2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写课件(共30张PPT)

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名称 2026届高考英语二轮复习:读后续写课件(共30张PPT)
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(共30张PPT)
作文续写
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通读全文:提取写作要素
1.划出全文中出现的所有人物
2.划出所有的对话
3.划出重复词汇
4.划出涉及情绪、精神状态、心理活动词汇
续写中需要用到
可能是矛盾冲突点
续写中需要用到
升华需要
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阅读题目所给开头:提取写作思路
1.第一段续写:主人公与文中出现人物1-2的互动(7-8句):运用文中重复词汇信息、主人公的矛盾问题、人物2的作用。
2.第二段续写:主人公的情绪转变(1-2句),文中出现剩余人物感情变化(1-2句);最后升华(2-3句)直接照搬升华通用结尾句式)。
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结尾升华:通用句式
一、成长励志类
1、From this experience,I truly understood that every setback is a stepping -stone to growth.With unwavering determination,we can overcome any obstacle and emergestronger than ever.
这次经历中,我真正明白了每一次挫折都是 成长的垫 脚石。只要有坚定不移的决心,我们就能克服任何障碍,变得比以往更强大。
2、This journey taught me that the road to self-improvement is paved with continuous efforts.Only by constantly challenging ourselves can we break through our limits and reach new heights.
这次经历让我懂得,自我提升之路是由持续的努力铺就的。只有不断挑战自我,我们才能突破极限,达到新高度。
二、友情
1、Through this incident,I realized that a true friend is the one who stands by you through thick and thin.Their support and understanding are the most precious treasures in life.
通过这件事,我意识到真正的朋友是那个无论艰难困苦都伴在你身边的人。他们的支持和理解是生命中最珍贵的财富。
2、This unforgettable experience deepened our friendship.It made me understand that friendship is not just about having fun together,but also about sharing joys and sorrows,and growing together .
这次难忘的经历加深了我们的友谊。让我明白,友谊不仅仅是一起玩乐,更是分享喜悦与悲伤,共同成长。
三、家庭亲情
1、Home wasn't a place; it was the warmth of shared memories and unconditional acceptance.
家不是一个地方,而是共享的记忆和无条件接纳的温暖。
2、This family gathering made me cherish every moment spent with my relatives
more.I understood that the warmth of family is the most precious thing that
money can't buy.
这次家庭聚会让我更加珍惜与亲人共度的每一刻。我明白了家庭的温暖是金钱买不来的最珍贵的东西。
四、社会关爱
1、Witnessing this act of kindness,I was filled with warmth and realized that even a small act of love can have a profound impact on others. Let's spread love and make the world a better place.
目睹这一善举,我心中充满温暖,意识到即使是小小的爱的举动,也能对他人产生深远影响。让我们传递爱,让世界变得更美好。
2、This experience taught me that in society,we should care for and help each
other. Only by working together can we create a harmonious and warm community .
这次经历让我明白,在社会中我们应该相互关心和帮助。只有携手共进,才能创建一个和谐温暖的社会。
五、自然启示
1、As the sun dipped below the horizon, it painted the sky with hope-a reminder
that even the darkest night would fade.
夕阳西下,为天空涂上希望的色彩,仿佛在提醒:再深的黑夜也会结束。
2、Standing on the mountaintop,bath in the golden sunlight,I realized nature grandeur holds a profound lesson.It teaches us to respect life's rhythms, embrace its beauty,and cherish every fleeting moment on this earth.
站在山顶,沐浴在金色的阳光中,我意识到大自然的壮丽蕴含着深刻的启示。它教会我们尊重生命的节奏,欣赏它的美丽,并珍惜地球上每一个转瞬即逝的瞬间。
六、梦想追求
1、Despite the numerous obstacles I faced,this journey reaffirmed my belief that as long as we hold fast to our dreams and keep striving, the impossible can become possible.
尽管我面临着无数障碍,这段经历再次坚定了我的信念:只要我们紧紧抓住梦想,不断努力,不可能的事情也能成为可能。
2、This experience taught me that the pursuit of dreams is not a sprint but a marathon.It requires patience, dedication,and the courage to face setbacks with unwavering determination.
这次经历让我明白,追求梦想不是短跑,而是马拉松。它需要耐心、奉献,和以坚定不移的决心面对挫折的勇气。
七、道德反思
1、Every choice we made was a brick-building either a wall of selfishness or a bridge of compassion.
我们的每个选择都是一块砖——筑起自私的高墙,或搭成共情的桥梁。
2、This encounter served as a wake -up call,reminding me that every action we
take has consequences.We should think twice before making decisions and always
consider the impact on others.
这次遭遇给我敲响了警钟,提醒我我们的每一个行为都会产生后果。在做决定前应该三思而后行,始终考虑对他人的影响。
八、危机应对
1、Surviving this crisis,I learned that staying calm and rational in the face of adversity is crucial.A clear mind can find solutions even in the most desperate situations.
在这次危机中幸存下来后,我明白了在逆境 中保持冷静和理智至关重要。即使在最绝望的情况下,清醒的头脑也能找到解决办法。
2、This challenging experience demonstrated the power of unity.When we work together towards a common goal, we can overcome any obstacle,no matter how formidable it may seem.
这次充满挑战的经历展示了团结的力量。当我们为了共同的目标齐心协力时,就能克服任何障碍,无论它看起来多么艰巨。
九、感恩回馈
1、Reflecting on all the support I received,I felt an overwhelming sense of gratitude.I realized that we should never take kindness for granted and should always find ways to pay it forward.
回想起我得到的所有支持,我心中充满了感激之情。我意识到我们绝不能把别人的善意视为理所当然,而应该始终寻找机会将这份善意传递下去。
2、Gratitude wasn't just a word-it was the bread she shared with the hungry,the
time she gave to the lonely,and the silence she kept for the broken.
感恩不只是一个词——它是她与饥者分享的面包,赠予孤独者的时间,为心碎者保留的沉 默 。
十、希望憧憬
1、Standing on the threshold of a new chapter,hope surged within me like a gentle breeze.I knew that every new day held infinite possibilities waiting to be explored.
站在新篇章的起点,希望如微风般在我心 涌动。我知道每个新的一天都蕴含着无限的可能,等待我们去探索。
2、With a sense of anticipation,I looked forward to the future.I believed that with
hard work and a positive attitude,all my aspirations would surely come true.
带着期待的心情,我展望未来。我相信,只要努力奋斗、保持积极的心态,所有的愿望都一定会实现。
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练一练
Looking back at my life, I found that the most important event occurred when I was in 4th grade.
From the beginning of the semester, I started learning dancing every Saturday, but I didn’t do well in the first few months. Mrs. Smith, my dancing teacher, also my music teacher in my school, kept teaching me and helped me with every movement. But it always enhanced too slowly. I began to give up and canceled this class. A few days later, we had a music class at school. We sang songs while Mrs. Smith was playing piano. The beautiful melody suffused the whole classroom. Everyone was very earnest, looking up the teacher and following the rhythm. Although I was not good at sharing, I was singing really hard. All the things in this classroom seemed very harmonious.
We had a free class after singing. We just sat on our chairs and talked to each other. And Mrs. Smith started to talk about the school choir that she led very well.
I’ve seen some members before, who are excellent and graceful. I was imagining if one day I join in the school choir that will be really awesome: we have competitions every month; we do great performance every time; we get popular in our school. Those were just my imagination. I don’t think one day I can be one of the dancers. Just then, Mrs. Smith said my name in the class, “Angelina was in my dancing class. She was really hard-working and tough. I hope she could rejoin in my class and practice more to be a member of the school choir.”
Everyone turned back and looked at me with amazed faces. I turned tomato red. Mrs. Smith was pleased to laugh. We had a really silent moment. And then the bell rang, the students began to leave. There’s a girl walking up to me with some of her friends. Her name is Carrie, who is a piano player and also recommended to join the school choir. She faced me, and said to her friends: “Do you think she can really join the school choir It’s unbelievable!” Her friends threw her a faint smile. I didn’t even react for this brief moment, and they left.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Within the time, I felt that there’s a strong force striking my pride. ______________
Paragraph 2:
Finally, because of my perseverance and efforts, I joined the school choir. ___________
1.划出全文中出现的所有人物
I 、Mrs Smith、Carrie and her friends
2.划出所有的对话
Mrs. Smith said my name in the class, “Angelina was in my dancing class. She was really hard-working and tough. I hope she could rejoin in my class and practice more to be a member of the school choir.”
She faced me, and said to her friends: “Do you think she can really join the school choir It’s unbelievable!”
3.划出重复词汇
the school choir
4.划出涉及情绪、精神状态、心理活动词汇
give up、 hard-working and tough、 unbelievable、 striking my pride、 perseverance and efforts
Looking back at my life, I found that the most important event occurred when I was in 4th grade.
From the beginning of the semester, I started learning dancing every Saturday, but I didn’t do well in the first few months. Mrs. Smith, my dancing teacher, also my music teacher in my school, kept teaching me and helped me with every movement. But it always enhanced too slowly. I began to give up and canceled this class. A few days later, we had a music class at school. We sang songs while Mrs. Smith was playing piano. The beautiful melody suffused the whole classroom. Everyone was very earnest, looking up the teacher and following the rhythm. Although I was not good at sharing, I was singing really hard. All the things in this classroom seemed very harmonious.
We had a free class after singing. We just sat on our chairs and talked to each other. And Mrs. Smith started to talk about the school choir that she led very well.
I’ve seen some members before, who are excellent and graceful. I was imagining if one day I join in the school choir that will be really awesome: we have competitions every month; we do great performance every time; we get popular in our school. Those were just my imagination. I don’t think one day I can be one of the dancers. Just then, Mrs. Smith said my name in the class, “Angelina was in my dancing class. She was really hard-working and tough. I hope she could rejoin in my class and practice more to be a member of the school choir.”
Everyone turned back and looked at me with amazed faces. I turned tomato red. Mrs. Smith was pleased to laugh. We had a really silent moment. And then the bell rang, the students began to leave. There’s a girl walking up to me with some of her friends. Her name is Carrie, who is a piano player and also recommended to join the school choir. She faced me, and said to her friends: “Do you think she can really join the school choir It’s unbelievable!” Her friends threw her a faint smile. I didn’t even react for this brief moment, and they left.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Within the time, I felt that there’s a strong force striking my pride. ______________
Paragraph 2:
Finally, because of my perseverance and efforts, I joined the school choir. ___________
1.第一段续写:主人公与文中出现人物1-2的互动
2.第二段续写:主人公的情绪转变,文中出现剩余人物感情变化;最后升华。
续写构思
Paragraph 1:
Within the time, I felt that there’s a strong force striking my pride.
1.结合首句承接原文;2.主人公“我”的努力改变过程+Mrs Smith的作用;3.结尾我的进步引出下文
Paragraph 2:
Finally, because of my perseverance and efforts, I joined the school choir.
1.主人公“我”的情绪转变;2.Carrie和her friends的感情变化;3.升华。
一、注意字数分配,避免过于细节、啰嗦导致字数超标
1.每段写7-8句左右,合计70-80词;两段合计150词。
2.第一段:承接上文1-2句;主人公的努力过程3-4句;其他人物描写1-2句;
3.第二段:主人公的感情变化1-2句;其他人物的感情变化1-2句;升华2-3句;
二、设计对话时务必注意不要过于啰嗦,严格按照对应字数占比控制。
答案模版
Paragraph 1:
Within the time, I felt that there’s a strong force striking my pride. Carrie’s words echoed in my mind, and I couldn’t shake off the feeling of doubt she had planted. However, instead of letting it discourage me, I decided to use it as motivation. I started practicing even harder, dedicating extra hours to perfecting my dance moves and vocal skills. Mrs. Smith noticed my determination and offered to give me private lessons after school.
答案模版
Paragraph 2:
Finally, because of my perseverance and efforts, I joined the school choir. The day I received the acceptance letter, I felt a surge of pride and accomplishment. Carrie and her friends were surprised, but they couldn’t deny the improvement I had made. Performing with the choir was an unforgettable experience, and it taught me the value of hard work and believing in oneself. Mrs. Smith’s encouragement and my relentless practice had paid off, and I realized that I could achieve anything I set my mind to.
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