译林版（2024）八年级上册unit2 School life单元知识复习第4讲--书面表达（含答案）

8AU2 School life单元知识复习第4讲--书面表达
一、作文核心模块
（一）好词积累（核心词汇 / 短语）
类别 英文词汇/短语 中文含义 文档关联场景
建议类动词 suggest (doing sth.) 建议（做某事） 提出校园活动、课程相关建议
advise (sb. to do sth.) 建议（某人做某事） 给同学 / 老师提学习、活动建议
provide (sb. with sth.) 为（某人）提供（某物） 建议学校提供资源、课程
develop (good habits/skills) 养成（好习惯 / 技能） 建议培养校园学习、生活习惯
organize (activities/clubs) 组织（活动 / 社团） 建议优化校园社团、实践活动
校园活动类名词 drama club/art club 戏剧社 / 美术社 社团活动相关建议
science programme/practical courses 科学课程 / 实用技能课 课程设置相关建议
volunteer activities 志愿活动 校园实践、环保类建议
safety courses 安全课程 校园安全、生活技能建议
积极类形容词 practical 实用的 描述课程、活动的好处
creative 有创造力的 描述社团、艺术活动的价值
meaningful 有意义的 描述志愿、实践活动的意义
colorful 丰富多彩的 描述优化后的校园生活
连接 / 逻辑短语 First/Second/Finally 首先 / 其次 / 最后 分点提建议，梳理逻辑
Because/As 因为 说明建议的理由
In this way/As a result 这样 / 因此 说明建议带来的好处
（二）好句模板（分场景）
1. 开头引入话题（引出 “给学校生活提建议” 的目的）
Our school life is colorful with various classes and clubs, but there are still small changes to make it better.
I love our school, but I have some suggestions to help improve our daily school life.
As a junior high school student, I think we can make our school life more meaningful by doing the following things.
2. 中间提建议（分点，“建议内容 + 理由 / 好处”）
建议 1：优化课程 / 资源First, I suggest our school provide us with more practical courses, such as cooking or handcrafts. These courses can help us develop life skills, which are as important as academic knowledge.（用到文档句型 “provide sb. with sth.”“develop skills”）
建议 2：丰富社团 / 活动Second, we can organize more volunteer activities, like collecting used plastic bottles to make crafts. Such activities are not only fun but also help us realize the importance of protecting the environment.（用到文档话题 “used plastic bottles”“realize the importance of”）
建议 3：培养学习 / 生活习惯Finally, I advise teachers to remind us to develop good study habits, such as finishing homework on time and paying attention to class. In this way, we can learn more efficiently.（用到文档短语 “finish doing sth.”“pay attention to”“develop good habits”）
3. 结尾总结期望
I believe if we take these suggestions, our school life will become more practical and meaningful.
I hope our school can consider these ideas, and we will all enjoy a better school life together.
（三）结构分析（三段式，贴合单元写作要求）
段落 核心任务 常用句式/逻辑 文档关联内容
开头（1 段） 引入 “学校生活可优化” 的话题 先肯定校园生活（colorful/interesting），再提出 “有建议可改进” 结合文档 “校园活动、课程” 话题
中间（2-3 段） 分 2-3 条提建议（每条含 “建议 + 理由”） 用 “First/Second/Finally” 分点，每条建议后接 “Because/As” 说明好处 建议围绕 “课程、社团、习惯”（文档高频话题）
结尾（1 段） 总结期望 用 “I believe/I hope” 表达对优化后校园生活的期待 呼应开头，强调 “更好的校园生活”
二、实战演练
（一）写作题目
Write a letter to your head teacher. In the letter, give 2-3 suggestions on improving school life. Use specific reasons to support your ideas.（80-100 words）
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（二）写作要点提示
1. 开头：礼貌问候 + 引入话题（如 “Dear Mr./Ms. Wang, I’m a Grade 8 student. I’m writing to give some suggestions on making our school life better.”）
2. 中间建议：
建议 1：增加 “环保实践课”（理由：用 used plastic bottles 做手工，既有趣又能培养环保意识）；
建议 2：优化社团活动（如在 science club 增加更多小实验，理由：提供 practical experience，帮助理解科学知识）；
3. 结尾：礼貌感谢 + 表达期望（如 “Thank you for reading my letter. I hope our school life will be more meaningful.”）
（三）参考范文
Dear Ms. Li,I’m a Grade 8 student. I love our school, but I’m writing to give two suggestions on improving school life.
First, I suggest our school add an environmental practice class. We can collect used plastic bottles to make small crafts. This class is not only fun but also helps us realize the importance of protecting the environment.
Second, I advise the science club to organize more small experiments. For example, we can try mixing simple materials to make “volcano models”. This will provide us with plenty of practical experience and make science more interesting.
Thank you for your time. I believe these suggestions will make our school life better.Yours sincerely,Li Ming