we had run together, all for this race, flashed across my mind.“But we worked so hard.What about our dream ” I asked.In that second, the world stood still.He reached over for my hand, holding back his own tears, and said, “You did your best to finish the race,and it is the most important. I am so proud of you.”
【高分佳句】
①I had begun the final sprint into glory when my knees buckled and my legs gave way.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Lifting my face, I saw my dad's eyes, in which I saw the sweat, the time, and the work we had put into our dream.(“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句,省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
【写作指导】
做人与做事为主题的文章涉及现实生活中的各个方面,如社区邻里、学校生活、亲人、朋友、职业等。此类读后续写是通过阅读文本信息,结合现实生活加以提炼总结,最后得出具有普遍意义的人生哲理来进行升华。续写时一定要传递正能量,如踏踏实实做人、实实在在办事;再如勇于拼搏努力、挑战自我等。
【词汇积累】
moral道德的 participate参加;参与
justice公平 accuse控告;谴责
injustice不公平 employ雇用
acquire获得;购得 apology道歉
eventually最终 pursue追求
judge判断 hesitate犹豫
diligent勤勉的, 刻苦的 humorous有幽默感的
smart/bright/clever聪明的 independent独立的
persevering坚持不懈的 honest诚实的
launch one's career 开启某人的职业生涯 the value of money 金钱的价值
make an apology to sb向某人道歉 boost one's confidence 增强某人的信心
be born in... 出生在…… be/come from a wealthy family 来自于一个富裕家庭
be hard on sb 对某人苛刻的 be born into a peasant family 出生于一个农民家庭
【佳句积累】
1.Hesitantly at first, then abruptly, a ripple of applause rose from the onlookers.
观众们先是迟疑,然后突然爆发出一阵掌声。
2.People's generous and selfless actions will create a ripple of goodness, which will be passed in turn from person to person.
人们的慷慨和无私行为将引发一连串的善行,这些善行反过来又会在人与人之间传递。
3.She gave him a dazzling smile.
她向他示以灿烂的微笑。
4.Hearing what he said, Alice grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her.
听了他说的话,爱丽丝咧开嘴笑了,一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。
5.Hearing his words on the phone, I hung my head shamefully, a wave of guilt sweeping over me with my face burning.
听到他在电话里说的话,我羞愧地低下了头, 一阵愧疚向我袭来, 脸上发烫。
6.I nodded back,feeling tears well up in my eyes.
我点了点头回应,感觉到泪水夺眶而出。
7.He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks/tears welling up in his eyes.
他静静地站着,泪水顺着他的脸颊流了下来/泪水涌上了他的眼眶。
8.Ruth hesitated, uncertain of how to combine honesty and diplomacy in her answer.
露丝犹豫了,不确定如何在她的回答中兼顾诚实和婉转。
9.She was torn between her love of dancing and her fear of performing in public.
她在自己的舞蹈热爱和在公众场合表演的恐惧之间感到矛盾。
10.He was torn by anger and worry.
他的内心被愤怒和忧虑撕扯着。
11.Torn by anger and worry, he couldn't/could hardly sleep all night.
他被愤怒和焦虑折磨着,整晚都睡不着。
12.Filled with happiness and excitement, Jim hugged Tim with gratitude and the whole class broke into thunderous applause.
充满了幸福和兴奋,吉姆感激地拥抱了蒂姆,全班同学都爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。
13.Seized by a sense of happiness and relief, Jim nodded at his students with a smile.
感到一阵幸福和宽慰,吉姆微笑着向他的学生们点了点头。
14.So moved were they that they stood up, expressed their sincere sorry to Jim.
他们非常感动,站了起来,向吉姆表达了真诚的歉意。
【真题引领】
(2021·浙江6月卷改编)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities.From age 14, he worked.And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team.In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals.After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, “A job's a big step to growing up.I'm glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
The pay day arrived at last.
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的父亲是一名运输牲畜的卡车司机,辛勤工作并把挣来的钱贴补家用,作者认为将来毕业后,会比父亲更有成就。作者在八年级前的那个夏天和一群孩子在邻居的农场上打工,除草挣钱,但听到父亲说,作者挣的钱可能要贴补家用的时候,作者不情愿,认为这不公平。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“发工资的日子终于到了。”可知,第一段可描写作者的工资到手后,高兴地计划自己如何使用这笔钱,不愿意交给父亲,然后看到了父亲的辛劳。
②由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知,第二段可描写作者明白了父母担心自己不懂得奉献,想通了之后,自豪地把钱交给了父亲。
2.续写线索:发工资高兴——计划用钱——不情愿把钱给父亲——发现父亲的辛劳——奉献出自己的钱——自豪
【参考范文】
The pay day arrived at last. Although the job was very tiring, I was very happy in my heart for I got something from my work.The hard work of labor was forgotten for now.I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it.“How much money have you earned ” dad asked.I was surprised, reluctant to disclose my income.The next morning, my dad's livestock truck started running.I saw my dad's hard-working figure and thought of his words “A job's a big step to growing up.”
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. They were worried that I was too selfish to give.I realized that my labor was hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! Dad never complained about unfairness! He even seemed to think that was fair.I thought, “I've only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, dad came back.I proudly took out my own money and handed it to dad.
【高分佳句】
①I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it.(“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语)
②I realized that my labor was hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents!(that引导宾语从句)
【模拟提升】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·杭州一模)
My dad and I had been looking forward to the State cross-country race of my senior year of high school, which would be the climax (顶点) of my existence.
I was the fastest runner on my team, and I was supposed to make it into the top fifteen.We had been working towards this race for three years.It was everything to me, and it was everything to my dad.He was a runner and was wild with joy by my success in running.He made it to every race, even flying home early from business trips to see me run.I always listened for his voice, which rang above the crowd—telling me to relax my arms and calling out my time.He pushed me.He cheered for me.He believed in me.We spent countless hours on the sandy canals of Arizona.Breathing in the dust of the desert, the blossoms of the orange trees, and the terrible smell of the dairy farm, we made our way across the city.We pounded miles and miles into our running shoes, marking every step towards the path to greatness.It was a journey that was just ours.A dream passed on from one generation to the next.
Then the big day came.It was hotter than normal—too hot.My throat felt like a field of cotton, cracked with the summer heat, as I waited for the gun to fire.I gazed out at the crowd; dozens of familiar faces from church and school flickered across my view.They had come for me.They were counting on me.I saw my dad set his watch, worry and excitement etched across his face.With the sound of a gunshot, the race began.
For the first two and half miles, I felt great.I had never before been so ready for something.The weeks leading up to the race were filled with hard practices and a strict diet.The scorching sun beat upon my back, blinding me with its brilliance.Nothing was going to stop me, though.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
However, without warning, my strength was running out.
I whispered, “I'm so sorry I disappointed you, Dad.”
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和父亲都期待作者能在高中最后一年的越野赛跑上获得好成绩。作者是队伍中跑得最快的,希望自己能取得前十五名的成绩,他和父亲为这次比赛努力了三年。比赛的一天终于来临,在比赛最初的2.5英里,作者感觉良好,他觉得没有什么能阻挡他获得好成绩。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然而,毫无征兆地,我的体力耗尽了。”可知,第一段可描写作者在体力耗尽的情况下,如何尽力跑过终点。
②由第二段首句内容“我低声说:‘很抱歉让你失望了,爸爸。’”可知,第二段可描写父亲安慰作者,作者并没有让父亲失望。
2.续写线索:突然体力耗尽——努力跑过终点——觉得让父亲失望——父亲安慰
【参考范文】
However, without warning, my strength was running out. My lungs fought to take in enough air, and my feet transformed into cement bricks.Neck and neck with one of my greatest rivals, I could see the finish line.I had begun the final sprint into glory when my knees buckled and my legs gave way.Nothing I could do would make them hold my weight.They were as weak as jelly.Even though I knew my dreams of victory had been destroyed, I had to finish the race.With all of the strength left in me, I got on my hands and knees and crawled, inch by inch, across the finish line.Shame pulsed through my veins as Dad squatted down and pulled me into his arms.
I whispered, “I'm so sorry I disappointed you, Dad.” He gave me a gentle smile and said, “You could never disappoint me.Sometimes these things just happen.All that matters is that you did your best.” Lifting my face, I saw my dad's eyes, in which I saw the sweat, the time, and the work we had put into our dream.The miles we had run together, all for this race, flashed across my mind.“But we worked so hard.What about our dream ” I asked.In that second, the world stood still.He reached over for my hand, holding back his own tears, and said, “You did your best to finish the race,and it is the most important. I am so proud of you.”
【高分佳句】
①I had begun the final sprint into glory when my knees buckled and my legs gave way.(when引导时间状语从句)
②Lifting my face, I saw my dad's eyes, in which I saw the sweat, the time, and the work we had put into our dream.(“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句,省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)