(共10张PPT)
写作训练四
推荐信
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
推荐信是为了向某人或某个组织、单位等推荐事务或人而写的信件。一般采用“三段式结构”：
1. 首段：说明写信目的及要推荐的对象
2. 主体段落：阐述推荐理由及所推荐对象的特征
3. 尾段：期待自己的推荐能让对方满意
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
一、必备短语
1.计划做某事 is scheduled to do
2.坐落于： is located/is situated in
3.拥有悠久璀璨的历史： has/own a long and splendid history
4.旅游景点： tourist attractions
5.文化遗迹： culture relics/heritages
6.欣赏让人惊叹的自然美景： admire breathtaking natural scenery.
7.品味古代精巧的建筑： appreciate the ancient and delicate architecture
8.品尝正宗中国美食： taste authentic Chinese cuisine
9.提供难忘和丰富的体验： offer you a memorable and enriching experience
10.让你深入了解 give you a deep insight into
11.不可错过的城市 a city you can’t miss
12.值得探访 is worth a visit 13.不辜负期待 live up to your expectation
13.国内外at home and abroad 14.享有盛誉 enjoy a great reputation as
15.开拓视野broaden one’s horizons
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
二【常用表达】
1.位置： My hometown is located in/lies in Guangdong province of China.
2.面积，历史，人口： Covering a total area of 150 square kilometers, it has a history of 300 years and has a population of two million.
3.景色： It is well-known that every year its beautiful scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad.
4.气候： Moreover, my hometown enjoys warm and wet climate
5.资源与特产：so it is rich in natural resources as well as fruits and vegetables. It is famous for its banana , lychee and so on.
6.交通：Most importantly, it is easier for them to go anywhere with convenient transportation.
7. 文化：traditional cultures and customs 传统文化风俗
8. 特色：special snacks 特色小吃delicious dishes美食 special local products 特产
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
三、句型
1.Located in...，地方
is a ...city...with a history of
eg: Located in the southeast of China, Hangzhou is a beautiful city with a history of 2200 years．
2.面积+人口It covers an area of ...square kilometers(平方公里) with a population of ....
eg: It covers an area of 6,587 square kilometers with a population of 8 million.
3.强调句 It is +强调部分+ that…
It is its unique architecture that attracts a great number of tourists at home and abroad.
4. …特别令人惊讶Especially amazing is sth./that+句子
5. 我最欣赏的是…What I admire most is sth./that+句子
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
6. What I admire most is the small park. It is a symbol(象征) of Shantou, which has witnessed too much coming and going in history.
7.倒装(not only … but also)、双重否定、举例子(, including...; , among which …)
Not only is it rich in Chinese traditional culture but also famous for unique architecture. By visiting this excellent city, not only can you have an opportunity to satisfy your appetite, but also broaden your horizons.
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
四、范文赏析
介绍汕头：
I am extremely delighted to hear that you are scheduled to pay a visit to Shantou. In order to make sure you will have an enjoyable and unforgettable trip, I can hardly wait to give you a brief introduction to it.
Located in the east part of Guangdong, Shantou, a coastal city with a brilliant history, covers an area of about 2200 square kilometers. As is known to all, there are plenty of tourist attractions in Shantou, among which the Small Park is what you cannot afford to miss. It is its unique architecture that attracts a great number of tourists at home and abroad. By visiting this amazing city, not only can you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture and history but also fully admire the nearby appealing scenery.
I do hope my recommendations can be helpful and wish you have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your reply.
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
五、真题演练
假定你是李华， 你的外国朋友Tom将要来中国游玩，发邮件向你征求旅游建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括；
1）推荐一个旅游城市
2） 给出推荐的理由和计划安排
3）表达祝愿
注意:1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
LOREM IPSUM DOLOR SIT AMET,
TJBT
范文赏析：
Dear Tom,
Having acquired the enchanting让人喜悦的 massage that you are scheduled to travel in China, I can’t wait to write to recommend my favorite travel destination目的地 Bejing, expecting that you can take it into consideration.
Admittedly诚然, Beijing ranks first on my recommendation list for the following reasons. To begin with, it is commonly recognized that众所周知 Beijing, the capital of China, is a place where you can both visit cultural heritages and admire breathtaking natural scenery at a time. I strongly recommend a visit to the Forbidden City as not only can you explore the long and splendid history in the museums, but you also can appreciate the ancient and delicate architecture there. Additionally, what is worth highlighting is that值得强调的是 for those who are attracted to the delicious food, Beijing will surely live up to your expectations with a variety of authentic Chinese cuisine. After sightseeing all the famous tourist attractions like The Great Wall, Summer Palace, The Temple of Haven at day time, you can dive into Hutong to enjoy the night culture relaxedly. As is mentioned above如上所述, Beijing is a place you can’t miss and worth a visit.
With heartfelt sincerity, I hope that you find it worthwhile to travel in this city, which is sure to offer you a memorable and enriching experience. Wish you a good stay in China. Yours,
Li Hua
THANK YOU
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推荐地点
一、必备短语
计划做某事 is scheduled to do
坐落于： is located/is situated in
拥有悠久璀璨的历史： has/own a long and splendid history
旅游景点： tourist attractions
文化遗迹： culture relics/heritages
欣赏让人惊叹的自然美景： admire breathtaking natural scenery.
品味古代精巧的建筑： appreciate the ancient and delicate architecture
品尝正宗中国美食： taste authentic Chinese cuisine
提供难忘和丰富的体验： offer you a memorable and enriching experience
让你深入了解 give you a deep insight into
不可错过的城市 a city you can’t miss
值得探访 is worth a visit 13.不辜负期待 live up to your expectation
国内外at home and abroad 14.享有盛誉 enjoy a great reputation as
15.开拓视野broaden one’s horizons
二【常用表达】
1.位置： My hometown is located in/lies in Guangdong province of China.
2.面积，历史，人口： Covering a total area of 150 square kilometers, it has a history of 300 years and has a population of two million.
3.景色： It is well-known that every year its beautiful scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad.
4.气候： Moreover, my hometown enjoys warm and wet climate
5.资源与特产：so it is rich in natural resources as well as fruits and vegetables. It is famous for its banana , lychee and so on.
6.交通：Most importantly, it is easier for them to go anywhere with convenient transportation.
7. 文化：traditional cultures and customs 传统文化风俗
8. 特色：special snacks 特色小吃delicious dishes美食 special local products 特产
句型
1.Located in...，地方is a ...city...with a history of
eg: Located in the southeast of China, Hangzhou is a beautiful city with a history of 2200 years．
B.面积+人口It covers an area of ...square kilometers(平方公里) with a population of .... eg: It covers an area of 6,587 square kilometers with a population of 8 million.
1.强调句 It is +强调部分+ that…
It is its unique architecture that attracts a great number of tourists at home and abroad.
2. …特别令人惊讶Especially amazing is sth./that+句子
3. 我最欣赏的是…What I admire most is sth./that+句子
4. What I admire most is the small park. It is a symbol(象征) of Shantou, which has witnessed too much coming and going in history.
5.倒装(not only … but also)、双重否定、举例子(, including...; , among which …)
Not only is it rich in Chinese traditional culture but also famous for unique architecture. By visiting this excellent city, not only can you have an opportunity to satisfy your appetite, but also broaden your horizons.
介绍汕头：
I am extremely delighted to hear that you are scheduled to pay a visit to Shantou. In order to make sure you will have an enjoyable and unforgettable trip, I can hardly wait to give you a brief introduction to it.
Located in the east part of Guangdong, Shantou, a coastal city with a brilliant history, covers an area of about 2200 square kilometers. As is known to all, there are plenty of tourist attractions in Shantou, among which the Small Park is what you cannot afford to miss. It is its unique architecture that attracts a great number of tourists at home and abroad. By visiting this amazing city, not only can you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture and history but also fully admire the nearby appealing scenery.
I do hope my recommendations can be helpful and wish you have a wonderful time here. Looking forward to your reply.
假定你是李华， 你的外国朋友Tom将要来中国游玩，发邮件向你征求旅游建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括；1）推荐一个旅游城市 2） 给出推荐的理由和计划安排 3）表达祝愿
Dear Tom,
Having acquired the enchanting让人喜悦的 massage that you are scheduled to travel in China, I can’t wait to write to recommend my favorite travel destination目的地 Bejing, expecting that you can take it into consideration.
Admittedly诚然, Beijing ranks first on my recommendation list for the following reasons. To begin with, it is commonly recognized that众所周知 Beijing, the capital of China, is a place where you can both visit cultural heritages and admire breathtaking natural scenery at a time. I strongly recommend a visit to the Forbidden City as not only can you explore the long and splendid history in the museums, but you also can appreciate the ancient and delicate architecture there. Additionally, what is worth highlighting is that值得强调的是 for those who are attracted to the delicious food, Beijing will surely live up to your expectation with a variety of authentic Chinese cuisine. After sightseeing all the famous tourist attractions like The Great Wall, Summer Palace, The Temple of Haven at day time, you can dive into Hutong to enjoy the night culture relaxedly. As is mentioned above如上所述, Beijing is a place you can’t miss and worth a visit.
With heartfelt sincerity, I hope that you find it worthwhile to travel in this city, which is sure to offer you a memorable and enriching experience. Wish you a good stay in China.
