(共32张PPT)
Book 1-Unit 6 Developing ideas
A Love of Gardening
Reading for writing
Stage 1 Lead in
Which word is missing?
publish expert rooftop
competition branch sunflower
population rent limited
Stage 2 Review and check
Which word is missing?
publish rooftop
competition branch sunflower
population rent limited
Stage 2 Review and check
Which word is missing?
publish expert rooftop
branch sunflower
population rent limited
Stage 2 Review and check
Which word is missing?
publish expert rooftop
competition branch sunflower
population limited
Stage 2 Review and check
Which word is missing?
expert rooftop
competition branch sunflower
population rent limited
Stage 2 Review and check
Which word is missing?
publish expert rooftop
competition branch sunflower
population rent
Stage 2 Review and check
Which word is missing?
publish expert
competition branch sunflower
population rent limited
Stage 2 Review and check
Which word is missing?
publish expert rooftop
branch sunflower
population rent limited
Stage 2 Review and check
Stage 2 Review and check
What kind of article is the passage
A. Narration(记叙文) B.Exposition (说明文) C. Practical Writing(应用文)
Stage 2 Review and check
What is the basic structure of this passage?
Introduction
Supporting details
Conclusion
Para.1
Para.2-3
Para.4
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Brits’ love of gradening
specific behavior
benefits of gardening
In 1911, only the very _____ in Britain had gardens. But with the construction of homes with ______, Brits started loving gardening, even becoming crazy now. They had different ways to experience nature in their lives. However, in cities, ______ space
led to people looking for new places to plant things. Some ____ small pieces of land while others turned _______ and walls into private gardens. Gardening is not only good for the ___________but also for the soul. If you don’t believe that, just give it a try.
Stage 2 Review and check
Find a proper word in the passage to fill in these blanks.
rich
gardens
limited
rented
rooftops
environment
Comparing the original passage with the summary,which one do you like best?
WHY
Stage 3 Pre-writing
We need you!
beautiful natural scenery
1. Master some ways to make a passage beautiful.
2. Have a better knowledge of some micro-skills in
writing.
3. Write a passage to introduce natural scenery in
Shanxi by using writing skills presented today.
Objectives of this lesson
In the 1911, only the very rich in Britain had gardens. But with the construction of homes with gardens, Brits started loving gardening, even becoming crazy now.
Stage 4 While-writing
Compare the original paragraph with the summary to find what is changed.
This is what started the British love of gardening!
Micro-skill 1: Cite a quotation
Micro-skill 2: List the numbers
Exercise 1.
Polish the following sentences.
Shanxi is one of the most attractive provinces in China.
Sample 1
Shanxi is one of the most attractive provinces in China. As a song goes, “Everyone speaks highly of the scenery in Shanxi.”
Sample 2
Shanxi is one of the most attractive provinces in China. There are dozens of splendid natural scenery.
They had different ways to experience nature in their lives.
For many people in the UK, their garden is their own private world.
Micro-skill 3: List specific examples
Micro-skill 4: Lexical cohesion 词汇衔接
Stage 4 While-writing
Compare the original paragraph with the summary to find what is changed.
Exercise 2.
Polish following sentences.
There is various beautiful scenery in Shanxi.
Exercise 2. Polish following sentences.
There is various beautiful scenery in Shanxi.
Sample 1
There is various beautiful scenery in Shanxi. If you like _____________________, you can choose to visit __________________. If you have an interest in ______________________, _______________ is definitely an excellent choice. If you want to experience the _________, ______________ must be on the list.
Hukou Waterfall Wutai Mountain Wangmang Mountain Luya Mountain Eight-Spring Gorge
shocking beauty of sunset
Wangmang Mountain
magnificent waterfalls
Hukou Waterfall
steep cliff
Luya Mountain
However, in cities, limited space led to people looking for new places to plant things. Some rented small pieces of land while others turned rooftops and walls into private gardens.
But in cities, limited space has led to people looking for new solutions.
Micro-skill 5:Conjunction cohesion 连词衔接
Micro-skill 6: Use attributive clauses
Stage 4 While-writing
Compare the original paragraph with the summary to find what is changed.
Exercise 3.
Polish following sentences.
Ice cave, located in Ningwu, is a special resort.
You can not miss it.
Sample 1
Ice cave, located in Ningwu, is a special attraction which you can not miss.
Gardening is not only good for the environment but also for the soul. If you don’t believe that, just give it a try.
As well as being good for the environment, gardening is also good for the soul.
Micro-skill 7: echo with the beginning (呼应开头)
Stage 4 While-writing
Compare the original paragraph with the summary to find what is changed.
Shanxi is one of the most attractive provinces in China. As a song goes, “Everyone speaks highly of the scenery in Shanxi.” There are dozens of splendid natural scenery.
There are various beautiful scenery in Shanxi. If you like shocking beauty of sunset, you can choose to visit Wangmang Mountain. If you have an interest in magnificent wterfalls, Hukou Watefall is definitely an excellent choice. If you want to experience the steep cliff, Luya Mountain must be on the list. Ice cave, located in Ningwu, is a special attraction which you can not miss.
So much gorgeous scenery is there that you must come here to enjoy it by yourself.
Stage 4 While-writing
Tips: The linkage will beautify your passage.
Shanxi is one of the most attractive provinces in China. As a song goes, “Everyone speaks highly of the scenery in Shanxi.” There are dozens of splendid natural scenery.
Among the various scenery, you will absolutely find what you like. If you like shocking beauty of sunset, you can choose to visit Wangmang Mountain. If you have an interest in magnificent natural scenery, Eight-Spring Gorge is definitely an excellent choice. If you want to experience the steep cliff, Luya Mountain must be on the list. Additionaly, Ice Cave, located in Ningwu, is a special attraction which you can not miss.
So much gorgeous scenery is there that you must come to enjoy it by yourself.
Stage 4 While-writing
Exchange your paper with your group members. Try to find the shining points and give advice to improve the passage.
Suggestions
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5.
Shining points
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5.
Grammar
Spelling
Vocabulary
Punctuation(标点)
Sentence structure
Be a helper!
Step 1 Peer-editing
Tips: The shinning points could be vocabularies, sentences structures and the writing skills.
Stage 5 Post-writing
Step 2 Revising(修正)
Please revise your writing independently according to your partner’s editing.
Micro-skill 1: Cite a quotation
Micro-skill 2: List the numbers
Micro-skill 3: List specific examples
Micro-skill 4: Lexical cohesion
Micro-skill 5: Conjunction cohesion
Micro-skill 6: Use attributive clauses
Micro-skill 7: echo with the beginning
Review
1. Master some ways to make a passage beautiful.
2. Have a better knowledge of some micro-skills in
writing.
3. Write a passage to introduce natural scenery in
Shanxi by using writing skills presented today.
EXit tickets
According to your partner's suggestions, please polish your passage and revise it.
Stage 6 Assigning homework