热点话题预测四 人与自我之做人与做事(二)
【词汇积累】
intention意愿 plan打算
accomplish实现;达到;完成 addicted入了迷的,上了 瘾的
ambition雄心 apply申请
arrange安排 attempt努力;尝试
attitude态度 career职业;生涯
aware意识到的 delay耽搁,延误
motivation动机;动力;积极性 unbelievable难以置信的
suppose认为;猜想 seek寻求;追求
in order to do sth 为了做某事 the Students' Union 学生会
make a plan制定计划 set goals设立目标
achieve/reach/attain one's goal实现目标 after-school/extracurricular activities课外活动
mean/plan/intend to do打算做 have a desire to do sth 希望做某事
long/wish/want/hope to do渴望/希望/想做 look forward to doing 盼望做
feel like doing想要做 be prepared to do准备做
in one's spare/free time 在某人的业余时间 be eager/desperate/anxious to do/for sth 渴望(做)某事
apply to be a volunteer for申请成为……的志愿者 make up one's mind to do sth下定决心做某事
ask permission from sb征得某人的许可 devote oneself to致力于;献身于
in the hope of怀着……的希望 take action采取行动
with the purpose of带着……目的 take up从事
【佳句积累】
1.As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked.
小时候,我总希望自己快快长大,能拥有我想要的任何东西,做我想做的任何事情。
2.I really want to register to attend a course about gardening because I have been fond of flowers and grass since I was a child.
我确实想报名参加园艺课程,因为我从小就喜欢花草。
3.In the eyes of the students, most of their teachers are trusty and respectable and this is what I am after and value.
在学生眼里,大多数老师都值得信赖和尊敬,这就是我所追求和珍惜的。
4.When I was a little boy, I have been dreaming of being a teacher.It seemed so fascinating to me and I hope I can make my dream come true.
当我还是个小男孩的时候,我一直梦想着成为一名老师。它看起来那么让我着迷,我希望我能让我梦想成真。
5.Realizing the benefits and importance of this activity, I had a strong desire to participate in it.
意识到这项活动的好处和重要性,我强烈希望参与其中。
6.He expected to score perfectly in his exams,but the reality is the opposite.
他期待考试取得完美成绩,但现实却恰恰相反。
7.Emily trained for months to qualify for the team,but her efforts seemed in vain when she was not selected.Rather than giving up,she decided to focus on her own improvement and personal growth.
为了获得入选资格,艾米莉训练了几个月,但最终落选,她的努力似乎白费了。她没有放弃,而是决定专注于自己的进步和个人成长。
8.She found value in the experience,realizing that the process itself was more rewarding than any recognition.
她从这次经历中找到了价值,意识到过程本身比任何认可都更有意义。
9.After this experience,I was determined to be a doctor to help people to live a better life with my professional knowledge.
在这次经历之后,我决心成为一名医生,利用我的专业知识帮助人们过上更好的生活。
10.On the way to success, one should bring his patience and perseverance.
在通往成功的道路上,一个人应该有耐心和毅力。
【真题引领】
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2022·浙江6月卷改编)
I needed to do something in my community (社区) in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school.Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too.It seemed like a good thing to do.
I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner.We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat.Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering.It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.
As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared.I'd come face to face with the homeless: How should I act How would they treat me Would they hate me for having more than they did While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous.I didn't have too much time to worry about it.I was assigned (分配) to serve the salad with the lady next to me.She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she'd be right there, which I found quite comforting.
I had never seen so many people wanting food.They were of all ages and nationalities.Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty.Some looked like they had totally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking.Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat.It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者为了完成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间,需要在所在的社区做点事情,于是作者去了施粥所。作者发现准备过程中要做的事情很多,并且看到无家可归的人靠近时心里有点害怕,但是却忙得没有时间去担心这些。看到无家可归的人的生活状态后,作者感到难过和同情。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当他们朝我走来的时候,我露出了最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。”可知,第一段可描写作者是怎么为无家可归的人施粥的。
②由第二段首句内容“我很高兴我用这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。”可知,第二段可描写作者对这次社区服务的感悟。
2.续写线索:作者微笑服务——无家可归的人感激——作者感悟——作者发出呼吁
【参考范文】
As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. I wanted to make them know that I was really anxious to help them.To my relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile, and I could see their exhaustion in their eyes.I wanted to know what they were going through and I was desperate to know what I could do for them.They nodded gratefully as I pushed my spoon into the pot and took a large spoonful and poured it into their bowls.
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help.It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to them.I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.I am anxious to urge the world to do everything possible to help those in need.
【高分佳句】
①This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help.(that引导宾语从句,who引导定语从句)
②I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.(省略that/in which的定语从句,when引导时间状语从句)
【模拟提升】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·河北张家口三模)
Mr.Maude was thinking about what to buy for his wife as a gift for their 10th wedding anniversary (周年纪念日).One day, he happened to notice Mrs.Maude talking to a friend, showing interest in her ruby ring and he realized he would be able to make Mrs.Maude happy if he bought one for her.Mr.Maude couldn't understand why ladies had so much passion for expensive stones of all colors, but he would be willing to do anything for his wife for such a great occasion.
As SM is a famous jewelry brand (珠宝品牌), Mr.Maude decided to buy the ruby ring from their online store.He found the store and contacted them.A lady at the customer service recommended one that she promised no lady could refuse.It was worth $12,000. Of course, it would cost Mr.Maude an arm and a leg, but he thought Mrs.Maude deserved it.Without much hesitation, Mr.Maude bought what the service lady recommended, expecting to give his wife a big surprise.What he didn't expect was that what he finally received from SM was more than a surprise.
Days after Mr.Maude placed the order online, he received a parcel from SM when his wife was taking care of the garden.Thinking that he needed to take a look at the real thing before he gave it to his wife, he took the parcel to the bedroom and opened it.Inside the package, there was some wrapping bubble plastic sheets.When Mr.Maude emptied the package, to his surprise, he found not one but two ring boxes.Inside each box, there was a ruby ring.The two rings are only slightly different from each other.“This is obviously not supposed to be a buy-one-get-one-for-free offer.Ruby rings are just too expensive for that.Most probably, this is a mistake of some kind,” Mr.Maude said to himself.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
So, Mr.Maude decided to discuss this matter with his wife.
The day before the couple celebrated their 10th wedding anniversary, an unexpected parcel arrived from SM.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Maude先生为了即将到来的10周年结婚纪念日,在著名的珠宝品牌SM的网上商城下单购买了一枚昂贵的红宝石戒指作为礼物,期待能给妻子一个大大的惊喜。令他意想不到的是,商家寄件出了差错,寄了两枚戒指过来。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“所以,Maude先生决定和他的妻子讨论这件事。”可知,第一段可描写Maude先生与妻子商量后,决定联系商家,说明实情,最终把多寄的那枚戒指还回去。
②由第二段首句内容“在这对夫妇庆祝结婚十周年纪念日的前一天,SM寄来了一个意想不到的包裹。”可知,第二段可描写商家为了感谢Maude夫妻的诚信,特意赠送了一枚戒指作为他们结婚纪念日的礼物,Maude夫人感到无比幸福。
2.续写线索:Maude先生决定与妻子商量——二人联系商家——老板为此道歉并协商——二人寄回多出的戒指——意外收到包裹——拥有两枚戒指,Maude夫人无比幸福
【参考范文】
So, Mr.Maude decided to discuss this matter with his wife. When Mrs.Maude came back to the house from the garden, Mr.Maude told her what had happened.Together, they decided to contact the service lady.The service lady was shocked at what the couple had told her and talked to her boss about the matter immediately.The boss got online himself and apologized for such a big mistake and hoped they could send the other one back, to which the couple agreed.The couple called the delivery service and sent the other ring back to the appointed address.
The day before the couple celebrated their 10th wedding anniversary, an unexpected parcel arrived from SM. The couple didn't place another order.“Could it be another mistake ” the couple wondered.With curiosity, Mr.Maude opened the parcel and dug into the packing bubble sheets.He took out a ring box and a note, reading “We hope this small gift can reach you in time for the anniversary celebration.This ring is not dear, but it's specially made for Mrs.Maude to express our appreciation for your honesty.” Mrs.Maude couldn't be happier, because she now had two rings for the anniversary, one for love, the other for honesty.
【高分佳句】
①When Mrs.Maude came back to the house from the garden, Mr.Maude told her what had happened.(When引导时间状语从句,what引导宾语从句)
②The boss got online himself and apologized for such a big mistake and hoped they could send the other one back, to which the couple agreed.(省略that的宾语从句,“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)