【期中考点培优】专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点培优牛津上海版（试用本）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册期中复习考点培优牛津上海版（试用本）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的班级正在选班干部，你想成为学习委员(study monitor)，请用英文写一篇自荐信：
1.乐于助人；
2.掌握一些好的学习方法；
3.有很强的组织能力。(have the ability to organize...)
要求：
1.内容需包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2.语言流畅，语法正确，不少于80词；
3.信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teacher,
It’s my great honor to write this letter. Hearing that our class is selecting the “study monitor”,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．新学期开始了，请根据以下信息，介绍你的新同学Li Lei。
Li Lei Personality kind, creative, organized, modest...
Favourite colours blue and green, because...
His future plan to be a manager, because…
注意事项：
1.文章需包含以上要点，可适当发挥。
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写工整。
3.词数：90词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Li Lei is my new classmate.
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3．假如你是李华，为了更了解你，你的加拿大笔友Robert向你问了几个问题。请根据下面的要点提示，用英语给Robert写一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
An email to Robert ●Your favourite colour ●Your personality ●Your dream job and how you will make it come true
写作要求：
（1）文中须包含所有的要点提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Robert,
I’m very glad to share something about me with you.
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Do you have any dreams Write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华，学校正在招募校园小记者(a student reporter)，请向负责老师Mrs. White写一封申请信，说明你想成为小记者的原因、你的优势 (如写作能力、沟通能力等)，并提出一条工作建议。
(注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分；3. 标点符号不占格。)
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5．假如你叫李明，是一名中学生，经常在电视上观看由美国主持人Philip主持的音乐节目Music World，请根据内容要点提示，给主持人写一封信，90词左右，开头不计入总词数。
基本信息 1. 一名九年级学生，是音乐俱乐部的一名成员： 2. 很小就喜欢音乐，有天赋。
原因 1. 音乐使人快乐； 2. 在学习感到疲劳时，观看节目使大脑得到放松； 3. 最喜欢节目里的乡村音乐，因为…… (至少补充1点)
愿望 1. 不想错过这周的节目，能线上为喜爱的歌手投票，并且赢得两张免费的音乐会门票； 2. …… (至少补充1点)
Dear Philip,
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I often watch your programme on TV.
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I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Ming
6．假如你是刘浩，你最近认识的澳大利亚交流生Thomas回国后给你发了一封电子邮件，邮件中他详细地介绍了自己，并想更多地了解你。请你就下面邮件中提及的几个问题用英语进行回复。
● What is your personality like ● What kind of art form do you like best Why ● Who has influenced you most Why ● Do you have any problems with study or life What are they
注意事项：
1. 至少选择三个方面进行回复，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 答题卡上只写正文内容，词数90个左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Thomas,
Thank you for your email. I miss you very much and I want to make friends with you. Now I will tell you something about myself._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Liu Hao
7．转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时自己的样子吗？相信经过两年时光的洗礼，你的身心都在磨砺中变得不同。根据以下提示内容，从外貌、性格和学习三个方面谈谈你的变化以及个人感受。
要点：1. Appearance (外貌): short, tall…
2. Personality (性格): shy, careless, brave, patient…
3. Studying: dislike reciting, work harder…
要求：1.词数100词左右。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Changes
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8．每个人都是独一无二的，都会发出自身特有的光芒。请结合自己的爱好、颜色、性格和生活经历，以“What I Like About Myself”为题，并根据写作要点和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
写作要点：
1．你喜欢自己的哪些方面？
2．你喜欢的原因是什么？
写作要求：
1．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2．词数不少于90，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
What I Like About Myself
Everyone is special, so am I. What I like about myself is
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What I own has brought me lots of benefits, and I will insist on working hard to make me a better person.
9．为了帮助九年级学生缓解学习和生活的压力，校学生会将招聘一名青少年辅导员（youth worker）。假如你是学生会主席李华，请认真阅读两位报名者的信息，结合你校学生的实际需求，选择一位报名者录用并陈述理由。
Name Shirley Tony
Job designer basketball player
Personality creative, modest, easy to work with humorous, energetic
Hobby music & dance sports
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I would like to choose ________ as the youth worker.
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10．假设你校正在举办“认识自我，多彩青春” (Know Yourself, Colourful Youth) 主题英语征文活动。请你结合九年级上册Unit 1与Unit 2所学内容，以“The Colour of Me”为题，写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点：
1. 你的主要性格特质 (至少两点)，并举例简要说明；
2. 选择一种你认为最能代表自己的颜色，阐述理由；
3. 你希望在哪些方面做出改变或提升，以及你打算如何通过另一种颜色的特质来帮助自己实现改变。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点，行文连贯，条理清晰；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息。
The Colour of Me
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share my story in this “Know Yourself, Colourful Youth” activity. Just as every colour has its own meaning, everyone is special. Now, let me show you what the colour of my life is.
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Thank you.
11．近期，成都出现儿童被狗咬伤的事件，对此，人们对是否可以在城市里养狗展开了激烈的讨论。请你根据下面表格中的提示写一篇英文短文描述一下大家讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点和建议。
一些人同意 1.狗狗可以帮助老人或者残疾人；2.狗狗可以让生活更有趣
一些人反对 1.狗狗很吵；2.狗狗很危险
你的观点和建议 ……
要求：1.内容须包含表格中的信息；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得抄袭试卷原文；
4.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Recently, a child was bitten by a dog in Chengdu, which makes people have a hot discussion about whether they can keep dogs in the city.
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12．2022年3月，全国首家为新冠疫情被隔离人员（quarantined people）的宠物而建立的宠物方舱在深圳建成，已开始运营。你的英国朋友Peter喜欢养宠物，把宠物当成自己孩子一样。根据以下要点，给你的英国朋友Peter写一封邮件，介绍深圳宠物方舱，并谈谈你的看法。
要点：
1.于2022年3月建立。提供免费、安全的宠物照护服务。最多可容纳300只猫、犬。
2.志愿者们悉心照顾宠物。宠物照顾细节自行补充两点。
3.已照顾200多只宠物，包括狗、猫、鸭子等等。这些宠物已安全回家。
4.你的看法。
提示词：宠物方舱pet care center
要求：文章须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，80 词左右。文章开头结尾已给出，不算在字数内。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to know that you take care of your pets and regard them as your kids. Now I’m writing to tell you something about the pet care center for the pets of quarantined people in Shenzhen.
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I hope you will have the chance to come and visit Shenzhen. It is an amazing city!
Yours,
Li Hua
13． 现在，越来越多的人饲养宠物。假如你是李华，请写一封信并投稿给China Daily的专栏编辑Anne，谈谈你对于饲养宠物的观点和看法。
内容要点如下：
1.你有宠物吗？如果没有，你想养什么宠物；
2.举例说明饲养这种宠物的优点；
3.你认为人与宠物之间的关系是怎样的。
注意：
1.词数80-100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Anne,
I read your articles about pets every week. They are very interesting and educational
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Yours
Li Hua
14．假如你是李华，新来的邻居养了一只狗，但遛狗时从不拴绳。狗经常随地大小便，偶尔还袭击路人。请你给邻居写一封信说一说遛狗不拴绳的危害并提出文明养狗的几条建议，如给狗拴绳、带上口套，注射狂犬病疫苗等。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；
（2）词数：80 100 （文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现学校、姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。
参考词汇：walk the dog遛狗；defecate indiscriminately随地大小便；attack passers-by袭击路人：muzzle the dog给狗带上口套；inject rabies vaccine注射狂犬病疫苗
Dear neighbour,
Welcome to our community.
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Your neighbour,
Li Hua
15．根据要求完成短文写作。
你们学校校报将开展“人与动物和谐共处”的专题征文。为此你们班开展了一次以“Should We Make Animals Our Pets ”为主题的讨论会，以下是几位同学的观点。请你写一篇英语短文，发表自己的看法及理由，并向学校校报投稿。
要求：
(1) 80词左右(标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Should We Make Animals Our Pets
Should we make animals our pets Different people may have different opinions.
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Peter来沈阳旅游了一周，回国前你要送他一件礼物。请你当面向Peter介绍这件礼物。内容包括：
(1) 这件礼物是什么；
(2) 送这件礼物的原因；
(3) 你的祝福与期待。
注意：
(1) 词数为80—100； 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Hi, Peter. I know you will leave Shenyang for Britain tomorrow. So I’ve prepared a gift for you.
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17．如今，网络购物已经成为非常普遍的消费方式。据央视网报道，今年6月，一名12岁男孩花了 12万元用于网购手机、游戏充值等。这则新闻让我们对青少年网购有了新的思考。假如你是校报英文版的编辑，请你根据下面的提示，结合这则新闻写一篇短文，就“青少年网购”这一话题发表看法。
提示：
1.青少年是否应该被允许网购及理由：
2. 如何合理网购。
写作要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.词数100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Recently, I’ve read a piece of news about a 12-year-old boy who spent 120, 000 yuan shopping online. It made me think about a question: Should teenagers be allowed to shop online
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18．如今，网络购物已经成为非常普遍的消费方式。据央视网报道，今年6月，一名12岁男孩花了12万元用于网购手机、游戏充值等，这则新闻让我们对青少年网购有了新的思考，假如你是校报英文版的编辑，请根据下面的提示，结合这则新闻写一篇短文，就“青少年能否网购”写一篇短文。
提示：
1. 青少年是否应该被允许网购及理由；
2. 你对如何合理网购的建议。
写作要求：
1. 紧扣主题，包含所有提示要点；
2. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Should Teenagers be Allowed to Shop Online
The other day I read a piece of news about a 12-year-old boy who spent 120,000 yuan shopping online.
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19．近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付（mobile payment）深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以“Mobile Payment Changes Our Life”为题的征文活动，请根据下列表格中的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。
移动支付 扫码支付 日益流行；改变生活
方便快捷（至少举1个生活实例）
消费观念 理智消费；按需购买；……
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观；
4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：扫码：scan QR codes 支付：pay 理智地：wisely
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people.
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20．如今，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务，这种订餐方式使人们方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下表格及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。
Ordering food online
Advantage Disadvantages Your opinions
方便快捷，节约时间 塑料包装，污染环境 ……
品种多样，美味可口 饮食习惯，不够健康
减少外出，降低风险 食品安全令人担忧
…… ……
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥。
2. 词数：100词左右。
3. 文章不得出现学校、姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。
参考词汇：减少外出reduce doing out；规避风险avoid risks；塑料包装plastic packages
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear teacher,
It’s my great honor to write this letter. Hearing that our class is selecting the “study monitor”, I would like to be a candidate.
First, I am always ready to help others. When classmates have problems with their studies, I explain questions patiently and share notes with them. Second, I have good learning methods. For example, I plan my study time wisely and review lessons regularly, which helps me achieve high grades. I can share these methods with everyone. Third, I have the ability to organize study activities. I often help teachers prepare group discussions and arrange study schedules for our class.
I believe I can make our class better at learning. If I become the study monitor, I will work harder to help every classmate improve. Thank you for considering me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表明自己想成为学习委员；
第二步，介绍自己的优势，包括乐于助人，有好的学习方法及组织能力；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的信心及承诺。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth准备做某事
②share sth with sb和某人分享某物
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①When classmates have problems with their studies, I explain questions patiently and share notes with them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②For example, I plan my study time wisely and review lessons regularly, which helps me achieve high grades. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③If I become the study monitor, I will work harder to help every classmate improve. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2．例文
Li Lei is my new classmate. He is a kind and creative boy who always keeps his things well organized. Though he does well in many aspects, he remains modest.
His favorite colours are blue and green. He says blue represents calmness while green symbolizes hope, and these colours help him stay peaceful and positive.
As for his future plan, Li Lei wants to be a manager. He believes this career will allow him to organize teams effectively. With his excellent personality and clear goals, I’m sure he will achieve his dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意“信息提示”中Li Lei的介绍要点，可适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接已给开头，介绍Li Lei的性格特点；
第二步：介绍Li Lei喜爱的颜色；
第三步：介绍Li Lei未来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①does well in在……方面做得好
②represents calmness代表着冷静
③help him stay peaceful and positive帮助他保持平和和积极
④excellent personality and clear goals优秀的性格和明确的目标
⑤achieve his dream实现他的梦想
[高分句型]
①He is a kind and creative boy who always keeps his things well organized. (who引导的定语从句修饰boy)
②With his excellent personality and clear goals, I’m sure he will achieve his dream. (with短语表伴随)
3．例文
Dear Robert,
I’m very glad to share something about me with you.
My favourite colour is blue. It’s the colour of the sky and the sea. It always makes me feel calm and peaceful.
I think I am a friendly and hardworking person. I enjoy helping my classmates and always try my best to finish my homework on time.
My dream job is to be a doctor. I want to help sick people feel better. To make my dream come true, I will study very hard, especially in science subjects like biology. I also plan to practice being kind and patient every day, because a good doctor needs these qualities.
Do you have any dreams Write to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己最喜欢的颜色以及原因；
第二步、介绍自己的性格以及具体表现；
第三步、介绍自己的理想职业以及说明如何实现梦想，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①feel calm感到平静
②try my best to do sth.尽力做某事
③come true实现
[高分句型]
I think I am a friendly and hardworking person.(省略that的宾语从句)
4．例文
Dear Mrs. White,
I am excited to apply for the student reporter position. I love writing and often contribute articles to our school magazine.
My strong communication skills help me interview people effectively. Additionally, I am responsible and always meet deadlines.
To improve our school news coverage, I suggest creating a monthly student opinion column. This would allow more voices to be heard.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封书信作文；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己想申请校园小记者一职并说明原因；
第二步，介绍自己的优势，包括：能够有效沟通以及认真负责；
第三步，提出一条工作建议；
第四步，书写结语，表示期待收到回复。
[亮点词汇]
① apply for申请……
② meet deadlines按时完成任务
③ suggest creating a monthly student opinion column建议创建一个每月学生意见专栏
④ Looking forward to期待……
[高分句型]
To improve our school news coverage, I suggest creating a monthly student opinion column.（动词不定式作目的状语）
5．范例：
Dear Philip,
My name is Li Ming. I’m a middle school student. I often watch your programme on TV.
I’m a Grade 9 student and a member of the music club. I’ve loved music since I was 5 and I have a gift for it. Music makes me happy every day. When I’m tired from studying, watching your show helps me relax. Also, I love country music in your program best because it’s so relaxing and reminds me of my grandparents’ farm.
I don’t want to miss this week’s show. I hope to vote online for my favorite singer and win two free tickets. Besides, I want to share my music stories with other fans on the show.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you very much.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明自己是节目观众并介绍个人基本信息；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点叙述喜爱音乐的原因及节目特点，并表达个人愿望；
第三步，书写结语。使用书信固定结尾表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have a gift for对……有天赋
②be tired from因……感到疲劳
③help me relax帮助我放松
④don’t want to miss不想错过
⑤share...with...与……分享……
[高分句型]
①I’ve loved music since I was 5 and I have a gift for it. (since引导的时间状语从句；have a gift for对……有天赋)
②When I’m tired from studying, watching your show helps me relax. (when引导的时间状语从句；动名词作主语)
6．例文
Dear Thomas,
Thank you for your email. I miss you very much and I want to make friends with you. Now I will tell you something about myself.
I’m outgoing, so I enjoy making friends. I’m willing to help others and I’m humorous, often making my friends laugh. I like music most because it makes me feel relaxed, and music can also be a bridge for people to communicate, helping me know many people from different countries who speak different languages. My mother has influenced me the most. She not only teaches me how to speak and behave but also makes me understand the importance of loving my family through cooking for us every day.
Now, I have difficulty in learning English as I can’t pronounce it correctly and I hope you can give me some advice.
Best wishes,
Liu Hao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对对方邮件的感谢与思念，表明要介绍自己；
第二步，从性格、喜欢的艺术形式及原因、对自己影响最大的人及原因、学习问题等方面介绍自己；
第三步，表达希望得到建议的诉求。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to愿意
②have difficulty in在……方面有困难
[高分句型]
①I like music most because it makes me feel relaxed, and music can also be a bridge for people to communicate, helping me know many people from different countries who speak different languages.（定语从句）
②She not only teaches me how to speak and behave but also makes me understand the importance of loving my family through cooking for us every day.（not only...but also...连接的并列结构）
7．例文：
My Changes
Over the past two years, I have undergone many changes in appearance, personality, and studying.
When I just entered junior high school, I was short and thin, but now I am much taller and stronger. In terms of personality, I used to be shy and careless. However, now I am brave enough to take part in various activities and have made many new friends. I have also become more patient, especially when dealing with difficult problems.
As for studying, I disliked reciting texts in the past, but now I realize its importance and work much harder. I have made great progress in my studies.
Looking back on these changes, I feel grateful for the growth I have experienced. I believe I will continue to improve and become a better person in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括外貌、性格和学习三个方面的变化，考生需围绕这些要点展开，适当添加细节，使文章内容丰富、连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，简要说明自己从刚升入初中到九年级的变化；
第二步，具体阐述外貌、性格、学习方面的变化；
第三步，总结个人感受，表达对成长的感慨和对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常
②in the past在过去
③be afraid of害怕
④take part in参加
⑤make many new friends交到许多新朋友
[高分句型]
①When I just entered junior high school, I was short and thin, but now I am much taller and stronger.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I believe I will continue to improve and become a better person in the future.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．例文
What I Like About Myself
Everyone is special, and so am I. What I like about myself is my love for reading, my optimistic personality, and the colorful experiences I’ve had.
I’m really fond of reading. It not only broadens my knowledge but also takes me to different worlds. Whenever I read a good book, I feel like I’m having a conversation with wise people from the past or present. My favorite color is blue, which I think represents calmness and depth, just like my personality. I’m an optimistic person. Even when facing difficulties, I always look on the bright side.
Once, I failed an important exam. Instead of feeling depressed, I analyzed my mistakes and made a study plan. With hard work, I got good grades in the next exam. This experience made me more confident in dealing with challenges.
What I own has brought me lots of benefits, and I will insist on working hard to make me a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：结合自身爱好、颜色、性格和生活经历，阐述喜欢自己的方面及原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明每个人都是特别的，引出自己喜欢自身的几个方面。
第二步，分别详细说明喜欢自己热爱阅读、乐观性格以及多彩经历的原因，其中讲述经历时结合具体事例。
第三步，结尾总结自身所拥有的这些带来的益处，并表达努力成为更好的自己的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①broaden拓宽；扩大
②optimistic乐观的
③confident自信的
④insist on坚持
[高分句型]
①It not only broadens my knowledge but also takes me to different worlds.（使用“not only...but also...”结构）
②Even when facing difficulties, I always look on the bright side.（“when+现在分词”结构作状语）
9．范文：
I would like to choose Shirley as the youth worker. Her job, personality and hobbies are strong qualities for this position.
Grade Nine students may have problems because of a lot of homework and exams. As a creative designer, Shirley can help students design a better timetable to plan their study and life well. Shirley is modest and easy to work with. Students can make friends and share their problems with her. What’s more, she is good at music and dancing. Many students have the same hobbies, so they can share experiences with one another.
So I think Shirley is the suitable person to be a youth worker.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格信息选择并陈述理由，注意逻辑连贯与语言准确性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确选择对象；
第二步，从职业、性格、爱好三方面说明理由；
第三步，总结其适配性。
[亮点词汇]
①creative有创造力的
②modest谦虚的
③share experiences分享经验
[高分句型]
①So I think Shirley is the suitable person to be a youth worker. （宾语从句）
10．例文：
The Colour of Me
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share my story in this “Know Yourself, Colourful Youth” activity. Just as every colour has its own meaning, everyone is special. Now, let me show you what the colour of my life is.
I’m outgoing and helpful. I enjoy making friends and am always ready to lend a hand. For example, I often help classmates with their English.
I think blue best represents me. Blue stands for calmness and wisdom, which matches my thoughtful nature.
However, I wish to be more confident. I plan to learn from the colour red, which symbolizes passion and courage. By taking part in more activities, I believe I can become a more confident person.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇主题征文活动的短文投稿，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中的三点内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“参加“认识自我，多彩青春”活动”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“主要性格特质、最能代表自己的颜色及理由、希望做出改变或提升的方面及打算如何实现改变”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事
②be ready to do sth. 准备好做某事
③lend a hand 帮忙
④stand for 代表
⑤take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①I think blue best represents me. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Blue stands for calmness and wisdom, which matches my thoughtful nature. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
11．例文
Recently, a child was bitten by a dog in Chengdu, which makes people have a hot discussion about whether they can keep dogs in the city.
Some people agree that keeping dogs can be beneficial. They say dogs can help elderly or disabled people, and dogs also make life more interesting. However, others disagree because they think dogs are noisy and can be dangerous.
In my opinion, keeping dogs in the city can be a good idea if done responsibly. People should take care of their dogs properly and follow the rules. It’s important to ensure public safety while enjoying the benefits that dogs bring.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些人同意的原因；
第二步，介绍一些人反对的原因；
第三步，表达自己的观点和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②take care of照顾
③ensure public safety确保公共安全
[高分句型]
①However, others disagree because they think dogs are noisy and can be dangerous.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②It’s important to ensure public safety while enjoying the benefits that dogs bring.（it固定句型+that引导的定语从句）
12．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to know that you take care of your pets and regard them as your kids. Now I’m writing to tell you something about the pet care center for the pets of quarantined people in Shenzhen.
It was established in March 2022. It provides free and safe pet care services. It can hold up to 300 cats and dogs. Volunteers take good care of pets. They provide them with a variety of food and play with them. It has taken care of more than 200 pets, including dogs, cats, ducks and so on. The pets have returned home safely.
I think this pet care center is very good. It embodies humanization and also provides help to those animal owners.
I hope you will have the chance to come and visit Shenzhen. It is an amazing city!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，为应用文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍宠物方舱的基本信息，包括它的建立时间和用处；
第二步，介绍志愿者如何照顾动物以及获得的成果，注意按要求补充细节；
第三步，表达自己对宠物方舱的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①up to多达
②take good care of好好照顾
③provide sb with sth为某人提供某物
④a variety of各种各样的
⑤ more than超过
[高分句型]
①It was established in March 2022.（一般过去时的被动语态）
②I think this pet care center is very good.（省略that的宾语从句）
13．例文：
Dear Anne,
I read your articles about pets every week. They are very interesting and educational.
I have no a pet now, but I want to keep a pet in the future. What pet A dog! She should be small, white and look like a lovely girl. Her eyes should be bright and clean.
Why am I going to keep a dog Because dogs are friendly and faithful. They are just like friends or family. Also, they are so clever that they can help us with many things and make us happy.
I think pets are our friends as all animals. We should respect and protect them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是一封信，内容属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“宠物”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论自己养的或要养的宠物，饲养这种宠物的优点，人与宠物的关系，即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
2.写作指导：本文写作应该根据情境使用第一人称，第三人称。时态根据情境运用一般现在时和一般将来时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一段开门见山，引出要写的宠物，可适当描述这只宠物；第二段根据要求展开，举例介绍饲养这种宠物的优点，要具体；第三段总结全文，表达感受，感情升华。
14．例文
Dear neighbour,
Welcome to our community. I know you keep a dog as a pet. It is very cute. But I have something to tell you.
The little dog often defecate indiscriminately. It is bad for our environment. You never walk the dog with a leash. It’s very dangerous, because your dog may attack passers-by.
I have some advice for you. You had better muzzle the dog when walking it. A leash is a life rope, and sometimes it can save your dog’s life. You should always take a leash. Also, injecting rabies vaccine is necessary.
I hope we can get on well with each other.
Your neighbour,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，要求针对邻居不文明的养狗行为提供自己的建议，并且叙述遛狗不牵绳的危害。注意要点齐全，理由合理。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。建议类可以多使用建议的句型或情态动词，上下文过渡，符合逻辑关系，单词拼写无误。
15． 例文：
Should We Make Animals Our Pets
Should we make animals our pets Different people may have different opinions.
I think it’s good to keep animals as pets. First, pets like cats or dogs can be our good friends. When we feel lonely, they stay with us and make us happy. Second, taking care of pets teaches us responsibility—we need to feed them and clean their houses on time. But we must treat pets kindly, not just play with them when we want. If we can love and care for them, living with pets will make our life more colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇承接已给句子，直接亮出核心观点——养动物当宠物是好的；
第二步，分点说明支持养宠物的理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①good friends好朋友
②feel lonely感到孤独
③responsibility责任感
④treat... kindly善待……
[高分句型]
①I think it’s good to keep animals as pets.（使用固定句型“it’s+形容词+to do sth”）
②First, pets like cats or dogs can be our good friends. When we feel lonely, they stay with us and make us happy.（when引导时间状语从句）
③Second, taking care of pets teaches us responsibility—we need to feed them and clean their houses on time.（动名词短语作主语）
16．One possible version:
Hi, Peter. I know you will leave Shenyang for Britain tomorrow. So I’ve prepared a gift for you. It is an English book about Shenyang.
The book introduces Shenyang in a lively way. In the book, there are many nice pictures and interesting stories. You can learn more about the city from it. What’s more, the book will also remind you of the fantastic week you have spent here. You have been to many places in the book during the week. When you think of this city, you can open the book and have a look at it.
I hope you will like the gift. And I’m looking forward to your next visit to Shenyang.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接前文表述想要送对方的礼物是什么；
第二步，具体介绍自己所选的礼物及选它作为礼物的原因；
第三步，表达自己的祝福和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②What’s more此外
③think of想起
[高分句型]
①When you think of this city, you can open the book and have a look at it.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope you will like the gift.（省略that的宾语从句）
17．例文
Recently, I’ve read a piece of news about a 12-year-old boy who spent 120,000 yuan shopping online. It made me think about a question: Should teenagers be allowed to shop online
I don’t agree that teenagers must keep away from online shopping. First of all, few teenagers spend so much money online. Most of them just buy school things or something else for daily use. In addition, instead of going to one shop after another, teenagers can choose all kinds of things online easily. It’s a good way to save time.
Of course, some rules should be followed. When we shop online, we should only buy what we need, such as school things or necessary clothes. We shouldn’t spend money on online games. Things like computers and mobile phones are too expensive for us to buy. If we are really in need of them, we should let our parents know.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容就“青少年网购”这一话题发表看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍青少年是否应该被允许网购及理由；
第三步，介绍如何合理网购。
[亮点词汇]
①keep away from远离
②in addition而且
③instead of而不是
④in need of需要
[高分句型]
①I don’t agree that teenagers must keep away from online shopping. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When we shop online, we should only buy what we need, such as school things or necessary clothes. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③If we are really in need of them, we should let our parents know. (if引导的条件状语从句)
18．例文
Should Teenagers be Allowed to Shop Online
The other day I read a piece of news about a 12-year-old boy who spent 120,000 yuan shopping online. Online shopping is one of the new ways of shopping. I like online shopping and I often buy books, clothes and snacks through the Internet.
Compared to shopping in stores, online shopping has a lot of advantages, such as it makes shopping easier and more convenient. Just stay at home and turn on the computer, and you can buy the things you want. And we can save a lot of money.
Of course, it has some disadvantages as well. For example, we can not see the product by ourselves. We just get the information from the pictures. Therefore, we may make some mistakes, such as buying things with the wrong size. What’s more, it is sometimes unsafe to pay online.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Should Teenagers be Allowed to Shop Online ”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍题干新闻以及自己对网购的看法；
第二步，介绍网购的优点；
第三步，介绍网购的缺点。
[亮点词汇]
①Compared to与（某事物）相比
②such as例如
③make some mistakes犯一些错误
④What’s more而且
[高分句型]
①Compared to shopping in stores, online shopping has a lot of advantages, such as it makes shopping easier and more convenient.（过去分词作状语）
②Just stay at home and turn on the computer, and you can buy the things you want.（祈使句，and+陈述句）
19．One possible version:
Mobile Payment Changes Our Life
More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. It is becoming more and more popular in China. It has made people’s daily life very convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go. We can have dinner in a restaurant and pay by scanning QR codes with our smart phones. In a cinema, we can buy our tickets in the same way. Mobile payment is changing our life.
However, we should spend money wisely. First of all, think twice about what we want to buy. Next, learn to save and buy what we can afford. Last but not least, spend on what we really need. Don’t buy everything we want.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题和开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题，说明移动支付的受欢迎程度和它带来的影响；
第二步，至少举一个实例说明移动支付在日常生活中的便捷使用；
第三步，提倡理性消费，分享消费理念。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more popular越来越受欢迎
②be used to doing sth习惯做某事
③think twice再三考虑
[高分句型]
①By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go.（wherever引导的让步状语从句）
②First of all, think twice about what we want to buy.（what引导的宾语从句）
③Don’t buy everything we want.（省略引导词that的定语从句）
20．例文
Nowadays, many young people prefer ordering food online. Different people have different opinions about this. Indeed, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, ordering food online has lots of advantages. First of all, it is convenient and fast, which can save our time. Secondly, there are different kinds of food and most of them are delicious. In the end, the most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper.
However, there are also some disadvantages. First, plastic packages will pollute the environment. Then, the eating habits are not healthy enough. In addition, it is not good to improve our independence. Last but not least, the quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised and food safety makes people worried.
In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed. That’s to say, we can try ordering food online sometimes, but we can’t always do it. Besides, people should never be dependent too much on the Internet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇观点对立型议论文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章对网上点餐的利与弊进行介绍，并阐述造句的看法和建议网上点餐。适当增加细节，描述清楚表格里的内容，并表明自己的意见。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出观点，一句话介绍它有优点与缺点；
第二步，分别介绍网上点餐的优点与缺点；
第三步，表达自己的意见。
[亮点词汇]
① On the one hand一方面
② First of all首先
③ In addition除此之外
④ Last but not least最后也最重要
⑤ be dependent too much on太依赖于
[高分句型]
① First of all, it is convenient and fast, which can save our time.（定语从句）
② In the end, the most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper. （表语从句）
③ Last but not least, the quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised and food safety makes people worried.（并列句）
④ In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed.（状语从句）
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