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PRACTICAL WRITING
How to write an suggestion letter
建议 v.
建议 n.
向某人求助 v.
在我看来
认为…有用
采纳建议
我很抱歉听到
期望
希望
Helpful expressions
Say aloud!
1.Advise sb to do sth /suggest doing sth
2.advice/suggestion
6.follow/take/adopt one’s advice
7.I’m sorry to hear that…
8.Look forward to
5.Find it useful/helpful/beneficial to do sth
3.Ask sb for help
4.In my opinion/Personally speaking
9.Wish sb to do sth/ hope to do sth
建议 v.
建议 n.
向某人求助 v.
在我看来
认为…有用
采纳建议
我很抱歉听到
期望
希望
Helpful expressions
Say aloud!
1.Advise sb to do sth /suggest doing sth
2.advice/suggestion
6.follow/take/adopt one’s advice
7.I’m sorry to hear that…
8.Look forward to
5.Find it useful/helpful/beneficial to do sth
3.Ask sb for help
4.In my opinion/Personally speaking
9.Wish sb to do sth/ hope to do sth
Structure:三段论
假设你是李华, 你的英国朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球,每天花很多时间打球,结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满,要他放弃这个爱好,他很生气。根据以下提示,请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。要点如下:
1.认真计划好自己的时间; 2. 不要放弃自己的爱好,也不要忘记学习;
3. 保持学习和爱好之间的平衡
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
课堂练习
an suggestion letter
第一步:审题
体裁:建议信
时态:
结构:三段论
第一段
第二段
第三段
一般将来时
寒暄+背景+表明建议态度
分点陈述
期盼建议有用+尽快回复
Paragraph1:寒暄,自我介绍,写信背景,写信目的
寒暄:最近过得怎样?
自我介绍:我是李华,你的一个也喜欢篮球的朋友。
写信背景:得知你父母要求你放弃篮球因为你没有足够的时间完成作业。
写信目的:我写信给你一些建议。
How is everything/it going =How have you been
I’m Li Hua, one of your friend loving basketball.
Formal/informal
第二步:过程写作
I learned that your parents ask you to give up basketball because you don’t have enough time to finish your homework.
I am writing to give you some advice.
Opening
Closing
Body
v.s.
Paragraph2:给出具体的建议并且说明原因
首先,认真计划好自己的时间是一个好主意。
原因:这能帮助你知道你什么时候可以打篮球。
其次,不要放弃自己的爱好,也不要忘记学习。
最后但是同样重要的是,保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。
原因:最后你会发现你成长成为一个全面的人。
First, it is a good idea to carefully plan your day.
Last but not least, you need to balance learning and hobby.
It can help you know when you can play basketball.
Then, don’t give up your hobby and forget your study.
In time you will find yourself growing into a well-rounded individual.
Paragraph3:希望建议有用,期待尽快回复
如果我的建议能帮到你,我将很开心。
期待你的尽早回复。
I would be very happy if my suggestions are useful for you.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Dear Simon,
How is it going I’m Li Hua, one of your friend loving basketball. Knowing that your parents ask you to give up basketball because you don’t have enough time to finish your homework. I am writing to give you some advice.
The suggestion are as follows. First, it is a good idea to carefully plan your day. It can help you know when you can play basketball. Then, don’t give up your hobby and forget your study. Last but not least, you need to keep a balance between learning and hobby. In time you will find yourself growing into a well-rounded individual.
I would be very happy if my suggestions are useful for you. Looking forward to your early reply.
yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
Paragraph 1:
How is it going I’m Li Hua…(同位语). Knowing that…(写作背景:题干信息). I am writing to give you some advice.
Paragraph 2:
The suggestion are as follows. First,(建议1+原因).Then, (建议2+原因). Last but not least, (建议3+原因).
Paragraph 3:
I would be very happy if my suggestions are useful for you. Looking forward to your early reply.
Conclusion
假定你是李华,你的好友Lisa在最近一次考试中成绩下滑,不敢面对父母和老师。请你用英语给她写一封信,给出你的建议。内容包括:
1.心态很重要,自信是关键;
2.烦恼时找父母或老师寻求帮助;
3.改变学习方法。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
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