Unit 2 Onwards and Upwards Writing about an experience课件(共32张PPT)-外研版(2019)选择性必修第一册
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(共32张PPT)
Writing about an experience
文本解读
1.文体类型:讲述一次经历,属于记叙文范畴,常用于记人、叙事、写景、
状物,以写人物的经历和事物的发展变化为主。
2.要点内容:(1)在“黑暗餐厅”吃饭的经历;(2)体会到盲人在生活中面对的挑战。
[思路指引]
实用表达
描写一次经历的常用表达
1.交代此次经历发生的时间、地点与相关人物。
交代时间的常用表达:
one day、the other day、last week/month、a few days/weeks/months ago、“when I was...years old”、a long time ago、at six o’clock in the morning、at/on the weekend、by the end of last term、during the summer holiday、“on Sunday morning...”
交代地点的常用表达:
in one’s office、on one’s way to school、on one’s way home、at the end of the street、at the foot of the mountain、“at the airport...”
Last week,an exchange student called...from...came to our school.
Last weekend,our school invited a craftsman to teach us...
In order to help him/her to know more about Chinese culture,I prepared a series of activities.
常用句型:
2.推动情节发展(事情经过)。
常用表达:then、suddenly、immediately、in addition、while、when、as、“not...until...”
3.介绍经历的结果或谈自己的感想。
常用词语:at last、finally、luckily/fortunately、to one’s surprise、feel tired/delighted
What surprised/attracted/delighted/...us most was that...
Through this meaningful/...activity,we learnt something that can’t be learnt in class.
He/She was very grateful for/appreciative of what I had done for him/her,and said he/she was deeply impressed with Chinese culture.
What an unforgettable experience!
常用句型: Personally,I think that...
佳作建构
假设你是李华,上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”的活动。请用英语为校英文报写一篇报道,分享你的本次经历。内容包括:
1.活动的过程。
2.收获与感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
审题谋篇
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1. n.黎明,破晓
2. adj.愉快的,高兴的
3. n.经历
4. n.欣赏;感激;理解
dawn
delighted
experience
appreciation
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
1.上周末,我参加了由我们学校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”的活动。
Last weekend,I the “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by the Students’ Union of our school.
2.我们很高兴在黎明时分开始探索我们周围的植物世界的旅程。
We start our journey at dawn to explore the world of the plants around us.
participated in
were delighted to
3.本次活动以一位当地植物学家的讲座开始。
The activity by a local botanist.
4.这位植物学家向我们介绍了各种植物的不同特性和用途。
The botanist taught us about and uses of various plants.
5.然后我们在大自然中散步,观察和收集不同植物的样本。
We then went on a nature walk to different plants.
began with a lecture
the different characteristics
observe and collect samples of
6.在整个活动中,我被各种各样的植物所震惊。
Throughout the event,I a variety of plants.
7.这些各种各样的植物存在于这个世界上。
These varieties of plants .
8.我了解了用于医疗的植物。
I learnt about plants that are used .
was struck by
exist in this world
for medical purposes
9.我也了解了那些为动物提供食物和庇护处的植物。
I also learnt about those plants that provide for animals.
10.我也对植物在维持我们的生态系统平衡中所起的作用有了更深的理解。
I also of the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
11.总的来说,有这样一段宝贵的经历是值得的。
Overall,it was worthwhile .
food and shelters
gained a greater appreciation
to have/having such a valuable experience
亮点提升
1.将第3句和第4句用定语从句进行改写升级。
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plants.
2.将第6句与第7句用定语从句合并,与第8句用and合并,并与第9句用as well as 合并。
Throughout the event,I was struck by a variety of plants that/which exist in this world and I learnt about plants that are used for medical purposes as well as those plants that provide food and shelters for animals.
范文展示
Last weekend,I participated in the “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by the Students’ Union of our school.We were delighted to start our journey at dawn to explore the world of the plants around us.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plants.We then went on a nature walk to observe and collect samples of different plants.
Throughout the event,I was struck by a variety of plants that/which exist in this world and I learnt about plants that are used for medical purposes as well as those plants that provide food and shelters for animals.I also gained a greater appreciation of the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall,it was worthwhile to have/having such a valuable experience.
写作练习
假设你是李华,你们班上个星期六去森林公园(the Forest Park)参加了主题为“亲近自然”的徒步活动。请你给你的外国朋友Mary写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.活动中令你印象深刻的见闻。
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
How is everything going
Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
How is everything going Last Saturday, our class went on a hiking trip to the Forest Park with the theme “Close to Nature”.It was an incredible experience that I’d like to share with you.
We were amazed by the beauty of the forest, where we saw a variety of plants and animals.The most impressive sight was a group of deer grazing peacefully near a small lake.We also learnt about different tree species and their importance to the ecosystem.
This trip made me realise how vital it is to protect nature for future generations.It was refreshing to disconnect ourselves from technology and immerse ourselves in the natural world.I felt more connected to the Earth and gained a deeper appreciation of its wonders.Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写微技能之“点—线—面”
[教材语料库]
读后 续写 微技能之“点” 情感描写 相关词语 delighted adj.愉快的,高兴的 worthwhile adj.重要的;值得做的enthusiastic adj.热心的,热衷的→enthusiasm n.热情upset adj.心烦意乱的,烦恼的 blessing n.幸事,幸运 appreciative adj.感激的 delightful adj.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的 embarrassed adj.难堪的,尴尬的
动作描写 相关词语 dread v.畏惧,惧怕 rejection n.拒绝,否决→reject v.拒绝接受;不予考虑 criticism n.批评;指责→criticise v.批评;指责;评论 endurance n.
(忍)耐力→endure v.忍耐,忍受 guarantee v.保证;确保 elect v.选举,推选 probe v.调查;探究 revelation n.展现,显示→reveal v.揭示;显示;透露
人物描写 相关词语 persevere v.锲而不舍,坚持不懈 gentleness n.和蔼,温和→
gentle adj.文静的;温柔的;温和的 companionship n.友谊;友好交往
读后 续写 微技能之“线” The response from a publisher comes back and the writer eagerly opens and reads it,their hearts sinking when they reach that final sentence. (动作+心理描写)
...,but I often feared that would happen... (心理描写)
The following morning,I should again greet the dawn,anxious to discover new delights,new revelations of beauty. (心理描写)
While a lot of hard work and a touch of luck play a part,
perseverance is the key.(结尾升华句)
读后 续写 微技能之“面”
读后续写——坚持和毅力带来成功
几年来,他一直坚持追求自己的梦想。面对拒绝和批评,他体会到了烦恼和尴尬。不过,他没有放弃,靠着坚强的毅力坚持了下来。就是这份耐力和坚持带领他走向最后的成功,这确实是一件幸事。于是,他开始感激成功道路上的无数次拒绝,认为它们是值得的。现在,他充满了热情和自信,再也不害怕失败,就好像自己从来没有被拒绝过一样。
For several years,he has been persistently chasing his dream.
When 1. ,he experienced annoyance and embarrassment.However,he never gave up and managed to hold on with his strong willpower.It was 2.
that led him to his ultimate success,which is truly a blessing.As a result,he 3. the countless rejections on the path to success,believing 4.
.Now,he 5. ,
no longer fearing failure,as if he had never been rejected.
faced with rejection and criticism
the endurance
and perseverance
began to be appreciative of
they are
worthwhile
is filled with enthusiasm and self-confidence
Thanks
Writing about an experience
文本解读
1.文体类型:讲述一次经历,属于记叙文范畴,常用于记人、叙事、写景、
状物,以写人物的经历和事物的发展变化为主。
2.要点内容:(1)在“黑暗餐厅”吃饭的经历;(2)体会到盲人在生活中面对的挑战。
[思路指引]
实用表达
描写一次经历的常用表达
1.交代此次经历发生的时间、地点与相关人物。
交代时间的常用表达:
one day、the other day、last week/month、a few days/weeks/months ago、“when I was...years old”、a long time ago、at six o’clock in the morning、at/on the weekend、by the end of last term、during the summer holiday、“on Sunday morning...”
交代地点的常用表达:
in one’s office、on one’s way to school、on one’s way home、at the end of the street、at the foot of the mountain、“at the airport...”
Last week,an exchange student called...from...came to our school.
Last weekend,our school invited a craftsman to teach us...
In order to help him/her to know more about Chinese culture,I prepared a series of activities.
常用句型:
2.推动情节发展(事情经过)。
常用表达:then、suddenly、immediately、in addition、while、when、as、“not...until...”
3.介绍经历的结果或谈自己的感想。
常用词语:at last、finally、luckily/fortunately、to one’s surprise、feel tired/delighted
What surprised/attracted/delighted/...us most was that...
Through this meaningful/...activity,we learnt something that can’t be learnt in class.
He/She was very grateful for/appreciative of what I had done for him/her,and said he/she was deeply impressed with Chinese culture.
What an unforgettable experience!
常用句型: Personally,I think that...
佳作建构
假设你是李华,上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”的活动。请用英语为校英文报写一篇报道,分享你的本次经历。内容包括:
1.活动的过程。
2.收获与感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
审题谋篇
Ⅰ.对接单元词汇
1. n.黎明,破晓
2. adj.愉快的,高兴的
3. n.经历
4. n.欣赏;感激;理解
dawn
delighted
experience
appreciation
Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法
1.上周末,我参加了由我们学校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”的活动。
Last weekend,I the “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by the Students’ Union of our school.
2.我们很高兴在黎明时分开始探索我们周围的植物世界的旅程。
We start our journey at dawn to explore the world of the plants around us.
participated in
were delighted to
3.本次活动以一位当地植物学家的讲座开始。
The activity by a local botanist.
4.这位植物学家向我们介绍了各种植物的不同特性和用途。
The botanist taught us about and uses of various plants.
5.然后我们在大自然中散步,观察和收集不同植物的样本。
We then went on a nature walk to different plants.
began with a lecture
the different characteristics
observe and collect samples of
6.在整个活动中,我被各种各样的植物所震惊。
Throughout the event,I a variety of plants.
7.这些各种各样的植物存在于这个世界上。
These varieties of plants .
8.我了解了用于医疗的植物。
I learnt about plants that are used .
was struck by
exist in this world
for medical purposes
9.我也了解了那些为动物提供食物和庇护处的植物。
I also learnt about those plants that provide for animals.
10.我也对植物在维持我们的生态系统平衡中所起的作用有了更深的理解。
I also of the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
11.总的来说,有这样一段宝贵的经历是值得的。
Overall,it was worthwhile .
food and shelters
gained a greater appreciation
to have/having such a valuable experience
亮点提升
1.将第3句和第4句用定语从句进行改写升级。
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plants.
2.将第6句与第7句用定语从句合并,与第8句用and合并,并与第9句用as well as 合并。
Throughout the event,I was struck by a variety of plants that/which exist in this world and I learnt about plants that are used for medical purposes as well as those plants that provide food and shelters for animals.
范文展示
Last weekend,I participated in the “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by the Students’ Union of our school.We were delighted to start our journey at dawn to explore the world of the plants around us.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plants.We then went on a nature walk to observe and collect samples of different plants.
Throughout the event,I was struck by a variety of plants that/which exist in this world and I learnt about plants that are used for medical purposes as well as those plants that provide food and shelters for animals.I also gained a greater appreciation of the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall,it was worthwhile to have/having such a valuable experience.
写作练习
假设你是李华,你们班上个星期六去森林公园(the Forest Park)参加了主题为“亲近自然”的徒步活动。请你给你的外国朋友Mary写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.活动中令你印象深刻的见闻。
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
How is everything going
Yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
One possible version:
Dear Mary,
How is everything going Last Saturday, our class went on a hiking trip to the Forest Park with the theme “Close to Nature”.It was an incredible experience that I’d like to share with you.
We were amazed by the beauty of the forest, where we saw a variety of plants and animals.The most impressive sight was a group of deer grazing peacefully near a small lake.We also learnt about different tree species and their importance to the ecosystem.
This trip made me realise how vital it is to protect nature for future generations.It was refreshing to disconnect ourselves from technology and immerse ourselves in the natural world.I felt more connected to the Earth and gained a deeper appreciation of its wonders.Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写微技能之“点—线—面”
[教材语料库]
读后 续写 微技能之“点” 情感描写 相关词语 delighted adj.愉快的,高兴的 worthwhile adj.重要的;值得做的enthusiastic adj.热心的,热衷的→enthusiasm n.热情upset adj.心烦意乱的,烦恼的 blessing n.幸事,幸运 appreciative adj.感激的 delightful adj.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的 embarrassed adj.难堪的,尴尬的
动作描写 相关词语 dread v.畏惧,惧怕 rejection n.拒绝,否决→reject v.拒绝接受;不予考虑 criticism n.批评;指责→criticise v.批评;指责;评论 endurance n.
(忍)耐力→endure v.忍耐,忍受 guarantee v.保证;确保 elect v.选举,推选 probe v.调查;探究 revelation n.展现,显示→reveal v.揭示;显示;透露
人物描写 相关词语 persevere v.锲而不舍,坚持不懈 gentleness n.和蔼,温和→
gentle adj.文静的;温柔的;温和的 companionship n.友谊;友好交往
读后 续写 微技能之“线” The response from a publisher comes back and the writer eagerly opens and reads it,their hearts sinking when they reach that final sentence. (动作+心理描写)
...,but I often feared that would happen... (心理描写)
The following morning,I should again greet the dawn,anxious to discover new delights,new revelations of beauty. (心理描写)
While a lot of hard work and a touch of luck play a part,
perseverance is the key.(结尾升华句)
读后 续写 微技能之“面”
读后续写——坚持和毅力带来成功
几年来,他一直坚持追求自己的梦想。面对拒绝和批评,他体会到了烦恼和尴尬。不过,他没有放弃,靠着坚强的毅力坚持了下来。就是这份耐力和坚持带领他走向最后的成功,这确实是一件幸事。于是,他开始感激成功道路上的无数次拒绝,认为它们是值得的。现在,他充满了热情和自信,再也不害怕失败,就好像自己从来没有被拒绝过一样。
For several years,he has been persistently chasing his dream.
When 1. ,he experienced annoyance and embarrassment.However,he never gave up and managed to hold on with his strong willpower.It was 2.
that led him to his ultimate success,which is truly a blessing.As a result,he 3. the countless rejections on the path to success,believing 4.
.Now,he 5. ,
no longer fearing failure,as if he had never been rejected.
faced with rejection and criticism
the endurance
and perseverance
began to be appreciative of
they are
worthwhile
is filled with enthusiasm and self-confidence
Thanks