2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写课件(共30张PPT,内镶嵌视频)

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名称 2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写课件(共30张PPT,内镶嵌视频)
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(共30张PPT)
Continuation Writing
读后续写
重生之我是编剧
上一世,你只是一个酷爱追剧的小孩;
看得正高兴的时候,
什么!编剧居然把你最爱的角色写死了!
什么!编剧居然把你最磕的cp拆散了!
一气之下,一口气没过来,
还好重生一世,你变成了一个编剧;
这一次你要夺回你的一切......
假如你是一个编剧,
那么,读后续写对你来说,
等同于丢给你一个没写完的剧本,让你创作
初识读后续写-----是什么
读后续写:提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生根据所提供的 和 进行续写;词数要求: ,将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
通过阅读原文、思考剧本,利用语言描写、动作描写、心理描写、环境描写等等,推动故事情节发展,完成续写
方法:十句五定法(续写10句,有5句可固定)
材料内容
两段开头语
150 词左右
On Saturday morning, Dad promised to take Nathan and Alex to his office, and then to have dinner nearby that evening. Alex got up early in the morning, put on his red sportswear and looked in the mirror again and again. A happy little boy in red sportswear was reflected (映出) in the mirror.
It was just before seven when the two brothers, who had been at the office all the day, decided to take a walk. Then the boys stepped into the dim (昏暗的) hall. Suddenly, Alex jumped back into the break room, asking quietly “Didn’t Dad say we were the only people here ”
“No one else is here, Alex,” his brother said. “Why are you in such a low voice ”
Alex said, “There was someone standing at the end of the hall looking at us. I think he was watching us!”
Nathan sighed (叹气). His little brother could be a real pain sometimes, especially when his imagination ran wild. But Nathan decided that he would agree with Alex just to try to calm him down. Nathan found a pencil and a notebook. “Why don’t you sit down and tell me what this guy looked like ” he suggested.
“He was huge and dressed all in red! And he was really bad-looking, with eyes that looked like they were on fire!” Alex said.
Something Alex said made Nathan a little doubtful. “Let me take a look,” he said.
Slowly, the brothers stepped toward the doorway. When Nathan saw a movement at the far end of the hall, he didn’t even stop to see what the person looked like.
“Run, Alex!” Nathan cried, holding his brother’s hand and raced down the hallway.
“What’s going on, boys ” Dad asked.
Nathan and Alex started talking at the same time. Both boys were breathless, but they told Dad about the man down the hall.
“And you said this man was really huge ” Dad asked. Alex nodded. “Well then, let’s go and take a look,” Dad said.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Even with their father along, the boys felt quite nervous.
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There, in the mirror, Alex saw another Alex looking at him.
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350词左右的语言材料
未完成的剧本
两段开头语
the 6 basic elements
6大要素:who; when; where; what; why; how
主要目的the main idea
vocabulary sentence 词汇 句型
structure linking words, 结构 连接词
the plot and feeling情节和感受
the tense时态
the main character主要人物
the style写作风格
语言生动,高级
完成一篇“剧本”的基本步骤
写剧本---整洁书写
be full and attractive情节完整 有吸引力
读剧本---审题
思剧本---构思情节
合理的情节
1.原文
2.读两段提示语
读后续写-----如何应对
找出主角人物、主要情节和冲突、情感变化
“剧本”写作指南
三大原则
01原文一致原则
 内容要前后衔接,上下连贯
语言表达风格一致。
03曲折性原则
 凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏,其中人物会遇到困难或问题,但最终能解决。
02正能量原则
 故事内容一定要正能量,弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家;失败了或遇到困难了,但最终一定成功了;吵架了但最后一定是言归于好,和睦相处;犯错了,最后一定会改过自新,重新做人;贼逃了,最后一定是绳之以法,等等。
主题
人与社会
人与自我
人与自然
(温情或化险为夷的故事,表达人间有真情、大爱)
(主角的自我发展、变化或成长)
(人与动物或自然和谐相处)
Part One
读剧本
读剧本之找人
主角+配角
Who are in the story
On Saturday morning, Dad promised to take Nathan and Alex to his office, and then to have dinner nearby that evening. Alex got up early in the morning, put on his red sportswear and looked in the mirror again and again. A happy little boy in red sportswear was reflected (映出) in the mirror.
It was just before seven when the two brothers, who had been at the office all the day, decided to take a walk. Then the boys stepped into the dim (昏暗的) hall. Suddenly, Alex jumped back into the break room, asking quietly “Didn’t Dad say we were the only people here ”
“No one else is here, Alex,” his brother said. “Why are you in such a low voice ”
Alex said, “There was someone standing at the end of the hall looking at us. I think he was watching us!”
Nathan sighed (叹气). His little brother could be a real pain sometimes, especially when his imagination ran wild. But Nathan decided that he would agree with Alex just to try to calm him down. Nathan found a pencil and a notebook. “Why don’t you sit down and tell me what this guy looked like ” he suggested.
“He was huge and dressed all in red! And he was really bad-looking, with eyes that looked like they were on fire!” Alex said.
Something Alex said made Nathan a little doubtful. “Let me take a look,” he said.
Slowly, the brothers stepped toward the doorway. When Nathan saw a movement at the far end of the hall, he didn’t even stop to see what the person looked like.
“Run, Alex!” Nathan cried, holding his brother’s hand and raced down the hallway.
“What’s going on, boys ” Dad asked.
Nathan and Alex started talking at the same time. Both boys were breathless, but they told Dad about the man down the hall.
“And you said this man was really huge ” Dad asked. Alex nodded. “Well then, let’s go and take a look,” Dad said.
Even with their father along, the boys felt quite nervous.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
There, in the mirror, Alex saw another Alex looking at him.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
读剧本之找时间
When did/does the story happen
决定续写需要用的主要时态
On Saturday morning, Dad promised to take Nathan and Alex to his office, and then to have dinner nearby that evening. Alex got up early in the morning, put on his red sportswear and looked in the mirror again and again. A happy little boy in red sportswear was reflected (映出) in the mirror.
It was just before seven when the two brothers, who had been at the office all the day, decided to take a walk. Then the boys stepped into the dim (昏暗的) hall. Suddenly, Alex jumped back into the break room, asking quietly “Didn’t Dad say we were the only people here ”
“No one else is here, Alex,” his brother said. “Why are you in such a low voice ”
Alex said, “There was someone standing at the end of the hall looking at us. I think he was watching us!”
Nathan sighed (叹气). His little brother could be a real pain sometimes, especially when his imagination ran wild. But Nathan decided that he would agree with Alex just to try to calm him down. Nathan found a pencil and a notebook. “Why don’t you sit down and tell me what this guy looked like ” he suggested.
“He was huge and dressed all in red! And he was really bad-looking, with eyes that looked like they were on fire!” Alex said.
Something Alex said made Nathan a little doubtful. “Let me take a look,” he said.
Slowly, the brothers stepped toward the doorway. When Nathan saw a movement at the far end of the hall, he didn’t even stop to see what the person looked like.
“Run, Alex!” Nathan cried, holding his brother’s hand and raced down the hallway.
“What’s going on, boys ” Dad asked.
Nathan and Alex started talking at the same time. Both boys were breathless, but they told Dad about the man down the hall.
“And you said this man was really huge ” Dad asked. Alex nodded. “Well then, let’s go and take a look,” Dad said.
Tense:_____________
simple past tense(一般过去时)
读剧本之找事
情节 主题
What happened
Events (What happened)
Dad promised to take Nathan and Alex to his office. Alex put on his red sportswear and looked in the mirror again and again
Alex said, “There was someone standing at the end of the hall looking at us. I think he was watching us!”
the two brothers decided to take a walk, they stepped into the dim (昏暗的) hall
Nathan saw a movement at the far end of the hall, he didn’t even stop to see what the person looked like. “Run, Alex!” Nathan cried, holding his brother’s hand and raced down the hallway.
“He was huge and dressed all in red! And he was really bad-looking, with eyes that looked like they were on fire!” Alex said.
Which is the theme
A. an interesting story
B. a warm-hearted(热心的) boy
C. a family tragedy(悲剧)
D. a strange(奇怪的) and scary thing
Alex said, “There was someone standing at the end of the hall looking at us. I think he was watching us!”
“He was huge and dressed all in red! And he was really bad-looking, with eyes that looked like they were on fire!” Alex said.
Nathan saw a movement at the far end of the hall, he didn’t even stop to see what the person looked like. “Run, Alex!” Nathan cried, holding his brother’s hand and raced down the hallway.
clue
线索
when
where
Saturday
night
Tense:_____________
simple past tense
office; dim
hall走廊
who
Nathan;Alex;
their dad
third person perspective
第三人称视角
开端begging
高峰
climax
结尾
ending
story mountain
上升情节
下降情节
Dad took Nathan and Alex to his office
the two brothers decided to take a walk
Alex said, “There was someone standing at the end of the hall looking at us. I think he was watching us!”
they ran back and told Dad about the man
“And you said this man was really huge ” Dad asked. Alex nodded. “Well then, let’s go and take a look,” Dad said.
故事线
Nathan:未提及
Alex: excited早起照镜子
情感线
boring、want to do sth
nervous
紧张的
breathless上气不接下气
scared感到害怕的
Part One
创作剧本
十句五定法
Para1
①接第一句所给内容
②调配演员,描写情绪(可有对话)
③动作/环境/语言
④关键情节
⑤接第二段的第一句(从第二段第一句倒推)
Para2
①接第二段第一句所给内容
②关键情节(各个角色做什么)
③动作/环境/语言(可有对话)
④交代结局:问题解决(积极向上,符合价值观)
⑤点睛升华:价值观/感叹/谚语
已知信息
Tip 1: 由已知信息推理未知信息
Given information
New information
新信息
Even with their father along, the boys felt quite nervous.
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There, in the mirror, Alex saw another Alex looking at him.
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1.再次回到现场(第一段首句)
5.发现其实是一个镜子(第一段尾句)
已知信息
新信息
注意:第二段开头应与第一段尾句有联系
1.原来看到的人是他自己(第二段首句)
Even with their father along, the boys felt quite nervous.
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1.他们跟着爸爸又去了那个走廊(hall)(第一段首句)
Para.1
2.两个男孩很害怕,两人分别拉着爸爸的手或思考问题
3.路上互相交流,问爸爸到底怎么回事,爸爸安慰
4.到了走廊,爸爸让他们再次查看,他们感到害怕不敢去
5.两人鼓起勇气走到尽头,发现是一个镜子(从下一段倒推)
Thinking for the ending
Para.2
There, in the mirror, Alex saw another Alex looking at him.
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1.他意识到原来看到的人是他自己(结合段首句)
2.解释看错的原因:灯光昏暗,两人离得远
3.Alex尴尬地笑,Nathan和爸爸安慰他
4.他们知道了真相,放松下来(故事结局)
5.通过这件事他们认识到遇事要冷静思考(升华主旨)
范文赏析
Even with their father along, the boys felt quite nervous. Their hearts beat fast as they walked back down the dark hall. Alex held Dad’s hand tightly, looking worried. Nathan kept thinking about the red figure. “Don’t be afraid, boys,” Dad said. “We’ll see what’s there and make sure it’s okay.” He led them back to where they had last seen the man. Dad turned on a light. He looked around the corner to the end of the hall. Then he asked the boys to take a look. Suddenly, they seemed to know the truth-there was a mirror.
情绪感受、心理活动描写
动作描写
范文赏析
There, in the mirror, Alex saw another Alex looking at him. At that moment, Alex realized that one was himself. The mirror made him look different in the dim light. It was like there was another kid there! Dad smiled. “I guess both of you didn’t noticed the new mirror at the end of the hall.” Looking at the red sportswear on his body, Alex smiled embarrassedly. Dad put his hands on their shoulders. “Our minds can make us scared in the dark. But now we know the truth, and we can relax.” Through this experience,they realized that they should think calmly when faced problems.
情绪感受、心理活动描写
动作描写
语言、对话描写
情感升华
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