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It was a busy day for 20 year old Justin. His hot dog stand (货摊) in the park was crowded with customers. Suddenly, an old woman asked how much a hot dog was. “It depends on what you want, ma’ am. They cost from $3 to $7,” he replied.
“I was just curious about that. I don’t want any,” she said before walking away. Justin noticed she sat alone on a chair across from his stand. She kept looking in his direction, and he realized the old woman wanted a hot dog but couldn’t afford one. So he quickly made one and brought it to her. “I forgot to tell you that you’re our 50th customer of the day, so you can get a free hot dog!” he said smilingly.
“Oh, is that so ” the old lady asked. “Thank you. I’m Emily.” She tasted it and was shocked at how delicious it was. “It’s different from traditional hot dogs,” she said with joy. Justin replied, “I love cooking, so I keep trying different things with my food. I’m glad you like it! Have a wonderful day.” Then he hurried away.
The next day, when Emily returned to the park, Justin treated her to a hot dog again. Emily refused because she didn’t have money, but he insisted (坚持). “I am so happy that someone is trying my food, Emily. Your opinion matters to me,” Justin said. Though Emily was thankful for his offer, she told Justin it wasn’t necessary. But he kept doing that every day. Later when they chatted, Emily learned that Justin dreamed of expanding (扩大) his business and opening a cafe.
One day, Emily said to Justin, “I kept a count of the hot dogs you brought me, and you’ve already spent $ 100 on me. Now it’s my turn to help you, boy. Come with me.” Emily led Justin to an old building that looked like a deserted cafe. She explained that her husband owned it. After her husband died, Emily was in poor health and there was nobody to look after the cafe, so it closed down.
注意:续写词数应150左右。
“It’s now yours, Justin. This is your cafe,” Emily said.
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Over the next few weeks Justin worked tirelessly to fix up the old cafe.
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文本分析
角色:____________________
2.视角:第______人称
3.时空线:from Justin 在公园摆摊卖热狗,遇到没钱买热狗的 Emily 并谎称她是第 50 位顾客送其免费热狗→____________________→____________________→Emily 带 Justin 到丈夫遗留的废弃咖啡馆,准备帮助他→(续写)Emily 将咖啡馆赠予 Justin 的场景与 Justin 的反应→(续写)Justin 整修咖啡馆及后续发展(补充关键情节节点)
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
Why did Justin give Emily a free hot dog at first :____________________(结合 Justin 发现 Emily 的处境作答)
What did Justin do for Emily every day after the first meeting :____________________(梳理 Justin 对 Emily 的持续帮助)
What was Justin’s dream :____________________(明确 Justin 的人生目标)
How did Emily know Justin’s dream :____________________(说明 Emily 得知 Justin 梦想的途径)
Why did Emily’s husband’s cafe close down :____________________(根据原文信息解释咖啡馆关闭的原因)
What did Emily do to repay Justin’s kindness :____________________(概括 Emily 对 Justin 的回报方式)
5.情节线:Justin 在公园卖热狗时,发现没钱的 Emily 想吃热狗,谎称其是第 50 位顾客送免费热狗→____________________→____________________→Emily 得知 Justin 梦想开咖啡馆,且算出 Justin 为自己花了 100 美元,带他到丈夫遗留的废弃咖啡馆→(续写)Emily 将咖啡馆赠予 Justin,Justin 的反应与两人的互动→(续写)Justin 整修咖啡馆及咖啡馆开业后的情况(补充中间关键情节)
6.情感线:
Justin:热情(对待顾客时)→____________________(发现 Emily 没钱想吃热狗时)→____________________(坚持每天给 Emily 送热狗,听到 Emily 认可自己的食物时)→____________________(得知 Emily 要帮助自己时)→____________________(Emily 赠予咖啡馆时及后续整修时)
Emily:好奇(询问热狗价格时)→____________________(收到免费热狗时)→____________________(拒绝 Justin 持续送热狗,不想添麻烦时)→____________________(决定用咖啡馆回报 Justin 时)
(Emily 的丈夫:从咖啡馆的存在可推断其曾对经营咖啡馆有热情,未直接出场)
7.综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:____________________
英文:____________________(提炼原文核心情节,如 Justin 帮助 Emily、Emily 回报 Justin 等,简洁概括)
8.句式:请从原文中找出以下句式各 1 例,并抄写下来:
宾语从句:____________________(如 “he realized the old woman wanted a hot dog but couldn’t afford one.” 类似句式)
直接引语:____________________(如角色间的对话内容)
现在分词作状语:____________________(如 “Suddenly, an old woman asked how much a hot dog was.” 类似句式)
时间状语从句:____________________(如 “The next day, when Emily returned to the park, Justin treated her to a hot dog again.” 类似句式)
9.主题(本文属于人与他人):____________________(结合 Justin 与 Emily 的善意互动、梦想助力等核心思想提炼)
情节构造
第一段提示句:“It’s now yours, Justin. This is your cafe,” Emily said.
衔接句 1——— 对 “Emily’s words” 提问 “Justin 听到 Emily 说咖啡馆归他时,第一反应是什么?他说了什么?”:What was Justin’s first reaction when he heard Emily say the cafe was his, and what did he say
过渡句推演:衔接 1→____________________(补充 Justin 的情绪变化、与 Emily 的对话,体现善意传递)←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 “Justin’s next action” 提问 “Justin 接受咖啡馆后,当下决定要做什么?”:What did Justin decide to do immediately after accepting the cafe
第二段提示句:Over the next few weeks Justin worked tirelessly to fix up the old cafe.
衔接句 3——— 对 “fix up the cafe” 提问 “Justin 在整修咖啡馆过程中,做了哪些具体的事情?遇到困难时他是如何坚持的?”:What specific things did Justin do while fixing up the old cafe, and how did he persist when facing difficulties
过渡句推演:衔接 3→____________________(补充咖啡馆开业场景、Emily 的参与、Justin 的感悟,呼应主题)←主题
主题:____________________(结合善意互动、梦想实现、温暖传递等核心思想提炼)
段落构思
第一段:“It’s now yours, Justin. This is your cafe,” Emily said.
→①____________________(描述 Justin 听到消息后的反应,如表情、动作、语言)→②____________________(展现 Emily 对 Justin 的回应,体现两人的善意互动)→③____________________(写出 Justin 接受后的决定或行动,为下文整修咖啡馆铺垫);
英文:
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第二段:Over the next few weeks Justin worked tirelessly to fix up the old cafe.
→④____________________(具体描写 Justin 整修咖啡馆的过程,如做的工作、遇到的困难及坚持的动力)→⑤____________________(补充咖啡馆整修后的样子、开业场景及他人的支持)→⑥____________________(写出 Justin 的感悟,呼应 “善意传递” 的主题);
英文:
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参考答案
文本分析
1.角色:Justin(20 岁,在公园经营热狗摊,热爱烹饪,梦想开咖啡馆的年轻人)、Emily(生活拮据的老妇人,受 Justin 帮助后用丈夫遗留的咖啡馆回报他)、Emily 的丈夫(已故,原咖啡馆主人,未直接出场)
2.视角:第三人称(以客观视角叙述 Justin 和 Emily 的经历,如 “It was a busy day for 20yearold Justin.”“Emily led Justin to an old building...”)
3.时空线:from Justin 在公园摆摊卖热狗,遇到没钱买热狗的 Emily 并谎称她是第 50 位顾客送其免费热狗→Justin 之后每天坚持给 Emily 送热狗,两人聊天时 Emily 得知 Justin 的咖啡馆梦想→Emily 算出 Justin 为自己花了 100 美元,决定回报他→Emily 带 Justin 到丈夫遗留的废弃咖啡馆,准备帮助他→(续写)Emily 将咖啡馆赠予 Justin 的场景与 Justin 的反应→(续写)Justin 整修咖啡馆及后续发展(补充关键情节节点)
4. 请在文章中将可能的线索都找出来。
Why did Justin give Emily a free hot dog at first :Justin noticed Emily sat alone, kept looking at his hot dog stand, and realized she wanted a hot dog but couldn’t afford one.
What did Justin do for Emily every day after the first meeting :He treated Emily to a hot dog every day, even though Emily refused because she had no money.
What was Justin’s dream :To expand his hot dog business and open a cafe.
How did Emily know Justin’s dream :They chatted with each other later, and Justin told Emily about his dream.
Why did Emily’s husband’s cafe close down :After Emily’s husband died, Emily was in poor health and there was nobody to look after the cafe.
What did Emily do to repay Justin’s kindness :She decided to give her husband’s deserted cafe to Justin.
5.情节线:Justin 在公园卖热狗时,发现没钱的 Emily 想吃热狗,谎称其是第 50 位顾客送免费热狗→Justin 坚持每天给 Emily 送热狗,两人逐渐熟悉,Emily 得知 Justin 想开咖啡馆的梦想→Emily 算出 Justin 为自己花了 100 美元,决心回报他→Emily 得知 Justin 梦想开咖啡馆,且算出 Justin 为自己花了 100 美元,带他到丈夫遗留的废弃咖啡馆→(续写)Emily 将咖啡馆赠予 Justin,Justin 的反应与两人的互动→(续写)Justin 整修咖啡馆及咖啡馆开业后的情况(补充中间关键情节)
6.情感线:
Justin:热情(对待顾客时)→体贴、善良(发现 Emily 没钱想吃热狗时)→开心、坚持(坚持每天给 Emily 送热狗,听到 Emily 认可自己的食物时)→惊讶、期待(得知 Emily 要帮助自己时)→震惊、感动、坚定(Emily 赠予咖啡馆时及后续整修时)
Emily:好奇(询问热狗价格时)→惊喜、感激(收到免费热狗时)→过意不去、推辞(拒绝 Justin 持续送热狗,不想添麻烦时)→感激、真诚(决定用咖啡馆回报 Justin 时)
(Emily 的丈夫:从咖啡馆的存在可推断其曾对经营咖啡馆有热情,未直接出场)
7.综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。(中英各一个)
中文:20 岁的 Justin 在公园卖热狗时,发现没钱的老妇人 Emily 想吃热狗却买不起,便谎称她是第 50 位顾客送其免费热狗,之后还每天坚持给她送热狗。Emily 得知 Justin 梦想开咖啡馆,且算出他为自己花了 100 美元,便带他到丈夫遗留的废弃咖啡馆,打算将咖啡馆赠予他以作回报。
英文:20-year-old Justin was selling hot dogs in the park when he found that Emily, an elderly woman without money, wanted to eat a hot dog but couldn’t afford it. He lied that she was the 50th customer and gave her a free hot dog, and then kept bringing her a hot dog every day. Emily learned that Justin dreamed of opening a cafe and figured out he had spent $100 on her, so she took him to the deserted cafe left by her husband and planned to give it to him in return.
8.句式:请从原文中找出以下句式各 1 例,并抄写下来:
宾语从句:he realized the old woman wanted a hot dog but couldn’t afford one.
直接引语:“It depends on what you want, ma’ am. They cost from
现在分词作状语:She kept looking in his direction, and he realized the old woman wanted a hot dog but couldn’t afford one.
时间状语从句:After her husband died, Emily was in poor health and there was nobody to look after the cafe, so it closed down.
9.主题(本文属于人与他人):人与人之间的善意是相互传递的。Justin 用善良帮助身处困境的 Emily,Emily 则以真诚回报助力 Justin 实现梦想,这份双向的善意温暖且有力量,展现了人性的美好。
情节构造
第一段提示句:“It’s now yours, Justin. This is your cafe,” Emily said.
衔接句 1——— 对 “Emily’s words” 提问 “Justin 听到 Emily 说咖啡馆归他时,第一反应是什么?他说了什么?”:What was Justin’s first reaction when he heard Emily say the cafe was his, and what did he say
过渡句推演:衔接 1→Justin 先是震惊得说不出话,反复确认后激动地向 Emily 道谢,Emily 笑着告诉 Justin 这是他的善良应得的,还分享了一些丈夫经营咖啡馆时的小故事,鼓励 Justin 好好做→衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对 “Justin’s next action” 提问 “Justin 接受咖啡馆后,当下决定要做什么?”:What did Justin decide to do immediately after accepting the cafe
第二段提示句:Over the next few weeks Justin worked tirelessly to fix up the old cafe.
衔接句 3——— 对 “fix up the cafe” 提问 “Justin 在整修咖啡馆过程中,做了哪些具体的事情?遇到困难时他是如何坚持的?”:What specific things did Justin do while fixing up the old cafe, and how did he persist when facing difficulties
过渡句推演:衔接 3→咖啡馆整修完成后,Justin 邀请 Emily 参加开业仪式,开业当天很多老顾客都来捧场,生意十分红火,Justin 特意为 Emily 准备了专属的热狗口味,两人看着热闹的咖啡馆都露出了笑容→主题
主题:善意的付出终会有回报,当我们向他人传递温暖时,也可能在不经意间收获实现梦想的契机,这份双向的美好让生活更有意义
段落构思
第一段:“It’s now yours, Justin. This is your cafe,” Emily said.
→①Justin stood there in shock, his mouth slightly open, and it took him a few seconds to react. “Really This cafe... it’s mine ” he asked, his voice trembling with excitement.→②Emily nodded gently, her eyes full of warmth: “Yes, it’s yours. You’ve been so kind to me these days, and this is the only way I can repay you. My husband loved this cafe so much; I believe he’d be happy to see it run by someone who loves food as much as he did.” Justin felt tears welling up in his eyes and hugged Emily tightly.→③After thanking Emily repeatedly, he walked around the cafe carefully, touching the old wooden counter and imagining the future of the cafe, already making plans to start 整修 it the next day;
英文:“It’s now yours, Justin. This is your cafe,” Emily said. Justin stood there in shock, his mouth slightly open, and it took him a few seconds to react. “Really This cafe... it’s mine ” he asked, his voice trembling with excitement. Emily nodded gently, her eyes full of warmth: “Yes, it’s yours. You’ve been so kind to me these days, and this is the only way I can repay you. My husband loved this cafe so much; I believe he’d be happy to see it run by someone who loves food as much as he did.” Justin felt tears welling up in his eyes and hugged Emily tightly. After thanking Emily repeatedly, he walked around the cafe carefully, touching the old wooden counter and imagining the future of the cafe, already making plans to start fixing it up the next day.
第二段:Over the next few weeks Justin worked tirelessly to fix up the old cafe.
→④He woke up at dawn every day, carrying paint and tools to the cafe. He repainted the walls into a warm light brown, replaced the broken windows, and polished the old tables and chairs until they shone. Once, he accidentally cut his hand while repairing the shelf, but he just wrapped it with a bandage and kept working—he thought of Emily’s kindness and his dream, and that gave him endless energy.→⑤Finally, the old cafe took on a new look. On the opening day, colorful balloons hung at the door, and the smell of delicious food wafted out. Emily came early with a bunch of sunflowers, and many people who used to buy Justin’s hot dogs also came to support him.→⑥Justin stood at the door, greeting every customer with a smile. When he looked at Emily sitting by the window, sipping coffee and smiling, he knew that this beautiful life was all because of the 善意 between them. He made up his mind to keep passing this warmth to more people;
英文:Over the next few weeks Justin worked tirelessly to fix up the old cafe. He woke up at dawn every day, carrying paint and tools to the cafe. He repainted the walls into a warm light brown, replaced the broken windows, and polished the old tables and chairs until they shone. Once, he accidentally cut his hand while repairing the shelf, but he just wrapped it with a bandage and kept working—he thought of Emily’s kindness and his dream, and that gave him endless energy. Finally, the old cafe took on a new look. On the opening day, colorful balloons hung at the door, and the smell of delicious food wafted out. Emily came early with a bunch of sunflowers, and many people who used to buy Justin’s hot dogs also came to support him. Justin stood at the door, greeting every customer with a smile. When he looked at Emily sitting by the window, sipping coffee and smiling, he knew that this beautiful life was all because of the kindness between them. He made up his mind to keep passing this warmth to more people.