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演讲稿
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题型分析
演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场合发表的讲话文稿,是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体。演讲一般用以交流思想感情、表达主张见解等,具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用,以期使听众信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。
思维导图
写作方法
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02
03
Introduction
Conclusion
Main body
向观众问好,自我介绍
陈述主题:描述现象(原因)、表达主张、措施、建议
简要介绍主题
对演讲进行概括
感谢观众
高阶模板
Good morning, everyone,
It's my great honor to deliver a speech whose title is " ... ". On behalf of our school, I would like to express my sincere welcome to your visit.
With the increasing popularity of ..., ... appeals to a growing number of people. ... not only makes it possible for us to have access to ... but also saves us much time,which contributes to ... Meanwhile, ... presents challenges as well, the biggest of which is ... Therefore, ...
Hopefully, you will have a wonderful and unforgettable experience here. In conclusion, please allow me once again to express my sincere welcome to you. That’s all ! Thank you for listening.
My views on filming short videos on camps
Good morning, everyone,
It's my great honor to deliver a speech whose title is "My views on filming short videos on campus". On behalf of our school, I would like to express my sincere welcome to your visit.
With the increasing popularity of short videos, shooting short videos appeals to a growing number of people. Short videos not only make it possible for us to have access to recording our lives, but also saves us much time,which contributes to sharing amusing moments. Meanwhile, excessive addiction to them presents challenges as well, the biggest of which is distracting us in academic pursuits, disrupt others' normal life and even violate their privacy potentially. Therefore, I recommend that we strike a balance between enjoying short videos and managing our time efficiently, to avoid getting priorities mixed up. Furthermore, it is crucial for us to prioritize our own learning and growth, dedicating ourselves to academic endeavors.
Hopefully, you will have a wonderful and unforgettable experience here. In conclusion, please allow me once again to express my sincere welcome to you. That’s all ! Thank you for listening.
(2025年1月浙江首考卷)
你将参加英语课上的一分钟演讲活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括;1.陈述看法;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。
My views on filming short videos on camps
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Good morning, everyone, / Ladies and gentlemen,
It's my great honor to speak here as a student Now. I have much to share with you. / I feel greatly honored to share my topic “_______介绍演讲的主题_____” with you.
Firstly,______有关演讲主题的内容之一______. What’ s more, _____有关演讲主题的内容之二____. Finally, I hope more students will ____提出希望大家一起做的事情___and everyone here will have a wonderful time today. (祝福在座的各位生活愉快)
That's all. Thank you.
My Dream Job
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. It's my honor to be here to deliver a speech. I feel greatly honored to share my topic “My Dream Job” with you.
Firstly, My dream job is to become a TCM doctor, a choice driven not just by my admiration for ancient wisdom, but also by my desire to assist numerous individuals in restoring their health through TCM. What’ s more,I am planning to take the entrance exam for Beijing University of Chinese Medicine, with the goal of immersing myself in the study of TCM classics and exploring more effective treatment options. Finally, I hope everyone here will have a wonderful time today.
That's all. Thank you.
(长沙市2025年1月新高考适应性考试)
你校英语俱乐部拟开展主题为“My Dream Job”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。
内容包括:1.你的理想职业;
2.你的理由及打算。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My Dream Job
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. It's my honor to be here to deliver a speech.
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真题链接
【2024·全国甲卷改编】英语课要
求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,
以Development of Transport in
China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:1.词数80词左右2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
审题
(2024·全国甲卷改编)
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:1.词数80词左右
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
写作类型:演讲稿--仪式致辞
人称(person)
时态(tense)
列纲
体裁 演讲稿 时态 一般现在时
主题 中国交通的发展 人称 第三人称
结构 第一段:总概中国交通的现状以及给中国带来的好处 第二段:共享单车、高铁以及新能源车的现状、特点以及好处 第三段:总概交通发展的意义并展望中国未来的发展
列纲
① 首段:
1.表示荣幸、明确演讲主题
(Greetings/Opening sentence/A brief introduction)
② 主体:(是什么,为什么,怎么做)
2.描述现象(原因)、表达主张、措施、建议
(Main topic/Supporting detailed/Suggestions)
③ 尾段:
扣主题、表愿望
(Inspiring sentences/Thank your audience)
激活
1. 有权使用;通向……的入口;接近 ____________________
2. 经济实惠且绿色的选择 _____________________________
3. 出现 v. ____________________
4. 环境可持续性 ____________________
5. 生态友好性 n. ____________________
access to
an affordable and green alternative
emerge
environmental sustainability
eco friendliness
核心要点的不同表达
1. 中国的交通工具经历了显著的变革,使中国人民可以获得不同的出行方式。(undergo, remarkable)
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2. 首先,共享自行车已经成为城市出行的象征,为短途旅行提供了一种经济实惠且绿色的选择。(emerge, symbol, urban mobility)
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Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving Chinese people access to different ways of travelling./ Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations and given Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips./Firstly, as a symbol of urban mobility, shared bicycles have offered an affordable and green alternative for short trips.
3. 这些发展展示了中国走向现代化和高效的交通网络,该网络在便利性和环保责任之间取得平衡。(illustrate, efficient)
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These developments illustrate China's journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility./These developments illustrate China's journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network balancing convenience with environmental responsibility.
经典开篇句(Greetings/Opening sentence/A brief introduction)
① Words can’t express my excitement to deliver a speech concerning…… 言语表达不了……
②Thank you for giving me this opportunity to deliver this speech concerning….
③ It's my great honor/privilege to deliver a speech whose title is " ... ". On behalf of our school, I would like to express my sincere welcome to you.
④ The issue that I would like to concentrate on is (that)...
阐述背景
列举原因
With the rapid growth of ...,plays an increasingly important role/part in our daily lives.
1.From my point of view/Personally speaking/As far as I am concerned/ aware, …
2. I hold a firm belief that …
3.No one can deny the fact that/It can be said with certainty that/There’s no denying that…
1 In general, the reasons come down to three major ones.
2. Generally, the reasons can be listed as follows / are as follows.
论优缺点
As a coin has two sides, sth has its pros and cons.
Despite numerous advantages, there are also a lot of disadvantages.
表达观点
主体部分句型
措施/倡议
1. For the sake of …, we are expected to …
2. It is high time that we should do sth
3. It is suggested/recommended/adviseable that …
4.What really matters/counts is whether you can concentrate on ….
引言
1.As president Xi puts it,
2.As a proverb says/goes, “ you are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
3.As everyone knows, no one can deny that…(适用于自编名言)
4.It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
主体部分句型
结尾句(wishes/inspiring sentences)
1.At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you a safe and happy journey and hope that we will have more programs like this in the future.Thank you for your attention /listening
2.Actions speak louder than words.So it's time for us to take action!Only in this way/Only by doing so can our life/ society/ school/future be flooded with endless harmony and happiness.
3.With these suggestions carried out, a much brighter future will be not only possible but also inevitable(必然发生的).
4.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to express myself today. Thank you for your listening.
结尾句(wishes/inspiring sentences)
4.From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that so long as we make joint efforts, we can achieve our desired results and make a difference.
5.We firmly believe that hard work and determination will pay off.
6.I can not help expressing a wish that every member would give a helping hand.
7.Therefore, let's take the responsibility to...,and sparing no effort to do/attaching great importance to doing/...is a must.
8. In conclusion, please allow me once again to express my sincere welcome to you. I hope I have made myself understood. Thank you for listening.
常用过渡语:
表先后:First/Firstly/ Secondly/ Then/ After that/ In the end/ Finally /Meanwhile/At the same time
表递进:What’s more,/ In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore,
表个人观点:Personally speaking/ As for me/As far as I am concerned/From my point of view...
表总结:In a word/In conclusion/To sum up
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high speed trains has dramatically shortened travel time, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, a number of new energy vehicles underscores China's dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China's journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China's transport system is embracing innovation and eco friendliness.
1.(2025年天津卷)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,学校即将举办“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题演讲活你要参加,请根据下面提示,写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
(1)指出校园中不符合低碳环保理念的现象
(2)建议从身边的小事做起,
(3)号召大家采取行动
低碳校园low carbon campus
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯 ;
(3) 首位已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello everyone, I'm Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School. Today, I want to talk about the "Low Carbon Campus, Starting from Me".
In our campus, we sometimes see lights left on in empty classrooms or water running unnecessarily. These are not in line with the concept of low carbon and environmental protection. To change this, we can start with small things around us. For example, we can turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom, use water resources rationally, and choose to walk or cycle to school. I call on everyone to take action and contribute to building a low carbon campus.
Let's work together for a better tomorrow!
巩固
2. (2025年1月浙江卷)
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1) 陈述看法;
(2) 提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus.
【参考范文】
My views on filming short videos on campus
Good morning, everyone!Today, I’d like to share my thoughts on filming short videos on campus. Just as every coin has two sides, filming on campus has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it’s a great way to record beautiful moments and express creativity. On the other hand, it may affect learning and even disturb others.Therefore, I suggest we should film at suitable times and places and avoid distracting classmates.
Let’s make our campus a harmonious and inspiring environment.Thank you!
巩固
3.(2024年全国甲卷)
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片, 以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times, making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
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