人教版高中英语必修一Unit 1 读写课教案——建议信
课型:Reading for Writing
课时:2课时(80min)
课题:BOOK 1 UNIT 1 Write a Letter of Advice
一、 教学目标
语言能力:学生能够掌握建议信的标准格式与核心结构,并正确运用提建议的相关功能句型完成书面表达。 思维品质:通过分析范文、提出建议,培养学生逻辑清晰、有理有据地分析并解决实际问题的批判性思维能力。 学习能力:引导学生通过小组合作、同伴互评等方式,提升自主探究和合作学习的能力。 文化意识:培养学生关心他人、乐于提供帮助的合作精神,并学会理性应对成长中的烦恼。
二、 教学重难点
教学重点:掌握建议信的完整写作框架(格式与逻辑),并积累运用提建议的核心表达法。 教学难点:引导学生针对具体问题提出合理、有效且理由充分的建议,并组织成文。
三、 教学准备
多媒体课件、学生活动工作纸、范文海报或投影。
四、 教学过程
(一)Lead-in 自由讨论 “What kinds of problems have you met during your teenage life ” Reading Read for information What is Worried Friend’s problem What suggestions does Susan Luo give Read for structure What are necessary parts of a letter Date, Greeting, Body, Close, Signature How is body part organized 段落1:表达理解:对对方的处境表示共情与理解并点明写作目的。 段落2:提出建议:给出清晰、具体的建议,并为每一条建议提供充分的理由。 段落3:总结祝愿:总结观点,表达鼓励和美好祝愿。 Read for language points spend time/money (doing sth) 花时间/金钱(做某事) be attracted to(prep.) sth被某物吸引 focus on (doing) sth=concentrate on (doing) sth 专注于某事 become addicted to sth 变得对某事上瘾 encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 Read for sentence patterns you wrote that...=I learn that... from your letter我从...得知你.... I recommend that you (should) do sth我建议你... 补充:recommend doing sth It(形式主语)is+adj.+for sb to do sth某人做某事是很...的 make it(形式宾语)+adj+to do sth 使得做某事很... why not do sth=why don’t you do sth 为什么不...呢?(常用于提议) Activity(可选) I Am the Adviser 我是大顾问 Quiz(可选) 对新授语言点进行考察及巩固 Practice Work in groups. Choose one of the three situations and discuss his/ her problem. List possible suggestions and reasons. templates模板教学 建议信结构: 1. Greeting问候 2. Body Part正文 (1) 写信目的(+安抚情绪) (2) 建议+理由 (3) 希望采纳建议+表示谢意+盼望回复 3.Closing Remarks结束语 第一部分:说明写作目的 I have learned that you have some trouble in.. after reading your letter and I'm writing to offer you some suggestions. 看完你的信之后,我已了解到你在……有困难,因此我写信给你提一些建议。 I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. My advice is as follows. 很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 You have asked me for my advice concerning/about/on how to learn Chinese , and I will try to give you some tips here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 第二部分:提出建议 It's highly recommended that ... 我极力推荐...(从句谓语用should +动词原形) In my opinion, it would be a wise choice if you... 依我看,...会是一个明智的选择。 It might be a good idea to do sth. 做某事会是个好主意。 You'd better spare some time to exercise regularly, which will definitely help you release stress and build up your body. (用非限制性定语从句说明建议理由,建议和理由合为一个复杂句) 你最好抽出一些时间定期锻炼,这肯定会帮助你释放压力,强健你的身体。 第三部分:希望采纳建议,表示谢意,盼望回复 I sincerely hope these suggestions will be helpful/of use to you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚希望这些建议会对你有用。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 I believe that you will take my suggestions into consideration. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work! 我相信你会考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。 Writing 根据大纲写草稿 Draft your letter according to the outline. 交换草稿,同伴互评 Exchange drafts. Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner's draft. Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in a good order Does the writer give reasons for the advice Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions Does the writer use commas and stops correctly Is the handwriting easy to read 引导学生思考并分享青春期常见的烦恼(如交友、学业、家庭关系等)。 学生判断信件文体的必要部分 解析正文逻辑:师生共同分析Body部分的结构,归纳出“黄金三段式”写作逻辑 课堂活动:“最佳顾问”评选 邀请部分学生朗读自己修改后的建议信。全班同学根据“建议的合理性”和“表达的得体性”投票评选出“班级最佳顾问”。 锻炼学生逻辑思维,引导学生根据问题给出建议并说明理由 拓展教学:先给出结构理清思路,再给出每个部分的句型 写作前给出提示引导学生写草稿
Homework Revise your letter and polish your passage with the skills we have learnt this class.
五、 教学反思 本课通过“范文解构-方法归纳-情境写作-同伴互评”的完整流程,为学生搭建了坚实的写作支架。“黄金三段式”逻辑框架通俗易懂,有效帮助学生克服了写作中的结构混乱问题。课堂活动“最佳顾问”评选将写作转化为真实的交际任务,激发了学生的参与热情。后续可针对学生在“理由阐述深度”上的不足,进行专项训练。