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How to describe emotions more vividly and specifically？
读后续写之情绪描写技能
Learning objective
Master some skills to make emotional description more vivid and specific.
读 后 续 写 高 考 真 题
题 号 问题 原 因 办 法 体裁 主题思想
2022新高考I 患有脑疾的小男孩参加越野比赛 赛前他信心动摇想要放弃 I watched as David moved… 教练鼓励他积极面对困难，战胜自我 记叙文 战胜自我
2021新高考Ⅰ 双胞胎做早餐把厨房弄得一团糟 给母亲惊喜,庆祝母亲节 … their father appeared 父亲助攻 记叙文 母亲节惊喜
2020新高考Ⅰ Bernard如何赚钱帮助养家 经济衰退 John had an idea: 做爆米花卖钱 记叙文 助人献爱心
2020.07 浙江 野熊来到营地前 熊闻到面包大蒜气味 tried known actions: ... 辣椒水 直升飞机 记叙文 险境求生
2020.01 浙江 小宠物狗郁郁寡欢 小主人上大学 Mum had an idea: 给它买个狗伴 记叙文 让宠物狗
高兴起来
四个步骤
2.细读首句，构思框架
仔细阅读所给两段的首句，结合正能量结尾，思考大致框架。
1.读懂大意，理清脉络
读所给的不完整故事，弄清大意和主题，理清故事的主要人物和事件。
4.修改润色，整洁誊写
思考再三，把修正润色后的续写整洁地写入答卷。
3.增加细节，开始写作
依据情节发展和常识，在确定的框架内，可按“所见/遇所想，所为所感”等构思具体细节。
5W+1H: who when where what why how
环境描写,语言描写, 动作描写,
情绪描写, 心理描写,
检查错误升级句式
注意衔接
在进行心理描写时，常常使用下列方法：
1.细腻的形容词来表达人物的内心。
2.运用比喻和暗示来帮助读者感受到人物的挣扎和犹豫等复杂情感。
3.构建心理冲突与矛盾。借助一些词汇或短语展示这些技巧。
句式：
1. 形容词+形容词，主语+谓语，ving....
2. A burst/flood/surge/sense of...+v.(seize/grasp/swallow/well up/surge/overwhelm)+主语，
3. so+adj./adv.+部分倒装+主语...
4. with+宾语+宾语补足语，主语+谓语...
5. -ving/-ved..., 主语+谓语...
Lead-in
Enjoy a video clip to learn some common emotions.
高兴地跳了起来jumped with joy spread one’s hands摊开双手
感到鼓舞的feel inspired/encouraged 既兴奋又开心a mixture of excitement and delight
乐得大叫yell with delight 激发某人的激情kindle sb.with/to passion
精神高涨be in high spirit 显示出极大的意愿show a greater readiness
心情愉快in cheerful spirits 振作精神keep up one’s spirits
满意的表情a satisfied look 对……很高兴be delighted at
对……感到满意be content with 为成功而欣喜: be excited with joy at the success
grin with delight高兴的咧嘴一笑 被她的美貌所吸引be fascinated with her beauty
tears of joy开心的泪水 lightup with pleasure容光焕发
表达开心短语
高兴有关句式积累
1. Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
2. He felt the warmth surging through his body.他感到身体里涌动着一股暖流。
3. It was a welcome relief once again, Stanley felt that destiny was on his side.
这又是一次令人欣慰的解脱，斯坦利感到命运站在他一边。
4.A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face.
他脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
5.Her face lit up/brightened/glowed when I gave her the present.
我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出光彩。
6.I’m in good mood at the moment, just like the white clouds in the blue shy.
我此刻心情舒畅，就像蓝天白云那样自在。
7.My heart is as sweet as honey.我的心情像吃了蜜一样甜。
8.She was overflowing with happiness.她内心洋溢着幸福。
9.He was grinning from ear to ear.他笑的合不拢嘴。
11.I couldn’t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.
我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
12.When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.
当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。
13. The instant she was informed of the result of the test, a surge of excitement seized her.
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
词汇积累之鼓励和感动
hugged/embraced sb.tightly/firmly紧紧拥抱 kept extendinghis gratitude不停表达感激
pat sb.拍了拍某人 with grateful tears hanging in his eyes带着感激的眼泪
鼓励和感动有关句式积累
1.I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.
我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。
2.With grateful tears hanging in his eyes, he kept extending（表达）his gratitude(感激）， “Thank you so much!”
他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！”
3.Taking a deep breath, I managed to calm myself down and walked up to the platform confidently.
深吸一口气，我成功地让自己镇定，然后自信地走上了讲台。
4.I walked over to him, and patted him on the shoulder, encouraging: “Come on!”
我走向他，拍拍他的肩膀，鼓励道：“加油！”
词汇积累之“害怕”
sweat on forehead前额出汗 spread one’s hands摊开双手
tongue-tied结结巴巴的 astrong sense of horror 一阵恐怖
shake/tremble with fear吓得发抖 be struck dumb with astonishment吓得目瞪口呆
stand rooted to the spot with fear吓得呆若木鸡 pace back and forth来回踱步
heart beats violently心跳加快 Scared and shocked, sb....既害怕又震惊，某人....
“害怕”有关句式积累
1.With a pounding heart and cold, moist palms, I felt faint.
心怦怦直跳，手掌冰冷潮湿，我感到头晕。
2. Cautious and even a bit scared, he swiftly slipped into the quiet classroom, sweat on forehead.
他很谨慎，甚至有点害怕，迅速溜进安静的教室，额头上流汗。
3. A flood of fear welled up in him..
他心中涌起了一阵恐惧。。
4.Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
5.He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.
他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
6. At the sight of the ferocious tiger, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.
一看到那只凶猛的老虎，我就被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。
hugged/embraced sb. tightly/firmly紧紧拥抱 be overcome with sorrow悲伤不已
great sorrow clouds sb’s eyes满眼忧伤 fall silent/be in total silence/hold one’s tongue默不作声
with hollow, pale face面色空洞苍白 tears roll/run/stream/flow down sb’s cheeks潸然泪下
a cloud of gloom一片阴云 hang/lower/bend/bow one’s head in sadness伤心地低下头
陷入绝望 fall into despair 情绪低落 be low in spirits
意志消沉 a broken spirit in low spirits/in an unpleasant mood情绪低落;沮丧
感到一阵悲伤 a flash of grief came upon sb. 使某人悲痛 make one's heart bleed
怀着沉重的心情 with a heavy heart 减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼ease sb. of his pain/trouble
词汇积累之“羞愧、绝望、悲伤”
“羞愧、绝望、悲伤”有关句式积累
1.I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.
我跑到父亲身边，伸出双手，紧紧地拥抱着他。
2.A food of shame crowded into my mind.
一阵愧疚涌上心头。
3.He gave up the attempt in despair.
他在绝望中放弃了尝试。
4.Upon hearing the bad news,her heart ached,tears streaming down her cheeks.
一听到这个坏消息，她心痛地眼泪直流。
5.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。
6.He went home ashamed, chocking with anger and confusion.
他羞愧地回到了家，哽咽着，内心充满愤怒和不解。
7.His heart sank when he heard the news that he failed to win a prize.
当得知没有获奖时,他心一沉。
词汇积累之“生气”
get mad/cross at sb对某人勃然大怒 stare at sb in anger/glare at sb 怒目而视
sb's face falls/darkens 脸沉/黑了下来 go/turn red with anger 气得满脸通红
ignore/disregard a complaint对抱怨不予理会 be speechless with indignation气得说不出话
arouse one's displeasure引起某人的不快 havea worried look愁眉苦脸
be easily annoyed at trifles易为琐事而恼火 flame with anger气得满脸通红
hit the ceiling/roof 或explode with anger 勃然大怒 be displeased at one's contact对某人的行为感到不满
“生气”有关句式积累
1. His voice trembled with anger.
他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
2.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
3. He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
4. Stamp one's feet with anger.气得直跺脚。
5. Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.
谢尔顿感到非常生气,他冲出房间,狠狠摔门。
6. My teacher's eyes were shining with anger.我老师的眼中充满怒火。
(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.
探究高考真题
（2022新高考-越野比赛）To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet.
(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating.
请找出下列句子中的情绪描写表达，并用横线标出。
(2021新高考1.读后续写) The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.
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(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch.
探究高考真题
（2022新高考-越野比赛）To my joy, David slowly rose to his feet.
(2017浙江卷-遇熊脱险) Extremely frightened, I felt my legs trembling and my palms sweating.
请找出下列句子中的情绪描写表达，并用横线标出。
(2021新高考1.读后续写) The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.
Useful skills
How to describe feelings more vividly
介词短语（to one‘s ＋情绪名词）
强调句
使用无灵主语
形容词作状语
进阶技巧
使用无灵主语
形容词作状语
使用让步状语（倒装）
Let’s learn some sentence patterns to describe feelings
引导启发，句型探索 ·无灵主语
“I felt happy.”
无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语
(换主语) : “开心(的情绪)抓住了我 ”
(加介短) :“ 一股开心(的情绪)抓住了我”
(加并列): “开心与振奋(的情绪)抓住了我”
我感到开心:
Delight seized me.
A wave of delight seized me.
Delight and excitement seized me.
A strong sense of delight took hold of me when I heard the good news.
用无灵主语句扩写:
当我听到这个好消息的那一刻，一种强烈的喜悦感抓住了我。
情 绪 名 词
动词
sb
Skill 1.无灵主语:
“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth
当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头
情绪名词
固定动词
seize 抓住
catch (过去式caught)
strike (过去式struck)
surround 围绕着
take hold of 控制
wash over 让人感到
come over 包围/支配
envelop 笼罩
overwhelm 使难以承受
sb
+as/when sb do sth
Skill 1.无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth 当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头
练习1. 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰和开心给包围了。(2022全国1卷)
Relief and delight came over me when David finally became determined to continue the race.
例句: 当我听到这个好消息的那一刻，一种强烈的喜悦感抓住了我。
A strong sense of delight took hold of me when I heard the good news.
Skill 1.无灵主语:“情绪名词+固定动词+sb"+as/when sb do sth 当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头
（2022全国1卷) 大卫继续跑步
David kept on running.
“情绪adj1+情绪adj2, sb do sth，doing sth"
大卫信心满满的和充满决心的，继续奔跑
Confident and determined , David kept on running .
大卫信心满满的和充满决心的，继续奔跑，奋力冲向终点线。
Confident and determined , David kept on running, struggling to reach the finish line .
前加情绪形容词
后加非谓语
Skill 2 形容词作状语:
Skill 2 形容词作状语: adj.1+adj.2, sb did, doing...
感到开心和自信的，解局长展示了他舞蹈的天赋，希望吸引更多的人来他家乡旅游。
Delighted and confident, Director Xie showed his great talent for dancing, hoping to attract more people to visit his hometown.
Complete sentences with appropriate adjectives
1. _________________________(感到坚定和受到鼓舞的）, David raised his head , looking at me with gratitude . （2022全国1卷）
2._________________________(感到放松的和快乐的) , David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude . （2022全国1卷）
3.________________________(既惊讶又感动), Mr. Alder believed what I said, giving me a second chance. (2023广东一模）
4. （感到开心和兴奋的)， he
received the admission letter from Oxford University.
Determined and inspired
Relieved and delighted
Surprised and touched
Delighted and excited
1.Extremely tired as/though he was , David made up his mind to finish the race .
2.Exhausted and hungry as/though he was, he carried on climbing the mountain.
Skill3 巧用让步状语:
adj＋ as/though sb.+ be 动词, sb did sth
Observe and summarize the structure
Extremely nervous as/though he was , David became determined to finish the race .
Summary
情绪形容词＋ as/though sb. + be 动词， sb. ( still ) did sth. .
尽管某人感到.... ，还是坚持做某事。
前加让步状语（倒装句型）
1.[2022广州一模］尽管很焦急和不情愿，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。
Anxious and reluctant as/though I was, I still went to wash the dishes at Dad’s request .
2.[2023广东一模］尽管他很害怕和担心，Hector还是告诉了老师发生了什么。
Scared and worried as/though he was, Hector still told the teacher what had happened.
真题练习
Summary
1.无灵主语：情绪名词+固定动词+sb+as / when sb. did sth.
当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头
2.形容词做状语：adj.1+adj.2, sb.did, doing...
感到...和...，某人做某事1，并做某事2
3.让步状语（倒装句型）：情绪形容词＋ as/though sb.+ be 动词， sb. ( still ) did sth. .
尽管某人（感到)...，某人仍做某事
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