【期中考点培优】专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期中复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期中复习考点培优鲁教版（五四学制）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Linda想了解你所在城市的一种新发明的情况。请你根据内容提示，给她写一封信。
要点：
1.该发明是一种新型小汽车；
2.能利用太阳能在陆地上和水中行驶；
3.也能利用电能行驶。
注意：
1.信的内容要详略得当，并注意内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
2.词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．发明改变了世界，也改变了我们的生活。例如，电脑给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题，根据提示写一份演讲稿。先介绍电脑的用途，再发挥想象，说说你想要发明的东西，并说明其用途和理由。
注意：（1）演讲稿须包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
（2）发明的东西可大可小，有用即可；
（3）词数：不少于80词。
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3．上周你去市科技馆进行了参观，你对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课的值日生报告上向你班同学介绍它。请你以“Amazing Robot”为题，根据下面的要点提示写一篇短文。
内容提示：
1. 外观：看起来像一位可爱的女孩；高1.2米；
2. 材料：再生材料，如玻璃、塑料等制成；
3. 功能：能做各种家务，会讲不同外语；在健康方面提建议；治疗普通的疾病（treat common diseases）；照顾老人和孩子。
要求：
1. 内容应包括所有的要点提示，可适当发挥；
2. 语言表达要准确，语句要通顺连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名，词数：80~100。
Amazing Robot
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4．习近平主席曾寄语青少年：想象力、创造力从哪里来？要从刻苦的学习中来。既勤学书本知识，又多学课外知识，还要勤于思考，多想想，多问问，这样就能培养自己的创造精神。请你根据以下提示，结合自己的亲身经历，用英语写一篇小短文。
提示：
1. What have you ever created/made
2. What did you learn from that experience
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4. 词数：不少于70词。
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5．假设你是张鹏，临近毕业考试，你的朋友刘宇写信向你倾诉。他热爱跳舞并且获得过多次比赛的大奖。长大后他想成为一名专业的舞者。但是父母不支持他花大量时间练习，而是觉得他应该把所有时间用于文化学习，获得好的成绩，考上理想的高中学校。请你用英语给他回信，说一说你的看法和建议。要点：
1.向刘宇表示理解和支持；
2.青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定及原因；
3.解决与父母矛盾的有效方法。
参考词汇：win big prizes, professional dancer, communicate with
要求：
1.文章须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Liu Yu,
I’m happy to receive your letter
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Yours,
Zhang Peng
6．假如你是李华，你的朋友田甜将去英国。请你将她的基本情况介绍给你的英国朋友Millie，希望她们成为朋友，并希望Millie能够去机场接她。请根据以下要点给Millie写一封信。
提示：（1）介绍田甜的年龄、外貌、性格及爱好；
（2）田甜将去英国的Woodland School学习一年，并将乘飞机于8月1日下午4时到达伦敦希思罗机场(Heathrow Airport)。
注意：词数80左右。
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7．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Linda想了解你过去与现在性格方面的改变。请根据要点内容的提示，给她写封邮件。
要点如下：
1. 过去害羞、喜欢乡村音乐，很少交友；
2. 现在开朗，喜欢古典音乐，有很多朋友：
3. 过去喜欢集邮，现在喜欢看书。
写作要求：1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：
3. 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda.
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
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That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．做家务可以锻炼孩子们的独立生活能力，可以养成勤劳的好习惯，而且也能增强体质。请你以“The importance of doing housework”为题，并根据下面的写作要点及要求写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1. 做家务使人放松；
2. 做家务可以锻炼身体；
3. 与父母亲分担 (share) 家务能让他们少劳累。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须所有的要点，可以适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，词句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及个人信息的地名，否则不予评分；
4. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总分)。
The importance of doing housework
Some people think doing housework is a waste of time.
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9．“双减”政策实行两年多，它改变了许多学生的学习生活。请你以“My Free Time Activities”为题，结合以下表格，介绍“双减”政策下，你的业余活动及其好处，并适当发挥，简单谈谈你对“双减”政策的看法。
Activities How often Benefit (好处)
exercise after school every day keep healthy, …
watch movies once a month relax myself
reading once or twice a week open up my eyes
… … …
要求：
1. 应包含表格中的所有信息，可适当补充，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2. 词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数，文中不出现真实校名、姓名等。
My Free Time Activities
Today, the biggest change in my life is from the “double reduction” policy. Now, there are many kinds of wonderful activities in my free time.
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10．每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好，你的爱好是什么？你认为你的爱好妨碍学业了吗？你是如何处理的？请结合自身经历写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.What’s your hobby
2. Do you think your hobby got in the way of your schoolwork Why
3. How did you deal with it
要求：
1. 词数不少于 80 词；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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11．某省教育厅试点“智慧校园”项目，部分中学引入AI学习助手。你校英语社开展辩论赛，主题为“Should AI Replace Teachers ”。请你作为反方代表，写一篇辩论稿。
要点：
1. AI在教育中的积极作用；
2. 教师不可替代的原因 (情感传递/价值观培养)；
3. 你对人机协作的建议。
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12．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，因此暑假要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示问题：Which places of interest should I visit How can I get there What’s it famous for
提示词语：mountain, pay a visit, by plane, enjoy
要求：1.内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯；
3.100词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China.
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I’m sure you will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．作为社会主义先行示范区，深圳以其各色之美闻名全国。假如你是某校初三学生李华，准备参加学校举办的一场主题为“发现深圳之美”的演讲活动。请结合自己的实际经历，给全校同学分享你所发现的深圳之美，并表达自己作为一名深圳中学生的自豪之情。
要点：1. 自然之美：深圳自然景点，例如莲花山……
2. 人文之美：义工活动，读书月活动……
3. 自己发现的深圳之美。
要求：1. 词数80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语义连贯，书写规范整洁；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：自然风光natural scenery；人文之美beauty of humanity；深圳读书月Shenzhen Reading Month
Good morning, everyone. Have you ever noticed the beauty of Shenzhen around you __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
14．假如你是九年级三班的学生盛明，今天英语课上你们班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你根据下表中的提示内容, 以“Should music be played between classes ”为题，写一篇英语短文。
赞同意见 音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松，音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩
反对意见 吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋，不利于课间休息
你的看法 . . . . . .
要求:
1）短文应包括提示中列有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3）不少于 80 词。
Should music be played between classes
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15．假如你是李华，你的好友Linda想了解你最喜爱的音乐。请根据要点提示，给她写一封邮件。要点如下：
1. 最喜欢民间音乐；
2. 让你了解文化；
3. 多种不同乐器的音乐；
4. 自十岁开始喜欢。
要求：
1. 短文中要包括以上所有提示信息内容；
2. 内容可适当发挥，以保证短文内容的丰富、完整与流畅；
3. 词数：80～100。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you all about my favorite music.
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That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
16．学校英语公众号正在开展以“我最喜欢的歌曲”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的歌曲，并谈谈理由及感受。
提示词语：lyrics（歌词），rhythm（节奏），perfect，dance，forget worries
提示问题：
·What’s your favorite song/music
·Why do you like it
·How do you feel about it
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17．音乐是一道美丽的风景线，让心灵在旋律的指引下自由起舞；音乐是一片温暖的海洋，它能够包容你的所有情感和思绪！假设你是李明，是雄鹰小组（4人）的一员，老师布置了一个任务：调查小组成员对于音乐的喜好，并根据所获情况（见下表）写一篇英文调查报告。记得小组成员包括你哦！
Name Favorite music Favorite musician Reason
Peter Pop music Liu Huan Good words
Linda Chinese classical music Lang Lang Play the piano best
Tim Rock music Wang Feng Make people excited
要求：
1. 文中至少用到1-2句复合句；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 80词左右。
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18．假如你是李华，学校英语社团开展了一项关于青少年喜欢的电影的调查。请你根据以下问题，用英语写一封信给负责此项工作的张老师。
要求：
1.你平常多久去看一次电影？
2. 你喜欢什么类型的电影？
3. 哪部电影给你留下了深刻的印象？
注意：
1. 词数：90词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you something about the movies I like.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．提示 冼星海说 “音乐，是人生最大的快乐；音乐，是生活中的一股清泉；音乐，是陶冶性情的熔炉。” 你喜欢音乐吗 你最喜欢什么样的音乐呢 请以“My Favorite Music”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的音乐。
要求 1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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20．学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动，请你介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。
内容包括：
（1）你喜欢的音乐类型（列举一至两项）。
（2）你喜欢这种音乐的原因：如音乐带给你的感受，对你的帮助和影响。
（3）你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。
参考词汇：乡村音乐：country music；流行音乐：pop music，摇滚音乐：rock-and-roll 古典音乐：classic music 说唱音乐：hip-hop
注意：
（1）词数在 80 词左右。
（2）要点齐全，可做适当拓展。
（3）文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名、师生名字等）。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
It's a kind of new car invented by a great young man in my local city. He is really clever. It's so great that it can run on solar power. It's certainly good for our environment. Although it mainly depends on solar power, it can still run very fast. Also, it can run not only on the land but also in the water safely. What's more, it can also use electricity to run when it's cloudy, rainy or snowy. Lots of people love this kind of car. I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信，围绕向英国朋友介绍所在城市新型小汽车这一发明展开交流；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述发明的特征、性能等客观情况；
③提示：文章符合书信要求，包含发明的主体、动力来源、行驶场景等要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，向朋友清晰介绍新发明。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明写信目的，即向 Linda 介绍所在城市的新发明；
第二步，详细描述新发明（新型小汽车），包括发明者（虽未着重强调，提及 “invented by a great young man” ）、动力来源（太阳能、电能 ）、行驶场景（陆地、水中 ）以及人们对其的喜爱；
第三步，结尾表达相信对方也会喜欢该发明，让书信交流更自然。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②solar power 太阳能
③environment 环境
④not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且……
[高分句型]
①It's so great that it can run on solar power.（so...that... 引导结果状语从句 ）
②I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.（believe 后接宾语从句，从句中含 if 引导的条件状语从句 ）
2．One possible version
Good morning, everyone! Today I’m going to talk about inventions.
Inventions are created every day because people want to make life easier. My favorite invention is the computer. The computer helps us a lot. It provides us with a variety of information so we can know more about the world. With the computer, we can read books, know the latest news and watch films. We can play games or listen to music when we are tired. It is easy to communicate with our friends on the computer, too. We can also buy everything we need with a computer without going out.
Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly. When we come across problems in homework, it will tell us how to do with them.
That’s all. Thank you very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：文章符合演讲稿的格式和语言风格，先说明发明的意义，介绍自己最喜欢的发明及其功能，最后表达个人的发明愿望，内容完整，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明演讲主题是“发明”，说明发明的目的是让生活更便捷，引出自己最喜欢的发明是电脑；
第二步，详细介绍电脑的作用。从提供信息、方便阅读和获取新闻、娱乐放松、便于沟通、网上购物等多个角度阐述电脑对生活的帮助；
第三步，结尾表达个人的发明愿望，希望发明一种能帮助快速工整书写且能解答作业问题的笔，使演讲内容更丰富。
[亮点词汇]
①variety种类
②latest最新的
③neatly整洁地
④come across遇到
[高分句型]
①Inventions are created every day because people want to make life easier.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly.（though引导让步状语从句，which引导定语从句）
3．例文
Amazing Robot
Last week, I went to the science and technology museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot—Home Doctor. Home Doctor looks like a lovely girl, and it is about 1.2 meters tall. It is made from recycled materials, like glass and plastic. Home Doctor can do all kinds of housework and speak different foreign languages. Home Doctor also has some new functions. It can not only give people lots of advice on health, but also treat common diseases at home. It will help people save a lot of time, because they needn’t go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt. What’s more, it can help take good care of the old people and babies at home.
I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使作文内容意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头描述背景，引出“家庭医生机器人”这一话题；
第二步，详述机器人的外观、材料和功能；
第三步，点评这款机器人应该会受到欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①be made from 由……制成
②all kinds of 各种各样的
③not only...but also 不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①It will help people save a lot of time, because they needn’t go to the hospital whenever they feel sick or get hurt. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I believe Home Doctor will be very popular with people in the future. (宾语从句)
4．范文：
Creativity is the key to human progress. Every major scientific discovery began with someone imagining the world in a creative way. With the development of society, it gets more and more important.
I am a big fan of science. Months ago, I wanted to make a model plane that could fly. At first, I thought it was easy. But during the process, I ran into many difficulties. Luckily, my science teacher helped me a lot and she advised me to search online and do a lot of reading. Finally, after two weeks’ hard work, my model plane could fly for two minutes.
Now I know if you want to create or invent something, you must increase your knowledge first. Or you can be hardly successful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍创造力的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己创造过什么以及从那次经历中学到了什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of...随着……的发展
②run into many difficulties遇到了许多困难
③search online在线搜索
④increase one’s knowledge增加知识
[高分句型]
①Luckily, my science teacher helped me a lot and she advised me to search online and do a lot of reading.（并列句）
②Now I know if you want to create or invent something, you must increase your knowledge first.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．Dear Liu Yu,
I'm happy to receive your letter, and I completely understand your situation. Your passion for dance and your success in winning big prizes is admirable. As a teenager, we should be allowed to make our own decisions. It’s essential for success in any field. Try to communicate with your parents effectively. Explain your love for dance and your dream of becoming a professional dancer. Share with them your plan to keep a balance between dance practice and your studies. As they say, when you are determined to do something, the whole world will make way for you.
Best wishes for you!
Your friend,
Zhang Peng
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文内容是给别人建议，主要用第一人称和第二人称。应注意书信的格式，并按写作要点表达出理解和支持的态度、提出允许自己做决定的观点和原因、提出解决方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示态度：对来信者的理解、支持和赞赏；
第二步，提出自己的观点：青少年应该被允许做出自己的决定，以及该观点的原因；
第三步，给出解决父母矛盾的有效方法：尝试沟通、阐明成为专业舞者的目标、提出平衡舞蹈练习和学习的计划；
第四步，鼓励对方，附上结束语以示祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①make decisions做出决定
②keep a balance保持平衡
③professional专业的
④understand理解
⑤effectively有效地
[高分句型]
①Share with them your plan to keep a balance between dance practice and your studies. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②As a teenager, we should be allowed to make our own decisions.（被动语态）
6．范文
Dear Millie,
How is everything going I’d like to introduce my best friend Tian Tian to you.
She is 16 years old. She is a lovely girl with a round face and big eyes. She is very kind and easy to get along with. She likes reading and listening to music, and she is especially good at playing the piano. Her favorite subjects are physics and chemistry.
Now she is going to Woodland School in England to study for one year. I hope you two can be good friends. She is arriving at Heathrow Airport at 4 pm on August 1st. Could you please meet her at the airport when she arrives Many thanks.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍田甜的年龄、外貌、性格及爱好；
第三步，希望她们成为朋友，并希望Millie能够去机场接她。
[亮点词汇]
①get along with相处
②listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①I hope you two can be good friends. (宾语从句)
②Could you please meet her at the airport when she arrives (when引导的时间状语从句)
7．范文：
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
I used to be too shy to speak to others in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I fear to face others by myself. At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I also used to like collecting stamps. And this always helped me get rich knowledge. However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends. What’s more, I like classic music that causes me to fall in love with books. So I love reading very much now. In the books, I can learn a lot and know better about our world.
That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去和现在性格的变化；
第二步，介绍自己爱好上的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②as a result因此
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful.（定语从句）
②However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends.（目的状语从句）
8．例文
The importance of doing housework
Some people think doing housework is a waste of time. They also think doing housework is very boring. As for me, I love doing housework. Doing housework makes me relax. I often sweep the floor, do the laundry, take out the rubbish and do the dishes. Besides, doing housework is a good way to exercise. It can help us keep healthy and strong. It is good for my study. Finally, sharing with our parents can make them less tired and relaxed. I feel so happy when I see their smiling faces.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍做家务的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，先描述人们对做家务的看法，再介绍自己对做家务的看法以及做家务的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①love doing sth.喜欢做某事
②do the laundry洗衣服
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①They also think doing housework is very boring.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I feel so happy when I see their smiling faces.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．例文：
My Free Time Activities
Today, the biggest change in my life is from the “double reduction” policy. Now, there are many kinds of wonderful activities in my free time.
I exercise every day after school. I think it’s good for my health and I can study better in this way. I go to the movies with my parents once a month, which is a good time to stay with my family and to relax myself. I also go to the library to read once or twice a week. Reading can make me open up my eyes and increase knowledge. Sometimes I go to the park to take photos with my friends. It’s both enjoyable and healthy for my body and mind. The school has many different clubs. I can play the violin, so I joined a music club. We practise twice a week.
We plan to take part in a competition next year. How wonderful! I’m sure the “double reduction” policy will be more and more popular.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍“双减”政策下，你的业余活动及其好处，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍“双减”政策下，你的业余活动及其好处；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②open up my eyes开拓眼界
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I go to the movies with my parents once a month, which is a good time to stay with my family and to relax myself. (which引导的定语从句)
②I’m sure the “double reduction” policy will be more and more popular. (宾语从句)
10．例文：
My hobby is playing basketball. I think it can keep me healthy.
I used to play basketball with my classmates every day after school and on weekends. But I realized that my hobby got in the way of my schoolwork because of more homework and less free time in ninth grade than before.
At the beginning of ninth grade, I couldn’t finish my homework because of playing basketball, which made the teacher very angry. So I decided not to play basketball after school until I finished my homework. In this way, my homework was completed faster and better.
In my opinion, although my hobby is a good way to balance study and rest, more attention should be paid to my studies. As long as we manage time reasonably, hobbies will not be bad for study.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，为说明文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③ 提示：结合自己的爱好，爱好是否影响自己的学业，以及如何处理等，并结合自身经历写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的爱好；
第二步，介绍自己的观点：爱好是否妨碍学业，以及原因；
第三步，结合自身经历，介绍自己的处理方式；
第四步，自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① because of 因为
② a good way to好方法
③ balance study and rest劳逸结合
④ as long as只要
[高分句型]
① At the beginning of ninth grade, I couldn’t finish my homework because of playing basketball, which made the teacher very angry.（定语从句）
② So I decided not to play basketball after school until I finished my homework.（until引导时间状语从句）
11．例文
AI tutors can check homework instantly and provide personalized exercises, saving teachers’ time. However, they can never replace real teachers.
First, teachers inspire us beyond textbooks. My English teacher Ms. Liu once stayed late to comfort me after a failure—no AI can offer such warmth. Second, Confucian values like “benevolence” are taught through teachers’ actions, not algorithms.
What is the best solution Let AI handle repetitive tasks like grammar drills, while teachers focus on critical thinking and moral education. Shandong’s “Human + Machine” pilot program proves this works—our class scores rose 15% with this model.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明人工智能在教育中虽然有积极作用，但却不能代替人类老师；
第二步：介绍人类老师的作用；
第三步：建议人工智能和人类老师合作。
[亮点词汇]
①replace real teachers取代真正的老师
②offer such warmth提供这样的温暖
③focus on专注于
[高分句型]
①Second, Confucian values like “benevolence” are taught through teachers’ actions, not algorithms. (一般现在时态的被动语态)
②Let AI handle repetitive tasks like grammar drills, while teachers focus on critical thinking and moral education. (祈使句)
12．例文
Dear Mary,
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to visit China. The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year, thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It is convenient to get there. You can go there by train or by plane.
While climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, beautiful pines and unique rocks around you. What’s more, in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. You will never forget the breathtaking scenery and fresh mountain air.
It’s really a nice place to visit. I am sure you will have a good time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色。
[写作步骤]
第一步，书信问候语；
第二步，介绍推荐的名胜、到达的交通方式及景点的特色；
第三步，书信结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the most famous mountains最著名的山脉之一
②lie in位于
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
① … in the early morning, when the sun rises, the sky looks beautiful. （when引导时间状语从句）
② It’s really a nice place to visit. （使用不定式作定语）
13．范文
Good morning, everyone. Have you ever noticed the beauty of Shenzhen around you If you are careful enough, you will discover a lot of beauty in Shenzhen.
First, Shenzhen is famous for its natural scenery. There are lots of beautiful nature parks in Shenzhen. For example, Lianhua Mountain is a perfect place for you to enjoy fascinating clouds. Second, Shenzhen has its beauty of humanity. A group of volunteers wearing red vests can be seen everywhere. There is an activity called Shenzhen Reading Month, which gives us a good chance to read books easily. At last, I’m also impressed by its people. You don’t have to worry at all if you need help, because people around you are all kind and helpful. It is a city full of harmony.
I am proud of living in Shenzhen, and I firmly believe Shenzhen will be more beautiful and prosperous in the future.
Thank you for your listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当增加细节，使内容更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明主题，说明主题是“发现深圳之美”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细介绍深圳的美，包括自然方面、人文方面以及自身体会；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的自豪以及对深圳的美好期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a good chance to do一个做……的好机会
②be impressed by被……所感动
[高分句型]
①If you are careful enough, you will discover a lot of beauty in Shenzhen.（If引导条件状语从句）
②There is an activity called Shenzhen Reading Month, which gives us a good chance to read books easily.（which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰Shenzhen Reading Month）
14．例文
Should music be played between classes
We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class.
Some think listening to music between classes is a good idea. Music can make them feel happy and relaxed. Music can make their lives colorful. However, others are against the idea. They think music may have a bad influence because some music is too noisy and they may get too excited to take a break. In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. In this way, students can enjoy music as well as having a good rest. Besides, I suggest playing music that is suitable for middle school students.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇议论文；
②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，根据表格的提示，分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明班级开展了一次讨论，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据表格的提示，分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①discussion讨论
②relaxed放松的
③take break休息
④suitable合适的
[高分句型]
①We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class. (whether引导的宾语从句）
②In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. (it句式结构)
15．例文：
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you all about my favorite music.
I like folk music best, because it can always remind me of my happy time when I was young.
Importantly, it can help me learn more about our rich culture. In the folk music, I can hear the sound of different cultures. What’s more, I like the folk music by different musical instruments better than any other music. I especially like Erhu music. I can deeply get into different feelings when I listen to it. And I fell in love with it when I was only ten. At that time, my uncle played “Er Quan Ying Yue” with his Erhu. It’s really beautiful.
That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意表明自己最喜爱的音乐类型，介绍该音乐的相关常识，不要遗漏。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。表明自己喜欢民间音乐。
第二步，具体介绍民间音乐。包括其文化背景、乐器类型等常识，必要时可适当展开描述，让对方了解民间音乐。
第三步，介绍自己与民间音乐的渊源。从十岁就开始喜欢民间音乐，具体喜欢哪种乐器，对民间音乐的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①folk music 民间音乐
②musical instrument 乐器
[高分句型]
①I like folk music best, because it can always remind me of my happy time when I was young.（原因状语从句句型）
②I can deeply get into different feelings when I listen to it.（时间状语从句句型）
16．范文：
My favorite song is Let It Go by Idina Menzel. I love this song because it has meaningful lyrics that always make me feel happy. And it is also easy for me to sing along with. The rhythm is perfect for dancing. Whenever I listen to it, I can’t help moving my body and tapping my feet. It’s the kind of song that puts me in a good mood and makes me forget worries I may have. In a word, it is not just a song to me, but a source of joy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示词语”和“提示问题”中“我最喜欢的歌曲，喜欢的原因以及我的评价”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍喜欢的歌曲的名称；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢这首歌曲的原因。
第三步，对这首歌曲作出评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t help doing忍不住做某事
②in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①I love this song because it has meaningful lyrics that always make me feel happy.（because引导原因状语从句，that引导限制性定语从句）
②Whenever I listen to it, I can’t help moving my body and tapping my feet.（whenever引导时间状语从句）
③It’s the kind of song that puts me in a good mood and makes me forget worries I may have.（that引导限制性定语从句，省略引导词that的定语从句）
17．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I have three friends. They like different music. Peter likes pop music best. He likes Liu Huan because the words are good. They can touch people’s heart. Linda likes Chinese classical music. Her favorite musician is Lang Lang because he plays the piano best. His music sounds beautiful and lively. Tim likes rock music best. His favorite musician is Wang Feng, a famous Chinese rock singer. He thinks his music can make people excited and happy. As for me, I like pop music, too. My favorite musician is Zhou Shen because his voice is beautiful and full of feelings.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：内容要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“自己对音乐的喜好”，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，进行自我介绍；
第二步，介绍朋友们喜欢的音乐类型、音乐家及原因；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型、音乐家及原因。
[亮点词汇]
① play the piano弹钢琴
② as for sb就某人而言
[高分句型]
① He likes Liu Huan because the words are good.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② He thinks his music can make people excited and happy.（省略that的宾语从句）
18．
例文：
Dear Mr. Zhang,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you something about the movies I like. I often go to the movies once a month. I like comedies best because they can make me happy.
The film that impresses me most is Hi, Mom, directed by the famous actress Jia Ling, who also plays the leading role. It describes that Jia travels back to the year 1981. She meets her mother at a young age and becomes her mother’s friend. She hopes to improve her mother’s life and make her mother happy. This film has received many positive reviews. Many people can’t help crying because of the main characters’ sincere affection for each other. I strongly recommend it to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己看电影的频率以及喜爱的电影类型；
第二步，介绍印象最深刻的一部电影。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t help doing sth. 禁不住做某事
②play the leading role主演
③because of 由于
[高分句型]
①I like comedies best because they can make me happy. （because引导原因状语从句）
②The film that impresses me most is Hi, Mom , directed by the famous actress Jia Ling, who also plays the leading role. （定语从句）
19．例文
My Favorite Music
There are different types of music, such as traditional Western music, rock music, pop music and so on. But my favourite music is country music.
Country music is often about our life, and it is easy to understand. It also makes my life colourful. It makes me happy or moved, and sometimes makes me sad. It is also a good way to learn English.
In a word, country music plays an important role in my life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最爱的音乐是哪种；
第二步，具体介绍这种音乐的特点及自己喜爱它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②In a word总之
[高分句型]
①There are different types of music, such as traditional Western music, rock music, pop music and so on.（there be句型）
②It makes me happy or moved, and sometimes makes me sad.（形容词作宾补）
20．例文
I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, rock-and-roll, classic music and so on. But my favorite music is classic music. For some people, they find classic music boring. However, I think classic music is beautiful and it can make me inspired. Every time I feel upset or anxious, classic music helps me calm down. Besides, it makes my life more colourful and gives me a lot of entertainment. Most importantly, it makes me relaxed. I’d like to share this kind of music with my mother. The reason is that she is a music lover. She is busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classic music after she gets back home, she will feel more relaxed.
In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中喜欢的音乐类型的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“喜欢的音乐类型”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“喜欢原因、听音乐感受、分享音乐”几个方面重点介绍音乐对自己的具体影响；
第三步，书写结语。表达“音乐在我生活中重要性。
［亮点词汇］
①as much as 和……一样多
②many kinds of 很多种类的
③make me inspired使我受鼓舞
④be busy with 忙于
⑤In a word总而言之
［高分句型］
①However, I think classic music is beautiful and it can make me inspired.（宾语从句）
②I think if she listens to some classic music after she gets back home, she will feel more relaxed.（宾语从句）
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