【期中考点培优】专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期中复习考点培优北师大版（2024）

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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册期中复习考点培优北师大版（2024）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．健康一直是人们关注的热点，中学生也应该关爱自己的健康。假如你是Li Hua，请根据提示用英语写一份演讲稿，谈谈你对健康方面的看法。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
How to Keep Healthy
Hello, everyone! Keeping healthy is very important for us. How should we keep healthy
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That’s all. Thank you very much.
2．假如你是Tom，你有一个美国的笔友 Jack，随着“双减”的落地，你的课余生活变得更加丰富。请根据以下表格信息内容给你的这个美国笔友写一封信，介绍你自己以及你的课余生活的变化。
In the past (过去) Now
shy more outgoing, more hard-working...
have much homework watch news, because ...
stay up late don’t have time to exercise… Football, three times a week go to bed early healthier...
注意：1. 词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入词数。
2. 内容必须包括表格中信息，可适当发挥。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter. My life also changes a lot.
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Yours,
Tom
3．当今世界，健康对人们越来越重要。同时，人们也比以前更加关注健康问题了。假如你是李华，你校广播站正在征集一些关于健康生活的文章，请你以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，根据以下图示，写一篇广播稿进行投稿。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Ways to Keep Healthy
As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.
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4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack发来电子邮件，询问你的运动爱好情况。请你根据以下要点提示给他回一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的一项运动。
要点如下：
1.你最喜欢的运动项目；
2.你喜欢该运动项目的原因；
3.你平时如何进行这项运动以及日后的打算。
要求：不少于80词；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
短语：an enjoyable thing a good way to... make me... build up confident (自信的) be going to... grow up
Dear Jack,
Glad to get your email! Now let me tell you about my favorite sport.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。
学校社团正在开展线上交流活动，其公众号计划推出一期以“Our favorite sports”为专题的英文介绍。请谈谈你和你的同学各自最喜欢的体育运动，你们喜欢的原因以及运动给你们带来的好处。提示词语：favorite, playing basketball, swimming, relaxing, exciting, be good for, fit, strong
提示问题：
What sports do you and your classmates like most
Why do you like these sports
What are the benefits (好处) of doing sports
Our Favorite Sports
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6．假设你是李小明，英文名是Bob，今年寒假要去参加冬令营（winter camp）活动。请根据下列提示，用英文写一篇自我介绍。
提示：
（1）来自南宁，每天吃大量水果、蔬菜，很少吃垃圾食品；
（2）你认为健康是最重要的，所以每周锻炼两次，例如踢足球、游泳等；
（3）好友Jim比你高，比你外向，喜欢看动作片；
（4）以后想当一名科学家，为此你要努力学习，取得好成绩。
要求：
（1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．陶行知曾说：“思想决定行动，行动养成习惯，习惯形成品质，品质决定命运。”本周你们班级将组织“良好习惯，伴其一生”主题班会。假如你是Billy，Danny是你的好朋友，他是个品学兼优的学生，为了号召同学们向他学习，请你根据下列表格提升介绍他的好习惯，并谈谈自己的看法。
休闲活动 每周锻炼三到四次；每天打扫自己的房间；周末经常帮助妈妈做家务……
学习习惯 每天阅读半小时；总是按时完成作业；从不熬夜（stay up late）……
饮食健康 经常吃水果和蔬菜；每天早上喝牛奶；几乎从不吃垃圾食品……
我的看法 好习惯很重要……
要求：1.表格的内容要全部包括，可适当发挥；
2.语句通畅，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.总词数：80-100词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假如你是李华，是个运动爱好者。你的英国笔友David想通过运动增强体质，希望你能给他推荐一个运动项目。请你用英文给他写一封回信，给他提出针对性的建议。
写作要点：
1. 运动项目的名称；
2. 做这项运动的好处（至少两个）；
3. 如何坚持这项运动（如制定计划；……）。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点信息；
2. 结构完整， 语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4. 文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5. 词数 80 左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：basketball, volleyball, exercise, plan
Dear David,
I’m very glad to hear that you’re going to take up a sport.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．根据所给的中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。
如今车辆越来越多，交通事故也频繁发生。我们应该怎样做才能避免交通事故，保证安全呢？请根据下面的写作要点，以“How to prevent traffic accidents”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
提示词语：accident, avoid, safe, prevent, advice
内容提示：
1. What may cause traffic accidents
2. How can we avoid traffic accidents
How to prevent traffic accidents
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10．为进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你所在的学校开展了以“How to Keep Safe”为主题的英语演讲比赛活动。请你根据表中提供的信息，写一篇演讲稿。
在家 不玩火；出门之前一定要确保把煤气、灯都关掉
在学校 不在教室里互相追逐；运动时，注意保护自己
在路上 遵守交通规则，如骑车时不要听音乐
其他 ……
写作要求：1.必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句连贯，词数100左右。
How to Keep Safe
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11．假如你是王伟，你的英国笔友David来信询问你们学校在暑假期间对学生在安全方面的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封信：
●家庭安全：小心用火用电，外出时关好门窗；
●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河里、湖里游泳；
●交通安全：过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Glad to receive your letter. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
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I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
12．假期临近，安全对于我们每个人都很重要。为进一步增强学生的安全意识，提高学生的自我保护能力，你校开展以“How to Keep Safe in Our Life ”为主题的英语演讲比赛，现面向同学们征稿。请根据以下提示内容，写一份英文演讲稿。
内容要点：
1. 校园安全：不在走廊奔跑，……
2.交通安全：遵守交通规则，……
4.其他…… (至少补充一点)。
要求：
1.80词左右，开头已给出，请书写至答题卡上，不计入总词数。
2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯，通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
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13．“道路千万条，安全第一条。行车不规范，亲人两行泪”。这是来自电影《流浪地球》中的经典台词。可见自觉遵守交通安全、保证自身交通安全，是作为一个公民的基本素质和要求。作为中学生，我们该如何做到保证自身在上下学路上的交通安全呢？请以“How to keep safe”为主题，根据以下提示完成一篇短文。
内容提示：
1. 自觉遵守交通规则，不在马路上玩耍打闹；
2. 在回家路上不与陌生人交谈，不乱买街边食品；
3. 按时回家，尽量做到绿色出行，如步行、骑自行车。
写作要求：
1. 可根据自己情况，适当增加内容，使文章通顺；
2. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
3. 词数100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to keep safe
As a student, it’s important to keep ourselves safe when going to school and going back home. Do you know how to keep safe
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14．“道路千万条，安全第一条。行车不规范，亲人两行泪”。这是来自电影《流浪地球》中的经典台词。可见自觉遵守交通安全、保证自身交通安全，是作为一个公民的基本素质和要求。作为中学生，我们该如何做到保证自身在上下学路上的交通安全呢？请以 “How to keep safe”为主题，根据以下提示完成一篇短文。
内容提示:
1. 自觉遵守交通规则，不在马路上玩耍打闹;
2. 在回家路上不与陌生人交谈，不乱买街边食品;
3. 按时回家，尽量做到绿色出行，如：步行、骑自行车。
写作要求:
1. 可根据自己情况，适当增加内容，使文章通顺;
2. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
3. 词数 100 左右 (开头已给出, 不计人总词数)。
How to keep safe
As a student, it’s important to keep ourselves safe when going to school and going back home. Do you know how to keep safe
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15．交通安全十分重要，它关系到每一个人的生命安全。现在，随着路上车辆的增多，交通事故频繁发生。那么，怎样做才能保证交通安全呢？请你根据下面的内容提示，以“How to prevent traffic accidents”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容提示：
1. 导致交通事故频发的原因；
2. 避免交通事故的做法（至少两种）；
3. 你的希望。
写作要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右。
How to prevent traffic accidents
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16．假设你是Lily，你的好友Tom注意到你最近因数学考试失利而情绪低落。他写信鼓励你，并询问你打算如何调整心态。请你以Lily的身份，给Tom写一封回信。
提示词语：anxious (焦虑的)，disappointed (失望的)，lose confidence (失去信心)，breathe deeply (深呼吸)，set small goals (设定小目标)
内容提示：
·描述你当前的负面情绪(焦虑、自我怀疑)；
·说明这些情绪对你的影响(失眠、回避朋友)；
·分享你尝试过的方法(如写日记、与家人聊天)；
·请Tom 给出建议。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Lily
17．升入八年级后很多同学学习和交友方面的精神压力加大，深感焦虑。为了引导他们关注心理健康，鼓励他们积极面对压力，学会良好的缓解方法。请你以How to deal with our stress and worry为题，根据以下要点提示，写一份英文发言稿。
写作要点：
1. 引发同学们压力焦虑的原因(学习和交友)。
2. 过度压力焦虑带来的危害。
3. 提出缓解压力焦虑的方法(至少3点)，并希望一切得以解决。
写作要求：
1. 内容完整，语法正确，篇章连贯，段落清晰，书写工整；
2. 必须包括要点中所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 不得使用本人真实姓名和校名等；
4. 80—90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to deal with our stress and worry
Good morning, my dear classmates and friends. It’s my honor to speak here, and today my topic is how to deal with our stress and worry.
It’s not easy being our age...
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
18．班级将举办英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图，以“How to Be Happy”为主题，写一篇70词左右的演讲稿。开头已经给出 （不计入总词数）。
要求：
1. 短文应条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息；
3. 短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
Good morning, everybody!
Today I want to talk about “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions.
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19．假如你是李华，期末考试后你将作为优秀学生代表在家长会上发言，讲述你自己的学习生活以及和老师、同学及家人的相处的方法。请根据以下要点写一篇英语发言稿，给同学和家长们一些好的建议。
要点：
1.学生应该制定适合自己的学习计划；
2.保持健康的饮食习惯，多进行体育锻炼；
3.在学校与老师、同学和睦相处。保持好的心情；
4.在家时，学生和家长要多沟通。同时家长不要给学生太多的压力。
要求：
1.文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，论点清晰，行文连贯，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等；
3.词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. I’m glad to give a talk here. Here are some suggestions I would like to make.
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20．大家都知道保持一份好心情有利于身心健康，也有助于学习。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Linda近来心情不佳。请你用英语写一封邮件，给她一些建议。
建议：
①take an active part in sports ②keep healthy eating habits
③communicate with your parents and teachers ④…
注意：可适当增加细节，条理清楚，行文连贯；短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I heard you were in a bad mood (情绪).
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Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
How to Keep Healthy
Hello, everyone! Keeping healthy is very important for us. How should we keep healthy
To begin with, we should keep a balanced diet by eating enough fruit and vegetables. Then, doing exercise often is necessary. For example, we can run or play ball games to stay fit. What’s more, we need healthy living habits, such as going to bed early and getting up early. Besides, we shouldn’t spend too much time on our phones. It’s bad for our eyes and wastes time. By following these steps, we can become stronger and happier.
That’s all. Thank you very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、先提出保持健康的重要性，引出话题；
第二步、根据提示，介绍如何保持健康，如：保持均衡的饮食、经常锻炼、健康的生活习惯以及不应该在手机上花太多时间；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①to begin with首先
②stay fit保持健康
③such as例如
[高分句型]
Keeping healthy is very important for us.(动名词作主语)
2．例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter. My life also changes a lot. In the past, I was shy and had much homework, so I often stayed up late and didn’t have time to exercise. But now, things are different. With the “Double Reduction” policy, I’m more outgoing and hard-working. I watch news to learn more about the world. I also play football three times a week and go to bed early. I’m becoming healthier and happier.
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信;
②时态：时态包含“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示：写作要点已通过表格形式给出，考生需涵盖过去和现在的课余生活对比，包括性格变化、作业量、作息习惯以及运动习惯等，并适当发挥以丰富内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“收到来信很高兴，并说明自己的生活也发生了很大变化”来引出下文要介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“性格变化、作业与学习、作息与运动习惯”等方面详细介绍过去和现在的课余生活对比；
第三步，书写结语。表达“期待Jack的回信或分享”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late 熬夜
②have time to do sth. 有时间做某事
③three times a week 一周三次
[高分句型]
①I was shy and had much homework, so I often stayed up late and didn’t have time to exercise.（因果关系连词so连接两个并列句）
②With the “Double Reduction” policy, I’m more outgoing and hard-working.（with复合结构作伴随状语）
3．例文
Ways to Keep Healthy
As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy.
First, we should develop good living habits. Going to bed early and getting up early can help us get enough rest. Second, we should do more exercise. Doing morning exercises or going for a run can make us strong. Third, we need to eat more fruit and vegetables to get enough vitamins. Finally, keeping a happy mind can reduce stress.
If we follow these ways, we will stay healthy and enjoy our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，介绍保持健康的方法；
第三步，号召大家遵循这些健康建议，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do需要做某事
②stay healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①Doing morning exercises or going for a run can make us strong.（动名词作主语）
②If we follow these ways, we will stay healthy and enjoy our lives.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．例文
Dear Jack,
Glad to get your email! Now let me tell you about my favorite sport.
My favorite sport is basketball. It’s an enjoyable thing for me. It’s a good way to help us keep healthy. I began to be interested in it when I was six. I learned to play it in a basketball club. With the help of the teachers there, now I can play it well. Being a member of our school basketball team, I play it three times a week after school with my teammates. We practice hard and our team wins a lot. Basketball not only makes me confident and relaxed but also builds me up. So I will keep playing it. Also, I’m going to be an excellent basketball player like Yao Ming when I grow up.
Which sport do you like best I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，需涵盖运动项目、喜欢的原因、日常活动及未来打算，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，引出下文；
第二步：介绍自己最喜欢的运动，喜欢的原因以及日常活动和打算；
第三步：结尾互动，询问对方爱好并表达期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①an enjoyable thing有趣的事
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③with the help of在……帮助下
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I began to be interested in it when I was six.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I’m going to be an excellent basketball player like Yao Ming when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文
Our Favorite Sports
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my favorite sports with you.
My classmates and I like playing basketball and swimming. Playing basketball can not only cultivate our team spirit, but also cultivate our patience. By swimming, we can keep healthy and ensure our safety when we are trapped in the water. Doing these exercises makes us strong and is good for our health. So as long as we have time after class, we will play basketball on the playground. At the same time, we’ll go swimming in the swimming pool.
I hope you also like doing sports, so you will be healthier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏要点，注意首字母大小写及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，想和大家分享最喜欢的运动;
第二步，具体阐述你和同学最喜欢的运动是什么，为什么喜欢以及运动的好处;
第三步，呼吁大家都做运动。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③keep healthy保持健康
④be good for对……有益
⑤at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①Doing these exercises makes us strong and is good for our health. (动名词作主语)
②So as long as we have time after class, we will play basketball on the playground. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
6．One possible version：
I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you. I am Li Xiaoming. My English name is Bob. I come from Nanning. I eat lots of fruit and vegetables every day and hardly ever eat junk food. I think the most important thing is to keep healthy. So I exercise twice a week, such as playing football, going swimming, riding bikes and so on. My good friend Jim is taller and more outgoing than me. And he likes action movies. In the future, I want to be a scientist. So I must study hard and get good grades. I feel lucky to join you. I hope that we can be good friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：需涵盖所有给定信息点（饮食、健康习惯、好友对比、未来理想），并合理拓展衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用已给模板句引入，介绍姓名和英文名；
第二步，说明家乡和健康生活习惯；
第三步，对比好友Jim的性格爱好；
第四步，阐述未来理想及努力方向，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① hardly ever几乎不
② keep healthy保持健康
③ get good grades取得好成绩
[高分句型]
I think the most important thing is to keep healthy.（宾语从句）
7．
Danny is my good friend. He is 14 years old, and he has a lot of good habits.
He exercises three or four times a week. He is in good health. His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. On the weekend, he often helps his mother with housework. He enjoys reading a lot. He reads books for half an hour every night. He always finishes his homework on time. And he never stays up. He thinks getting enough sleep is necessary for students. What’s more, he often eats fruit and vegetables. He drinks milk every morning. He hardly ever eats junk food. He has a very healthy lifestyle.
I think it’s important for us to develop good habits. They can help us get good grades and live happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从休闲活动、学习习惯以及饮食健康等方面介绍Danny 的好习惯，并谈谈自己的看法。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①in good health身体健康
②help sb with sth帮某人做某事
③get enough sleep得到充足的睡眠
④stays up熬夜
[高分句型]
①His room is very tidy because he cleans it every day. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think it’s important for us to develop good habits. (宾语从句)
8．One possible version:
Dear David,
I’m very glad to hear that you’re going to take up a sport. Would you like to try running I think it is really a good sport for you to keep healthy. It can not only make you stronger but also help you relax. When you feel worried, running is a good way to help you to be calm again.
If you choose running, you need to keep doing it. First, you should make a plan because the plan can help you remember to run every day. Second, you can find more friends to run with you. In this way running will be more interesting.
These are my suggestions. I hope you will be stronger and happier by keeping doing sports.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作要点”中的如何坚持这项运动的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向David推荐一项运动并介绍这项运动的好处；
第二步，告诉David如何坚持这项运动；
第三步，书写结语，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②not only...but also...不但……而且……
③make a plan制定计划
[高分句型]
①When you feel worried, running is a good way to help you to be calm again.（when引导的时间状语从句；动名词作主语）
②If you choose running, you need to keep doing it.（If引导的条件状语从句）
③I hope you will be stronger and happier by keeping doing sports.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．参考范文
How to prevent traffic accidents
Now there are more and more vehicles on the road. At the same time, some people are careless and don’t always follow the traffic rules when they are on the road. That’s why many accidents happen every year. As students, how can we keep safe when we’re on the road
First, we mustn’t play on the road. It’s quite dangerous. Second, we must watch the traffic signals and look around when we cross the road. Don’t run across the road. Third, we must wear helmets when we ride bicycles.
I hope everyone can keep safe and never meet with any accident.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍交通事故发生的原因；
第二步，介绍我们应该怎样做才能避免交通事故；
第三步，书写结语，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①follow the traffic rules遵守交通规则
②traffic signals交通信号
③look around环顾四周
[高分句型]
①At the same time, some people are careless and don’t always follow the traffic rules when they are on the road. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②That’s why many accidents happen every year. (why引导的表语从句)
10．
参考范文
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share my ideas on how to keep safe here.
First, when you are at home, don’t play with fire and make sure you turn off the gas and all the lights before you go out. Second, while you are at school, it is dangerous to run after each other in the classroom. At the same time, you should pay attention to protecting yourself while doing sport. Third, once you are in the street, traffic rules should be obeyed all the time. For example, it’s wrong of you to listen to music while riding a bike. Besides, you mustn’t go swimming alone. You can go with an adult if you really want to go swimming. If all these are kept in mind, you will stay away from danger and live a safer life.
That's all for my speech! Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍如何保证安全，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍如何保证安全，适当增加细节。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关闭
②run after追逐
③stay away from远离
[高分句型]
①First, when you are at home, don’t play with fire and make sure you turn off the gas and all the lights before you go out. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If all these are kept in mind, you are sure to stay away from danger and enjoy a much safer life.(if引导的条件状语从句)
11．例文
Dear David,
Glad to receive your letter. Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. Let me tell you something about them.
When we are at home, we must be careful of electricity and fire. We should close the door and windows before we leave home. We mustn’t go swimming alone. We mustn’t swim in rivers or lakes. If we really want to go swimming, we can go to the swimming pool with our parents or friends. What’s more, following traffic rules is also very important. Everyone should watch the traffic lights when crossing the road. And our teacher warns us not to play on the road.
I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.
Have a good summer holiday!
Yours,
Wang Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍学校在暑假期间对学生在安全方面的要求，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，从家庭安全、游泳安全、交通安全详细介绍学校对学生在安全方面的要求。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be careful of小心
②alone独自
③traffic rules交通规则
[高分句型]
①When we are at home, we must be careful of electricity and fire. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we really want to go swimming, we can go to the swimming pool with our parents or friends. (if引导的条件状语从句)
12．例文
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
First, school safety is important. We mustn’t run in the hallways. Also, we should be careful not to crowd in front of the stairs to avoid accidents. Second, traffic safety matters a lot. Always follow the traffic rules. For example, look at traffic lights when crossing the street and never play on the road. Finally, remember other safety rules. Don’t eat food that looks or smells bad. Also, be careful when using electricity at home and don’t play with fire.
In a word, safety must come first. Let’s all be careful every day. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，从校园安全、交通安全等方面介绍如何保持安全；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in front of在……前面
②for example例如
③play with fire玩火
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①For example, look at traffic lights when crossing the street and never play on the road. (and连接的并列句)
②Don’t eat food that looks or smells bad. (that引导的定语从句)
13．例文
How to keep safe
As a student, it’s important to keep ourselves safe when going to school and going back home. Do you know how to keep safe Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should follow the traffic rules while we are walking on the streets. Don’t play with friends on the streets. It’s too dangerous. Second, it is unsafe to talk with strangers on our way home. If we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating snacks sold on the sidewalk will do harm to our health. Finally, try to get home on time. We’d better travel by bike or on foot, because it’s good for our environment.
In short, safety must come first!
【总体分析】① 题材：材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时（主要描述日常行为和习惯）；
③ 提示：围绕上下学交通安全展开，需包含遵守交通规则、避免与陌生人交谈、绿色出行等内容。
【写作步骤】第一步：点明主题，强调交通安全的重要性。
第二步：分3点说明具体做法（对应题干提示）。
第三步：呼吁行动，强化安全意识。
【亮点词汇】①in danger处于危险之中
②ought to应当应该
【高分句型】①Second, it is unsafe to talk with strangers on our way home.（it固定句型，“it is+形容词+to do sth.”，表示“做某事是……样的”）
②If we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time. （if条件状语从句）
14．例文：
How to keep safe
As a student, it’s important to keep ourselves safe when going to school and going back home. Do you know how to keep safe
First, we must obey traffic rules. Never play or run on the road. Always use crosswalks and wait for green lights. This helps avoid accidents.
Second, don’t talk to strangers on the way home. Also, avoid buying street food as it might be unclean and make you sick. Safety comes first!
Third, go home on time. Choose green travel ways like walking or cycling. They keep us healthy and protect the environment too.
Remember, safety is everyone’s responsibility. By following these steps, we can protect ourselves and make our journeys safer every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生需涵盖交通规则、陌生人及食品安全、绿色出行等内容，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明上、下学途中安全的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分三点说明如何保证安全 (遵守交规、防范陌生人及不洁食品、绿色出行)；
第三步，书写结语。强调安全的重要性并总结建议。
[亮点词汇]
①obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则
②avoid accidents 避免事故
③safety comes first 安全第一
④green travel ways 绿色出行方式
⑤protect the environment 保护环境
[高分句型]
① Always use crosswalks and wait for green lights. (祈使句表建议)
② Also, avoid buying street food as it might be unclean and make you sick. (as引导原因状语从句)
③ By following these steps, we can protect ourselves and make our journeys safer every day. (by doing结构表方式)
15．例文
How to prevent traffic accidents
Nowadays, traffic accidents happen frequently due to various reasons. The main causes include speeding, drunk driving, and not following traffic rules. To prevent these accidents, we should take action immediately.
First, drivers must obey traffic laws strictly. For example, they should never drive after drinking alcohol or run red lights. Second, pedestrians should also pay attention to safety. They must cross the road at zebra crossings and avoid using phones while walking.
I hope everyone can realize the importance of traffic safety. If we all follow the rules, the roads will become much safer. Let’s work together to reduce accidents and protect lives!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明交通事故频发的背景及主要原因（超速、酒驾、违规）；
第二步，提出两种具体预防措施（司机守法、行人注意安全）；
第三步，表达希望，呼吁共同行动。
[亮点词汇]
①due to由于，因为
②take action采取行动
③avoid doing sth.避免做某事
[高分句型]
①I hope everyone can realize the importance of traffic safety.（宾语从句）
②If we all follow the rules, the roads will become much safer.（if引导的条件状语从句）
16．例文:
Dear Tom,
Thank you for caring about me. To be honest, I’ve been anxious since failing the maths exam. I feel disappointed in myself and even lose confidence. What’s worse, I can’t sleep well and avoid friends now. I tried writing diaries and talking to Mom, but it’s still hard. Could you give me some advice Maybe ways to relax or study better I’m ready to try anything!
Yours,
Lily
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“描述你当前的负面情绪”、“说明这些情绪对你的影响”以及“分享你尝试过的方法”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，请Tom 给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①thank sb for doing sth 感谢某人做了某事
②care about关心
③to be honest说实话
④disappointed失望的
⑤lose confidence丢失信心
⑥what’s worse更糟糕的是
⑦try doing sth尝试做某事
⑧talk to sb和某人交谈
⑨give sb sth给某人某物
⑩be ready to do sth准备做某事
[高分句型]
①Thank you for caring about me. (祈使句)
②I tried writing diaries and talking to Mom, but it’s still hard. (并列句)
17．例文
How to deal with our stress and worry
Good morning, my dear classmates and friends. It’s my honor to speak here, and today my topic is how to deal with our stress and worry.
It’s not easy being our age. In Grade Eight, we have more subjects and harder exams. Making new friends is also difficult. Too much stress makes us tired, sad and unable to sleep. It even hurts our bodies and minds.
There are some suggestions. First, talk to parents or teachers—they’ll always help. Second, do sports like running or playing basketball to relax. Third, listen to music or read books when we feel down.
I believe if we follow these suggestions, our stress and worry will slowly go away.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍引发同学们压力焦虑的原因；
第二步：指出过度压力焦虑带来的危害；
第三步：提出缓解压力焦虑的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②too much太多
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
①I believe if we follow these suggestions, our stress and worry will slowly go away. (省略that的宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句)
18．例文
Good morning, everybody!
Today I want to talk about “How to Be Happy”. The following are my suggestions.
First of all, it’s important to keep healthy. Without good health, we will have nothing. So we should form good life habits, eat good food and try our best to take exercise every day. Next, we should have some hobbies. When we have hobbies, we can spend our free time doing things we like. And our life will be busy but meaningful. Finally, I think happiness springs from helping others. When we help those in trouble, we must know what we can do and who we can help. I believe that if we do so, we can have a happy life.
That’s what I want to share with you. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于文章开头已给出，故接下来具体阐述如何使人快乐；
第二步，提出让人快乐的建议；
第三步，表达对听众的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先，起初
②keep healthy保持健康
③spring from起源于，来自
④in trouble处于困境中
[高分句型]
①When we have hobbies, we can spend our free time doing things we like. (when引导的时间状语从句，省略了that/which的定语从句)
②I believe that if we do so, we can have a happy life. (that引导的宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句)
19．例文
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua. I’m glad to give a talk here. Here are some suggestions I would like to make. First, I think it is necessary for us to make a suitable study plan. A good study plan helps improve efficiency. Second, we should have a healthy eating habit and take more exercise. Third, at school, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates. We should stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. Finally, at home, we should talk with our parents more often. We need their support. At the same time, I think our parents shouldn’t give us too much pressure.
That’s all I want to say. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干要求展开内容，注意语言简洁、逻辑清晰，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开场问候并引入主题；
第二步，给出自己的建议；
第三步，结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with与……和睦相处
②stay in a good mood保持好心情
③too much太多
[高分句型]
①I think it is necessary for us to make a suitable study plan.（宾语从句）
②If we are in good spirits, we can study better.（if引导条件状语从句）
20．例文：
Dear Linda,
I heard you were in a bad mood. As we know, keeping a good mood is good for our health and study. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, you can take an active part in sports. For example, you can go swimming or running in your free time. Next, you should keep healthy eating habits. Usually you can eat fruit and vegetables instead of too much meat. When you have problems, you can communicate with your parents and teachers. What’s more, we should get on well with our classmates. We know helping others is helping ourselves. Finally, you can do some volunteer activities. You can help the old and clean their homes, sing some songs to cheer them up and so on.
I wish you good health.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，是一封邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括参加体育活动、保持健康饮食习惯、与父母和老师沟通等建议，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当发挥，使内容更加丰富和连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，即听到Linda心情不佳，想要给出一些建议来帮助她改善心情。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容，依照提示信息的要点，逐一给出建议。
第三步：书写结语，表达希望Linda能够采纳这些建议，改善心情，并祝愿她身体健康。
[亮点词汇]
①take an active part in积极参加
②keep healthy eating habits保持健康的饮食习惯
③communicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①As we know, keeping a good mood is good for our health and study. (动名词短语作主语)
②When you have problems, you can communicate with your parents and teachers. (when引导时间状语从句)
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