【期中考点培优】专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点培优沪教牛津版
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点培优沪教牛津版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“How to live a healthy and happy life （如何过健康快乐的生活）”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点：①保持身体健康。
②少吃垃圾食品。
③加强与他人的沟通，注意心理健康。
④不要熬夜。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；（2）照抄试卷内容不得分。
Word bank：physical health身体健康 mental health心理健康
How to live a healthy and happy life
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2．假设你是一名叫李明的中学生，你很热爱运动并擅长运动。请你用英语写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 介绍你最喜欢的一种运动；
2. 说说你喜欢这项运动的理由 (可从这项运动的特点和自己的感受来写)；
3. 号召同学们多参加运动。
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、人名等信息；
2. 语句连贯，80 词左右。
I’m a middle school student called Li Ming.
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3．习主席在谈到青少年体质时说，要文明其精神，野蛮其体魄 (Civilize our spirit and strengthen our physique)。中考体考旨在促进学生体育锻炼，提高身体素质，建立健康意识，培养健全人格。作为九年级学生，你已经经历了两年的体育锻炼。现在学校校报英语栏目向大家发起征文，内容是在体育锻炼中的拼搏故事。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：(1) 体育锻炼 (physical exercise) 的意义 (强身健体、培养习惯……)；
(2) 体育锻炼的过程 (辛苦、挫折、坚持……)；
(3) 关于体育锻炼的感悟。
注意：(1) 词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文章中不能出现你的真实姓名及学校名称。
As we all know, good health plays the most important role in our life.
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4．假如你是李明，你校将举办以“Enjoy sports, enjoy life”为主题的演讲活动。请根据下图提示，写一篇英语发言稿，内容包括：
1．介绍你跑步的现状；
2．结合自身的经历，谈谈选择跑步的原因；
3．谈谈跑步对自己的影响。
注意：
1．文章须包含图中所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2．词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I love running.
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5．现今越来越多的人开始参加各种体育锻炼，有的跳广场舞，有的练瑜伽，有的甚至报名参加马拉松比赛。请根据提示，以“The benefits (好处) of taking exercise”为题，用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享你经常参加的运动项目。
提示：
l. What kind of activities do you often take part in
2. What benefits does it bring to you
注意：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100 词左右。
The benefits of taking exercise
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6．袁隆平是世界上最伟大的科学家之一，他帮助世界人民战胜了饥饿。请根据以下汉语提示以My hero—Yuan Longping为题目来介绍一下心目中的英雄。
1930年 出生于北京
年轻时 梦想培育更优良的水稻
后来 上大学
1953年 获得学位，开始工作
工作初始 做过3000多次实验，都失败了
最后 培育了新型的水稻，出国分享经验
要求：1. 词数100左右。
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥。
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7．郑钦文是我国杰出的新生代网球健将，她凭借球场上奋斗的精神和坚韧的品质收获了国内外众多粉丝，粉丝们都称她为“Queen Wen”。假设你要给学校英文杂志The Person I Admire专栏投稿，请你根据下面的信息，写一篇介绍郑钦文的文章。
要求：1. 短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，并做适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3. 词数100词左右
2024 win the gold medal of tennis singles at 2024 Paris Olympics 2023 overcome a wrist injury (受伤); return to the court 2015 go to Europe for further training and international competitions 2010 win the first prize in U12 Juniors in China 2000s begin learning to play tennis; train hard 2002 be born in Hubei
The person I admire most is Zheng Qinwen.
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8．请你根据以下内容提示，以“My Hero—Andersen”为题，介绍这位世界著名童话作家。
(1) 生于1805年4月；
(2) 家庭贫穷，十四岁到一家剧院工作，后来在一位热心人的帮助下上了学；
(3) 1828年上大学，毕业后努力创作，获得巨大成功；
(4) 一生创作了160多个故事，1875年去世。
(5) 你觉得……
参考词汇：热心的 warm-hearted 毕业 graduate
要求：
(1) 词数：80~100个。
(2) 短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My Hero—Andersen
Hans Christian Andersen is one of the most famous fairy tale writers in the world.
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9．假如你们的外教David布置了一次小组演讲任务，话题是“The Great Minds” ，以下表格是你们小组的讨论结果，请你根据表格内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。
组员 心目中的伟人 原因
Tina 爱迪生（Edison） 刻苦努力 他的发明改善人类生活
Jim 莎士比亚（Shakespeare） 英国最伟大的戏剧家（playwriter） 他的作品丰富人们的生活
你 ？（请你补充） ？（请你补充至少两点）
要求：
1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息：
3.词数： 80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入词数）
Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share our group’s ideas about great minds with you.
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10．假如你校英语俱乐部准备举办一场以介绍名人为主题的墙报展，请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇英语短文介绍科学家居里夫人。
出生地：波兰
出生日期：1867年11月7日
经历：（1）从小就对物理感兴趣，展现出超凡天赋，读了很多这方面的书籍；
（2）当时波兰不允许女子入大学，于是萌发去法国巴黎求学的梦想。为筹措去上大学的学费，她做了8年家庭教师；
（3）1891年赴巴黎Sorbonne University求学两年后获得物理学位，后来又获得数学学位，并成为那里的第一位女讲师。
成就：一生获得很多奖项，最为人所知的是分别于1903年和1911年获得了诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖（发现钋和镭两种元素）。
感悟：从居里夫人身上你学到了什么？
注意：
（1）参考词汇：波兰Poland 家庭教师tutor 学位degree 物理physics
化学chemistry 诺贝尔奖the Nobel Prize 钋polonium 镭radium
（2）词数80-100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
（3）不得透露姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Marie Curie
Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She is known for her great achievements in science.
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11．Tim两年前随父母来到了湖北襄阳，他想给加拿大朋友Jack写信讲述他来中国后的各种变化，并告知他们自己的新年计划。请你根据表格内容，代替Tim完成这封信。
In Canada In Xiangyang
communication 交际 chat with, walk in the park Parents are busy with work; no time with me;
dietary 饮食 breakfast: bread and milk; lunch: rice and beef breakfast: beef noodles; lunch: fish, vegetables
sports Don’t like sports Be interested in Ping-pong
New year’s plan…
要求：
(1) 所写内容必须包含所提供的要点，可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、班名及地名;
(3) 词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Jack，
How is it going
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Yours，
Tim
12．时间飞逝，同学们已经进入九年级。在紧张的学习生活中，你一定结识了一些新朋友。请根据下面要点，以“My new friend”为题，介绍你的新朋友Andy。
性格 自信，……（举例）；有条理，……（举例）；
喜爱的颜色 蓝色，……（原因）；绿色，……（原因）；
座右铭 (Motto) 体型大小并不重要；如果永不言弃，可以做任何事情。
问题 不擅长体育，……；父母太在意分数、压力过大；
你的建议 ……（针对Andy的问题，提出一至两条建议）
1. 包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 省略号部分需作适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My new friend
Andy is my new friend. _______________________________________________________
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13．时间飞逝，同学们已经进入九年级。在紧张的学习生活中，你一定结识了一些新朋友。请根据下面要点，以“My new friend”为题，介绍你的新朋友Andy。
性格 自信，……（举例）；有条理，……（举例）；
喜爱的颜色 蓝色，……（原因）；绿色，……（原因）；
座右铭 如果永不言弃，可以做任何事情。
问题 有时难以做出决定，……；父母过多关注分数、觉得有点压力；
你的建议 ……（针对Andy的问题，提出一至两条建议）
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14．成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途也有美丽的风景，每一次困惑与进步都是这场旅途中的回忆。回首这一个月的初三时光，你的好朋友Simon有一些困惑，请根据表格内容，对Simon进行介绍并根据相应的问题给出你的建议。
Name Simon
Animal sign 虎，勇敢，强大、有力
Favorite colour 绿色，自然的颜色，让人精力充沛，……
Qualities 1、自信，不怕在别人面前作演讲 2、擅长使用电脑让自己更有组织能力 3、勤奋，……(举例)
Problems 1、太多家庭作业，不得不熬夜，梦想更多时间为了爱好 2、超重，…… 3、学习物理有困难，……
Advice 仔细计划好每天，根据时间选择爱好，多运动，少吃零食，……
要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，短文开头已经写好，不计总词数。
Simon is my best friend
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15．假如你是Daniel，你们学校正在招聘新的学生会主席，请你阅读以下招聘公告，并根据内容给校长写一封信，推荐你的好友Sandy。
Dear classmates,
We are looking for a chairperson of our Students’ Union. We want to know:
1. Who you’d like to recommend (name, age, hobbies);
2. What good qualities he/she has for this position (please give us three of his/her good qualities and examples);
3. Which two colours he/she likes best and tell us the reasons.
Please write to us at Sunshineschool@. We are expecting your reply!
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
Dear principal,
I’d like to recommend my friend as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.
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I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Daniel
16．你经常用手机阅读吗？有人认为用手机阅读方便且花费少；也有人认为用手机阅读对眼睛有害，并且容易使人沉迷其中。校刊英语专栏正在以“是否应该使用手机进行阅读 ”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
Do you think we should read on mobile phones
What are your reasons
What advice would you like to give your classmates
Something more about your opinion
注意：文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；词数100左右。注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I think we can read on mobile phones. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到交换生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
要求：
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，跟同学相处不好， 感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团——认识更多朋友
2. ？(补充)
中文难学，不了解中国文化 1. 多阅读中文故事、新闻——在运用中学习中文
2. ？(补充)
1. 回信应包括所有要点；
2. 词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
18．你学校的英文网站举办了一次征稿活动，主题是关于你校禁止电子产品（electronic product）进校园的规定。请你写一篇英文稿件进行投稿，倡导大家合理使用电子产品。内容包括：
(1) 青少年带电子产品进校园的危害（至少2点）。
(2) 关于青少年使用电子产品的建议（至少3点）。
(3) 呼吁大家合理使用电子产品。
作文要求：
(1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名，语句连贯，词数80左右。
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19．时光飞逝，初三的学习生活已经过半，面对高强度的学习压力和即将来临的中考升学，有些同学感到焦虑，根据下面的提示和你周围同学的情况，请你用英语写一篇短文提供一些合理化的建议。
初三学习生活的变化 你对初三学习生活的看法和建议
1. 学科作业增多； 2. 没有时间休息； 3. 不能很好地发展自己的兴趣爱好； 4. 升学的压力让一些同学睡不好觉； …… 初三是我们成长的关键时期，经历了初三的学习生活能让我们更好面对未来的挑战，建议同学们要： 1. 合理地安排学习生活； 2. 适当的体育运动和充足的睡眠； 3. 面对困难学会寻求帮助 ……
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Looking back on the past two years, many students find their school life has changed a lot.
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20．科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业
伤害眼睛，不利健康
网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生
建议 适度使用智能手机
多花时间与家人、朋友交流
……
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
How to live a healthy and happy life To live a healthy and happy life, we should first keep our physical health. We can do regular exercise like running or playing basketball. Then, we should eat less junk food and have more fruits and vegetables.
Also, mental health is important. We need to communicate more with others. When we have problems, talking to friends or family can help us feel better.
Moreover, we mustn’t stay up late. Enough sleep makes us energetic and ready for the next day. By following these tips, we can live a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，围绕保持身体健康展开，先指出要保持身体健康，接着说明可以通过规律运动、少吃垃圾食品、多吃果蔬来实现；
第二步，聚焦心理健康，强调其重要性，提出要多与他人沟通，遇到问题和亲友交流能让自己感觉更好；
第三步，强调不能熬夜，说明充足睡眠的好处，最后总结遵循这些建议就能过上健康快乐的生活。
[亮点词汇]
① do regular exercise 规律运动
② communicate more with others 与他人进行更多交流
③ makes us energetic 让我们充满活力
[高分句型]
① To live a healthy and happy life, we should first keep our physical health.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② When we have problems, talking to friends or family can help us feel better.（时间状语从句）
2．例文：
I’m a middle school student called Li Ming. Among all sports, basketball is my absolute favorite. Every time I hold a basketball, I feel energetic and ready to play.
I love basketball for several reasons. First, it’s full of excitement and challenges. Dribbling, passing, and shooting all require skills and teamwork. Second, playing basketball makes me strong and healthy. It also helps me relieve stress after studying.
Dear classmates, sports are great for us. Let’s put down our phones and play basketball or other sports together. Let’s enjoy the fun and benefits of sports!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“介绍最喜欢的运动、喜欢这项运动的理由以及号召同学们多参加运动”等要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“自我介绍”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“最喜欢的运动、喜欢这项运动的理由”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“号召同学们多参加运动”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②put down 放下
[高分句型]
①Every time I hold a basketball, I feel energetic and ready to play.（every time引导时间状语从句）
3．例文：
As we all know, good health plays the most important role in our life. Physical exercise can not only strengthen our bodies but also help us form good habits.
Two years ago, I was weak and often got sick. To improve my health, I started running every morning. At first, it was really tough. I often felt tired and wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself to stick to it. Gradually, I could run farther and faster.
Now, I’m much healthier and more energetic. Physical exercise has taught me that perseverance leads to success. Let’s civilize our spirit and strengthen our physique through exercise!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文稿件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点围绕体育锻炼的意义、过程及感悟展开，考生应注意结合个人经历，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“健康的重要性”来引出体育锻炼的意义；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“体育锻炼的意义、个人经历的体育锻炼过程（辛苦、挫折、坚持等）”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“体育锻炼带来的感悟，如坚持、勇气等”的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①plays the most important role in 在……中扮演最重要的角色/对……起着最重要的作用
②not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③at first 起初
④want to do sth. 想要做某事
⑤give up 放弃
⑥keep doing sth. 持续做某事
[高分句型]
Physical exercise can not only strengthen our bodies but also help us form good habits.（“not only...but also...”结构）
4．One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I love running. I’m good at it. I run every day and I have kept it for three years.
I used to be weak when I was a pupil. I was taken to the hospital from time to time, which made my parents worry about my health. In order to stay healthy, I made up my mind to run regularly every day. In the beginning, it was quite hard for me. Whenever I wanted to stop, my parents would encourage me not to give up.
Thanks to running, I have become strong. I hardly ever fall ill anymore. This allows me to perform well in my study, which makes me more confident. I’m proud of myself and I’m ready for any challenge in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己跑步的现状、自身的跑步经历、选择跑步的原因以及跑步对自己的影响的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己跑步的现状；
第二步，结合自身的经历，谈谈自己选择跑步的原因；
第三步，谈谈跑步对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①from time to time不时地，不时，有时
②made up one’s mind下定决心
③in the beginning一开始，首先，在初期
④thanks to多亏了，由于
[高分句型]
①I used to be weak when I was a pupil. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I was taken to the hospital from time to time, which made my parents worry about my health. (which引导的定语从句)
③Whenever I wanted to stop, my parents would encourage me not to give up. (Whenever引导时间状语从句)
5．One possible version:
The benefits of taking exercise
With the development of our society, we begin to pay more attention to our health. In order to keep healthy, people choose to take different kinds of exercise, such as running, dancing and so on.
Among all types of exercise, I spend most time in running, because it brings many benefits. Firstly, running can stop me from being ill. Secondly, it also helps me keep thin, so that I will never worry about sickness caused by fatness. Thirdly, I become more confident than before through running, because it enables me to overcome many difficulties.
In a word, exercise is important to everyone. Let’s take regular exercise and make ourselves healthy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，可试当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文的话题，当今运动有很多种类；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容，结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己经常参与的运动项目以及它带来了哪些好处；
第三步：书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of 随着……的发展
②pay more attention to 更加注意
③choose to 选择做某事
④all types of exercise 所有种类的运动
⑤stop me from being ill 防止我生病
⑥enables me to overcome many difficulties 使我能够克服许多困难
[高分句型]
In order to keep healthy, people choose to take different kinds of exercise, such as running, dancing and so on. (in order to do作目的状语)
6．例文
My hero—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is one of the greatest scientists in the world. He was born in Beijing in 1930. When he was young, he dreamed of developing better rice. Later, he went to university. In 1953, he got his degree and started to work. At the beginning of his work, he did more than 3,000 experiments, but all of them failed. However, he didn’t give up. Finally, he successfully developed a new type of rice. He also went abroad to share his experience. Thanks to his hard work, he helped people around the world fight against hunger. Yuan Longping is truly my hero.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：涵盖了袁隆平的出生时间地点、年轻时的梦想、求学工作经历、实验过程及成就等要点，内容完整且有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，即介绍自己心中的英雄袁隆平；
第二步，详细叙述袁隆平的相关经历：先说明他的出生时间地点，接着讲述他年轻时的梦想、上大学、获得学位并开始工作的情况，再描述他做实验的艰难过程以及最终培育出新型水稻、出国分享经验的成就；
第三步，总结强调袁隆平的贡献，表达他是自己心中英雄的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①develop培育
②experiment实验
③fight against与……作斗争
[高分句型]
When he was young, he dreamed of developing better rice. (when引导时间状语从句)
7．例文
The person I admire most is Zheng Qinwen. She is a famous Chinese tennis player who is called “Queen Wen” by her fans worldwide.
Born in Hubei in 2002, Zheng started learning tennis as a child and trained hard throughout her early years. She showed great talent in tennis when she won the first prize in a national U12 juniors competition in 2010. An important step in her career came in 2015, when the brave teenager left home for Europe to pursue better training and face international challenges. Her journey to success was not without hardships. She once overcame a serious wrist injury and suffered a lot. But she managed to go through it. All her efforts paid off when she won the gold medal in the women’s singles at the 2024 Paris Olympics, making the whole nation proud.
What inspires me most is not just her victories, but her spirit of never giving up. She truly deserves the title “Queen Wen” and is a great role model for all young people.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文，是一篇为学校英文杂志专栏撰写的人物传记；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中郑钦文的经历，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明自己最钦佩的人是郑钦文，并简要介绍其身份；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“2002年出生、2010年赢得全国U12青少年比赛一等奖、2015年赴欧洲训练、克服伤病、2024年赢得巴黎奥运会女单金牌”等方面重点介绍郑钦文的网球生涯和成就，突出其奋斗精神和坚韧品质；
第三步，书写结语。表达郑钦文的精神对自己的激励，强调她作为年轻榜样的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth.开始做某事
②show great talent in在……方面展现出巨大天赋
③leave home for离开家去……
④pursue better training追求更好的训练
⑤face international challenges面对国际挑战
[高分句型]
①She is a famous Chinese tennis player who is called “Queen Wen” by her fans worldwide.（定语从句）
②An important step in her career came in 2015, when the brave teenager left home for Europe to pursue better training and face international challenges.（定语从句；动词不定式作目的状语）
8．例文：
My Hero—Andersen
Hans Christian Andersen is one of the most famous fairy tale writers in the world. He was born in April 1805. His family was very poor. At the age of fourteen, he worked in a theater. Later, a warm-hearted man helped him go to school. In 1828, he went to university. After he graduated, he worked hard on writing and became very successful. He wrote more than 160 stories in his life. He died in 1875. I think he is a great man. His stories like “The Ugly Duckling” teach us to be kind and never give up. He is my hero.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍Andersen的基本情况；
第二步，具体阐述Andersen的生平事迹；
第三步，书写结语，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②at the age of在……岁时
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
④more than超出
⑤teach sb to do sth教某人去做某事
⑥give up放弃
[高分句型]
I think he is a great man. (省略that的宾语从句)
9．例文：
Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share our group’s ideas about great minds with you.
Tina thinks Edison is great. He worked really hard, and his inventions like the light bulb have greatly improved people’s lives. Jim admires Shakespeare, the greatest English playwriter, whose works enrich our culture.
As for me, I respect Marie Curie. She was the first woman to win the Nobel Prize and discovered radium, which helped patients in medicine. Her perseverance and intelligence inspire many people.
These great minds teach us that hard work and creativity can change the world.
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：需涵盖表格中所有组员的观点，并补充自己的伟人选择及理由。注意语言简洁，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用给定开头句，表明发言目的；
第二步，分别介绍Tina、Jim和自己的观点；
第三步，总结伟人的共同品质，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① improve people’s lives 改善人类生活
② enrich our culture 丰富文化
③ perseverance and intelligence 毅力与智慧
[高分句型]
Jim admires Shakespeare, the greatest English playwriter, whose works enrich our culture.（定语从句）
10．例文
Marie Curie
Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She is known for her great achievements in science.
She was born in Poland on November 7, 1867. As a child, she loved physics and showed great talent, reading many books on it. At that time, women in Poland weren’t allowed to go to university, so she dreamed of studying in Paris. To save money for university, she worked as a tutor for eight years. In 1891, she went to Sorbonne University in Paris. After two years, she got a physics degree. Later, she earned a math degree and became the first woman teacher there.
She won many awards in her life. Most famously, she received the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911 for discovering polonium and radium.
From Marie Curie, I learned that with hard work and persistence, we can overcome difficulties and achieve great things.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍居里夫人的生平事迹；
第二步，分享自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①allowed to do允许做
②persistence坚持
③overcome difficulties克服困难
[高分句型]
①To save money for university, she worked as a tutor for eight years.（不定式表目的）
②From Marie Curie, I learned that with hard work and persistence, we can overcome difficulties and achieve great things.（宾语从句）
11．例文
Dear Jack，
How is it going My daily life has changed since I came to Xiangyang.
Firstly, I used to chat with my parents and go out for a walk in the park. It was really relaxing. But now, my parents are so busy with work that they hardly have time to spend with me. Secondly, I used to have bread and milk for breakfast, rice and beef for lunch. Now I am used to beef noodles for breakfast. I often have fish, vegetables and fruit for lunch. It is a real big meal, isn’t it In addition, I didn’t like sports in the past. But I am interested in Ping-pong game and square dancing. People sure change.
Next year, I plan to join a Ping-pong club so that I can get professional training.
Yours，
Tim
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信体应用文；
②时态：时态采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”，用于描述过去和现在的情况；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中Tim在加拿大和襄阳生活对比的要点，适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“My daily life has changed since I came to Xiangyang”来引出下文重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“交际、饮食和运动”三个方面，对比在加拿大和襄阳的生活情况，突出Tim来中国后的各种变化；
第三步，书写结语。表达Tim的新年计划，即“计划加入乒乓球俱乐部以接受专业训练”。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②be busy with sth. 忙于某事
③hardly 几乎不
④be used to….习惯于……
[高分句型]
①My daily life has changed since I came to Xiangyang.（since引导时间状语从句）
②But now, my parents are so busy with the work that they hardly have time to spend with me.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
12．例文
My new friend
Andy is my new friend. He is a confident boy who always believes in himself. For example, he never hesitates to answer questions in class. He is also well-organized—his notes are always neat and his schedule is carefully planned.
Andy loves blue because it reminds him of the calm ocean. He also likes green because it represents hope and energy to him. His motto is, “Size doesn’t matter; if you never give up, you can do anything.”
However, Andy has some problems. He is not good at sports and often feels stressed because his parents care too much about his grades. I suggest he practice sports step by step and talk to his parents about his feelings.
Andy is a great friend, and I hope he can overcome his difficulties.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据表格中的要点（性格、喜爱的颜色、座右铭、问题及建议）完成写作，不要遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，介绍新朋友Andy；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍；
第三步，总结评价，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① believe in oneself 相信自己
② well-organized 有条理的
③ step by step 逐步地
④ overcome difficulties 克服困难
[高分句型]
Andy loves blue because it reminds him of the calm ocean.（原因状语从句）
13．例文
My new friend
Time flies, and we are already in Grade 9. In this busy study life, I have made some new friends. One of them is Andy. He is a confident person. For example, he always volunteers to answer questions in class. He is also very organized; for instance, he keeps his notes tidy and plans his study time carefully.
Andy’s favorite colors are blue and green. He likes blue because it makes him feel calm and peaceful. Green is his favorite because it represents hope and nature.
His motto is, “If I never give up, I can do anything.” This saying helps him stay positive.
But sometimes he finds it hard to make quick decisions, and his parents focus too much on his grades, which makes him feel stressed.
I suggest he make simple plans before deciding things. Also, he could talk to his parents about his feelings, so they understand that progress is more important than just scores.
I hope these ideas can help him. Andy is a great friend, and I’m glad to know him.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍新朋友的性格、喜爱的颜色及原因以及他的座右铭；
第二步，介绍新朋友的问题；
第三步，针对Andy的问题，给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①for instance例如
②give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He likes blue because it makes him feel calm and peaceful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②But sometimes he finds it hard to make quick decisions, and his parents focus too much on his grades, which makes him feel stressed.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
14．例文
Simon is my best friend. He is a brave and powerful person, just like a tiger, his animal sign. Green is his favorite colour because it represents nature and makes him energetic.
Simon has many good qualities. First, he is confident and never afraid of giving speeches. Second, he is good at using computers to help him stay organized. Third, he is very hard-working. For example, he always finishes his homework on time and studies late into the night.
However, Simon has some problems now. He has too much homework and often has to stay up late, which leaves him little time for his hobbies. Also, he is a bit overweight. Besides, he finds physics difficult. Here is my advice for him. He should plan his day carefully and choose hobbies that fit his schedule. To stay healthy, he needs to exercise more and eat fewer snacks. For physics, I suggest he asks the teacher or classmates for help more often.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的好朋友以及他面临的问题，并给出自己的建议，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Simon的基本信息；
第二步，介绍他的优秀品质；
第三步，介绍他面临的问题并给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①is good at擅长
②too much homework太多作业
③stay up late熬夜
④ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①Green is his favorite colour because it represents nature and makes him energetic. (because引导原因状语从句)
②He has too much homework and often has to stay up late, which leaves him little time for his hobbies. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
15．例文
Dear principal,
I’d like to recommend my friend as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. Her name is Sandy. She is 15 years old. She likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. I think she has many strong qualities for this position. Sandy is creative. She often comes up with good ideas. She is hard-working, and always does extra work for our class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets the things she needs to do. She loves yellow. She thinks yellow is the colour of wisdom. It can cheer her up when she hopes for success. She also likes blue because it brings peace to her mind and body.
I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Daniel
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“被推荐人的基本信息和爱好”、“被推荐人的三个良好的品质”以及“被推荐人喜欢的颜色及原因”展开，适当补充，丰富细节；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②comes up with提出
③cheer sb up使某人高兴起来
[高分句型]
①She likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I think she has many strong qualities for this position. (省略that的宾语从句)
③She never forgets the things she needs to do. (定语从句)
16．例文
I think we can read on mobile phones. We can carry mobile phones in our pockets. It is really convenient. Anywhere and anytime we can read the electronic books. For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.
I like to read on mobile phones. There are different kinds of books online which we can read. Last month, I bought an electronic book about Chinese history. It only cost me five yuan. The electronic books are cheap. By reading different books, I can learn a lot and open my eyes to the outside world.
But we need to control our time reasonably and have proper rest. At the same time, we should read healthy content.
In a word, I think reading on mobile phones is convenient and good for me.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为校刊英语专栏投稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括对是否应该使用手机进行阅读的看法、原因、给同学们的建议以及更多个人观点，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我认为我们可以在手机上阅读”引出下文，并阐述其便利性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“手机阅读的便利性、在线书籍的多样性及价格优势”两个方面阐述原因，同时给出“控制时间、合理休息以及阅读健康内容”的建议；
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，再次强调手机阅读的便利性及其带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient 方便的
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③open one’s eyes to... 使某人开阔眼界
④at the same time 同时
⑤in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.（when引导时间状语从句）
②There are different kinds of books online which we can read.（which引导定语从句）
17．例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school.
You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates. Joining school clubs can be a great way to meet more people. Moreover, try to take an active part in class discussions and group activities. This will help you bond with your classmates. You also find it challenging to learn Chinese and you are unfamiliar with Chinese culture. Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章需涵盖所有要点，即Ben面临的问题、针对问题的建议及理由，同时需适当补充内容，使文章更加充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出，直接进入主题，即描述Ben提到的问题。
第二步，针对Ben提到的“朋友少，跟同学相处不好，感觉孤单”的问题，提出参加学校社团和积极参与课堂讨论及小组活动的建议；针对“中文难学，不了解中国文化”的问题，提出多阅读中文故事、新闻以及观看中文电影和电视节目的建议。
第三步，最后表达希望自己的建议能够对Ben有所帮助的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth 做某事有困难
②get used to 习惯于
③take an active part in 积极参加
④help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
⑤be unfamiliar with 对……不熟悉
[高分句型]
①You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates.（because of 后接动名词短语作原因状语）
②Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.（动名词短语作介词besides的宾语）
18．例文
It is common that many teenagers now often lose themselves in playing with e-products such as computer and phone games. Such products truly do harm to normal lives and study of those who are often lost in them.
My friend, Mike, was once so interested in playing phone games every day that he seldom had time and energy for study. He got bad grades and he was even weaker than before.
Let’s get away from e-products and lead a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇投稿文章，主题是关于学校禁止电子产品进校园的规定，倡导大家合理使用电子产品；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“许多青少年沉迷于电子产品”的现象来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“青少年带电子产品进校园的危害和关于青少年使用电子产品的建议”两个方面重点介绍情况；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家合理使用电子产品。
[亮点词汇]
①lose oneself in 沉迷于
②do harm to 对……有害
③be interested in 对……感兴趣
④seldom 很少
[高分句型]
①Such products truly do harm to normal lives and study of those who are often lost in them. (定语从句“who are often lost in them”修饰先行词“those”)
②My friend, Mike, was once so interested in playing phone games every day that he seldom had time and energy for study. (“so...that...”句型，表示“如此……以至于……”)
19．例文
Looking back on the past two years, many students find their school life has changed a lot.
We have more homework and less time to rest. We can’t develop our hobbies and some students can’t sleep well because of the exam pressure.
Here is some advice for Grade 9 students. I think we should plan our time carefully. It is also a good idea to do sports every day and sleep for at least eight hours. When we meet problems, ask teachers, parents or friends for help.
Grade 9 is hard, but it makes us stronger. Let’s face it with a smile!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题；
第二步：介绍初三学习生活的变化；
第三步：介绍你对初三学习生活的看法和建议；
第四步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②do sports做运动
③at least至少
[高分句型]
①I think we should plan our time carefully. (宾语从句)
②When we meet problems, ask teachers, parents or friends for help. (when引导的时间状语从句)
20．例文
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people.
Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life!
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害；
第二步，提出远离手机的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②as a result结果
③switch off关闭
[高分句型]
①As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②Switch them off when we study. (祈使句，when引导的时间状语从句)
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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点培优沪教牛津版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“How to live a healthy and happy life （如何过健康快乐的生活）”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容要点：①保持身体健康。
②少吃垃圾食品。
③加强与他人的沟通，注意心理健康。
④不要熬夜。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；（2）照抄试卷内容不得分。
Word bank：physical health身体健康 mental health心理健康
How to live a healthy and happy life
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2．假设你是一名叫李明的中学生，你很热爱运动并擅长运动。请你用英语写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 介绍你最喜欢的一种运动；
2. 说说你喜欢这项运动的理由 (可从这项运动的特点和自己的感受来写)；
3. 号召同学们多参加运动。
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、人名等信息；
2. 语句连贯，80 词左右。
I’m a middle school student called Li Ming.
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3．习主席在谈到青少年体质时说，要文明其精神，野蛮其体魄 (Civilize our spirit and strengthen our physique)。中考体考旨在促进学生体育锻炼，提高身体素质，建立健康意识，培养健全人格。作为九年级学生，你已经经历了两年的体育锻炼。现在学校校报英语栏目向大家发起征文，内容是在体育锻炼中的拼搏故事。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：(1) 体育锻炼 (physical exercise) 的意义 (强身健体、培养习惯……)；
(2) 体育锻炼的过程 (辛苦、挫折、坚持……)；
(3) 关于体育锻炼的感悟。
注意：(1) 词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文章中不能出现你的真实姓名及学校名称。
As we all know, good health plays the most important role in our life.
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4．假如你是李明，你校将举办以“Enjoy sports, enjoy life”为主题的演讲活动。请根据下图提示，写一篇英语发言稿，内容包括：
1．介绍你跑步的现状；
2．结合自身的经历，谈谈选择跑步的原因；
3．谈谈跑步对自己的影响。
注意：
1．文章须包含图中所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2．词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I love running.
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5．现今越来越多的人开始参加各种体育锻炼，有的跳广场舞，有的练瑜伽，有的甚至报名参加马拉松比赛。请根据提示，以“The benefits (好处) of taking exercise”为题，用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享你经常参加的运动项目。
提示：
l. What kind of activities do you often take part in
2. What benefits does it bring to you
注意：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100 词左右。
The benefits of taking exercise
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6．袁隆平是世界上最伟大的科学家之一，他帮助世界人民战胜了饥饿。请根据以下汉语提示以My hero—Yuan Longping为题目来介绍一下心目中的英雄。
1930年 出生于北京
年轻时 梦想培育更优良的水稻
后来 上大学
1953年 获得学位，开始工作
工作初始 做过3000多次实验，都失败了
最后 培育了新型的水稻，出国分享经验
要求：1. 词数100左右。
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥。
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7．郑钦文是我国杰出的新生代网球健将，她凭借球场上奋斗的精神和坚韧的品质收获了国内外众多粉丝，粉丝们都称她为“Queen Wen”。假设你要给学校英文杂志The Person I Admire专栏投稿，请你根据下面的信息，写一篇介绍郑钦文的文章。
要求：1. 短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，并做适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3. 词数100词左右
2024 win the gold medal of tennis singles at 2024 Paris Olympics 2023 overcome a wrist injury (受伤); return to the court 2015 go to Europe for further training and international competitions 2010 win the first prize in U12 Juniors in China 2000s begin learning to play tennis; train hard 2002 be born in Hubei
The person I admire most is Zheng Qinwen.
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8．请你根据以下内容提示，以“My Hero—Andersen”为题，介绍这位世界著名童话作家。
(1) 生于1805年4月；
(2) 家庭贫穷，十四岁到一家剧院工作，后来在一位热心人的帮助下上了学；
(3) 1828年上大学，毕业后努力创作，获得巨大成功；
(4) 一生创作了160多个故事，1875年去世。
(5) 你觉得……
参考词汇：热心的 warm-hearted 毕业 graduate
要求：
(1) 词数：80~100个。
(2) 短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
My Hero—Andersen
Hans Christian Andersen is one of the most famous fairy tale writers in the world.
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9．假如你们的外教David布置了一次小组演讲任务，话题是“The Great Minds” ，以下表格是你们小组的讨论结果，请你根据表格内容，用英语写一篇发言稿。
组员 心目中的伟人 原因
Tina 爱迪生（Edison） 刻苦努力 他的发明改善人类生活
Jim 莎士比亚（Shakespeare） 英国最伟大的戏剧家（playwriter） 他的作品丰富人们的生活
你 ？（请你补充） ？（请你补充至少两点）
要求：
1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息：
3.词数： 80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入词数）
Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share our group’s ideas about great minds with you.
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10．假如你校英语俱乐部准备举办一场以介绍名人为主题的墙报展，请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇英语短文介绍科学家居里夫人。
出生地：波兰
出生日期：1867年11月7日
经历：（1）从小就对物理感兴趣，展现出超凡天赋，读了很多这方面的书籍；
（2）当时波兰不允许女子入大学，于是萌发去法国巴黎求学的梦想。为筹措去上大学的学费，她做了8年家庭教师；
（3）1891年赴巴黎Sorbonne University求学两年后获得物理学位，后来又获得数学学位，并成为那里的第一位女讲师。
成就：一生获得很多奖项，最为人所知的是分别于1903年和1911年获得了诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖（发现钋和镭两种元素）。
感悟：从居里夫人身上你学到了什么？
注意：
（1）参考词汇：波兰Poland 家庭教师tutor 学位degree 物理physics
化学chemistry 诺贝尔奖the Nobel Prize 钋polonium 镭radium
（2）词数80-100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
（3）不得透露姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Marie Curie
Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She is known for her great achievements in science.
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11．Tim两年前随父母来到了湖北襄阳，他想给加拿大朋友Jack写信讲述他来中国后的各种变化，并告知他们自己的新年计划。请你根据表格内容，代替Tim完成这封信。
In Canada In Xiangyang
communication 交际 chat with, walk in the park Parents are busy with work; no time with me;
dietary 饮食 breakfast: bread and milk; lunch: rice and beef breakfast: beef noodles; lunch: fish, vegetables
sports Don’t like sports Be interested in Ping-pong
New year’s plan…
要求：
(1) 所写内容必须包含所提供的要点，可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、班名及地名;
(3) 词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear Jack，
How is it going
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Yours，
Tim
12．时间飞逝，同学们已经进入九年级。在紧张的学习生活中，你一定结识了一些新朋友。请根据下面要点，以“My new friend”为题，介绍你的新朋友Andy。
性格 自信，……（举例）；有条理，……（举例）；
喜爱的颜色 蓝色，……（原因）；绿色，……（原因）；
座右铭 (Motto) 体型大小并不重要；如果永不言弃，可以做任何事情。
问题 不擅长体育，……；父母太在意分数、压力过大；
你的建议 ……（针对Andy的问题，提出一至两条建议）
1. 包含所有给出的提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 省略号部分需作适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My new friend
Andy is my new friend. _______________________________________________________
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13．时间飞逝，同学们已经进入九年级。在紧张的学习生活中，你一定结识了一些新朋友。请根据下面要点，以“My new friend”为题，介绍你的新朋友Andy。
性格 自信，……（举例）；有条理，……（举例）；
喜爱的颜色 蓝色，……（原因）；绿色，……（原因）；
座右铭 如果永不言弃，可以做任何事情。
问题 有时难以做出决定，……；父母过多关注分数、觉得有点压力；
你的建议 ……（针对Andy的问题，提出一至两条建议）
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14．成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途也有美丽的风景，每一次困惑与进步都是这场旅途中的回忆。回首这一个月的初三时光，你的好朋友Simon有一些困惑，请根据表格内容，对Simon进行介绍并根据相应的问题给出你的建议。
Name Simon
Animal sign 虎，勇敢，强大、有力
Favorite colour 绿色，自然的颜色，让人精力充沛，……
Qualities 1、自信，不怕在别人面前作演讲 2、擅长使用电脑让自己更有组织能力 3、勤奋，……(举例)
Problems 1、太多家庭作业，不得不熬夜，梦想更多时间为了爱好 2、超重，…… 3、学习物理有困难，……
Advice 仔细计划好每天，根据时间选择爱好，多运动，少吃零食，……
要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数100左右，短文开头已经写好，不计总词数。
Simon is my best friend
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15．假如你是Daniel，你们学校正在招聘新的学生会主席，请你阅读以下招聘公告，并根据内容给校长写一封信，推荐你的好友Sandy。
Dear classmates,
We are looking for a chairperson of our Students’ Union. We want to know:
1. Who you’d like to recommend (name, age, hobbies);
2. What good qualities he/she has for this position (please give us three of his/her good qualities and examples);
3. Which two colours he/she likes best and tell us the reasons.
Please write to us at Sunshineschool@. We are expecting your reply!
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
Dear principal,
I’d like to recommend my friend as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.
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I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Daniel
16．你经常用手机阅读吗？有人认为用手机阅读方便且花费少；也有人认为用手机阅读对眼睛有害，并且容易使人沉迷其中。校刊英语专栏正在以“是否应该使用手机进行阅读 ”为主题开展征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
Do you think we should read on mobile phones
What are your reasons
What advice would you like to give your classmates
Something more about your opinion
注意：文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；词数100左右。注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息：词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I think we can read on mobile phones. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到交换生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
要求：
Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons
朋友少，跟同学相处不好， 感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团——认识更多朋友
2. ？(补充)
中文难学，不了解中国文化 1. 多阅读中文故事、新闻——在运用中学习中文
2. ？(补充)
1. 回信应包括所有要点；
2. 词数在80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
18．你学校的英文网站举办了一次征稿活动，主题是关于你校禁止电子产品（electronic product）进校园的规定。请你写一篇英文稿件进行投稿，倡导大家合理使用电子产品。内容包括：
(1) 青少年带电子产品进校园的危害（至少2点）。
(2) 关于青少年使用电子产品的建议（至少3点）。
(3) 呼吁大家合理使用电子产品。
作文要求：
(1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名，语句连贯，词数80左右。
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19．时光飞逝，初三的学习生活已经过半，面对高强度的学习压力和即将来临的中考升学，有些同学感到焦虑，根据下面的提示和你周围同学的情况，请你用英语写一篇短文提供一些合理化的建议。
初三学习生活的变化 你对初三学习生活的看法和建议
1. 学科作业增多； 2. 没有时间休息； 3. 不能很好地发展自己的兴趣爱好； 4. 升学的压力让一些同学睡不好觉； …… 初三是我们成长的关键时期，经历了初三的学习生活能让我们更好面对未来的挑战，建议同学们要： 1. 合理地安排学习生活； 2. 适当的体育运动和充足的睡眠； 3. 面对困难学会寻求帮助 ……
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Looking back on the past two years, many students find their school life has changed a lot.
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20．科技发展日新月异，越来越多的学生沉迷于智能手机 (smartphones)，针对这一现象，你所在的学校将组织开展“拒绝手机诱惑，健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示词语用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
危害 花大量时间上网玩游戏、看视频，上课睡觉，不专心听讲，不按时完成作业
伤害眼睛，不利健康
网上的虚假和不良信息，可能会误导学生
建议 适度使用智能手机
多花时间与家人、朋友交流
……
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
How to live a healthy and happy life To live a healthy and happy life, we should first keep our physical health. We can do regular exercise like running or playing basketball. Then, we should eat less junk food and have more fruits and vegetables.
Also, mental health is important. We need to communicate more with others. When we have problems, talking to friends or family can help us feel better.
Moreover, we mustn’t stay up late. Enough sleep makes us energetic and ready for the next day. By following these tips, we can live a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，围绕保持身体健康展开，先指出要保持身体健康，接着说明可以通过规律运动、少吃垃圾食品、多吃果蔬来实现；
第二步，聚焦心理健康，强调其重要性，提出要多与他人沟通，遇到问题和亲友交流能让自己感觉更好；
第三步，强调不能熬夜，说明充足睡眠的好处，最后总结遵循这些建议就能过上健康快乐的生活。
[亮点词汇]
① do regular exercise 规律运动
② communicate more with others 与他人进行更多交流
③ makes us energetic 让我们充满活力
[高分句型]
① To live a healthy and happy life, we should first keep our physical health.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② When we have problems, talking to friends or family can help us feel better.（时间状语从句）
2．例文：
I’m a middle school student called Li Ming. Among all sports, basketball is my absolute favorite. Every time I hold a basketball, I feel energetic and ready to play.
I love basketball for several reasons. First, it’s full of excitement and challenges. Dribbling, passing, and shooting all require skills and teamwork. Second, playing basketball makes me strong and healthy. It also helps me relieve stress after studying.
Dear classmates, sports are great for us. Let’s put down our phones and play basketball or other sports together. Let’s enjoy the fun and benefits of sports!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“介绍最喜欢的运动、喜欢这项运动的理由以及号召同学们多参加运动”等要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“自我介绍”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“最喜欢的运动、喜欢这项运动的理由”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“号召同学们多参加运动”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②put down 放下
[高分句型]
①Every time I hold a basketball, I feel energetic and ready to play.（every time引导时间状语从句）
3．例文：
As we all know, good health plays the most important role in our life. Physical exercise can not only strengthen our bodies but also help us form good habits.
Two years ago, I was weak and often got sick. To improve my health, I started running every morning. At first, it was really tough. I often felt tired and wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself to stick to it. Gradually, I could run farther and faster.
Now, I’m much healthier and more energetic. Physical exercise has taught me that perseverance leads to success. Let’s civilize our spirit and strengthen our physique through exercise!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文稿件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点围绕体育锻炼的意义、过程及感悟展开，考生应注意结合个人经历，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“健康的重要性”来引出体育锻炼的意义；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“体育锻炼的意义、个人经历的体育锻炼过程（辛苦、挫折、坚持等）”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“体育锻炼带来的感悟，如坚持、勇气等”的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①plays the most important role in 在……中扮演最重要的角色/对……起着最重要的作用
②not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③at first 起初
④want to do sth. 想要做某事
⑤give up 放弃
⑥keep doing sth. 持续做某事
[高分句型]
Physical exercise can not only strengthen our bodies but also help us form good habits.（“not only...but also...”结构）
4．One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I love running. I’m good at it. I run every day and I have kept it for three years.
I used to be weak when I was a pupil. I was taken to the hospital from time to time, which made my parents worry about my health. In order to stay healthy, I made up my mind to run regularly every day. In the beginning, it was quite hard for me. Whenever I wanted to stop, my parents would encourage me not to give up.
Thanks to running, I have become strong. I hardly ever fall ill anymore. This allows me to perform well in my study, which makes me more confident. I’m proud of myself and I’m ready for any challenge in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己跑步的现状、自身的跑步经历、选择跑步的原因以及跑步对自己的影响的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己跑步的现状；
第二步，结合自身的经历，谈谈自己选择跑步的原因；
第三步，谈谈跑步对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①from time to time不时地，不时，有时
②made up one’s mind下定决心
③in the beginning一开始，首先，在初期
④thanks to多亏了，由于
[高分句型]
①I used to be weak when I was a pupil. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I was taken to the hospital from time to time, which made my parents worry about my health. (which引导的定语从句)
③Whenever I wanted to stop, my parents would encourage me not to give up. (Whenever引导时间状语从句)
5．One possible version:
The benefits of taking exercise
With the development of our society, we begin to pay more attention to our health. In order to keep healthy, people choose to take different kinds of exercise, such as running, dancing and so on.
Among all types of exercise, I spend most time in running, because it brings many benefits. Firstly, running can stop me from being ill. Secondly, it also helps me keep thin, so that I will never worry about sickness caused by fatness. Thirdly, I become more confident than before through running, because it enables me to overcome many difficulties.
In a word, exercise is important to everyone. Let’s take regular exercise and make ourselves healthy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，可试当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文的话题，当今运动有很多种类；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容，结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己经常参与的运动项目以及它带来了哪些好处；
第三步：书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of 随着……的发展
②pay more attention to 更加注意
③choose to 选择做某事
④all types of exercise 所有种类的运动
⑤stop me from being ill 防止我生病
⑥enables me to overcome many difficulties 使我能够克服许多困难
[高分句型]
In order to keep healthy, people choose to take different kinds of exercise, such as running, dancing and so on. (in order to do作目的状语)
6．例文
My hero—Yuan Longping Yuan Longping is one of the greatest scientists in the world. He was born in Beijing in 1930. When he was young, he dreamed of developing better rice. Later, he went to university. In 1953, he got his degree and started to work. At the beginning of his work, he did more than 3,000 experiments, but all of them failed. However, he didn’t give up. Finally, he successfully developed a new type of rice. He also went abroad to share his experience. Thanks to his hard work, he helped people around the world fight against hunger. Yuan Longping is truly my hero.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：涵盖了袁隆平的出生时间地点、年轻时的梦想、求学工作经历、实验过程及成就等要点，内容完整且有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，即介绍自己心中的英雄袁隆平；
第二步，详细叙述袁隆平的相关经历：先说明他的出生时间地点，接着讲述他年轻时的梦想、上大学、获得学位并开始工作的情况，再描述他做实验的艰难过程以及最终培育出新型水稻、出国分享经验的成就；
第三步，总结强调袁隆平的贡献，表达他是自己心中英雄的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①develop培育
②experiment实验
③fight against与……作斗争
[高分句型]
When he was young, he dreamed of developing better rice. (when引导时间状语从句)
7．例文
The person I admire most is Zheng Qinwen. She is a famous Chinese tennis player who is called “Queen Wen” by her fans worldwide.
Born in Hubei in 2002, Zheng started learning tennis as a child and trained hard throughout her early years. She showed great talent in tennis when she won the first prize in a national U12 juniors competition in 2010. An important step in her career came in 2015, when the brave teenager left home for Europe to pursue better training and face international challenges. Her journey to success was not without hardships. She once overcame a serious wrist injury and suffered a lot. But she managed to go through it. All her efforts paid off when she won the gold medal in the women’s singles at the 2024 Paris Olympics, making the whole nation proud.
What inspires me most is not just her victories, but her spirit of never giving up. She truly deserves the title “Queen Wen” and is a great role model for all young people.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文，是一篇为学校英文杂志专栏撰写的人物传记；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中郑钦文的经历，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明自己最钦佩的人是郑钦文，并简要介绍其身份；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“2002年出生、2010年赢得全国U12青少年比赛一等奖、2015年赴欧洲训练、克服伤病、2024年赢得巴黎奥运会女单金牌”等方面重点介绍郑钦文的网球生涯和成就，突出其奋斗精神和坚韧品质；
第三步，书写结语。表达郑钦文的精神对自己的激励，强调她作为年轻榜样的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①start doing sth.开始做某事
②show great talent in在……方面展现出巨大天赋
③leave home for离开家去……
④pursue better training追求更好的训练
⑤face international challenges面对国际挑战
[高分句型]
①She is a famous Chinese tennis player who is called “Queen Wen” by her fans worldwide.（定语从句）
②An important step in her career came in 2015, when the brave teenager left home for Europe to pursue better training and face international challenges.（定语从句；动词不定式作目的状语）
8．例文：
My Hero—Andersen
Hans Christian Andersen is one of the most famous fairy tale writers in the world. He was born in April 1805. His family was very poor. At the age of fourteen, he worked in a theater. Later, a warm-hearted man helped him go to school. In 1828, he went to university. After he graduated, he worked hard on writing and became very successful. He wrote more than 160 stories in his life. He died in 1875. I think he is a great man. His stories like “The Ugly Duckling” teach us to be kind and never give up. He is my hero.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍Andersen的基本情况；
第二步，具体阐述Andersen的生平事迹；
第三步，书写结语，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②at the age of在……岁时
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
④more than超出
⑤teach sb to do sth教某人去做某事
⑥give up放弃
[高分句型]
I think he is a great man. (省略that的宾语从句)
9．例文：
Dear fellow students,
I’m honored to share our group’s ideas about great minds with you.
Tina thinks Edison is great. He worked really hard, and his inventions like the light bulb have greatly improved people’s lives. Jim admires Shakespeare, the greatest English playwriter, whose works enrich our culture.
As for me, I respect Marie Curie. She was the first woman to win the Nobel Prize and discovered radium, which helped patients in medicine. Her perseverance and intelligence inspire many people.
These great minds teach us that hard work and creativity can change the world.
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：需涵盖表格中所有组员的观点，并补充自己的伟人选择及理由。注意语言简洁，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用给定开头句，表明发言目的；
第二步，分别介绍Tina、Jim和自己的观点；
第三步，总结伟人的共同品质，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① improve people’s lives 改善人类生活
② enrich our culture 丰富文化
③ perseverance and intelligence 毅力与智慧
[高分句型]
Jim admires Shakespeare, the greatest English playwriter, whose works enrich our culture.（定语从句）
10．例文
Marie Curie
Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She is known for her great achievements in science.
She was born in Poland on November 7, 1867. As a child, she loved physics and showed great talent, reading many books on it. At that time, women in Poland weren’t allowed to go to university, so she dreamed of studying in Paris. To save money for university, she worked as a tutor for eight years. In 1891, she went to Sorbonne University in Paris. After two years, she got a physics degree. Later, she earned a math degree and became the first woman teacher there.
She won many awards in her life. Most famously, she received the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903 and the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1911 for discovering polonium and radium.
From Marie Curie, I learned that with hard work and persistence, we can overcome difficulties and achieve great things.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍居里夫人的生平事迹；
第二步，分享自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①allowed to do允许做
②persistence坚持
③overcome difficulties克服困难
[高分句型]
①To save money for university, she worked as a tutor for eight years.（不定式表目的）
②From Marie Curie, I learned that with hard work and persistence, we can overcome difficulties and achieve great things.（宾语从句）
11．例文
Dear Jack，
How is it going My daily life has changed since I came to Xiangyang.
Firstly, I used to chat with my parents and go out for a walk in the park. It was really relaxing. But now, my parents are so busy with work that they hardly have time to spend with me. Secondly, I used to have bread and milk for breakfast, rice and beef for lunch. Now I am used to beef noodles for breakfast. I often have fish, vegetables and fruit for lunch. It is a real big meal, isn’t it In addition, I didn’t like sports in the past. But I am interested in Ping-pong game and square dancing. People sure change.
Next year, I plan to join a Ping-pong club so that I can get professional training.
Yours，
Tim
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信体应用文；
②时态：时态采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”，用于描述过去和现在的情况；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中Tim在加拿大和襄阳生活对比的要点，适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过“My daily life has changed since I came to Xiangyang”来引出下文重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“交际、饮食和运动”三个方面，对比在加拿大和襄阳的生活情况，突出Tim来中国后的各种变化；
第三步，书写结语。表达Tim的新年计划，即“计划加入乒乓球俱乐部以接受专业训练”。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
②be busy with sth. 忙于某事
③hardly 几乎不
④be used to….习惯于……
[高分句型]
①My daily life has changed since I came to Xiangyang.（since引导时间状语从句）
②But now, my parents are so busy with the work that they hardly have time to spend with me.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
12．例文
My new friend
Andy is my new friend. He is a confident boy who always believes in himself. For example, he never hesitates to answer questions in class. He is also well-organized—his notes are always neat and his schedule is carefully planned.
Andy loves blue because it reminds him of the calm ocean. He also likes green because it represents hope and energy to him. His motto is, “Size doesn’t matter; if you never give up, you can do anything.”
However, Andy has some problems. He is not good at sports and often feels stressed because his parents care too much about his grades. I suggest he practice sports step by step and talk to his parents about his feelings.
Andy is a great friend, and I hope he can overcome his difficulties.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据表格中的要点（性格、喜爱的颜色、座右铭、问题及建议）完成写作，不要遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，介绍新朋友Andy；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍；
第三步，总结评价，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① believe in oneself 相信自己
② well-organized 有条理的
③ step by step 逐步地
④ overcome difficulties 克服困难
[高分句型]
Andy loves blue because it reminds him of the calm ocean.（原因状语从句）
13．例文
My new friend
Time flies, and we are already in Grade 9. In this busy study life, I have made some new friends. One of them is Andy. He is a confident person. For example, he always volunteers to answer questions in class. He is also very organized; for instance, he keeps his notes tidy and plans his study time carefully.
Andy’s favorite colors are blue and green. He likes blue because it makes him feel calm and peaceful. Green is his favorite because it represents hope and nature.
His motto is, “If I never give up, I can do anything.” This saying helps him stay positive.
But sometimes he finds it hard to make quick decisions, and his parents focus too much on his grades, which makes him feel stressed.
I suggest he make simple plans before deciding things. Also, he could talk to his parents about his feelings, so they understand that progress is more important than just scores.
I hope these ideas can help him. Andy is a great friend, and I’m glad to know him.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍新朋友的性格、喜爱的颜色及原因以及他的座右铭；
第二步，介绍新朋友的问题；
第三步，针对Andy的问题，给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①for instance例如
②give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He likes blue because it makes him feel calm and peaceful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②But sometimes he finds it hard to make quick decisions, and his parents focus too much on his grades, which makes him feel stressed.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
14．例文
Simon is my best friend. He is a brave and powerful person, just like a tiger, his animal sign. Green is his favorite colour because it represents nature and makes him energetic.
Simon has many good qualities. First, he is confident and never afraid of giving speeches. Second, he is good at using computers to help him stay organized. Third, he is very hard-working. For example, he always finishes his homework on time and studies late into the night.
However, Simon has some problems now. He has too much homework and often has to stay up late, which leaves him little time for his hobbies. Also, he is a bit overweight. Besides, he finds physics difficult. Here is my advice for him. He should plan his day carefully and choose hobbies that fit his schedule. To stay healthy, he needs to exercise more and eat fewer snacks. For physics, I suggest he asks the teacher or classmates for help more often.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的好朋友以及他面临的问题，并给出自己的建议，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Simon的基本信息；
第二步，介绍他的优秀品质；
第三步，介绍他面临的问题并给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①is good at擅长
②too much homework太多作业
③stay up late熬夜
④ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①Green is his favorite colour because it represents nature and makes him energetic. (because引导原因状语从句)
②He has too much homework and often has to stay up late, which leaves him little time for his hobbies. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
15．例文
Dear principal,
I’d like to recommend my friend as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. Her name is Sandy. She is 15 years old. She likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. I think she has many strong qualities for this position. Sandy is creative. She often comes up with good ideas. She is hard-working, and always does extra work for our class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets the things she needs to do. She loves yellow. She thinks yellow is the colour of wisdom. It can cheer her up when she hopes for success. She also likes blue because it brings peace to her mind and body.
I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Daniel
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“被推荐人的基本信息和爱好”、“被推荐人的三个良好的品质”以及“被推荐人喜欢的颜色及原因”展开，适当补充，丰富细节；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②comes up with提出
③cheer sb up使某人高兴起来
[高分句型]
①She likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I think she has many strong qualities for this position. (省略that的宾语从句)
③She never forgets the things she needs to do. (定语从句)
16．例文
I think we can read on mobile phones. We can carry mobile phones in our pockets. It is really convenient. Anywhere and anytime we can read the electronic books. For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.
I like to read on mobile phones. There are different kinds of books online which we can read. Last month, I bought an electronic book about Chinese history. It only cost me five yuan. The electronic books are cheap. By reading different books, I can learn a lot and open my eyes to the outside world.
But we need to control our time reasonably and have proper rest. At the same time, we should read healthy content.
In a word, I think reading on mobile phones is convenient and good for me.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为校刊英语专栏投稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括对是否应该使用手机进行阅读的看法、原因、给同学们的建议以及更多个人观点，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我认为我们可以在手机上阅读”引出下文，并阐述其便利性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“手机阅读的便利性、在线书籍的多样性及价格优势”两个方面阐述原因，同时给出“控制时间、合理休息以及阅读健康内容”的建议；
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，再次强调手机阅读的便利性及其带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient 方便的
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③open one’s eyes to... 使某人开阔眼界
④at the same time 同时
⑤in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①For example, I can read them when I take a bus to school or home even before I go to bed.（when引导时间状语从句）
②There are different kinds of books online which we can read.（which引导定语从句）
17．例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle school.
You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates. Joining school clubs can be a great way to meet more people. Moreover, try to take an active part in class discussions and group activities. This will help you bond with your classmates. You also find it challenging to learn Chinese and you are unfamiliar with Chinese culture. Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章需涵盖所有要点，即Ben面临的问题、针对问题的建议及理由，同时需适当补充内容，使文章更加充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出，直接进入主题，即描述Ben提到的问题。
第二步，针对Ben提到的“朋友少，跟同学相处不好，感觉孤单”的问题，提出参加学校社团和积极参与课堂讨论及小组活动的建议；针对“中文难学，不了解中国文化”的问题，提出多阅读中文故事、新闻以及观看中文电影和电视节目的建议。
第三步，最后表达希望自己的建议能够对Ben有所帮助的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth 做某事有困难
②get used to 习惯于
③take an active part in 积极参加
④help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
⑤be unfamiliar with 对……不熟悉
[高分句型]
①You mentioned feeling lonely because of having few friends and difficulties with classmates.（because of 后接动名词短语作原因状语）
②Besides reading Chinese stories and news, watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand the culture better.（动名词短语作介词besides的宾语）
18．例文
It is common that many teenagers now often lose themselves in playing with e-products such as computer and phone games. Such products truly do harm to normal lives and study of those who are often lost in them.
My friend, Mike, was once so interested in playing phone games every day that he seldom had time and energy for study. He got bad grades and he was even weaker than before.
Let’s get away from e-products and lead a healthy and happy life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇投稿文章，主题是关于学校禁止电子产品进校园的规定，倡导大家合理使用电子产品；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“许多青少年沉迷于电子产品”的现象来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“青少年带电子产品进校园的危害和关于青少年使用电子产品的建议”两个方面重点介绍情况；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家合理使用电子产品。
[亮点词汇]
①lose oneself in 沉迷于
②do harm to 对……有害
③be interested in 对……感兴趣
④seldom 很少
[高分句型]
①Such products truly do harm to normal lives and study of those who are often lost in them. (定语从句“who are often lost in them”修饰先行词“those”)
②My friend, Mike, was once so interested in playing phone games every day that he seldom had time and energy for study. (“so...that...”句型，表示“如此……以至于……”)
19．例文
Looking back on the past two years, many students find their school life has changed a lot.
We have more homework and less time to rest. We can’t develop our hobbies and some students can’t sleep well because of the exam pressure.
Here is some advice for Grade 9 students. I think we should plan our time carefully. It is also a good idea to do sports every day and sleep for at least eight hours. When we meet problems, ask teachers, parents or friends for help.
Grade 9 is hard, but it makes us stronger. Let’s face it with a smile!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出话题；
第二步：介绍初三学习生活的变化；
第三步：介绍你对初三学习生活的看法和建议；
第四步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②do sports做运动
③at least至少
[高分句型]
①I think we should plan our time carefully. (宾语从句)
②When we meet problems, ask teachers, parents or friends for help. (when引导的时间状语从句)
20．例文
Boys and girls,
With the development of the Internet, more and more students have smartphones. Many students spend a lot of time playing games and watching videos. As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. Some students don’t finish their homework on time because of smartphones. Playing on the smartphone for a long time is very bad for our eyes and health. Some false and bad information online may mislead young people.
Let’s use our phones properly. Switch them off when we study. Spend more time talking with parents, friends and teachers. Read books, play sports and enjoy the real world. Say “No” to phone addiction and live a healthy school life!
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明手机给我们带来的危害；
第二步，提出远离手机的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
②as a result结果
③switch off关闭
[高分句型]
①As a result, they are so sleepy in class that they can’t listen to the teachers carefully at all. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②Switch them off when we study. (祈使句，when引导的时间状语从句)
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