通知的写法——ROMAN
假设你是校绿化委员会成员李华,你们将开展“校园植物认养(Adopt a Plant)”活动。请用英文写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的(美化校园/培养责任感);
2.认养规则(每周养护两次、记录生长日志);
3.报名方式(时间、地点)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice: Adopt a Plant
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Greening Committee
September 1
通知结构
STRUCTURE
Title(标题) 常写在正文上方的正中位置
Body part(正文) 通知五要素 时间: When 地点: Where内容: What 参与者: Who目的: Why
Signature(落款) 发出通知的人或单位的名称,一般写在正文后面的右下角
谋篇布局
主题 体裁
人称 时态
布局 beginning: body: ending:
第一部分(para1)beginning:
①开门见山:一句话导语包含时间: When 地点: Where内容: What 参与者: Who引出活动
②目的(why)+一句话导语的句子包含时间: When 地点: Where内容: What 参与者: Who
我们建议选择第②种,可是文章内容全面丰富。内容可参考题目中的具体细节。
目的:in order to do sth /that +句子
for purpose of , with the intention of (to do sth)
第二部分(para2)主体部分body part
以活动的具体内容为主,具体要求参照作文要求和提示。
第三部分(para3)ending
符合主题的且能与目的相匹配的寒暄+期待参与
writing
遣词
美化校园 责任感 养成习惯 举行活动 环保意识 参与者 6.遵守规则 7.按照要求 8.浇水 9.除草 10.施肥 11.记录成长 12.报名参加 13.截止日期 14.错过机会 15.体验大自然的魅力 16.尊重生命
造句
Para1: In order to ____, _____ is to be held on _____ (day),_______(date), at______(time) in ________(place). (具体情况增删)
为美化校园环境且增强同学们的责任感,我校绿化委员会即将举办一场“植物认养”活动。 , the School Greening Committee will .
Para2:
活动参与者必须遵守以下规则:
被领养的植物必须至少每周照顾两次,
palnt
按时浇水除草对于植物茁壮成长很有必要
最重要的是不能忘记做好植物生长记录
Para3:截止日期报名+期待参与
如果你对此项活动感兴趣的话,一定要在下周五前报名。
一定不要错过一个与植物成长的机会,它一定会让你感受到生命的魅力!
我们期待着你们的参与
句式升级:
将4.改成强调句
将5改成主语从句
将6改成定语从句
将7改成not only...but also ...连接的句子
“此次活动不仅可以让你得到一个与植物共同成长的机会,还能让你感受到大自然的魅力”
NOTICE-Adopt a plant 学案参考答案-ROMAN(路凤姣)
谋篇布局
主题 Adopt a plant 体裁 notice
人称 The third person 时态 Future tense
布局 beginning: Purpose+topic sentence body: Details(according to requirements) ending:expectation(meaning)
writing
遣词
美化校园 beautify our campus 责任感 a sense of responsibility 养成习惯 develop/form/get a habit of 举行活动 hold /organize/launch an activity An activity kick off 环保意识 awareness of protecting environment 参与者 participant 6.遵守规则 follow/obey rules 7.按照要求 follow/obey requirements 8.浇水 water (flower/plant) 9.除草 weed 10.施肥 fertilize plant 11.记录成长 record the growth 12.报名参加 sign up for 13.截止日期 deadline 14.错过机会 miss the chance/opportunity 15.体验大自然的魅力 experience the charm of nature 16.尊重生命 respect life
造句
为美化校园环境且增强同学们的责任感,我校绿化委员会即将举办一场“植物认养”活动。 Aiming to beautify and enhance students’ sense of responsibility , the School Greening Committee will launch an activity called Adopt a plant .
Para2:
活动参与者必须遵守以下规则: Participants must follow the following rules
被领养的植物必须至少每周照顾两次,
The adopted plant must be attended at least twice a week.
按时浇水除草对于植物成长很有必要
It is necessary for growth of plant to be watered on time
最重要的是不能忘记做好植物生长记录
Most importantly, don’t forget to keep a log on the growth to record their changes
Para3:截止日期报名+期待参与
如果你对此项活动感兴趣的话,一定要在下周五前报名。
If you are interested in the adoption(activity),please sign up(for it)before next Friday
一定不要错过一个与植物成长的机会,它一定会让你感受到生命的魅力!
Don’t miss the chance to grow up with your plant, and it must make you feel the charm of the life.
我们期待着你们的参与
We are looking forward to your participation.
句式升级:
将4.改成强调句(it is .....that.....)
It is watering and weeding that is necessary for thriving growth of plant
将5改成主语从句
What matters most is that you should keep a log on the growth of the plant to record its changes
将6改成定语从句(who)
Those who are interested in the adoption , should sign up for it before next Friday
将7改成not only...but also ...连接的句子
“此次活动不仅可以让你得到一个与植物共同成长的机会,还能让你感受到大自然的魅力”
This activity will not only give you a chance to grow with plant, but also make you feel the charm of the nature.
This activity not only gives you a chance to grow with plant, but also makes you feel the charm of the nature.
倒装:Not only will this activity give you a chance to grow with plant,but also will make you feel the charm of the nature.
Not only does this activity give you a chance to grow with plant,but also makes you feel the charm of the nature.