2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写社会温情类 课件-(共12张PPT)
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| 名称 | 2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写社会温情类 课件-(共12张PPT) |  | |
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(共12张PPT)
读后续写：
一封穿越时空的圣诞信
如何续写一个温暖人心的故事
学习目标
01
解读文本：深度挖掘给定材料的核心立意与情感基调。
02
理清思路：掌握读后续写的逻辑框架与情节设计方法
03
实战演练：学习高级表达，并赏析范文，完成写作升华。
Christmas was hanging around, Six-year-old David was thinking what presents hecould get from Santa, He wanted slippers; he wanted a silk tie; he wanted some toys. And school starting soon, he also hoped to get something about schooling. In order to get Santato know what he needed, he thought he would write a letter to Santa, which he believedwould bring him those presents. He found a sheet and made a list of the items on it, andthen bent down to post the letter up the chimney, waiting for the winds to take it up.David got up very early on the Christmas morning, He searched his room carefully,but to his disappointment, he didn't find the presents he had hoped for. Hadn't Santareceived the letter Was he too busy to send him the gifts Although feeling a little upset,David was convinced that Santa would not forget him and he was bound to receive the items.Many years had passed and 2019 came, In an old house, a young builder, Lewis Shawwas removing the fireplace with his colleagues when he suddenly found a small piece ofPaper, which was still in perfect condition even if it had turned yellow, He picked it up and unfolded it, It was a letter written to Santa, The touching hand-written note read:
Dear Father Christmas,
Please send me Rupert Annual, a drum, a box of chalks, slippers, a silk tie, a pencil box, any little toys you have to spare.
Love,
David
It was then signed off with lots of kisses.This was the very letter written by David and the house was where he had lived duringhis childhood! The letter struck Shaw so much, How simple Christmas once was! Daviddidn't ask for much, just the things he needed, Nowadays kids always want expensive giftsand take it for granted.
Part 1 文本解读：抓住故事的“灵魂”
Who：
What:
David and Shaw
David年少时写给圣诞老人的present sheet 一直没有得到回音。
Shaw 捡到了一个泛黄的信封里面写着一个present sheet，非常受到触动。
Part 1 文本解读：抓住故事的“灵魂”
核心主题是什么？
温情与传承：一封信连接过去与现在，展现情感的延续。
纯真与感恩：对比过去简单的愿望与当下的物质化，呼唤真诚。
奇迹源于行动：一个善举可以创造美好的结局。
Part 2 写作思路：搭建故事的“骨架”
Para1 Shaw decided to find out the author of the letter. He shared a photo of the note on Facebook. He also......
①动作描写：Shaw积极的寻求社会各界的帮助
②③给予反馈：报纸网络等各方面都被这个故事所打动，积极提供各种消息
④心理描写：Shaw认真地筛选着每一条有用的消息，期盼能找到答案
⑤衔接句：直到有一天.....
怎么找？
找谁？
效果如何？
Part 2 写作思路：搭建故事的“骨架”
A great surprise was on the way.After a pleasant chat,
①心理描写：找到了一个名叫David的老人，激动喜悦涌上心头
②③给予反馈：David非常惊讶，6岁时的愿望（呼应原文）得到了来自一个陌生人的回应
④心理动作描写：俩人见面拥抱，Shaw带来了那些清单上的礼物，David感动落泪
⑤衔接句：升华情感—世间的善良是最好的圣诞礼物
Part 4 语言宝库：点亮故事的“血肉”
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二级
三级
四级
五级
心理描写 动作描写 对话描写
紧张焦虑 感动：was deeply touched by... - Tears welled up in his eyes. 惊讶 astonished made every effort to... track down the owner spread the word With a trembling voice, he recalled...
- "It's a small world!"
- The real magic lies not in..., but in...
范文欣赏
Shaw decided to find out the author of the letter. He shared a photo of the note on Facebook. He also felt a strong urge to do more. Without hesitation, he contacted the local newspaper, describing the touching discovery. He anxiously checked his phone every few hours, hoping for any clue from the online community. Touched by the boy's simple wishes, countless strangers joined the search, their collective hope creating a warm current online. Shaw carefully screened every piece of information he received, his heart filled with anticipation that the owner of this precious memory could be found. The days of waiting felt incredibly long. Just as he was beginning to worry that the trail had gone cold, a breakthrough arrived.
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A great surprise was on the way. After a pleasant chat, with an elderly man who believed he was the David, Shaw's heart raced with excitement. When he heard the old man accurately recall the contents of the letter over the phone, a wave of indescribable joy and accomplishment washed over him. David was utterly astonished. Holding the phone tightly, his voice slightly choked with emotion, he confessed that he had never imagined a wish from his six-year-old self would receive a response decades later, and from a kind stranger. They arranged a meeting. When Shaw arrived at David's home, holding a carefully wrapped replica of the Rupert Annual and other small gifts from the list, the moment they met, the two men, from different generations, shared a heartfelt hug without any hesitation. Upon seeing the gifts, David's eyes welled up with tears. He gently stroked the cover of the letter, as if touching his long-lost childhood, too moved to speak. In that moment, they both understood that the greatest Christmas miracle was not the gifts themselves, but the incredible kindness that connects human hearts, which is the most precious gift of all.
THANK YOU
YOUR LOGO
读后续写：
一封穿越时空的圣诞信
如何续写一个温暖人心的故事
学习目标
01
解读文本：深度挖掘给定材料的核心立意与情感基调。
02
理清思路：掌握读后续写的逻辑框架与情节设计方法
03
实战演练：学习高级表达，并赏析范文，完成写作升华。
Christmas was hanging around, Six-year-old David was thinking what presents hecould get from Santa, He wanted slippers; he wanted a silk tie; he wanted some toys. And school starting soon, he also hoped to get something about schooling. In order to get Santato know what he needed, he thought he would write a letter to Santa, which he believedwould bring him those presents. He found a sheet and made a list of the items on it, andthen bent down to post the letter up the chimney, waiting for the winds to take it up.David got up very early on the Christmas morning, He searched his room carefully,but to his disappointment, he didn't find the presents he had hoped for. Hadn't Santareceived the letter Was he too busy to send him the gifts Although feeling a little upset,David was convinced that Santa would not forget him and he was bound to receive the items.Many years had passed and 2019 came, In an old house, a young builder, Lewis Shawwas removing the fireplace with his colleagues when he suddenly found a small piece ofPaper, which was still in perfect condition even if it had turned yellow, He picked it up and unfolded it, It was a letter written to Santa, The touching hand-written note read:
Dear Father Christmas,
Please send me Rupert Annual, a drum, a box of chalks, slippers, a silk tie, a pencil box, any little toys you have to spare.
Love,
David
It was then signed off with lots of kisses.This was the very letter written by David and the house was where he had lived duringhis childhood! The letter struck Shaw so much, How simple Christmas once was! Daviddidn't ask for much, just the things he needed, Nowadays kids always want expensive giftsand take it for granted.
Part 1 文本解读：抓住故事的“灵魂”
Who：
What:
David and Shaw
David年少时写给圣诞老人的present sheet 一直没有得到回音。
Shaw 捡到了一个泛黄的信封里面写着一个present sheet，非常受到触动。
Part 1 文本解读：抓住故事的“灵魂”
核心主题是什么？
温情与传承：一封信连接过去与现在，展现情感的延续。
纯真与感恩：对比过去简单的愿望与当下的物质化，呼唤真诚。
奇迹源于行动：一个善举可以创造美好的结局。
Part 2 写作思路：搭建故事的“骨架”
Para1 Shaw decided to find out the author of the letter. He shared a photo of the note on Facebook. He also......
①动作描写：Shaw积极的寻求社会各界的帮助
②③给予反馈：报纸网络等各方面都被这个故事所打动，积极提供各种消息
④心理描写：Shaw认真地筛选着每一条有用的消息，期盼能找到答案
⑤衔接句：直到有一天.....
怎么找？
找谁？
效果如何？
Part 2 写作思路：搭建故事的“骨架”
A great surprise was on the way.After a pleasant chat,
①心理描写：找到了一个名叫David的老人，激动喜悦涌上心头
②③给予反馈：David非常惊讶，6岁时的愿望（呼应原文）得到了来自一个陌生人的回应
④心理动作描写：俩人见面拥抱，Shaw带来了那些清单上的礼物，David感动落泪
⑤衔接句：升华情感—世间的善良是最好的圣诞礼物
Part 4 语言宝库：点亮故事的“血肉”
单击此处编辑母版文本样式
二级
三级
四级
五级
心理描写 动作描写 对话描写
紧张焦虑 感动：was deeply touched by... - Tears welled up in his eyes. 惊讶 astonished made every effort to... track down the owner spread the word With a trembling voice, he recalled...
- "It's a small world!"
- The real magic lies not in..., but in...
范文欣赏
Shaw decided to find out the author of the letter. He shared a photo of the note on Facebook. He also felt a strong urge to do more. Without hesitation, he contacted the local newspaper, describing the touching discovery. He anxiously checked his phone every few hours, hoping for any clue from the online community. Touched by the boy's simple wishes, countless strangers joined the search, their collective hope creating a warm current online. Shaw carefully screened every piece of information he received, his heart filled with anticipation that the owner of this precious memory could be found. The days of waiting felt incredibly long. Just as he was beginning to worry that the trail had gone cold, a breakthrough arrived.
单击此处编辑母版标题样式
A great surprise was on the way. After a pleasant chat, with an elderly man who believed he was the David, Shaw's heart raced with excitement. When he heard the old man accurately recall the contents of the letter over the phone, a wave of indescribable joy and accomplishment washed over him. David was utterly astonished. Holding the phone tightly, his voice slightly choked with emotion, he confessed that he had never imagined a wish from his six-year-old self would receive a response decades later, and from a kind stranger. They arranged a meeting. When Shaw arrived at David's home, holding a carefully wrapped replica of the Rupert Annual and other small gifts from the list, the moment they met, the two men, from different generations, shared a heartfelt hug without any hesitation. Upon seeing the gifts, David's eyes welled up with tears. He gently stroked the cover of the letter, as if touching his long-lost childhood, too moved to speak. In that moment, they both understood that the greatest Christmas miracle was not the gifts themselves, but the incredible kindness that connects human hearts, which is the most precious gift of all.
THANK YOU
YOUR LOGO