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应用文写作——建议信
应用文写作——建议信(15分钟)
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,一定要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力,并注意要礼貌当先。具体写作结构如下:
part 1
(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice on/about how to...
我写信就如何……给你一些建议/忠告。
(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。
(3)You have asked for my advice on/about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求意见,在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
(4)I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
我很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
(5)For some further improvement,I’d like to share the following suggestions.
为了进一步改进,我想分享以下建议。
(6)Here are some tips/suggestions to help you.
这里有对你有帮助的一些建议。
(7)I think you can make it if you follow the following advice/the advice below.
如果你听从以下建议,我认为你会做到的。
part 2
(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...
我认为对你来说最适合的……是……
(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(3)You’d better.../It’s best to...
你最好……/最好是……
(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view,it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
(5)For one thing...;for another...
一方面……,另一方面……
(6)If I were you,I would...
如果我是你,我会……
(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
我认为如果你能……将会更有益。
part 3
(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。
(3)I will be more than happy/delighted to see your improvements in this regard.
看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。
(4)I do hope my suggestions will be adopted and your...will become even more...
我真的希望我的建议能被采纳,你的……会变得更加……
[真题链接]
(2023·新课标Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
[范文佳作]
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I am writing to express my thoughts on your plan to randomly [1]pair up students for oral practice.(自我介绍,表明写信目的)
Personally,though fair,random pairing may not necessarily [2]serve its intended purposes.In particular,when both students lack fluency,they might [3]struggle to find motivation and fail to [4]reach the desired goals.(说明随机分组的问题)Hence,I [5]propose an alternative approach:grouping students with varying levels of fluency.
Pairing more fluent speakers with those who are less fluent could create a better learning environment.Alternatively,[6]if practicable,allowing students to choose their own partners would be even better as it can enhance their shared learning experience more efficiently.(提出建议并说明理由)
I would greatly appreciate your understanding and consideration of my suggestions.(希望采纳建议)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
补充:
开头:Knowing that you have some problems on how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to offer you a few suggestions for your reference.
结尾:I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
建议信:
开头:I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.
结尾:I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
△ 建议信:
开头:How are things going In your last letter you talked about your recent worry about your studies, mentioning that your deskmates often interrupted you by asking questions. Now I would like to share my opinions with you.
结尾:I hope my advice can help.