(共16张PPT)
Continuation writing (10)
场景描写
(没有手机的假期)
Kathy’s family vacation to the beach was usually the highlight of her summer. This year, however, her parents announced a new rule: no phones for the entire week.
“But my friends will be expecting updates about the trip,” Kathy complained. Kathy’s mom gave her a serious look. Unwillingly, Kathy handed her phone over and her mom locked it away.
The drive to the beach house took most of the day. As they turned off the highway onto country back roads, the clouds darkened. Rain started to pour.“Even more beautiful in the rain,” her mother said. “What do you think, Kathy ”Kathy glared at her mom. “Beautiful,” she muttered.
That night after dinner, Kathy wandered into the kitchen, where her father was washing dishes. She gave her father a loving look and said in her sweetest voice, “Couldn’t I have my phone back, just for one second Just so I can tell everyone what an amazing time I’m having ”“Can’t,” he said. “It’s not here. Remember ” Kathy was very annoyed.
Having nothing better to do, she examined the dusty bookcase in the living room. The books looked as dull as the weather. On the top shelf, however, she spotted a puzzle(拼图). She took it, emptied the pieces on the table, and began to sort them.
After what seemed like a few minutes, she looked up. It was past ten o’clock. She had been working for almost two hours! She yawned. The puzzle was less than half done, but she was exhausted. So, she went to bed.
When Kathy awoke the next morning, she jumped out of bed and threw open the curtains. A blazing sun was rising over the blue ocean. The sky was cloudless.The scene reminded Kathy of a photo that her friend Betty had recently sent her.
This view was even better. It would leave everyone speechless. Kathy dashed to her bedside table and reached for her phone. But there was nothing there. She sighed. Still, she wandered in front of the window, admiring the sunrise.
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach.
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours.
沙滩的景象(所见,所听等)
Kathy在沙滩的活动(捡贝壳,玩沙子等;动作,心理描写)
回去拼图(动作)
完成拼图(什么时候回家的?拼图是什么?)(动作,心理)
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours.
当天的家庭活动(与拼图有关)
发现没有手机也不错。(心理描写)
接下来一周的活动。(动作)
升华 (假期的意义) (手机,家人)
After a quick breakfast, Kathy headed to the beach. Bathed in sunlight, the sea sparkled with shimmering ripples, while the moist ocean breeze carried waves of salty, briny scent. She instinctively reached for her pocket to check her phone, only to remember it was locked away. Listening to the rhythmic crashing of the waves, she walked on the warm sand and spotted seashells of various shapes and colors. She bent down to collect them, feeling a childlike joy bubbling up inside her. Nearby, a group of kids were building a sandcastle, and Kathy joining in, laughing as they decorated it with shells and seaweed. Tired but delighted, she returned to the house later. Seeing the undone puzzle, she started to finish it, eager to kown what it was. To her surprise, it was the shocking scene on the beach she saw previously.
Appreciating the finished puzzle, she realized she hadn’t thought of her cellphone for hours. That evening, her family gathered around the table, chatting and admiring Kathy’s works. It was at that moment that she knew she was ready to embrace the phone-free vacation. For the rest of the week, she enjoyed everything, from preparing meals with her family to reading literature works alone in the living room. The vacation without phones was not as boring as she had imagined. After exchanging what she had learnt with her parents, she understood the significance of a vacation was not to update the photos in her cellphone but to take measures to promote herself and enjoy the quality time with her family.
Bathed in sunlight, the sea sparkled with shimmering ripples, while the moist ocean breeze carried waves of salty, briny scent. She instinctively reached for her pocket to check her phone, only to remember it was locked away.
Listening to the rhythmic crashing of the waves, she walked on the warm sand and spotted seashells of various shapes and colors.
She bent down to collect them, feeling a childlike joy bubbling up inside her.
Nearby, a group of kids were building a sandcastle, and Kathy joining in, laughing as they decorated it with shells and seaweed.
场景描写
等待成绩的公布
优生
差生
环境描写
行为
/心理活动
所听
所看
Leaning back in his chair, Jack/Timmy sat quietly by the window.
环境描写
The warm sunlight streaming through the classroom windows fell on him like a warm blanket.
温暖的阳光透过教室窗户洒落在他身上,像盖了一层暖融融的毯子。
阳光
行为
He turned back and caught sight of his best friend, Timmy, biting his nails, which revealed that he was anxious bout the result.
他转身瞥见挚友提米正咬着指甲,这个动作暴露了他对成绩的焦虑。
The air buzzed with nervous whispers while Jake tapped his pen rhythmically with his lips curling slightly upward.
所听,所做
教室里交头接耳的私语声嗡嗡作响,Jack却有节奏地轻敲钢笔,唇边挂着一丝几不可察的弧度。
所看,所想
Around him, classmates gripped their desks tightly and kept looking nervously at the teacher, but Jake sat calmly, feeling the warm sunlight on his neck - this time, he knew his name would be at the top.
周围的同学都紧紧抓着课桌,不停地紧张偷瞄老师,而Jack却安然静坐,任温暖的阳光轻抚后颈——这一次,他确信榜首必将刻 着自己的名字。
Leaning back in his chair, Jack sat quietly by the window. The warm sunlight streaming through the classroom windows fell on him like a warm blanket.
He turned back and caught sight of his best friend, Timmy, biting his nails, which revealed that he was anxious bout the result.
The air buzzed with nervous whispers while Jake tapped his pen rhythmically with his lips curling slightly upward.
Around him, classmates gripped their desks tightly and kept looking nervously at the teacher, but Jake sat calmly, feeling the warm sunlight on his neck - this time, he knew his name would be at the top.
窗外大雨滂沱,豆大的雨滴狠狠打在窗户上,就像打在他心里。
窗外天色阴沉,铅灰色的云层低垂,冷风裹着落叶拍打窗户,就像他心中挥之不去的沉闷。
Timmy抬头看到他的好友Jack在有节奏地轻敲钢笔,唇边挂着一丝微笑,这暴露了他对这次考试很有信心。
他弓着身子趴在课桌上,心不在焉地咬着指头,而周围的同学正信心十足地窃窃私语。
同学们正兴高采烈地讨论着预期的高分,而提米却往座位里缩了缩身子——这一次,他只盼着自己的名字别再垫底就好。
环境描写
雨天
窗外大雨滂沱,豆大的雨滴狠狠打在窗户上,就像打在他心里。
Outside, the rain poured heavily, and bean-sized raindrops pounded against the window, just like the blows upon his heart.
环境描写
阴天
Outside, the sky was leaden, with iron-gray clouds hanging low, and a cold wind blew dead leaves against the window, just like the lingering gloom in his heart.
窗外天色阴沉,铅灰色的云层低垂,冷风裹着落叶拍打窗户,就像他心中挥之不去的沉闷。
Timmy抬头看到他的好友Jack在有节奏地轻敲钢笔,唇边挂着一丝微笑,这暴露了他对这次考试很有信心。
Timmy looked up to his best friend Jack lightly tapping his pen in a steady rhythm, a faint smile lingering on his lips—betraying his confidence in this exam.
He hunched over his desk, absentmindedly chewing his fingernails while classmates murmured confidently around him.
他弓着身子趴在课桌上,心不在焉地咬着指头,而周围的同学正信心十足地窃窃私语。
行为
所听,所做
Around him, classmates chatted excitedly about their expected high scores, but Timmy slumped lower in his seat, - this time, he just hoped his name wouldn't be last again.
同学们正兴高采烈地讨论着预期的高分,而提米却往座位里缩了缩身子——这一次,他只盼着自己的名字别再垫底就好。
所看,所想
Leaning back in his chair, Timmy sat quietly by the window.
Outside, the rain poured heavily, and bean-sized raindrops pounded against the window panes, just like the blows upon his heart. /Outside, the sky was leaden, with iron-gray clouds hanging low, and a cold wind blew dead leaves against the window, just like the lingering gloom in his heart.
Timmy looked up to his best friend Jack lightly tapping his pen in a steady rhythm, a faint smile lingering on his lips—betraying his confidence in this exam.
He hunched over his desk, absentmindedly chewing his fingernails while classmates murmured confidently around him.
Around him, classmates chatted excitedly about their expected high scores, but Timmy slumped lower in his seat, - this time, he just hoped his name wouldn't be last again.