热点话题预测五 人与社会之体育活动
【写作指导】
体育活动能促进学生身心健康,并能提高学生的社会适应能力。在有关体育活动题材的读后续写中常涉及竞技性体育活动,如篮球、足球等比赛,以及非竞技性体育活动,如郊游、爬山等话题。
【词汇积累】
perseverance毅力 encouragement鼓励 teammate队友 challenge挑战
determination决心 guidance教导 reminder提醒 motivate激励
effort努力 victory胜利 confidence自信 pride骄傲
setback挫折 cooperation合作 boost增强 reflection反思
regret悔悟 humility谦逊 failure失败 success成功
fairness公平 respect尊重 opponent对手 assist帮助
optimism乐观 positive积极的 frustration沮丧 self-doubt自我怀疑
shared objective/mutual goal共同目标 team spirit团队精神 ridicule嘲笑 family responsibility 家庭责任
fall ill/become sick生病 reflect on shortcomings反思不足 care for照顾 lack of confidence 不自信
take responsibility承担责任 manage both兼顾 build up增强 belief in oneself自信
【佳句积累】
1.Despite facing numerous setbacks, he did not give up, but instead he kept on trying.
尽管面临着许多挫折,但他并没有放弃,而是继续努力。
2.Encouraged by his teacher, he was able to overcome the difficulty and succeed in the race.
在老师的鼓励下,他克服了困难,在比赛中取得了成功。
3.The road to success was difficult, but Thomas showed great perseverance.
成功的道路充满艰难,但托马斯展现了极大的毅力。
4.With hard work and persistence,Tom eventually overcame all obstacles.
凭借努力和毅力,汤姆最终克服了一切障碍。
5.With the support of the team, the boy managed to get to the finish line and finally got the second place.
在团队的支持下,这个男孩设法到达了终点线,并最终获得了第二名。
6.He built up confidence step by step, overcoming all the obstacles and gaining great achievements.
他一步一步地建立了信心,克服了一切障碍,并取得了巨大成功。
7.Initially, they was unsure, but with long hours of practice, their confidence gradually grew.
起初,他们缺乏自信,但经过长时间练习,他们的信心逐渐增强。
8.The journey from self-doubt to confidence was challenging for me.
从自我怀疑到自信的旅程对我来说是一个挑战。
9.Instead of blaming others, we took responsibility for our mutual goal and worked hard to make it.
我们没有责怪别人,而是为共同的目标承担了责任,并努力实现它。
10.We treated their opponents with fairness and respect, regardless of the outcome.
无论结果如何,我们都以公平和尊重的态度对待对手。
11.We came to understand that true victory comes from respecting one's opponents.
我们开始明白了真正的胜利源于尊重对手。
12.It dawned on me that competition is not just about winning, but also about fairness.
我意识到比赛不仅仅是为了胜利,也是为了公平。
【真题引领】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2022·新高考Ⅰ & Ⅱ卷)
It was the day of the big cross-country run.Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence.He was small for ten years old.His usual big toothy smile was absent today.I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children.He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened.“I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably.“I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustration (懊恼).I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing.After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid.He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing.That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team.It just took him longer—that's all.David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish.As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者是一名特殊教育教师,在大型越野赛跑那天,发现患有大脑疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因,他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知,因为担心同学们会嘲笑大卫,所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着,但大卫不愿看我一眼。”可知,第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫参加比赛,大卫经过强烈的心理斗争,最终决定参加比赛。
②由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知,第二段可描写大卫开始参赛,虽然中途遇到困难,仍然坚持到最后,完成比赛。
2.续写线索:鼓励大卫——心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛——感悟
【参考范文】
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. I said gently and quietly, “No one can change your mind, except yourself.If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others' thoughts.” He sat still with a deep breath.“You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a sincere tone.Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run.His coach heard what David said and gave me a look—the kind that was more determined than anyone else's.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started.It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a brain disease.David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within a few kilometers.It didn't take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission.Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him.“Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically.To everyone's joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th.It was no more important whether he won the first place or not.It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.
【高分佳句】
①You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here.(which引导非限制性定语从句,why引导限制性定语从句)
②Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run.(现在分词短语作状语,省略that的宾语从句)
③It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.(It was...that...强调句型)
【模拟提升】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·浙江镇海中学期中)
Every year, thousands of runners gather in Australia to run the yearly 543.7-mile (875-kilometer)endurance (忍耐力) course from Sydney to Melbourne.
It is thought to be one of the world's toughest ultra-marathons (超级马拉松), which can take up to five days to cross the finish line.So only the top athletes of the game typically dare to take it on.They are young (generally under 30), and obviously well equipped and trained.Most importantly, with the help of high-level teams, they will draw up a detailed plan to make sure that they will have enough time for running and sleeping during the race.
But all that changed when a 61-year-old competitor by the name of Cliff Young entered it.Cliff had always dreamed of taking part in the ultra-marathon since he heard of the event when he was young.Finally, with the support of his family, he signed up for it and now he wandered to the starting blocks (起跑器).But he made a strange sight.Everyone was laughing at his everyday overalls (连体工装裤) and work boots (靴子) with his race number proudly displayed on the back of his shirt.
However, Cliff never cared about it.When questioned by the media why he dared to take part in such a challenging running, he told the curious press that his hard-working background gave him all the skills and endurance he'd need to finish the race, saying,“I grew up on a farm where we couldn't afford horses or tractors, and the whole time I was growing up, whenever the storms would roll in, I'd have to go out and round up the sheep.We had 2,000 sheep on 2,000 acres.Sometimes I would have to run those sheep for two or three days.It took a long time, but I'd always catch them.I believe I can run this race.So do my family!” Hearing this, they were so shocked and thought him to be too confident.No one believed he would win, and some even doubt whether he would finish the game.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
And from the moment the runners left the starting blocks, it looked like the skeptics (怀疑者) would be proved right.
However, according to Cliff, it was all part of his plan.
【语篇解读】 本文以时间为线索展开,讲述了61岁的克利夫参加了从悉尼到墨尔本的875公里耐力赛,他因着装随意遭到其他人嘲笑,并且没人相信他可以完成比赛。
【文脉构思】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“从运动员离开起跑线的那一刻起,怀疑论者似乎就被证明是对的。”可知,第一段可描写克利夫的跑步状态不佳。
②由第二段首句内容“然而,据克利夫说,这都是他计划的一部分。”可知,第二段可描写克利夫计划成功,赢得冠军。
2.续写线索:落后——状态不佳——不眠不休——缩短差距——赢得比赛
【参考范文】
And from the moment the runners left the starting blocks, it looked like the skeptics (怀疑者) would be proved right. In the first miles of the race, Cliff was quickly left trailing behind his more experienced competitors.He didn't even seem to be running properly—he dragged himself forward slowly, which put him in danger of injury, let alone completing the course.That first night, when all the competitors went to sleep after almost 18-hour running, he just put his head down and continued his slow and heavy pace throughout the night and into the early morning.All the audience were more certain of his failure.
However, according to Cliff, it was all part of his plan. He intended to run constantly, refusing to stop for sleep.Cliff shuffled on and on, as if there were countless sheep waiting for him to round up in front.Gradually, he narrowed his gap, getting closer and closer to the front of the pack.By the last night, his unique shuffle wasn't so funny anymore—it had powered him right through to the first position, and even help him set a new world record.Cliff was crowned the winner, and the whole world cheered with him.
【高分佳句】
① He didn't even seem to be running properly— he dragged himself forward slowly, which put him in danger of injury, let alone completing the course.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
② Gradually, he narrowed his gap, getting closer and closer to the front of the pack.(现在分词短语作状语)