2026届高考英语二轮复习：应用文写作 课件(共30张PPT)

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应用文写作
议论文
假定你是李华, 应邀为学校英文网站写一篇有关海洋生物保护的文章, 请根据下面要点写一篇短文。
1.简述如今海洋受到污染的现状；
2.论述保护海洋的重要性；
3.表明你的看法与观点。
注意:1、词数80左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Importance of Protecting Our Oceans
一、审题定调
1.确定体裁:本次写作是一篇 ,内容涉及 。
2.确定人称:本文要用 。
3.确定时态:时态以 为主。
二、谋篇布局
首段：
中段：
尾段：
议论文
海洋保护
第一/三人称
一般现在时
简述海洋受到污染的现状 ：1-2句
论述保护海洋的重要性：2-3点
表明自己的看法：1-2句
随着人类经济的发展， 变得越来越严重，所以是时候让人们 了。
首先，保护海洋就是保护 ，因为 ；
然后，保护海洋就是保护 ，因为 ；
最后，保护海洋就是保护 ，因为 。
就我而言，我们应该 。
全文框架
首段:简述海洋受到污染的现状
所以是时候让人们知道保护海洋的重要性了。
随着人类经济的发展，
海洋污染变得越来越严重，
标题
组织词汇（首段）：
1. 海洋污染 .
2. 人类经济 .
3. 随着......的发展 .
4. 变得越来越...... .
5. 到某人做某事的时候 .
6. 让某人做某事 .
ocean pollution
marine pollution
human economy
let sb do sth
with the development of ......
become more and more ......
It’s time for sb to do sth.
翻译1：随着人类经济的发展，
with the development of ......
human economy’s
human economy’s development
With the development of human economy,
along with
develop
翻译2：海洋污染变得越来越严重，
ocean pollution
become more and more
1. the ocean pollution has became more and more serious
2. the ocean pollution is becoming more and more serious
the ocean pollution become more and more serious
更妙啊：
serious
翻译3：所以是时候让人们知道保护海洋的重要性了。
It’s time to do sth. 是时候做某事
The Importance of Protecting Our Oceans
let sb do sth. 让某人做某事
it’s time to
let people know
the importance of protecting our oceans.
首段:简述海洋受到污染的现状
随着人类经济/社会的发展，海洋污染变得越来越严重，所以是时候让人们知道保护海洋的重要性了。
With the development of human economy, the ocean pollution has became more and more serious, so it’s time to let people know the importance of protecting our oceans.
第二段:论述保护海洋的重要性
1. 保护海洋就是 ，因为 ；
2. 保护海洋就是 ，因为 ；
3. 保护海洋就是 ，因为 。
2个点就用On the one hand ....... on the other hand
3个点就用To start with...... then...... what’s more.......
海洋是它们的家
海洋生物是人类的食物
海洋是地球的重要部分
保护海洋生物
保护人类
保护地球
组织词汇（第二段）：
1. 海洋生物 .
2. 在...中扮演重要角色 .
3. 来自 .
4. 是......的一部分 .
5. 在......中有作为 .
6. 对......有影响 .
7. 生态系统 .
8. 因为 .
9. 人类的食物 .
ocean lives
marine lives
play an important role in .......
come from
be a part of ......
play a part in sth
have an impact on......
ecosystem
because/for/since
human’s food
翻译1: 保护海洋就是保护海洋生物，因为海洋是它们的家；
protect ocean
is
protect ocean lives,
ocean
protecting the ocean is protecting the ocean lives,
the ocean
is
their home.
is their home.
oceans
are
their home.
翻译2：保护海洋就是保护人类，因为海洋生物是人类的食物；
protecting the ocean
is
protecting humans,
the ocean lives
are
human’s food.
protecting the humans,
大部分人类的食物来自海洋；come from...
海洋生物在人类食物中扮演着重要的角色；play an important role in...
海洋生物在人类食物中有着巨大的影响；have an impact on...
lots of human’s food come from the ocean.
the ocean lives play an important role in human’s food.
the ocean has a big impact on human’s food.
the ocean lives are human’s food. 海洋生物是人类的食物；
翻译3：保护海洋就是保护地球，因为海洋是地球的重要部分。
protecting the ocean is
protecting the earth,
protecting our homes,
the ocean is
the earth
important part.
’s
没座
the ocean is
an important part
of the earth.
the ocean plays an important role in the earth.
the ocean has a great impact on the earth’s ecosystem.
the ocean is an important part of the earth.海洋是地球的重要部分
海洋在地球上扮演着重要的角色；play an important role in...
海洋在地球的生态系统中有着巨大的影响；have an impact on...
第二段:论述保护海洋的重要性
1. 保护海洋就是保护海洋生物，因为海洋是它们的家；
2. 保护海洋就是保护人类，因为海洋生物是人类的食物；
3. 保护海洋就是保护地球，因为海洋是地球的重要部分。
To start with, protecting the ocean is protecting the ocean lives, because the ocean is their home. Then, protecting the ocean is protecting the humans, since the ocean lives play an important role in human’s food. What’more, protecting the ocean is protecting the earth, for the ocean has a great impact on the earth’s ecosystem.
尾段：表明自己的看法
就我而言，
我们应该立即采取行动保护海洋。
as far as I’m concerned
组织词汇：
1. 就我而言 .
2. 立即 .
3. 采取行动做某事 .
in my opinions
immediatly
take actions to do sth
翻译: 就我而言，我们应该立即采取行动保护海洋。
As far as I’m concerned,
we should
take actions to
protect
the ocean.
immediatly
随着人类经济的发展，海洋污染变得越来越严重，所以是时候让人们知道保护海洋的重要性了。
首先，保护海洋就是保护海洋生物，因为海洋是它们的家；
然后，保护海洋就是保护人类，因为海洋生物是人类的食物；
最后，保护海洋就是保护地球，因为海洋是地球的重要部分。
就我而言，我们应该立即采取行动保护海洋。
全文框架
With the development of human economy, the ocean pollution has became more and more serious, so it’s time to let people know the importance of protecting our oceans.
To start with, protecting the ocean is protecting the ocean lives, because the ocean is their home. Then, protecting the ocean is protecting the humans, since the ocean lives play an important role in human’s food. What’more, protecting the ocean is protecting the earth, for the ocean has a great impact on the earth’s ecosystem.
As far as I’m concerned, we should take actions to protect the ocean immediatly.
高级句式:
只有提高人们保护环境的意识, 才能解决这个问题。(倒装句)
Only by raising people’s awareness of protecting the environment can the problems be solved.
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原文讲的是一个年老体弱的老妇人提着一桶红苹果过繁忙的十字路口。前两位司机停车让行，但第三车道的司机差点撞到她，导致苹果散落。现在需要续写接下来的部分，重点放在三个司机帮助捡苹果的过程，以及故事的结局。
首先，情感线方面，老妇人一开始是焦虑和害怕的，尤其是在苹果散落之后。司机的帮助应该带来温暖和感激的情感变化。动作链需要连贯，比如司机们下车捡苹果，可能还有其他人加入，最后帮助老妇人过马路或者修桶。主旨应该是关于善良、互助，或者陌生人的善意如何带来积极的影响。
**主旨分析**：本文通过老妇人过马路遇险的故事，展现陌生人之间的善意传递，体现人性温暖与社会互助精神。
**情感线**：恐惧→惊讶→感动→希望
**动作链**：捡苹果→修桶→护送→售卖
**句式解析**：
1. 使用并列动词结构（knelt down, placed）增强画面感
2. 细节描写（trembling hands, crimson treasures）丰富情感层次
3. 象征手法（"Sold Out" sign, softened rhythm）深化主题
4. 首尾呼应（cold intersection→warmth）完成情感闭环
**范文**
Among the growing traffic, the three drivers began to gather the scattered apples. The young driver from the third car knelt down, his hands trembling as he carefully placed each fruit back into the bucket. A delivery rider paused her scooter, using her helmet to grab apples rolling toward the roadside . Even a student dashed between stopped cars, his small hands collect the apples quickly. Soon, the bucket was full again, though its cracked handle now hung loosely. (动作链衔接，情感递进)
The first driver gently tested the handle and fixed it with his necktie. "Allow me," he murmured, carrying the bucket while the others formed a protective circle around the woman. Then, the drivers walked with the old woman to a store, the shopkeeper, who had witnessed everything and rushed out with a new bucket and a "Sold Out" sign. Tears traced the wrinkles on the woman’s face with gratitude as she realized every apple had been purchased by these kind strangers. That day, the rhythm of this busy street seemed to be softened by the kind people. Sometimes,a small act of kindness can make a big difference.(主旨升华，情感闭环)
How beautiful a day it was, which was very unforgettable for all of us！Just as an old Chinese saying goes, 谚语/美句 .
The rose's in her hand, the flavor in mine. 赠人玫瑰，手有余香。
Sometimes,a small act of kindness can make a big difference.
Thank You