【期中考点培优】专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期中复习考点培优北师大版（2024）
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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语期中复习考点培优北师大版
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．根据要求完成大作文。
假如你是李格平，你的英国朋友Mike 今年年底将作为交换生来中国学习，他将在中国度过第一个春节。为了更好的了解中国传统文化和适应在中国的学习生活，他来信向你询问春节的传统习俗以及如何学好中文的方法。请你结合以上信息，给他写一封回信，内容包括：
(1)节日的名称，时间，传统习俗；
(2)至少两种学习中文的方法。
要求：
(1)80—100词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇：团圆饭reunion dinner，春晚gala，对联couplet，压岁钱lucky money，红包red packet，放烟花set off fireworks
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year,
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Yours,
Li Geping
2．学校公众号发起了主题为“应该在小组学习还是独自学习”的讨论。请仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，并结合自己的经验写一篇短文。
OpinionsReasons Study in groups Study alone
Reason 1 help and learn from each other think independently
Reason 2 teamwork ability self learning ability
Reason 3 … …
提示：1.Which way would you like to choose
2.Why do you choose it
注意：1.短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两个要点， 可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、 校名和人名；
3.词数80个左右(开头已给出， 不计入总词数)。
As for me, I prefer to
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3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris听说你上个月完成了北京市第一次英语听说考试，想了解一下你平时是如何进行听说提升练习的。
要求：根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
提示词语：
practice, conversation, join, fluently (流畅地)
提示问题：
●How do you usually improve your listening and speaking English
●What have you achieved
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking learning. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李辉。张磊是你校一名九年级学生，由于学习方法不当，学习成绩不理想。他在学校的英语论坛发帖求助，想知道如何在学习上取得进步。请你根据下面的提示要点，用英语写一封回帖，针对他的求助给予合理的建议。
要点如下：
（1）回帖目的；
（2）给出建议；
（3）提出祝愿。
注意：
（1）词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；
（4）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hi, Zhang Lei. I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties with your studies. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假如你叫王明，你的好朋友李华写信告诉你说他热爱科学，梦想成为一名科学家，但他不知道该怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信，提出你的一些建议。
建议包括：上课认真听讲，努力学习各门功课，多阅读科学书籍，多向别人请教……
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
参考词汇：subject，science，question，keep on
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to know that you want to be a scientist when you grow up.
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Yours,
Wang Ming
6．你将参加学校英文报以 “Reading changes my life” 为题的征文活动，请根据以下内容提示用英文从阅读习惯、阅读内容、阅读好处等方面来描述你的阅读历程和心得体会。
内容提示：1. How often and how long do you read books
2. What's your favourite book And why
3. How does reading change your life
4. Something more about your reading journey.
注意：1. 文中不得透露个人真实信息：2. 词数60~80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading changes my life
I like reading and reading has changed my life.
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7．假如你是李斌，你校英文网站正在开展以“My favourite book”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格提示内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一本书——《老人与海》！
Name The Old Man and the Sea
Writer Ernest Hemingway (an American writer)
Main characters an old fisherman and a huge fish
Stories the book tells the fisherman fought against fish and nature
Theme human nature and beliefs
The reason why I like the book meaningful, never give up, well-known sentence: “Man is not made for defeat (失败)”, …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today.
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8．学校英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Enjoy Reading
Why do you read What kind of books do you read How do you improve your reading
for pleasure for knowledge … storybooks science fiction … take notes draw mind maps …
要求：1. 根据上图表格所示，适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 词数80左右。
Enjoy reading
Reading opens up a wonderful world for me.
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9．随着网络的不断发展，越来越多的人通过网络进行阅读。同时也有人认为网络阅读存在很多弊病，人们应该多阅读经典纸质书籍。针对这个话题你的学校正在开展征文活动。假设你是李华，请你写一篇英文短文进行投稿，发表自己的想法。
要点如下：
1. 你对于网络阅读的看法；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的希望。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所有内容要点；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 字迹工整，书写规范、正确；语句通顺；
4. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和所在学校的名称；
5. 词数80左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
As the internet develops,
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10．某英语报社开辟阅读专栏向中学生征稿。假设你叫李华，请以“Reading Is Very Important”为题写一篇英语征文，向该报社投稿，要点如下：
1. 阅读的益处：
①获取大量知识；②给生活带来乐趣；③是一种放松的好方式。
2. 你的阅读习惯。
3. 号召大家多阅读。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括以上要点；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
4. 100词左右。
Reading Is Very Important
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11．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Linda想了解你所在城市的一种新发明的情况。请你根据内容提示，给她写一封信。
要点：
1.该发明是一种新型小汽车；
2.能利用太阳能在陆地上和水中行驶；
3.也能利用电能行驶。
注意：
1.信的内容要详略得当，并注意内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
2.词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
12．请你根据下列信息写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 每天早上我爸爸在上班的路上买一份报纸；
2. 纸大约在2000年前被发明出来，但在那个时候书籍只能手工一次制作一本，所以很少有人有机会学习阅读。
3. 后来中国发明了印刷术。结果，更多的人学会了阅读。从那以后， 知识和思想迅速传播。
4. 现在计算机已经在教室里使用，报纸和杂志已经可以在线阅读。
注意：1. 词数：80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。
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13．发明无处不在，有益的发明能改善我们的生活。请以“I want to invent ______”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1. 你想发明的物品是什么；
2. 你为什么想发明这样的物品；
3. 你想发明的物品有什么特别之处。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补写完整；
2. 词数100左右；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
I want to invent ____________
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14．假如你叫王林，你给你的笔友John写了一封信，信的内容如下，可作适当发挥，词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点：
1. 上周五在上海举行了国际机器人展览（International Robot Exhibition），展览会上有来自不同国家的各种各样的机器人；
2. 其中我最喜欢日本制造的机器人，因为它能帮助干家务，比如……；
3. 将来我要专为婴儿设计一种机器人，它能照顾婴儿，陪伴婴儿玩耍……；
4. 机器人有好处也会带来麻烦，随着科技的发展，生活会因它变得更美好。
参考词汇：advantage 优点
Dear John,
I’m glad to tell you something about robots.
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I’m sure you will like it very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Lin
15．某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示，用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
名称 Happy English Learning
内容 英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏、课程等
好处 （1）便于和同学一起学习 （2）帮助增强学习英语的趣味性 （3）有利于提高英语听力 （4）……（自主发挥，至少一点）
其他方面 ……（自主发挥，至少一点）
注意事项：（1）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Here is my design for the new app. I hope my ideas will be valuable to your company.
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16．科学技术是第一生产力，现在我们处于一个科技飞速发展时代，科技产品就在我们身边，他们无时无刻都在影响着我们的生活，像冰箱、彩电、空调、计算机、机器人、数码相机、智能手机、汽车、无人驾驶汽车(driverless car)、高铁等等，在这些或其它你熟悉的科技产品中，哪一种对我们的生活产生了巨大影响，请以什么 ________ has influenced (影响) our life a lot为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
（1）科学技术的重要性；
（2）你认为什么科技影响了我们的生活，它是如何影响我们的生活的；
（3）对此你有什么感悟。
要求：
（1）把题目补充完整；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
（3）书写规范，100 词左右。
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17．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）技术的快速发展和 Chat GPT4的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。
提示：
advantages disadvantages
1. chat with people 1. make people lazy in mind
2. help solve people’s problems 2. reduce people’s job opportunities
3. design pictures in a short time
要求：
1. 根据提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称：
3. 80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18． 假定你是李华，你们学校拟推行“智慧校园”项目，届时每位老师将配备一个机器人助手，代替老师进行课后辅导、答疑等。上周五，你们班就此进行了一场辩论，请根据以下内容写一篇英文短文。
“智慧校园”项目
机器人助手代替老师课后辅导、答疑等
学生观点
正方现点：机器人助手可以更便捷地帮助学生、同时减轻老师的负担。
反方观点：学生需要的对面和老师交流、机器人无法像老师一样鼓励、安慰学生。
你的观点
……
要求：
1.100词左右。（开头已给出，不计算在词数内）
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
3.可适当如入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
参考词汇：辅导tutor
Last Friday afternoon, a heated debate on “Smart Campus” project was held in our class.
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19． 完形填空A篇中介绍了一款高科技动力列车——全球首条氢动力列车，让我们感受到了科技带来的新魅力。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。请根据以下内容要点写一篇短文，参加你校英文报举办的以“The progress of science technology”为主题的征文活动。
内容要点：
1. 科技发展对我们生活的影响;
2. 我们对于科技进步应该持有的态度。
要求：
（1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
The progress of science technology
Nowadays, the benefits of science and technology can be seen almost everywhere.
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20．ChatGPT 的出现使人工智能 AI (artificial intelligence)一度成为热门话题，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。请以The development of AI为题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文：
1. 告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展；
2. 列举人工智能发展带来的好处（至少两点），并举例说明；
3. 谈谈你对未来人工智能发展的期待。
注意：1. 文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
2. 词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
The development of AI
The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.
There are many holidays and festivals in China. One of them is the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It falls on the lunar January 1st. On the day before the Spring Festival, we will paste couplets. On the eve of the New Year, all the family people get together to have reunion dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the Spring Festival, children will get lucky money from their parents. People usually set off fireworks. People usually send red packets to each other to celebrate the New Year.
For learning Chinese, my advice is to watch more Chinese movies and listen to more Chinese songs.
Yours,
Li Geping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，重点介绍春节的传统习俗，注意包含时间及习俗内容；
第二步，介绍学习中文的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①important重要的
②reunion团聚
③listen to听
[高分句型]
①It is also called Chinese New Year. (被动语态)
2．高分范文1：
As for me, I prefer to study in groups. I think it is more helpful for me. Here are some reasons why I prefer to study in groups.
Firstly, group study allows me to exchange ideas and knowledge with others, so I can learn from them. For example, if I have some difficulties, I can ask for their opinions. Secondly, I can improve my teamwork ability in this way. Thirdly, I can make more friends with other students and develop a good relationship with my classmates.
In a word, I think studying in groups can greatly improve my performance and efficiency.
高分范文2：
As for me, I prefer to study alone. In my opinion, studying alone is better than studying in groups. Here are some reasons why I choose it.
First of all, I can think independently. I am required to solve problems without depending on the help of others. Secondly, I can improve self learning ability. When studying alone, I can learn about my strengths and weaknesses so that I can improve my study habits to suit my own condition. Moreover, I can focus on my study and save time when I study alone.
In all, I think studying alone is more helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏表格中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我更喜欢小组学习”来引出下文中对小组学习的好处的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“互帮互助、团队写作能力和交友”三方面入手，重点介绍小组学习的好处；
③第三步，书写结语。总结自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth 让某人做某事
②learn from sb 向某人学习
③for example 例如
④ask for 询问
⑤in a word 总之，简言之
[高分句型]
①I think it is more helpful for me.（宾语从句）
②For example, if I have some difficulties, I can ask for their opinions.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking
I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. At the same time, I like listening to English songs and watching English movies. Now I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. I hope you can find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，一封书信。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：学习方法不唯一，言之有理即可，注意前后逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学习方法。
第二步，介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on doing坚持做某事
②At the same time同时
③communicate with foreigners和外国人交流
[高分句型]
①I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. (动词不定式表目的)
②I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. (宾语从句)
4．例文
Hi, Zhang Lei. I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties with your studies. I’d like to give you some suggestions to help you improve your studies.
First of all, you should make study plans and make good use of your time. Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today. Second, you should get ready for new lessons before class and listen to teachers carefully in class. Remember, it’s important for you to review what you have learned in time after class. Last but not least, try to think for yourself when you face a problem. If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.
I hope my suggestions will be useful to you.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，关于学习给张磊一些建议，也是材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。听说你学习有困难，我想给你一些学习方面好的建议，引出重点介绍的内容（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从制定学习计划并充分利用你的时间、上课前预习，课堂上认真听讲、向老师或家长寻求帮助等方面来介绍具体学习方法。
第三步，书写总结。表达希望，希望建议对他有用。
[亮点词汇]
First of all…Second...Last but not least…首先……第二，……最后但同样重要的是……
give sb. some suggestions给某人一些建议
make good use of充分利用
ask … for help向……寻求帮助
Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today 今天该做的事千万不要拖到明天
[高分句型]
I’d like to give you some suggestions to help you improve your studies.（动词不定式作宾语和目的状语）
it’s important for you to review what you have learned in time after class.（it句型和宾语从句）
try to think for yourself when you face a problem.（时间状语从句）
If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.（条件状语从句）
I hope my suggestions will be useful to you./Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today（宾语从句）
5．例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to know that you want to be a scientist when you grow up. Though there are different ways to succeed, almost all the winners have something in common. Here is some advice about how to realize your dream.
First, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class. It may help you be good at your lessons. Second, try to do well in all your subjects, especially science. In your free time. you can also read some science books. It can help develop your interest in science and open your eyes to the world. Finally, don’t feel shy to ask for help from others. Remember: Two heads are always better than one.
I hope your dream will come true.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明自己写信的目的——向对方提供一些建议；
第二步，具体阐述内容，从“上课认真听讲、努力学习各门功课、多阅读科学书籍、多向别人请教”等方面给出具体建议；
第三步，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have something in common有一些相同之处
②be good at擅长
③ask for寻求
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①Though there are different ways to succeed, almost all the winners have something in common（though引导的让步状语从句）
②I hope your dream will come true.（宾语从句）
6．例文：
Reading changes my life
I like reading and reading has changed my life. I read for 30 minutes daily before bed, which has become a cherished habit. “The Little Prince” is my favorite, as it teaches me to view the world with a pure heart. Reading not only enriches my mind but also broadens my horizons, offering me endless joy. It helps me understand others and become empathetic. Through reading, I’ve gained insights into life and discovered the beauty of diverse cultures. Reading truly transforms and enriches my life in countless ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据给定内容提示，考生需从阅读习惯、阅读内容、阅读好处等方面进行描述，确保内容完整且字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简要介绍自己对阅读的喜爱，并引出阅读对自己生活的影响；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述阅读习惯，包括阅读频率和时长；介绍最喜欢的书籍及原因；阐述阅读带来的好处；简要补充阅读旅程的收获与感悟；
第三步，书写结语。总结阅读对自己的重要意义。
[亮点词汇]
①daily habit日常习惯
②enrich my mind丰富我的思想
③broaden horizons拓宽视野
④pure heart纯真的心
⑤gain insights获得深刻见解
[高分句型]
①I read for 30 minutes daily before bed, which has become a cherished habit.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②“The Little Prince” is my favorite, as it teaches me to view the world with a pure heart.（as引导原因状语从句）
7．例文：
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today. It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer. The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish. During the fight, he faces not only the fish but also the power of nature.
This book explores human nature and beliefs. I love it because it is meaningful and teaches us never to give up. My favorite sentence is, “Man is not made for defeat.” It always inspires me when I face difficulties. I think everyone should read this wonderful book!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为征文短文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于《老人与海》的介绍要点，包括作者、主角、故事内容、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想分享我最喜欢的一本书”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“作者、主角、故事情节、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因”几个方面重点介绍《老人与海》这本书的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。总结对这本书的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物（原句未直接体现完整结构，但share为关键动词）
③struggle to do sth.努力做某事
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer.（过去分词短语written by...作后置定语）
②The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish.（who引导的定语从句）
③My favorite sentence is, “Man is not made for defeat.”（表语从句，is后省略that，直接接句子作表语）
8．例文
Enjoy reading Reading opens up a wonderful world for me. I read for pleasure and knowledge. Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.
I enjoy reading storybooks and science fiction the most. Storybooks let me experience different lives, while science fiction takes me to amazing future worlds.
To improve my reading, I use some good ways. I take notes about new words and interesting ideas. I also draw mind maps to understand the stories better. Discussing books with friends helps me a lot too.
Reading is truly a great enjoyment!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己阅读的原因；
第二步、介绍自己读什么书，如故事书和科幻小说；
第三步、介绍自己提升阅读的方法，如记笔记、绘制思维导图以及和朋友讨论书，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①open up打开
②take notes记笔记
③discuss sth. with sb.与某人讨论某事
[高分句型]
Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.(动名词作主语)
9．例文：
As the internet develops, more and more people choose to read online. In my opinion, while online reading is convenient, it can’t replace reading classic paper books.
Online reading often leads to distractions, like ads or pop-up messages. Also, the quality of online content varies. However, paper books offer a quiet and focused reading experience. They help us develop deep thinking and imagination.
I hope everyone can spend more time reading classic paper books. Let’s enjoy the charm of real books and gain wisdom from them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文投稿短文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括对网络阅读的看法、理由及希望，考生需确保涵盖所有要点，并适当添加细节使内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过提及网络的发展，引出网络阅读的话题，并表明自己的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从网络阅读的便捷性、信息量以及可能存在的信息不准确、分散注意力等弊端出发，阐述自己对于网络阅读的看法及理由；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己希望人们能够多阅读经典纸质书籍的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more 越来越多的
②choose to do 选择做某事
③in my opinion 在我看来
④lead to 导致
⑤vary 变化
⑥offer 提供
⑦develop 培养
[高分句型]
①As the internet develops, more and more people choose to read online.（as引导的时间状语从句）
②In my opinion, while online reading is convenient, it can’t replace reading classic paper books.（while引导的让步状语从句）
10．例文
Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to do some reading. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study will be improved if we read more books. It’s a good way to relax. Reading also helps us grow up.
I often spend half an hour reading before going to bed every day. I like reading classical novels. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as playing with the smartphone, listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. When you read books, you had better take some notes. It will be good for us! Let’s start reading now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：短文核心围绕 “阅读的重要性” 这一核心要点展开，依次涵盖阅读的价值、个人阅读习惯、影响阅读的因素及阅读倡议，逻辑清晰且无要点遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述阅读的重要性；
第二步，介绍个人阅读情况；
第三步，号召大家多阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①get knowledge获取知识
②open our minds开阔我们的思维
③take up占据
[高分句型]
①It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier.（not only...but also... 连接并列成分）
②When you read books, you had better take some notes.（when引导时间状语从句）
11．例文
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
It's a kind of new car invented by a great young man in my local city. He is really clever. It's so great that it can run on solar power. It's certainly good for our environment. Although it mainly depends on solar power, it can still run very fast. Also, it can run not only on the land but also in the water safely. What's more, it can also use electricity to run when it's cloudy, rainy or snowy. Lots of people love this kind of car. I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信，围绕向英国朋友介绍所在城市新型小汽车这一发明展开交流；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述发明的特征、性能等客观情况；
③提示：文章符合书信要求，包含发明的主体、动力来源、行驶场景等要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，向朋友清晰介绍新发明。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明写信目的，即向 Linda 介绍所在城市的新发明；
第二步，详细描述新发明（新型小汽车），包括发明者（虽未着重强调，提及 “invented by a great young man” ）、动力来源（太阳能、电能 ）、行驶场景（陆地、水中 ）以及人们对其的喜爱；
第三步，结尾表达相信对方也会喜欢该发明，让书信交流更自然。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②solar power 太阳能
③environment 环境
④not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且……
[高分句型]
①It's so great that it can run on solar power.（so...that... 引导结果状语从句 ）
②I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.（believe 后接宾语从句，从句中含 if 引导的条件状语从句 ）
12．例文：
Every morning my father buys a newspaper on his way to work. Every evening my mother looks through magazines at home.
Paper was first created about 2,000 years ago. People learned to write words on paper to make a book. But in those days, books could only be produced one at a time by hand. Because there weren’t many books, few people had the opportunity to learn reading.
Then printing was invented in China. When printing was developed greatly at the beginning of the 11th century, books could be produced more quickly and cheaply. As a result, more people learned to read. After that, knowledge and ideas spread quickly.
Computers and Internet are used in classrooms now, and newspapers and magazines can already be read online. So will books be replaced by computers one day Let’s wait and see.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，文中注意时态和语态的切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍父母的阅读习惯；
第二步，讲述造纸术和印刷术的发明，以及其带来的影响；
第三步，描述现状，对未来发问。
[亮点词汇]
①look through浏览；翻阅
②by hand手工
③as a result因此
[高分句型]
①People learned to write words on paper to make a book. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②When printing was developed greatly at the beginning of the 11th century, books could be produced more quickly and cheaply.（时间状语从句）
13．例文
I want to invent a special box
How to keep public places clean and tidy is still a problem. So I want to invent a special box to help improve the environment.
The special box can collect and hold garbage by itself. As soon as garbage is thrown away on the street, it will be cleaned up by the box at once. At the same time, the box will tell the one who has thrown away the garbage not to do that again. Of course, the box won’t cost too much. In this way, more cleaners and money can be saved.
What do you think of my invention Will it be helpful in improving the environment
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；标题要补充完整，行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍你想发明的物品是什么；
第二步，陈述发明这个物品的原因、发明物的特别之处；
第三步，期待发明物得到肯定的评价。
［亮点词汇］
① at the same time 在同时
② throw away 扔掉
［高分句型］
① As soon as garbage is thrown away on the street, it will be cleaned up by the box at once.（as soon as引导时间状语从句、被动语态）
② In this way, more cleaners and money can be saved.（情态动词的被动语态）
14．例文
Dear John,
I’m glad to tell you something about robots.
Last Friday, the International Robot Exhibition was held in Shanghai. There were all kinds of robots from different countries on show. Among all the robots, I like the one made in Japan best. It can help with the housework. It can do the washing, shopping, cooking and other housework. In the future, I would like to design a robot especially for the babies. It can take care of them and play with them. Sometimes it can protect them when necessary. There are advantages of robots and trouble as well. But it is certain that our life will be better with the development of science and technology.
I’m sure you will like it very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍上周五在上海举行了国际机器人展览，展览会上有来自不同国家的各种各样的机器人；
第二步，介绍我最喜欢日本制造的机器人，因为它能帮助干家务；
第三步，介绍将来我要专为婴儿设计一种机器人，它能照顾婴儿，陪伴婴儿玩耍；
第四步，介绍机器人有好处也会带来麻烦，随着科技的发展，生活会因它变得更美好。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth.高兴做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③in the future在未来
④take care of照顾
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There were all kinds of robots from different countries on show.（there be结构）
②But it is certain that our life will be better with the development of science and technology.（that引导的宾语从句）
③I’m sure you will like it very much.（省略that的宾语从句）
15．例文
Here is my design for the new app. I hope my ideas will be valuable to your company.
It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app.
I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的提示内容完成写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点；注意语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先导入话题并介绍这个app及其好处；
第二步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②listening skills听力技巧
③spoken English口语
④in a word总之
⑤have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣
[高分句型]
I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.（宾语从句）
16．例文
The smart phone has influenced our life a lot
Technology is important for the development of society. Some of them play an important role in our life and have greatly changed the world.
In my eyes, the smart phone has influenced us a lot. In our daily life, we use smart phones almost everywhere. Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us. We use smart phones to go shopping, order meals, watch movies and listen to music and so on. It makes our life more convenient and colorful. What’s more, during covid-19, we students have online courses with the smart phone. In one word, we almost can’t live without smart phones.
Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly. As students, we can’t play games or chat with others too long on it. It’s bad for our study and health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中给出的三个要点，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“科学技术的重要性”来引出下文中对三个要点的描述；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“科技如何影响我们的生活”入手，重点介绍科技对我们生活的影响；
③第三步，书写结语。描述自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
②even though 即使
③and so on 等等，诸如此类
④what’s more 此外
⑤in one word 总之
[高分句型]
①Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us.（even though引导的让步状语从句）
②Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly.（though引导的让步状语从句）
17．例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.
Artificial Intelligence can chat with people, it can help solve people’s problems. For example, it can help the students do homework correctly and solve the subject problems. Besides, it can design pictures in a short time.
However, it also has many disadvantages. If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind. Its appearance will reduce people’s job opportunities.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，阐述对人工智能技术优劣势的看法；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述对人工智能技术的总体看法；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优势和劣势；
第三步，总结并表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①science and technology 科学技术
②chat with 和……聊天
③in a short time 在短时间内
④depend on 依靠，依赖
[高分句型]
①With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.（“with＋ 名词短语”作状语；“比较级 and 比较级”表达“越来越……”）
②If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind.（if引导条件状语从句）
18．例文：
Last Friday afternoon, a heated debate on “Smart Campus” project was held in our class. Students in our class divided into two groups argued fiercely on the project. It is said that once the project is launched, every teacher will be equipped with a teaching robot assistant who can tutor students in the place of the teacher, helping to solve students’ puzzles and problems in study and life. Some students are in favor of the idea. They believe robot assistants can help students more conveniently while reducing the burden on teachers. However, other students disagree, saying that turning to teachers isn’t only about solving subject problems but hoping to have a communication with the beloved teachers who usually provide encouragement and comfort for students.
In my opinion, only after teachers are freed from some replaceable work will they be able to give more love to students. So it is necessary to have teaching robot assistants.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中需要补充的地方，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍“智慧校园”项目的主要内容；
第二步，介绍学生们对该项目的不同看法；
第三步，提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①It is said that据说
②in favor of支持
③have a communication with与……交流
④In my opinion依我来看
[高分句型]
①It is said that once the project is launched, every teacher will be equipped with a teaching robot assistant who can tutor students in the place of the teacher, helping to solve students’ puzzles and problems in study and life.（who引导的定语从句）
②In my opinion, only after teachers are freed from some replaceable work will they be able to give more love to students.（倒装句）
19．例文：
The progress of science technology
Nowadays, the benefits of science and technology can be seen almost everywhere. First, technology products like computers help us deal with many difficult tasks so we can have more free time. Second, we can enjoy better food, clothing, housing, transport as well as healthcare. Besides, the progress of science and technology makes it possible for us to explore the unknown.
It’s true that great progress of science and technology have brought great changes to our life. We should never stop developing it, but meanwhile we have to make good use of this double-edged sword and never let it harm our society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍科技发展对我们生活的影响；
第二步，介绍我们对于科技进步应该持有的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②as well as也
③stop doing sth.停止做某事
④make good use of好好利用
[高分句型]
Besides, the progress of science and technology makes it possible for us to explore the unknown.（it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正宾语）
20．例文
The development of AI
The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI. There is no need for people to worry too much about the development of AI. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages.
First of all, AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help. As a result, people can free themselves from over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. It improves the accuracy of data and helps scientists to do research. That’s why our government pay more attention to it.
In my opinion, AI is a trend of the world. We will live happily and more conveniently with the help of it. Let’s enjoy our AI life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展；
第二步，介绍人工智能发展带来的好处；
第三步，谈谈自己对未来人工智能发展的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① take the place of 替代
② day after day 日复一日
③ pay attention to 注意
[高分句型]
① There is no need for people to worry too much about the development of AI. （there be句型）
② If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
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专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．根据要求完成大作文。
假如你是李格平，你的英国朋友Mike 今年年底将作为交换生来中国学习，他将在中国度过第一个春节。为了更好的了解中国传统文化和适应在中国的学习生活，他来信向你询问春节的传统习俗以及如何学好中文的方法。请你结合以上信息，给他写一封回信，内容包括：
(1)节日的名称，时间，传统习俗；
(2)至少两种学习中文的方法。
要求：
(1)80—100词 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇：团圆饭reunion dinner，春晚gala，对联couplet，压岁钱lucky money，红包red packet，放烟花set off fireworks
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year,
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Yours,
Li Geping
2．学校公众号发起了主题为“应该在小组学习还是独自学习”的讨论。请仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，并结合自己的经验写一篇短文。
OpinionsReasons Study in groups Study alone
Reason 1 help and learn from each other think independently
Reason 2 teamwork ability self learning ability
Reason 3 … …
提示：1.Which way would you like to choose
2.Why do you choose it
注意：1.短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两个要点， 可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、 校名和人名；
3.词数80个左右(开头已给出， 不计入总词数)。
As for me, I prefer to
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3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris听说你上个月完成了北京市第一次英语听说考试，想了解一下你平时是如何进行听说提升练习的。
要求：根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
提示词语：
practice, conversation, join, fluently (流畅地)
提示问题：
●How do you usually improve your listening and speaking English
●What have you achieved
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking learning. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李辉。张磊是你校一名九年级学生，由于学习方法不当，学习成绩不理想。他在学校的英语论坛发帖求助，想知道如何在学习上取得进步。请你根据下面的提示要点，用英语写一封回帖，针对他的求助给予合理的建议。
要点如下：
（1）回帖目的；
（2）给出建议；
（3）提出祝愿。
注意：
（1）词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；
（4）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hi, Zhang Lei. I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties with your studies. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假如你叫王明，你的好朋友李华写信告诉你说他热爱科学，梦想成为一名科学家，但他不知道该怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信，提出你的一些建议。
建议包括：上课认真听讲，努力学习各门功课，多阅读科学书籍，多向别人请教……
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
参考词汇：subject，science，question，keep on
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to know that you want to be a scientist when you grow up.
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Yours,
Wang Ming
6．你将参加学校英文报以 “Reading changes my life” 为题的征文活动，请根据以下内容提示用英文从阅读习惯、阅读内容、阅读好处等方面来描述你的阅读历程和心得体会。
内容提示：1. How often and how long do you read books
2. What's your favourite book And why
3. How does reading change your life
4. Something more about your reading journey.
注意：1. 文中不得透露个人真实信息：2. 词数60~80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading changes my life
I like reading and reading has changed my life.
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7．假如你是李斌，你校英文网站正在开展以“My favourite book”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格提示内容，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的一本书——《老人与海》！
Name The Old Man and the Sea
Writer Ernest Hemingway (an American writer)
Main characters an old fisherman and a huge fish
Stories the book tells the fisherman fought against fish and nature
Theme human nature and beliefs
The reason why I like the book meaningful, never give up, well-known sentence: “Man is not made for defeat (失败)”, …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today.
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8．学校英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Enjoy Reading
Why do you read What kind of books do you read How do you improve your reading
for pleasure for knowledge … storybooks science fiction … take notes draw mind maps …
要求：1. 根据上图表格所示，适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
3. 词数80左右。
Enjoy reading
Reading opens up a wonderful world for me.
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9．随着网络的不断发展，越来越多的人通过网络进行阅读。同时也有人认为网络阅读存在很多弊病，人们应该多阅读经典纸质书籍。针对这个话题你的学校正在开展征文活动。假设你是李华，请你写一篇英文短文进行投稿，发表自己的想法。
要点如下：
1. 你对于网络阅读的看法；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的希望。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所有内容要点；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 字迹工整，书写规范、正确；语句通顺；
4. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和所在学校的名称；
5. 词数80左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
As the internet develops,
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10．某英语报社开辟阅读专栏向中学生征稿。假设你叫李华，请以“Reading Is Very Important”为题写一篇英语征文，向该报社投稿，要点如下：
1. 阅读的益处：
①获取大量知识；②给生活带来乐趣；③是一种放松的好方式。
2. 你的阅读习惯。
3. 号召大家多阅读。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括以上要点；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
4. 100词左右。
Reading Is Very Important
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11．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Linda想了解你所在城市的一种新发明的情况。请你根据内容提示，给她写一封信。
要点：
1.该发明是一种新型小汽车；
2.能利用太阳能在陆地上和水中行驶；
3.也能利用电能行驶。
注意：
1.信的内容要详略得当，并注意内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
2.词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
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With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
12．请你根据下列信息写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 每天早上我爸爸在上班的路上买一份报纸；
2. 纸大约在2000年前被发明出来，但在那个时候书籍只能手工一次制作一本，所以很少有人有机会学习阅读。
3. 后来中国发明了印刷术。结果，更多的人学会了阅读。从那以后， 知识和思想迅速传播。
4. 现在计算机已经在教室里使用，报纸和杂志已经可以在线阅读。
注意：1. 词数：80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。
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13．发明无处不在，有益的发明能改善我们的生活。请以“I want to invent ______”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1. 你想发明的物品是什么；
2. 你为什么想发明这样的物品；
3. 你想发明的物品有什么特别之处。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补写完整；
2. 词数100左右；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
I want to invent ____________
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14．假如你叫王林，你给你的笔友John写了一封信，信的内容如下，可作适当发挥，词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点：
1. 上周五在上海举行了国际机器人展览（International Robot Exhibition），展览会上有来自不同国家的各种各样的机器人；
2. 其中我最喜欢日本制造的机器人，因为它能帮助干家务，比如……；
3. 将来我要专为婴儿设计一种机器人，它能照顾婴儿，陪伴婴儿玩耍……；
4. 机器人有好处也会带来麻烦，随着科技的发展，生活会因它变得更美好。
参考词汇：advantage 优点
Dear John,
I’m glad to tell you something about robots.
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I’m sure you will like it very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Lin
15．某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示，用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
名称 Happy English Learning
内容 英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏、课程等
好处 （1）便于和同学一起学习 （2）帮助增强学习英语的趣味性 （3）有利于提高英语听力 （4）……（自主发挥，至少一点）
其他方面 ……（自主发挥，至少一点）
注意事项：（1）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Here is my design for the new app. I hope my ideas will be valuable to your company.
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16．科学技术是第一生产力，现在我们处于一个科技飞速发展时代，科技产品就在我们身边，他们无时无刻都在影响着我们的生活，像冰箱、彩电、空调、计算机、机器人、数码相机、智能手机、汽车、无人驾驶汽车(driverless car)、高铁等等，在这些或其它你熟悉的科技产品中，哪一种对我们的生活产生了巨大影响，请以什么 ________ has influenced (影响) our life a lot为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
（1）科学技术的重要性；
（2）你认为什么科技影响了我们的生活，它是如何影响我们的生活的；
（3）对此你有什么感悟。
要求：
（1）把题目补充完整；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；
（3）书写规范，100 词左右。
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17．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence）技术的快速发展和 Chat GPT4的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化。假如你是李华，受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的看法。
提示：
advantages disadvantages
1. chat with people 1. make people lazy in mind
2. help solve people’s problems 2. reduce people’s job opportunities
3. design pictures in a short time
要求：
1. 根据提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称：
3. 80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18． 假定你是李华，你们学校拟推行“智慧校园”项目，届时每位老师将配备一个机器人助手，代替老师进行课后辅导、答疑等。上周五，你们班就此进行了一场辩论，请根据以下内容写一篇英文短文。
“智慧校园”项目
机器人助手代替老师课后辅导、答疑等
学生观点
正方现点：机器人助手可以更便捷地帮助学生、同时减轻老师的负担。
反方观点：学生需要的对面和老师交流、机器人无法像老师一样鼓励、安慰学生。
你的观点
……
要求：
1.100词左右。（开头已给出，不计算在词数内）
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
3.可适当如入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
参考词汇：辅导tutor
Last Friday afternoon, a heated debate on “Smart Campus” project was held in our class.
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19． 完形填空A篇中介绍了一款高科技动力列车——全球首条氢动力列车，让我们感受到了科技带来的新魅力。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。请根据以下内容要点写一篇短文，参加你校英文报举办的以“The progress of science technology”为主题的征文活动。
内容要点：
1. 科技发展对我们生活的影响;
2. 我们对于科技进步应该持有的态度。
要求：
（1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于80词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
The progress of science technology
Nowadays, the benefits of science and technology can be seen almost everywhere.
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20．ChatGPT 的出现使人工智能 AI (artificial intelligence)一度成为热门话题，同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。请以The development of AI为题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文：
1. 告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展；
2. 列举人工智能发展带来的好处（至少两点），并举例说明；
3. 谈谈你对未来人工智能发展的期待。
注意：1. 文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
2. 词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
The development of AI
The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.
There are many holidays and festivals in China. One of them is the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It falls on the lunar January 1st. On the day before the Spring Festival, we will paste couplets. On the eve of the New Year, all the family people get together to have reunion dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the Spring Festival, children will get lucky money from their parents. People usually set off fireworks. People usually send red packets to each other to celebrate the New Year.
For learning Chinese, my advice is to watch more Chinese movies and listen to more Chinese songs.
Yours,
Li Geping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，重点介绍春节的传统习俗，注意包含时间及习俗内容；
第二步，介绍学习中文的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①important重要的
②reunion团聚
③listen to听
[高分句型]
①It is also called Chinese New Year. (被动语态)
2．高分范文1：
As for me, I prefer to study in groups. I think it is more helpful for me. Here are some reasons why I prefer to study in groups.
Firstly, group study allows me to exchange ideas and knowledge with others, so I can learn from them. For example, if I have some difficulties, I can ask for their opinions. Secondly, I can improve my teamwork ability in this way. Thirdly, I can make more friends with other students and develop a good relationship with my classmates.
In a word, I think studying in groups can greatly improve my performance and efficiency.
高分范文2：
As for me, I prefer to study alone. In my opinion, studying alone is better than studying in groups. Here are some reasons why I choose it.
First of all, I can think independently. I am required to solve problems without depending on the help of others. Secondly, I can improve self learning ability. When studying alone, I can learn about my strengths and weaknesses so that I can improve my study habits to suit my own condition. Moreover, I can focus on my study and save time when I study alone.
In all, I think studying alone is more helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏表格中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我更喜欢小组学习”来引出下文中对小组学习的好处的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“互帮互助、团队写作能力和交友”三方面入手，重点介绍小组学习的好处；
③第三步，书写结语。总结自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb to do sth 让某人做某事
②learn from sb 向某人学习
③for example 例如
④ask for 询问
⑤in a word 总之，简言之
[高分句型]
①I think it is more helpful for me.（宾语从句）
②For example, if I have some difficulties, I can ask for their opinions.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking
I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. At the same time, I like listening to English songs and watching English movies. Now I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. I hope you can find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是应用文，一封书信。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：学习方法不唯一，言之有理即可，注意前后逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学习方法。
第二步，介绍自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on doing坚持做某事
②At the same time同时
③communicate with foreigners和外国人交流
[高分句型]
①I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. (动词不定式表目的)
②I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. (宾语从句)
4．例文
Hi, Zhang Lei. I’m sorry to hear that you are having difficulties with your studies. I’d like to give you some suggestions to help you improve your studies.
First of all, you should make study plans and make good use of your time. Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today. Second, you should get ready for new lessons before class and listen to teachers carefully in class. Remember, it’s important for you to review what you have learned in time after class. Last but not least, try to think for yourself when you face a problem. If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.
I hope my suggestions will be useful to you.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，关于学习给张磊一些建议，也是材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。听说你学习有困难，我想给你一些学习方面好的建议，引出重点介绍的内容（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从制定学习计划并充分利用你的时间、上课前预习，课堂上认真听讲、向老师或家长寻求帮助等方面来介绍具体学习方法。
第三步，书写总结。表达希望，希望建议对他有用。
[亮点词汇]
First of all…Second...Last but not least…首先……第二，……最后但同样重要的是……
give sb. some suggestions给某人一些建议
make good use of充分利用
ask … for help向……寻求帮助
Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today 今天该做的事千万不要拖到明天
[高分句型]
I’d like to give you some suggestions to help you improve your studies.（动词不定式作宾语和目的状语）
it’s important for you to review what you have learned in time after class.（it句型和宾语从句）
try to think for yourself when you face a problem.（时间状语从句）
If it can’t be solved by yourself, you should ask your teachers or parents for help.（条件状语从句）
I hope my suggestions will be useful to you./Never put off till tomorrow what should be done today（宾语从句）
5．例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to know that you want to be a scientist when you grow up. Though there are different ways to succeed, almost all the winners have something in common. Here is some advice about how to realize your dream.
First, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class. It may help you be good at your lessons. Second, try to do well in all your subjects, especially science. In your free time. you can also read some science books. It can help develop your interest in science and open your eyes to the world. Finally, don’t feel shy to ask for help from others. Remember: Two heads are always better than one.
I hope your dream will come true.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐明自己写信的目的——向对方提供一些建议；
第二步，具体阐述内容，从“上课认真听讲、努力学习各门功课、多阅读科学书籍、多向别人请教”等方面给出具体建议；
第三步，表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have something in common有一些相同之处
②be good at擅长
③ask for寻求
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①Though there are different ways to succeed, almost all the winners have something in common（though引导的让步状语从句）
②I hope your dream will come true.（宾语从句）
6．例文：
Reading changes my life
I like reading and reading has changed my life. I read for 30 minutes daily before bed, which has become a cherished habit. “The Little Prince” is my favorite, as it teaches me to view the world with a pure heart. Reading not only enriches my mind but also broadens my horizons, offering me endless joy. It helps me understand others and become empathetic. Through reading, I’ve gained insights into life and discovered the beauty of diverse cultures. Reading truly transforms and enriches my life in countless ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据给定内容提示，考生需从阅读习惯、阅读内容、阅读好处等方面进行描述，确保内容完整且字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简要介绍自己对阅读的喜爱，并引出阅读对自己生活的影响；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述阅读习惯，包括阅读频率和时长；介绍最喜欢的书籍及原因；阐述阅读带来的好处；简要补充阅读旅程的收获与感悟；
第三步，书写结语。总结阅读对自己的重要意义。
[亮点词汇]
①daily habit日常习惯
②enrich my mind丰富我的思想
③broaden horizons拓宽视野
④pure heart纯真的心
⑤gain insights获得深刻见解
[高分句型]
①I read for 30 minutes daily before bed, which has become a cherished habit.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②“The Little Prince” is my favorite, as it teaches me to view the world with a pure heart.（as引导原因状语从句）
7．例文：
Hello, I’m Li Bin. I would like to share my favourite book today. It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer. The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish. During the fight, he faces not only the fish but also the power of nature.
This book explores human nature and beliefs. I love it because it is meaningful and teaches us never to give up. My favorite sentence is, “Man is not made for defeat.” It always inspires me when I face difficulties. I think everyone should read this wonderful book!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为征文短文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于《老人与海》的介绍要点，包括作者、主角、故事内容、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想分享我最喜欢的一本书”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“作者、主角、故事情节、主题以及喜欢这本书的原因”几个方面重点介绍《老人与海》这本书的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。总结对这本书的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物（原句未直接体现完整结构，但share为关键动词）
③struggle to do sth.努力做某事
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①It is The Old Man and the Sea written by Ernest Hemingway, an American writer.（过去分词短语written by...作后置定语）
②The story is about an old fisherman who struggles to catch a huge fish.（who引导的定语从句）
③My favorite sentence is, “Man is not made for defeat.”（表语从句，is后省略that，直接接句子作表语）
8．例文
Enjoy reading Reading opens up a wonderful world for me. I read for pleasure and knowledge. Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.
I enjoy reading storybooks and science fiction the most. Storybooks let me experience different lives, while science fiction takes me to amazing future worlds.
To improve my reading, I use some good ways. I take notes about new words and interesting ideas. I also draw mind maps to understand the stories better. Discussing books with friends helps me a lot too.
Reading is truly a great enjoyment!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己阅读的原因；
第二步、介绍自己读什么书，如故事书和科幻小说；
第三步、介绍自己提升阅读的方法，如记笔记、绘制思维导图以及和朋友讨论书，最后书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①open up打开
②take notes记笔记
③discuss sth. with sb.与某人讨论某事
[高分句型]
Reading exciting stories makes me happy and relaxed.(动名词作主语)
9．例文：
As the internet develops, more and more people choose to read online. In my opinion, while online reading is convenient, it can’t replace reading classic paper books.
Online reading often leads to distractions, like ads or pop-up messages. Also, the quality of online content varies. However, paper books offer a quiet and focused reading experience. They help us develop deep thinking and imagination.
I hope everyone can spend more time reading classic paper books. Let’s enjoy the charm of real books and gain wisdom from them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文投稿短文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括对网络阅读的看法、理由及希望，考生需确保涵盖所有要点，并适当添加细节使内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。通过提及网络的发展，引出网络阅读的话题，并表明自己的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从网络阅读的便捷性、信息量以及可能存在的信息不准确、分散注意力等弊端出发，阐述自己对于网络阅读的看法及理由；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己希望人们能够多阅读经典纸质书籍的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①more and more 越来越多的
②choose to do 选择做某事
③in my opinion 在我看来
④lead to 导致
⑤vary 变化
⑥offer 提供
⑦develop 培养
[高分句型]
①As the internet develops, more and more people choose to read online.（as引导的时间状语从句）
②In my opinion, while online reading is convenient, it can’t replace reading classic paper books.（while引导的让步状语从句）
10．例文
Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to do some reading. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study will be improved if we read more books. It’s a good way to relax. Reading also helps us grow up.
I often spend half an hour reading before going to bed every day. I like reading classical novels. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as playing with the smartphone, listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. When you read books, you had better take some notes. It will be good for us! Let’s start reading now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：短文核心围绕 “阅读的重要性” 这一核心要点展开，依次涵盖阅读的价值、个人阅读习惯、影响阅读的因素及阅读倡议，逻辑清晰且无要点遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述阅读的重要性；
第二步，介绍个人阅读情况；
第三步，号召大家多阅读。
[亮点词汇]
①get knowledge获取知识
②open our minds开阔我们的思维
③take up占据
[高分句型]
①It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier.（not only...but also... 连接并列成分）
②When you read books, you had better take some notes.（when引导时间状语从句）
11．例文
Dear Linda,
I'm very glad to introduce the new invention to you.
It's a kind of new car invented by a great young man in my local city. He is really clever. It's so great that it can run on solar power. It's certainly good for our environment. Although it mainly depends on solar power, it can still run very fast. Also, it can run not only on the land but also in the water safely. What's more, it can also use electricity to run when it's cloudy, rainy or snowy. Lots of people love this kind of car. I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信，围绕向英国朋友介绍所在城市新型小汽车这一发明展开交流；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述发明的特征、性能等客观情况；
③提示：文章符合书信要求，包含发明的主体、动力来源、行驶场景等要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，向朋友清晰介绍新发明。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明写信目的，即向 Linda 介绍所在城市的新发明；
第二步，详细描述新发明（新型小汽车），包括发明者（虽未着重强调，提及 “invented by a great young man” ）、动力来源（太阳能、电能 ）、行驶场景（陆地、水中 ）以及人们对其的喜爱；
第三步，结尾表达相信对方也会喜欢该发明，让书信交流更自然。
[亮点词汇]
①invent 发明
②solar power 太阳能
③environment 环境
④not only...but also... 不仅…… 而且……
[高分句型]
①It's so great that it can run on solar power.（so...that... 引导结果状语从句 ）
②I believe you'll also love it very much if you use it.（believe 后接宾语从句，从句中含 if 引导的条件状语从句 ）
12．例文：
Every morning my father buys a newspaper on his way to work. Every evening my mother looks through magazines at home.
Paper was first created about 2,000 years ago. People learned to write words on paper to make a book. But in those days, books could only be produced one at a time by hand. Because there weren’t many books, few people had the opportunity to learn reading.
Then printing was invented in China. When printing was developed greatly at the beginning of the 11th century, books could be produced more quickly and cheaply. As a result, more people learned to read. After that, knowledge and ideas spread quickly.
Computers and Internet are used in classrooms now, and newspapers and magazines can already be read online. So will books be replaced by computers one day Let’s wait and see.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，文中注意时态和语态的切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍父母的阅读习惯；
第二步，讲述造纸术和印刷术的发明，以及其带来的影响；
第三步，描述现状，对未来发问。
[亮点词汇]
①look through浏览；翻阅
②by hand手工
③as a result因此
[高分句型]
①People learned to write words on paper to make a book. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②When printing was developed greatly at the beginning of the 11th century, books could be produced more quickly and cheaply.（时间状语从句）
13．例文
I want to invent a special box
How to keep public places clean and tidy is still a problem. So I want to invent a special box to help improve the environment.
The special box can collect and hold garbage by itself. As soon as garbage is thrown away on the street, it will be cleaned up by the box at once. At the same time, the box will tell the one who has thrown away the garbage not to do that again. Of course, the box won’t cost too much. In this way, more cleaners and money can be saved.
What do you think of my invention Will it be helpful in improving the environment
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；标题要补充完整，行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍你想发明的物品是什么；
第二步，陈述发明这个物品的原因、发明物的特别之处；
第三步，期待发明物得到肯定的评价。
［亮点词汇］
① at the same time 在同时
② throw away 扔掉
［高分句型］
① As soon as garbage is thrown away on the street, it will be cleaned up by the box at once.（as soon as引导时间状语从句、被动语态）
② In this way, more cleaners and money can be saved.（情态动词的被动语态）
14．例文
Dear John,
I’m glad to tell you something about robots.
Last Friday, the International Robot Exhibition was held in Shanghai. There were all kinds of robots from different countries on show. Among all the robots, I like the one made in Japan best. It can help with the housework. It can do the washing, shopping, cooking and other housework. In the future, I would like to design a robot especially for the babies. It can take care of them and play with them. Sometimes it can protect them when necessary. There are advantages of robots and trouble as well. But it is certain that our life will be better with the development of science and technology.
I’m sure you will like it very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍上周五在上海举行了国际机器人展览，展览会上有来自不同国家的各种各样的机器人；
第二步，介绍我最喜欢日本制造的机器人，因为它能帮助干家务；
第三步，介绍将来我要专为婴儿设计一种机器人，它能照顾婴儿，陪伴婴儿玩耍；
第四步，介绍机器人有好处也会带来麻烦，随着科技的发展，生活会因它变得更美好。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth.高兴做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③in the future在未来
④take care of照顾
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There were all kinds of robots from different countries on show.（there be结构）
②But it is certain that our life will be better with the development of science and technology.（that引导的宾语从句）
③I’m sure you will like it very much.（省略that的宾语从句）
15．例文
Here is my design for the new app. I hope my ideas will be valuable to your company.
It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app.
I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的提示内容完成写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点；注意语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先导入话题并介绍这个app及其好处；
第二步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②listening skills听力技巧
③spoken English口语
④in a word总之
⑤have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣
[高分句型]
I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.（宾语从句）
16．例文
The smart phone has influenced our life a lot
Technology is important for the development of society. Some of them play an important role in our life and have greatly changed the world.
In my eyes, the smart phone has influenced us a lot. In our daily life, we use smart phones almost everywhere. Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us. We use smart phones to go shopping, order meals, watch movies and listen to music and so on. It makes our life more convenient and colorful. What’s more, during covid-19, we students have online courses with the smart phone. In one word, we almost can’t live without smart phones.
Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly. As students, we can’t play games or chat with others too long on it. It’s bad for our study and health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中给出的三个要点，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“科学技术的重要性”来引出下文中对三个要点的描述；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“科技如何影响我们的生活”入手，重点介绍科技对我们生活的影响；
③第三步，书写结语。描述自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
②even though 即使
③and so on 等等，诸如此类
④what’s more 此外
⑤in one word 总之
[高分句型]
①Now we often use smart phones to chat with our friends even though they are far away from us.（even though引导的让步状语从句）
②Though the smart phone is so useful, I think we should use it properly.（though引导的让步状语从句）
17．例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to be invited to join this program. With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.
Artificial Intelligence can chat with people, it can help solve people’s problems. For example, it can help the students do homework correctly and solve the subject problems. Besides, it can design pictures in a short time.
However, it also has many disadvantages. If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind. Its appearance will reduce people’s job opportunities.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，阐述对人工智能技术优劣势的看法；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述对人工智能技术的总体看法；
第二步，分点阐述人工智能的优势和劣势；
第三步，总结并表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①science and technology 科学技术
②chat with 和……聊天
③in a short time 在短时间内
④depend on 依靠，依赖
[高分句型]
①With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular in our daily life.（“with＋ 名词短语”作状语；“比较级 and 比较级”表达“越来越……”）
②If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind.（if引导条件状语从句）
18．例文：
Last Friday afternoon, a heated debate on “Smart Campus” project was held in our class. Students in our class divided into two groups argued fiercely on the project. It is said that once the project is launched, every teacher will be equipped with a teaching robot assistant who can tutor students in the place of the teacher, helping to solve students’ puzzles and problems in study and life. Some students are in favor of the idea. They believe robot assistants can help students more conveniently while reducing the burden on teachers. However, other students disagree, saying that turning to teachers isn’t only about solving subject problems but hoping to have a communication with the beloved teachers who usually provide encouragement and comfort for students.
In my opinion, only after teachers are freed from some replaceable work will they be able to give more love to students. So it is necessary to have teaching robot assistants.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中需要补充的地方，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍“智慧校园”项目的主要内容；
第二步，介绍学生们对该项目的不同看法；
第三步，提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①It is said that据说
②in favor of支持
③have a communication with与……交流
④In my opinion依我来看
[高分句型]
①It is said that once the project is launched, every teacher will be equipped with a teaching robot assistant who can tutor students in the place of the teacher, helping to solve students’ puzzles and problems in study and life.（who引导的定语从句）
②In my opinion, only after teachers are freed from some replaceable work will they be able to give more love to students.（倒装句）
19．例文：
The progress of science technology
Nowadays, the benefits of science and technology can be seen almost everywhere. First, technology products like computers help us deal with many difficult tasks so we can have more free time. Second, we can enjoy better food, clothing, housing, transport as well as healthcare. Besides, the progress of science and technology makes it possible for us to explore the unknown.
It’s true that great progress of science and technology have brought great changes to our life. We should never stop developing it, but meanwhile we have to make good use of this double-edged sword and never let it harm our society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍科技发展对我们生活的影响；
第二步，介绍我们对于科技进步应该持有的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②as well as也
③stop doing sth.停止做某事
④make good use of好好利用
[高分句型]
Besides, the progress of science and technology makes it possible for us to explore the unknown.（it作形式宾语，动词不定式作真正宾语）
20．例文
The development of AI
The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. Many people feel worried about the development of AI. There is no need for people to worry too much about the development of AI. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages.
First of all, AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help. As a result, people can free themselves from over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. It improves the accuracy of data and helps scientists to do research. That’s why our government pay more attention to it.
In my opinion, AI is a trend of the world. We will live happily and more conveniently with the help of it. Let’s enjoy our AI life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展；
第二步，介绍人工智能发展带来的好处；
第三步，谈谈自己对未来人工智能发展的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① take the place of 替代
② day after day 日复一日
③ pay attention to 注意
[高分句型]
① There is no need for people to worry too much about the development of AI. （there be句型）
② If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can ask AI for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
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