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高分写作
第7讲 咨询信
A. 应用文
1. 咨询信的基本结构
咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解有关详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分内容:开篇说明写信目的,即询问信息的原因;正文列举所要咨询的具体信息;结尾期盼回复并表示感谢。
2. 常用表达
开头语:
(1)I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/ concerning…
如果您能给我提供关于……的信息,我将不胜感激。
(2)I am writing to you in the hope that you can provide me with further information.
我写信是希望您能给我提供更多信息。
正文:
(1)What's more, are there any problems to which I need to pay special attention
另外,还有什么问题需要我特别注意的吗
(2)I wonder whether/if it is convenient for you to inform me when and where the activity will be held.
我想知道您是否方便告知活动举办的时间和地点。
(3)I would also like to know…
我还想知道……
结束语:
(1)Looking forward to your immediate response.
期待您及时答复。
(2)I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply as soon as possible.
如果您能尽快给我答复,我将不胜感激。
典例体验
(2025·湖南长沙)
假定你是李华,你将要参加“全国英语创新大赛(National English Innovation Contest)”夏令营。请你给该夏令营的外籍负责人写一封信,内容包括:
1. 自我介绍;
2. 咨询比赛的相关情况(时间、地点、流程等)
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
写作指导
体裁 咨询信 时态 一般现在时
主题 咨询比赛具体情况 人称 第一人称
结构 第一段:表明写信目的并做简单的自我介绍 第二段:咨询比赛的时间、地点、流程 第三段:期待回复 核心词汇
1. 参加 ____________________
2. 咨询 v. ____________________
3. 使感激;帮忙,效劳 v. ____________________
4. 过程,步骤 n. ____________________
5. 提前 ____________________
participate in
inquire
oblige
procedure
in advance
核心要点的不同表达
1. 我有机会参加“全国英语创新大赛”的夏令营!所以我写信是为了询问比赛的细节。(offer)
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. 如果您能告诉我我要遵循的程序,我将不胜感激。(procedure)
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I have been offered the opportunity to participate in the summer camp of “National English Innovation Contest”! So I'm writing to inquire about the details of the contest./Having offered the opportunity to participate in the summer camp of “National English Innovation Contest”, I'm writing to inquire about the details of the contest.
I'd be obliged if you could let me know the procedure that I'll have to go through. /I would appreciate it if you could tell me the procedure that I'll have to go through.
小试牛刀
Dear Sir/Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Senior Three student. I have been offered the opportunity to participate in the summer camp of “National English Innovation Contest”! So I'm writing to inquire about the details of the contest.
Firstly, I'd like to know when it starts and how long it will last. I wonder where the contest will be held. I'd be obliged if you could let me know the procedure that I'll have to go through. Additionally, could you also tell me what I need to prepare in advance
Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
(2024·湖南长沙)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter对你校即将举行的环保自行车赛(Green Cycling) 很感兴趣,向你咨询相关事宜。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍比赛信息:
2. 期待对方参与。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Peter,
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Knowing you're interested in the Green Cycling to be hosted by our school, I'm writing to inform you of the relevant information.
As an annual event, it's aimed at advocating low carbon transportation and raising public awareness of environmental protection. Scheduled for July 20th, the race will start from our school, follow the main roads across the city and finish in the City Park. During the race, basic supplies and medical care will be provided.
I highly expect your participation and excellent performance.
Yours,
Li Hua