【单元考点培优】Module 1 考点11：书面表达-2025-2026学年外研版（一起）四年级英语上册核心考点培优精练（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年外研版 (一起) 四年级英语上册核心考点精练
Module 1 考点11：书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．以“My Birthday Party”为题，描述一下你的生日聚会，不少于四句话。
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2．Emma和她好朋友Alice的生日前后只相差1天，上周Alice也过了一个难忘的生日，请你仿照Alice的生日日记也来仿写一段你自己的吧。
要求：（1）. 用一般过去时描写，不少于三个生日活动。
（2）. 规范书写，正确使用大小写和标点符号。
（3）. 全文不得少于5句。
It was my birthday last week. I went to the shop and bought some candies. I took photos. Then I went home. I helped my mum make a birthday cake. After dinner I watched TV. I was very happy.
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3．书面表达。
你正在参加一个生日派对，请结合参考问题，写一段话介绍派对的场景，要求语句通顺，并且不少于5句话。
参考问题：（1）. Whose party is it
（2）. What’s the weather like
（3）. Who comes to the party
（4）. What are they doing
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4．英语写作。
请以My birthday为题写一篇作文，介绍你的生日在什么季节，哪一天，天气怎样，你打算怎样庆祝等。
写作要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，单词标点正确，书写工整规范，不少于40词。(注：文中不准出现真实校名、姓名等信息)
写作提示：运用一般将来时态。可能用到的单词或短语供参考：a birthday cake，sunny, sing, dance, have a good time等。
My birthday
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5．书面表达。
请以My birthday为题写一篇小短文，不少于5句话。要求语句通顺，表达正确。
My birthday
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6．书面表达。
亲爱的同学们，一岁一礼，每年都很期待过生日吧。请分享自己或者爸爸妈妈，亦或是好朋友的生日吧。要求：1.覆盖所有信息；2.大小写及标点符号使用规范；3.不少于5句话。
____________ birthday
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7．写作：同学们，你认为在你人生中最重要的日子是什么呢？根据作文提纲，完成作文，不少于8句话。
Date
Activities (活动)
Feelings
Ending Wishes (期望)
My important day
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8．小作文。
假如你是Mary，你快要过生日了，准备举办一个生日派对。你想邀请你的好朋友来参加你的生日聚会。请你根据表格提供的信息，给你的朋友们发送邮件，邀请她们来参加聚会。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，尝试运用描述性语言，使语言丰富、生动，不少于5句话。
Time 2:30 p.m., Tuesday, July 10
Address Building 401, Chaoyang Street
Activities(活动) eat a cake, sing songs, dance...
Dear friends,
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Would you like to come to the party Please write back.
Mary
9．书面表达。
提示：今天是8月12日，是你的朋友Tim的生日，你们正在他家里给他过生日。发挥想象，用现在进行时态描述生日派对的情况。
要求：（1）. 内容不少于6句话，不要写成对话形式。
（2）. 条理清楚，语句通顺，拼写正确，书写规范。
（3）. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Tim’s birthday
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10．写作。
请以“My best friend”为题写一篇短文，介绍最好的朋友给大家。根据参考内容，不少于5句话。注意规范书写和语法句型正确。
参考词汇：Canada, eight, June, music, rabbits, Sunday, yellow
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11．书面表达。
同学们，请根据表格内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的好朋友Lisa。
favourite subject Science
favourite fruit strawberries
favourite sport tennis
favourite instrument (乐器) piano
要求：(1) 包含表格所有内容，可适当发挥；
(2) 书写规范，条理清晰；
(3) 不少于5句话。
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12．请介绍你的一个好朋友吧，内容可包括你好朋友的名字，外貌特征、服装、会做什么等，可使用参考句式，也可适当发挥，不少于5句话。
参考句式: He’s / She’s… He / She can… He /She cannot… He / She has…
This is my friend.
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13．画一画你的一位好朋友，并向你的外国朋友介绍一下，介绍他／她的姓名、外貌、衣着、喜好、会做什么等等，至少写出五个句子。
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14．请根据所给的思维导图，以“My friend”为题写一篇短文介绍朋友Anna的相关情况，可适当发挥，不少于6句话。
My friend
Look! This is my friend.
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15．假如你是LiuJian，根据所学知识和下面表格中的信息，写出你和朋友的国家(country)，年龄及所喜欢的食物。至少写出10个句子。
人物 coutry (国家) age (年龄) favorite food
Liu Jian China 11 dumplings
Lily UK 12 fried rice
Jack Canada 13 hot dogs
Hello! I’m LiuJian. I’m
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
My Birthday Party
I am going to be eleven this weekend. I am going to have a birthday party. On Saturday morning, my parents and I are going to a supermarket to buy some food for the party. In the afternoon, my friends are going to my home. We are going to sing and dance. In the evening, I am going to have a big dinner with my family.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的生日派对。然后再阐述要做的具体事情。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：weekend周末，supermarket超市，sing唱歌，dance跳舞， have a big dinner吃一顿丰盛的晚餐
参考句型：I am going to...； On Saturday morning, my parents and I...；In the afternoon, my friends are going to...；In the evening, I am going to...
2．范文：
It was my birthday last week. I went to the zoo with my mum. I saw many animals. I took many pictures of the lovely animals. Then I went to shopping with my mum. She bought a dress for me. After that, I had a party at home with my friends. I was very happy.
【解析】题目解读：该题目要求以第一人称来描写自己过生日的情景，说明做的事情，心情如何，文章时态为一般过去时，并满足句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：zoo动物园，lovely可爱的，dress裙子，happy开心的，
参考句型：
I went to…；I had…；I was…；
3．范文：
It’s Tom’s birthday party. The weather is sunny and warm. Many friends and family come to the party. We are singing, dancing, and eating a cake. We are all having a great time!
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求参考问题，写一段话介绍自己正在参加的生日派对的场景。时态是现在进行时和一般现在时，人称是第三人称和第一人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：sunny晴朗的，warm温暖的，friends朋友，sing唱歌，dance跳舞，eat a cake吃蛋糕
参考句型：It’s...；The weather...；...come to the party.；We are doing...
4．例文
My birthday
My birthday is on November 5th. It’s in autumn. The weather is cool. I am going to have a birthday party. My parents will make a birthday cake for me. My friends will sing birthday song for me. We will dance together. We are going to have a good time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目是以My birthday为题写一篇作文，介绍你的生日在什么季节，哪一天，天气怎样，你打算怎样庆祝等。时态是一般将来时。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，单词标点正确，书写工整规范，不少于40词。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：a birthday cake一个生日蛋糕，sunny晴朗的，sing唱歌，dance跳舞，have a good time玩得开心
参考句型：It’s in…；The weather is…；I am going to…；We will…
5．范文：
My birthday My name is Tom. My birthday is on February 12th. On that day, my dad buys a cake for me. My mum cooks noodles for me. My friends give me gifts. We have a birthday party. We sing and dance. We have a lot of fun.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求以My birthday为题写一篇短文。可以写一写自己生日在几月几日，都做些什么事情。注意文章为一般现在时态，句子数量要符合要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：buy a cake 买蛋糕，cook noodles 煮面条，gift 礼物，birthday party 生日聚会，sing and dance 唱歌跳舞
参考句型：… is… ；We … ；My mum…；My dad…；My friends…；
6．范文：
My birthday I had a great birthday last year. It was a Sunday, so I didn’t go to school. In the morning I got some presents from my family. My favourite present was from my sister. It was a beautiful doll. We had noodles for lunch. In the afternoon my friends came to my home. We had a party and ate a big cake together in the evening. They sang the birthday song for me. What a nice day!
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据提供的信息写一篇关于过生日的短文，注意时态可用一般过去时，同时注意大小写及标点符号使用规范，语句通顺连贯，无语法错误并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：presents礼物，a beautiful doll一个漂亮的玩具娃娃，noodles面条，a big cake一个大蛋糕，the birthday song生日歌
参考句型： I had...；I got...；My favourite present was...；We had...
7．范文：
My important day December 10th is an important day for me, because it’s my birthday. On my birthday, I have a birthday party. My mother cooks delicious food for me. My sister and I sing and dance in the living room. I can also get many gifts from my father. We often watch a film together. I am always very happy. I hope to celebrate my birthday every day.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称写一写人生中最重要的日子，可以从日期，活动，感受和期望方面描写，注意文章时态为一般现在时并符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：December十二月，important重要的，birthday生日，delicious美味的，living room客厅，together一起，celebrate庆祝
参考句型：On my birthday…；My mother…；I can…；We often…；I hope…
8．范文：
Dear friends,
How are you My birthday is coming up soon. I am so excited! I am going to hold a birthday party. I will hold a party on Tuesday, July 10th at 2:30 p.m. We will meet at Building 401, Chaoyang Street. We will eat a cake, dance and sing songs in the party.
Would you like to come to the party Please write back.
Mary
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据表格信息用第一人称写一封电子邮件，要求朋友们来参加即将举办的生日派对。内容包括派对时间、地点以及派对活动。注意文章时态为一般将来时，语句要通顺，意思要连贯，要符合句数要求。5句话。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：eat a cake吃蛋糕，sing songs唱歌，dance跳舞
参考句型：I am going to ……；It is going to……；We will……
9．范文：
Tim’s birthday
Today is the twelfth of August. It’s Tim’s birthday. He is very happy. He has a birthday party at his house. All of his friends come to the party. Look! Tim is making a wish. Helen is taking photos. Mike and I are singing and dancing. We all have a lot of fun.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一写蒂姆的生日活动。然后再阐述生日日期、地点及聚会上的人正在做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态和现在进行时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：twelfth第十二，August八月，birthday party生日聚会，make a wish许愿，take photos拍照
参考句型：Today is …； It’s …；He is/has …； All of his friends …；... is/are ...
10．范文：
My best friend
Lily is my best friend. She is from Canada. She is eight years old. Her birthday is in June. She likes listening to music. She has got two lovely rabbits. Her favourite food is the pizza. She likes yellow best. We go out and take a walk every Sunday.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My best friend”为题写一篇短文，介绍最好的朋友给大家。注意文章时态为一般现在时并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：Canada加拿大，June六月，listen to music听音乐，rabbits兔子，Sunday星期天
参考句型：She is from…；She is...years old.；She likes…；She has got...；Her favourite food is...；She likes...best.
11．例文：
This is my friend Lisa. Her favourite subject is Science. Her favourite fruit is strawberries. Her favourite sport is tennis. Her favourite instrument is piano.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称介绍丽萨的喜好。阐述她最喜欢的科目、水果、运动及乐器。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：favourite subject最喜欢的科目，Science科学，fruit水果，strawberries草莓，sport运动，tennis网球，instrument乐器，piano钢琴
参考句型： This is…；Her favourite subject is…；Her favourite fruit is…；Her favourite sport is…；Her favourite instrument is…
12．例文
This is my friend. His name is Tom. He is tall and thin. He has short hair. He has a green T-shirt and a pair of brown shorts. He can skate and ride a bike. He cannot swim.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目是请介绍你的一个好朋友，内容可包括你好朋友的名字，外貌特征、服装、会做什么等，可使用参考句式，也可适当发挥，时态是一般现在时。要求：不少于5句话
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：tall高的，thin瘦的，short hair短头发，green绿色的，T-shirt T恤衫，shorts短裤，skate滑冰，swim游泳，ride a bike骑自行车
参考句型：He’s / She’s…；He / She can…；He /She cannot…；He / She has…
13．范文：
I have a good friend. Her name is Lily. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes wearing a pink dress. She likes dancing. She can play the piano.
【解析】该题目要求画一画你的一位好朋友，并向你的外国朋友介绍一下，介绍他／她的姓名、外貌、衣着、喜好、会做什么等等，时态是一般现在时态，人称是第三人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：name名字，big eyes大眼睛，long hair长头发，dress裙子，dance跳舞，play the piano弹钢琴
参考句型：Her/His name is...；She/He has...；She/He likes...；She/He can...
14．范文：
My friend
Look! This is my friend. Her name is Anna. She is tall. She is ten years old. She likes eating tomatoes. She likes dancing. She likes her green dress.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My friend”为题写一篇短文介绍朋友Anna的相关情况。然后再阐述名字，外貌，年龄，喜欢的食物、服装及喜欢做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：tall高的，ten years old十岁，tomatoes西红柿，green dress绿色的连衣裙，dance跳舞
参考句型：Her name is …； She is …；She likes …
15．范文：
Hello! I’m Liu Jian. I’m from China. I’m 11 years old. My favorite food is dumplings. Lily and Jack are my good friends. Lily is from the UK. She is 12 years old. Her favorite food is fried rice. Jack is from Canada. He is 13 years old. His favorite food is fried rice. I like them.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该书面表达让你根据所给表格信息，写出自己的朋友的国家、年龄及所喜欢的食物，同时根据自己所学适当拓展，文章时态是一般现在时。至少写出10个句子。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：China中国，dumplings饺子，UK英国，fried rice炒饭，Canada加拿大，hot dogs热狗；
参考句型：I’m from…，I’m…years old，My favorite food is…，Lily is from…,Lily is ... years old，Her favorite food is…，Jack is from…，Jack is…years old，His favorite food is…；
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