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申请信
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行业PPT模板http:///hangye/
题型分析
申请信有很多种,其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容,应尽可能地向对方说明本人的长处,以便给对方留下好印象,从而获得面谈的机会。
思维导图
写作方法
第一段:开头
自我介绍
写作背景
写作目的
第二段:个人优势
个人优势
能做的事情
① 性格优势
② 语言能力
③ 相关经验
第三段:结尾: 恳请给予机会,期盼回复。
高阶模板
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you're in need of..., I'm writing for a chance to work as...and I feel this position is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that …. Furthermore, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with others but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation. In addition,what satisfies me most is that …..With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.
I do hope my enthusiasm and qualification will win me a favorable consideration from your side.Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
Learning from the advertisement you have posted that you're in need of a volunteer, I'm writing for a chance to work as a volunteer and I feel this position is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that I have strong English communication skills along with excellent organizational capabilities and interpersonal abilities, which makes it easier for me to serve as a volunteer. Furthermore, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with others but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation. In addition,what satisfies me most is that I am proficient in Chinese tea culture. With responsibility and patience, I'll show passionate enthusiasm toward this job.
I do hope my enthusiasm and qualification will win me a favorable consideration from your side.Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(合肥市2024年高三第1次教学质量检测)
假定你是李华,你从网上得知联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)将在你家乡举办“一带一路”(the Belt and Road Initiative)茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者。
内容包括:1.写信目的;2.对活动的认识;
3.个人优势。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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通用模板
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company/school needs a ×××. I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.
I think I am qualified for this job, because I ____个人优势一___. Besides, ___个人优势二__, which is beneficial for _____要申请的工作或事情_____. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a ×××, I can ______申请成功后可以带来的好处______. I'm certain my experience and knowledge will ensure my being equal to the position. (个人优势)
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your school needs a participant in the International Youth Cultural Exchange Camp. I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.
I think I am qualified for this job, because I have excellent academic performance. Besides, my proficiency in English and history, which is beneficial for communicating with international peers and explore multicultural discussions without the slightest difficulty. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a participant, I can broaden my global perspective while deepening my inshight into diverse cultures. I'm certain my experience and knowledge will ensure my being equal to the position.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(湖南省长沙市第一中学2025届高三上学期月考卷一)
假定你是李华,剑桥大学将举办国际青少年文化交流营(International Youth Cultural Exchange Camp),现已开放申请,请你给其负责人Henry写一封邮件申请参加。
内容包括:1.自我介绍并提出申请;
2.个人优势;3.表达希望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
模板套用
真题链接
【2023年天津卷】假设你是李华,作为交换生在英国的学校学习。学校要办一个叫Chinese Workshop的活动以促进中英文化交流。活动内容包括中国美食、手工艺品和书法。其中有个环节还要求参与者教别人做中国传统的东西。请描述这项活动的意义,并申请参加此次活动,阐述你所参加的活动内容及想法。
注意:
1.词数不少于 100 ;
2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
审题
(2023年天津卷) 假设你是李华,作为交换生在英国的学校学习。学校要办一个叫Chinese Workshop的活动以促进中英文化交流。活动内容包括中国美食、手工艺品和书法。其中有个环节还要求参与者教别人做中国传统的东西。请描述这项活动的意义,并申请参加此次活动,阐述你所参加的活动内容及想法。
注意:
1.词数不少于 100 ;
2.可适当增加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
写作类型:申请信--参加活动
人称(以第一人称为主)
时态(主要用一般现在时)
列纲
I am Li Hua, __________(同位语). (非谓语动词) Knowing that/Learning that/Getting the news that/ Having learned that ____________, I am writing _____________________.
常用句式
e.g. I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China.
一名三年级的学生
I am Li Hua, president of the student union in _______High School.
_____高中的学生会主席
I am Li Hua, __________(同位语). (非谓语动词) Knowing that/Learning that/Getting the news that/ Having learned that ____________, I am writing _____________________.
常用句式
e.g. Learning/Knowing that you are looking for....., I am writing to apply for the job/position.
得知你们正在寻找……,所以我写信来申请这份工作。
常用句式
① I believe the following advantages will make me stand out among the numerous applicants.
我相信以下优点将使我在众多申请者中脱颖而出。
② The reasons why I apply for the position are as follows. 我申请本职位的理由如下。
常用句式
申请理由(个人优势) ---- a. 技能/语言优势
① I am expert at ......, enabling me to be equal to being a good ......
我非常擅长……,这使我能够成为一名优秀的……
② I have a good knowledge of English, enabling me to communicate with others well.
我精通英语,这使我能够很好地与他人交流。
常用句式
申请理由(个人优势) ---- b. 经验优势
I have worked as......before, enabling me to know what to expect and how to deal with/handle the possible/ potential problems. 我之前从事过……,这让我知道我会面对什么,以及如何处理可能会发生的问题。
常用句式
申请理由(个人优势) ---- c. 性格优势
① (Being) … and … , not only can I …, but (I can) also …
我是……的、……的,所以我不仅能……, 而且……
② I am … and … , having a strong ability to get along well with people.
我既……又……,可以很好地与他人相处。
禪
第一,首先:
Initially,...
First of all,...
To begin with,...
At first,...
First and foremost,...
过渡语
第二,其次:
In addition,
Besides,
What’s more,
Furthermore, Moreover,
最后: Finally Eventually Meanwhile
Last but not least…
常用句式
① (定语从句) It will provide me with a platform where I can ….
它将为我提供一个可以……的平台。
② (定语从句) As for me, participating in such an......event/activity is a perfect way to have a deeper insight into....., in which way I can broaden my horizons.
对我来说,参加这样一个……活动是深入了解……的完美方式,这样我可以开阔我的视野。
常用句式
I promise that I will try my best / spare no effort to live up to your expectation.
我保证我会竭尽全力,并达到您的期望。
Should I be chosen/ Were I chosen, I promise that I will offer my best service to whoever takes part in the activity. 如果我被选中,我保证我将为参加活动的人提供最好的服务。
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范文
Your presence is highly desired. If available, please inform me at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
开头模板总结:
自我介绍
I’m Li Hua(姓名), a student from senior high school.
写信目的
I'm writing this letter to apply to work as _________(职位)you have advertised for.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua(姓名), a student from senior high school. I'm writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for.
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Para 2:中间段:花式自夸之 总-分 结构
分层次表达优点
I think I'm qualified for the job. In the first place, I have ……ability; What’s more,I am well acquainted with the……;Last but not least,I have good personality……
二段内分层还可以参照下列结构:
首先:Firstly,... At first, Above all, First of all, To begin with, To start with,
然后:Besides, Furthermore, In addition, More over, After that, Meanwhile,
At the same time ,What’s more,
最后:at last, at length, finally, lastly, ultimately, in the end, Last but but not least
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Para 3:恳请给予机会,期盼回复。
1. Should you give me an opportunity of a personal interview, I would be most grateful.
如果你能给我一个采访的机会,我将不胜感激。
2. I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply
期待早日回复,不胜感激。
3. Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
感谢你能考虑我的申请,期待与您的会见。
I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Having learned that you are looking for someone who can teach how to make Chinese food, I am writing to apply for the position.
Having been interested in paper-cutting since young, I have a good command of paper-cutting, which makes me qualified for the job.
I am helpful, patient and considerate, having a strong ability to get along well with people.
(Being) lively, easygoing and independent, not only can I work with a strong sense of responsibility, but (I can) also communicate with others well.
As for me, participating in such a cultural Communication event is a perfect way to spread Chinese traditional culture, in which way I can enhance my practical and communicative abilities.
Should I be chosen/ Were I chosen, I promise that I will offer my best service to whoever takes part in the activity. Hopefully, my application will meet with approval.
1. 2019课标全国Ⅱ卷
假如你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1. 写信目的; 2.个人优势; 3. 能做的事情
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Lihua, an outgoing boy studying in London.Having learnt that you are looking for some volunteers for Chinese Painting Exhibition, I am writing to express my deep interest in the position of a volunteer.
First, as an enthusiast for Chinese painting, I’ m well acquainted with it, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.In addition, I’m outgoing and warm-hearted and I’m good at spoken English, which can help me communicate with others smoothly.Besides, outgoing and warm-hearted personalities combined with my good command of English will contribute to my smooth communication with the locals.What’s more, equipped with excellent spoken English, I can communicate with the locals fluently.Most importantly, I have served as a volunteer for Chinese Painting Exhibition in China so that I’ve gained abundant experience, which allows me to offer better service.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
巩固
2. 2006年全国卷I卷
假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括:
1.个人介绍
2.个人优势
3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Lihua, an 18-year-old boy currently studying in a senior high school. Learning from the newspaper that the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team.
I personally think that I'm perfectly qualified for the job. First and foremost, having learned English for more than ten years, I can speak fluent English, which enables me to communicate with foreigners smoothly.
Additionally, with great passion for sports, I'm eager to do a job in this field. What's more, being a person expert in communicating, I am always ready to help others. Last but not least, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever participates in the Games.
I would appreciate it if you are kind enough to take my application into account and offer me a possible place for an interview. Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
巩固
假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准。
注意: 1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. Learning the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'm writing to apply to take part in it.
To begin with, I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak English fluently. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply! Yours,Li Hua
巩固
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