Unit2Onwards and Upwards Developing ideas如何描述一次难忘的经历 导学案-2025-2026学年高中英语外研版选择性必修第一册

B4U2写作指导---如何描述一次难忘的经历
描写一次经历属于记叙文的范畴，应当按照记叙文的写作方法进行写作。一般来说，记叙文要把握六大要素：时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)、经过和结果(how)。
此外，叙述事件时还应注意以下几点：
1. 描写角度：在记叙文中用第一人称可增加文章的真实感；用第三人称讲述，灵活多变，客观全面，可穿插个人的感受。
2. 时态：在描写经历时一定要保持时态的一致性。叙述事件的发展过程及当时的感受往往用过去时；强调对现在或以后的影响可以用现在时或将来时。
3. 写作顺序：常按照时间顺序进行描述，也可采用倒叙方式。
4. 篇章结构：
首先，引出事情的目的和内容概要，作为全文的主题句或主题段；
其次，详细叙述事情的发生、发展和结局。注意写作内容要有实际意义，能真正引人注意、耐人回味；
最后，谈谈自己的感受或评论。
Useful expressions：
交代时间的常用词句：
one day, the other day, last week/month, a few days/ weeks/ months ago, when I was…years old, a long time ago, at/on the weekend, during the summer holidays, on Sunday morning…
交代地点的常用词语：
in one’s office, on one’s way to school, on one’s way home, at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the foot of the mountain, at the airport…
描述情节发展的常用词句：
then, suddenly, immediately, no sooner…than, hardly…when, while, when, as, not…until
谈自己感想的常用句式：
Personally, I think that….
What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that…
Through…, we learned…
While working, I realised…
Practice Makes Perfect
假定你是李华，最近参加了你校举办的“体验残疾人生活”活动。请你用英语写一篇短文描述这一经历，内容包括：
活动目的；
活动过程；
3. 你的感受。
注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考范文
To better know about the life of the disabled, our school offered us an opportunity to get a taste of what it might be like to be blind.
Accompanied by my classmates, I took part in an after-school activity, during which I was required to walk to a certain position, with my eyes covered with a cloth. With several barriers on the way, not being able to see made me fall over many times before reaching the destination. I felt so depressed after the ten-minute journey that I couldn't begin to imagine how those living with a visual impairment throughout their entire life might feel.
What I have learned from the activity is that it's high time we treated the disabled kindly.（122）
【写作任务】
假定某英语杂志正在开展主题为“走近残疾人”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文，描述近期你参加的一次关爱残疾人的活动经历，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；2. 活动过程；3. 你的感受。
注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文展示】
普通范文
To make us care more for the disabled, our school organised a visit to deaf-mute children last Friday.
When we arrived, we were warmly welcomed by the children. We gave them the gifts we had prepared to express our kindness. After that, we held several activities, such as playing football and skipping, cheering them up. More interestingly, the lovely children taught us how to communicate by using gestures. It made me realise how difficult it was for the disabled to live a normal life.
That was a special day which I will always remember. The visit taught me to treat the disabled kindly and be thankful for what I have now.
高级范文
To raise our awareness of caring for the disabled, our school organised a visit to deaf-mute children last Friday.
On arrival, we were warmly greeted by the children. Having presented them with the gifts we had prepared, we began to host some fun activities, such as playing football and skipping, which delighted them. What was more interesting was that the lovely children taught us how to communicate with gestures, making me aware of the challenging life they had been leading.
The whole visit left me with a deep impression. Apart from treating the disabled kindly, the visit also taught me to treasure what I have now.
佳作背诵
（一）假定你是中学生李津，你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以经历过的一次困难或考验为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1．经历的困难或考验； 2．解决办法及收获。
参考词汇：trail 足迹 注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
Trails of Life
The trails of life are of great importance in our growth.Only by dealing with difficulties in our life can we become strong and mature.
I would never forget the tough period after I entered senior high school. It was the first time that I had lived away from my home, and I found it difficult to follow the fast pace in high school. I dreaded everything, feeling stressed and hopeless. Nevertheless, I managed to cheer up and overcome the hardship with perseverance and courage. The difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life.
As the saying goes,"No cross, no crown." To my delight, the trails of life actually serve as a permanent stepping-stone to a brilliant future! （122字）
话题词句背诵
1．寒假期间，我的父母带我去了三亚，我有了一次难忘的潜水经历。
During the winter vacation, my parents took me to Sanya and I had an unforgettable experience of diving.
2．在一个夏天阳光明媚的早晨，我和爸爸开车去海边钓鱼。
On a sunny morning in summer, my father and I drove to the seaside to fish.
3．老实说，作为一名志愿者，我感到既紧张又自豪。
To be honest, as a volunteer, I felt nervous as well as proud.
4．我曾经被邀请到一位法国朋友家里吃饭。但晚餐时发生的事让我很尴尬。
I was once invited to a French friend's home to have dinner. But what happened during the dinner made me embarrassed.
5．当然，为了给参加比赛的运动员提供最好的服务，我每天都刻苦训练。
Surely, in order to provide the best service for the athletes who took part in competitions, I practised hard on a day-to-day basis.
6．我将永远不会忘记成为全运会志愿者的经历。
I will never forget the experience of being a volunteer for the National Games.
7．从经验来看，我意识到我们准备得越充分，我们的表现就会越好。
From the experience, I realize that the more fully we prepare, the better we will perform.
8．为了避免这种尴尬的情况，人们应该多了解世界上不同的餐桌礼仪。
To avoid such an embarrassing situation, people should learn more about different table manners of the world.
9．通过这个有意义的活动，我们学到了课堂上学不到的东西。
Through this meaningful activity, we learned something that can't be learned in class.
10．毫无疑问，在前进的道路上，每个人都会面临选择的挑战。
No doubt that everyone will be faced with challenges of choices on the way forward.