2026年中考英语写作复习之初识书面表达（二）课件（共105张ppt）

(共105张PPT)
中考英语复习系列之题型大作战
书面表达
记叙文
人物 事件
叙述内容
叙述线索
六要素
语言特点
时态
时间（when） 地点（where）
人物（who） 事件（what）
原因（why） 结果（how）
人物的外貌和性格特
征、经历、活动等
某一事件的发生、
发展过程和结果
思想行为及认知过程
时间、地点、开端 发展 结局
条理清晰，描写形象生动
一般多采用过去时态
记叙文
常用方法：汉堡包法
topic sentence
Activity1
Activity2
Activity3
Bottom bread
引出主题
补充细节
呼应主题，抒发情感
One day/ when ../ Then,/ After that,/ Finally,_________.
When
where
what
who
how
An experience
记叙文
说明文
事物 流程
说明内容
说明顺序
文章结构
语言特点
时态
导言—正文—结尾
陈述事实、
描述特性
描述如何做某事
（细节明确、节奏清晰）
时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序
通俗易懂、简明朴实
一般现在时态
说明文
常用方法：Magic法
Main idea that tells you what your topic is.
紧扣题目主要内容
At least 3 facts about your topic.
至少三个关于主题的事实描写
Give supporting details for each fact.
每个事实下有细节支撑
Include transition words
加入关联词
Conclude with a brief summary
以总结作为结尾
说明文
文章结构
语言特点
常见类型
时态
书信、电子邮件、请柬、海报、演讲稿等
真实交际，因事而写
固定格式，语言规范
特定的术语、句型
应用文
日记用一般过去时态，通知请柬用一般将来时。
延迟符
1.经常做户外活动；
2.很少用电子产品；
3.坚持做眼保健操；
4. ......
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
2019安徽
（2019）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你 用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保 护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
Choose the right structure.
假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。【2022安徽省】
要点：
风趣幽默，深受喜爱；
团队合作，历险克难；
追逐梦想，永不言弃。
要求：
词数80～100；
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）
应用文：电子邮件
邮件
故事山
金字塔
Choose the right structure.
近段时间，某中学不少学生因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生会主席李华准备利用English Broadcast时间建议学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼，以提高身体素质。请你根据下表提示，为他准备一份英语发言稿。
【永州市2022】
要求：
短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
词数：80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇： affect vt. 影响
现象 因感冒不能上课，影响了学习
建议 生活习惯 健康饮食……
保证睡眠……
加强锻炼 参加体育活动……
其他 ……
期望 ……
应用文：演讲稿
演讲稿
故事山
What- Why-How
Choose the right structure.
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信。【泰安市2022】
要点：
表示理解和安慰；
建议：正确认识自己的不足；处理好和父母的关系；处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系；
表达祝愿。
要求：
词数80左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
开头已给出，不计入总词数。
应用文：书信
演讲稿
书信
What- Why-How
请总结一下吧！
书面表达涉及到的文体一般有：__________， __________， __________， __________。
书面表达的考察方式一般有： __________， __________， __________等。
记叙文
说明文
议论文
应用文
话题写作
图表式写作
应用类写作
那在写作中会应用到的结构或策略有哪些呢？
记叙文一般可以用__________，__________等方法；
说明文一般可以用________________________，__________等结构；
议论文一般可以用________________，__________等结构；
应用文有__________、__________、__________、__________等类型。
故事山
五指法
State-Explain-eXample
金字塔
What-Why-How
ORE
演讲稿
书信
邮件
邀请函
认识段落
一个好的段落有什么特点？
主题句：好的开始是成功的一半！
结束句
好的段落是什么样子的？
作战计划
part2
请先熟悉采访流程。
你的基本功非常扎实。接下来一周，我将带领你进行实地采访。
请多指教。
审
审体裁
找要点
扩
写句子
扩内容
连
理逻辑
加连词
美
查错误
润文章
审题：即准确把握写作任务与要求，明确所写语篇的中心思想和主题。审题是学生进行英语书面表达的第一步。养成良好的审题习惯，围绕所给材料准确审题，避免偏题、跑题，是需要师生引起高度重视的首要环节。学生通过逐字读题，明确书面表达任务的文体、人称、时态、要点等信息，明确写作的方向，就可以为书面表达的下一步奠定基础。
可以按照“确定文体—判断人称—明确时态—归纳要点”进行审题
（一）审（Analyse）：准确审题
第一步：确定文体。文体，指语篇的体裁。不同的文体对语言的要求不同，明确文体可以帮助学生选择语篇的语言风格与特点。比如书信类应用文要体现书面表达的交际性，说明文要注意措辞的准确性等。
第二步：判断人称。人称是学生在书面表达中容易忽视和出错的地方。在明确文章体裁之后，教师需要引导学生通过标题、主题和要点表述等准确判断这篇文章应该使用第几人称。
第三步：明确时态。时态表达差异是中英文表达主要差异之一，也是学生在初中英语书面表达中最容易出错与混淆的地方。教师应该引导学生分析题目，准确判断文章应该使用几种时态。
第四步：归纳要点。这一步很关键。准确归纳要点可以帮助学生避免在书面表达的内容上“跑题”或“偏题”。(显性信息和隐藏信息)
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行 2.一次难忘的比赛 3.一次难忘的志愿服务 ……
要求：
语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数
Case 一
(云南省中考真题)
要点
记叙文
一件难忘的事
第一人称
一般过去时
When& where
Who
What happened
Why I feel unforgettable
How to happen
假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I love ________” 为主题征稿，请你投稿。
稿件内容：
◆热爱的主题 ◆热爱的理由 ◆适当的感悟
稿件要求：
（1）请补全标题；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。
(武汉中考真题)
Case 二
要点
说明文
热爱的东西
第一、三人称
一般现在时，一般过去时
热爱的主题
热爱的理由1…,2…, 3…
适当的感悟
某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。
要求：
词数80~100；
请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
(怀化中考真题)
Case三
要点
议论文
如何提升自己
第一人称
一般现在时，一般将来时
运动
责任
问题解决
优雅生活
延迟符
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为"Thank you, my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动。
要点如下:1.严格要求;
2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;
4. .....
记叙文------讲述一个故事（2018安徽）
I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she's helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam.
When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.
Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.
隐藏信息
Dear Jack,
How is everything going I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer. It’s not necessary to worry about your Chinese. I’d like to share my ideas, which I think might help.
First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. It’s of great importance to be confident about yourself. We Chinese are very friendly so you needn’t be afraid of making any mistakes. Second, it’s better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. What’s more, sometimes you can use drawings or pictures, and as you know, body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
（2016安徽）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack来信，说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文，但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信，提几点建议，要点如下：
1. 大胆自信；2. 放慢语速；3. 借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。
问候、安慰
希望、祝福
隐藏信息
延迟符
1.经常做户外活动；
2.很少用电子产品；
3.坚持做眼保健操；
4. ......
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
2019安徽
（2019）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你 用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保 护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
隐藏信息
XI．书面表达（共1小题，满分25分）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。
点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱
任性（Renxing）：随心所欲
秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的
土豪（Tuhao）：很富有
.........
注意：1. 词数80-100；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2015安徽
Dear Peter,
As the Internet is developing fast , more andmore new words and phrases have been created in Chinese.Here are some examples.
One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone.Another example is Renxing. When you say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they like.The phrase Miaosha firt came from online shopping ,which means you can complete your shopping orders before others. But now it's widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very short time. If you describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.
You can find lots of such new Chinese words.Keep learning, and you'll know more about our language and culture.
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt.
From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety.
2024安徽
审
审体裁
找要点
扩
写句子
扩内容
连
理逻辑
加连词
美
查错误
润文章
Why：有逻辑地采用和整理素材
What：将要点表达成句
How：利用文体可用结构图扩写出文章大框架。
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行 2.一次难忘的比赛 3.一次难忘的志愿服务 ……
要求：
语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数
现场一
(云南省中考真题)
要点
When& where
Who
What happened
Why I feel unforgettable
How to happen
the coach and I
Last summer vacation
be afraid of …
swim forward
how to move
swim with my hands and legs swim by myself
I was excited and proud.
I think nothing is impossible.
learn to swim
Share your story with five fingers.
假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I love ________” 为主题征稿，请你投稿。
稿件内容：
◆热爱的主题 ◆热爱的理由 ◆适当的感悟
稿件要求：
（1）请补全标题；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。
现场二
要点
I love reading.
I can learn a lot from reading, and it opens a new world for me.
It makes me relaxed and brings me a lot of fun.
I became interested in reading five years ago.
I joined a reading club online. There were so many books for me to read.
My teacher encouraged me to read different kinds of books, and then share my feelings with other readers. I found great fun sharing ideas.
.
(武汉中考真题)
Match the content with the points.
热爱的主题
热爱的理由
1…,2…, 3…
适当的感悟
审
审体裁
找要点
扩
写句子
扩内容
连
理逻辑
加连词
美
查错误
润文章
Why：整理素材成稿
What：连句子或段落
How：添加连接词，增加逻辑感。
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行 2.一次难忘的比赛 3.一次难忘的志愿服务 ……
要求：
语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数
素材一
(云南省中考真题)
Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. 1. _______ I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. 2._____ the coach said he would protect me. 3._______ I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. 4.________________ I could swim by myself. I was excited and proud. I think nothing is impossible.
At first,
A few days later,
But
Then
假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I love ________” 为主题征稿，请你投稿。
稿件内容：
◆热爱的主题 ◆热爱的理由 ◆适当的感悟
稿件要求：
（1）请补全标题；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右。
素材二
I love reading. I became interested in reading five years ago. 1.____I joined a reading club online 2.____there were so many books for me to read. 3.____, my teacher encouraged me to read different kinds of books, and then share my feelings with other readers. I found great fun sharing ideas.
I can learn a lot from reading, and it opens a new world for me. 4.____, it makes me relaxed and brings me a lot of fun.
.
(武汉中考真题)
Choose the right connections.
C
E
A
D
A. because
B. That’s why
C. Besides
D. What’s more
E. And
F. Not only… but also…
G. But
审
审体裁
找要点
扩
写句子
扩内容
连
理逻辑
加连词
美
查错误
润文章
Why：润色文档并发稿
What：润色文字
How：替换高级词或表达，修改文章小错误，誊抄文章。
I had some memories.
文稿一
Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, I couldn’t swim forward. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was excited and proud. I think nothing is impossible.
It’s really uncomfortable for me to stay in the water.
I couldn’t swim forward at all.
Let’s edit to make the article more beautiful.
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.
I was very excited and proud of myself.
A good beginning and end are necessary for a good article. Add a beginning and ending to the article.
What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible.
What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
文稿二
Correct the mistakes.
I very love reading. I remember it was five years ago that I became interested in reading. At that time, I joined a reading club online. I was glad to find there so many books for me to read. My teacher encouraged me to read different kind of books, and then share my feelings with other readers. My found great fun sharing ideas. Ever since then, reading is my favorite hobby.
From reading books, I can not only learn a lot from it, but also open a new world for me. It makes me relaxing and brings me a lot of fun. I think more and more people will love reading in the future.
There were
I love reading very much.
中式英语
句子不完整
them
前后不一致
has been
时态搭配错误
I found
代词误用
relaxed
形容词误用
different kinds
名词单复数
文稿三
Which handwriting do you like
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.
Last but not least, I will communicate with others and be a good team player.
文稿三
Which handwriting do you like
实战演练
part3
马小良同学，你顺利完成了三次实地采访任务，顺利通过了考核，成为了正式的战地记者。恭喜你！
谢谢。真是太好了！
这里有一份采访任务要你单独完成。
保证完成任务。
审
审体裁
找要点
扩
写句子
扩内容
连
理逻辑
加连词
美
查错误
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让我们复习一下笔记。
2022江西省中考真题
学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要
点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适
当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地
名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾
已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Personal information ●Age: 42
●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province
●Hobby: sports
2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）
3. Your plans ①________
②________
…
完形填空B篇
Wang Yaping is an astronaut. In 2013, she became the second Chinese woman to travel to space She is also famous for a physics class televised for more than 60 million people.
Wang trained very hard for many years to be an astronaut. The hardest part was desert training. Wearing a spacesuit and carrying special and heavy equipment(装备), she walked several kilometers through the hot and sandy desert. “Sometimes it was so windy and dusty(布满灰尘的),” she says, “that we couldn’t see each other even though we were just a few meters away.”
Wang loves her job. She remembers watching the first Chinese astronaut go into space. “I was so proud and also very excited. But when I watched it, a thought came into my mind: We have men pilots and women pilots; and then a man astronaut. When will there be a woman astronaut And today, it’s me becoming one of the first few.”
审 - 审体裁，找要点
学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要
点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适
当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地
名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾
已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Personal information ●Age: 42
●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province
●Hobby: sports
2. Personality 根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）
3. Your plans ①________
②________
…
要点
应用文：演讲稿
向航天女英雄王亚平学习
第三人称，第一人称
一般现在时，一般将来时
1. Personal information
2. Personality
3. Your plans
扩- 写句子，扩内容
Wang is 42 years old.
She was born in a small village in Shandong Province.
She likes playing sports very much.
写作要点 具体内容
1. Personal information ●Age: 42
●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province
●Hobby: sports
扩- 写句子，扩内容
Read and write.
Wang Yaping is an astronaut. In 2013, she became the second Chinese woman to travel to space. She is also famous for a physics class televised for more than 60 million people.
Wang trained very hard for many years to be an astronaut. The hardest part was desert training. Wearing a spacesuit and carrying special and heavy equipment(装备), she walked several kilometers through the hot and sandy desert. “Sometimes it was so windy and dusty(布满灰尘的),” she says, “that we couldn’t see each other even though we were just a few meters away.”
Wang loves her job. She remembers watching the first Chinese astronaut go into space. “I was so proud and also very excited. But when I watched it, a thought came into my mind: We have men pilots and women pilots; and then a man astronaut. When will there be a woman astronaut And today, it’s me becoming one of the first few.”
2. Personality
Wang Yaping is the second female astronaut.
She performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII.
She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training.
She loves her work and never gives up.
扩- 写句子，扩内容
3. Your plans
I am going to reflect on our weak points work hard to do better.
I’m going to overcome the difficulties.
What’s your plan for the future
连 - 理逻辑，加连词
Wang is 42 years old.
She was born in a small village in Shandong Province.
She likes playing sports very much.
Wang is a 42-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much.
Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up.
Wang Yaping is the second female astronaut.
She performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII.
She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training.
She loves her work and never gives up.
连 - 理逻辑，加连词
To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did.
I am going to reflect on our weak points work hard to do better.
I’m going to overcome the difficulties.
美 - 查错误，润文章
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping.
Wang is a 42-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much.
Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up.
To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off.
Thank you for your listening.
称呼和开场白
结束语
评一评
组织结构（满分4）
内容充实，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4分。
内容充实，不写废话，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。
一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者(含)，方可得到1-2分组织结构分。
内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。
通篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。
内容（满分8）
7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。
5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。
2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。
0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。
语言（满分8）
词数：每少5个单词扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
拼写：每处错误扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。
语法：每处错误扣0.5分，同一语法错误不重复扣分。
标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。
印象原则
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印象原则
书写工整 ！ 卷面整洁 ！ 字迹清晰 ！
如书写较差，以致影响读者阅读理解，将分数将第一个档次。
写作的技巧不是押题，不是套模版，而是“练字”
中文：行楷，楷书
英文：手写印刷体，意大利斜体，圆体
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做个卷面清爽的小仙女
1、clean and clear!
3、落在线上fish bowl.
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4、大小一致 windows.
2、大饼脸字体 teacher's desk.
5、避免毛刺.
6、用一条横线修改.
8、字数不少也不多.
9、无标记.
千万不要有任何修改 ！！！
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答题卡千万不能打草稿
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注意
你犯的错老师可能看不见，
但是你一改，老师一定能看到。
书写工整 ！ 卷面整洁 ！ 字迹清晰 ！
语言第一位
结构第二位
内容第三位
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a、分段：两头小中间大
b、字数：作文80-120词
结构
每段第一句最好写主题句
（改写提纲议论文）
内容
扫描+查看
语言
三眼判卷
卷面太乱
错误太多
模版太重
跑题太偏
低分作文四大特点
您的文字内容
语言：两大评分标准
1、基本正确：及格分
2、丰富多变（词汇+句型）：高分
您的文字内容
结构：逻辑性
a、主题句：1句，改写提纲
b、描述或论证：1-3句
c、小结：1句
1、段落结构：总分总
2、评分标准：
a、关联词：3-5个
b、同义替换：词汇+句型
c、代词替换：物称代词it、that、they）
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内容：不跑题+论证充分
1、中心思想，二段首句及末端首句
2、论据：2-3段
3、论证：2-3段
4、小结：3段
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高分作文三大要求：
1） 语言精彩：正确+变化
2） 结构严谨：多用连词
3） 论证充分：论点+论据+论证手段
马小良同志，因为你顺利完成了任务，受到了上级的嘉奖，请你谈谈你的心得体会。
战后复盘
part4
具体题型
作战计划
考察对象
审体裁，找要点
审
写句子，扩内容
扩
理逻辑，加连词
连
话题作文
书面表达
图表类作文
应用文
查错误，润文章
美
审： 要细心，找出文章的 ____, ____，____，_____，_____；
扩： 可用________，扩展________，丰富文章结构；
连：理顺逻辑，连接____________；
美：注重平时积累，修改________，认真誊写。
总结
导图
要点
句子或段落
小错误
体裁
人称
时态
要点
话题