2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写课件(共20张PPT)
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(共20张PPT)
读后续写学案2评讲
主题：个人成长
一、 素材积累
积累 情绪描写词汇积累：生气
词块 flush with anger, feel a surge of anger, burst into anger, be mad with anger, tremble with anger, with arms crossed over the chest, be seized/overcome/swallowed/overwhelmed by anger, boil with rage, stamp one’s feet in anger (愤怒地跺脚), slam the door(用力甩门)
气得满脸通红 感到一阵怒火 勃然大怒 气得发狂
气得发抖 双臂交叉抱在胸前
被愤怒攫住 / 冲昏头脑 / 吞噬 / 淹没 怒不可遏
( -mm- )
印发资料有
二、续写一练习知识回顾：环境描写积累
拖车里的灯光很昏暗，却充满了温暖。
The light in the trailer was dim but full of warmth.
2. 拖车里只有一盏旧灯，却照亮了每个人的脸庞。
There was only one old lamp in the trailer, but it lit up everyone’s face.
3. 拖车里的空间很小，但大家挤在一起却很温馨。
The space in the trailer was small, but it was cozy when everyone huddled together.
4. 炉火在角落里燃烧，驱散了空气中的寒冷。
The fire burned in the corner, driving away the cold in the air.
知识点回顾：上次续写训练1出现过的环境描写 齐读
三、续写训练2练习
It all began with a perfect gift. A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy could ask for: a smartphone. I lived on that phone all summer with my face buried in its screen. I held multi-day marathon messages with every friend to stay connected to every one of them. I became addicted to the phone and ignored my family, my surroundings. What I was doing was secondary to what everyone else was doing. Being connected was more important than being present.
So, I felt extremely displeased when I learned what my dad had planned for our family vacation that year. “This year,” my dad said, “we’ll be doing something special. We’re going camping.”
His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh. But I wasn’t too annoyed and sort of accepted the arrangements. It wasn’t my dream vacation, but it was still a vacation. I remained unbothered throughout the packing, planning and, of course, the instructions that went in one ear and out the other. My mind was on my phone, and the messages were flying back and forth. I was so absorbed in the screen in my hand that absolutely nothing could get my attention. Actually, the first time I can remember truly looking up was when we drove across a bridge on the way to our campsite.
I stared out the window in a daze and saw redwoods towering above us, and a roaring river rushing by. The air blowing into the car from the open windows was hot and smelled of pine. But none of that mattered to me. The reason I had looked up was for something far more serious. More shocking. My phone no longer had service.
On the first day, I didn’t abandon hope. I shouted. I bargained. I begged. However, nothing would add bars to my phone service. I went to bed angrily that night, thinking I would be bored to death in the absence of phone service the next day. But when I woke up in the morning, something had changed.
个人成长类
四、续写思路
Para 1: Instead of burying myself in my phone, I focused on something else: my surroundings.________________________________________________________
Para2: The four days passed in a flash, full of fun activities.
______________________________________________________________
范文的思路
1. 衔接句：周边环境描写
2. 心理描写：情绪转变，从生气到平静到开心
3. 动作描写：关注大自然
4. 环境描写：大自然 vs 手机
5. 衔接：没有手机的假期收获了什么
6. 衔接句：露营做了什么，活动？
7. 动作描写：活动的过程中做了什么
8. 心理描写：露营兴奋+快乐
9. 心理描写：关键情节
10. 主题生活：与家人一起在大自然中度过美好的时光是最重要的
1. 衔接句
2、3、4 心理/动作/环境/对话描写等
5. 衔接句
6. 衔接句
7、8、9 心理/动作/环境/对话描写等
10. 主题升华
五、参考范文
Instead of burying myself in my phone, I focused on something else: my surroundings.
（衔接句）Animals created sounds that were both loud and peaceful.
（心理描写）My anger turned into peace, then little interest and, finally, excitement.
（环境描写）With each minute passing, I sank deeper into a more peaceful world, admiring the magnificent views around me.
（无灵主语）The sight that met my surprised eyes nearly took my breath away.
（衔接句）For the first time, I thought camping in a place that had no phone signal might not be so bad.
欣赏 壮丽的
景象
The four days passed in a flash, full of fun activities.
（衔接句: 列举活动）I hiked. I swam. I fished. I actively explored the forest.
(倒装句）No sooner had I caught sight of my dad making a fire than I joined him, and after several false starts, we finally made it.
（情绪描写）Seeing the fire, both of us had a sense of achievement.
(与家人互动）In addition, Dad told me stories of his life.
（关键变化）When the weekend came to an end, I realized I had adjusted myself to the life without my phone. I hadn’t felt the need to be connected to anywhere else.
（主题句）It dawned on me that what mattered most were the moments I was sharing with just my father and nature.
突然意识到
五、教师下水作文
Para 1: Instead of burying myself in my phone, I focused on something else: my surroundings. Never in my wildest dreams did I imagine stepping in such a magical world. Unlike virtual reality, sunlight peeked through the branches, painting golden spot on the ground and morning birds were singing around, as if putting on a concert for us. Taking a deep breath, I could even feel the smell of pine. All of a sudden, my original annoyance gave way to a sense of relaxation. This was the first time in months that I hadn’t reached out for my phone, the once “perfect” gift.
（衔接句）：我做梦也没想过
（环境描写）：阳光透过树枝缝隙洒落下来，在地上绘制出金色的斑点
（状从省略、虚拟语气）彷佛为我们上演一场音乐会
（动作描写）
（心理描写）最初的烦躁已消失不见，取而代之的一股放松感
（衔接句）这是我数月以来第一次……
Para 2: The four days passed in a flash, full of fun activities. Occupied in hiking, fishing and swimming, I found this family vacation turned out to be a truly precious gift for me. At night, we sat around the fire and listened to dad’s childhood stories, laughter lingering around the redwoods. If given one more chance, I would go camping with my family without hesitation, for the experience taught me an important lesson: the greatest joy doesn’t come from scrolling through a screen but from sharing moments with our families.
（衔接句）：形容词短语作状语
忙于......, 这次家庭旅行才是真正宝贵的礼物
（动作描写）：我们围坐在篝火旁，聆听爸爸讲述童年的故事
独立主格结构 笑声在红杉林间回荡 （关键情节+主题升华）状从省略
因为这段经历教会了我一个重要的道理
not...but...不是...而是
六、句型积累
1. Never in my wildest dreams did I do sth... 半倒装句: 我做梦都没想过我会...
2. peek through 偷窥，偷看，透过缝隙撒过
3. morning birds were singing around, as if (they were) putting on a concert for us.
as if 好像...... 状从省略/虚拟语气
4. My original annoyance gave way to a sense of relaxation. 无灵主语：“让步于”
情绪1+ gave way to+ 情绪2 最初的......已消失不见，取而代之的是......
5. This was the first time in months that I hadn’t reached out for my phone, the once “perfect” gift. This was the first time that sb had done sth.这是某人第一次做某事
6. be occupied in doing sth 忙于做某事，形容词短语做状语
Occupied in reading novels, he didn’t notice the teacher had came into the classroom.
turned out to be 结果却.......
7. laughter lingered around the redwoods 在...回荡 echo 回响
8. If given one more chance， if I were given one more chance 状从省略，虚拟语气
9. without hesitation 毫不犹豫
升华句句型积累
10. the experience taught me an important lesson:这段经历教会了我一个重要的道理
11. the greatest joy doesn’t come from scrolling through a screen but from sharing moments with our families.
not...but...不是...而是
例句：最终，真正重要的不是我们的结果，而是我们在过程中获得的成长与经历。
Ultimately, what truly counts is not where we end up, but the growth and experiences we gain along the way.
Thank you
读后续写学案2评讲
主题：个人成长
一、 素材积累
积累 情绪描写词汇积累：生气
词块 flush with anger, feel a surge of anger, burst into anger, be mad with anger, tremble with anger, with arms crossed over the chest, be seized/overcome/swallowed/overwhelmed by anger, boil with rage, stamp one’s feet in anger (愤怒地跺脚), slam the door(用力甩门)
气得满脸通红 感到一阵怒火 勃然大怒 气得发狂
气得发抖 双臂交叉抱在胸前
被愤怒攫住 / 冲昏头脑 / 吞噬 / 淹没 怒不可遏
( -mm- )
印发资料有
二、续写一练习知识回顾：环境描写积累
拖车里的灯光很昏暗，却充满了温暖。
The light in the trailer was dim but full of warmth.
2. 拖车里只有一盏旧灯，却照亮了每个人的脸庞。
There was only one old lamp in the trailer, but it lit up everyone’s face.
3. 拖车里的空间很小，但大家挤在一起却很温馨。
The space in the trailer was small, but it was cozy when everyone huddled together.
4. 炉火在角落里燃烧，驱散了空气中的寒冷。
The fire burned in the corner, driving away the cold in the air.
知识点回顾：上次续写训练1出现过的环境描写 齐读
三、续写训练2练习
It all began with a perfect gift. A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy could ask for: a smartphone. I lived on that phone all summer with my face buried in its screen. I held multi-day marathon messages with every friend to stay connected to every one of them. I became addicted to the phone and ignored my family, my surroundings. What I was doing was secondary to what everyone else was doing. Being connected was more important than being present.
So, I felt extremely displeased when I learned what my dad had planned for our family vacation that year. “This year,” my dad said, “we’ll be doing something special. We’re going camping.”
His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh. But I wasn’t too annoyed and sort of accepted the arrangements. It wasn’t my dream vacation, but it was still a vacation. I remained unbothered throughout the packing, planning and, of course, the instructions that went in one ear and out the other. My mind was on my phone, and the messages were flying back and forth. I was so absorbed in the screen in my hand that absolutely nothing could get my attention. Actually, the first time I can remember truly looking up was when we drove across a bridge on the way to our campsite.
I stared out the window in a daze and saw redwoods towering above us, and a roaring river rushing by. The air blowing into the car from the open windows was hot and smelled of pine. But none of that mattered to me. The reason I had looked up was for something far more serious. More shocking. My phone no longer had service.
On the first day, I didn’t abandon hope. I shouted. I bargained. I begged. However, nothing would add bars to my phone service. I went to bed angrily that night, thinking I would be bored to death in the absence of phone service the next day. But when I woke up in the morning, something had changed.
个人成长类
四、续写思路
Para 1: Instead of burying myself in my phone, I focused on something else: my surroundings.________________________________________________________
Para2: The four days passed in a flash, full of fun activities.
______________________________________________________________
范文的思路
1. 衔接句：周边环境描写
2. 心理描写：情绪转变，从生气到平静到开心
3. 动作描写：关注大自然
4. 环境描写：大自然 vs 手机
5. 衔接：没有手机的假期收获了什么
6. 衔接句：露营做了什么，活动？
7. 动作描写：活动的过程中做了什么
8. 心理描写：露营兴奋+快乐
9. 心理描写：关键情节
10. 主题生活：与家人一起在大自然中度过美好的时光是最重要的
1. 衔接句
2、3、4 心理/动作/环境/对话描写等
5. 衔接句
6. 衔接句
7、8、9 心理/动作/环境/对话描写等
10. 主题升华
五、参考范文
Instead of burying myself in my phone, I focused on something else: my surroundings.
（衔接句）Animals created sounds that were both loud and peaceful.
（心理描写）My anger turned into peace, then little interest and, finally, excitement.
（环境描写）With each minute passing, I sank deeper into a more peaceful world, admiring the magnificent views around me.
（无灵主语）The sight that met my surprised eyes nearly took my breath away.
（衔接句）For the first time, I thought camping in a place that had no phone signal might not be so bad.
欣赏 壮丽的
景象
The four days passed in a flash, full of fun activities.
（衔接句: 列举活动）I hiked. I swam. I fished. I actively explored the forest.
(倒装句）No sooner had I caught sight of my dad making a fire than I joined him, and after several false starts, we finally made it.
（情绪描写）Seeing the fire, both of us had a sense of achievement.
(与家人互动）In addition, Dad told me stories of his life.
（关键变化）When the weekend came to an end, I realized I had adjusted myself to the life without my phone. I hadn’t felt the need to be connected to anywhere else.
（主题句）It dawned on me that what mattered most were the moments I was sharing with just my father and nature.
突然意识到
五、教师下水作文
Para 1: Instead of burying myself in my phone, I focused on something else: my surroundings. Never in my wildest dreams did I imagine stepping in such a magical world. Unlike virtual reality, sunlight peeked through the branches, painting golden spot on the ground and morning birds were singing around, as if putting on a concert for us. Taking a deep breath, I could even feel the smell of pine. All of a sudden, my original annoyance gave way to a sense of relaxation. This was the first time in months that I hadn’t reached out for my phone, the once “perfect” gift.
（衔接句）：我做梦也没想过
（环境描写）：阳光透过树枝缝隙洒落下来，在地上绘制出金色的斑点
（状从省略、虚拟语气）彷佛为我们上演一场音乐会
（动作描写）
（心理描写）最初的烦躁已消失不见，取而代之的一股放松感
（衔接句）这是我数月以来第一次……
Para 2: The four days passed in a flash, full of fun activities. Occupied in hiking, fishing and swimming, I found this family vacation turned out to be a truly precious gift for me. At night, we sat around the fire and listened to dad’s childhood stories, laughter lingering around the redwoods. If given one more chance, I would go camping with my family without hesitation, for the experience taught me an important lesson: the greatest joy doesn’t come from scrolling through a screen but from sharing moments with our families.
（衔接句）：形容词短语作状语
忙于......, 这次家庭旅行才是真正宝贵的礼物
（动作描写）：我们围坐在篝火旁，聆听爸爸讲述童年的故事
独立主格结构 笑声在红杉林间回荡 （关键情节+主题升华）状从省略
因为这段经历教会了我一个重要的道理
not...but...不是...而是
六、句型积累
1. Never in my wildest dreams did I do sth... 半倒装句: 我做梦都没想过我会...
2. peek through 偷窥，偷看，透过缝隙撒过
3. morning birds were singing around, as if (they were) putting on a concert for us.
as if 好像...... 状从省略/虚拟语气
4. My original annoyance gave way to a sense of relaxation. 无灵主语：“让步于”
情绪1+ gave way to+ 情绪2 最初的......已消失不见，取而代之的是......
5. This was the first time in months that I hadn’t reached out for my phone, the once “perfect” gift. This was the first time that sb had done sth.这是某人第一次做某事
6. be occupied in doing sth 忙于做某事，形容词短语做状语
Occupied in reading novels, he didn’t notice the teacher had came into the classroom.
turned out to be 结果却.......
7. laughter lingered around the redwoods 在...回荡 echo 回响
8. If given one more chance， if I were given one more chance 状从省略，虚拟语气
9. without hesitation 毫不犹豫
升华句句型积累
10. the experience taught me an important lesson:这段经历教会了我一个重要的道理
11. the greatest joy doesn’t come from scrolling through a screen but from sharing moments with our families.
not...but...不是...而是
例句：最终，真正重要的不是我们的结果，而是我们在过程中获得的成长与经历。
Ultimately, what truly counts is not where we end up, but the growth and experiences we gain along the way.
Thank you