Unit4 Scientists who change the world 应用文写作：人物传记课件(共16张PPT)-译林版(2019)必修第三册

(共16张PPT)
应用文写作：人物传记
Introduce someone you admire
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Scientists Who Change the World
lead in
lead in
a great scientist
one of the smartest men
a courageous and kind figure
a gentle genius
a strong passion for science
the general theory of relativity
a slightly odd looking but kind and funny man
What do you know about Albert Einstein
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Albert Einstein ,who is perhaps the greatest scientist in modern physics(现代物理学), is often considered one of the smartest men who ever lived. He made numerous contributions to the world , the most well-known being the general theory of relativity(广义相对论) and the famous formula(公式) E= mc . Einstein was not only a genius(天才) ; he was a courageous(勇敢的) and kind figure loved by many people.
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An introduction to someone you admire
人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字:
概、貌、育、平、评
1. 概指概况: age, family background, identity
2. 貌指外貌: appearance, character, hobby
3. 育指教育: education background
4. 平指生平: big events, achievements & influence (in time order)
5. 评指评价: evaluation
Writing
Body
Ending
Beginning
Basic information
(Name, identity...)
Experience
Achievements
Impressive story
The reason why you
admire him/her.
Structure
引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等
介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等
人物评价及对作者的影响---人格，贡献，闪光点
注意：运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用 ，而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用 ____________
一般现在时
一般过去时
人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分：
可以先分解成两个句子。
袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于北京。
他刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on 7th September 1930.
He studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.
高级句式：
袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于北京，刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。
Yuan Longping was born in Beijing on 7th September 1930, who studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.(非限制性定语从句)
Born in Beijing on 7th September 1930, Yuan Longping studied hard and showed a passion for agricultural science.（分词做状语）
出生于：___________________ 酷爱：_______________
在……方面有天赋：_______________从某大学毕业：__________
be born in
have/show a passion for
be talented in...
graduate from
1.引出人物：--- 简单介绍人物背景
语料积累
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣)
佳句积累
The person I admire most is….,
Of all the outstanding people, I admire…. the most.
There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is....
When talking about......, I can't help but think of sb, a famous.......
When it comes to, the person I admire most is.......
2.介绍人物主要经历
做…工作：____________
把…奉献给…：___________________ 起关键性作用：______________
坚定的决心___________________
在…获得巨大的成功：___________________
下定决心做某事：_____________________
work as
devote oneself/entire life to...
play a crucial role in
strong will and determination
achieve great success in...
/ take up a position as
make up one’s mind to do
/ be determined to do sth
重要句型
......(人名), who was born in......(时间), graduated from......(学校).
When he was a boy, he showed a passion for sth.
Graduating from + 大学+ in 年份, he worked as + 职业.
After graduating from…., he/she spend most of his /her time in doing/on…
In order to ..., he made up his mind to do... 为了…，他决定做…..
With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in...
凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功……
3.人物评价及对作者的影响---重要词汇
为某人赢得好名声：_______________ 高度评价__________________
做出巨大贡献：________________________ 被授予……：________________
作为……而闻名：__________________ 被尊称为________________________
树立好榜样：_________________
值得我们崇拜和尊重：_________________________________
earn sb a good reputation
make great contributions to
be awarded...
be known/famous as
be honored as
set a good example
deserve our admiration and respect
think highly of
重要句型
1. It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning. 正是他的决心激励我在学习有困难时继续前进。
2. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。
3. To sum up, she serves as an inspiration to me. She inspires me to bravely overcome difficulties, face up to challenges, and live life to the fullest.
她激励着我。她激励我勇敢地克服困难，面对挑战，充实地生活。
Reading for writing
姓名： 袁隆平
出生： 1930年，北京
毕业院校： 西南农学院
职业： 科学家
工作经历： 大学毕业后，他从事农业教学和研究工作
在1975年，他成功培育出了杂交水稻，
成就： 提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿
被誉为“杂交水稻之父”
西南农学院：
Southwest Agricultural College
他从事农业教学和研究工作
agricultural teaching and research
培育出了杂交水稻
breed hybrid rice
杂交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
提高了水稻产量，
有助于消除世界饥饿
improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger
参考词汇
开头：
The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping，who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
中间：
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping , who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
结尾：
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The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
我最崇拜的人是_______(人）. 出生于_______(地点/时间）, _______（人），是最伟大_______(职业）的人之一, 表现出对___________(方面）的热情。
在__________(学校）毕业后, 他/她大部分时间都花在做___________上。尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。凭借坚强的意志和坚定的决心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，这使他_____________(成就）.
为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个非常优秀的人，值得我们钦佩和尊重。
写英雄/伟人/敬佩的人的模板
Homework
(2020全国一卷)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括
1. 人物简介；
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因；
3. 你对hero的理解。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
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