2026届高考英语二轮：读后续写 修辞手法课件(共13张PPT)
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(共13张PPT)
读后续写微技能之修辞
以no cellphone holiday为例
Lead in：Review the plot
Beginning
Climax
Rising action
Ending
Falling action
Kathy tried to get her phone back, but failed. Then she worked on a puzzle.
Kathy’s family started a beach vocation with a no-phone rule.
Kathy wanted to share the beautiful scene with Betty, but she didn’t have a phone.
( reluctance)
( annoyed--exhausted)
( enjoyable--disappointed)
Presentation in groups
文本理解问题：
情节设计问题：
语言表达问题：
Students in groups to analyze and summarize the types of questions according to three categories:
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________ _______________________________________________
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn't thought of her cellphone for hours.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
First Writing Instruction
1. What did Kathy see at the beach
2. How did she feel about being phone-free there
1. How did the puzzle make Kathy feel
2. What was the end of this story
3. What did Kathy do with the puzzle
First Writing Instruction
Rhetorical Devices used in the text
1. The books looked as dull as the weather.
2. Rain started to pour. “Even more beautiful in the rain,”her mother said.
3. After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o'clock.
Personification
Simile
Exaggeration
Golden sunlight _________ the world, and the ocean,________________
sparkles under the blue sky.
What did Kathy see at the beach
1. 让人惊艳的美景深深地吸引了她。（Personification）
The _________scenery ______________________her deeply.
2. 金色的阳光点亮了世界，像蓝色水晶般的海洋在天空下闪闪发光。
First Writing Instruction (language)
stunning
like a blue crystal,
captured/allured/entranced
How did she feel about being phone-free there
lit up
1. 海浪轻柔地拍打着她的双脚，一种放松的感觉在她的全身蔓延开来。
With waves patting on her feet gently, she felt a sense of relaxation surging through her.
What did Kathy do with the puzzle
All of a sudden, the unfinished puzzle struck her. She was so determined to complete it even if ________________________(即使可能要一个世纪那么久。)
it would take like a century.
Para 1.
She found that she was more concentrated and relaxed than when she kept her phone.
1. How did the puzzle make Kathy feel
First Writing Instruction (language)
She understood that the importance of the holiday was not to update pictures, but rather like a soothing balm for the soul to relax and embark on a journey of self-exploration.
Para 2.
她明白假期的重要性不在于更新图片，而更像是抚慰心灵的良药，能让人放松并开启自我探索之旅.
The __________________(烦恼) from yesterday had passed.
2. What was the end of this story
storm of annoyance
李煜
First Correction and Display
Revise the first draft by correcting the mistakes that occur in the process of writing and polishing it according to what you have learned.
Evaluation Criteria
Plot Logic Language Theme Spelling
grammar
Stars
Reasons
在每一栏给出你的打分及原因（满分为100） Overall summary
understand original text
proper plots
use rhetorical devices
four points
Simile
Metaphor
Personification
Exaggeration
李煜
Homework: writing practice
Dave 和 Ben 在一个阳光明媚的周日决定去山脚下露营。到达露营地后，他们搭好帐篷，享受着美好的时光。然而，傍晚时分，暴雨倾盆，河水迅速上涨，营地被洪水淹没。慌乱中，两人与彼此走散，迷失了方向。Dave 努力保持冷静，向山上攀爬，找到了一个相对干燥的洞穴。
要求：“The next morning, as the sun peeked through the clouds, Dave heard a familiar voice.” 为开头，续写第二段，词数 80 - 100 词左右。需运用较多修辞描写（如明喻、暗喻、夸张、拟人等 ）。
The next morning, as the sun peeked through the clouds, Dave heard a familiar voice. It was Ben! His voice echoed through the mountainside, sounding like a sweet melody to Dave's ears after a night of worry. Dave rushed out of the cave, his eyes scanning the slope eagerly. There, he saw Ben climbing up the mountain, his clothes muddy and his face tired but filled with relief. Dave ran down to meet him, and the two friends embraced tightly. "I thought I'd lost you," Ben said, his voice choked with emotion. "Never," Dave replied, smiling. The sun continued to rise, casting a warm glow over the mountains, as if nature itself was welcoming their reunion. They knew they still had a long way to go to get back home, but with their friendship and the hope that the sun brought, they were ready to face whatever came ne
Every creative rewrite you’ve done today will light up your path to becoming a masterful storyteller.
读后续写微技能之修辞
以no cellphone holiday为例
Lead in：Review the plot
Beginning
Climax
Rising action
Ending
Falling action
Kathy tried to get her phone back, but failed. Then she worked on a puzzle.
Kathy’s family started a beach vocation with a no-phone rule.
Kathy wanted to share the beautiful scene with Betty, but she didn’t have a phone.
( reluctance)
( annoyed--exhausted)
( enjoyable--disappointed)
Presentation in groups
文本理解问题：
情节设计问题：
语言表达问题：
Students in groups to analyze and summarize the types of questions according to three categories:
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.
__________________________________________________
__________________________________________________ _______________________________________________
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn't thought of her cellphone for hours.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
First Writing Instruction
1. What did Kathy see at the beach
2. How did she feel about being phone-free there
1. How did the puzzle make Kathy feel
2. What was the end of this story
3. What did Kathy do with the puzzle
First Writing Instruction
Rhetorical Devices used in the text
1. The books looked as dull as the weather.
2. Rain started to pour. “Even more beautiful in the rain,”her mother said.
3. After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o'clock.
Personification
Simile
Exaggeration
Golden sunlight _________ the world, and the ocean,________________
sparkles under the blue sky.
What did Kathy see at the beach
1. 让人惊艳的美景深深地吸引了她。（Personification）
The _________scenery ______________________her deeply.
2. 金色的阳光点亮了世界，像蓝色水晶般的海洋在天空下闪闪发光。
First Writing Instruction (language)
stunning
like a blue crystal,
captured/allured/entranced
How did she feel about being phone-free there
lit up
1. 海浪轻柔地拍打着她的双脚，一种放松的感觉在她的全身蔓延开来。
With waves patting on her feet gently, she felt a sense of relaxation surging through her.
What did Kathy do with the puzzle
All of a sudden, the unfinished puzzle struck her. She was so determined to complete it even if ________________________(即使可能要一个世纪那么久。)
it would take like a century.
Para 1.
She found that she was more concentrated and relaxed than when she kept her phone.
1. How did the puzzle make Kathy feel
First Writing Instruction (language)
She understood that the importance of the holiday was not to update pictures, but rather like a soothing balm for the soul to relax and embark on a journey of self-exploration.
Para 2.
她明白假期的重要性不在于更新图片，而更像是抚慰心灵的良药，能让人放松并开启自我探索之旅.
The __________________(烦恼) from yesterday had passed.
2. What was the end of this story
storm of annoyance
李煜
First Correction and Display
Revise the first draft by correcting the mistakes that occur in the process of writing and polishing it according to what you have learned.
Evaluation Criteria
Plot Logic Language Theme Spelling
grammar
Stars
Reasons
在每一栏给出你的打分及原因（满分为100） Overall summary
understand original text
proper plots
use rhetorical devices
four points
Simile
Metaphor
Personification
Exaggeration
李煜
Homework: writing practice
Dave 和 Ben 在一个阳光明媚的周日决定去山脚下露营。到达露营地后，他们搭好帐篷，享受着美好的时光。然而，傍晚时分，暴雨倾盆，河水迅速上涨，营地被洪水淹没。慌乱中，两人与彼此走散，迷失了方向。Dave 努力保持冷静，向山上攀爬，找到了一个相对干燥的洞穴。
要求：“The next morning, as the sun peeked through the clouds, Dave heard a familiar voice.” 为开头，续写第二段，词数 80 - 100 词左右。需运用较多修辞描写（如明喻、暗喻、夸张、拟人等 ）。
The next morning, as the sun peeked through the clouds, Dave heard a familiar voice. It was Ben! His voice echoed through the mountainside, sounding like a sweet melody to Dave's ears after a night of worry. Dave rushed out of the cave, his eyes scanning the slope eagerly. There, he saw Ben climbing up the mountain, his clothes muddy and his face tired but filled with relief. Dave ran down to meet him, and the two friends embraced tightly. "I thought I'd lost you," Ben said, his voice choked with emotion. "Never," Dave replied, smiling. The sun continued to rise, casting a warm glow over the mountains, as if nature itself was welcoming their reunion. They knew they still had a long way to go to get back home, but with their friendship and the hope that the sun brought, they were ready to face whatever came ne
Every creative rewrite you’ve done today will light up your path to becoming a masterful storyteller.