【单元考点培优】Unit 6 When was it invented?专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优(含答案解析)

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名称 【单元考点培优】Unit 6 When was it invented?专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优(含答案解析)
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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 6 When was it invented?
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Linda想了解你所在城市的一种新发明的情况。请你根据内容提示,给她写一封信。
要点:
1.该发明是一种新型小汽车;
2.能利用太阳能在陆地上和水中行驶;
3.也能利用电能行驶。
注意:
1.信的内容要详略得当,并注意内容的完整、丰富与流畅;
2.词数80~100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假设这周你们学校英语角谈论的话题是“手机的发展史”。请你在英语角向同学们介绍一下它的发展变化,并描述你对未来手机的畅想。
提示:
1. 发明时间——1973年;
2. 当时的手机——large, heavy ;
3. 现在的手机——take photos, listen to music, pay for things ;
4. 畅想
要求:
1. 语意连贯,语句通顺;
2. 不少于80词。
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3.假定你是李辉,你校正在举办一年一度的科技节,你设计了一款机器人参赛。请你结合下面图示信息,用英文写一篇短文,介绍你的机器人。
注意:
1.短文必须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
3.词数80~100(文章标题已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:function(n.功能)
My robot
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4.发明改变世界,不少中学生都梦想成为发明家。某英语报社正组织题为“My invention: ________”的征文活动,请你根据下面的要点提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文参赛。
要点提示:
1. 你梦想的发明是什么
2. 这项发明能帮你或他人解决什么问题
3. 你为什么想发明这个东西
要求:
1.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名。
2.开头已为你写出,不计入总词数。
I hope to invent a (an)
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5.发明改变了世界,改变了我们的生活。比如,电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题,根据提示写一篇短文。
要求:1. 短文必须包括图片中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2. 词数90左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.
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6.世界上有很多发明,他们正在逐渐改变我们的生活方式。请以“The invention that influences my life most”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点: 1)这项影响你生活的发明是什么;
2)它带来哪些影响;
3)它让你有什么感受。
2.要求:1)文中不要出现所在的学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数100左右。
The invention that influences my life most
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7.科技改变生活,移动支付(Mobile Payment)无处不在,就连路边小摊都扫码支付了。本周的班会活动将围绕“移动支付”这一话题发言。请你结合自身情况,并根据下面的写作要点,用英语写一篇短文,为本次发言做准备。
写作要点:
1. Which mobile payment app do your parents use, Alipay(支付宝)or WeChat Pay(支付)
2. What do you think of the mobile payment
要求:
1. 紧扣话题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连惯;
2. 词数不少于80,发言稿的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:scan the QR code扫描二维码; password密码
Hello, everyone. Let me share something with you about the mobile payment.
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8.鉴于机器人在我们生活中的使用日益广泛,某青少年科技杂志正开展以“If I had a chance to create a robot”为主题的征文活动,请你给该杂志投稿。
内容包括:
1. 你准备为谁设计机器人?为什么?
2. 你设计的机器人可以做些什么?
要求:
1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现考生和学校的真实名称;
2. 语句连贯,逻辑清晰,卷面整洁;
3. 100词左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
If I had a chance to create a robot
If I had a chance to create a robot, I would create one for
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9.发明改变了世界,改变了人们的生活,比如电视机和自行车给我们带来了许多变化和便利。请你写一篇演讲稿介绍电视机和自行车的用途,再发挥想象,说说你想发明的东西以及它的用途或理由。
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右;文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Good morning, everyone! Today I’m going to talk about inventions.
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10.习近平主席曾寄语青少年:想象力、创造力从哪里来?要从刻苦的学习中来。知识越学越多,知识越多越好,你们要像海绵吸水一样学习知识。既勤学书本知识,又多学课外知识,还要勤于思考,多想想,多问问,这样就能培养自己的创造精神。
请根据以上内容,结合自己的亲身经历,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
★What does creativity mean to you
★Tell us an experience that you created/made something.
★What did you learn from that experience
要求:
1. 词数不少于80;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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11.发明改变世界。请参照下列表格中的提示,以“My Favorite Invention—the Internet”为题写一篇英语短文,字数80词左右。
发明时间 1969年
用途 1.上网查信息;2.发邮件;3.听音乐、玩游戏、购物等; 4.广泛应用于银行、学校、医院等工作场所;5.……
评价 1.方便了人们的生活;2.提供了更多的工作机会; 3.2020 年新冠疫情期间……;4.……
提示词:
新型冠状疫情期间 during the COVID 19 period
My Favorite Invention—the Internet
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12.科技改变生活,发明无处不在,如computers,cars,smart phones,e-books,robots,Internet…请结合自身经历,谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。
要求:
1. 词数80—100(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life,
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13.爱迪生在发明电灯泡的时候,失败了八千多次,但是他没有放弃。很多朋友嘲笑他,但是他认为他能从这些失败当中找到改进的办法。终于,在一次一次的尝试之后,爱迪生成功地发明了电灯泡。请你以“Failure Is the Mother of Success”为题目写一篇短文。
提示内容:
1.讲述爱迪生发明电灯泡的过程;
2.结合自己的学习和生活实际,谈谈受到的启发。
要求:
1.须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2.词数80左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
Failure Is the Mother of Success
I’d like to tell you a story. When Edison began to invent bulbs, he failed again and again, up to more than eight thousand times.
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14.Jane在某英语学习网站就“The Most Useful Invention of All Time”这一话题发帖,征集网友的看法。假如你叫康康,你认为最有用的发明是因特网,请你给Jane回帖。
The Most Useful Invention of All Time
Jane—Monday, May 7, 2019
I am writing a paper about inventions for my English class, and I need some ideas. What do you think is the most useful invention of all time Thanks for your ideas.
要求:1.简要阐述因特网的用途(至少三个);
2.词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
RE: The Most Useful Invention of All Time
Kangkang—Thursday, May 10, 2019
I think the most useful invention of all time is the Internet.
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15.假设这周你们学校的英语角谈论的话题是“手机的发展史”。请你从手机的发明时间、外观和用途等方面,和同学们谈论一下它的发展变化,并描述你对未来手机的畅想。
提示内容:
1. 发明时间:1973年;
2. 外观:large,heavy;
3. 用途:talk to others,take photos,listen to music。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 须包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history of mobile phones
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16.上个星期你们学校去阳光镇参观了“国际机器人展”,你对机器人有了许多了解。请你根据提示写一篇短文,谈谈如果有了机器人,它将对你的生活带来的变化。
内容要点:
1.假如你有一台机器人,它会在很多方面改变你的生活;
2.优点:让你有更多空闲时间去做自己喜爱的事,可以帮助你做家务,如洗衣服、做饭、打扫卫生;
3.缺点:可能会感染病毒,引起许多麻烦……最后不得不送回机器人商店;
4.但机器人会给生活带来巨大变化,带来的优势比劣势多。
注意事项:
1.短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.省略部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
3.词数90左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town.
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17.人工智能(AI)的迅速崛起无疑是新世纪以来最为重要的科技事件,而我们的生活也将因为人工智能的成熟应用迎来巨大改变。假如是李华,你校将于周六上午十点使用视频会议举办一场介绍人工智能的线上讲座。你打算邀请你校英国留学生Tom一起参加。请用英语给Tom写一封邮件,邀请他参加线上讲座(online lecture),向他说明举办讲座活动的时间、目的以及讲座的内容。
提示词语:helpful, convenient, introduce, examples, apply(应用)...to..., questions
提示问题:
●What time will the online lecture start
●Why will the school hold this activity
●What will the speaker talk about
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to invite you to attend an online lecture about AI technology.
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Hope you will be there on time and enjoy it. If there is anything more that you want to know, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
18.你们班开展了一次以 “The Greatest Invention in My Eyes” 为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,与同学分享,内容包括:
1. What’s the greatest invention in your eyes
2. Why do you think it the greatest invention (At least three reasons)
3. What influence it has to human
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2. 词数100左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
The Greatest Invention in My Eyes
Hello, boys and girls!
Some people think that the greatest invention in the world is cars, while the others believe that computers are the most useful tools we need in the modern society. But in my eyes, the greatest invention is
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That’s all. Thank you!
19.从下面两个题目中任选—题,根据中文和英文提示,完成—篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
当今科技日新月异,各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们生活中不可或缺,如智能手机、自动语音识别技术(ASR)、二维码(QR code)等;服务类产品也蓬勃发展, 如网上购物、共享经济(sharing economy)、外卖服务(take-away service)等。
假如你是李华,你校英语报社近期计划开设“科技改变生活”版面,现面向全校学生征集相关素材。请你以“An Important Invention”为题投稿,介绍—款你认为重要的发明,简单描述它并说明你选择它的原因。
提示词语:search and store information, benefit, provide, convenient
提示问题:
●In your opinion, what is an important invention for people Please describe it.
●Why do you think it is important
I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9
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I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks !
20.习总书记说:“重大科技创新成果是国之重器、国之利器,必须牢牢掌握在自己手上,必须依靠自力更生、自主创新。”作为一名中学生,我们虽不能做出重在科技创新,但也应拥有创新梦想。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的创新发明设想以及怎样才能梦想成真。
内容包括:1. What’s it When will it be invented
2. What’s made of
3. What does it look like
4. What will it be used for and how does it work
5. How to make your invention dream come true
要求:1.内容应包含所有提示,可适当发挥;
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
3. 100词左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone,
I’m Li Hua. I have an invention dream. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.
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参考答案及试题解析
1.例文
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
It's a kind of new car invented by a great young man in my local city. He is really clever. It's so great that it can run on solar power. It's certainly good for our environment. Although it mainly depends on solar power, it can still run very fast. Also, it can run not only on the land but also in the water safely. What's more, it can also use electricity to run when it's cloudy, rainy or snowy. Lots of people love this kind of car. I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信,围绕向英国朋友介绍所在城市新型小汽车这一发明展开交流;
②时态:以一般现在时为主,用于描述发明的特征、性能等客观情况;
③提示:文章符合书信要求,包含发明的主体、动力来源、行驶场景等要点,内容完整,逻辑清晰,向朋友清晰介绍新发明。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇表明写信目的,即向 Linda 介绍所在城市的新发明;
第二步,详细描述新发明(新型小汽车),包括发明者(虽未着重强调,提及 “invented by a great young man” )、动力来源(太阳能、电能 )、行驶场景(陆地、水中 )以及人们对其的喜爱;
第三步,结尾表达相信对方也会喜欢该发明,让书信交流更自然。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②solar power 太阳能
③environment 环境
④not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且……
[高分句型]
①It's so great that it can run on solar power.(so...that... 引导结果状语从句 )
②I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.(believe 后接宾语从句,从句中含 if 引导的条件状语从句 )
2.参考例文:
Cell phones are becoming more and more important. Do you know the history of cell phones
The first cell phone was invented in 1973. At that time, it was as large as a building brick and much heavier than the cell phone today. Now, cell phones have many uses. For example, we can use cell phones not only to talk to others, but also to take photos or listen to music. We can even pay by cell phones.
I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表达手机的重要性,引出手机发展史的话题;
第二步,介绍手机的发明时间,以及过去手机的外观和现在手机的功能;
第三步,书写结束语,表达对未来手机的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②at that time 在那时
③as...as 和……一样
④for example 例如
⑤not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
⑥take the place of 代替
[高分句型]
①Cell phones are becoming more and more important.(形容词比较级)
②I believe that cell phones will become thinner and thinner and they may take the place of computers in the future.(that引导的宾语从句)
3.例文:
My robot
As the development of science and technology, robots are used widely in our life. This is my robot. I made it last week. Its name is Wonder. It has a round head, two small hands, a tiny body and two legs. Wonder is very attractive and colorful. What’s more, it has many functions. Firstly, it can help me to clean the house. Secondly, it can send me to school on time every day. Thirdly, it can make food for me. My robot is great and I am very proud of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍机器人在现代社会的普遍性,引出自己制作的机器人;
第二步,具体阐述机器人的制作时间,外貌及功能;
第三步,表达对机器人的喜爱和自豪。
[亮点词汇]
①What’s more此外
②on time按时
③be proud of以……自豪
[高分句型]
①As the development of science and technology, robots are used widely in our life.(一般现在时的被动语态)
②My robot is great and I am very proud of it.(and并列句)
4.例文
My invention: Super Shoes
I hope to invent a kind of super shoes.
Many of us may have to throw away our shoes when they are too small for our feet. This is a great waste. And lost shoes are also bad for the environment. If I could invent a kind of super shoes, there would be no such waste.
This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet. You don’t have to worry about your shoes being too small or too tight. In addition, if the shoes are dirty, they will start the automatic cleaning function between 12:00 a.m. and 3:00 a.m., and it will automatically dry. So your shoes always look clean. If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.
These shoes can not only help us save some time for cleaning and massage, but also are environmentally friendly. It is also good for us to protect the environment. The most important thing is that the shoes are cheap.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文,写自己的一项发明;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括想要发明的东西、能解决的问题以及发明的原因等。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍想要发明的是什么;
第二步,具体介绍想要发明的原因;
第三步,介绍发明物能解决的问题。
第四步, 总结发明物的优点。
[亮点词汇]
① throw away扔掉
② be bad for对……有害
③ not only…but also 不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① If you walk too much, there will be a massage function at the bottom of the shoes to help you relax your feet.(if引导的条件状语从句)
② This kind of shoes is made of a special material, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.例文
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier. There are famous inventions like the TV and the bicycle. The TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world. We can also watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves.
The bicycle is very useful, too. We go to school or work by bike. It’s not so expensive that most of us can afford it. It makes no pollution, which is good for our environment. What’s more, bicycle riding is a kind of exciting sport which is quite good for our health.
Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly. If we meet problems when doing our homework, it will tell us how to solve them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:要求以“Inventions”为话题,结合图片内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明电视和自行车为人们提供了便利;
第二步,具体介绍自行车的优点和骑自行车的好处;
第三步,介绍自己想要的发明、用途和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②be good for有益于
③What’s more另外
[高分句型]
①The TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②If we meet problems when doing our homework, it will tell us how to solve them.(if引导的条件状语从句)
6.例文
The invention that influences my life most
Many inventions change our life. As far as I’m concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most.
Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy goods from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens up my eyes. It can not only help me with my study, but also help us relax.
All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more convenient than ever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍最影响自己生活的发明,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍最影响自己生活的发明是网络;
第二步,详细介绍网络带来哪些影响;
第三步,书写结语,表达网络给自己带来的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①As far as I’m concerned就我而言
②keep in touch with和……保持联系
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
It can not only help me with my study, but also help us relax. (not only…but also连接谓语动词)
7.One possible version:
Hello, everyone. Let me share something with you about the mobile payment.
As we know, the mobile payment is now becoming more and more popular among the young and the old in China. As for my parents, they hardly ever use paper money to pay for things. Instead, they always pay with apps on their mobile phones. They use both Alipay and WeChat pay because these two apps are easy to use.
I like the mobile payment for two reasons. First, it is easy to use. You just need to enter Alipay and WeChat pay, scan the QR code, enter your password and that’s it. Second, it makes our lives more convenient. We don’t have to carry a lot of paper money when we want to buy something. What’s more, we can pay for things anytime and anywhere.
That’s all, thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“移动支付(Mobile Payment)无处不在”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,介绍父母使用的支付app;
第三步,介绍自己对移动支付的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②Instead相反
[高分句型]
①Second, it makes our lives more convenient(make sth+adj.结构)
②We don’t have to carry a lot of paper money when we want to buy something.(when引导时间状语从句)
8.例文
If I had a chance to create a robot
If I had a chance to create a robot, I would create one for myself. It will do a lot of things for me. I think my study and life will be much easier.
The robot can not only help me with my study, but also play an important role in daily life. First, it will help me study. I won’t have to go to after-school classes. I will study at home. Second, it will cook different kinds of delicious food for me. That way, my mom won’t get very tired. And when I feel sad, it will talk with me like a friend and make me happy.
In a word, robots can bring us a lot of convenience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:要求提示内容介绍你准备为谁设计机器人及原因,介绍你设计的机器人可以做些什么。学生不要提示中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍你准备为谁设计机器人及原因;
第二步,具体阐述你设计的机器人可以做些什么;
第三步,书写结语。表达机器人能够给我们带来好处。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且……
②a lot of大量
③play an important role in在……中起重要作用
④different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①I think my study and life will be much easier.(宾语从句)
②The robot can not only help me with my study, but also play an important role in daily life.(not only…but also的句型)
9.例文:
Good morning, everyone! Today I’m going to talk about inventions.
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier. There are famous inventions like the TV and the bicycle. TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world. We watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves. Besides some learning programs help us with our study.
The bicycle is very useful, too. We go to school or work by bike. It’s not expensive. It makes no pollution, which is good for our environment. What’s more, bicycle riding is a kind of exciting sports which is quite good for our health.
As for me, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly. When we meet problems in doing our homework or taking exams, it will tell us how to solve them.
That’s all. Thank you very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为产品性能介绍;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示: 短文必须包括所有提示信息,可适当发挥,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。本文要求首先介绍电视机和自行车的用途,然后再发挥想象,说说你想发明的东西以及它的用途或理由。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。从介绍电视机和自行车的用途入手,注意介绍它们的作用;然后发挥想象,说说你自己想发明的东西以及它的用途或理由。
第三步:书写结语。在此表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②different kinds of不同种类的
③by bike骑自行车
④be good for有益于
⑤do one’s homework做作业
[高分句型]
①Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
③It makes no pollution, which is good for our environment.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
④What’s more, bicycle riding is a kind of exciting sports which is quite good for our health. (which引导的限制性定语从句)
⑤ When we meet problems in doing our homework or taking exams, it will tell us how to solve them.(when引导的时间状语从句)
10.One possible version:
Creativity is the key to human progress. Every major scientific discovery began with someone imagining the world in a creative way. With the development of society, it gets more and more important.
I am a big fan of science. Months ago, I wanted to make a model plane that could fly. At first, I thought it was easy. But during the process, I ran into many difficulties. Luckily, my science teacher helped me a lot and she advised me to search online and do a lot of reading. Finally, after two weeks’ hard work, my model plane could fly for two minutes.
Now I know if you want to create or invent something, you must increase you knowledge first. Or you can be hardly successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章的要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“你对创造性的理解”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,阐述创造性的意义;
第二步,结合自己的经历,讲述自己的创作过程,重点叙述创作过程中遇到的问题,以及如何去解决这些问题;
第三步,抒发创作过程带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①the key to sth某物的关键
②in a creative way以一种创造性的方式
③run into difficulties遇到困难
④after two weeks’ hard work经过两周的努力工作
[高分句型]
①Every major scientific discovery began with someone imagining the world in a creative way.(现在分词短语作后置定语,修饰不定代词someone)
②Luckily, my science teacher helped me a lot and she advised me to search online and do a lot of reading.(and连接两个并列谓语,and连接两个并列的动词不定式作宾语补足语)
③Now I know if you want to create or invent something, you must increase you knowledge first.(省略引导词that的宾语从句,if引导的条件状语从句)
11.参考例文
My Favorite Invention—the Internet
Of all the inventions, my favorite is the Internet.
The Internet was invented in 1969s. It can be used to do many things. People can go online and search for information they need. They can send emails to each other instead of writing letters. People can also use the Internet to listen to music, play games, shop or do many other things. Nowadays, the Internet is widely used in banks, schools, companies, hospitals, and many other places. People can even see a doctor online at home, thanks to the Internet.
The Internet is so useful that it is becoming one of the most important parts of our life. It makes our lives more and more convenient. It also provides us with more job opportunities. Especially during the COVID-19 pandemic period, it plays an important role in preventing and controlling the pandemic. It’s hard to believe what our lives will be without the Internet. As a result, I believe in the future our lives will be much more meaningful with the help of the Internet.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:文章标题及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“用途”和“评价”中需要自己添加的要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,直接引出话题;
第二步,根据要点提示,依次举例说明互联网的各种用途,最后还得自行再补充说明一种用途;
第三步,根据要点提示,对互联网的出现作出评价,最后自行补充自己对互联网的看法,并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
be used to do被用于做……
thanks to多亏……
more and more convenient越来越方便
play an important role in在……中起重要作用
provide sb with sth给某人提供某物
with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
The Internet is so useful that it is becoming one of the most important parts of our life.(so…that引导结果状语从句)
It’s hard to believe what our lives will be without the Internet.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语;what引导的宾语从句)
As a result, I believe in the future our lives will be much more meaningful with the help of the Internet.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
12. Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the computer has become an important part . And it changed me a lot. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet. If I feel stressed from time to time, I can listen to music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.
But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. This makes me lazy and too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文。
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:从题干所给的科技中选择一种,谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,是哪一个发明改变了自己;
第二步,介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的;
第三步,介绍自己的感受总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of在……的帮助下
②search for寻找
③from time to time不时
[高分句型]
①If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.(省略that的宾语从句)
13.例文:
Failure Is the Mother of Success
I’d like to tell you a story. When Edison began to invent bulbs, he failed again and again, up to more than eight thousand times. But he didn’t give up trying. At the same time, all his friends laughed at what he did. But he thought he could find ways to improve from the failure. Finally, he succeeded in inventing the bulbs.
From the story, we know that we should learn from Edison. We may meet lots of difficulties, but just like the saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success.” If we keep on working and never give up, we will surely succeed.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求以“Failure Is the Mother of Success”为题目写一篇短文,短文必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2.写作指导:根据提示内容可知,当讲述爱迪生发明灯泡过程的时候,时态上用一般过去时,注意动词过去式的变化;结合实际情况谈启发的时候,可用到一般现在时和一般将来时,注意句子谓语动词的变化。写出的句子要符合英文表达习惯,不出现语法以及单词的书写错误。
14.One possible version:
RE: The Most Useful Invention of All Time
Kangkang—Thursday, May 10, 2019
I think the most useful invention of all time is the Internet. The Internet plays a very important part in our daily life. Many people use the Internet every day. With the Internet, we can do many things. First, we can communicate with our relatives and friends far away online. Second, we can get all kinds of information. Third, we can do some shopping without leaving our houses. Fourth, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches or wonderful movies at any time. We can also take the online courses, read many kinds of books and magazines.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据Jane的帖子内容,写一篇作文,介绍最有用的发明是因特网。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称采用第一人称为主。写作时需至少介绍三个因特网的用途。行文可适当使用过渡词使文章更顺畅。最后确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
15.例文
Mobile phones are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history of mobile phones
The first mobile phone was invented in 1973. At that time, it was as large as a building brick and much heavier than the mobile phone today. Mobile phones have many usages. For example, they can be used to talk to others at any time. They can also be used to take photos or listen to music.
I believe that mobile phones will become thinner and thinner and that smart phones will take the place of computers in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍手机的发展史。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般过去时,一般现在时和一般将来时;人称以第三人称为主。分为三段式:第一段开头已给出;第二段根据提示材料,从手机的发明时间,手机外观以及用途等方面介绍;最后一段介绍对未来手机的畅想。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
16.例文
Last week I visited International Robot Exhibition in Sunshine Town. If I own a robot, it’ll change my life in many ways. I’ll have more free time for my hobbies. It can help me do housework. It can wash clothes, cook food and sweep the floor. But if it catches a virus, it’ll cause much trouble. I may find breakfast in the washing machine and clean shirts in the dustbin. In the end, I may have to send it back to the robot shop. But robots will make a great difference to our life. They’ll bring more advantages than disadvantages.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求写一篇短文阐述机器人给生活带来的变化;要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态以一般将来时为主;采用第一人称口吻;可采用1段落格式,重点阐述机器人的优缺点,注意无语法和拼写错误。
17.例文
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to invite you to attend an online lecture about AI technology. It will start at 10 o’clock on Saturday morning. During the lecture, the speaker will introduce what AI is. Then, he will tell us how to use it in our daily life since it is helpful and convenient.
To attend the online lecture, you need to get your computer or your phone ready. And please make sure you can get online. It is a good idea to prepare a notebook because you will need to take down some examples and answer some questions. We can apply AI to our daily life.
Hope you will be there on time and enjoy it. If there is anything more that you want to know, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,给Tom写一封邮件,邀请他参加线上讲座。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二、第三人称来行文,时态用一般将来时和一般现在时。作文要分别介绍讲座活动的时间、目的以及讲座的内容。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
18.例文
The Greatest Invention in My Eyes
Hello, boys and girls!
Some people think that the greatest invention in the world is cars, while the others believe that computers are the most useful tools we need in the modern society. But in my eyes, the greatest invention is just books.
A famous person has ever said: “Books are the steps of human’s progress.” Exactly! That’s what I would like to say firstly. In the long history of human being, books have played an important part in providing us with knowledge. And it is knowledge that changes our lives.
Secondly, the best way to broaden our horizons is reading books, because books provide us with different ideas. As a result, we can have our own opinions different from others instead of obeying any other person’s.
What’s more, books are considered as teachers without sound. When we deal with difficulties, it is a good choice to ask for help from books. Books are like a patient teacher and will give us answers whenever we need.
So I think books are the greatest invention in the world because we can learn many useful things and get benefits from reading. Books make us a full man.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是写一篇发言稿,开头和结尾已给出,要求根据内容提示,以 “The Greatest Invention in My Eyes” 为主题写一篇发言稿,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来写作;时态采用一般现在时为主;注意叙述你认为它是最伟大的发明的原因时至少要有三点,并且注意主谓一致。该发言稿可以在第一段说明在你眼里最伟大的发明是什么;第二段、第三段以及第四段叙述你认为它是最伟大的发明的原因(至少三点原因);第五段总结说明它对人类的影响。全文需要叙述完整、条理清晰。
19.例文
An Important Invention
I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. There are many modern inventions in our daily life. Among all of them, I think the smartphone is one of the most important inventions.
The smartphone can connect to the Internet, and we can not only have video calls with our families or friends whenever we want, but also search and store information whenever we need. What’s more, we can shop online at any time.
The smartphone is important because it brings plenty of benefits to people. It makes life convenient by helping us save a lot of time and money. The smartphone provides more possibilities for our life.
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
【详解】题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们以An Important Invention为题给学校英语报社投稿,介绍一款你认为重要的发明,并简要描述一下这项发明以及你选择它的原因。这是一篇话题作文,题目中对文章的内容并没有给出太多的提示,学生们可结合自己的实际生活,从身边的高科技产品和服务入手,如智能手机、二维码、网购等等,介绍一下它们给我们的生活带来的改变。
写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来叙述。写作时应首先亮明自己的观点,点明自己认为重要的发明是什么;然后阐述这个产品的作用和好处,即你选择这项发明的原因。注意英语句式结构的特点和表达习惯,不要按照汉语逐词翻译。可以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句和复合句的使用,提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接,使文意连贯、表达流畅。
20.One possible version
Hello, everyone, I’m Li Hua. I have an invention dream. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.
I want to invent a special pen. It will be invented when I graduate from college. It will be made of steel. It is as heavy as a normal pen, but it’s a little longer. There will be three buttons on the pen. I think it is useful and convenient. First, it can be used as a pencil, a pen and an eraser. When you press the red button, it is used as a pencil. When you press the blue button, it is used as a pen. If you use the eraser, you can press the white button. Second, it will let you know if you’re sitting correctly by making a sound. It won’t stop making a sound until you sit correctly. It’s interesting, right
But it’s not easy to invent it. So first of all, as a middle school student, I must study hard to get more knowledge. I also need to be creative. I should always come up with new ideas. Most importantly, I should keep on and never give up. If I work hard, my dream will come true.
What about your dreams Would you like to share them with me
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据内容提示谈谈你的创新发明设想以及怎样才能梦想成真。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文时态为一般现在时和一般将来时,用第一人称和第二人称来书写,写作时可分为四段式:第一段简单介绍自己。第二段具体阐述自己的发明梦想。第三段介绍为了梦想成真应该怎样做。第四段询问他人的梦想是什么。在写作时应注意符合题意,同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性,可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
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