【单元考点培优】Unit 3 Would you …… birthday party？考点14：书面表达-2025-2026学年人教精通版（三起）六年级英语上册核心考点培优精练

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2025-2026学年人教精通版（三起）六年级英语上册核心考点精练
Unit 3 Would you like to come to my birthday party？
考点14：书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是Li Lei，根据以下表格信息写一篇不少于60词的短文，向暑假即将来到中国研学的交换生Tom介绍自己。
Age Birthday 13 September 8th Exercising habits tennis (3times a week) jog (every day)
Birthday Activity have a birthday party eat birthday noodles with eggs Eating habits I like eating more... I don’t like eating...
要求：
（1）.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）.包含所给信息，可适当发挥；表达准确，语言通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁；
（3）.文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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2．小练笔。
Amy在Daming的生日派对上玩得很开心，这也勾起了她对自己上一次生日派对的回忆。假设你是Amy，请根据思维导图提示，以“My Last Birthday”为题，描述一下自己过生日的场景。
要求：1．标点正确，书写清晰、规范，条理清楚，语句通顺；2．字数在40—60词。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．小作文。
假如你是Mary，你快要过生日了，准备举办一个生日派对。你想邀请你的好朋友来参加你的生日聚会。请你根据表格提供的信息，给你的朋友们发送邮件，邀请她们来参加聚会。要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，尝试运用描述性语言，使语言丰富、生动，不少于5句话。
Time 2:30 p.m., Tuesday, July 10
Address Building 401, Chaoyang Street
Activities(活动) eat a cake, sing songs, dance...
Dear friends,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Would you like to come to the party Please write back.
Mary
4．请根据题目要求写出不少于五句话的文段。
同学们，像上文一样，你们也有过很多难忘的生日，收到过一些“特殊”的生日礼物和祝福吧？请对自己的一次生日进行描写。下面的提示问题可以帮助到你。
When is your birthday What presents did you get on your birthday
What did you do on your birthday How did you feel And why
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．书面表达。
十月八日是Emily的生日。去年生日她过得非常开心，今年她打算……请仔细观察以下图片，写一写她的生日。
要求：(1) 短文要包含文字及图片所提供的全部信息；
(2) 可发挥想象，适当添加内容，语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
(3) 不少于40词，已给单词不计入总词数。
Emily’s birthday
Emily’s birthday is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．看图写话。
假设昨天是Daming的生日，请你根据以下图片提示，描述一下大家都在Daming的生日派对上做了什么。
提示词：guitar吉他
要求：(1) 所写内容须包括图片主要信息，意思连贯，语句通畅；(2) 不少于5句话。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．书面表达。
下个星期六将是你爸爸的生日，你和妈妈准备给他举办一个生日聚会。请以“A birthday party for my father”为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一个你们的计划吧。
要求：（1）.语句通顺，意思连贯；（2）.不少于50词。
A birthday party for my father
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8．妙笔生花。同学们，你们喜欢过生日吗？在生日当天，你们都会做些什么呢？请回忆自己上一次过生日的画面，写一篇小作文。
可能用到的词汇：was happy invited friends gave presents sang and danced played games had a good time
My Last Birthday _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假如你是Lingling，上周六是你的生日，家人和朋友们为你举办了一个生日派对。请给你的朋友Amy写一封邮件，告诉她生日派对上发生的事情。
要求：（1）. 条理清晰，语义连贯。
（2）. 书写规范，不少于6句话，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。
Dear Amy,
How are you I want to tell you something about my birthday party.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Love,
Lingling
10．写作。
提示：下图是Mike一家上周日的家庭联欢会的场景。请用合适的时态描写出图中所呈现的内容。
要求：（1）. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。
（2）. 将所给图片的内容描述清楚，可作适当发挥。
（3）. 不得少于90个单词。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．请根据词汇和结构围提示介绍你的生日。
要求：不少于5句话。
My birthday When is your birthday
What do you do
How do you feel
Tips: January, February, March, April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November, December
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．假如你是刘英，上周六是你的生日。晚上七点你和朋友们在家里举办了生日晚会。请写一篇英语作文，向大家简单介绍下你们在生日晚会上表演的情况。
要求：条理清楚，语句通顺，书写工整；最少写5个句子。
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13．假如你是Lucy，今天是你爸爸的生日，你为他举办了一个生日晚会。
在晚会上你唱歌跳舞，爸爸非常喜欢你的舞蹈，感到很高兴，在表演完节目后，你为你爸爸献上了你和你妈妈一起买的生日蛋糕和生日贺卡，你们全家人在这晚玩得很愉快。请你根据材料所述写一篇英语作文，不少于60词。表演节目除了以上列举，还可以发挥想象。
My father's birthday
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．每个人都有属于自己的重要日子，你的重要日子是什 么呢？请以“My important day”为题，根据思维导图提示，用英语来介绍一下吧。
要求：时态正确，语句通顺，表达有条理，书写规范，不少于5句话。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．你的好朋友Betty要开生日派对。大家都在忙碌，Peter在挂“生日快乐”条幅，Daming在打扫房间，Amy 要去买东西。请你把忙碌的场面描述一下吧！
要求：1. 包含所提供的信息要点。2. 书写规范，不少于6句话。
Betty is going to have a birthday party.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
Hello! I am Li Lei. I am 13 years old. My birthday is on September 8th. I often have a birthday party with my friends. I eat birthday noodles with eggs. Long noodles are a symbol of long life. In my daily life, I like doing sports. I play tennis three times a week and jog every day. Doing exercise makes me healthy and strong. As for food, I like eating more fruit and vegetables. Sometimes, I don’t like eating sweet things.
Welcome to China. I hope you will have a good time in China and we can become good friends.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求，根据以下表格信息写一篇短文，向暑假即将来到中国研学的交换生Tom介绍自己。时态是一般现在时，人称是第一人称，同时注意词数的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇： September 8th 9月8日，have a birthday party举办生日聚会，noodles面条，play tennis打网球，jog慢跑，fruit水果，vegetables蔬菜
参考句型：I am...；My birthday is...；I often...； I like...
2．例文
My Last Birthday
One month ago, I had a great birthday party at home. My family and friends came to celebrate with me. We did many fun things. We ate a big and delicious cake. I played the piano for them. One of my friends told an interesting story. Then we sang the birthday song together. After the party, I felt tired but really happy. It was an unforgettable day.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目是假设你是Amy，请根据思维导图提示，以“My Last Birthday”为题，从人物、时间、地点、活动和心情等方面描述一下自己上一次过生日的场景。 时态是一般过去时。要求：标点正确，书写清晰、规范，条理清楚，语句通顺；字数在40—60词。
2. 参考词汇及参考句型：
参考词汇：one month ago一个月前，at home在家，ate a cake吃蛋糕，played the piano弹钢琴，told a story讲故事，sang the birthday song唱生日歌，tired劳累的，happy高兴的
参考句型：I had…；We did…；We ate…；I felt…
3．范文：
Dear friends,
How are you My birthday is coming up soon. I am so excited! I am going to hold a birthday party. I will hold a party on Tuesday, July 10th at 2:30 p.m. We will meet at Building 401, Chaoyang Street. We will eat a cake, dance and sing songs in the party.
Would you like to come to the party Please write back.
Mary
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据表格信息用第一人称写一封电子邮件，要求朋友们来参加即将举办的生日派对。内容包括派对时间、地点以及派对活动。注意文章时态为一般将来时，语句要通顺，意思要连贯，要符合句数要求。5句话。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：eat a cake吃蛋糕，sing songs唱歌，dance跳舞
参考句型：I am going to ……；It is going to……；We will……
4．范文：
My birthday is on the fifth day of May. Last month I spent a happy birthday with my classmates. They are friendly and always kind. I got many beautiful presents on my birthday, such as story books and delicious chocolate cake. We sang songs together, ate the birthday cake and talked about some interesting things together. Of course, we had a good time. And I felt happy because of classmates’ friendship.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求对自己的一次生日进行描写，内容包括什么时候，收到什么礼物，生日时做了什么以及自己的感觉，时态是一般过去时，人称是第一人称，同时注意词数的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：on the fifth day of May5月5日，classmates同学，story books故事书，cake蛋糕，sing songs唱歌，have a good time玩得开心
参考句型：My birthday is...；I got many beautiful presents on my birthday, such as...；We did...
5．
Emily’s birthday
Emily’s birthday is on October 8th. She had a very happy birthday last year. She invited some friends to her house for her birthday. And she saw a film with her friends. This year she plans to make a birthday cake by herself. And she will have a big dinner with her family.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题要求以“Emily’s birthday”为题，用第三人称根据图片提供的信息描述Emily去年的生日以及今年生日的打算。注意写去年的生日时态为一般过去时，今年的生日计划时态为一般将来时，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于40词。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：October十月，happy开心的，last year去年，invite邀请，see a film看电影，plan计划，birthday cake生日蛋糕，have a big dinner享用一顿丰盛的晚餐
参考句型：She had a...；She invited...；She plans to...；She will ...
6．范文：
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第三人称描述大家在Daming的生日派对上做了什么，阐述每个人分别在做什么，注意文章为一般过去式并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：birthday party生日聚会，played chess下棋，sang a song唱歌，played the guitar弹吉他
参考句型：It was…；He had…；Tom and Linda played…；They were…
7．范文：
A birthday party for my father
My father’s birthday is coming. It is this Friday. Here is my plan for his birthday.
First, I plan to help my father do some housework, then he can have a good rest. My father loves reading books, so my mother will buy a book for him. Also, I’m going to make a card in the shape of heart. I’m sure my father will be happy when he opens the card. Last, there will be an evening birthday party at home. We’ll sing the Happy Birthday song, eat a birthday cake and have a talk with each other. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.
That’s my plan. I think that would be a wonderful day for my father.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题要求以“A birthday party for my father”为题，用第一人称描述自己为父亲举办的生日聚会，包括买的东西，计划做的事情等等。注意语句通顺，意思连贯；不少于50词。
2. 参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：do some housework做些家务，have a good rest好好休息，read books读书，make a card制作卡片，birthday party生日聚会，eat a birthday cake吃生日蛋糕，each other互相
参考句型：Here is...；First, I plan...；My father loves...；Also, I’m going to...；We’ll...；I think that...
8．范文：
My Last Birthday
My birthday was on July 5th. I still remember my last birthday. My parents bought me a big birthday cake and my favorite bike. I invited my friends to my home. We played games and sang songs. We had a big dinner together. I was very happy. We had a good time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一写自己上一次过生日的活动。注意时态是一般过去时。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：was happy开心，invited friends邀请朋友，gave presents送礼物，sang and danced唱歌跳舞，played games玩游戏，had a good time玩得开心
参考句型：My birthday was…；My parents bought…；I invited…；We played…；We had…；I was…
9．范文：
Dear Amy,
How are you I want to tell you something about my birthday party. It was my birthday last Saturday. I had a happy birthday party with my family and friends. My mum made a cake for me. We ate it for lunch. It was very nice. After lunch, I played lots of games with my friends. They gave me many presents. My dad bought me a doll. I liked it very much. I had a wonderful birthday. I enjoyed myself.
What did you do last weekend Write to me soon.
Love,
Lingling
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求给朋友Amy写一封邮件，告诉她上周六，家人和朋友为你举办的生日派对上发生的事情。时态是一般过去时态，人称是第一人称和第三人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：make a cake制作蛋糕，play games玩游戏，present礼物，doll玩具娃娃，wonderful精彩的
参考句型：I had a ...with...；My Mum...；I ...with...；My dad...
10．范文：
Last Sunday was Mike’s birthday. His mother made delicious food for lunch. After lunch, he visited his grandfather with his parents. He bought a book for his grandfather. Then they had a big dinner there. His grandfather suggested holding a family party for him. Mike was very excited. So after dinner, his parents sang “Happy Birthday Song” for him. Mike sang an English song with his grandfather. But his grandfather couldn’t sing. They also watched a film in the living room. Mike’s mother made a birthday cake for Mike. They had a good time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求描写Mike一家上周日的家庭联欢会的场景。要求描写出图中所呈现的内容。注意文章时态是一般过去时，并满足单词数量的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：delicious food美味的食物，had a big dinner吃了一顿大餐，suggested提议，a family party家庭聚会，Happy Birthday Song生日快乐歌，watched a film看电影，a birthday cake一个生日蛋糕，had a good time玩的愉快
参考句型：Last Sunday was…；His mother made…；After lunch, he visited…；Mike was…；So after dinner, his parents sang…；But his grandfather couldn’t…；They also…；They had…
11．范文：
My birthday is on February 14th. On my birthday, I usually have a big dinner with my family. I sing a song with my friend. I can dance with my sister. I eat delicious food, too. I am very happy.
【解析】1.题干解读：该书面用第一人称写出自己生日，然后再阐述生日的时间，在生日时你在做什么及你的感受，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：birthday生日，February 14th 二月十四日，usually通常，with和， dinner晚餐，delicious美味的；
参考句型： My birthday is...；I usually...； I can...
12．范文：
Last Saturday was my birthday. I had a birthday party with my friends at seven at home. We ate a cake. And we sang English birthday song. We danced together. We had a good time.
【解析】1.题干分析：该题目要求介绍自己举行的生日聚会上的情况。可以写一写生日聚会举行的时间，地点和所开展的活动等。注意文章为一般过去时态，单词数量要符合要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：a birthday party一个生日聚会；at home在家；ate吃；sang唱歌；danced跳舞；
参考句型：Last Saturday was…；I had…；We ate…；And we sang…；
13．参考范文：
My father’s birthday
I am Lucy. Today is my father’s birthday. I held a birthday party for my father. I sang and danced in the party. My father was a fan of my dancing. He was very happy to see that. After the show I gave my father a birthday card. My mother and I also bought a birthday cake. We had a great time this evening. Everybody had fun.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据材料所述写一篇英语作文。然后再阐述在生日晚会上做的事情，心情如何。注意文章为一般过去时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：hold a birthday party举办生日晚会，sing唱歌，dance跳舞，fan粉丝
参考句型：He was very happy to …；After the show I …； My mother and I also …；
14．范文：
My important day
December 10th is an important day for me, because it’s my birthday. On my birthday, my mother cooks delicious food for me. I can also get some gifts from my father. We often go to watch a film together or have dinner in the restaurant. I say “Thank you” to them on my birthday and I am always very happy.
【解析】【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称描述自己重要的一天。然后再阐述一天中自己，家人做的事情及感受等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：important重要的，December十二月，because因为，birthday生日，delicious美味的，together一起，restaurant餐馆
参考句型：December 10th is..., because...；On my birthday, my mother...；I can...；We often...；I say...
15．范文：
Betty is going to have a birthday party. Everyone is busy. Peter is putting up “Happy Birthday!” on the wall. Daming is cleaning the room. Amy is going to the supermarket to buy things for the party. And I’m helping Betty’s mum make a birthday cake. The birthday party will start at 6 p.m.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求描述大家忙碌的场面。根据题目所提供的信息，具体描写每个人做的事情。也可做拓展。注意涉及的时态包含现在进行时和一般将来时，另外要符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词及短语：put up悬挂，busy忙碌的，clean打扫，buy买，birthday party生日聚会
参考句型：Peter is ...；Amy is going to ...；I’m ...
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