【期中考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点培优牛津译林版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点培优牛津译林版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．为了帮助九年级学生缓解学习和生活的压力，校学生会将招聘一名青少年辅导员（youth worker）。假如你是学生会主席李华，请认真阅读两位报名者的信息，结合你校学生的实际需求，选择一位报名者录用并陈述理由。
Name Shirley Tony
Job designer basketball player
Personality creative, modest, easy to work with humorous, energetic
Hobby music & dance sports
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I would like to choose ________ as the youth worker.
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2．我们每个人都有自己的梦想和喜欢的职业，为了实现自己的梦想，我们都在努力学习、工作、拼搏、奋斗。请你以“I want to be a/an ____”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的理想。写作要点：
1. 你的梦想的职业是什么？
2. 你为什么喜欢它？
3. 为了实现梦想，你会怎么做？要求：
1. 词数为80词；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：come true (实现梦想), study hard (努力学习), meaningful (adj. 有意义的)
I want to be a/an __________
There are many kinds of jobs in the world, but different people have different ideas.
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3．某英文杂志正在为其“colours”专栏招募小记者，假如你是Shirley，你想应聘该职位，需要向主编Mr. Smith提交英文自荐信。请根据以下提示和要求写一篇自荐信。
1. What is your personality
2. What colours do you like best Why
3. Why do you think you are suitable for this position
注意：内容需包含所有要点，词数不少于90，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to recommend myself to be the reporter of your magazine.
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Yours sincerely,
Shirley
4．学生会要表彰一批优秀学生，Tom想推荐他的同学John竞争“最乐于助人奖”(the Most Helpful Student Award)。请你以Tom的名义，用英语给学生会主席写一封80~100词的推荐信。
推荐信中必须包括下列要点：
1.他有礼貌，勤奋，谦虚，乐于助人，常常帮助同学学习；
2.他经常为希望工程募集物品；
3.他擅长电脑，经常为帮扶俱乐部(the Helping Hands Club)从网上查找资料；
4.他从不介意做额外的工作，经常指导新同学如何使用图书馆，大家都很感激他。
Dear President of Students’ Union,
I would like
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Yours faithfully,
Tom
5．梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想，就没有坚定的方向。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么呢？某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream”的征文活动，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
1. What are you going to be in the future
2. What makes you have the dream (Give some reasons)
3. What are you going to do to realize your dream (More than two plans)
注意：1. 根据以上提示，适当发挥；
2. 要求结构清晰，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors.
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6．假设你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为“Colourful Me”的征文活动，要求结合颜色和性格两个维度介绍自己，并讲述一个具体经历来证明你的观点。请根据以下提示完成一篇90词左右的英语短文，投稿给校报。提示：
1.你最喜欢的颜色及其象征意义；
2.你的性格特点；
3.一次真实或虚构的小经历，体现该颜色和性格如何帮助你解决问题或带给他人正能量；
要求：
须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
文中不得出现真实校名、人名；
语言流畅，书写规范
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7．中国红意味着平安、喜庆、和谐、团圆；意味着百事顺意……，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Toney对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格中的信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福、好运、喜庆、团圆等
使用场所 婚礼、春节等
表达方式 剪纸、中国结、红包、灯笼等
注意事项：1. 词数90左右；
2. 包括所给提示内容，可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3. 短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。
5. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：婚礼wedding；中国结 Chinese knot；红包red packet；代表 stand for
Dear Toney,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．现在喜欢中国文化的外国友人越来越多， 并且他们希望能和中国学生成为朋友。假定你是李华，你的网友Robert想更多地了解你。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容用英语写一封邮件回复。
To: Lihua@
From: Robert2008@
Subject: Making friends
Dear Li Hua, How are you I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you. ● Could you share something about Chinese animal signs ● Would you please tell me something about your personality ● Would you like to let me know something about your favourite colour I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Best withes! Robert
要点：
1.文中不得提及真实的人名及校名等相关信息。
2.回复须回答所有问题并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
3.词数100左右，文章开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
I’m very glad that you’d like to make friends with me.
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I also want to know more about you. I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
9．我国的传统文化源远流长，博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息，它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现，请你根据下面提示写一封回信。
写作要求：
( 1)内容包括提示信息，可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
( 2)字数不少于 80词。
(3)卷面整洁，条理清楚。
参考词汇：红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
含义 幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所及表达方式 婚礼，春节等，剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼等
影响 深深地影响每一个中国人
提示词：剪纸 paper-cutting，中国结Chinese knot，红包red packet
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．为了让同学们能够更好地适应九年级的学习生活，做到劳逸结合，张弛有度，本周你校将开展以“How to learn wisely”为题的演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）字迹工整，语序通顺，条理清晰；
（3）文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How to learn wisely
Hello everyone! We are busier with our studies these days.
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12．假如你是李华，本周学校将迎来一位来英国的交换生Tony。他发来电子邮件，想了解一些中文学习方法和中国传统节日等方面的信息。请根据以下内容提示，给Tony 回封邮件。
内容提示：
1. How can he learn Chinese well
2. What traditional Chinese festivals do you like best How do people celebrate them
注意：
(1)文中不得透露个人真实信息；
(2)词数80左右；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’m very pleased to receive your e-mail.
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I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
13．假如你是李军，你的美国笔友Joe想知道你们班同学是如何学习英语的，为此你给Joe写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们班同学学习英语的各种方法。
1. 写作要点：
（1）你对英语是否感兴趣；
（2）学习英语的方法很多；
（3）可以通过记笔记，做单词卡，问老师，小组合作，听英语歌曲等多种方法。
2. 写作要求：
（1）内容需包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
（2）语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，词数：80词左右；
（3）书写工整、规范，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to study English well
Dear Joe,
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Yours,
Li Jun
14．你经常用手机阅读吗？有人认为用手机阅读方便且花费少；也有人认为用手机阅读对眼睛有害，并且容易使人沉迷其中。校刊英语专栏正在以“是否应该使用手机进行阅读 ”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
Do you think we should read on mobile phones
What are your reasons
What advice would you like to give your classmates
Something more about your opinion
注意：文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；词数100左右。注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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15．假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到交换生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
要求：
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，跟同学相处不好， 感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团——认识更多朋友
2. ？(补充)
中文难学，不了解中国文化 1. 多阅读中文故事、新闻——在运用中学习中文
2. ？(补充)
1. 回信应包括所有要点；
2. 词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
16．郑钦文是我国杰出的新生代网球健将，她凭借球场上奋斗的精神和坚韧的品质收获了国内外众多粉丝，粉丝们都称她为“Queen Wen”。假设你要给学校英文杂志The Person I Admire专栏投稿，请你根据下面的信息，写一篇介绍郑钦文的文章。
要求：1. 短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，并做适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3. 词数100词左右
2024 win the gold medal of tennis singles at 2024 Paris Olympics 2023 overcome a wrist injury (受伤); return to the court 2015 go to Europe for further training and international competitions 2010 win the first prize in U12 Juniors in China 2000s begin learning to play tennis; train hard 2002 be born in Hubei
The person I admire most is Zheng Qinwen.
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17．假如你们学校校报组织题为My role model的英语征文活动，请根据征文要求，写一篇短文投稿。
My role modelIn your life, there must be a role model who influences you deeply. They may be great persons like a scientist, an actor or an athlete. They may also be common people around you such as your parent, your teacher or your classmate. Please write a passage to introduce him or her and your passage should include these following points: 1. Who is your role model Please introduce his/her general information. 2. Why is he/she your role model Please give at least two reasons. 3. What can you learn from him/her We are looking forward to your passages. We hope more readers can share your role models with us.
role model: 榜样
要求：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺，可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My role model
Role models have a great influence on our life.
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18．自古以来，人们对英雄的定义没有统一的标准。英雄可以是科学家、体育健将，也可以是医生或者见义勇为者。假如你班将要开展一次以“The hero in my heart”为主题的英语班会。请你根据下面的要点与要求写一篇英语发言稿。
要点：
(1) 你心中的英雄是谁
(2) 你为什么认为他/她是你心中的英雄
(3) 你从他/她那里学到了什么
要求：
(1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名：
(2) 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。
The hero in my heart
Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
19．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如： Spud Webb、Tan Dun、Audrey Hepburn、 Jackie Chan等，他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动， 请结合你的经历，用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容涵盖以下要点：
1. Who is your role model
2. What meaningful things he/ she did influence you most
3. What can you learn from him/ her
注意：
1. 词数不少于100字， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数；
2. 内容涵盖要点， 全文连贯通顺， 可适当发挥；
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is
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20．榜样(role model) 不仅是一面镜子，还是一面旗帜。好的榜样激发我们对人生道路 和人生理想的思考，给予我们自我完善的力量。假设你是李华，你校英文俱乐部举办题 为“A Role Model in My Life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示写一篇演讲稿，向大家 介绍你心中的榜样。
内容提示：
1. Who is your role model
2. Why is he/she your role model
3. How does your role model influence you in your daily life
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
2. 词数80个左右, 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
I would like to choose Shirley as the youth worker. Her job, personality and hobbies are strong qualities for this position.
Grade Nine students may have problems because of a lot of homework and exams. As a creative designer, Shirley can help students design a better timetable to plan their study and life well. Shirley is modest and easy to work with. Students can make friends and share their problems with her. What’s more, she is good at music and dancing. Many students have the same hobbies, so they can share experiences with one another.
So I think Shirley is the suitable person to be a youth worker.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格信息选择并陈述理由，注意逻辑连贯与语言准确性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确选择对象；
第二步，从职业、性格、爱好三方面说明理由；
第三步，总结其适配性。
[亮点词汇]
①creative有创造力的
②modest谦虚的
③share experiences分享经验
[高分句型]
①So I think Shirley is the suitable person to be a youth worker. （宾语从句）
2．例文
I want to be a teacher
There are many kinds of jobs in the world, but different people have different ideas. When I grow up, I want to be a teacher. Teachers are very important because they help students learn new things. I want to teach English because I love reading and writing. And I also want to make friends with my students and play with them.
I know being a teacher is not easy, but I will work hard to achieve my dream. I will study hard and learn as much as I can. I believe I can make a difference in my students’ lives.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己的梦想职业，原因；
第三步，介绍自己打算如何做。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①When I grow up, I want to be a teacher.（时间状语从句）
②Teachers are very important because they help students learn new things.（原因状语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to recommend myself to be the reporter of your magazine.
I’m an outgoing and curious person. I love exploring new things and talking to different people, which makes me good at communicating and gathering information.
Among all colours, I like blue best. Blue reminds me of the sky and the sea, bringing a sense of calm and peace. It also represents wisdom, and I always hope to approach things with a wise mind.
I think I’m suitable for this position for several reasons. Firstly, my outgoing personality helps me interact with others easily, so I can conduct interviews and collect stories about colours effectively. Secondly, my love for blue and my interest in colours in general make me passionate about writing articles for the “colours” column. I’m eager to share the beauty and meanings of different colours with readers.
I really hope to have the chance to work for your magazine.
Yours sincerely,
Shirley
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封自荐信，围绕应聘杂志专栏小记者展开；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中性格、最喜欢的颜色及原因、适合该职位的原因的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出应聘的优势。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借已给开头引出应聘意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从性格、最喜欢的颜色及原因、适合职位的原因几方面，说明自身优势；
第三步，书写结语。表达期望，结束信件。
[亮点词汇]
①outgoing外向的
②curious好奇的
③communicate交流
④gather information收集信息
⑤passionate热情
[高分句型]
①I love exploring new things and talking to different people, which makes me good at communicating and gathering information. (which引导非限定性定语从句，说明性格带来的优势)
②Firstly, my outgoing personality helps me interact with others easily, so I can conduct interviews and collect stories about colours effectively. (firstly开启原因说明，so表结果，阐述性格优势)
4．例文
Dear President of Students’ Union,
I would like to recommend John for the Most Helpful Student Award.
John is my classmate. He has many good qualities.
He is polite, hard-working and very modest. He is always helpful. He often helps us with our study. He often helps raise things for Project Hope. He is good at computers and often searches for information on the Internet for the Helping Hands Club. He never minds doing extra work and often shows the new students how to use the school library. We are all grateful to him for his help.
We all think he is the most suitable person for this award. We all hope you can agree with us.
Yours faithfully,
Tom
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明推荐意图（推荐John竞选奖项）；
第二步，描述John的优秀品质和具体事例；
第三步，总结并点题，再次推荐John。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
②search for搜索，查找
③on the Internet在网络上
④mind doing sth.介意做某事
⑤show sb. how to do sth.向某人展示如何做某事
⑥be grateful to sb. for sth.因某事感谢某人
[高分句型]
We all think he is the most suitable person for this award.（宾语从句）
5．Possible version:
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors. As for me, I have a dream that one day I will be a scientist. Here are some reasons.
For one reason, I prefer science to other subjects. It is my favorite subject at school. For another, I am curious and I love exploring the unknown. I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future.
To realize my dream, I am going to study harder to enter a university to learn more about science. What’s more, I’ll make full use of my spare time to read different kinds of books and obtain more knowledge. As the saying goes, “Roman was not built in a day.” I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is.
I am sure that my dream will come true one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍梦想是什么；
第二步，阐述原因；
第三步，介绍为了实现梦想，自己打算如何做；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use of充分利用
②different kinds of不同种类的
③stick to坚持
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future.（定语从句）
②I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is.（no matter how引导的让步状语从句）
③I am sure that my dream will come true one day. （宾语从句）
6．例文：
My favorite color is yellow, which symbolizes warmth and optimism. I’m a cheerful person who always tries to see the positive side of things. Whenever I wear yellow, I feel more confident and cheerful.
One day, during a difficult exam, I remembered the positive energy yellow brings me. The exam was tough, and I started to feel nervous. But then I looked at my yellow pencil case and thought about how yellow always makes me feel happy and energetic. I encouraged myself to stay calm and think positively, just like the bright yellow around me.
Finally, I overcame the challenges and did well in the exam. I believe that my love for yellow and my positive attitude helped me a lot. Colors can really have great effects on our moods and behaviors. I hope everyone can find their favorite color and let it bring them happiness and strength.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为主题征文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，讲述经历时可用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括最喜欢的颜色及其象征意义、性格特点以及一个具体经历，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接引出自己最喜欢的颜色及其象征意义，同时简要描述自己的性格特点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述一个具体经历，说明该颜色和性格如何帮助自己解决问题或带给他人正能量；
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，强调颜色和性格对自己的影响，并表达积极向上的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite最喜欢的
②symbolize象征
③cheerful快乐的，开朗的
④positive积极的
⑤encourage鼓励
[高分句型]
①My favorite color is yellow, which symbolizes warmth and optimism.（定语从句）
②Whenever I wear yellow, I feel more confident and cheerful.（时间状语从句）
7．范文：
Dear Toney,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red is one of the most popular colors in China. It stands for happiness, good luck, celebration, reunion and so on. People in our country use many red things in some important events. For example, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cutting, lanterns and Chinese knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays an important role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍“中国红”的地位以及代表的意义；
第三步、介绍“中国红”使用的场所以及表达方式并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for 代表
②be decorated with 装饰着
③be filled with 充满；装满
④play an important role 扮演重要的角色；发挥重要作用
[高分句型]
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.(省略that的宾语从句)
8．例文：
Dear Robert,
I’m very glad that you’d like to make friends with me. The Chinese zodiac features 12 animal signs in this order: Rat, Ox, Tiger, Rabbit, Dragon, Snake, Horse, Sheep, Monkey, Rooster, Dog and Pig. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. There is an animal for each year.
My animal sign is the Dragon. I am very outgoing and I like making friends with people around me. I have extremely high expectations of myself and I am very careful. I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign.
My favourite colour is green. When spring comes, everything comes to life and everything is green. So I think green is a symbol of life and energy.
I also want to know more about you. I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据邮件中的信息进行写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些关于中国生肖的信息；
第二步，介绍自己的性格；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的颜色和原因；
[亮点词汇]
①be considered to be被认为是
②be related to和……有关
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. (which引导的定语从句)
②So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. (宾语从句)
9．例文
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck．
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍红色所代表的意义；
第三步，介绍红色的应用；
第四步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be popular with受欢迎
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.（such…that引导结果状语从句）
②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.（宾语从句）
10．例文：
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
As we all know, China Red is one of the most popular colours in China, and it is deeply loved by people of all ages. The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. What’s more, it can bring people good luck. When the Spring Festival is coming, China Red will come into your eyes whenever and wherever you are. When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you most is the China Red. On these occasions, China Red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. The China Red has deeply affected every Chinese. It is not only a colour but also a kind of Chinese spirit and culture.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助你的英国朋友Tony，了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明很高兴收到对方来信，然后回信告诉他关于“中国红”的事情；
第二步，从地位、含义、使用场所及表达方式和影响四个方面来介绍“中国红”；
第三步，结语已给出，希望回信能对他有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for代表
②on these occasions在这些场合
③put into把……放进
④be used to do习惯于
[高分句型]
①The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. （that引导表语从句）
②On these occasions, China red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
11．例文
How to learn wisely
Hello everyone! We are busier with our studies these days. All of us want to learn wisely and get good grades. But how can we do that
First, listen carefully in class. This is very important because teachers explain key points. Second, plan your time well. For example, finish homework first, then relax or play sports. This helps you feel better. Third, make sure to sleep enough at night. Good sleep makes your brain work better.
Remember, studying hard is good, but resting is also important. Try these ways, and you can learn wisely! Thank you.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：以“How to learn wisely”为题，写一篇演讲稿讲述如何能够更好地适应九年级的学习生活，做到劳逸结合，张弛有度。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据文章已给出的开头，引出如何明智地学习这一主题；
第二步，具体阐述如何明智地学习；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
make sure确保
[高分句型]
This is very important because teachers explain key points.（because引导的原因状语从句）
12．例文
Dear Tony,
I’m very pleased to receive your e-mail. Let me answer your questions.
To learn Chinese well, I suggest you start with basic vocabulary and grammar. What’s more, watching Chinese TV shows and listening to Chinese songs are also helpful. Of all the traditional Chinese festivals, I like the Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival best. As for the Mid-Autumn Festival, it’s a time for families to get together and enjoy mooncakes while admiring the moon. The Dragon Boat Festival is interesting. We can eat zongzi and watch the dragon boat races.
I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中一些中文学习方法和中国传统节日的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山表达很高兴收到来信的心情并表示要回答问题；
第二步，具体介绍一些中文学习方法和中国传统节日；
第三步，书写结束语。表达“期待和朋友相见”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① What’s more更重要的是，另外
② As for至于，就……方面说来
③ admiring the moon赏月
④ watch the dragon boat races看龙舟比赛
[高分句型]
① To learn Chinese well, I suggest you start with basic vocabulary and grammar. (不定式表目的)
② What’s more, watching Chinese TV shows and listening to Chinese songs are also helpful. (动名词短语作主语)
13．例文
How to study English well
Dear Joe,
With the development of the society, English has become more and more important in our daily life. I’m interested in English. How can we learn it well There are many ways.
To be good learners, we should have good habits and ways of learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. What’s more, some students practice listening as much as possible. It is said that practice makes perfect. They listen to the tapes, make flashcards and listen to English songs. Last but not least, it’s necessary to improve our speaking by practicing conversations with friends and we can read aloud to practice pronunciation.
What’s your opinion Please write to me.
Yours,
Li Jun
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列内容要点，可适当补充，使文章内容充实；写作中适当使用连接词、短语和句型，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明英语很重要，自己对英语感兴趣，介绍学习英语有很多方法；
第二步，具体介绍学习英语的方法；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①get ready for为……做准备
②go over复习
③as much as possible尽可能多地
[高分句型]
Last but not least, it’s necessary to improve our speaking by practicing conversations with friends and we can read aloud to practice pronunciation. (it作形式主语，动词不定式为真正主语)
14．例文
I think we can read on mobile phones. We can carry mobile phones in our pockets. It is really convenient. Anywhere and anytime we can read the electronic books. For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.
I like to read on mobile phones. There are different kinds of books online which we can read. Last month, I bought an electronic book about Chinese history. It only cost me five yuan. The electronic books are cheap. By reading different books, I can learn a lot and open my eyes to the outside world.
But we need to control our time reasonably and have proper rest. At the same time, we should read healthy content.
In a word, I think reading on mobile phones is convenient and good for me.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为校刊英语专栏投稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括对是否应该使用手机进行阅读的看法、原因、给同学们的建议以及更多个人观点，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我认为我们可以在手机上阅读”引出下文，并阐述其便利性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“手机阅读的便利性、在线书籍的多样性及价格优势”两个方面阐述原因，同时给出“控制时间、合理休息以及阅读健康内容”的建议；
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，再次强调手机阅读的便利性及其带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient 方便的
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③open one’s eyes to... 使某人开阔眼界
④at the same time 同时
⑤in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.（when引导时间状语从句）
②There are different kinds of books online which we can read.（which引导定语从句）
15．例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school.
You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates. Joining school clubs can be a great way to meet more people. Moreover, try to take an active part in class discussions and group activities. This will help you bond with your classmates. You also find it challenging to learn Chinese and you are unfamiliar with Chinese culture. Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章需涵盖所有要点，即Ben面临的问题、针对问题的建议及理由，同时需适当补充内容，使文章更加充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出，直接进入主题，即描述Ben提到的问题。
第二步，针对Ben提到的“朋友少，跟同学相处不好，感觉孤单”的问题，提出参加学校社团和积极参与课堂讨论及小组活动的建议；针对“中文难学，不了解中国文化”的问题，提出多阅读中文故事、新闻以及观看中文电影和电视节目的建议。
第三步，最后表达希望自己的建议能够对Ben有所帮助的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth 做某事有困难
②get used to 习惯于
③take an active part in 积极参加
④help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
⑤be unfamiliar with 对……不熟悉
[高分句型]
①You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates.（because of 后接动名词短语作原因状语）
②Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.（动名词短语作介词besides的宾语）
16．例文
The person I admire most is Zheng Qinwen. She is a famous Chinese tennis player who is called “Queen Wen” by her fans worldwide.
Born in Hubei in 2002, Zheng started learning tennis as a child and trained hard throughout her early years. She showed great talent in tennis when she won the first prize in a national U12 juniors competition in 2010. An important step in her career came in 2015, when the brave teenager left home for Europe to pursue better training and face international challenges. Her journey to success was not without hardships. She once overcame a serious wrist injury and suffered a lot. But she managed to go through it. All her efforts paid off when she won the gold medal in the women’s singles at the 2024 Paris Olympics, making the whole nation proud.
What inspires me most is not just her victories, but her spirit of never giving up. She truly deserves the title “Queen Wen” and is a great role model for all young people.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文，是一篇为学校英文杂志专栏撰写的人物传记；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中郑钦文的经历，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明自己最钦佩的人是郑钦文，并简要介绍其身份；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“2002年出生、2010年赢得全国U12青少年比赛一等奖、2015年赴欧洲训练、克服伤病、2024年赢得巴黎奥运会女单金牌”等方面重点介绍郑钦文的网球生涯和成就，突出其奋斗精神和坚韧品质；
第三步，书写结语。表达郑钦文的精神对自己的激励，强调她作为年轻榜样的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth.开始做某事
②show great talent in在……方面展现出巨大天赋
③leave home for离开家去……
④pursue better training追求更好的训练
⑤face international challenges面对国际挑战
[高分句型]
①She is a famous Chinese tennis player who is called “Queen Wen” by her fans worldwide.（定语从句）
②An important step in her career came in 2015, when the brave teenager left home for Europe to pursue better training and face international challenges.（定语从句；动词不定式作目的状语）
17．例文：
My Role Model
Role models have a great influence on our life. Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practicing playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍Spud Webb成为自己榜样的原因；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①keep on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up.（but连接的并列句）
18．例文
The hero in my heart
Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—Lang Ping.
Lang Ping is an excellent coach as well as a great volleyball player. In 1984, she, as a player, helped the Chinese women’s volleyball team win their first Olympic gold medal. And under her leadership, the Chinese women’s volleyball team has won many medals since 2013. Whatever she does, she always tries her best. However, Lang is in poor health because of hard exercise and work. But she is always strong and has never thought of giving up. Her spirit encourages me a lot. That’s why I see her as a hero. From her, I’ve learned how to stick to my dream and make it come true.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己心目中的英雄是郎平；
第二步，介绍为什么她是我心目中的英雄；
第三步，书写结语。表达“感谢您的聆听”。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best尽某人最大的努力
②be in poor health健康状态不好
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①Whatever she does, she always tries her best. (whatever引导的让步状语从句)
②That’s why I see her as a hero. (why引导的表语从句)
19．例文：
My Role Model Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is my hero!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样，要求要点齐全，语句连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，点明谁是自己的榜样；
第二步，介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大；
第三步，表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①kept on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句)
20．例文：
Role models in life set good examples for us. Yao Ming is my role model in my life. He is my favorite basketball player in the world. And he is known for his charity work. He founded his Foundation in 2008. He has built five schools in Sichuan and other areas. He has offered lots of money to help the people in trouble. He always asks us to protect the animals on the earth. I think he is very kind and helpful.
I must learn from him and help people in need around us. We’ll try my best to support him and make a contribution to our society.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是话题作文；
②时态：本文一般采用一般现在时；
③提示：注意语意连贯，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的榜样，说出具体原因。
第二步，介绍榜样如何影响自己。
[亮点词汇]
①set examples for 树立榜样
②be known for以……被知晓
③in trouble在困境中
④try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①He has built five schools in Sichuan and other areas.(现在完成时)
②I think he is very kind and helpful.(宾语从句)
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