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【核心考点集训】2025秋人教版英语九年级上册期中复习学案
题型过关第6讲 书面表达
九年级英语书面表达核心技巧是“结构清晰+内容扣题+语言准确”，确保阅卷老师能快速抓住重点，同时避免低级错误。
1. 审题：3步定方向（5分钟内完成）
（1）定体裁：明确是书信、演讲稿、议论文还是记叙文，不同体裁有固定格式（如书信需包含称呼、正文、落款）。
（2）定主题：圈出题目中的核心关键词（如“环保”“校园生活”“建议”），确保全文不偏离。
（3）定要点：列出题目要求的所有信息点（通常3-4个），正文需逐一覆盖，避免遗漏。
2. 结构：“三段式”万能框架
无论何种体裁，都可套用“开头引入+中间展开+结尾总结”的结构，逻辑更清晰。
（1）开头段：简洁点题，用1-2句话说明写作目的或背景。
例：（建议信）I'm writing to give you some advice on how to improve your English.
（2）中间段：分点展开核心内容，每点用1个过渡词衔接（如First, What's more, Finally），避免内容混乱。
例：（环保主题）First, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. What's more, we should turn off the lights when leaving rooms.
（3）结尾段：总结升华或表达期望，1句话即可，不冗余。
例：（演讲稿）I hope everyone can take action to protect our earth.
3. 语言：避开雷区，用对“加分项”
（1）避错优先：优先使用自己熟悉的简单句型（主谓宾、主系表），避免为了“炫技”写复杂句导致语法错误（如时态混乱、主谓不一致）。
（2）加分技巧：用“短语替换单词”提升表达（如“think of”替换“remember”，“take part in”替换“join”），适当加入1个定语从句或状语从句（如I like the park which is near my home.）。
假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上曾帮助过你。
在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段80词左右的留言，要求包括以下内容要点：
1.你在学习上曾遇到的困难；
2.Sam对你的帮助、建议及措施：
(1) 多听多读；
(2) 多看英语电影，多唱英文歌曲；
(3) ……(自由发挥；不少于一项内容)
3．你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华，英语学习成绩优异。昨天你的笔友刘强给你发来电子邮件，向你咨询如何才能学好英语。请你结合下面的要点提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
1. 通过课堂做笔记和大声朗读；
2. 多说英语；
3. 多听英文歌曲；
4. 多看英语电影；
5. 多交一些来自于说英语的国家的朋友。
要求：
1. 词数80左右，电子邮件的格式，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Liu Qiang,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here’s some advice about English learning for you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice will help you learn English well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你叫张娜，在光明中学读书，在学习英语的过程中你遇到了一些问题，想得到王老师的帮助并想给英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：
学习英语时遇到的问题 向英语老师提出的建议
1. 生词多，记忆有难度； 2. 课文长，难弄懂； 3. …… 1. 介绍一些学习英语的好方法； 2. 教课文时读慢一些； 3. ……
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. ______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Na
4．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
The Spring Festival☆Meaning：The biggest day of a year; a new start. ☆Time：January or February ☆Activities：get together; visit relatives.
要求：
1. 词数90左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：make New Year’s resolutions 制定新年计划；put up couplets 贴对联；the Spring Festival Gala 春节联欢晚会
Ladies and gentlemen,
There is a famous saying in China, “A year’s plan starts with spring.” It tells us that the most
important time of a year is spring.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
5．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。80词左右。
提示：
1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史；
2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原 (honor the great poet)；
3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗；
4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食；
5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你叫李丹，你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友们，介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 生日派对于下周六下午3：00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站，沿着广场路走，直到经过兴业街，公园在左边；
2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器；
3. 你的照相机坏了，能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照；
4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球；
5. 那天天气会很好，大家是否想要露营。
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Dan
7．你校英语报正举办以“My Country, My Pride (骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。
My Country, My Pride
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
8．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings…
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，和三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化，请以 “I have changed a lot” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
要求：
1.不少于80词；
2.短文需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
I have changed a lot._____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My Favorite ________”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。
提示语： 思路导引
要求：
1. 请将短文题目补充完整；
2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
5. 词数：不少于80词。
My Favorite ________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
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【核心考点集训】2025秋人教版英语九年级上册期中复习学案
题型过关第6讲 书面表达
九年级英语书面表达核心技巧是“结构清晰+内容扣题+语言准确”，确保阅卷老师能快速抓住重点，同时避免低级错误。
1. 审题：3步定方向（5分钟内完成）
（1）定体裁：明确是书信、演讲稿、议论文还是记叙文，不同体裁有固定格式（如书信需包含称呼、正文、落款）。
（2）定主题：圈出题目中的核心关键词（如“环保”“校园生活”“建议”），确保全文不偏离。
（3）定要点：列出题目要求的所有信息点（通常3-4个），正文需逐一覆盖，避免遗漏。
2. 结构：“三段式”万能框架
无论何种体裁，都可套用“开头引入+中间展开+结尾总结”的结构，逻辑更清晰。
（1）开头段：简洁点题，用1-2句话说明写作目的或背景。
例：（建议信）I'm writing to give you some advice on how to improve your English.
（2）中间段：分点展开核心内容，每点用1个过渡词衔接（如First, What's more, Finally），避免内容混乱。
例：（环保主题）First, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. What's more, we should turn off the lights when leaving rooms.
（3）结尾段：总结升华或表达期望，1句话即可，不冗余。
例：（演讲稿）I hope everyone can take action to protect our earth.
3. 语言：避开雷区，用对“加分项”
（1）避错优先：优先使用自己熟悉的简单句型（主谓宾、主系表），避免为了“炫技”写复杂句导致语法错误（如时态混乱、主谓不一致）。
（2）加分技巧：用“短语替换单词”提升表达（如“think of”替换“remember”，“take part in”替换“join”），适当加入1个定语从句或状语从句（如I like the park which is near my home.）。
假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上曾帮助过你。
在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段80词左右的留言，要求包括以下内容要点：
1.你在学习上曾遇到的困难；
2.Sam对你的帮助、建议及措施：
(1) 多听多读；
(2) 多看英语电影，多唱英文歌曲；
(3) ……(自由发挥；不少于一项内容)
3．你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华，英语学习成绩优异。昨天你的笔友刘强给你发来电子邮件，向你咨询如何才能学好英语。请你结合下面的要点提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
1. 通过课堂做笔记和大声朗读；
2. 多说英语；
3. 多听英文歌曲；
4. 多看英语电影；
5. 多交一些来自于说英语的国家的朋友。
要求：
1. 词数80左右，电子邮件的格式，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Liu Qiang,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here’s some advice about English learning for you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice will help you learn English well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你叫张娜，在光明中学读书，在学习英语的过程中你遇到了一些问题，想得到王老师的帮助并想给英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：
学习英语时遇到的问题 向英语老师提出的建议
1. 生词多，记忆有难度； 2. 课文长，难弄懂； 3. …… 1. 介绍一些学习英语的好方法； 2. 教课文时读慢一些； 3. ……
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. ______________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Na
4．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
The Spring Festival☆Meaning：The biggest day of a year; a new start. ☆Time：January or February ☆Activities：get together; visit relatives.
要求：
1. 词数90左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：make New Year’s resolutions 制定新年计划；put up couplets 贴对联；the Spring Festival Gala 春节联欢晚会
Ladies and gentlemen,
There is a famous saying in China, “A year’s plan starts with spring.” It tells us that the most
important time of a year is spring.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
5．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。80词左右。
提示：
1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史；
2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原 (honor the great poet)；
3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗；
4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食；
5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你叫李丹，你想邀请朋友们来参加你的生日派对。请写一封90词左右的邮件给你的朋友们，介绍一下具体情况。开头及格式已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 生日派对于下周六下午3：00在友谊公园举行。乘坐地铁5号线到广场站，沿着广场路走，直到经过兴业街，公园在左边；
2. 能否有朋友准备音乐播放器；
3. 你的照相机坏了，能否有朋友带照相机为大家拍照；
4. 能否告诉哪里可以买到气球；
5. 那天天气会很好，大家是否想要露营。
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Dan
7．你校英语报正举办以“My Country, My Pride (骄傲)”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要阐述在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等4个方面中国近几年的变化；
2. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等关键信息。
My Country, My Pride
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
8．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings…
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝，和三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化，请以 “I have changed a lot” 为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
提示：
1. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen Tell a story about it.
要求：
1.不少于80词；
2.短文需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；
3.短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
I have changed a lot._____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以“My Favorite ________”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。
提示语： 思路导引
要求：
1. 请将短文题目补充完整；
2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
5. 词数：不少于80词。
My Favorite ________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
1．例文
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
During the past three years, you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.
I still remember three years ago, I had difficulty in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor, too. However, I’m lucky that I met you, a kind hearted, smart and patient boy. Firstly, you taught me to listen and read more. And they really helped me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bed. As a result, I finally made great progress.
Thank you for all your help and best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本题是一篇便条作文；
② 时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；
③ 提示：描述自己是如何学会学习的，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述自己在初中三年里学习上遇到了困难，为后文做铺垫；
第二步，具体描述自己遇到的困难，以及是如何解决的，注意涵盖所有材料要点，适当发挥；
第三步，总结致谢。
[亮点词汇]
① too much 太多
② in addition 此外
③ the habit of ……的习惯
[高分句型]
① you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.（结果状语从句）
② Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. （宾语从句）
2．例文
Dear Liu Qiang,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here’s some advice about English learning for you.
First, you can take notes in class so that you can review them after class. Second, you can also speak loudly to improve your spoken English. You can speak English as often as possible. Third, you can listen to English songs and watch English movies to improve your listening skills. Last but not least, you can make some friends from speaking-English countries. I think your English will improve rapidly by doing so.
I hope my advice will help you learn English well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料介绍学习英语的方法；
第三步，希望建议有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from 收到……来信
②take notes 记笔记
③as often as possible 尽可能经常地
[高分句型]
①First, you can take notes in class so that you can review them after class. （so that引导目的状语从句）
②Second, you can also speak loudly to improve your spoken English（动词不定式作目的状语）
3．例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to understand. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn. Because of so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily And I hope you teach the text more slowly so that I can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Yours,
Zhang Na
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为求助信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”的“学习英语时遇到的问题”和“向英语老师提出的建议”，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己学习英语时遇到的问题，围绕“单词、课文和语法”等方面展开；
第二步，向英语老师寻求帮助并提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“在老师帮助下能在英语学习上取得进步”的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①(be) full of充满
②too...to太……而不能
③What’s more除此之外还
④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
⑤so that以便
[高分句型]
①First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.（that引导的定语从句）
②Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily （so that引导状语从句）
③I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.（that引导宾语从句）
4．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
There is a famous saying in China, “A year’s plan starts with spring.” It tells us that the most important time of a year is spring. The Chinese Spring Festival is celebrated in January or February. It is the biggest day of a year and it is also a new start for everything. At this time, people make up New Year’s resolutions and plans for the whole year.
When the Spring Festival comes, no matter where people work, they’ll come back home and get together with their family. Before the festival, people are usually busy cleaning up their houses and putting up couplets on the doors. On the eve of the festival, people always have a big dinner with their family, and then watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. As for children, they enjoy letting off fireworks and getting red packets. In the next few days, people visit their relatives and friends. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can visit my relatives and get many red packets.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，分别介绍春节的意义、时间和活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。认真阅读文章的首句，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍春节的意义、时间和活动等；
第三步，书写结语。感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
① make up resolutions 下决心
② clean up 打扫
③ relative 亲戚
④ get many red packets 得到很多红包
[高分句型]
① When the Spring Festival comes, no matter where people work, they’ll come back home and get together with their family. (when引导的时间状语从句）
② I like the Spring Festival best, because I can visit my relatives and get many red packets. (because引导原因状语从句）
5．例文
Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has over two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious food. In the southern parts of China, people often have Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据题干要求，向英国笔友Jack介绍下中国的传统节日——端午节。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照提示的五句话进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
6．例文
Dear friends,
Next Saturday, I will have my birthday party in Friendship Park. It will start at 3:00 p.m. I would like everyone to come.
Now let me tell you how to get there. First, you can take Subway Line 5 to Square Station. Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. The park is on your left.
Some preparations for the party need to be made, so I need your help. Could you please lend me your music player And there is something wrong with my camera. Please bring a camera to take photos. I’m not sure where I can get balloons, so please tell me, too. The weather will be fine that day. Would you like to go camping there
I am looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Li Dan
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括5个方面的提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍生日派对的时间和地点，邀请大家参加；
第二步，介绍如何到达派对地点，陈述交通路线；
第三步，介绍需要朋友帮忙做的准备工作，请求朋友提供帮助；
第四步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① go camping 去露营
② look forward to 期待
［高分句型］
① Then, go along Square Road until you pass Xingye Street. (until引导时间状语从句)
② Now let me tell you how to get there. (疑问词+不定式)
7．例文：
My Country, My Pride
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality. Finally, with the improvement of people’s living standard, people not only travel to the country, but also travel to the whole world.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍中国近几年的发展；
第二步，具体阐述中国在环境、文化、旅游以及科技等方面的变化；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②interested in对……感兴趣
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures.（时间状语从句）
②At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it.（定语从句）
8．One possible version：
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In my hometown, the roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were small and old. The air wasn’t fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It’s really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built. Most of us have moved to big and beautiful houses. The sky is very blue. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
We are living a happy life. I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述过去的生活；
第二步，描述现在发生的变化；
第三步，描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常做某事
②different kinds of各种各样
③live a happy life过一个幸福的生活
[高分句型]
①It’s really convenient for people to go out.（it作形式主语）
②I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!（宾语从句）
9．例文
I have changed a lot
Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. I used to be shy, but now I am more confident than before. The most important change is my attitude to English. I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help. Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，过去和现在最重要的改变是什么；
第二步，介绍过去是什么样的；
第三步，介绍如何发生这样的改变的。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常
②encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①how happy I am!（感叹句）
②Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）
10．例文
My Favorite T-shirt
Among all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best.
The T-shirt is white. It is made of cotton and fiber, so it’s very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. It’s a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with friends. It makes me remember the time that we two have spent together.
This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括“思路导引”提到的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山：介绍自己最喜欢的衣服名称；
第二步，详细介绍最喜欢的衣服，包括颜色、材质、喜欢的原因以及穿它的场合等；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
［亮点词汇］
① be made of 由……制成
② a lot of happy memories 有很多快乐的回忆
［高分句型］
① I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. (because引导原因状语从句)
② It makes me remember the time that we two have spent together. (that引导限制性定语从句)
